高中英语概要写作Summary Writing3课件（14张PPT)
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Summary Writing3
Yellow school bus
Revision:概要写作解题步骤：
Tips1:篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Tips2:要点提取——提取主要点和次要点
Tips3:语言改写——词语替换和句子重组
Tips4:逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Tips5:检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
主要点：关注主题句、信号词句和过渡句；
次要点：关注连接词，并列结构
1.同义替换法：近义词、反义词、词性转换等
2.句式转换法：改变主语、运用非谓语动词、with结构
3.压缩长句法：笼统代替具体，运用并列结构等。
Read for the topic, structure and writing style.
①The familiar yellow school bus is the largest system of mass transportation in the US and every school day transports roughly 25 million young people to school and home again after the school day ends. Meanwhile, it is the safest method for getting kids to and from school, according to the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA). Children are 70 times more likely to arrive at school safely on the school bus than if they had traveled to school driving themselves or riding with friends.
②These school buses meet more of the nation's motor vehicle safety standards than any other vehicles on the road. Also, several new technologies available today are making school buses even safer, such as video cameras on the inside and outside, stop arm cameras, GPS tracking and collision lessening systems. Another safety tool on school buses is high seat backs, closely-spaced seats and energy-absorbing seats.
③But even the safeness of school buses would not completely sum up why children are safer when riding the big, yellow bus. The bus is only as safe as the professional men and women who drive them. All drivers must obtain a Class B or C Commercial Driver's License (CDL). They are randomly tested for alcohol and drugs, usually have their driving record checked, and are given the same review of criminal history as teachers and other employees who have contact with students.
④In order to serve as a school bus driver, most applicants are required to successfully complete a training course, along with instruction in the classroom and behind the wheel.School buses are safe for the environment, not only because each bus replaces 36 passenger cars that would, but for the buses, be on the road taking and picking up school children. Additionally school buses use alternative green fuels like natural gas and electric power.
⑤Todd Monteferrario, President of the National School Transportation Association, said parents should remember that the safest and smartest choice is to put their children on the big yellow bus when they can.
topic:school bus is the safest
Argument
general-specific
supporting detail 1
supporting detail 2
conclusion
supporting detail 3
篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Get the main points: para.1
The familiar yellow school bus is the largest system of mass transportation(公共交通运输) in the US and every school day transports roughly 25 million young people to school and home again after the school day ends. Meanwhile, it is the safest method for getting kids to and from school, according to the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA). Children are 70 times more likely to arrive at school safely on the school bus than if they had traveled to school driving themselves or riding with friends.
Q1:Find out the topic sentence.
Q2:What's the function of the first sentence
Q2:How about the last sentence
detailed explanation
Lead in the topic
Key words
Tips1: 要点提取——注意句子关系和信号词句
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.1
the largest system + Meanwhile, it is the safest method for getting kids to and from school.
As the widely-uesd system, the school bus is the safest choice to go to school in the US.
The school bus is the safest and wisest choice to go to school in the US.
语言改写——词语替换和句子重组
These school buses meet（满足） more of the nation's motor vehicle safety standards（机动车辆安全标准） than any other vehicles on the road. Also, several new technologies available today are making school buses even safer, such as video cameras on the inside and outside, stop arm cameras, GPS tracking and collision lessening systems（减少碰撞系统）. Another safety tool on school buses is high seat backs, closely-spaced seats and energy-absorbing seats.
Get the main points: para.2
Q1:Find out the first reason.
Q2:What's the function of the rest sentences
detailed examples about safety technologies or safety tools.
Tips2: 要点提取——若主题句过长，要尽量省略细节、从句，消减事例。
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.2
These school buses meet more of the nation's motor vehicle safety standards. + Also, several new technologies available today are making school buses even safer.
Well equipped with safety technologies, the school buses meet motor vehicle safety standards.
School buses not only meet high vehicle safety standards but also are technologically equipped.
But even the safeness of school buses would not completely sum up（总结） why children are safer when riding the big, yellow bus. The bus is only as safe as the professional men and women who drive them. All drivers must obtain a Class B or C Commercial Driver's License (CDL商业驾照). They are randomly（随机地） tested for alcohol（酒精） and drugs, usually have their driving record checked, and are given the same review of criminal（犯罪的） history as teachers and other employees who have contact with students.
Get the main points: para.3
Q1:Find out the second reason.
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.3
All drivers must obtain a Class B or C Commercial Driver's License (CDL商业驾照). + They are randomly（随机地） tested for alcohol（酒精） and drugs, usually have their driving record checked, and are given the same review of criminal（犯罪的） history as teachers and other employees who have contact with students.
The bus drivers have to pass strict qualification tests and successfully finish safety driving training.
qualification tests
safety driving training
笼统代替具体
In order to serve as a school bus driver, most applicants are required to successfully complete a training course, along with instruction（指示） in the classroom and behind the wheel.School buses are safe for the environment, not only because each bus replaces 36 passenger cars that would, but for the buses, be on the road taking and picking up school children. Additionally school buses use alternative(选择的) green fuels（燃料） like natural gas and electric power.
Get the main points: para.4
Q1:Find out the fourth reason.
主要点
次要点
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.4
School buses are safe for the environment
① replaces passenger cars
② use green fuels
School buses are environmentally safe for it reduce private cars and use green fuels.
School buses powered by green fuels are environmentally safe by reducing the number of private cars on the road.
Todd Monteferrario, President of the National School Transportation Association, said parents should remember that the safest and smartest choice is to put their children on the big yellow bus when they can.
Get the main points: para.5
Q1:Find out the conslusion.
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.5
parents should remember that the safest and smartest choice is to put their children on the big yellow bus when they can.
Children are encouraged to go to school on a school bus.
Yoke the points to complete a summary:
The school bus is the safest and wisest choice to go to school in the US. , school buses not only meet high vehicle safety standards but also are technologically equipped. , the bus drivers have to pass strict qualification tests and successfully finish safety driving training. , school buses powered by green fuels are environmentally safe by reducing the number of private cars on the road. children are encouraged to go to school on a school bus.(要点5)
逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Firstly
Secondly
Thirdly
Therefore
总分总结构
常见逻辑关系词
条件 if; unless; provided that; given that...
时间 before; since; meanwhile; at the moment...
总结 in concusion; in a word; in summary...
举例 for example/instance; in particular; namely...
原因 since; because(of); due to; thanks to; leads to..
并列 not only...but also...;in addition; besides;also...
顺序 to begin with; second; following this; later...
结果 as a result; therefore; in that case; eventually...
转折 on the contrary; on the other hand; however...
确定 obviously; certainly; plainly; of course...
档次 描述
第五挡（21-25） 理解准确，涵盖全部要点
能准确适用相应语法结构和词汇
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑
完全使用自己的语言
第四挡（16-20） 理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点
所使用的语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达
比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑
有个别整句抄自原文
第三挡（11-15） 理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点
所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有错误，但不影响意义表达
应用简单的词句间连接成分，使上下文内容连贯
出现两句以上整句抄自原文
第二挡（6-10） 理解有误差，仅涵盖半数要点
有些语法结构和词汇方面错误，影响了意义表达
较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性
出现两句以上整句抄自原文
第一挡（1-5） 没有理解原文，造成概要内容与原文主题不符
有较多语法结构和词汇方面错误，严重影响了意义表达
Present your own version and score it
With smartphones becoming increasingly important in people's lives, human beings are gradually losing three basic abilities (要点1). The abilities include remembering phone numbers, the sense of directions and the social skills.(要点2) A research on students confirms that lacking face- to-face communication results in the loss of important social skills.(要点3) Luckily, people can regain these abilities with some effective solutions like keeping a certain distance from electronic devices.(要点4)
Possible version:
检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
Summary:概要写作解题步骤：
Tips1:篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Tips2:要点提取——提取主要点和次要点
主要点：关注主题句、信号词句和过渡句；
次要点：关注连接词，并列结构
Tips3:语言改写——词语替换和句子重组
1.同义替换法：近义词、反义词、词性转换等
2.句式转换法：改变主语、运用非谓语动词、with结构
3.压缩长句法：笼统代替具体，运用并列结构等。
Tips4:逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Tips5:检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
条件, 时间,总结, 举例, 原因, 并列, 顺序,结果, 转折,确定
Homework:
概要写作练习卷
Summary Writing3
Yellow school bus
Revision:概要写作解题步骤：
Tips1:篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Tips2:要点提取——提取主要点和次要点
Tips3:语言改写——词语替换和句子重组
Tips4:逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Tips5:检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
主要点：关注主题句、信号词句和过渡句；
次要点：关注连接词，并列结构
1.同义替换法：近义词、反义词、词性转换等
2.句式转换法：改变主语、运用非谓语动词、with结构
3.压缩长句法：笼统代替具体，运用并列结构等。
Read for the topic, structure and writing style.
①The familiar yellow school bus is the largest system of mass transportation in the US and every school day transports roughly 25 million young people to school and home again after the school day ends. Meanwhile, it is the safest method for getting kids to and from school, according to the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA). Children are 70 times more likely to arrive at school safely on the school bus than if they had traveled to school driving themselves or riding with friends.
②These school buses meet more of the nation's motor vehicle safety standards than any other vehicles on the road. Also, several new technologies available today are making school buses even safer, such as video cameras on the inside and outside, stop arm cameras, GPS tracking and collision lessening systems. Another safety tool on school buses is high seat backs, closely-spaced seats and energy-absorbing seats.
③But even the safeness of school buses would not completely sum up why children are safer when riding the big, yellow bus. The bus is only as safe as the professional men and women who drive them. All drivers must obtain a Class B or C Commercial Driver's License (CDL). They are randomly tested for alcohol and drugs, usually have their driving record checked, and are given the same review of criminal history as teachers and other employees who have contact with students.
④In order to serve as a school bus driver, most applicants are required to successfully complete a training course, along with instruction in the classroom and behind the wheel.School buses are safe for the environment, not only because each bus replaces 36 passenger cars that would, but for the buses, be on the road taking and picking up school children. Additionally school buses use alternative green fuels like natural gas and electric power.
⑤Todd Monteferrario, President of the National School Transportation Association, said parents should remember that the safest and smartest choice is to put their children on the big yellow bus when they can.
topic:school bus is the safest
Argument
general-specific
supporting detail 1
supporting detail 2
conclusion
supporting detail 3
篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Get the main points: para.1
The familiar yellow school bus is the largest system of mass transportation(公共交通运输) in the US and every school day transports roughly 25 million young people to school and home again after the school day ends. Meanwhile, it is the safest method for getting kids to and from school, according to the National Highway Traffic Safety Administration (NHTSA). Children are 70 times more likely to arrive at school safely on the school bus than if they had traveled to school driving themselves or riding with friends.
Q1:Find out the topic sentence.
Q2:What's the function of the first sentence
Q2:How about the last sentence
detailed explanation
Lead in the topic
Key words
Tips1: 要点提取——注意句子关系和信号词句
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.1
the largest system + Meanwhile, it is the safest method for getting kids to and from school.
As the widely-uesd system, the school bus is the safest choice to go to school in the US.
The school bus is the safest and wisest choice to go to school in the US.
语言改写——词语替换和句子重组
These school buses meet（满足） more of the nation's motor vehicle safety standards（机动车辆安全标准） than any other vehicles on the road. Also, several new technologies available today are making school buses even safer, such as video cameras on the inside and outside, stop arm cameras, GPS tracking and collision lessening systems（减少碰撞系统）. Another safety tool on school buses is high seat backs, closely-spaced seats and energy-absorbing seats.
Get the main points: para.2
Q1:Find out the first reason.
Q2:What's the function of the rest sentences
detailed examples about safety technologies or safety tools.
Tips2: 要点提取——若主题句过长，要尽量省略细节、从句，消减事例。
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.2
These school buses meet more of the nation's motor vehicle safety standards. + Also, several new technologies available today are making school buses even safer.
Well equipped with safety technologies, the school buses meet motor vehicle safety standards.
School buses not only meet high vehicle safety standards but also are technologically equipped.
But even the safeness of school buses would not completely sum up（总结） why children are safer when riding the big, yellow bus. The bus is only as safe as the professional men and women who drive them. All drivers must obtain a Class B or C Commercial Driver's License (CDL商业驾照). They are randomly（随机地） tested for alcohol（酒精） and drugs, usually have their driving record checked, and are given the same review of criminal（犯罪的） history as teachers and other employees who have contact with students.
Get the main points: para.3
Q1:Find out the second reason.
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.3
All drivers must obtain a Class B or C Commercial Driver's License (CDL商业驾照). + They are randomly（随机地） tested for alcohol（酒精） and drugs, usually have their driving record checked, and are given the same review of criminal（犯罪的） history as teachers and other employees who have contact with students.
The bus drivers have to pass strict qualification tests and successfully finish safety driving training.
qualification tests
safety driving training
笼统代替具体
In order to serve as a school bus driver, most applicants are required to successfully complete a training course, along with instruction（指示） in the classroom and behind the wheel.School buses are safe for the environment, not only because each bus replaces 36 passenger cars that would, but for the buses, be on the road taking and picking up school children. Additionally school buses use alternative(选择的) green fuels（燃料） like natural gas and electric power.
Get the main points: para.4
Q1:Find out the fourth reason.
主要点
次要点
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.4
School buses are safe for the environment
① replaces passenger cars
② use green fuels
School buses are environmentally safe for it reduce private cars and use green fuels.
School buses powered by green fuels are environmentally safe by reducing the number of private cars on the road.
Todd Monteferrario, President of the National School Transportation Association, said parents should remember that the safest and smartest choice is to put their children on the big yellow bus when they can.
Get the main points: para.5
Q1:Find out the conslusion.
Rewrite the point in our own words: Para.5
parents should remember that the safest and smartest choice is to put their children on the big yellow bus when they can.
Children are encouraged to go to school on a school bus.
Yoke the points to complete a summary:
The school bus is the safest and wisest choice to go to school in the US. , school buses not only meet high vehicle safety standards but also are technologically equipped. , the bus drivers have to pass strict qualification tests and successfully finish safety driving training. , school buses powered by green fuels are environmentally safe by reducing the number of private cars on the road. children are encouraged to go to school on a school bus.(要点5)
逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Firstly
Secondly
Thirdly
Therefore
总分总结构
常见逻辑关系词
条件 if; unless; provided that; given that...
时间 before; since; meanwhile; at the moment...
总结 in concusion; in a word; in summary...
举例 for example/instance; in particular; namely...
原因 since; because(of); due to; thanks to; leads to..
并列 not only...but also...;in addition; besides;also...
顺序 to begin with; second; following this; later...
结果 as a result; therefore; in that case; eventually...
转折 on the contrary; on the other hand; however...
确定 obviously; certainly; plainly; of course...
档次 描述
第五挡（21-25） 理解准确，涵盖全部要点
能准确适用相应语法结构和词汇
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑
完全使用自己的语言
第四挡（16-20） 理解准确，涵盖绝大部分要点
所使用的语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达
比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑
有个别整句抄自原文
第三挡（11-15） 理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点
所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有错误，但不影响意义表达
应用简单的词句间连接成分，使上下文内容连贯
出现两句以上整句抄自原文
第二挡（6-10） 理解有误差，仅涵盖半数要点
有些语法结构和词汇方面错误，影响了意义表达
较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性
出现两句以上整句抄自原文
第一挡（1-5） 没有理解原文，造成概要内容与原文主题不符
有较多语法结构和词汇方面错误，严重影响了意义表达
Present your own version and score it
With smartphones becoming increasingly important in people's lives, human beings are gradually losing three basic abilities (要点1). The abilities include remembering phone numbers, the sense of directions and the social skills.(要点2) A research on students confirms that lacking face- to-face communication results in the loss of important social skills.(要点3) Luckily, people can regain these abilities with some effective solutions like keeping a certain distance from electronic devices.(要点4)
Possible version:
检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
Summary:概要写作解题步骤：
Tips1:篇章阅读——确定文体和篇章结构
Tips2:要点提取——提取主要点和次要点
主要点：关注主题句、信号词句和过渡句；
次要点：关注连接词，并列结构
Tips3:语言改写——词语替换和句子重组
1.同义替换法：近义词、反义词、词性转换等
2.句式转换法：改变主语、运用非谓语动词、with结构
3.压缩长句法：笼统代替具体，运用并列结构等。
Tips4:逻辑衔接——篇章结构和逻辑衔接
Tips5:检查修改——符合要求和语言得体
条件, 时间,总结, 举例, 原因, 并列, 顺序,结果, 转折,确定
Homework:
概要写作练习卷