高中英语概要写作基于学生问题的概要写作讲评课例分析“We-talk”教学课件(22张PPT)
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Summary
writing
We-talk
Evaluation criteria
Content
Complete; objective;
concise&
independent
points
language
&grammar
Correct&
diversified
logic
handwriting
coherent
Clear&neat
Students’ difficulties in writing
踩不中点，既怕不完整，又怕太繁琐
Content
Language
Logic
找不到替换词和句式
段与段关系不明，不会用连接词
Solution: three steps
Read for structure and organize your
writing coherently.
Step3
Read for key points and rewrite them correctly and concisely.
Step2
Read for theme & main ideas.
Step1
Read for theme and main ideas
Step1
Read for theme and main ideas
We all know that friends are special people who we share our lives with, and who share their lives with us in return. But seeking friends and keeping the friendship going are never easy. According to research recently published in the Journal of Social and Personal Relationships, the key is to use
“we-talk”.
Led by University of California psychologist Megan Robbins and her colleagues, the researchers reviewed and analyzed 30 different studies involving over 5,000 participants. This largest-ever analysis of “we-talk” suggested that the frequent use of “we” and “us” is linked to happier and healthier relationships. The word “we” move people from an individual position into a partnership, which makes us more interdependent. “The pronouns offer an insight into whether people see themselves as individuals or as part of a whole,” Robbins told Science Daily.
Their research also found that “we-talk” is helpful for solving conflicts. “The primary point is that interdependence may bring about supportive behaviors and positive ideas of the partner– especially important in times of stress and conflict,” according to a statement released by Robbins’ lab.
Contrary to “we-talk”, there is “I-talk”, which refers to the frequent use of first-person singular pronouns, such as “I”, “me”, and “mine”, when writing or speaking. Earlier this year, researchers from the University of Arizona, US, analyzed a set of data that came from 4,700 people in Germany and the US. They found that too much “I-talk” was an accurate linguistic marker（语言标记）that someone is likely to feel stressed or experiencing negative emotions.
As you can see from the two studies, too much “I-talk” can make you feel depressed. But “we-talk” can encourage you to become more positive and create a ripple effect of healthy interdependence with others. So next time you’re talking to a friend, try using more “we-talk”. You may find yourself feeling more positive—and the effect it will have on your friend will have on your friend will be positive as well.
“we-talk”
“we-talk”
The of“we-talk”
“we-talk”
“we-talk”
“we-talk”
“we-talk”
One of“we-talk”
Another of“we-talk”
The of“I-talk”
The
importance
advantage
advantage
disadvantage
suggestion
Read for key points and rewrite them
Step2
Para.1The importance of “we-talk”
We all know that friends are special people who we share our lives with, and who share their lives with us in return. But seeking friends and keeping the friendship going are never easy. According to research recently published in the Journal of Social and Personal Relationships, the key is to use “we-talk”.
We all know that friends are special people who we share our lives with, and who share their lives with us in return. But seeking friends and keeping the friendship going are never easy. According to research recently published in the Journal of Social and Personal Relationships, the key is to use “we-talk”.
Tip1 抓住信号词，定位要点。
Tip2 抓住关键词，同义替换。
seek friends:
make friends;build\establish friendship
keep friendship:
maintain friendship
key:
sth.is important\essential\crucial\vital; sth. plays an important role in; sth. is of importance
Learn from peers
Tip3 巧用句型，整合关键信息。
Which version is the best one? Why?
1.Using “we-talk” is vital to making friends and maintaining friendship.
(v-ing作主语）
2.“We-talk” can play a crucial role in building and maintaining the friendship. (句型sth. plays a crucial role in doing sth.）
3.Despite the obstacles in establishing and maintaining friendship, “we-talk” may be of assistance. (despite引导的让步状语从句）
Possible version
“We-talk” plays a crucial role in establishing and maintaining friendship.
correct &concise
Para.2 One advantage of “we-talk”
Led by University of California psychologist Megan Robbins and her colleagues, the researchers reviewed and analyzed 30 different studies involving over 5,000 participants. This largest-ever analysis of “we-talk” suggested that the frequent use of “we” and “us” is linked to happier and healthier relationships. The word “we” move people from an individual position into a partnership, which makes us more interdependent. “The pronouns offer an insight into whether people see themselves as individuals or as part of a whole,” Robbins told Science Daily.
研究介绍(冗余信息)
研究结果(主要点)
解释“relationship”(次要点)
Tip4 逐句分析复杂段落，提取主要点和次要点，去除冗余信息。
Led by University of California psychologist Megan Robbins and her colleagues, the researchers reviewed and analyzed 30 different studies involving over 5,000 participants.
“The pronouns offer an insight into whether people see themselves as individuals or as part of a whole,” Robbins told Science Daily.
举例说明(冗余信息)
What’s “happier and healthier relationships” in para.2?
What’s “happier and healthier relationships” in para.2?
(Draw a mind map to illustrate the concepts like “individual”; “partnership”; “interdependent” and “happier and healthier relationship”. )
I
individual
partnership
“We”
interdependent
Tip5 借助思维导图，
厘清抽象概念。
Learn from peers
1. According to their study, the more you use “we” and “us”, the happier
and healthier you will be. (句型 “the+比较级…,the+比较级…”)
2. Frequently using “we” is associated with healthier relationship and
motivates individuals into a group. (将is linked to改写为is associated with; move改写为motivate)
3. The research demonstrates “we-talk”,with plenty of “we” and “us”, promotes harmonious relationships by mingling people to a community. (将happier and healthier改写为harmonious; move改写为mingle;借助v-ing连接主次要点)
Possible version
As a study reveals, “we-talk” contributes to healthier relationships, motivating individuals into a group and to rely on each other.
Which version is the best one? Why?
主次要点逻辑清晰
be helpful for:
Para.3 Another advantage of “we-talk”
Their research also found that “we-talk” is helpful for solving conflicts. “The primary point is that interdependence may bring about supportive behaviors and positive ideas of the partner– especially important in times of stress and conflict,” according to a statement released by Robbins’ lab.
“we-talk” is helpful for solving conflicts.
研究结果(主要点)
解释说明(次要点)
benefit\be beneficial to\be conducive to\contribute to
solve:
conflict:
settle\address\tackle\deal with
collision\disagreement\argument\dispute
Possible version
Support from such interdependence is beneficial to address collisions.
Tip6 巧用限定词，省略重复信息。
Some researches show that “we-talk” not only can make relationship happier and healthier, but also can help us to deal with some conflicts between friends.
Thinking：The following version combines the points in para.2 and para.3 into one sentence. Do you think it proper? Why?
Tip7 概括较长段落时，各要点独立成句，以免丢失次要点。
点评：此生虽能借助“not only…but also”句型体现para.2和para.3两段的并列关系，且能抓住两段的主要点，但合并处理不利于次要点的整合。
要点2
要点3
Para.4 The disadvantage of “I-talk”
Contrary to “we-talk”, there is “I-talk”, which refers to the frequent use of first-person singular pronouns, such as “I”, “me”, and “mine”, when writing or speaking. Earlier this year, researchers from the University of Arizona, US, analyzed a set of data that came from 4,700 people in Germany and the US. They found that too much “I-talk” was an accurate linguistic marker（语言标记）that someone is likely to feel stressed or experiencing negative emotions.
Contrary to “we-talk”, there is “I-talk”, which refers to the frequent use of first-person singular pronouns, such as “I”, “me”, and “mine”, when writing or speaking. Earlier this year, researchers from the University of Arizona, US, analyzed a set of data that came from 4,700 people in Germany and the US. They found that too much “I-talk” was an accurate linguistic marker(语言标记)that someone is likely to feel stressed or experiencing negative emotions.
an accurate linguistic marker:
indicate;symbolize;demonstrate;show
“I-talk” indicates pressure or negative feelings.
Possible version
stressed:
tense;anxious;strained;under the pressure
研究结果(主要点)
Para.5 The suggestion
As you can see from the two studies, too much “I-talk” can make you feel depressed. But “we-talk” can encourage you to become more positive and create a ripple effect of healthy interdependence with others. So next time you’re talking to a friend, try using more “we-talk”. You may find yourself feeling more positive—and the effect it will have on your friend will have on your friend will be positive as well.
As you can see from the two studies, too much “I-talk” can make you feel depressed. But “we-talk” can encourage you to become more positive and create a ripple effect of healthy interdependence with others. So next time you’re talking to a friend, try using more “we-talk”. You may find yourself feeling more positive—and the effect it will have on your friend will have on your friend will be positive as well.
建议内容(主要点)
建议效果(次要点)
表建议:it’s necessary\recommended\suggested\advised\proposed\a must to do sth.
Possible version
It’s advisable to use “we-talk” in the benefit of you and your friends.
Tip8 巧用介词短语、非谓语动词、定语从句等语法，连接主次要点。
Read for structure and organize your writing
Step3
Read for the structure and draw a mind map
Suggestion
(Para.5)
Introduction
(Para.1)
Advantage 1
(Para.2)
Advantage 2
(Para.3)
Disadvantage
(Para.4)
并列
转折
因果
Fill in the blanks with proper logical words
“we-talk” plays a crucial role in establishing and maintaining friendship. As a study reveals, “we-talk” contributes to healthier relationships, motivating individuals into a group and to rely on each other. , support from such interdependence is beneficial to address collisions. “I-talk”, , indicates pressure or negative feelings. , it’s advisable to use “we-talk” in the benefit of you and your friends.
并列:also; additionally;
besides; what’s more; furthermore; moreover; in addition to…
Possible version
转折:however; on the contrary; contrarily; by(in) contrast; whereas; conversely;nevertheless…
结果: so; therefore; thus;
hence; consequently; in consequence; as a result\consequence…
Additionally
by contrast
Thus
Step1: Read for theme & main idea
Three
steps
Step2: Read for key points and rewrite
them correctly and concisely.
Step3: Read for structure and organize
your writing coherently.
Conclusion
Assignments
1. Polish your writing with the 8 tips you’ve learnt.
2. Review the newly-learnt words and sentence patterns.
Thank you
writing
We-talk
Evaluation criteria
Content
Complete; objective;
concise&
independent
points
language
&grammar
Correct&
diversified
logic
handwriting
coherent
Clear&neat
Students’ difficulties in writing
踩不中点，既怕不完整，又怕太繁琐
Content
Language
Logic
找不到替换词和句式
段与段关系不明，不会用连接词
Solution: three steps
Read for structure and organize your
writing coherently.
Step3
Read for key points and rewrite them correctly and concisely.
Step2
Read for theme & main ideas.
Step1
Read for theme and main ideas
Step1
Read for theme and main ideas
We all know that friends are special people who we share our lives with, and who share their lives with us in return. But seeking friends and keeping the friendship going are never easy. According to research recently published in the Journal of Social and Personal Relationships, the key is to use
“we-talk”.
Led by University of California psychologist Megan Robbins and her colleagues, the researchers reviewed and analyzed 30 different studies involving over 5,000 participants. This largest-ever analysis of “we-talk” suggested that the frequent use of “we” and “us” is linked to happier and healthier relationships. The word “we” move people from an individual position into a partnership, which makes us more interdependent. “The pronouns offer an insight into whether people see themselves as individuals or as part of a whole,” Robbins told Science Daily.
Their research also found that “we-talk” is helpful for solving conflicts. “The primary point is that interdependence may bring about supportive behaviors and positive ideas of the partner– especially important in times of stress and conflict,” according to a statement released by Robbins’ lab.
Contrary to “we-talk”, there is “I-talk”, which refers to the frequent use of first-person singular pronouns, such as “I”, “me”, and “mine”, when writing or speaking. Earlier this year, researchers from the University of Arizona, US, analyzed a set of data that came from 4,700 people in Germany and the US. They found that too much “I-talk” was an accurate linguistic marker（语言标记）that someone is likely to feel stressed or experiencing negative emotions.
As you can see from the two studies, too much “I-talk” can make you feel depressed. But “we-talk” can encourage you to become more positive and create a ripple effect of healthy interdependence with others. So next time you’re talking to a friend, try using more “we-talk”. You may find yourself feeling more positive—and the effect it will have on your friend will have on your friend will be positive as well.
“we-talk”
“we-talk”
The of“we-talk”
“we-talk”
“we-talk”
“we-talk”
“we-talk”
One of“we-talk”
Another of“we-talk”
The of“I-talk”
The
importance
advantage
advantage
disadvantage
suggestion
Read for key points and rewrite them
Step2
Para.1The importance of “we-talk”
We all know that friends are special people who we share our lives with, and who share their lives with us in return. But seeking friends and keeping the friendship going are never easy. According to research recently published in the Journal of Social and Personal Relationships, the key is to use “we-talk”.
We all know that friends are special people who we share our lives with, and who share their lives with us in return. But seeking friends and keeping the friendship going are never easy. According to research recently published in the Journal of Social and Personal Relationships, the key is to use “we-talk”.
Tip1 抓住信号词，定位要点。
Tip2 抓住关键词，同义替换。
seek friends:
make friends;build\establish friendship
keep friendship:
maintain friendship
key:
sth.is important\essential\crucial\vital; sth. plays an important role in; sth. is of importance
Learn from peers
Tip3 巧用句型，整合关键信息。
Which version is the best one? Why?
1.Using “we-talk” is vital to making friends and maintaining friendship.
(v-ing作主语）
2.“We-talk” can play a crucial role in building and maintaining the friendship. (句型sth. plays a crucial role in doing sth.）
3.Despite the obstacles in establishing and maintaining friendship, “we-talk” may be of assistance. (despite引导的让步状语从句）
Possible version
“We-talk” plays a crucial role in establishing and maintaining friendship.
correct &concise
Para.2 One advantage of “we-talk”
Led by University of California psychologist Megan Robbins and her colleagues, the researchers reviewed and analyzed 30 different studies involving over 5,000 participants. This largest-ever analysis of “we-talk” suggested that the frequent use of “we” and “us” is linked to happier and healthier relationships. The word “we” move people from an individual position into a partnership, which makes us more interdependent. “The pronouns offer an insight into whether people see themselves as individuals or as part of a whole,” Robbins told Science Daily.
研究介绍(冗余信息)
研究结果(主要点)
解释“relationship”(次要点)
Tip4 逐句分析复杂段落，提取主要点和次要点，去除冗余信息。
Led by University of California psychologist Megan Robbins and her colleagues, the researchers reviewed and analyzed 30 different studies involving over 5,000 participants.
“The pronouns offer an insight into whether people see themselves as individuals or as part of a whole,” Robbins told Science Daily.
举例说明(冗余信息)
What’s “happier and healthier relationships” in para.2?
What’s “happier and healthier relationships” in para.2?
(Draw a mind map to illustrate the concepts like “individual”; “partnership”; “interdependent” and “happier and healthier relationship”. )
I
individual
partnership
“We”
interdependent
Tip5 借助思维导图，
厘清抽象概念。
Learn from peers
1. According to their study, the more you use “we” and “us”, the happier
and healthier you will be. (句型 “the+比较级…,the+比较级…”)
2. Frequently using “we” is associated with healthier relationship and
motivates individuals into a group. (将is linked to改写为is associated with; move改写为motivate)
3. The research demonstrates “we-talk”,with plenty of “we” and “us”, promotes harmonious relationships by mingling people to a community. (将happier and healthier改写为harmonious; move改写为mingle;借助v-ing连接主次要点)
Possible version
As a study reveals, “we-talk” contributes to healthier relationships, motivating individuals into a group and to rely on each other.
Which version is the best one? Why?
主次要点逻辑清晰
be helpful for:
Para.3 Another advantage of “we-talk”
Their research also found that “we-talk” is helpful for solving conflicts. “The primary point is that interdependence may bring about supportive behaviors and positive ideas of the partner– especially important in times of stress and conflict,” according to a statement released by Robbins’ lab.
“we-talk” is helpful for solving conflicts.
研究结果(主要点)
解释说明(次要点)
benefit\be beneficial to\be conducive to\contribute to
solve:
conflict:
settle\address\tackle\deal with
collision\disagreement\argument\dispute
Possible version
Support from such interdependence is beneficial to address collisions.
Tip6 巧用限定词，省略重复信息。
Some researches show that “we-talk” not only can make relationship happier and healthier, but also can help us to deal with some conflicts between friends.
Thinking：The following version combines the points in para.2 and para.3 into one sentence. Do you think it proper? Why?
Tip7 概括较长段落时，各要点独立成句，以免丢失次要点。
点评：此生虽能借助“not only…but also”句型体现para.2和para.3两段的并列关系，且能抓住两段的主要点，但合并处理不利于次要点的整合。
要点2
要点3
Para.4 The disadvantage of “I-talk”
Contrary to “we-talk”, there is “I-talk”, which refers to the frequent use of first-person singular pronouns, such as “I”, “me”, and “mine”, when writing or speaking. Earlier this year, researchers from the University of Arizona, US, analyzed a set of data that came from 4,700 people in Germany and the US. They found that too much “I-talk” was an accurate linguistic marker（语言标记）that someone is likely to feel stressed or experiencing negative emotions.
Contrary to “we-talk”, there is “I-talk”, which refers to the frequent use of first-person singular pronouns, such as “I”, “me”, and “mine”, when writing or speaking. Earlier this year, researchers from the University of Arizona, US, analyzed a set of data that came from 4,700 people in Germany and the US. They found that too much “I-talk” was an accurate linguistic marker(语言标记)that someone is likely to feel stressed or experiencing negative emotions.
an accurate linguistic marker:
indicate;symbolize;demonstrate;show
“I-talk” indicates pressure or negative feelings.
Possible version
stressed:
tense;anxious;strained;under the pressure
研究结果(主要点)
Para.5 The suggestion
As you can see from the two studies, too much “I-talk” can make you feel depressed. But “we-talk” can encourage you to become more positive and create a ripple effect of healthy interdependence with others. So next time you’re talking to a friend, try using more “we-talk”. You may find yourself feeling more positive—and the effect it will have on your friend will have on your friend will be positive as well.
As you can see from the two studies, too much “I-talk” can make you feel depressed. But “we-talk” can encourage you to become more positive and create a ripple effect of healthy interdependence with others. So next time you’re talking to a friend, try using more “we-talk”. You may find yourself feeling more positive—and the effect it will have on your friend will have on your friend will be positive as well.
建议内容(主要点)
建议效果(次要点)
表建议:it’s necessary\recommended\suggested\advised\proposed\a must to do sth.
Possible version
It’s advisable to use “we-talk” in the benefit of you and your friends.
Tip8 巧用介词短语、非谓语动词、定语从句等语法，连接主次要点。
Read for structure and organize your writing
Step3
Read for the structure and draw a mind map
Suggestion
(Para.5)
Introduction
(Para.1)
Advantage 1
(Para.2)
Advantage 2
(Para.3)
Disadvantage
(Para.4)
并列
转折
因果
Fill in the blanks with proper logical words
“we-talk” plays a crucial role in establishing and maintaining friendship. As a study reveals, “we-talk” contributes to healthier relationships, motivating individuals into a group and to rely on each other. , support from such interdependence is beneficial to address collisions. “I-talk”, , indicates pressure or negative feelings. , it’s advisable to use “we-talk” in the benefit of you and your friends.
并列:also; additionally;
besides; what’s more; furthermore; moreover; in addition to…
Possible version
转折:however; on the contrary; contrarily; by(in) contrast; whereas; conversely;nevertheless…
结果: so; therefore; thus;
hence; consequently; in consequence; as a result\consequence…
Additionally
by contrast
Thus
Step1: Read for theme & main idea
Three
steps
Step2: Read for key points and rewrite
them correctly and concisely.
Step3: Read for structure and organize
your writing coherently.
Conclusion
Assignments
1. Polish your writing with the 8 tips you’ve learnt.
2. Review the newly-learnt words and sentence patterns.
Thank you