Simon
I love watching TV.
Do you like watching TV?
What do you think of our world?
Amazing!
We live in a wonderful world with a lot of ____________.
Simon
amazing things
How amazing!
Can you tell me some more amazing things in our world?
Simon
How amazing!
Simon
You know? The TV itself is an amazing thing.
Amazing TV
about 2,000 TVs in use
by 1935
now
in 1926
in 1987
the first TV show in the UK
in China, about 29TVs per 100 families
Simon
Introduction(介绍):Amazing TV
at least
至少;最少
at most
至多;最多
Most families have at least one TV. TVs can be as large as 152 inches.
by prep. 不迟于;
在...之前
by the end of last year
在去年底之前
be in use
在使用中
per 每;每个
per hour
per person
as adj./adv.as
和...一样...
inch inches
英寸
1 inch=2.54cm
Later,TV is becoming more and more _______.
popular
Conclusion(结论)
3 times larger than...
= 4 times as large as...
...的四倍大
Simon
the first TV show in the UK in 1926
by 1935, about 2,000 TVs in use
in China, in 1987, about 29 TVs per 100 families, but now most families have at least one TV
now TVs can be as large as 152 inches
How can I change them into sentences?
TV
Notes
Simon
The first TV show______in the UK in 1926.
By 1935, about 2,000 TVs_____ in use.
In China, in 1987, _________about 29 TVs per 100 families, but now most families have at least one TV.
Now TVs can be as large as 152 inches.
subject
verb
sentence
Make sentences
What makes a sentence?
was
there were
were
Tips for writing
Simon
Tip 1:
Make full_____________.
sentences
Simon
The first TV show was in the UK in 1926.
About 2,000 TVs were in use by 1935.
In China, there were about 29 TVs per 100 families in 1987,but now most families have at least one TV.
Now TVs can be as large as 152 inches.
Amazing TV
Isn't it amazing?
Yes, it is!
Simon
Please help me take some notes.
Let's watch!
sandwich [?s?nw?t?]
n. 三明治
es
sandwiches
1. got its _____ from a man called John Montagu, the Fourth Earl of Sandwich
loved _____________ very much
did not want to stop for ______
put ____ between two pieces of______
others wanted to eat the same food
later became ______ all over the world
Amazing sandwich
name
playing cards
meals
meat
bread
popular
Montagu
[‘m?nt?gju:]
Earl 伯爵
[??l]
遍及全世界
sandwiches
1. got its name from a man called John Montagu, the Fourth Earl of Sandwich
loved playing cards very much
did not want to stop for meals
put meat between two pieces of bread
others wanted to eat the same food
later became popular all over the world
Simon
Amazing sandwich
Montagu
[‘m?nt?gju:]
Earl 伯爵
[??l]
sandwiches
1. __________got its name from a man called John Montagu, the Fourth Earl of Sandwich.
_______loved playing cards very much.
_______did not want to stop for meals.
_______put meat between two pieces of bread.
Others wanted to eat the same food
Later ________became popular all over the world.
Simon
Make full sentences
subject
verb
sentence
Sandwich
He
He
He
sandwich
The man
the food
avoid repetition
避免重复
Simon
How can I turn the sentences into an article?
Sandwich got its name form a man called John Montagu, the Fourth Earl of Sandwich. The man loved playing cards with his friends
very much. He did not want to stop for meals, ___he put meat between two pieces of bread. Soon others wanted to eat the same food, ____
they asked for a “sandwich”.
conjunction 连词
so
so
conjunctions:
and; but; so; because....
Make an article
请求;要
Tips for writing
Simon
Tip 2:
Use proper_____________.
conjunctions
Sandwich got its name form a man called John Montagu, the Fourth Earl of Sandwich. The man loved playing cards with his friends very much. He did not want to stop for meals, so he put meat between two pieces of bread. Soon others wanted to eat the same food, so they asked for a “sandwich”.
Later the food became popular all over the world. Isn't it amazing?
We live in a wonderful world with a lot of amazing things.
Many people like sandwiches, but do you know anything about this kind of food?
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
Make a good article
Make a good sandwich
Tips for writing
Simon
Tip 3:
Add __________ and ________.
introduction
conclusion
The first TV show was in the UK in 1926. 2,000 TVs were in use by 1935. In China, there were about 29 TVs per 100 families in 1987. But now most families have at least one TV. And now TVs can be as large as 152 inches.
Main body
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Introduction
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Conclusion
Let's make a good article
The first TV show was in the UK in 1926. 2,000 TVs were in use by 1935. In China, there were about 29 TVs per 100 families in 1987. But now most families have at least one TV. And now TVs can be as large as 152 inches.
Main body
We live in a wonderful world with a lot of amazing things.
Many people like watching TV, but do you know anything about TV?
Introduction
Now TVs become popular all over the world. Isn't it amazing.
Conclusion
Sample writing
?
Tips for writing
Simon
Tip 4:
Use correct __________.
punctuations
Make full sentences (完整的句子结构)
Use proper conjunctions (合适的连词)
Add introduction & conclusion(开头和结尾)
Use correct punctuations (正确的标点)
Tips for writing a good article
Simon
Amazing China
Simon
Do you know some amazing things in ancient(古代) China?
The Four Great Inventions in China
Simon
Let's watch a programme.
W
Find out the amazing things in China now.
The Four New Great Inventions in China
The Four New Great Inventions in China
High-speed railway
Alipay
Sharing bike
Taobao
Let's have a try!
Simon
Which one do you like best? Why?
Let's have a try!
Simon
I have searched the Internet and made some notes on them. Can you help me make a good article?
in 2008, operated (运行) the first high-speed railway
faster than traditional railway, move as fast as 480km per hour
takes only 5 hours from Beijing to Shanghai
now, popular in China
an online payment (支付方式) created by Ma Yun in 2004
don't need to take the wallet when they go out
now, can be used in almost everywhere in China
also popular in other countries
in 2014, first appeared (出现)in Beijing
use an app to find the nearby(附近的) bike
leave it anywhere and lock (锁) it after using it
cheap, cost 1 yuan per hour
an online shopping website
have at least 617 million monthly users
can sell and buy things on it
can get the things in a few days
almost everyone in China has the app
The Four New Great Inventions in China
Make full sentences (完整的句子结构)
Use proper conjunctions (合适的连词)
Add introduction & conclusion(开头和结尾)
Use correct punctuation (正确的标点)
Better your handwriting (注意书写!)
Tips for writing a good article
Simon
What an amazing world!
What an amazing country!
Amazing China
Simon
I am proud(自豪) to be a Chinese, what about you?
Homework
1. Finish your work and evaluate(评价) it in groups. Make it better after evaluation.
2. Find out more amazing things in China and write about them.
Thank You!
How to evaluate (评价)?