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八年级下
Section
B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Unit
3
Could
you
please
clean
your
room?
本课时的话题是“家务琐事与许可”，要求同学们能叙述自己或他人所做的家务活动，或运用should/shouldn’t谈论对做家务的看法等，目的是培养大家学会分担家务，加强家庭成员交流，提升情感等。
Should
young
people
do
chores
at
home?
Free
talk
1.
Do
you
like
doing
housework?
2.
Do
you
think
doing
chores
is
good/bad
for
you?
3.
Do
you
think
children
should
help
their
parents
with
the
housework?
Ms.
Miller
Mr.
Smith
Should
young
people
do
chores
at
home?
It's
the
parents'
job
to
provide
a
clean
and
comfortable
environment
for
their
children.
It's
important
for
children
to
learn
how
to
do
chores
and
help
their
parents
with
housework.
Yes!
No!
论点
Revision
I
think
children
should
do
chores
because
...
Why
should
young
people
do
chores
at
home?
1.
It
is
not
enough
to
just
get
good
grades
at
school.
2.
Doing
chores
helps
to
develop
children’s
independence
and
teaches
them
how
to
look
after
themselves.
3.
It
also
helps
them
to
understand
the
idea
of
fairness.
4.
Children
these
days
depend
on
their
parents
too
much.
5.
The
earlier
kids
learn
to
be
independent
,
the
better
it
is
for
their
future.
Mr.
Smith
论据
1.
Kids
these
days
already
have
enough
stress
from
school.
I
think
children
should
not
do
chores
because
...
2.
They
do
not
have
time
to
study
and
do
housework.
3.
Housework
is
a
waste
of
their
time.
4.
They
should
spend
their
time
on
schoolwork
to
get
good
grades
and
get
into
a
good
university.
5.
When
they
get
older,
they
will
have
to
do
housework
so
there
is
no
need
for
them
to
do
it
now.
6.
It
is
the
parents’
job
to
provide
a
clean
and
comfortable
environment
at
home
for
their
children.
Why
shouldn't
young
people
do
chores
at
home?
Ms.
Miller
论据
Debate
I
agree
with
Ms.
Miller.
Because…
I
disagree
with
Ms.
Miller.
Because…
Debating
according
to
the
2b
viewpoints.
Pros
Cons
Debate
contest
Do
you
think
children
should
do
some
chores
at
home?
Why
or
why
not?
Discuss
this
with
a
parnter
and
take
notes.
3a
Children
should
do
chores
because...
Children
should
not
do
chores
because...
Share
your
opinion
Because...
(Firstly/Secondly...)
Opinion
I
agree/disagree
that...
,
I
(don't)
think....
Reasons
In
a
word/All
in
all,
...
Example
For
example,
...
Conclusion
I
think
children
should/should
not_______________
because__________________________________.
For
example,
they
sould/should
not________________.
In
a
word,
__________________________.
My
report
Write
a
letter
to
the
Sunday
Mail
and
express
your
opinion.
3b
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
I
think/believe
that
____________________________.
I
agree/disagree
that___________________________.
I
think
it
is
fair/unfair
for
children
to_______________.
I
think
children
should/should
not___________________
because
_______________________________________.
For
example,
they
should/should
not
_________________
because
_______________________________________.
Yours
truly,
_______
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
I
think/believe
that
________________________.
I
agree/disagree
that
_______________________.
I
think
it
is
fair/unfair
for
children
to__________.
I
think
children
should/should
not
_____________
because
_________________________________.
For
example,
they
should/should
not
____________
because
__________________________________.
Yours
truly,
_______
the
structure
of
the
letter
称呼
署名
正文
结尾敬语
写作技巧
本单元的话题为“谈论学生是否应该做家务”,
在写相关作文时应该注意的事项及主要句式有:
Ⅰ.
写此类对话或文章时的注意事项：
掌握和话题相关的单词、短语和句型结构。
明确对话或文章结构:
开头部分提出自己的观点，学生是否应该做家务；第二部分针对自己的观点做进一步的阐述，是文章的主体部分；最后再做总结。
找准时态与人称，理清写作顺序，
将文章的要素有机地结合起来。
一、审题干：正确审题，确定写作基本模式。
体裁__________
人称_________时态____________
书信/观点类
第一人称
一般现在时
写作迷宫大探险
A
journey
in
writing
体裁：文章的形式和风格
二、思路点拨
Topic
sentence论点
Reasons/
facts论据
conclusion结论
原因
事实例子
I
think/believe
children
should
do
chores
.
Because…
For
example…
So
I
agree
that
the
earlier…
First…
Second.…
Also.…
…
…
As
for
….
至于，关于
How
to
express
your
own
opinions
on
something？
In
my
opinion/view
在我看来
As
we
know
/
As
is
known
to
all
正如我们所知
As
a
result/
In
a
word/In
fact
因此，总之，事实上
Firstly
/
Secondly
/
Thirdly
/
Finally
第一，第二，第三，最后
On
one
hand….
On
the
other
hand…
在一方面，在另一方面
I
think
/
believe
我认为，我相信
For
支持
三、素材积累
句子链
1.It’s
not
enough
to
get
good
grades.
2.They
depend
on
their
parents
too
much.
3.Doing
chores
helps
to
develop
children’s
independence
and
teach
them
how
to
look
after
themselves.
4.Doing
chores
helps
them
to
understand
the
idea
of
fairness.
5.They
should
do
their
part
in
keeping
it
clean
and
tidy.
6.The
earlier,
the
better…
7.
I
often
take
out
the
rubbish,
fold
the
clothes
and
do
the
dishes.
8.
I
often
help
my
parents
do
some
chores.
9.
It’s
necessary
for
kids
to
help
with
chores.
1.The
student
have
enough
stress
from
school.
2.They
don’t
have
time
to
study
and
do
housework.
3.
It’s
a
waste
of
time.
4.The
students
should
spend
time
on
schoolwork.
5.
When
they
get
older,
have
to
do
housework.
6.
It’s
the
parents’
job
to……
7.
It’s
not
so
difficult,
I
do
not
mind…
8.
In
fact,
I
hate
to
do
some
chores.
9.
I’ll
help
them
to
do
chores
only
after
I
finish
my
homework.
Against
反对
三、素材积累
句子链
We
think
/believe
it’s
important
for
children
to
….
It’s
not
enough
to….
First,
children
depend
on…
Second,
doing
chores
helps
to
…
What’s
more,
it
also
helps
them
to
understand…
All
in
all/
In
a
word,
I
think
the
earlier…,
the
better….
I
think
kids
shouldn’t
help
with
housework
at
home.
First,
kids
already
have
enough
stress…
They
don’t
have
time
to…
Housework
is
a
waste…
Second,
they
should
spend
time
on…
Also,
…
What’s
more,…
All
in
all/
In
a
word,
I
disagree
kids
do
chores
at
home.
In
my
opinion,
As
for
me,
四、增添连接词
For
支持
Against
反对
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
As
for
me，I
think
/believe
it’s
important
for
children
to
do
chores.
It’s
not
enough
to
get
good
grades.
First,
children
depend
on
their
parents
too
much.
Second,
doing
chores
helps
to
develop
children’s
independence.
What’s
more,
it
also
helps
them
to
understand
the
idea
of
fairness.
For
example,
because
they
live
with
their
parents,
it’s
necessary
for
them
to
keep
the
house
clean
and
tidy.
All
in
all/
In
a
word,
I
think
the
earlier
kids
learn
to
be
independent,
the
better
it
is
for
their
future.
Yours
truly,
____________
五、范文借鉴一：
For
支持
Topic
sentence
(论点)
Reasons
/
Facts
(论据)
Conclusion
(结论)
五、范文借鉴二：
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
Yours
truly,
____________
In
my
opinion
,
I
think
kids
shouldn’t
help
with
housework
at
home.
First,
kids
already
have
enough
stress
from
school.
They
don’t
have
time
to
do
housework.
Housework
is
a
waste
of
time.
Second,
they
should
spend
time
on
schoolwork.
Also
/
What’s
more,
it’s
the
parents’
job
to
provide
a
clean
and
comfortable
environment
at
home
for
their
children.
For
example,
parents
don’t
mind
doing
the
dishes
for
their
children
because
it’s
not
difficult.
All
in
all/
In
a
word,
I
disagree
kids
do
chores
at
home.
Against
反对
Topic
sentence
(论点)
Reasons
/
Facts
(论据)
Conclusion
(结论)
In
my
opinion,/
I
think/agree
…
…
First,
…
…
Second,
…
…
What’s
more,
…
…
For
example.
…
…
All
in
all,/
in
a
word,
I
think…
…
1、时态人称体裁不正确或前后不一致。
2、中心不突出，层次不分明.
3、句子的语法错误，单词拼写错误。
4、字数不够，内容不充实。
5、卷面不整洁，字迹潦草。
对症：
下药：
审题不严密。
列提纲或分段落要到位。
句子的基本结构不会，词汇积累记忆不好。
举例子，加细节，添感受。
缺乏书法练习，态度不认真，草稿没打好。
写作中经常出现的问题:
1．加强词汇、句型、语法等语言基础的学习和积累。
2．坚持写英文日记及其它各种文体的写作练习。
3．注意积累优美的英文词句、段落和篇章。
怎样提高英语写作水平？
写作口诀：
英文写作并不难，
多背多记重语感。
妙笔生花在勤奋，
厚积薄发是宝典。
1.Make
a
list
of
chores
using
these
verbs.
1.
do
_____________________
2.
clean
_____________________
3.
make
_____________________
4.
fold
_____________________
5.
sweep
_____________________
6.
take
out
_____________________
do
the
dishes
clean
the
living
room
make
your
bed
fold
your
clothes
sweep
the
floor
take
out
the
rubbish
2.Are
these
polite
requests
or
permissions?
Write
the
numbers
in
the
correct
places
in
the
chart.
1.
Could
you
please
do
your
homework?
2.
Could
I
watch
TV?
3.
Could
you
take
out
the
rubbish
first?
4.
Could
I
use
your
computer?
5.
Could
I
leave
now?
6.
Could
you
come
back
before
nine?
Requests
Permission
2
4
5
1
3
6
3
Use
the
questions
in
activity
2
to
write
a
conversation.
A:
____________________________________________
B:
____________________________________________
A:
____________________________________________
B:
____________________________________________
A:
Could
I
watch
TV
after
dinner?
I
want
to
watch
my
favorite
program.
B:
Well,
have
you
finished
your
homework?
A:
Ah...
no.
I'll
do
my
homework
after
watching
the
program.
B:
I
don't
think
that's
a
good
idea.
Could
you
do
your
homework
first?
A:
OK.
But
I'll
miss
the
first
part
of
the
program.
Example
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Unit
3
Could
you
please
clean
your
room?
Section
B
3a-selfcheck导学案
学生姓名
班级
序号
课题内容
Unit
3
Could
you
please
clean
your
room?Section
B
3a-selfcheck
学习目标与核心素养
1.
能熟练掌握本节课重要单词
fair,
unfair,
及关于表达自己观点的重要句型：I
think/believe/agree/disagree
that...it’s
fair/unfair/adj.
for
sb.
to
do
sth.2.
能够以书面形式表达你对孩子是否应该在家做家务的短文。3.
能够熟练运用本单元与家务有关的重点单词和短语，并提出请求，以及要求许可。4.在生活中礼貌待人，热爱劳动，积极分担家务。
学习重点
针对家务劳动发表自己的观点，并简单说明原因。
学习难点
以书面的形式，针对日常家务劳动发表自己的观点。
【课前预习】
公正的，合理的
______
2.
不公正的
______
例如
_______4.
做家务_______
5.
洗餐具
_______
clean
the
living
room
7.
make
the
bed
_______
8.
fold
clothes
_______
9.
sweep
the
floor
10.
take
out
the
rubbish
_______
11.浪费时间__________
12.对……来说没必要做_____________
13.不介意_____________14.在……上花费时间______________
15.为了_____________16.……是不够的_________________
17……越早，……
越好____________________
【合作探究】
Activity1：
Share
the
opinions
about
“children
should
or
shouldn’t
do
some
chores”
Activity2：Writing
1.
写作思路：
1)
本文为写自己对“青少年是否应该帮忙做家务”的看法，故应为议论文。
2)
因此，人称为第一人称；时态应用一般现在时态。
3)
首先，应开门见山地描述“青少年做家务”这一社会现象。
4)
然后，明确表明自己的看法，是支持还是不支持。
5)
接下来再用表格中所给的句型结构，一一列举自己的想法或原因。
2.
写作指导：（课文3b）
1）信头：发信人地址和日期。这部分中可省去发信人地址，但一般要写日期。放在信纸的右上方。
2）称呼：对收信人的尊称。最普通的是Dear，但与Mr，Mrs，Miss等不同的是：Dear后
一般用名字，而Mr，Mrs，Miss后不能单独用名字，而只能是姓或姓与名，比如：对John
Smith的称呼，应该是Mr
Smith，Mr
John
Smith或
Dear
John.称呼后面可用逗号或者冒号。
3）信的正文。
4）结尾：发信人对收信人的谦称或敬语。放在信的右下方。
这部分要特别注意英语习惯，不可根据汉语意思写上诸如“此致敬礼”、“祝您健康”之类的中国式的结尾语。常用的英语书信结尾语如下：
写给同龄人或年长的朋友：Yours
sincerely，Sincerely
yours，Yours等等。
写给好朋友：Love，With
love，Best
wishes等等。
写给亲戚：Love，With
love，Affectionately
yours，Your（ever）loving
son（sister等等）。
5）签名：签名一般在结尾语的下面一行。
3.此类话题写作常用的表达有：
I
think/believe
that
...
I
agree/disagree
that...
I
think
it
is
fair/unfair
for
children
to
...
In
my
opinion,
children
should/
should
not
...because...
For
example,
...
4.范文：
Dear
Sir,
I
believe
that
children
should
do
some
chores
at
home.
Firstly,
many
parents
work
all
the
day
and
they
must
be
very
tired.
If
children
help
them
with
the
housework,
they'll
feel
quite
happy
and
pleased.
On
the
other
hand,
doing
housework
not
only
trains
kids’
abilities,
but
also
helps
kids
make
a
sense
of
responsibility(责任感).
They
will
realize
they’re
members
of
their
family
through
housework,
then
to
realize
they're
parts
of
the
society.
So
I
think
it
is
necessary
for
children
to
do
some
housework.
Yours,
Jack
Activity3：Writing
Practice
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