人教版（2019）高中英语选择性必修2课件： Unit3 Food and Culture Writing （15张）

Food and Culture
Unit 3　
Period Five　
Writing—A descriptive essay about one’s diet
内容索引
　　本单元的写作目标是写一篇描述性文章。描述性文章就是把人物、事件、景观或环境等用生动的语言描绘出来。这类文章的开头应对所描述的人物、事件、地点、环境等有一个简明的介绍，语言需精炼，浅尝辄止，不能过度发挥。主体部分是文章最重要的一部分，主要是分析问题，或是对如何解决该问题进行描述，有时题目已给出，按要求适当拓展即可。如没有，则需认真思考，并注意所提出方案的可行性、逻辑性。可按时间或事件的主次进行描述。最后对文章进行总结，如对未来进行展望应该积极向上。无论是描述人物、事件还是地点、环境，都要详略得当，重点突出。
技 法 点 拨
文体分析 把握写作动脉
写作指导
1.In recent days/Recently/Nowadays，we have to face the problem that...，which is becoming more and more serious.
2.Overall，I think I have healthy eating habits.
3.As for the things that I am doing...
4.Many reasons/factors will contribute to the phenomenon.First/Firstly，...；Second/Secondly，...
5.The reason of the phenomenon lies in several aspects.
常用表达
6.When talking about how to solve this problem，different people have different ideas.As far as I am concerned，we should...
7.Still，I should improve my eating habits by...
8.All in all/In short/conclusion/a word/As is said/stated above，I believe...
返 回
　　假如你是李华，你的朋友王力目前正因体重暴增而苦恼不已，来信向你咨询关于健康饮食的问题。请你给他写一封回信，介绍一下你的饮食习惯。内容包括：
　　1.很少吃甜食，基本不喝甜饮料；
　　2.饮食中蔬菜、水果居多，有少量肉、蛋和奶制品；
　　3.一日三餐有规律。
注意：
　　1.词数80左右；
　　2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
　　3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
写 作 训 练
弄清文络 写作妙笔生花
审题
1.确定文体：这是一篇应用文，向朋友描述自己的饮食习惯。
2.主体时态：以一般现在时为主。
3.主体人称：人称应该以第一人称为主。
审题谋篇
谋篇
第一段：应开门见山，引入话题。
第二段：阐述理由，给出建议。
第三段：总结全文，发出希望。
核心词汇
1.体重增加 ________________
2.和……有关 ________________
3.无论；不管 ____________
4.有助于 ___________
5.奶制品 ______________
gain/put on weight
be associated with
regardless of
contribute to
dairy products
遣词造句
连词成句
1.我认为你不健康的饮食与你的问题密切相关。
I think your unhealthy diet is .
2.首先，我每天在同一时间吃三顿饭，即使在假期也是如此。
Firstly，I take three meals a day at the same time each day， .
3.最重要的是，我的饮食中含有大量的水果和蔬菜，它们可以为我提供必要的维生素。
Most fundamentally，my diet contains __________________________________，and they can necessary vitamins.
4.这样，你的体重问题很快就能解决了。
In this way, your weight problem .
closely associated with your problem
regardless of holidays
quantities of fruit and green vegetables
supply/provide me with
can be solved soon
句式升级
1.把句3改为非限制性定语从句。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.用only引导的倒装句改写句4。
__________________________________________________
Most fundamentally，my diet contains quantities of fruit and green vegetables，which can supply/provide me with necessary vitamins.
Only in this way can your weight problem be solved soon.
　　用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Dear Wang Li，
　　I am sorry to hear that you have been gaining/putting on weight recently and you are upset about it. __________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
　　 I think your unhealthy diet is closely
associated with your problem.
组句成篇
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
返 回
　　As for me，I have a healthy diet.Firstly，I take three meals a day at the same time each day，regardless of holidays.Secondly，I rarely consume sweet foods or sweet drinks.Most fundamentally，my diet contains quantities of fruit and green vegetables，which can supply/provide me with necessary vitamins.Besides，modest amount of meat and dairy products are also included in it.
　　I hope you will have a healthy diet in the future，too.Only in this way can your weight problem be solved soon.
Thanks