Unit 5
First Aid
Period Five
Writing—A narrative essay about providing first aid
内容索引
本单元的写作任务是写与急救有关的叙事类文章。此类作文通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言来叙述事件。写作时需要把握好记叙文的六个要素,即时间(when)、地点(where)、事件(what)、人物(who)、原因(why)和方式(how)。
基本结构:
1.开头——交代事情发生的背景。
2.主体——叙述事件的发生、经过和结果。
3.结尾——发表感想或是表达愿望。
技 法 点 拨
文体分析 把握写作动脉
写作指导
1.Long long ago,there was a...
2.Once upon a time,there lived a...
3.One day,a woman woke up early...
4.On a dark,rainy night...
5.On Christmas Day...
6.In the end,they found that...
7.At last,the boy finished the...
8.Fortunately,all the people...
9.In a word,we can learn from the story that...
10.As the saying goes...
常用表达
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假定你是李华,请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.上周日我和同学王平去看电影,在去电影院的路上看到一位老人躺在地上。
2.我坐在老人身边照看着他,王平打电话叫了救护车。
3.我们和老人一起去了医院,等老人的儿子来了我们才离开。
4.我们错过了电影,但是一点也不后悔,我们为自己做的事感到自豪。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写 作 训 练
弄清文络 写作妙笔生花
审题
写作要求是写一个真实的故事。写作时应注意下面几点:
1.确定文体:这是一篇记叙文,写作时应注意记叙文的常规格式。
2.主体时态:文章应以一般过去时为主。
3.主体人称:由于是写发生在自己身上的故事,所以人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。
谋篇
开头:交代故事发生的背景;
主体:叙述故事的过程;
结尾:表达感想。
审题谋篇
核心词汇
1.在去……的路上 _________________
2.走近些 __________
3.照顾 ___________
4.给……做手术 ___________
5.为……感到自豪 ___________
on one’s way to...
walk closer
take care of
operate on...
遣词造句
be proud of
连词成句
1.上周日我和同学王平去看电影。
Last Sunday my classmate Wang Ping and I .
2.电影的名字是《流浪的地球》。
The film The Wandering Earth.
3.在去电影院的路上,我们看到了一位老人。
,we saw an old man.
4.老人正躺在地上。
The old man .
went to see a film
is named
On our way to the cinema
was lying on the ground
5.我们走近了一些。
6.我们发现他伤得很重。
We found .
We walked closer.
that he was badly injured
句式升级
1.请用过去分词短语作定语合并句1和句2。
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2.请把句3和句4按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。
(1) (宾语从句)
(2) (see+宾语+宾补)
Last Sunday my classmate Wang Ping and I went to see a film named The Wandering Earth.
On our way to the cinema,we saw that an old man was lying on the ground.
On our way to the cinema,we saw an old man lying on the ground
3.请把句5和句6按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。
(1) (when引导时间状语从句)
(2) (现在分词短语作状语)
When we walked closer,we found that he was badly injured.
Walking closer,we found that he was badly injured.
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Last Sunday my classmate Wang Ping and I went to see a film named The Wandering Earth.On our way to the cinema,we saw an old man lying on the ground.Walking closer,we found that he was badly injured.So I sat there to take care of the old man and Wang Ping called the ambulance.After a while the ambulance arrived and we went to the hospital with the old man.The doctors operated on the old man at once.We didn’t leave until the old man’s son arrived.We missed the film,but we didn’t regret.Instead,we were proud of what we had done.
组句成篇
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Thanks