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Section
B
3a-Self
Check
人教新目标九年级全册
写作课公开课
Learning
goals
学生能够运用定语从句和宾语从句等
重点句型组织语言进行写作。
通过写作训练，掌握写提纲或列框架
的技巧，提高记叙文写作能力。
学会懂得珍惜时间，追求美好未来，
并且要感恩帮助过自己的人。
I
remember
…
…
My
teacher
praised
me
I
argued
with
my
best
friend.
My
classmate
fooled
me
Someone
helped
me
without
telling
me
his
name.
Think
of
a
person
or
an
event
from
junior
high
school
that
you
will
never
forget.
Make
some
notes
about
how
this
person
or
event
changed
your
life
in
some
way.
3a
Who
is
the
person?/What
is
the
event?
When
and
where
did
you
first
meet
this
person?
/
When
and
where
did
this
event
happen?
How
did
you
feel
when
you
met
this
person?/How
did
you
feel
when
this
event
happened?
How
did
this
person
help
you?/What
happened
later?
How
has
this
person’s
advice/event
changed
your
life?
An
event
What
when
where
What
happened
later?
How
did
you
feel?
How
have
your
life
changed?
A
person
Who
Appearance
Characters
Hobbies
How
did
he\she
help
you?
Feelings
(wishes)
·Describe
the
person/event.
·Explain
how
you
feel
about
this
person/event.
·Describe
how
this
person/event
has
changed
your
life.
Write
a
passage
about
the
person
or
event
you
thought
about
in
3a.
3b
写一个难忘的人
方法：
1.
对人物的出场、肖像进行描写。简要介绍该人物。
2.
选择一个角度，通过对某些事情的叙述，更加生动地描写人物，描写该人物如何对你产生了影响。
3.
总结自己对人物的评价、情感等。
描绘人物外貌词汇：
good-looking
pretty
lovely
slim
overweight
middle-aged
fit
wear
glasses
always
smile
描绘人物性格词汇：
brave
self-confident
warm-hearted
patient
easy-going
outgoing
energetic
forgetful
generous
hardworking
helpful
humorous
optimistic
punctual
talented
good-tempered
straightforward
considerate
honest
记一件难忘的事
方法：
1.
交代清楚时间、地点和人物，一般用过去式。
2.
详细描述事情发生的经过和结果。
3.
发表对此事的看法和感受。
1.
写中学生活中的难忘的人/事。
2.
事件要有五要素：when,
where,
who,
what,
how,
why
3.
最后阐述这件事对自己所产生的影响。
1.
I
once
had
an
experience…
2.
It
was
the
most
unforgettable
experience
that
has
ever
happened
in
my
life.
3.
The
most
unforgettable
experience
in
my
memory
was
one
day
my
classmates
and
I
went
to
the
park.
4.
I
will
never
forget
the
military
training.
5.
There
are
a
lot
of
memories
in
my
heart
that
I
can’t
forget.
When
I
was
…
years
old,
I
....
各式开头：
6.
As
we
all
know,
everyone
has
something
special
in
his
life.
I
think
I
will
never
forget
…
because
on
that
day
…
7.
I
think
my
junior
high
was
wonderful,
because
it
taught
me
to
be
…
8.
Whenever
I
open
the
book
full
of
photos,
I
always
look
back
when
I
…
9.
I
still
remember
the
most
valuable
time
that
I
have
ever
had.
10.
Everyone
has
a
different
junior
high.
It
may
be
wonderful,
exciting
or
hard.
I
have
a
…junior
high.
I
think
this
is
the
most
unforgettable
experience
in
my
memory.
2.On
that
day,
I
began
to
feel
that
I
have
the
duty
for
my
life.
And
I
must
be
stronger.
3.
I
felt
that
I
was
growing
up,
and
I
should
be
responsible
for
myself.
4.How
exciting
and
unforgettable
the
experience
was!
你的感受：
5.
It’s
really
an
important
day
to
me
and
I’ll
learn
to
be…all
the
time.
6.Junior
high
is
a
precious
memory
without
pressure,
competition
and
lots
of
homework.
7.
From
this
experience,
I
learnt
that
I
should
be
careful.
If
I
am
careless,
I
will
lose
a
lot
of
chances.
Write
a
passage
about
the
person
or
event
you
thought
about
in
3a.
Describe
the
person/event.
Explain
how
you
feel
about
this
person
/
event.
Describe
how
this
person
/
event
has
changed
your
life.
3b
三年的初中生活即将结束，当中一定有些人、有些事让你记忆深刻。请你用英语向大家介绍你难忘的一个人。
内容包括：
1.
这个令你难忘的人是谁？
2.
他\她做了什么事令你记忆深刻？
3.
阐述他\她对你的影响。
要求：
1.
必须包括以上的内容提示，可适当发挥；
2.
语句连贯，词数80个左右。
Structurize
(列一列)
以“An
Unforgettable
person
in
My
Life”为题
交代这个令你难忘的人是谁。
描述他\她做的事情。
阐述他\她对你的影响。
Beginning
Body
Ending
Write
(写一写)
Check
(查一查)
篇章方面
内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理
句子方面
句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；连词使用
用词方面
代词主格，宾格；名词单复数；动词搭配；副词位置
细节方面
单词拼写；标点符号；大小写
The
one
person
from
my
junior
school
days
that
I
will
never
forget
is
Miss
Chen,
my
English
teacher
in
Grade
7.
On
the
one
hand,
when
I
was
new
in
Grade
7,
I
was
too
shy
to
speak
to
anyone.
On
the
other
hand,
my
English
wasn’t
good
so
I
felt
nervous
when
I
had
to
answer
questions
in
class.
I
had
trouble
speaking
even
if
I
knew
the
answer.
I
felt
quite
upset.
One
day
Miss
Chen
talked
to
me
after
class.
She
encouraged
me
to
speak
slowly.
What’s
more,
she
said,
”I
believe
if
you
practice
more,
you
will
speak
well.”
I
was
touched
by
her
words
and
began
to
work
harder
on
my
speaking
skills.
Miss
Chen
encourage
me
all
the
time
and
I
became
more
confident.
I
improved
so
much
that
I
won
an
English
speech
contest
that
year.
I
will
always
be
thankful
to
Miss
Chen.
文章开头开门见山点题，真实事例，流露真情实感，颇具感染力，容易打动读者。
巧用连词on
the
one
hand
…on
the
other
hand,
too
…to,
even
if,
what’s
more,让文章富有整体性。
文章写出来老师对学生的爱，以及作者
对老师的感激之情，字里行间无不渗透浓浓的师
生之情，给人温暖的感觉，
When
I
was
in
Grade
8,
one
of
my
classmates
sat
beside
me.
His
name
is
Kevin.
At
that
time,
I
found
math
was
hard
to
learn
and
often
failed
the
math
tests.
But
Kevin
did
well
in
working
on
math
problems
and
he
often
got
good
grades.
I
wished
I
could
be
good
at
math
as
well
as
him.
So
when
I
met
the
difficult
problems,
I
asked
him
for
help.
He
was
always
so
patient
to
answer
my
questions
and
teach
me
the
ways
to
work
on
the
problems.
Gradually,
I
built
my
confidence
and
had
an
interest
in
math.
With
his
help,
I
made
great
progress
in
math.
At
last,
I
passed
the
math
exam
in
the
final
exam.
We
Were
both
happy.
I
was
really
grateful
to
him.
A
faithful
friend
is
hard
to
find.
I
think
Kevin
is
the
Most
unforgettable
person
in
my
junior
school.
上下文衔接紧密，过渡自然，
文章立意积极向上，满满的正能量。
选取生活中的事例，来源于作者平时的积累，真情流露，容易引起读者共鸣。生动描写，令Kevin的形象立现与纸上，栩栩如生。
文章使用了大量的词组短语，令文章语言丰富，体现作者丰富的词汇量。When,
at
that
time,
but,
so,
gradually,
at
last等词的使用，让事情的脉络清晰。用词准确，语句精炼。
谚语的使用，起了画龙点睛
的作用，也再次点题。
记叙文
五要素
who
when
where
what
why\how
Every
person
you
met,
every
thing
you
did
makes
a
part
of
you
now.
No
matter
happy
or
sad,
you
should
thank
the
person
and
event
that
help
you
grow
up.
感恩过去，感恩亲友，感恩师长…
…
graduate
from
….
yesterday
is
history
tomorrow
is
a
mystery
today
is
a
gift
！
1.What
happened
in
junior
high
that
made
you
have
these
feelings?
Complete
the
chart.
Feelings
Memories/
Experiences
excited
happy
worried
Our
class
won
the
first
prize
in
the
the
sports
meeting.
I
was
happy
when
pur
math
teacher
praised
me.
I
didn’t
finish
my
homework
and
my
teachers
were
strict.
sad
tired
proud
shy
When
I
had
a
fight
with
my
best
friend
and
we
didn’t
talk
to
each
other
for
a
week.
I
was
tired
after
staying
up
late
at
night
to
study.
I
got
first
in
the
final
examination.
I
felt
shy
on
the
first
day
of
Grade
7
and
did
not
dare
to
talk
to
anyone.
2.
Fill
in
the
blanks
with
the
correct
forms
of
the
words
in
brackets.
I
can’t
_______(believe)
that
today
is
the
last
day
of
junior
high
school.
I
still__________
(remember)
the
first
day
of
Grade
7
like
it
was
yesterday.
I
used
to
_____
(be)
a
really
shy
person,
so
on
the
first
day
of
junior
high,
I
________
(be)
so
scared
and
nervous.
I
________
(think)
that
I
would
never
believe
remember
be
was
thought
make
any
friends.
But
now,
I_______
(realize)
that
I
was
just
being
silly.
Since
then,
I___________
(make)
so
many
good
friends
and
I
__________
(share)
so
many
good
memories
with
them.
Even
though
I_____
(be)
sad
that
junior
high
is
over,
I____________
(look)
forward
to
new
experiences
in
senior
high!
realize
have
made
have
shared
am
am
looking
1.
Review
the
whole
unit.
2.
Finish
your
writing
about
your
school
life.
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Unit14
Section
B
3a-Self
Check同步练习
I.用括号中所给单词的适当形式填空
1.Hi,
everyone,
let's
work
hard!
The
future
is
________
(we)．
2.Many
of
us
are
looking
forward
to
________(have)
a
summer
study
trip
this
year.
3.This
bike
is
not
________(me).
I
saw
John
ride
it
once.
I
think
it
must
be
________(he)．
4.Jim
has
never
________
(be)
to
Mount
Tai
in
China.
5.Mr.
Brown
says
that
he________(deal)
with
all
the
problems
next
week.
II.完成句子，每空一词=
6.
不要把房间弄乱了。出去玩吧！
Don't
________
_________
________
in
the
room.
Go
out
and
play！(make)
7.
作为父母，他们应该对自己的孩子负责。
As
parents，they
are
supposed
to
________
_________
________
their
children.(responsible)
8.
老师告诉我们考试前要保持冷静。
Our
teachers
told
us
to
________
_________
________
before
the
exams.(keep)
9.
当你回首岁月，你会发现你和家人相处的时光是最好的。
When
you
________
_________
________
those
past
years,
you'll
find
the
time
you
spent
with
your
family
was
the
best.(look)
10.
绝不能强行使任何一个孩子与母亲分开。
No
child
should________
_________
________
his
mother
by
force.(separate)
III.
完形填空
When
I
was
in
my
first
year
of
middle
school,
my
father
died.
And
my
mother
was
ill
just
after
I
started
high
school.
I
had
to
stop
11
school
because
my
mother
had
no
money
to
pay
my
school
bills.
We
started
working
in
people's
gardens
to
save
up
enough
money
for
me
to
go
back
to
school.
12
，
I
returned
to
school.
Unluckily,
my
mother
died
the
next
year.
Suddenly,
my
world
went
dark.
I
asked
my
headmaster
if
I
could
work
for
the
school
so
I
could
pay
my
bills.
He
was
a
nice
man
and
let
me
13
in
the
school
garden
during
the
14
.
I
had
not
been
able
to
study
well
because
of
my
mother's
15
.
At
the
end
of
my
second
year,
I
16
most
of
my
exams
and
was
told
I
would
have
to
repeat
the
year.
After
another
summer
working
in
the
school
garden,
I
went
back
to
lessons
again.
But
suddenly
I
fell
17
．
Because
of
my
disease,
I
was
weak
and
couldn't
work
at
school.
I
was
hopeless.
My
headmaster
told
me
not
to
18
.
And
my
teachers
and
classmates
helped
me
a
lot.
Now,
I'm
feeling
better
and
will
finish
my
third
year.
My
life
is
still
not
19
.
A
few
students
20
my
poor
clothes.
They
also
call
me
“farmer”
because
I
work
in
the
school
garden.
But
I
know
I
have
to
deal
with(解决)
such
problems.
(
)11.A.to
go
to
B．going
to
C．living
in
D．visiting
the
(
)12.A.Certainly B．Probably
C．Finally
D．Usually
(
)13.A.work
B．to
work
C．working
D．worked
(
)14.A.afternoon
B．morning
C．night
D．holidays
(
)15.A.disease
B．death
C．rest
D．work
(
)16.A.passed
B．went
through
C．failed
D．had
(
)17.A.tired
B．ill
C．down
D．asleep
(
)18.A.give
up
B．give
out
C．go
on
D．give
away
(
)19.A.the
same
B．hard
C．difficult
D．easy
(
)20.A.laugh
at
B．like
C．put
on
D．laugh
IV.
阅读理解
Ladies
and
gentlemen，
Thanks
for
attending
the
graduation
ceremony
at
our
school.
Firstly,
I'd
like
to
congratulate
all
the
students
here
today.
I
remember
meeting
all
of
you
when
you
were
just
starting
Grade
7.You
were
all
so
full
of
energy
and
thirsty
for
knowledge.
And
yes,
some
of
you
were
a
little
difficult
to
deal
with！But
today
I
see
a
hall
full
of
talented
young
adults
who
are
full
of
hope
for
the
future.
You've
all
grown
up
so
much
and
I'm
so
proud
of
you.
Although
you've
all
worked
very
hard
over
the
last
three
years,
none
of
you
did
it
alone.
I
hope
you'll
remember
the
important
people
in
your
lives
who
helped
and
supported
you—your
parents,
teachers
and
friends.
Please
consider
what
they've
done
for
you
and
what
they
mean
to
you.
Never
forget
to
thank
the
people
around
you.
Lastly,
I'll
give
you
some
advice
on
how
to
deal
with
your
future.
The
life
in
senior
high
school
will
be
harder
and
you
have
many
difficult
tasks
ahead
of
you.
You'll
make
mistakes
along
the
way,
but
the
key
is
to
learn
from
your
mistakes
and
never
give
up.
But
along
with
difficulties,
many
exciting
things
are
also
waiting
for
you.
Behind
each
door
you
open
are
chances
to
learn
new
things
and
you're
able
to
make
your
own
choices.
Choose
wisely
and
be
responsible
for
your
decisions
and
actions.
Although
you
have
to
go
your
own
ways,
I
hope
you'll
come
back
to
visit
our
school
in
a
few
years.
As
you
set
out
on
your
new
journey,
you
shouldn't
forget
where
you
came
from.
The
future
is
yours.
Good
luck!
(
)21.Who
do
you
think
wrote
it?
A．A
headmaster.
B．A
parent.
C．A
student.
D．A
friend.
(
)22.Where
was
the
graduation
ceremony
held?
A．In
the
classroom.
B．In
the
hall.
C．On
the
playground.
D．In
the
library.
(
)23.What
were
the
students
like
in
Grade
7?
A．They
were
proud
of
themselves.
B．They
were
talented
young
adults.
C．They
were
too
difficult
to
deal
with.
D．They
were
energetic
and
thirsty
for
knowledge.
(
)24.What's
the
main
idea
of
the
last
paragraph?
A．How
to
deal
with
the
future.
B．Senior
high
school
will
be
harder.
C．Don't
forget
where
they
came
from.
D．There'll
be
more
chances
to
learn
new
things.
(
)25.What's
life
in
senior
high
school
will
be?
A．Students
will
have
a
lot
of
homework.
B．Life
will
be
harder
and
students
will
have
many
difficult
tasks.
C．Much
easier
than
before.
D．Students
won't
make
mistakes.
V.
书面表达
假如你是李华，将作为优秀毕业生代表在学校即将举行的毕业典礼上发言。请根据下列要点提示，写一篇80词左右的英语发言稿。
内容包括：1.三年的学习和收获；
2．感谢老师的培养、父母的支持和同学的帮助；
3．真诚的祝愿。
Hello，everyone.
My
name
is
Li
Hua.
It's
a
great
honor
for
me
to
speak
here．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks
for
listening!
Unit14SectionB3a-Self
Check同步练习参考答案
I.1.ours 2.having 3.mine;
his
4．been 5.will
deal/is
going
to
deal
II.6.make
a
mess
7．
be
responsible
for
8．
keep
our
cool
9．look
back
at
10．be
separated
from
III.11-15BCADB
16-20
CBADA
IV.
21-25
ABDAB
V.
Hello，everyone.
My
name
is
Li
Hua.
It's
a
great
honor
for
me
to
speak
here．Over
the
past
three
years，I
have
learned
a
lot
thanks
to
all
my
teachers，my
parents
and
my
classmates.
Now
let
me
first
say
thank
you
to
all
my
teachers.
You
not
only
teach
me
how
to
learn
but
also
how
to
behave
well.
What's
more，I'm
also
thankful
to
my
parents
for
their
support
and
what
they've
done
for
me.
Lastly，I'd
like
to
express
my
thanks
to
my
classmates.
You
have
helped
me
out
in
your
way.
Now
we
are
setting
out
on
our
new
journey.
I
sincerely
wish
all
of
you
happiness
and
great
success
in
the
future.
Thanks
for
listening!
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