江苏省2020-2021学年高二下学期3月期初英语试题精选汇编：读后续写专题 Word版含解析
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读后续写专题
江苏省如皋市2020-2021学年高二下学期期初调研测试英语试题
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
The story between Mr. Jordan and me was the most amazing story I wanted to share. Mr. Jordan was one of the teachers who I would never forget.
When I was young at school, I loved talking, a characteristic not always appreciated by Mr. Jordan, my 10－grade English teacher.
Mr. Jordan was a teacher whom no one liked because he was too strict. He stood about 5－foot－five, was very thin and wore his hair pulled back in a way that gave him a horsy look. He wore those half－circular reading glasses. Whenever he got upset, he would lower his head and look at you over the top of his glasses.
One day in his class I was busy talking. I didn’t realize he had stopped teaching and staring straight at me. “Sam, I would like to see you after school.”
Later Mr. Jordan explained in a low, but very firm voice that showed he expected me to listen when he was talking. For punishment he told me to write a thousand－word essay on education and its effect on the society. He wanted it in by the following Wednesday.
Well, I met my deadline. I was confident. It was a good paper. And I expected a sign of approval from him. The next day in class, however, he was looking at me over his glasses. He called me forward and returned my paper. “Go back and rewrite，” he said. “Remember, each paragraph is supported to begin with a topic sentence.” When he gave my paper back a second time, he corrected the grammar. The third time, the spelling. The fourth time, it was punctuation. The fifth, it wasn’t neat enough. I was sick!
The sixth time, I rewrote the whole paper slowly in ink, leaving generous space. When he saw it, he removed his glasses and smiled. He firmly accepted the paper. After that, I put the whole thing out of my mind.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
Paragraph 1:
One day after two weeks, Mr. Jordan came into the class and said，
Paragraph 2:
I was amazed, thrilled and grateful.
读后续写
One day after two weeks, Mr. Jordan came into the class and said，“Class, do you still remember the essay contest held in our school？They’ve announced the winners.I am so glad to inform you that Sam has won the first prize in the essay contest with the title ‘Education and Its Effect on the Society’.” Then thunderous applause rocked the classroom.After class, many classmates asked me how I made it.Without excellent writing skills, I well remembered that I told them it was all about six－times rewriting urged by Mr.Jordan.
I was amazed, thrilled and grateful. It was the first time I had ever won a prize.Years later, I told many people that story, and my comments, including my unfriendly description of Mr.Jordan’s appearance.Unexpectedly, Mr.Jordan wrote to me, and said that his look wasn’t important.What was important was the lesson I had learnt.When I wrote and rewrote that paper for him, I began to learn how to discipline myself.I was grateful for the lesson he had taught me.
江苏省泰州中学2020-2021学年高二下学期期初检测英语试题
第三节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard to make our needs meet.
One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.
On impulse（冲动）I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name, I found it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.
"Yes, "she said in surprise, with extreme excitement." It was my umbrella which had been stolen B year ago.”
So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house. She took the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead, Her happiness at retrieving（找回）this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.
The following months were hard. 1 can only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no answer but this coldness and darkness.
The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.
Thinking of this, I couldn't control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile so could greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen, overwhelmed by misery.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.
. .
. .
. .
. .
. .
Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.
. .
. .
. .
. .
第三节读后续写（满分25分） Paragraph 1:
Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. Then I heard man talking heartily to her and went to the door, He was a delivery man, and his arms were full of parcels. "This is a mistake," I said, but he read the name on the parcels and they were for me. When he had gone, I didn't know what to do, Later, Peggy and I sat on the floor, looking at each other. What a surprise! I looked for the name of the sender.
Paragraph 2:
Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes. 1 picked up the note, which read "Thanks for returning of the umbrella. Merry Christmas! ""It was sent by the lady. Holding the note tightly, 1 was on the verge of tears, with a stream of warmth spreading through my body. On
that cold Christmas, I forgot I had no money for the rent and only fifteen dollars in my pocket. We just satin our small apartment unwrapping the gifts one by one in happiness, A sweet peace flooded me like a blessing which made me hopeful again.
江苏省扬州中学2020-2021学年高二下学期开学考试英语试题
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My best friend's mother was a social worker in Detroit, Michigan. Because of that, my friend Victoria and I were introduced early to the world of volunteering.
We did plenty of charity(慈善) work. We always had a good time, and continued to volunteer whenever we had time, often even when we didn't. It became second nature. Hairstyles came and went, but Victoria and I found places to donate our time because that's how we were raised.
One particular morning we signed up for "Paint the Town",an organization in Detroit to help low?income homeowners clean their houses. We were assigned(分配) a dilapidated(破烂的) house in one of the worst communities of the city. I was afraid as we got near to the front door, not knowing who we would find on the other side. We knocked three times quickly and stepped back, waiting to be let in.
When the door opened, my mouth did, too. Standing there was a little old lady with wisps(一束) of white hair and a purple apron(围裙) tied around her waist.
"Hello" she said, "I'm Amelia. Please come in and I will show you where to start."Her smile shone brightly. “I am just baking some cookies for you girls to eat.”
As she led us to the parts of her house that needed painting, my heart softened. Here was one of the scariest? looking houses in the city, but behind its doors was a sweet old lady with a cane and a big smile.
Here we were coming to help her, and instead she was doing something for us—baking homemade cookies and serving us tea!
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house.
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“Nonsense！” she criticized(批评).
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________读后续写
One possible version:
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house. Amelia stayed close by, talking to us as we painted, telling us about her native Ireland and how she came to Detroit. I felt so sad for her living in such a poor part of the neighborhood with no one to keep her company. When I told her so, she laughed at me.
“Nonsense！” she criticized( 批评). “This is my house even if it is falling down around me. I feel blessed that you girls came to help fix it up. I'm happy here. I've watched the neighborhood change, and seen people come and go, but I always stay. We may all be different on the outside, but on the inside, we are all just after the same thing—community. Keep it up. Nothing will make you happier than helping other people.”What she said to me replayed itself as I volunteered in different parts of the town.
江苏房山高级中学2020-2021学年高二下学期英语开学摸底考试
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
??? Jenny was a bright-eyed, pretty five-year-old girl. One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace which was priced at $2.50. How she wanted that necklace, and when she asked her mother if she would buy it for her, her mother said, "Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I'll tell you what. I'll buy you the necklace, and when we get home we can make up a list of chores that you can do to pay for the necklace. And don't forget that for your birthday grandma just might give you a whole dollar bill, too. Okay?" Jenny agreed happily, and her mother bought the pearl necklace for her.
??? Jenny worked on her chores very hard every day, and sure enough, her grandma gave her a brand-new dollar bill for her birthday. Soon Jenny had paid off the pearls. How Jenny loved those pearls! She wore them everywhere to kindergarten, bed and even when she went out with her mother to run errands.
??? The only time she didn't wear them was in the shower, because her mother had told her that they would turn her neck green!
??? Jenny had a very loving Daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would get up from his favorite chair every night and read Jenny her favorite story.
??? One night when he finished the story, he asked Jenny, "Hey, sweetie, do you love me?"
??? "Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you," the little girl said with a warm smile.
??? "Well, then, give me your pearls."
??? "Oh! Daddy, not my pearls!" Jenny refused. "But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. And you can have her tea party outfit (全套服装), too. Okay?"
??? "Oh no, darling, that's okay." Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss. "Good night, little one."
Paragraph 1:
??? A week later, Jenny's father once again asked Jenny the same question after her story,______________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
??? Another week later, when her father came in to read her a story as usual,________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二节 短文续写
Paragraph 1:
A week later, Jenny's father once again asked Jenny the same question after her story, "Do you love me?" Jenny gave a definite answer to this question without hesitation. But when the conversation came to whether she could give her pearls to her father, she refused a second time.
Paragraph 2:
Another week later; when her father came in to read her a story as usual, Jenny was sitting on her bed and her lip was trembling. "Here, Daddy," she said, and held out her hand. Inside of her hand was her beloved plastic pearl necklace. She let it slip into her father's hand. At this time, her father pulled out of his pocket a blue velvet box, and some real, genuine, beautiful pearls were just inside. He had had them all along. He was waiting for Jenny to give up the cheap stuff so he could give her the real thing. Sometimes, life is just like this: Give up one thing and get another chance to receive a better thing.
江苏省苏州中学2020-2021学年高二下学期期初英语试题
八、读后续写
57．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
A．J. shut the door of the truck. “Ready,” he said. His dad started the truck. It was six o’clock and freezing, but the strong morning sun promised warmer temperatures. It had been colder than normal over the past week, and the ground and ponds were already frozen.
“After we check on the cows,” Dad said, “you should have some time to practice roping cattle.” A．J. wanted to enter the rodeos (牛仔竞技表演) in which cowboys rode wild horses, and caught cattle with ropes.
The best professionals could break from the gate on horseback, rope a calf (小牛), and hog-tie (捆绑) the calf (牛犊) in less than ten seconds. So far, A．J. needed nearly a minute and a half, but he’d only been at it for a few months.
The truck bounced down the dirt road. In a few minutes, they passed through the field gate.
A．J. pulled a pair of telescopes (望远镜). The black spots of cows on the far hill took shape. The cows gathered around the pond. A．J. guessed they wanted the water locked under the ice. Suddenly, they heard extremely frightened shouts from one cow. Dad stopped the truck, and he and A．J. stared at the frozen pond anxiously.
A calf lay on the ice in the middle of the pond. A cow, no doubt the calf’s mother, stood onshore, shouting desperately. The calf struggled to get up but slipped and fell each time.
The morning sun seemed warmer. Too warmer. A．J. knew that the situation was urgent. If the calf lay there too long, she could fall through the ice and drown. Dad eased the truck down the hill and stopped at the edge of the pond. “No telling how long she’s been there,” he said. “The ice could be about to melt. I don’t think we can risk it.” Dad shook his head, “It’s just not safe.”
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 开头已给出。
Paragraph 1:
A．J. watched the calf, whose eyes were wide with fear.
Paragraph 2:
It would be just like rodeo practice, A．J. thought, trying to stay calm.
【答案】Paragraph 1:
A. J. watched the calf, whose eyes were wide with fear. Though frightened, the calf gathered all her strength to get up but slipped over and over again. Seeing the danger, the mother cow let out shouts with horror and cast helpless glances at A. J. and his dad as if begging them for help. An atmosphere of sadness blanketing the whole world, every nerve in A. J.’s body screamed at him that he must save the poor calf. All of a sudden, an idea came into his mind like a flash.
Paragraph 2:
It would be just like rodeo practice, A. J. thought, trying to stay calm. He rushed to the truck to grab the rope quickly, aimed it at the calf and let it go. Luckily, he made it at the first attempt! With palms sweating, he and his dad struggled to pull the calf out of the frozen pond. After what seemed like a century, they managed to save the calf. Seeing the calf running to her mother happily, A. J. felt comforted and glad that what he had learned helped save a life.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，A.J.是一名牛仔竞技表演运动员，他与爸爸在路上遇到了一头被困在冰上的小牛，他们听到母牛发出极其恐惧的叫声，爸爸停下卡车，他和A.J.焦急地凝视着冰冻的池塘。小牛努力挣扎，但每次都滑倒了。早晨的阳光似乎更温暖，会使冰融化，A. J.知道情况很紧急。如果小牛长时间在那里，它可能会跌落在冰水中并淹死。A. J.想要救出小牛，但是爸爸摇摇头说：“冰可能即将融化。我认为我们不能冒险”。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：A.J.看着小牛，它的眼里满是恐惧。接下来可以描述小牛的挣扎和母牛的无助以及他有了挽救小牛的想法。即：小牛尽管受到惊吓，但它却竭尽全力站起来，却又一次又一次地滑倒。看到危险，这头母牛惊恐地大叫，无助地看着A. J.和他的父亲，仿佛在求他们帮助， 悲伤的气氛笼罩着现场。A.J感觉体内的每一条神经都在向他呐喊，他必须拯救那只可怜的小牛。突然，一个念头突然出现在他的脑海中。第二段开头是：A.J.想这就像是一次竞技练习一样，他尽量保持冷静。接下来可以写他如何救了小牛的过程并且最终成功了，要多进行心理和挽救小牛的描写。即：他冲上卡车迅速拿来绳索，用绳子来抓牛。幸运的是，他的第一次尝试成功了！手掌开始流汗，A.J和他的父亲努力地将小牛从冰冻的池塘中拉出。在一番努力之后，他们设法救出了小牛。A. J.看到小牛快乐地奔向母亲，他感到很高兴，因为他所学到的知识帮助挽救了一个生命。续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了固定短语和高级句型。例如：let out，glance at，all of a sudden，aim it，make it，manage to do等固定短语。whose引导的非限制性定语从句A. J. watched the calf, whose eyes were wide with fright.现在分词作状语Seeing the danger, the mother cow let out shouts with horror and cast helpless glances at A. J. and his dad as if begging them for help.过去分词作状语He rushed to the truck to grab the rope quickly, aimed it at the calf and let it go. With的复合结构With palms sweating, he and his dad struggled to pull the calf out of the frozen pond. What引导的宾语从句After what seemed like a century, they managed to save the calf.
江苏省如皋市2020-2021学年高二下学期期初调研测试英语试题
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
The story between Mr. Jordan and me was the most amazing story I wanted to share. Mr. Jordan was one of the teachers who I would never forget.
When I was young at school, I loved talking, a characteristic not always appreciated by Mr. Jordan, my 10－grade English teacher.
Mr. Jordan was a teacher whom no one liked because he was too strict. He stood about 5－foot－five, was very thin and wore his hair pulled back in a way that gave him a horsy look. He wore those half－circular reading glasses. Whenever he got upset, he would lower his head and look at you over the top of his glasses.
One day in his class I was busy talking. I didn’t realize he had stopped teaching and staring straight at me. “Sam, I would like to see you after school.”
Later Mr. Jordan explained in a low, but very firm voice that showed he expected me to listen when he was talking. For punishment he told me to write a thousand－word essay on education and its effect on the society. He wanted it in by the following Wednesday.
Well, I met my deadline. I was confident. It was a good paper. And I expected a sign of approval from him. The next day in class, however, he was looking at me over his glasses. He called me forward and returned my paper. “Go back and rewrite，” he said. “Remember, each paragraph is supported to begin with a topic sentence.” When he gave my paper back a second time, he corrected the grammar. The third time, the spelling. The fourth time, it was punctuation. The fifth, it wasn’t neat enough. I was sick!
The sixth time, I rewrote the whole paper slowly in ink, leaving generous space. When he saw it, he removed his glasses and smiled. He firmly accepted the paper. After that, I put the whole thing out of my mind.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
Paragraph 1:
One day after two weeks, Mr. Jordan came into the class and said，
Paragraph 2:
I was amazed, thrilled and grateful.
读后续写
One day after two weeks, Mr. Jordan came into the class and said，“Class, do you still remember the essay contest held in our school？They’ve announced the winners.I am so glad to inform you that Sam has won the first prize in the essay contest with the title ‘Education and Its Effect on the Society’.” Then thunderous applause rocked the classroom.After class, many classmates asked me how I made it.Without excellent writing skills, I well remembered that I told them it was all about six－times rewriting urged by Mr.Jordan.
I was amazed, thrilled and grateful. It was the first time I had ever won a prize.Years later, I told many people that story, and my comments, including my unfriendly description of Mr.Jordan’s appearance.Unexpectedly, Mr.Jordan wrote to me, and said that his look wasn’t important.What was important was the lesson I had learnt.When I wrote and rewrote that paper for him, I began to learn how to discipline myself.I was grateful for the lesson he had taught me.
江苏省泰州中学2020-2021学年高二下学期期初检测英语试题
第三节读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was a single mother in my 30s who lived down and out with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment, struggling hard to make our needs meet.
One day, I headed to the downtown for an interview. I sat down in the streetcar, and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decorated with gold scrolls, among which there was a name carved.
On impulse（冲动）I determined to find the owner myself. I got off the streetcar in the heavy rain and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. Then I searched a telephone book for the name, I found it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.
"Yes, "she said in surprise, with extreme excitement." It was my umbrella which had been stolen B year ago.”
So appealing was her pleasure that I forgot I was looking for a job and went directly to her small house. She took the umbrella, with teary eyes, explaining with choking voice that the umbrella was given by her parents, now dead, Her happiness at retrieving（找回）this special possession was such that to have accepted her reward would have spoiled something, so I refused her offer and left.
The following months were hard. 1 can only obtain temporary employment, for a small salary. What was worse, I had just lost my last job before Christmas, with only fifteen dollars left. Unless a miracle happened, I would be homeless in January, foodless and jobless. I had prayed steadily for weeks, and there had been no answer but this coldness and darkness.
The air was full of Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shouting in the bitter dusk of the evening. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance whatsoever.
Thinking of this, I couldn't control my tears on my way home, but I managed a smile so could greet my little daughter. She opened the door for me and threw herself in my arms, screaming joyously and demanding desirably for her Christmas gift. There I stood, frozen, overwhelmed by misery.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.
. .
. .
. .
. .
. .
Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes.
. .
. .
. .
. .
第三节读后续写（满分25分） Paragraph 1:
Suddenly, the doorbell rang and Peggy rushed to answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. Then I heard man talking heartily to her and went to the door, He was a delivery man, and his arms were full of parcels. "This is a mistake," I said, but he read the name on the parcels and they were for me. When he had gone, I didn't know what to do, Later, Peggy and I sat on the floor, looking at each other. What a surprise! I looked for the name of the sender.
Paragraph 2:
Suddenly, a note attached to one package caught my eyes. 1 picked up the note, which read "Thanks for returning of the umbrella. Merry Christmas! ""It was sent by the lady. Holding the note tightly, 1 was on the verge of tears, with a stream of warmth spreading through my body. On
that cold Christmas, I forgot I had no money for the rent and only fifteen dollars in my pocket. We just satin our small apartment unwrapping the gifts one by one in happiness, A sweet peace flooded me like a blessing which made me hopeful again.
江苏省扬州中学2020-2021学年高二下学期开学考试英语试题
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My best friend's mother was a social worker in Detroit, Michigan. Because of that, my friend Victoria and I were introduced early to the world of volunteering.
We did plenty of charity(慈善) work. We always had a good time, and continued to volunteer whenever we had time, often even when we didn't. It became second nature. Hairstyles came and went, but Victoria and I found places to donate our time because that's how we were raised.
One particular morning we signed up for "Paint the Town",an organization in Detroit to help low?income homeowners clean their houses. We were assigned(分配) a dilapidated(破烂的) house in one of the worst communities of the city. I was afraid as we got near to the front door, not knowing who we would find on the other side. We knocked three times quickly and stepped back, waiting to be let in.
When the door opened, my mouth did, too. Standing there was a little old lady with wisps(一束) of white hair and a purple apron(围裙) tied around her waist.
"Hello" she said, "I'm Amelia. Please come in and I will show you where to start."Her smile shone brightly. “I am just baking some cookies for you girls to eat.”
As she led us to the parts of her house that needed painting, my heart softened. Here was one of the scariest? looking houses in the city, but behind its doors was a sweet old lady with a cane and a big smile.
Here we were coming to help her, and instead she was doing something for us—baking homemade cookies and serving us tea!
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
“Nonsense！” she criticized(批评).
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________读后续写
One possible version:
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house. Amelia stayed close by, talking to us as we painted, telling us about her native Ireland and how she came to Detroit. I felt so sad for her living in such a poor part of the neighborhood with no one to keep her company. When I told her so, she laughed at me.
“Nonsense！” she criticized( 批评). “This is my house even if it is falling down around me. I feel blessed that you girls came to help fix it up. I'm happy here. I've watched the neighborhood change, and seen people come and go, but I always stay. We may all be different on the outside, but on the inside, we are all just after the same thing—community. Keep it up. Nothing will make you happier than helping other people.”What she said to me replayed itself as I volunteered in different parts of the town.
江苏房山高级中学2020-2021学年高二下学期英语开学摸底考试
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
??? Jenny was a bright-eyed, pretty five-year-old girl. One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace which was priced at $2.50. How she wanted that necklace, and when she asked her mother if she would buy it for her, her mother said, "Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I'll tell you what. I'll buy you the necklace, and when we get home we can make up a list of chores that you can do to pay for the necklace. And don't forget that for your birthday grandma just might give you a whole dollar bill, too. Okay?" Jenny agreed happily, and her mother bought the pearl necklace for her.
??? Jenny worked on her chores very hard every day, and sure enough, her grandma gave her a brand-new dollar bill for her birthday. Soon Jenny had paid off the pearls. How Jenny loved those pearls! She wore them everywhere to kindergarten, bed and even when she went out with her mother to run errands.
??? The only time she didn't wear them was in the shower, because her mother had told her that they would turn her neck green!
??? Jenny had a very loving Daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would get up from his favorite chair every night and read Jenny her favorite story.
??? One night when he finished the story, he asked Jenny, "Hey, sweetie, do you love me?"
??? "Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you," the little girl said with a warm smile.
??? "Well, then, give me your pearls."
??? "Oh! Daddy, not my pearls!" Jenny refused. "But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. And you can have her tea party outfit (全套服装), too. Okay?"
??? "Oh no, darling, that's okay." Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss. "Good night, little one."
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??? A week later, Jenny's father once again asked Jenny the same question after her story,______________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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??? Another week later, when her father came in to read her a story as usual,________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二节 短文续写
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A week later, Jenny's father once again asked Jenny the same question after her story, "Do you love me?" Jenny gave a definite answer to this question without hesitation. But when the conversation came to whether she could give her pearls to her father, she refused a second time.
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Another week later; when her father came in to read her a story as usual, Jenny was sitting on her bed and her lip was trembling. "Here, Daddy," she said, and held out her hand. Inside of her hand was her beloved plastic pearl necklace. She let it slip into her father's hand. At this time, her father pulled out of his pocket a blue velvet box, and some real, genuine, beautiful pearls were just inside. He had had them all along. He was waiting for Jenny to give up the cheap stuff so he could give her the real thing. Sometimes, life is just like this: Give up one thing and get another chance to receive a better thing.
江苏省苏州中学2020-2021学年高二下学期期初英语试题
八、读后续写
57．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
A．J. shut the door of the truck. “Ready,” he said. His dad started the truck. It was six o’clock and freezing, but the strong morning sun promised warmer temperatures. It had been colder than normal over the past week, and the ground and ponds were already frozen.
“After we check on the cows,” Dad said, “you should have some time to practice roping cattle.” A．J. wanted to enter the rodeos (牛仔竞技表演) in which cowboys rode wild horses, and caught cattle with ropes.
The best professionals could break from the gate on horseback, rope a calf (小牛), and hog-tie (捆绑) the calf (牛犊) in less than ten seconds. So far, A．J. needed nearly a minute and a half, but he’d only been at it for a few months.
The truck bounced down the dirt road. In a few minutes, they passed through the field gate.
A．J. pulled a pair of telescopes (望远镜). The black spots of cows on the far hill took shape. The cows gathered around the pond. A．J. guessed they wanted the water locked under the ice. Suddenly, they heard extremely frightened shouts from one cow. Dad stopped the truck, and he and A．J. stared at the frozen pond anxiously.
A calf lay on the ice in the middle of the pond. A cow, no doubt the calf’s mother, stood onshore, shouting desperately. The calf struggled to get up but slipped and fell each time.
The morning sun seemed warmer. Too warmer. A．J. knew that the situation was urgent. If the calf lay there too long, she could fall through the ice and drown. Dad eased the truck down the hill and stopped at the edge of the pond. “No telling how long she’s been there,” he said. “The ice could be about to melt. I don’t think we can risk it.” Dad shook his head, “It’s just not safe.”
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 开头已给出。
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A．J. watched the calf, whose eyes were wide with fear.
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It would be just like rodeo practice, A．J. thought, trying to stay calm.
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A. J. watched the calf, whose eyes were wide with fear. Though frightened, the calf gathered all her strength to get up but slipped over and over again. Seeing the danger, the mother cow let out shouts with horror and cast helpless glances at A. J. and his dad as if begging them for help. An atmosphere of sadness blanketing the whole world, every nerve in A. J.’s body screamed at him that he must save the poor calf. All of a sudden, an idea came into his mind like a flash.
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It would be just like rodeo practice, A. J. thought, trying to stay calm. He rushed to the truck to grab the rope quickly, aimed it at the calf and let it go. Luckily, he made it at the first attempt! With palms sweating, he and his dad struggled to pull the calf out of the frozen pond. After what seemed like a century, they managed to save the calf. Seeing the calf running to her mother happily, A. J. felt comforted and glad that what he had learned helped save a life.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，A.J.是一名牛仔竞技表演运动员，他与爸爸在路上遇到了一头被困在冰上的小牛，他们听到母牛发出极其恐惧的叫声，爸爸停下卡车，他和A.J.焦急地凝视着冰冻的池塘。小牛努力挣扎，但每次都滑倒了。早晨的阳光似乎更温暖，会使冰融化，A. J.知道情况很紧急。如果小牛长时间在那里，它可能会跌落在冰水中并淹死。A. J.想要救出小牛，但是爸爸摇摇头说：“冰可能即将融化。我认为我们不能冒险”。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：A.J.看着小牛，它的眼里满是恐惧。接下来可以描述小牛的挣扎和母牛的无助以及他有了挽救小牛的想法。即：小牛尽管受到惊吓，但它却竭尽全力站起来，却又一次又一次地滑倒。看到危险，这头母牛惊恐地大叫，无助地看着A. J.和他的父亲，仿佛在求他们帮助， 悲伤的气氛笼罩着现场。A.J感觉体内的每一条神经都在向他呐喊，他必须拯救那只可怜的小牛。突然，一个念头突然出现在他的脑海中。第二段开头是：A.J.想这就像是一次竞技练习一样，他尽量保持冷静。接下来可以写他如何救了小牛的过程并且最终成功了，要多进行心理和挽救小牛的描写。即：他冲上卡车迅速拿来绳索，用绳子来抓牛。幸运的是，他的第一次尝试成功了！手掌开始流汗，A.J和他的父亲努力地将小牛从冰冻的池塘中拉出。在一番努力之后，他们设法救出了小牛。A. J.看到小牛快乐地奔向母亲，他感到很高兴，因为他所学到的知识帮助挽救了一个生命。续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了固定短语和高级句型。例如：let out，glance at，all of a sudden，aim it，make it，manage to do等固定短语。whose引导的非限制性定语从句A. J. watched the calf, whose eyes were wide with fright.现在分词作状语Seeing the danger, the mother cow let out shouts with horror and cast helpless glances at A. J. and his dad as if begging them for help.过去分词作状语He rushed to the truck to grab the rope quickly, aimed it at the calf and let it go. With的复合结构With palms sweating, he and his dad struggled to pull the calf out of the frozen pond. What引导的宾语从句After what seemed like a century, they managed to save the calf.
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