中考英语二轮题型专题学案 短文改错（含答案）

短文改错专题
专题复习要点梳理：
题型特点：
解题技巧：
短文改错的错误设置多与行文的一致性有关。考生答题时检查句子中行文的一致性是发现错误加以纠正的一个重要突破口，可以从以下几个方面入手：21·cn·jy·com
1. 检查时态是否一致。
在答题时要有目的的去检查句中的前后时态与语境以及该句子的时间状语是否相符或一致。
2. 检查主谓一致。
若谓语动词的时态和语态正确，要注意检查该动词在人称和数上是否一致。
3. 检查指代是否一致。
对于句中出现的代词都要检查一下其数、格、词形是否正确，是否前后一致。
4. 检查平行结构是否一致。
由and，or，but，either......or......，neither......nor......，not only......but also......等连词和词组连接的结构称为并列结构。平行结构在词形、时态、非谓语动词形式上往往要求前后保持一致。
5. 检查名词的单复数与修饰词语或前后文是否一致。
Ps：还可以从行文逻辑、固定搭配、固定句型的使用是否正确等方面作重点检查，通过认真分析、对比就可以化解难题，找出错误。
【真题解读】
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有5处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一橫线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改5处，多者(从第6处起)不计分。
（中考真题）
I will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. I hope your school is big and clean with a large dining hall. And the library is full different kinds of books. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates, I believe my high school life must be colorful. After the class, I can play chess and basketball. Sometimes I can listen to music. Hopefully, I will be allow to surf the Internet to get many useful knowledge and information. I'm expecting my high school life.2·1·c·n·j·y
短文改错：
1.改单词 第一行将your 改成my
2.增单词 第二行在full和different之间加of
3.删单词 第三行删去After与class 之间的the
4.改单词 第四行将allow改为allowed
5.改单词 第五行将many改成more或者much
（中考真题）
My name is John Smith. I am from Australia. I've just leaved Hong Kong for Jingmen on train. I have arrived in China three days ago. It's mu second time to visit China. I had caught a bad cold before arrive in China. I saw a doctor in Hong Kong, the doctor said my temperature was 37.5 ℃. He asked me have a good rest. I hope everything will be fine because I am looking forward for hanging out in Jingmen soon.www-2-1-cnjy-com
1. 第一行leaved改成left
【解析】leave的过去分词是不规则变化为left。
2. 第二行 去掉have
【解析】three days ago意为“三天前”，为一般过去时的标志，所以arrive的过去式是arrived，去掉have。
3. 第三行arrive改成arriving
【解析】before在此句中是介词，其后跟动名词形式，arrive的动名词是去e加-ing。所以arrive改成arriving。
4. 第四行asked me have 改为asked me to have
【解析】ask sb. to do sth.意为“要求某人做某事”，为固定用法。
5. 第五行looking forward for 改成to
【解析】look forward to为固定短语，意为“期待，期望”。
课堂练习
A
Our clothes are a thing can affect our moods. Wear colorful clothes shows and affects our feelings. When we're sadly, we will wear dark clothes. So when happy, we often choose to wear brightly-colored clothes. Our choice of color shows what we are feeling. Suppose we are felt sad, if we wear black we may begin to feel worse. However, if we wear green, red and yellow we may feel good. Orange makes us more happier, white makes we helpful, and so on. So remember, if you are not feeling your best, you can try out some clothes of different colors. If one color has not effect on your feelings, maybe another will.
B
Attention, please. There is going to have a talk by a well-known America writer, Sara Jones. You may have read her the latest novel. It's in all bookshops at the moment. Well, the talk is to be given at 8 p.m. in Saturday evening in the library. That's the building next Allen Hall, the English Department Building. Miss Jones have just returned from Africa and will talk about all her experience there. She traveled through three different countries and meet lots of interesting people. Now I'd like to remind you what the talk is for everyone, not just for the fourth-year students. I'm sure the talk will be very interested and hope you all have a great time.

C
After school I went home for the supper. When I got home, I found my mother lie in bed. She was ill. My father was away from home for business. “What shall I do?” I thought to me. Since Mother was ill, I must take well care of her. So I decided to try cooking by myself. I did the cooking with great difficult and it got burnt at last. I had thought Mother would never like it. So I had to ask my mother to have supper. With my joy, Mother praised me for the meal I cooked. She said, “It tastes delicious. I'm very pleased with it.” I know that Mother was encouraging me to do much by myself.
课后练习
A
Welcome to this short tour of London. In this square we are standing in the middle of London. Opposite* is the National Gallery, a museum with lots of famous paintings. Go along the red street to Buckingham Palace. The queen* lives here.
Turn left and go to the Houses of Parliament and Big Ben. Opposite you can see the London Eye. It takes you 135 meters above the River Thames. You can see most of London on a clear day.
When you are tired, the best way to see London is by boat. You can get the boat near Big Ben. As you go along the river, the London Eye is on your right, near the Railway Bridge.
Get off the boat at Tower Bridge. Then you can see the Tower of London next to the bridge. The Tower of London is the city's oldest palace. It is nine hundred years old.www.21-cn-jy.com
Take the boat back along the river. Get off the boat and go past the station and walk along the street. Opposite is the old fruit and vegetable market. They don't sell fruit and vegetables now. There are stores and restaurants, and lots of street musicians. Turn left into King's Street, and go past the church. You're now back where you started, at the square. Now you finish your tour.
( ) 26. If you go to visit the National Gallery, what will you find? 21教育名师原创作品
A. lots of lovely animals B. lots of valuable plants
C. lots of famous paintings? D. lots of interesting books
( ) 27. Where can you get the boat?
A. Near Buckingham Palace. B. Near Big Ben.
C. Near Tower Bridge.? D. Near King's Street.
( ) 28. ______ is the London Eye.
A. b B. c C. d D. e
B
Imagine one day the water taps* in your house stop running. You have to pay a lot of money to buy water from shops. And still there isn't enough water for everyone. Your mother has to save the family's shower water to use for washing clothes. Would you be able to stand that kind of life?21*cnjy*com
??? Probably not. But that is what kids in Yemen are experiencing. According to a report, the capital, Sana, will run out of drinking water as early as 2025.
??? Because of the water shortage*, the Yemen government often cuts the water supply*. Hannan, an 18-year-old girl, told the Time, “In a good week we'll have a water supply all week. But then the following week there will be water only for a day or two.”
??? Hannan said only rich people have enough water to use. They can buy water from the shops or from the water trucks*. Private* companies own the trucks. They travel around the city every day to sell water—at very high prices.
??? “A lot of people can't pay for it.” she said.
??? The government is thinking of making use of sea water. But it will cost a lot and it may not happen soon enough to help the people of Yemen.21世纪教育网版权所有
( ) 29. The underlined word “that” means ______.
?A. buying water from shops B. having enough drinking water2-1-c-n-j-y
?C. suffering from water shortage D. washing clothes with used water
( ) 30. From the passage, we know that ______.
?A. the people of Yemen don't have to worry about water
?B. people in Yemen have no water to use during a bad week
?C. Sana will have no drinking water in 10 years
?D. private companies make much money by selling water
( ) 31. The Yemen government ______.
?A. may try to make use of seawater
? B. does nothing about the water problem
? C. only cares about rich people's lives
? D. may solve the problem soon
( ) 32. The writer wants to tell us ______.
?A. not to use sea water B. not to waste water
?C. to drink less water D. to sell water to Yemen21教育网
C
March 16th is World Sleep Day. This year's slogan* is “Breathe* Easily, Sleep Well”. Its aim is to celebrate the benefits* of good and healthy sleep.21cnjy.com
Sleep is like food for the brain. Enough sleep helps the body and brain grow and develop. According to the National Sleep Foundation in the US, adults need seven to nine hours of sleep every night. For students aged 10 to 17, a healthy amount is about eight to nine hours per night.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
But many students don't get enough sleep because of early school start times and heavy homework. About 80 percent of middle school students don't get enough sleep, the China Youth and Children Research Center reported. For some students, they want to sleep early, but they keep worrying about their schoolwork and can't fall asleep quickly. For others, they may even have insomnia which might keep them awake all night.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
These sleeping problems greatly affect* people's lives. Experts* have shown that lack* of sleep for teenagers leads to poor grades. Students without enough sleep cannot pay attention in class or do well in sports. Also, the lack of sleep may make them depressed*.
Luckily, with good sleep habits, it is easier to fall asleep. Some of these good habits include avoiding drinks that make people excited late in the day, going to sleep at the same time each night, and sleeping in a comfortable place that is dark, quiet, and neither too warm nor too cold.
( ) 33. If Li Hong is 15years old, how much sleep does she need every night?
A. 10-12 hours. B. 8-9 hours. C. 7 hours. D. Less than 7 hours.
( ) 34. What might happen if teens don't get enough sleep?
A. They might do well in sports. B. Their bodies and brains might grow better.
C. They might feel depressed. D. They might not be able to finish their schoolwork.
( ) 35. The underlined word “insomnia” means “_______” in Chinese.
A. 健忘症 B. 肥胖症 C. 多动症 D. 失眠症
( ) 36. Which is NOT a reason why so many students don't get enough sleep?
A. They cannot pay attention in class.
B. They have too much homework to do.
C. They have sleeping problems.
D. They have to get up very early to go to school.
D
I've loved my mother's desk since I was just tall enough to see above the top of it as Mother sat doing letters*. Standing by her chair, looking at the ink bottle, pens, and white paper, I decided that the act of writing must be the most wonderful thing in the world.
Years later, during her final illness, Mother kept different things for my sister and brother. “But the desk,” she'd said again, “it's for Elizabeth.”
I never saw her anger, never saw her cry. I knew she loved me; she showed it in action. But as a young girl, I wanted heart-to-heart talks between mother and daughter.
They never happened. And a gulf opened between us. I was “too emotional*”. But she lived “on the surface*”.
As years passed I had my own family. I loved my mother and thanked her for our happy family. I wrote to her in careful words and asked her to let me know in any way she chose that she did forgive*me.
I posted the letter and waited for her answer. None came.
My hope turned to disappointment, then little interest and, finally, peace-it seemed that nothing happened. I couldn't be sure that the letter had even got to Mother. I only knew that I had written it, and I could stop trying to make her into someone she was not.
Now the present of her desk told me, as she'd never been able to, that she was pleased that writing was my chosen work. I cleaned the desk carefully and found some papers inside－a photo of my father and a one-page letter, folded* and refolded many times.
Give me an answer, my letter asks, in any way you chose. Mother, you always chose the act that speaks louder than words.
( ) 37. The writer began to love her mother's desk _______.
A. after Mother died B. before she became a writer
C. when she was a child D. when Mother gave it to her
( ) 38. The passage shows that _____.
A. mother was cold on the surface but kind in her heart to her daughter
B. mother was too serious about everything her daughter had done
C. mother cared much about her daughter in words
D. mother wrote to her daughter in careful words
( ) 39. The word “gulf” in the paragraph four means ______.
A. deep understanding between the old and the young
B. different ideas between the mother and the daughter
C. free talks between mother and daughter
D. part of the sea going far in land
( ) 40. What's the best title of the passage?
A. My Letter to Mother B. Mother and Children
C. My Mother's Desk D. Talks between Mother and Me
完形填空
The Best Time of My Life
It was June 15, and in two days I would be turning thirty years old. I was 11 about entering a new period of my life and feared that my best years were now behind me.
I always went to the gym for exercise before going to work. Every morning I 12 see my friend Nicholas at the gym. He was seventy-nine years old and in wonderful shape. As I 13 Nicholas on this particular day, he noticed I wasn't full of my usual energy and asked 14 there was anything wrong. I told 15 I was feeling anxious about turning thirty. I wondered how I would look back on my life once I was at Nicholas's age, 16 I asked him, "What was the best time of your life?"21·世纪*教育网
Nicholas 17 at once, "Well, Joe, this is my philosophical* answer 18 your philosophical question."
When I was a child in Austria and everything was taken care of for me and I was well educated by my parents, that was the best time of my life.
When I was going to school and 19 the things I know today, that was the best time of my life.
When I got my first job and had responsibilities* and 20 for my efforts, that was the best time of my life.
When I met my wife and fell in 21 , that was the best time of my life.
The Second World War came, and my wife and I had to run away to save our lives. When we were together and 22 on a ship, that was the best time of my life.
When we came to Canada and started a family, that was the best time of my life. 【出处：21教育名师】
When I was a young father, 23 my children grow up, that was the best time of my life.
And now, Joe, I am seventy-nine years old. I have my 24 , I feel good and I am in love with my wife just as I was when we 25 met. This is the best time of my life."
( ) 11. A. happy B. worried C. afraid D. sad
( ) 12. A. should B. would C. might D. will
( ) 13. A. looked B. heard C. greeted D. said
( ) 14. A. if B. why C. what D. how
( ) 15. A. myself B. he C. his D. him
( ) 16. A. so B. for C. as D. then
( ) 17. A. ran B. walked C. replied D. sat
( ) 18. A. for B. to C. with D. at
( ) 19. A. learning B. finding C. buying D. telling
( ) 20. A. went hungry B. kept fit C. got paid D. became strong
( ) 21. A. trouble B. fact C. love D. danger
( ) 22. A. safe B. quiet C. proud D. successful
( ) 23. A. feeding B. watching C. making D. leading
( ) 24. A. health B. mind C. life D. goal
( ) 25. A. finally B. first C. then D. next
七选五：
Starting high school is a great experience for any teenager. Whether you are coming from a middle school (grades six through eight) or a junior high school (grades seven through nine), there are many things about high school that are different from your old school environment. 1.
You will face being in a new school, making new friends in an unfamiliar class and getting to know new teachers. These new teachers will usually have higher academic(学术的) levels than your middle and junior?high school teachers.
2. In return, they expect you to work hard and develop your skills.
On top of all this, peer pressure(同伴压力) to drink and smoke often increases 21*cnjy*com
in high school. 3.
Although there is a lot of pressure, it is nothing you cannot deal with. If you are feeling pressure to do something that you feel is wrong, talk to a friend, parent, or counselor to find a solution(解决). 4. If you are not succeeding academically, find someone to help you. If you feel lonely, try to join a school club or
group to make new friends.
5． With time, you will come to be thankful for everything about your experience. On the point of starting your high school, are you ready?
A．You will experience many changes.
B．They want to help you get into college.
C．High school may seem discouraging at first.
D．They are there to help you get into this great new time in your life.
E．Besides, the pressure could also come from grades, loneliness and so on.
F．Many changes are unexpected.
G．Finally, enjoy your colorful high school life.
短文改错：
Mark Twain, one of the best-known American writer in the 19th century, who was born in Missouri. His hometown lie on the banks of the Mississippi River, there he spent his childhood. When he grew up, he worked like a pilot on a river boat for some time. Mark Twain is his pen name. He took it from the shout of the sailors measure the depth of the water. Mark Twain wrote a lot of novels, but one of them is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It brought his fame and honor. Some of his writings have translated into many languages. He and his works are deep loved by readers throughout the world.
短文改错
课堂练习
A
Our clothes are a thing can affect our moods. Wear colorful clothes shows and affects our feelings. When we're sadly, we will wear dark clothes. So when happy, we often choose to wear brightly-colored clothes. Our choice of color shows what we are feeling. Suppose we are felt sad, if we wear black we may begin to feel worse. However, if we wear green, red and yellow we may feel good. Orange makes us more happier, white makes we helpful, and so on. So remember, if you are not feeling your best, you can try out some clothes of different colors. If one color has not effect on your feelings, maybe another will.
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B
Attention, please. There is going to have a talk by a well-known America writer, Sara Jones. You may have read her the latest novel. It's in all bookshops at the moment. Well, the talk is to be given at 8 p.m. in Saturday evening in the library. That's the building next Allen Hall, the English Department Building. Miss Jones have just returned from Africa and will talk about all her experience there. She traveled through three different countries and meet lots of interesting people. Now I'd like to remind you what the talk is for everyone, not just for the fourth-year students. I'm sure the talk will be very interested and hope you all have a great time.
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C
After school I went home for the supper. When I got home, I found my mother lie in bed. She was ill. My father was away from home for business. “What shall I do?” I thought to me. Since Mother was ill, I must take well care of her. So I decided to try cooking by myself. I did the cooking with great difficult and it got burnt at last. I had thought Mother would never like it. So I had to ask my mother to have supper. With my joy, Mother praised me for the meal I cooked. She said, “It tastes delicious. I'm very pleased with it.” I know that Mother was encouraging me to do much by myself.【版权所有：21教育】
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课后练习
阅读理解：CBC CDAB BCDA CABC
完形填空：BBCAD ACBAC CABAB
七选五：答案解析：ABEDC　
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短文改错：