新目标2021年中考英语一轮话题写作（二）计划安排 （写作思路+范文+模拟练习）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
话题写作（二）计划安排
教材话题链接
八年级上册
Unit
5
Do
you
want
to
watch
a
game
show
?
八年级上册
Unit
6
I’m
going
to
study
computer
science
.
八年级上册
Unit
10
If
you
go
to
the
party,
you’ll
have
a
great
time
!
八年级下册
Unit
2
I’ll
help
to
clean
up
the
city
parks
.
典/例/分/析
假设你是珍妮，请给你们的美籍教Tom写一封邮件，向他简要介绍你校即将举办的英语节（English
Festival
)
,邀请他参加本次活动，并请他在节日最后做一个关于如何学好英语的讲座。邮件还应包括以下内容：
要点如下：
1.活动时间：本周三上午8：30-11：30
2
活动地点：学校大厅(School
Hall
)
3
活动内容：......
注意：
1
词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3
文中得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear
Tom
,
How
is
it
going
?
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
Yours
Jenny
满分作文五步法
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：___________________
人称:___________________
时态：___________________
功能:____________________
要点：
1._____________________
2.______________
3.
_______________
4.
_______________
Step
2
搭-列提纲，搭好框架
框架结构
开篇点题：点明活动：English
Day
发出邀请：come
and
join
us
主体内容：基本信息：
时间：from
8:30
to
11:30
on
Friday
地点：
School
Hall
活动内容：sing
English
songs
;
perform
plays
in
English
;
give
a
talk
on
how
to
learn
English
well
总结收尾：Looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
Step
3
:
连-连词成句
开篇点题：
We
will
______________________________
in
our
school
.
Would
you
like
to
_______________________________
?
主体内容：
The
activity
will
begin
____________________________________in
the
Lecture
Hall
After
the
performance
,
you
can
_________________________________________
learn
English
well
.
总结收尾
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
Step
4.
组-组句成篇
Dear
Bob
,
How
it
it
going
?
We
will
have
an
English
Day
in
our
school
.
Would
you
like
to
come
and
join
us
?
This
activity
will
begin
in
the
School
Hall
at
8:30
this
Wednesday
and
finish
at
11:30
.
We’ve
prepared
many
programs
for
it,
for
example
,
English
songs
.
Some
students
will
also
perform
plays
in
English
.
What’s
more
,
after
the
performance
you
can
give
a
talk
on
how
to
learn
English
well.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
Yours,
Li
Hua
Step
5
修-修饰美化
扩句：
改为被动句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
扩句：
改为强调句：
　　　　　　　　　　　All
of
the
students
___________________that
you
could
come
and
join
us
.
扩句：As
you
know
,
many
students
in
our
school
_____________________learning
English
well
.
So
when
the
performance
finishes,
____________________
if
you
could
give
a
talk
and
provide
us
with
some
practical
advice
.
【名师点晴】
文章的连贯性是评分的一条标准，因此同学们应根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列，递进等关系的过渡词，对写好的句子进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。
同时避免汉化现象，尽量使用熟悉的句型。
其次，正确使用固定搭配以及两三个好的句型，如：被动句、非谓语动词、复合句或it作形式主语的句子等。
最后，应该围绕动词中心进行恰当地联想和发挥。
美文诵读
Dear
Tom
,
How
is
it
going
?
An
English
Day
will
be
held
on
our
school
.
All
of
the
students
do
hope
that
you
could
come
and
join
us
.
The
activity
will
begin
in
the
School
Hall
at
8:30
this
Wednesday
and
last
about
3
hours
.
We’ve
prepared
many
programs
for
it
,
for
example
,
English
songs
.
Some
students
will
perform
plays
in
English
.
As
you
know
,
many
students
in
our
school
have
difficulty
in
learning
English
well
.
So
when
the
performance
finishes
,
it
would
be
very
nice
if
you
could
give
a
talk
and
provide
us
with
some
practical
advice
.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
Yours
Jenny
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
计划类
plan
,
make
a
plan
,
plan
to
do
,
hope
to
do
,
be
going
to
do,
would
like
to
do
,
decide
to
do
,
make
a
decision
to
do
,
make
up
one’s
mind
to
do
,
will
be
held
,
show
you
around
,
work
as
a
volunteer
,
read
some
good
books
活动类
go
swimming
,
go
camping
,
go
on
/have
a
picnic
,
play
games
,
sing
songs
together
,
go
for
a
walk
,
fly
kites
,
go
on
holiday
,
go
to
visit
,
have
a
good
rest
and
relax
,
go
sightseeing
,
travel
around
the
world
,
take
a
trip
,
visit
some
places
of
interest
,
collect
rubbish
,
help
the
kids
,
organize
after-class
activities
愿景类
give
me
some
advice
,
get
along
with
animals
,
an
unforgettable
experience
,
come
true
,
dream
of
doing
,
in
the
future
,
realize
the
importance
of
doing
sth
.
佳句积累
【开头句】
The
party
will
be
held
in
our
classroom
on
the
morning
of
June
26th.
We
are
going
to
have
some
meaningful
activities
.
I
am
going
to
travel
to
places
of
interest
which
can
open
up
my
eyes
.
I
am
going
to
a
summer
camp
in
July
where
I
can
relax
myself
and
make
new
friends
.
I
want
to
tell
him
the
news
as
soon
as
he
comes
back
from
vacation
.
I
would
like
to
invite
you
to
attend
the
graduation
ceremony
at
our
school
.
I’m
thinking
of
taking
a
trip
to
your
city
this
summer
vacation
.
We
have
decided
to
have
a
picnic
this
coming
Sunday
.
I’m
glad
to
tell
you
something
about
our
colorful
school
life
.
In
order
to
learn
how
to
care
for
the
children
and
put
our
talents
to
good
use
【发展句】
I
am
planning
to
travel
abroad
during
the
vacation
.
In
the
afternoon
,
we
plan
to
collect
rubbish
that
is
thrown
about
by
careless
visitors
until
15:00.
We
plan
to
send
our
cards
on
which
we
have
written
our
thanks
to
our
teacher
.
We
plan
to
go
to
Tian’anmen
Square
to
watch
the
flag-raising
ceremony
first
.
I
really
have
a
large
number
of
things
to
do
.
Maybe
it’s
a
bit
busy
,
but
I
like
this
sort
of
life
.
We
will
meet
at
our
school
gate
and
then
go
to
...by
bus
.
Every
term
there
is
a
basketball
match
between
the
students
and
the
teachers
in
our
school
.
We
plan
to
hold
a
party
and
organize
some
interesting
activities
....After
that
,
Peter
is
going
to
tell
some
stories
.
【结尾句】
I’m
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you
all
.
Let’s
make
a
plan
for
the
coming
vacation
together
.
If
I
become
a
member
of
the
summer
camp
,
I
will
be
friendly
to
the
foreign
students
.
In
a
word
,
it’s
helpful
for
our
society
to
do
some
charity
.
Many
hands
make
light
work
.
I’m
sure
I’ll
have
an
unforgettable
and
meaningful
holiday
.
Do
you
have
any
plans
for
the
coming
vacation
?
We
hope
we
can
spend
more
time
on
such
activities
and
less
time
on
homework
.
佳/篇/创/作
假如你是李华，你们班同学决定进行野餐，请你用英语给外教Jack
写封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1
时间：本周日上午9：00
到下午15:00
2
地点：劳动公园（the
Laodong
Park
)
3
活动：做游戏、唱歌
、吃午饭
4
要求：上午8：00
校门口集合、自带食品....
要求：
1
字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2
要点必须包括所有相关信息，并适当发挥；
3
词数90词左右。
Dear
Jack
,
How
is
it
going
?
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours
Li
Hua
(B)
你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人，请你写一篇发言稿，在你校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。
注意：
1
书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥。
2
文中不得出现真实的地名、校名及姓名。
参考信息：
活动缘由（孤独、帮扶、游学....)
活动构想（时间、地点、内容....)
.......
Hello
,
everybody
.
I
am
planning
a
summer
trip
called
“Be
a
Kid
in
the
Mountain”
.
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（C
）
为丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。
活动内容：
上午浏览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；
下午参观市民广场；
观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。
你的感想：
师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；
倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；
....（考生自己发挥）
注意：
1
词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2
所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。
3
不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
《参考词汇》市民广场Civic
Square
In
order
to
enrich
Junior
3
students’
after-school
life
,
our
school
organized
a
social
practice
activity
last
weekend
.
All
the
teachers
and
students
of
our
grade
took
part
in
it
.____________________
.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：电子邮件
人称：第一人称
时态
：一般将来时
功能：发出邀请
要点：
1
介绍英语文化
2
邀请Bob参加活动并做讲座
3
时间：
本周五下午14:30-17:30
4
地点：报告厅（Lecture
Hall
)
5
活动：学生演唱英文歌曲
Step3
-连-连词成句
have
an
English
Culture
Festival
:
come
and
join
us
at
14:30
this
Friday
and
finish
at
17:30
;
sing
English
songs
and
perform
plays
in
English
;
give
a
talk
on
how
to
Step
5
修-修饰美化
An
English
Culture
Festival
will
be
held
in
our
school
do
hope
have
difficulty
in
;
it
would
be
very
nice
(A)
Dear
Jack
,
How
is
it
going
?
We’ve
decided
to
have
a
picnic
this
coming
Sunday
.
I
wounder
if
you
could
come
and
join
us
.
At
8
o’clock
,
we
will
meet
at
our
school
gate
and
then
go
to
the
Laodong
Park
by
bus
,
it
takes
us
about
an
hour
.
After
arriving
there
,
some
of
us
are
going
to
play
games
.
At
the
same
time
,
a
few
classmates
interested
in
music
can
sing
songs
together
.
At
noon
,
we
will
sit
around
and
have
a
wonderful
lunch
.
In
the
afternoon
,
we
plan
to
collect
rubbish
that
is
thrown
about
by
careless
visitors
till
15:00.
Each
of
us
should
bring
his
favorite
food
and
we’d
better
wear
sunglasses
to
protect
us
from
the
strong
sunlight
.
I’m
looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
(B)
Hello
,
everybody
.
I
am
planning
a
summer
trip
called
“Be
a
Kid
in
the
Mountains”
.
It
will
provide
us
with
a
meaningful
week
staying
with
the
students
in
the
mountains
.
As
many
of
their
parents
leave
for
the
city
development
,
these
students
might
feel
lonely
and
some
may
even
find
it
hard
to
go
on
studying
.
So
we
can
bring
them
some
school
things
like
books
and
pens
for
their
study
,
and
prepare
some
interesting
stories
to
share
.
In
the
daytime
,
we
can
go
hiking
and
do
some
teamwork
.
In
the
evening
,
we
can
do
with
activities
as
popular
games
and
group
dance
around
the
fire
.
Isn’t
that
exciting
?
Come
and
join
us
.
Let’s
be
“a
kid
in
the
mountains”
I
believe
it
will
bring
sunshine
to
the
mountains
as
well
as
more
confidence
to
us
.
Thank
you
！
(
C)
In
order
to
enrich
Junior
3
students’
after-school
life
,
our
school
organized
a
social
practice
activity
last
weekend.
All
the
teachers
and
students
of
our
grade
took
part
in
it
.
We
were
all
happy
to
have
a
chance
to
know
more
about
our
city
.
Everyone
had
a
meaningful
day
.
In
the
morning
,
we
visited
People’s
Park
in
our
city
.
We
enjoyed
the
beautiful
view
there
.
Moreover
,
we
had
a
song
and
dance
party.
Most
of
us
took
a
lot
of
photos
to
remember
the
exciting
moment
.
In
the
afternoon
,
we
watched
the
picture
show
in
Civic
Square
.
Many
great
changes
have
taken
place
in
our
country
and
city
in
the
past
70
years
.
It’s
amazing
for
us
to
know
these
changes
.
We
will
finish
our
middle
school
soon
.
Thanks
teachers
and
classmates
for
giving
me
so
much
help
.
I
decide
to
study
hard
to
work
for
our
country
.
Our
city
is
so
beautiful
that
it
is
well
worth
visiting
.
Welcome
to
our
city
and
enjoy
yourself
here
.
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