单元主题写作五
话题分析
本单元以“描述动物,表达偏爱”为话题,要求同学们能对某种动物进行简单描述,包括动物的基本信息、喜欢或不喜欢该动物的理由、动物濒危及解决方法等。
写作要求:
1.能用cute,scary,smart,shy,beautiful,friendly等形容词描述动物的特征。
2.能用“I
like...because.../I
don't
like...because...”句型表达自己的喜恶。
典型例题
假如你叫Jenny,你最喜欢的小狗的名字是Flower.请根据下面的提示,介绍一下你最喜欢的动物。
提示:
1.
How
old
is
Flower?
2.
What
is
Flower
like?
3.
Where
is
Flower
from?
要求:
1.根据提示内容,可以适当发挥。
2.词数:50词左右。
思路点拨
Dog---Flower
:
Age:3
years
old
Character(特征):cute,smart
From:America
素材积累
单词
1.熊猫
___________
2.
老虎
___________
3.大象
___________
4.狮子
___________
5.
长颈鹿
___________
6.
聪明的
___________
7.救;救助
___________
8.友好的
___________
9.猴子
___________
10.狗
___________
11.马
___________
12.考拉
___________
13.懒散的;懒惰的
___________
14.美丽的;美好的
___________
15.羞怯的;腼腆的
___________
短语
1.欢迎来到
___________
2.用两条腿行走
___________
3.
想做某事
___________
4.来自
___________
5.帮助某人做某事
___________
6.稍微;有点儿
___________
7.南非
___________
8.迷路
___________
9.处于(极大)危险之中
___________
10.脱离危险
___________
11.
砍倒
___________
12.由······制成的
___________
句型
根据括号中的英文提示词,将下列句子翻译成英语。
1.“你为什么喜欢老虎?”“因为它们真酷。”(cool)
_________________________________________________________________________
2.“狮子来自哪里?”“它们来自非洲。”(Africa)
_________________________________________________________________________
3.我喜欢熊猫,因为它们聪明可爱。(smart)
_________________________________________________________________________
4.大象能够长间行走而且从不迷路。(get
lost)
_________________________________________________________________________
5.但是大象处于极大危险之中。(danger)
_________________________________________________________________________
6.我们必须拯救树木,拒买象牙制品。(made
of)
_________________________________________________________________________
高分模板
This
is
Flower.
She
is
my
favorite
dog.
She
is
3
years
old
now.
I
like
Flower
very
much
because
she
is
very
cute
and
smart.
She
often
runs
after
my
cat.
She
also
runs
after
birds.
She
is/comes
from
America.
She
is
friendly
to
me
and
she
is
my
best
friend.
名师点评
1.文章结构清晰,从年龄等方面介绍了小狗
Flower的基本信息;并用cute,smart等形容词描述它的特征。
2.用“I
like...because...”句型表达自己喜欢小狗Flower的原因。
3.文章涵盖了所有的提示信息,文章结尾处“。。。and
she
is
my
best
friend.”作了适当发挥,恰到好处。
小试身手
假如你有一只宠物猫,它非常讨人喜欢。请根据下的提示,把它介绍给你的好朋友。40词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Name
Mimi
Age
2
Appearance(外表)
and
character
Brown;
Two
big
eyes;
Smart
and
interesting
Favorite
food
Fish
Hobby
Play
with
a
ball
单元主题写作五
【素材积累】
单词
panda
2.
tiger
3.
elephant
4.
lion
5.
giraffe
smart
7.
save
8.
friendly
9.
monkey
10.
dog
11.
horse
12.
koala
13.
lazy
14.
beautiful
15.
shy
短语
1.
welcome
to...
2.
walk
on
two
legs
3.
want
to
do
sth.4.
be/come
from
5.
help
sb.
(to)
do
sth.
6.
kind
of
7.
South
Africa
8.
get
lost9.
be
in
(great)
danger
10.
out
of
danger11.
cut
down
12.
(be)
made
of
句型
1.--Why
do
you
like
tigers?
--Because
they're
really
cool.
2.-Where
are
lions
from?
/Where
do
lions
come
from?
--They
are/come
from
Africa.
3.
I
like
pandas
because
they
are
smart
and
cute.
4.
Elephants
can
walk
for
a
long
time
and
never
get
lost.
5.
But
elephants
are
in
great
danger.
6.
We
must
save
the
trees
and
not
buy
things
made
of
ivory.
【小试身手】
One
possible
version:
I
have
a
cat.
Its
name
is
Mimi.
It's
two
years
old.
It's
brown.
It
has
two
big
eyes.
It's
very
smart
and
interesting.
It
likes
eating
fish
best.
It
likes
playing
with
a
ball.
I
like
my
cat
very
much.