2021中考书面表达指导01-人物介绍 课件（37张PPT）

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2021
英语中考写作指导
01.
人物介绍
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依据中考
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精选话题
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素材积累
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目录
contents
Methods
思路方法
01
Material
素材积累
02
Guide
写作示范
03
Models
优秀作品
04
01
思路方法
（
METHODS）
强化思路
形成习惯
审好题
·
体裁
·
人称
·
时态
·
主题
基本思路
列好纲
·
框架
·
要点
写好句
·
扩展
·
补充
·
解释
成好文
·
衔接
·
检查
时态
体裁
人称
主题
审好题
一般现在时
一般过去时
一般将来时
现在完成时
看提示
看要点
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
记叙文
议论文
说明文
应用文
列好纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
写好句
让语义更准确
利用高级词汇
不怕词数限制
短语替换单词
表达层次清晰
增强句子关联
并列以及复合
提升句子质量
表达强烈感情
感叹疑问祈使
地道英语表达
名言成语俗语
成好文
用连词
巧衔接
查错误
做检查
好书写
认真誊
02
素材积累
（MATERIAL）
积累佳句
提升质量
佳句积累
人物外貌介绍
My
father
is
tall
man
with
a
pair
of
glasses.
(介词)
She
has
the
most
beautiful
blue
eyes
I
have
ever
seen.
(最高级)
He
used
to
be
thin,
but
look
how
big
and
strong
he
is
now.
(感叹句)
I’m
not
very
tall
and
I
have
curly
hair
that
looks
like
black
waves.
(定语从句)
佳句积累
人物性格特点
Tom
is
considered
as
a
creative
boy
because
he
always
comes
up
with
different
ideas.
(短语；状语从句)
He
is
so
kind
that
he
is
always
ready
to
help
others.
(短语；状语从句)
Mr.
Wang
is
my
English
teacher
who
is
very
humorous.
(定语从句)
No
matter
who
asks
him
for
help,
he
is
always
warm-hearted
and
generous.
(高阶词汇；状语从句)
What
an
honest
boy
Li
Ming
is！
(感叹句)
佳句积累
人物兴趣爱好
My
hobby
is
studying
stars.
I
find
it
very
interesting.
(解释)
Many
students
have
hobbies,
such
as
reading,
painting,
growing
vegetables
and
looking
after
animals.
(举例)
I’m
serious
about
running.
It
can
make
me
healthier
and
stronger.
(解释)
I’m
very
fond
of
singing,
and
in
my
spare
time
I
often
listen
to
English
songs.
(说明)
佳句积累
人物优势特长
He
has
the
ability
to
organize
the
activity,
and
everything
is
in
great
order.
(短语)
My
sister
has
more
experience
on
how
to
play
violin
well.
(短语)
Not
only
does
he
work
hard
but
also
he
is
good
at
playing
basketball.
(短语；高级句式)
佳句积累
人物优势特长
He
has
the
ability
to
organize
the
activity,
and
everything
is
in
great
order.
(短语)
My
sister
has
more
experience
on
how
to
play
violin
well.
(短语)
Not
only
does
he
work
hard
but
also
he
is
good
at
playing
basketball.
(短语；高级句式)
佳句积累
人物评价
I
like
the
girl
because
she
always
brings
happiness
to
people
around
her.
(原因状语)
My
English
teacher
is
liked
by
all
of
us
as
she
is
patient
with
us
and
treats
us
as
her
friends.
(短语；原因状语；被动语态)
I
would
like
to
play
with
Tony
for
the
reason
that
we
have
many
things
in
common.
(短语；原因状语；同位语从句)
俗语谚语
Friends
are
like
books
–
you
don’t
need
a
lot
of
them
as
long
as
they
are
good.
良友如书，贵在好而不在多。
A
true
friend
reaches
for
your
hand
and
touches
your
heart.
真正的朋友是一个可以援手帮助并感动你心扉的人。
A
friend
in
need
is
a
friend
indeed.
患难见真情。
A
true
friend
not
only
shares
your
joy
and
happiness
but
also
shares
your
trouble
and
worry.
真正的朋友同喜同忧。
Everyone
has
his
price.
天生我才必有用。
Friendship
is
love
with
understanding.
友谊是爱和理解。
Honesty
is
the
most
beautiful
gift
a
person
can
give
to
another
at
the
beginning
of
a
friendship.
诚实是一个人在友谊之初能给对方的最美的礼物。
03
写作引领
（GUIDE）
步步引领
实现高分
真题再现
某国际学校拟举办第一届英语口语大赛，现正在招募志愿者。假如你是韩一诺，你希望成为其中的一员。请根据以下表格提示给该校负责人——来自美国的Mr.
Smith写一封自荐信。
要求：
1.
内容须包括表格中所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.
语言流畅，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.
词数：100—130。信的格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
基本情况:
年龄、外貌、性格等；
个人优势:
善于交朋友，乐于助人，英语口语棒；
其他:
承诺要认真工作。
Dear
Mr.
Smith,
I’m
Han
Yinuo._________________________________________
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
——————————————————————————————
______________________________________________________
I’m
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours,
Han
Yinuo
审好题
时态：一般现在时
人称：第一人称
体裁：书信
主题：申请志愿者；自我介绍
列提纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
得知招募志愿者活动很高兴。
想应征。介绍情况
基本情况
年龄/外貌
性格特点
善于交朋友/乐于助人
具备能力
擅长外语，特别是口语
认为自己能够胜任这个工作。
成为志愿者后准备做什么。
写好句
开头
I’m
glad
to
learn
that
the
first
English
spoken
competition
will
be
held
soon.
(描述背景)
I’d
like
to
work
as
a
volunteer
at
it.
(点明主题)
Now
let
me
introduce
myself.
(引入正文)
写好句
正文
要点一：
I’m
a
14-year-old
middle
school
student.
(年龄)
I’m
1.68
meters
in
height.
(身高)
I
have
big
eyes
and
long
straight
black
hair.
(外貌)
写好句
要点二：
I’m
outgoing
and
friendly.
I’m
good
at
making
friends
and
ready
to
help
others.
要点三：
I
have
the
ability
to
get
on
well
and
communicate
with
others.
(能力)
My
English
is
good,
especially
my
spoken
English.
(特长)
写好句
结尾
总结：能胜任这个工作
I
believe
I
can
do
a
good
job.
表达感想：如果成为志愿者，保证会尽心尽力
If
I
become
a
volunteer,
I
promise
I
will
try
my
best
to
help
the
competition.
成好文
I’m
glad
to
learn
that
the
first
English
spoken
competition
will
be
held
soon.
I’d
like
to
work
as
a
volunteer
at
it.
Now
let
me
introduce
myself.
I’m
a
14-year-old
middle
school
student.
I’m
1.68
meters
in
height.
I
have
big
eyes
and
long
straight
black
hair.
I
am
outgoing
and
friendly.
I’m
good
at
making
friends
and
ready
to
help
others.
Also,
I
have
the
ability
to
get
on
well
and
communicate
with
others.
Above
all,
my
English
is
good,
especially
my
spoken
English.
So
I
believe
I
can
do
a
good
job.
If
I
become
a
volunteer,
I
promise
I
will
try
my
best
to
help
the
competition.
04
佳作欣赏
（MODELS）
满分佳作
他山之玉
佳作欣赏01
Dear
Mr.
Smith,
I’m
Han
Yinuo.
I’m
glad
to
learn
that
the
first
English
spoken
competition
will
be
held
soon.
I’d
like
to
work
as
a
volunteer
at
it.
Now
let
me
introduce
myself.
I’m
a
14-year-old
middle
school
student.
I’m
1.68
meters
in
height.
I
have
big
eyes
and
long
straight
black
hair.
I’m
outgoing
and
friendly.
I’m
good
at
making
friends
and
ready
to
help
others.
Also,
I
have
the
ability
to
get
on
well
and
communicate
with
others.
Above
all,
my
English
is
good,
especially
my
spoken
English.
So
I
believe
I
can
do
a
good
job.
If
I
become
a
volunteer,
I
promise
I
will
try
my
best
to
help
the
competition.
I’m
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours,
Han
Yinuo
佳作欣赏02
学校英语社团在举办征文比赛,请你根据以下提示内容,写一篇题为“The
Person
Who
Has
Influenced
Me
Most”的英语文章。
内容要点如下：
　　1.对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁；
　　2.她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；
　　3.作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时间都奉献给了工作；
　　4.所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。
　　5.我希望……
要求：1.内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；
　　2.词数90个左右；
　　3.第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2-3句话补充完整。
佳作欣赏02
The
Person
Who
Has
Influenced
Me
Most
　　My
mother
is
the
person
who
has
influenced
me
most.
　　She
is
in
her
forties.
She
always
listens
to
my
problems
patiently.
And
she
advises
me
how
to
solve
them.
As
a
doctor,
she
often
says
she
can’t
be
too
careful.
She
often
works
extra
hours.
She
has
devoted
most
of
her
time
to
her
work.
So
I
think
she
is
not
only
a
good
mother
but
also
a
good
doctor.
　　I
hope
I
can
be
a
person
like
her.
I
also
hope
she
will
pay
more
attention
to
her
own
health.
She’d
better
have
more
time
to
relax
herself.
佳作欣赏03
　　请根据以下提示信息以My
favorite
movie
star为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，可适当发挥。
　　提示信息：
　　☆
Who
is
your
favorite
movie
star?
　　☆
What
does
he
or
she
look
like?
　　☆
What
do
you
think
is
his
or
her
best
movie?
　　☆
Why
do
you
like
him
or
her?
佳作欣赏03
My
favorite
movie
star
My
favorite
movie
star
is
Jackie
Chan.
He
has
won
many
prizes.
He
is
famous
not
only
in
China,
but
also
in
other
countries.
　　Jackie
Chan
is
not
very
tall.
He
has
black
hair
and
a
big
nose.
His
eyes
are
not
big,
but
bright.
He
always
smiles,
especially
after
he
beats
bad
men.
Most
of
his
movies
are
exciting.
I
think
his
best
movie
is
Police
Story.
He
often
gives
money
to
help
poor
people,
so
I
like
him
very
much.
佳作欣赏04
三年的初中生活即将结束,静坐在考场中的你,一定会思绪万千。三年来,你在学习、生活等方面取得了优异的成绩,这些成绩的背后有老师的辛勤教诲、家长的次次鼓励,还有……现在想来你很感谢他们。请以“Thank
you,
my...”为题写一篇英语短文。
　　要求如下:
1.
短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等;
　　2.
短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
　　3.
词数80左右。
佳作欣赏04
Thank
you,
My
English
teacher
　　I
should
say
“thank
you”
to
my
English
teacher.
　　He’s
a
tall
man
with
thick
glasses.
He
likes
sports
and
often
plays
football
and
basketball
with
us.
He’s
humorous
and
always
makes
his
classes
lively
and
interesting.
He’s
kind
but
strict
with
us.
He
never
allows
us
to
pretend
that
we
know
what
we
don’t
know.
He
often
tells
us
that
it’s
no
use
memorizing
new
words
without
understanding.
My
English
has
greatly
improved
with
his
help.
I
think
he
is
the
best
in
my
mind.
　　I
will
remember
him
forever.
佳作欣赏04
Thank
You,
My
Mother
　　Wherever
we
are
today,
whatever
we
are,
we
owe
it
to
our
parents
who
have
given
and
taught
us
so
much,
so
we
should
thank
them,
especially,
thank
our
mother.
　　I
think
my
mother
is
one
of
the
best
mothers
in
the
world.
She
is
the
busiest
one
in
my
family.
She
does
chores
for
the
family
and
cares
about
my
study.
She
has
taught
me
a
lot.
She
does
lots
of
things
for
me,
but
she
never
wants
anything
in
return.
　　How
will
I
show
my
thanks
to
my
mother?
First,
this
year,
I
am
going
to
give
her
a
surprise
birthday
party
and
buy
her
a
special
present.
Second,
I’ll
do
well
in
school.
Third,
I’ll
help
her
do
housework
when
I’m
free.
I
want
to
make
her
happy.
　　In
a
word,
I
love
my
mother.
佳作欣赏05
正能量偶像宛如指路明灯，可以引导我们成为更好的人。请以“My
guiding
star”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.
要点：1)你的正能量偶像是谁；
2)你从他/她身上学到了什么。
2.
要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
佳作欣赏05
The
people
we
admire
are
like
guiding
stars
that
guide
us
to
be
better.
My
guiding
star
is
Ma
Yun.
Without
doubt，he
is
a
successful
businessman,
but
I
treat
him
as
my
guiding
star
not
for
his
success
in
business.
What
moves
me
more
is
his
love
for
people
around
the
world.
When
we
Chinese
people
needed
masks
during
the
COVID?19,
he
collected
them
from
all
over
the
world.
When
people
in
poor
foreign
countries
needed
masks,
he
also
tried
his
best
to
help
them.
What's
more,
his
ant
forest
is
really
good
for
the
environment.
From
now
on，I
would
like
to
spare
no
effort
to
help
people
and
protect
the
environment.
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