2021中考书面表达指导02-经历感受 课件（37张PPT）

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2021
英语中考写作指导
02.
经历感受
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目录
contents
Methods
思路方法
01
Material
素材积累
02
Guide
写作示范
03
Models
优秀作品
04
01
思路方法
（
METHODS）
强化思路
形成习惯
审好题
·
体裁
·
人称
·
时态
·
主题
基本思路
列好纲
·
框架
·
要点
写好句
·
扩展
·
补充
·
解释
成好文
·
衔接
·
检查
时态
体裁
人称
主题
审好题
一般现在时
一般过去时
一般将来时
现在完成时
看提示
看要点
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
记叙文
议论文
说明文
应用文
列好纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
写好句
让语义更准确
利用高级词汇
不怕词数限制
短语替换单词
表达层次清晰
增强句子关联
并列以及复合
提升句子质量
表达强烈感情
感叹疑问祈使
地道英语表达
名言成语俗语
成好文
用连词
巧衔接
查错误
做检查
好书写
认真誊
02
素材积累
（MATERIAL）
积累佳句
提升质量
佳句积累
介绍经历
It
was
really
a
hard
job,
but
I
kept
telling
myself
to
stick
to
the
end.
(短语；并列句)
The
next
day,
Peter
went
to
soccer
practice
with
courage
rather
than
fear
in
his
heart.
(短语)
Attracted
by
the
beautiful
scenery,
I
quickly
climbed
up
the
mountain
to
enjoy
the
natural
view.
(被动语态)
佳句积累
介绍经历
Whenever
I
was
in
trouble,
they
would
give
me
a
hand
as
soon
as
possible.
(短语；状语从句)
Hearing
the
news
that
I
was
asked
to
give
a
speech
on
behalf
of
our
class,
I
felt
very
nervous
because
I
was
afraid
that
I
might
not
do
it
well.
(从句；短语)
佳句积累
介绍感受
How
excited
I
was!
(感叹句)
That
day
we
were
tired
but
happy.
(连词)
In
a
word,
it
was
really
an
unforgettable
and
meaningful
trip
for
us.
(短语；高级词汇)
Through
this
experience,
I
deeply
understand
the
power
of
knowledge
and
technology.
(高级词汇)
佳句积累
介绍感受
I
get
such
a
strong
feeling
of
satisfaction
when
I
see
the
animals
get
better
and
the
look
of
joy
on
their
owners’
faces.
(高级词汇；状语从句)
After
seeing
all
the
things
the
girl
did,
I
recalled
this
prover
“Helping
others
is
helping
ourselves.”
(成语俗语)
His
words
touched
my
heart
and
I
would
remember
them
forever.
(并列句；短语)
佳句积累
他人经历对自己的影响
His
story
taught
me
not
to
give
up
my
dream
and
work
hard
to
make
it
come
true.
(短语)
I
have
learned
that
being
an
independent
child
is
very
important
in
our
daily
life.
(短语；宾语从句)
His
experience
of
helping
others
was
so
moving
that
it
benefited
me
a
lot.
(状语从句；高级词汇)
佳句积累
他人经历对自己的影响
If
we
all
act
like
the
young
woman
and
think
more
of
others,
I
think
our
world
will
be
a
much
more
beautiful
place.
(状语从句；宾语从句)
It
was
the
girl
who
set
a
good
example
to
us
and
I
should
learn
to
be
a
helpful
person
from
her.
(短语；定语从句)
俗语谚语
Labor
is
often
the
father
of
pleasure.
勤劳常为快乐之源。
He
who
laughs
last
laughs
best.
谁笑在最后，谁笑得最好。
All
rivers
run
into
the
sea.
殊途同归。
Failure
is
the
mother
of
success.
失败乃成功之母。
A
thousand-li
journey
is
started
by
taking
the
first
step.
千里之行，始于足下。
He
who
seize
the
right
moment,
is
the
right
man.
谁把握机遇，谁就心想事成。
Nothing
is
impossible
for
a
willing
heart.心之所愿，无所不成。
Great
hopes
make
great
man.
伟大的理想造就伟大的人。
All
things
are
difficult
before
they
are
easy.
凡事必先难后易。
03
写作引领
（GUIDE）
步步引领
实现高分
真题再现
我们每天都要做很多事情，有些还很棘手。请以"I
did
it!"为题根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述件你完成的棘手事情。
要点：
1)你做了什么事情；
2)你是如何做那件事情的；
3)你做完那件事情后的感受。
要求：
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数80左右。
审好题
时态：一般过去时
人称：第一人称
体裁：记叙文
主题：成功经历
列提纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
得到发表演讲的机会。
机会很难得但是有挑战。
不知道该怎么办。
因为从来没有演讲过。
为了做这件事付出了努力。
向他人求助；自己学习；不断练习
结果，我成功地进行了演讲。
大家都很喜欢我的演讲。
I
did
it!
感到很骄傲。
写好句
开头
One
day,
my
teacher
asked
me
to
give
a
speech
at
the
school
meeting.
I
was
very
nervous.
(说明事件)
It’s
a
good
chance
and
a
challenge.
(事件特点)
句子升格：
?
How
nervous
I
was
when
I
was
told
to
give
a
speech!
It’s
a
really
a
good
chance
as
well
as
a
challenge.
(短语；感叹句；状语从句)
写好句
正文
要点一：
(开端)
I
didn’t
know
what
to
do.(事件开始)
I
have
never
given
a
speech
before.
(原因)
句子升格：
?
I
didn’t
know
what
to
do
at
all,
because
I
have
never
given
a
speech
before.
(状语从句；短语)
写好句
要点二：
(过程)
I
asked
my
teacher
for
help
and
she
gave
me
some
useful
advice.
(求助)
I
learnt
about
giving
a
speech
on
the
Internet.
(自学)
I
kept
practicing.
句子升格：
?
I
had
to
did
my
best.
So
I
asked
my
teacher
for
some
advice
on
how
to
give
a
speech,
and
I
learnt
about
it
on
the
Internet.
As
the
saying
goes,
“
Practice
makes
perfect.”
I
practiced
it
over
and
over
again.
(主题句；短语；俗语；状语从句；并列句)
写好句
要点三：(结果)
I
gave
the
speech
successfully.
(成功)
Everyone
liked
my
speech
very
much.
(影响)
句子升格：
?
I
gave
the
speech
so
successfully
that
everyone
enjoyed
it
a
lot.
(状语从句)
写好句
结尾
I
did
it!
(总结，点题)
I
felt
proud.
(感受)
句子升格：
?
I
did
it!
I
was
so
proud
of
myself.
(短语)
成好文
How
nervous
I
was
when
I
was
told
to
give
a
speech!
It’s
a
really
a
good
chance
as
well
as
a
challenge.
At
first,
I
didn’t
know
what
to
do
at
all,
because
I
have
never
given
a
speech
before.
But
I
had
to
did
my
best.
So
I
asked
my
teacher
for
some
advice
on
how
to
give
a
speech,
and
I
learnt
about
it
on
the
Internet.
As
the
saying
goes,
“
Practice
makes
perfect.”
I
practiced
it
over
and
over
again.
Finally,
I
gave
the
speech
so
successfully
that
everyone
enjoyed
it
a
lot.
I
did
it!
I
was
so
proud
of
myself.
04
佳作欣赏
（MODELS）
满分佳作
他山之玉
佳作欣赏
01
由于突如其来的新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情，我们度过了一个特殊的寒假。请以“A
special
winter
vacation
I
had”为题，根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.
要点：1)这个假期有什么特殊之处；
2)你在这个假期做了什么特殊的事情；
3)你做完那件事情后的感受。
2.
要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
佳作欣赏
01
A
special
winter
vacation
I
had
Because
of
the
COVID?19,
people
in
China
had
a
special
Spring
Festival.
Most
of
us
stayed
at
home
instead
of
visiting
relatives
and
friends.
Besides
staying
at
home,
my
parents
and
I
volunteered
in
the
community.
It's
reported
that
elder
people
are
more
likely
to
get
the
disease.
I
suggested
buying
necessary
things
for
elder
people
in
our
community.
My
parents
agreed
with
me.
Every
morning,
we
went
out
with
masks,
bought
the
things
that
elder
people
ordered
the
day
before,
and
then
put
what
we
bought
in
front
of
their
doors.
Later,
they
would
pay
by
WeChat.
We
kept
doing
this
for
over
a
month.
By
helping
others,
I
felt
happy
and
I
really
enjoyed
my
special
winter
vacation.
佳作欣赏
02
人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次……。请根据提示，就你的第一次……写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.
第一次……的整个过程；
2.
你的感受。
要求：
1.
词数：80
—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.
文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
佳作欣赏
02
As
we
all
know,
everyone
has
his
unforgettable
memories.
I
still
remember
the
first
time
to
travel
by
plane.
Last
summer
holiday,
my
parents
and
I
traveled
to
Beijing
.
That
day,
When
the
plane
took
off,
I
felt
it
was
shaking.
But
I
was
not
nervous
because
of
excitement.
After
a
while,
it
stopped
shaking
and
flied
higher.
I
could
see
the
buildings
on
the
ground.
They
became
smaller
and
smaller.
And
finally,
I
couldn't
see
them
anymore.
Through
the
window,
I
could
see
the
blue
sky.
It
was
very
clear.
Clouds
were
under
the
plane.
They
looked
so
different
from
the
ground.
It
was
amazing.
I
like
the
view
very
much.
It
took
only
two
hours
to
get
to
Beijing.
The
Beijing
airport
is
very
large
and
wonderful.
There
are
many
planes
and
people.
I
think
my
trip
will
be
funny.
佳作欣赏
03
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。
(l)
一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。
(2)
地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。
(3)
你认为…．
参考词汇：
开始呕吐
begin
to
vomit
挤向座位
push
towards
the
seat
争吵have
a
quarrel
要求：
(1)词数：80～100个。
(2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
佳作欣赏
03
Wednesday
When
I
took
the
underground
back
home
from
school,
I
noticed
that
a
boy
felt
sick
and
soon
the
boy
began
to
vomit
.
The
waste
was
on
the
floor
and
it
smelt
terrible.
People
in
the
carriage
began
to
over
their
mouths
with
their
hands.
But
to
my
surprise,
a
lady
wearing
nice
clothes
began
to
sweep
the
floor
with
a
broom
and
made
the
floor
clean.
The
boy
felt
very
happy.
Quickly,
the
train
got
to
the
underground
station.
People
stood
up
and
went
to
the
doors
and
some
people
pushed
towards
the
seats.
Unhappily,
some
people
didn’t
get
off
the
train
and
began
to
quarrel
.
They
looked
impolite.
I
think
the
people
should
learn
from
the
lady
who
helped
others
and
obey
the
public
rules.
佳作欣赏
04
幸福是什么？幸福是热气腾腾的早餐，幸福是失意时的鼓励，幸福是奋斗后的喜悦……请以“The
happiness
in
my
life”为题用英语写一篇短文。
要点：1.
叙述让你感到幸福的一件事情；
2．阐明此事让你感到幸福的原因。
要求：1.
词数80左右；
2.
文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
佳作欣赏
04
The
happiness
in
my
life
Our
life
is
full
of
happiness.
I
can
feel
happy
from
time
to
time.
Last
term,
I
was
chosen
to
take
part
in
the
English
Speech
Contest.
I
was
nervous
when
I
heard
the
news,
because
I
was
always
afraid
of
speaking
in
public.
I
wondered
if
I
could
succeed
and
I
wanted
to
give
up.
My
English
teacher
Mary
noticed
that.
She
had
a
long
talk
with
me
and
encouraged
me
to
challenge
myself.
After
that
I
kept
practicing
every
day.
When
I
got
the
first
prize
in
the
contest,
I
felt
happy
from
my
deep
heart.
My
happiness
is
not
only
from
my
teacher’s
encouragement
but
also
from
the
success
through
my
hard
work.Hope
you
can
experience
your
own
happiness
in
your
life.
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