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2021
英语中考写作指导
03.
人际沟通
·
依据中考
·
精选话题
·
素材积累
·
五步成文
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目录
contents
Methods
思路方法
01
Material
素材积累
02
Guide
写作示范
03
Models
优秀作品
04
01
思路方法
(
METHODS)
强化思路
形成习惯
审好题
·
体裁
·
人称
·
时态
·
主题
基本思路
列好纲
·
框架
·
要点
写好句
·
扩展
·
补充
·
解释
成好文
·
衔接
·
检查
时态
体裁
人称
主题
审好题
一般现在时
一般过去时
一般将来时
现在完成时
看提示
看要点
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
记叙文
议论文
说明文
应用文
列好纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
写好句
让语义更准确
利用高级词汇
不怕词数限制
短语替换单词
表达层次清晰
增强句子关联
并列以及复合
提升句子质量
表达强烈感情
感叹疑问祈使
地道英语表达
名言成语俗语
成好文
用连词
巧衔接
查错误
做检查
好书写
认真誊
02
素材积累
(MATERIAL)
积累佳句
提升质量
佳句积累
谈论困惑及解决办法
I
have
trouble
in
managing
my
time
properly
in
school
days.
(短语)
I
pay
much
attention
to
my
grades.
(短语)
We
students
should
try
our
best
to
do
everything
on
time
and
keep
promises.
(短语)
When
I
was
in
class,
I
felt
sleepy
and
didn’t
listen
to
the
teacher
carefully.
(状语从句)
佳句积累
与他人沟通时的问题及建议
I’m
shy,
so
it’s
not
easy
for
me
to
make
friends.
(句型)
Although
he’s
your
best
friend,
you
should
still
tell
him
that
copying
others’
homework
is
wrong.
(宾语从句;状语从句)
If
you
think
you
are
lonely,
you
might
always
be
alone.
(状语从句)
I
found
it
hard
for
me
to
get
along
well
with
students
here.
(短语;句型)
What
matters
most
for
you
is
to
speak
out
your
thoughts
and
have
a
good
talk
with
your
friend.
(短语;从句;)
佳句积累
如何与他人和谐相处
You’d
better
talk
to
him
so
that
you
can
say
you’re
sorry.
(状语从句)
You
should
be
patient
with
her
and
explain
to
her
that
she
can
make
friends
with
your
other
friends
too.
(短语;从句)
It’s
important
to
respect
others,
because
everybody
has
their
own
ways
of
doing
things.
(句型;状语从句)
佳句积累
他人经历对自己的影响
If
we
all
act
like
the
young
woman
and
think
more
of
others,
I
think
our
world
will
be
a
much
more
beautiful
place.
(状语从句;宾语从句)
It
was
the
girl
who
set
a
good
example
to
us
and
I
should
learn
to
be
a
helpful
person
from
her.
(短语;定语从句)
俗语谚语
Hope
things
work
out.
希望事情顺利进行。
There
is
an
old
saying,
“
Laughter
is
the
best
medicine.”
俗话说,“笑是最好的良药。”
Communication
is
to
understand
one
of
the
most
efficient
way.沟通是了解的一种最快捷的方式。
A?single?silk?does?not?make?a?thread,?a?single?tree?does?not?make?a?forest.单丝不成线,独木不成林。?
03
写作引领
(GUIDE)
步步引领
实现高分
真题再现
爱思考的人善于提出问题。而提出问题有助于解决我们生活或学习中的困难。请以“A
question
I
asked”为题,并根据要点和要求用英文写一篇短文。
1.要点:
1)你提出的问题是什么;
2)你为什么提出这个问题;
3)你提出的问题有什么结果。
2.要求:
1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名.
2)词数100左右。
审好题
时态:一般过去时
人称:第一人称
体裁:记叙文
主题:提过的问题
列提纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
提出问题可以解决困难。
我仍然记得两年前提过的一个问题。
怎么记单词?
记单词让人头痛。
向老师提问。
老师给我讲记单词的方法。
我按照老师的方法记单词。
记单词不再困难了。
因为记更多单词,英语进步了。
我感到更自信了。
写好句
开头
Asking
questions
can
help
to
solve
problems.
(背景)
I
still
remember
a
question
I
asked
two
years
ago.
(入题)
句子升格:
?
Asking
a
good
question
is
helpful
to
solve
problems.
I
still
remember
a
question
I
asked
when
I
in
Grade
Seven.
(短语;状语从句)
写好句
正文
要点一:
Two
years
ago,
I
began
to
learn
English.
Remembering
words
is
so
hard.
句子升格:
?
Two
years
ago,
I
found
it
difficult
to
remember
so
many
words
as
I
learned
English.
(句型)
写好句
要点二:
(过程)
I
asked
my
English
teacher,
“Why
should
I
remember
so
many
words?
It’s
really
difficult.”
(提问)
My
English
teacher
said,
“
You
needn’t
only
remember
them.
You
can
learn
them
by
using
them.
Keeping
using
them
and
then
you
can
remember
them.”
(答案)
写好句
要点二:
(过程)
句子升格:
?
I
asked
my
English
teacher
why
should
I
remember
words.
She
said,
“Words
are
not
for
remembering
but
for
talking
and
writing.
You
can
remember
them
as
long
as
you
stick
to
using
them.”(宾语从句;短语;状语从句)
写好句
要点三:
I
followed
my
teacher’s
advice
and
try
to
use
them
in
my
talking
and
writing.
I
found
remembering
words
isn’t
difficult
any
more.
句子升格:
?
I
followed
her
advice
and
tried
to
use
words
in
my
talking
and
writing.
To
my
surprise,
remembering
words
didn’t
seem
to
be
difficult
any
more.
(短语)
写好句
结尾
I
made
great
progress
in
learning
English
because
of
the
answer
to
the
question
I
asked.
(总结)
I
felt
confident
about
myself.
(感受)
句子升格:
?
I
was
happy
that
I
made
great
progress
because
I
asked
a
useful
question.
And
I
felt
confident
about
myself
from
then
on.
(短语;从句)
成好文
Asking
a
good
question
is
helpful
to
solve
problems.
I
still
remember
a
question
I
asked
when
I
in
Grade
Seven.
Two
years
ago,
I
found
it
difficult
to
remember
so
many
words
as
I
learned
English.
I
asked
my
English
teacher
why
should
I
remember
words.
She
said,
“Words
are
not
for
remembering
but
for
talking
and
writing.
You
can
remember
them
as
long
as
you
stick
to
using
them.”
I
followed
her
advice
and
tried
to
use
words
in
my
talking
and
writing.
To
my
surprise,
remembering
words
didn’t
seem
to
be
difficult
any
more.
I
was
happy
that
I
made
great
progress
because
I
asked
a
useful
question.
And
I
felt
confident
about
myself
from
then
on.
04
佳作欣赏
(MODELS)
满分佳作
他山之玉
范文
When
I
began
to
learn
English,
remembering
words
was
a
big
headache
to
me.
Even
though
I
could
remember
some,
they
went
out
of
my
mind
soon.
I
was
hopeless.
One
day
I
asked
my
teacher
a
question
before
I
gave
up,
“Why
do
I
have
to
remember
words?”
The
teacher
said
,
“Words
are
not
for
remembering
but
for
talking
and
writing.
Keep
using
them
and
you
will
remember
them”
I
took
her
advice
and
tried
to
use
words
in
my
talking
and
writing.
To
my
surprise,
learning
words
by
heart
doesn’t
seem
to
be
a
problem
any
more.
佳作欣赏
01
俗话说,远亲不如近邻。邻里之间应该互相帮助,和睦相处。请你以“How
can
I
get
along
with
neighbors”为题,并根据以下要点和要求写一篇英语短文。
1.
要点:1)你是如何与邻居友好相处的;
2)你从中学到了什么。
2.
要求:1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数100左右。
佳作欣赏
01
How
can
I
get
along
with
neighbors
As
the
saying
goes,
“A
close
neighbor
is
better
than
a
brother
far
away.”
In
my
opinion,
having
a
good
relationship
with
my
neighbors
is
very
important.
First
of
all,
whenever
I
meet
them,
I
should
say
hello
to
them
politely.
It's
a
good
way
to
show
my
kindness.
Besides,
when
our
neighbors
are
in
need,
I
always
try
my
best
to
help
them.
Helping
others
is
also
helping
myself.
Last
but
not
least,
I
like
to
share
my
delicious
food
or
my
happiness
and
sadness
with
them.
In
this
way,
we
can
have
the
chance
to
know
more
about
each
other.
Following
those
advice,
I
believe
you
can
also
enjoy
the
environment
and
make
more
friends.
佳作欣赏
02
某英语报社开辟专栏“Reading
Is
Very
Important”,向中学生征稿。假设你叫李华,请写一篇英语征文,向该报社投稿,内容如下:
1.阅读的益处:
①获取大量知识;②给生活带来乐趣;③是一种放松的好方式。
2.你的阅读习惯。
3.号召大家多阅读。
要求:
1.所写内容必须包括以上要点;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.内容连贯,并进行合理拓展;
4.100词左右,题目和开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
佳作欣赏
02
It's
very
important
for
us
students
to
do
some
reading.We
can
get
knowledge
through
reading.It
can
not
only
open
our
minds
but
also
make
us
cleverer
and
happier.Our
study
will
be
improved
if
we
read
more
books.It's
a
good
way
to
relax.
Reading
also
helps
us
grow
up.
I
spend
half
an
hour
reading
before
going
to
bed
every
day.
I
like
reading
classical
novels.However,it's
a
great
pity
that
many
activities
such
as
playing
with
the
smart
phone,listening
to
music,watching
TV
and
going
online
take
up
much
of
our
reading
time.So
here,I
would
like
to
suggest
that
everyone
should
read
more
books
and
read
good
books.When
you
read
books,you
had
better
take
some
notes.It
will
be
good
for
us!
Let's
start
reading
now!
佳作欣赏
03
文明礼貌从我做起,从现在开始,从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求,以
“When
to
Say
Thank
You”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1)
When
should
we
say
“thank
you”
at
home?
2)
When
are
we
supposed
to
say
“thank
you”
at
school?
3)
...
要求:1)
短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点,可适当发挥。
2)
短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3)
词数100个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇:wash,
encourage,
open
It’s
polite
to
say
“thank
you”
when
others
help
us
or
say
something
kind
to
us.
___________________________________________________
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03
It’s
polite
to
say
“thank
you”
when
others
help
us
or
say
something
kind
to
us.
For
example,
when
Mom
or
Dad
washes
the
clothes
,
cleans
the
room
or
cooks
dinner
for
us,
we
should
say
“thank
you”
to
them.
At
school,
when
someone
lends
us
a
pen
or
hands
us
something,
it’s
nice
to
say
“thank
you”.
If
a
teacher
says
“well
done”
to
encourage
us,
we’re
supposed
to
say
“thank
you”.
Whenever
someone
holds
the
door
open
for
us,
we
should
also
say
“thank
you.”
Be
polite
and
always
remember
to
say
“thank
you”
佳作欣赏
04
在成长过程中,青少年面临越来越多的烦恼,主要体现在精神压力太大。请以此为话题写一篇100词左右的短文。
要点提示:
1.
导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因;
(1)学业
(2)与他人相处
2.
减少压力的措施:
(1)积极参加课外活动
(2)多余他人交流沟通
3.
简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法。(至少一点)
注意:
1.
文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.
文章必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯。
3.
不可逐词翻译,英语肚子的见解并适当发挥。
4.
文章不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
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04
We
teenagers
have
more
and
more
pressure
while
growing
up.
The
main
reason
for
pressure
is
schoolwork
and
to
get
along
with
others.
Students
have
been
competing
with
each
other
since
they
were
very
young,
which
brings
them
too
much
pressure.
Some
students
don'
t
know
how
to
get
along
well
with
others.
They
feel
lonely.
This
can
also
bring
them
pressure
and
worries.
I'II
give
you
some
ways
to
relieve
pressure.
First
of
all,
you
need
to
take
part
in
all
kinds
of
class
activities,
such
as
sports
meetings,
football
games
and
singing
competitions.
In
addition,
you
should
be
active
in
group
work
in
class
and
be
brave
enough
to
express
your
ideas.
Try
to
communicate
with
your
classmates
as
often
as
possible.
In
my
opinion,
pressure
is
not
a
bad
thing.
Proper
pressure
is
beneficial
to
our
growth
and
development.
If
a
person
doesn’t
have
pressure,
he
will
become
lazy
easily.
We
should
learn
to
face
pressure
in
our
life.
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