浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（1-10）

浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（9）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “ Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground.
They picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it with rice and water. Under their treatment and care, the lucky birds got recovered soon. When time came for them fly the bird back to nature, they felt a bit pity but very delighting.
I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respect for nature. Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along good with it.
书面表达（满分30分）
据调查， 高一学生课外阅读的时间每周平均为7小时，高二为4小时，高三为2小时。请你根据这一信息，以 “Senior High School Students’ Extracurricular Reading”为题，用英语按以下要点为你校校报写一篇120词左右的短文。
描述以上有关高中生进行课外阅读的情况；
分析原因（如没认识到阅读的重要性、作业多等）；
简短评论。
注意：文章的标题和开头已给出（不记词数）。
Senior High School Students’ Extracurricular Reading
A recent survey suggests that Senior High School students’ extracurricular reading varies from grade to grade.
短文改错
1. was---were 2. catch---caught 3. out---up 4. to home---home 5. but---and
6. birds---bird 7. fly---to fly 8. delighting---delighted 9. him---them 10. good---well
书面表达：
Senior High School Students’ Extracurricular Reading
A recent survey suggests that Senior High School students’ extracurricular reading varies from grade to grade. On average, Grade 1 students spend seven hours per week reading, Grade 2 four hours and Grade 3 two hours.
It occurs to that the distinction among students in different grades must have something to do with the increasing homework and pressure. As a result, students have to spend much more time preparing for tests, which leads them to the loss of their awareness of the importance of reading, as well as steals their passion.
In my pinion, both parents and schools should create a better environment to increase students’ reading time. For example, parents can read together with children on weekends and schools encourage students’ reading by reducing schoolwork.
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21世纪教育网浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（2）
第一 节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend/\ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8pm in Friday evening.
on
Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for him. In the morning I buy some flowers with my pocket money and put them in a vase. In the afternoon, I went to buy some vegetable and cooked simple but delicious dinner for my family. After the meal, I gave mother a card what I made myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention on her health and not overwork. I also promised to help her to do some housework from today on. Heard the words, mother was moved to tears.
Today is a specially day, warm but meaningful.
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
目前一所知名高中决定在初中毕业生中降分招收音乐、体育特长生，这一做法在社会上引起了很大反响。请你根据以下所给观点，就其利弊给一家英文报纸写一篇英语短文，并提出自己的观点。
支持者观点：1. 特长生有机会上好高中。
2. 有助于学生全面发展。
反对者观点：1.实际操作中标准不易掌握。
2. 诚信和公正受到挑战。
注意： 1.词数100-120左右，信的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
2. 可根据内容要点提示适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
3. 不要逐字逐词翻译。
参考词汇: 标准: standard; 公正: justice; 诚信: honesty；
Dear Editor,
　　It’s reported that a famous high school will admit some junior high school graduates who are specialized in music or PE. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第一节：短文改错
1. him---her 2. buy---bought 3. vegetable---vegetables 4. cooked∧a
5. what ---that/which或去掉 6. on---to 7. not∧to
8. Heard---Hearing 或∧Having 9. specially ---special 10. but---and
第二节：书面表达
One possible version：
Dear Editor,
It’s reported that a famous high school will admit some junior high graduates who are specialized in music or PE. This has aroused a heated discussion in society. Opinions are divided.
Some people who support the idea hold that enrolling students with special talents in music or PE shows scores are not the only means to decide whether students can get into a good high school. Thanks to such a change, some excellent students can be admitted by a good school now, which in turn will encourage students’ all-round development. Meanwhile, others argue that it’s difficult to adopt practical standards which can be accepted by society. Besides, it will greatly challenge the honesty and justice.
In my opinion, I think it is a good try and of great benefit if the headmasters can avoid the disadvantages，such as injustice and dishonesty.
Best wishes！
　　 Yours sincerely,
　　 Li Hua
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第一节：短文改错（满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the
ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent
that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a
while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what
shall I do On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to
her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.
第二节：书面表达(满分30分)
在学习、生活和工作中，学会与人合作是非常重要的。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇主题为“Being a Good Partner”的英文演讲稿。
演讲稿内容如下：
为何与人合作 1．现代社会应该具备的基本素质。
2．可省时间和精力。
与谁合作 1．与喜欢的人合作 心情愉快，同甘共苦。
2．与不喜欢的人合作 宽容缺点，发现优点。
你的观点 ……
写作要求： 1．句子结构准确，信息内容完整、连贯。
2．词数：120词左右。演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．参考词汇：cooperate vi．合作
Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Being a good partner”.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening!
【改错】
One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I∧told that the
for was
ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent
tickets strong
that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a
去掉 hesitating
while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what
But
shall I do On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to
should the off
her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.
作文：
A possible version:
In this busy, modern world, if we want to complete our work more efficiently, we must all learn to cooperate with others, which save us a lot of time and energy.
We’ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him. However, it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike. In this case, we’ll have to learn to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.
In my opinion, to be a good partner, we should try to listen to others’ opinions, never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes, try to point them out in a polite way.
Thank you for your listening!
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第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧weekend with you. Luckily theI was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m. inam onFriday evening.
After our final examinations, my brother and me thought we would give ourselves a treat
at restaurant. While waiting for our food, we emptied all our small changes from our wallets
on the table and counted it out. Soon, our food arrived with a note. It reads, “Your lunch has been
paid for. Have a lovely meal!” It was a wonderfully surprise as nothing like that had ever been
happened to us. I remembered an old man sitting nearby. He should have thought we didn’t have
enough money to the bill. We looked around to thank him, and he was not there. His kindness
meant so many to us.
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
请根据下图写一篇100—120个词的短文。你的短文应包括下列要点：
1. 简要描写图画内容；
2. 说明图画含义；
3. 表达你的观点。
注意：1. 短文的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）；
2. 参考词汇：spoil 宠坏
Too Much Care Spoils a Child
As is shown in the picture above, ________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
第一节 （10分，每小题1分）
After our final examinations, my brother and me thought we would give ourselves a treat
I
at ∧ restaurant. While waiting for our food, we emptied all our small changes from our wallets
a change
on the table and counted it out. Soon, our food arrived with a note. It reads, “Your lunch has been
read
paid for. Have a lovely meal!” It was a wonderfully surprise as nothing like that had ever been
wonderful
happened to us. I remembered an old man sitting nearby. He should have thought we didn’t have
must
enough money to the bill. We looked around to thank him, and he was not there. His kindness
for but
meant so many to us.
much
第二节（30分）
One possible student version
As is shown in the picture above, the blooming plant is being destroyed by over-watering. Often people do things with good intentions, but the result may be quite different. Such can also be the case with us while we grow up.
To spare us the kind of hardships they had in their childhood, our parents tend to offer us too much care, for example, making beds, washing clothes and even carrying school bags for us. They are doing all these without knowing that they are actually spoiling us. As children, what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent. Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities.
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第一节：短文改错（满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend /\ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday evening.
on
Dear Jim,
Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. I'd like to tell you something about our
school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.20, which was a fine day. There were over 1,600 students
and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the
race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sports meet
was great success. That was why we were all making every effort to our class honor.
Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of what we had done.
Looking forward to receiving your letter.
Yours,
Li Ping
第二节 书面表达 (满分30分)
近些年来，一些中学把电子设备iPad引进了课堂，用iPad下载教材代替传统教材，并辅助教学活动。请您根据以下要点给自己的英文博客写一篇文章，谈谈你周围同学对此现象的看法，并发表自己的看法和理由。
同学看法1 节约纸张；有利环保；方便高效
同学看法2 价格昂贵；容易使人沉迷于电子游戏
你的看法和理由 ……
注意：词数100-120左右；文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
In some middle schools, iPads are introduced into classrooms to replace traditional textbooks and assist teachers as well as students in teaching and learning.
第一节：短文改错（满分10分）
recently改recent holding改held; attend改attending; finishes改finished;
去掉down; They改We; great前加a; why改because;
to改for winner改 winners
第二节 书面表达 (满分30分)
In some middle schools, iPads are introduced into classrooms to replace traditional textbooks and assist teachers as well as students in teaching and learning. For us students, we have different opinions toward this phenomenon. Some of us hold the view that it’s a better way to save paper, which definitely does good to environment protection. Moreover, using iPads brings us efficiency and convenience.
However, others tend to believe that iPad costs so much money that not everyone can afford it. Besides, if we spend large quantities of time playing games on it, there is a high risk of being addicted to it, which of course will have bad impact on study.
As for me, I’m in favor of using iPad for we can search for abundant information which can’t be found in traditional textbooks. Of course, every bean has its black. Therefore, it’s a matter of how we can use it properly, not whether we should use it.
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第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线， 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I the was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday. am on
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thinking about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finished your studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company in our city hope to hire people like you. For another reason I think it will be too more convenient for you look after your parents as they are getting old. And this is only my point of view. It is up to you to make right choice.
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
假如你是李华,本周五来自Z大学的外籍教师John Smith教授给你班上了一节英语课。请你以 An Impressive English Lesson为题为校报School Express写一篇英文报道。
内容须包括下列要点:
教授上课情况(幽默、易懂...)。
学生课堂表现(积极、投入...）。
你的感受和启发。
注意：
⒈ 不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节；
⒉ 词数：120字左右，开头已经写好（不计入总词数）。
An Impressive English Lesson
On Friday of Week, we had the honour of inviting Prof.John Smith, a foreign teacher from Z University, to give a class to the students in my class.
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thinking
ago
about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finished your
asked finishing
studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our
what
country. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company in
easy companies
our city hope to hire people like you. For another reason I think it will be too more convenient
for you∧ look after your parents as they are getting old. And this is only my point of view. It is
to But
up to you to make∧ right choice.
a
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
One possible version:
An Impressive English Lesson
On Friday of Week, we had the honour of inviting Prof.John Smith, a foreign teacher from Z University, to give a class to the students in my class. Professor John Smith had a free talk with the students in simple but humorous English in his class, which left the students a deep impression. He spoke slowly and clearly so that students could follow him well. Meanwhile, what students did not understood would be repeated just in time. Greatly inspired, most of the students took an active part in his class and were attracted in English talking. After class, many students interviewed sang high praise for his teaching.
Form his lesson, I came to the conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English well if you talk more in English. Only if you find the correct method can you make much more progress in English.
By Li Hua, School Weekly Express.
Yours,
Li Hua
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第一节：短文改错（满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Rush buying of salt by worrying shoppers had emptied supermarket shelf in Zhejiang,
Guangdong, Jiangxi, Guizhou, Sichuan, Jiangsu and Hubei provinces so well as the cities of
Beijing or Chongqing.
The MOC（Chinese Ministry of Commerce）took some measures immediately and was ordered
local commerce departments to close monitor the market and organize timely distribution of
goods meet people’s needs, according to the statement.
The MOC advised shops and supermarkets to decrease their salt storage if necessary and
supply the product in an orderly and balanced way.
Also, China Salt had launched （启用）an emergency response mechanism to step up
production and start a 24-hours distribution program.
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
给你的英语老师发一封英文电邮，告诉他你已经被香港科技大学（The Hong Kong University of Science and Technology）大学录取，你想请他再给你一些如何提高听力和口语的建议。
注意：1、词数100-120，开头与结尾已给出，不计词数。
2、参考词汇：aural 听觉的
Dear Sir,
…　　
Wu Yang
第一节
Rush buying of salt by worrying shoppers had emptied supermarket shelf in Zhejiang,
worried shelves
Guangdong, Jiangxi, Guizhou, Sichuan, Jiangsu and Hubei provinces so well as the cities of
as
Beijing or Chongqing.
and
The MOC（Chinese Ministry of Commerce）took some measures immediately and was ordered local commerce departments to close
closely
monitor the market and organize timely distribution of goods ∧meet people’s needs, according to
to
the statement.
The MOC advised shops and supermarkets to decrease their salt storage if necessary and
increase
supply the product in an orderly and balanced way.
Also, China Salt had launched(启用) an emergency response mechanism to step up production and
has
start a 24-hours distribution program.
24-hour
第二节：
One possible student version
Dear Sir,
I’m so excited to tell you that I have received the letter of admission from The Hong Kong University of Science and Technology. I will leave for Hong Kong on August 21.
I am now very busy preparing for this trip. I spend most of my time improving my oral and aural English these days. You know I have a good command of written English. But my listening and speaking ability of English is far behind. I am afraid that this will prevent me from communicating effectively with my future teachers and peers. Can you just suggest any good way of improving my oral English skills quickly I am a bit anxious recently. Anyway, I will try my best.
Best wishes! 　
Wu Yang
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21世纪教育网浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（1）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way.
Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
某英文报纸就“中国城市普遍存在的交通拥堵问题”邀请中学生展开讨论。请你参考所给要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1. 简要描述这一交通问题；
2. 分析造成该问题的主要原因；
3. 提出相应的建议。
注意：词数100—120，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China, more and more traffic problems are arising. __________________________________________________________________________________
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第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike.
when
He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man
him
to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him
but had
where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to
check
call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the
删去 using
mouth-to-mouth way.
Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said
minutes
that ∧we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first
what
aid can make a really difference.
real
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
One possible version：
In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China, more and more traffic problems are arising. A serious one is heavy traffic. Very often, we see cars in front of us parked on both sides of the street, driving down the street, or stuck in traffic with drivers waiting impatiently. So what on earth causes this problem
In the first place, vast population contributes to heavy traffic and growing numbers of private cars add to the pressure on the severe traffic conditions. What’s worse, some people are unaware of the importance of obeying traffic regulations, so it’s not uncommon to see accidents blocking traffic.
Personally, I think that rather than promote private cars, it’s better to improve the public transportation system with scientific road design and proper management. More importantly, never can traffic jams be eased without self-disciplined citizens.
(123 words)
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21世纪教育网浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（7）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend /\ weekend with you．Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”．I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday
on
evening．
A Frenchman was once visiting London．He wished to take a walk to see a city．But he was afraid he might get lost because he knew no words of English．So before he left his hotel, he stopped in the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street that he was staying．Then he walked on．At last, he got being lost．After several hours he found a policeman．The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn’t know the name of his hotel, and he knew the name of the street．He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook．It was read: “One-way street”．
第二节：书面表达（共1题，满分30分）
私家车在城市越来越普遍，在给人民带来生活便利的同时，也造成了环境污染、交通堵塞等一系列问题，请你写一篇短文，词数在100字左右。要求如下：
1. 描述私家车在日常生活中的利弊。
2.谈谈自己的看法：如何克服众多的私家车带来的问题 如果有一天你有足够的钱来买车，你是否会考虑买一辆车 为什么
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
A Frenchman was once visiting London．He wished to take a walk to see a （the） city．But
he was afraid he might get lost because he knew no words of English．So before（after）he left his hotel, he stopped in （at） the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names （name）of the street that （where） he was staying ．Then he walked on ．At last, he got being （去掉）lost．After several hours he found a policeman ．The Frenchman tried his best to explain （explain to） the policeman that he didn’t know the name of his hotel, and （but） he knew the name of the street．He then showed the policeman that （What） he copied in his notebook．It was （去掉） read : “One-way street”．
第二节：书面表达（共1题，满分30分）
A car is a symbol of modern society. It makes our life more comfortable. It’s also very cool and fashionable, and attracts much attention. But every coin has two sides. Cars make the air polluted and careless driving causes traffic problems. Every year many people die in road accidents.
I am a car fan. I think I will buy an environmentally friendly car in the future, for that doesn’t create pollution. I believe more and more people will buy cars, although there are side effects. So the government should take measures to smooth the traffic, such as widening the roads and building overpasses. I still suggest people use public transport during rush hours.
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21世纪教育网浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（6）
第一节： 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Ask your friend that he can use a glass of water as a musical instrument．Of course, he
can’t．Then you take a glass of water．You put your finger in water and then move it slow round
the rim of the glass, as shown in the picture．Your finger must not be much wet, but it must not
be dry．So you must try many time．At last you will hear clear music which comes from the
glass．When your finger moves round the rim, it makes the glass to vibrate and the glass makes a
musical voice．The same principle makes the violin or its strings give music．
The America scientist Benjamin Franklin made a musical instrument out of glass bowls．He
used the different principle．
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
有的学校在向学生发放练习册时，总是将后面的答案和解释部分撕掉。这种做法是否符合学生
的意愿？老师就此进行了问卷调查。调查结果显示，大多数（73．3%）同学反对这种做法，近五分之一（18．6%）的同学赞同这种做法，其余同学的态度则是“随便”。不少同学发表了自己的看法（见下表）。
请你根据提供的信息写一篇短文，并简述你自己的观点。
反对者主要认为： 赞同者主要认为：
1、可及时校对答案2、便于当场纠正错误3、有利于提高学习效率 1、可防止抄答案2、有助于独立思考3、有助于增强自信心
注意：
1、篇幅要求：100～120词。
2、短文的开头已给出，不计词数。
The results of the survey show that the majority of students （73．3%） disagree to this kind of
practice．_____________________________________________________________________
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第一节（短文改错；满分10分）
Ask your friend that he can use a glass of water as a musical instrument．Of course, he
if / whether
can’t．Then you take a glass of water．You put your finger in/\water and then move it slow round
the slowly
the rim of the glass, as shown in the picture．Your finger must not be much wet, but it must not
very / too
be dry．So you must try many time．At last you will hear clear music which comes from the
times
glass．When your finger moves round the rim, it makes the glass to vibrate and the glass makes a
musical voice．The same principle makes the violin or its strings give music．
sound and
The America scientist Benjamin Franklin made a musical instrument out of glass bowls．He
American
used the different principle．
same
第二节（书面表达；满分30分）
On the other hand, about one fifth of the students （18．6%） agree to it．They think it prevents some
students copying the answers and helps to increase their self-confidence．Thus, they will think more for themselves．
In my opinion, …．
下面文字仅供参考：
In my opinion, we should not do our homework while looking at the answers．We should refer to them
only when we have finished doing it but are not sure whether we have done it right．
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