浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（26）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每次错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A lady once wrote a long story and sent to a famous editor．After a few week, the story was returned to her．The lady got very angrily．She wrote to the editor, “Dear sir, how do you know why the story is not good You didn't read it．After I sent it to you, I pasted pages 21, 22 or 23 together．This was a test to see whether I would really read the story．When it came back, the pages still pasted together．Is this the way in that you read the stories that are sent to you ” The editor writes back, “Dear madam, at breakfast when I open an egg, I don't have to eat the whole egg in order to discover that it is bad．”
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
假如你是中学生宗华，你的美国朋友Jack给你的来信中寄来了一张自己的照片，请用英语给他写一封回信，内容如下：
1．表示惊讶；
2．介绍抽烟的危害；
3．给出戒烟的方法。
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短文改错(10%)
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改 后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Though great progress has been made in science these years, but there are still many people live
in poor conditions. They make their living by collecting and selling used thing. Their children
cannot go to school because they have not enough money to send their children to there. Why
you think so many people still suffer from poverty now The answer lies on the population
explosion. A president of a developing country once say: “It is us who are to blame for the
poverty because we used to ‘produce’ children without limit.” Although this few words sound
simple enough, they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.
书面表达（满分30分）
假如你是李华，你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题
班会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你对如何创建“平安校园”的一些想法。短文应
该包括下面的内容：
1．安全意识的重要性； 2．在运动中要注意安全；
3．在校内要注意人身安全； 4．同学间发生矛盾时，一定要保持冷静、理智；
5．逐步将“平安校园”活动转化为全体师生的实际行动。
注意：
1．不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
2．词数100--120个左右；
3．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
注释：校园安全 safety at school
My dear classmates,
There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. Recently our school
has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on.____________
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每次错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Li Mei,
With the mid-term exam come, you must get prepared for them. I think that you need is a
right study method. As we all know, there are three stage in study--- preview, study in class and review, among which review was the most important. You should first make a review plan, and then stick to it.
I follow my review plan strictly and have made a progress in my study. It turns out to be good enough. Of course, there are more than one way to review. So long as you review regular, I’m sure you can find more ways to study well.
If you have any question of subjects, you may ask me I’m glad to help you. We may meet in our school library every Friday afternoon.
Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
一个周六的下午，“绿眼睛”环保组织成员李华和王平在河边开展环保行动时发现了一只小鸟受伤了，在地上无法飞行, 于是他们展开了抢救行动。你就此事写一篇新闻报道。要点如下：
1. 时间、地点、情景；
2. 描述处理方式, 包括救助, 治疗, ……
3. 简要谈谈你的感想。
注意：词数100-120；已给部分不计词数;
参考词汇：“绿眼睛”环保组织: Green Eyes
Saving The Wounded Bird
One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “Green Eyes”,
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作文：One possible version:
One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “Green Eyes”, were having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they caught sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it up and found it wounded.
Thinking it might die without timely help, they took it home. They made a nest for it and fed it with rice and water. Under their treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. When time came for them to fly the bird back to nature, they felt a bit pity but very delighted.
I think it’s worthwhile for them to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respect to nature. Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along well with it.
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第一节：短文改错（满分10分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改 后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend /\ weekend with you. Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday
on
evening.
Most of the large cities in the world have grown without plans, among that London is such a city.
Its streets wind its way and there is no reason or order to its street numbering system. Indeed,
no one but a practical taxi driver knows the whole of London. And before he gets his license, he
must first tour the city for month, street by street, and then take a test to prove that whether he can find
his way about. New York and Chicago grew in much the same way. They spread out like pouring water
expanding at all directions.
However, there are a few modern cities built strict according to detailed plans. The prime
example of a city planning and built from scratch in twentieth century is Brasilia, the new capital of
Brazil.
第二节 书面表达 (满分30分)
青云山温泉宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇短文介绍。主要内容包括：
1. 地点：距青云山高速出口500米；
2. 房间及价格：单人间（共30间），150元／天；双人间（共20间），200元／天；
别墅（共20栋），1000元/天；热水淋浴；
3. 餐饮：餐厅（中、西餐），咖啡厅（茶、咖啡）；
4. 环境：群山环绕，景色宜人；
5. 娱乐：温泉主题公园，游泳池，各种各样的温泉池。从早上10点到晚上10点，免费开放；
6. 欢迎预定。
注意：字数：100---120。 参考单词： villa: cn. 别墅
that----which 2. its---their 3. practiced 4. months 5. whether---/
6. grew---grow 7. at---in 8. strictly 9. planned 10. ︿ the
Possible version:
Welcome to Qingyunshan Hot Spring Hotel
Qingyunshan Hot Spring Hotel is now open for business.
Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Qingyunshan Mountain Motorway. It has 30 single rooms, 20 double rooms and 20 villas, all with hot showers. A single room is 150 yuan, a double room 200 yuan and a villa 1000 yuan for one night. Our hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the café drinking tea or coffee in the evening. Surrounded by mountains, our hotel shall provide the guests with a gorgeous view. We also have a hot spring theme park with a swimming pool and various hot spring pools included, which is open from 10:00 a.m. to 10:00 p.m. and free of charge.
Your reservation is welcome. We’ll go to great lengths to make you feel at home.
All are welcome!
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短文改错（共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. LuckilyI was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday evening.
Last weekend I went to Jiangbin Park as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near Xinchang River while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
书面表达（满分15分）
随着网络的普及，越来越多的中学生上网交友。某英语报社就“Should students make friends online ”这个主题进行了征文大赛。请你给英语报社投一篇稿子。
内容要点：1、网上交友的优点。 2、网上交友的弊端。 3. 你自己的看法。
注意: 1). 词数：120左右（开头已为你写好，不计入总词数）
2). 必须使用手写印刷体，书写工整，字迹清楚。
3). 抄写阅读理解文章得零分，空白者报教务处处理。
Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hung out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.
短文改错（共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分）
Last weekend I went to Jiangbin Park as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near Xinchang River while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud∧what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
书面表达（满分15分）
One possible version
Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hung out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.
The Internet helps students make as many friends as they want easily. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely. Thus they can also ease their anxiety from their studies. Some students even get help with their foreign language studies.
However, each coin has two sides. Making friends online can no doubt waste much of students’ precious time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students sometiomes get cheated online.
In my opinion, students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmate other people around us.
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短文改错 （共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分）
英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误，每句最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
3 必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the
street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young
man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell
off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t
know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached.
They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote
something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
书面表达(满分30分)
高中生在成长的过程中会碰到一些烦恼。就这一话题你班正积极筹备召开一次主题班会。请你依据下表进行必要的思考，并用英语准备一篇发言稿。
Pains solutions
相貌、体形不美 不必在意
不被他人理解，朋友少 加强沟通
学习滞后，压力大 ？
零花钱不多 ？
…
注意：1.词数：100左右；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．语言通顺，结构严谨。
Boys and girls，
We high school students do have some growing pains，but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.________________________________________________________________________
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第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
例如：It was very nice to get invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily theI was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at am around 8 pm in Friday evening. on
My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience. Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often unless we want to win the game.
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
在繁重的课业负担之下，中学生也应该学会适度地自我放松，请你围绕“Ways to get relaxed”这一话题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：
1、自我放松的途径：看电视、体育锻炼、上网等
2、我更喜欢的途径及理由：……
注意:
在表达“我更喜欢的途径及理由”时,请从要点1中选择一项进行阐述。
词数：100—120，文章开头已给出（不计词数）。
There are various ways to get relaxed for middle school students.
改错1．将was改为am。2．去掉for。3．将match改为matches。4．将Play改为Playing。5．将give改为gives。6．instead后加of。7．important改为importance。8．在captain前加the。9．将they改为we。10. unless--if
作文
One way is to take exercise, walking, running, playing basketball or football, etc. We can also watch TV, where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well. Moreover, we can surf the Internet to get some relaxation and entertainment.
As far as I’m concerned/ As for me, surfing the Internet appeals to me most. For one thing, the Internet offers a wide range of activities for relaxation. In general, I keep track of the latest news as an enjoyment. Sometimes, I play computer games to refresh myself. For another, the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people at home and abroad, for it is a great joy to communicate with them. In addition, having a glimpse of the vivid pictures and live videos on the Internet contributes to regaining my energy.
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第一节：短文改错（满分10分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend /\ weekend with you．Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”．I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday
on
evening．
Proof reading:（1x10=10）
The Swiss people eats more chocolate than any other nation．Switzerland is also the country
where best chocolate is made , though some people argue it is in Belgium．Chocolate
originally came out from South America and it was the Spanish who brought it for Europe．At
first it was used for drinking and was too expensive．Today chocolate was eaten all over the
world and is a multi—millions pound industry．It is one of Switzerland’s biggest industry after
banking．But being careful when you eat chocolate．Some chocolates bars have more than a
thousand calories．（卡路里） ．So better not eat too much of it．
第二节: 书面表达（满分30分）
Composition;（30%）
假设你是学校留学生办公室的 工作人员，本周末你们将组织外国留学生去一个市场购物，旅游。请你依据下列要点写一份通知。
时间，地点：本周六（5月18号）上午8：30，学校大门口。
返回时间：下午5时左右；
目的地：大发市场；（Dafa Market）
费用：180 元（包括大巴，午餐费）；
报名地点：办公室登记姓名。
字数：100——120
The Swiss people eats（1） more chocolate than any other nation．Switzerland is also the country
where ︿ best（2） chocolate is made , though some people argue it is in （3）Belgium．
Chocolate originally came out（4）from South America and it was the Spanish who brought it
for （5）Europe．At first it was used for drinking and was too expensive．Today chocolate
was（6） eaten all over the world and is a multi—millions （7）pound industry．It is one of
Switzerland’s biggest industry （8）after banking．But being （9）careful when you eat chocolate．
Some chocolates （10）bars have more than a thousand calories．（卡路里） ．So better not eat too much of it．
1．eats---eat 2． best---- the best 3．cross out “in” 4．came
out---drop “out” 5 ．for—to 6 ．was----is 7 ．multi-millions---multi-million
8．industries 9．being--be 10．chocolates---chocolate
Trip to Dafa Market
We have arranged a trip for all the international students in the university to visit Dafa Market this Saturday , 18th May．The bus leaves from the university main gate at 8:30 am and returns at around 5:30 pm．
Dafa Market is the biggest in this area．You can buy anything from a hair pin to a fridge．There are also a great variety of traditional Chinese gift products．The market is a popular tourist attraction, too．
You have to pay 180 Yuan for the trip, which covers bus fares and lunch at a restaurant．If you would like to join the trip, please write your name on the sheet posted on the Bulletin Board in the office．
International Programs Office
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每次错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a high school student, I like to talk with foreigners to practise my oral English but learn more about other cultures. There were two foreign teachers in our school in this term. They often go to the English corner so that we can have a chance to practise a language. I seize every chance to talk them. However, I sometime find they are not so interesting in what I say, and it’s hard for I to choose a suitable topic. I would like some advices about how to communicate proper with foreigners, and what topics to pick.
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
假设你是李华，你班来自美国的交流学生Arthur患病住院已有三周，请你用英文给他写封信，主要内容包括：
—询问病情，表示关切
—介绍班级近期活动、学习等情况
—表达祝愿
注意：1. 词数120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Arthur,
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Yours,
Li Hua
短文改错
1. but---and 2. were---are 3.in this term---this term 4. a language---the language
5. talk---talk with 6. sometime---sometimes 7. interesting---interested 8. for I---for me
9. advices---advice 10. proper---properly
Dear Arthur,
It’s three weeks since you fell ill. I guess you have suffered a lot in the hospital, but are you feeling any better now We’re concerned about your health. And we all miss you very much.
In the past three weeks, we've been buried in study because the exam is around the corner. But don’t worry about your lessons, with which all of us will help you when you are back. Besides the routine work, we held a football match in our grade and our class won the championship. If only you had been with us!
We hope you will soon recover and join us in our colorful school life.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
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第一节: 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分;共10分)
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
Ladies and Gentlemen：
Welcomed to the West Lake. First of all, let me make a brief introduction for it .
The West Lake like a shining pearl lying in the west of Hangzhou City. Surrounded by hill on the three sides, it is famous for it beautiful scenery, a plenty of historic sites and a variety of local products. Legend has it that the West Lake was a jewel falling from heaven when geologists insist this place had been a shallow sea gulf before it became that it is today. In any case, the West Lake inspired poets and painters for centuries. Enjoy your trip. Thank you !
第二节: 书面表达(满分30 分)
假设你将作为新华中学高三毕业生代表，请根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一个告别演讲:
1. 感谢家人，朋友和老师。特别举例感谢某个老师（不用真名，一律使用Mr. Zheng），并写出原因。
2. 回顾高中三年的生活。列举出你印象深刻的活动。
3. 展望未来。
注意：开头与结尾已经给出，所写部分120字左右。
Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xnhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2011!
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Possible version
Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xinhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2011!
First, let me thank all our families and friends for their love and support on behalf of the graduates. I also want to thank our diligent teachers for guiding us through to this moment. My personal thanks to Mr Zheng, you got me through Math when I had given up hope.
Graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years. Many events become so vivid in my mind at this moment, military training, soccer and basketball games.
However, graduation is also a time to look forward to the future in front of us. No matter what you plan next, I hope you can go about it positively. Each of you will create your own unique path. Let’s remember the saying “attitude determines altitude”. Please always keep a smile on your face.
Finally, best wishes to the Class of 2011. Thank you very much.
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