2021年上海高考英语一模概要写作真题汇编（含解析）

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2021年上海高三英语一模概要写作汇编
1.宝山区
Beyond
Identity
We
ofte_n_thin_k
of
ourselves
as
our
body,
mind,
and
emotions.
We
take
these
three
elements
and
make
a
combination.
However,
we
also
often
talk
about
a
person’s
soul.
Is
there
any
scientific
basis
for
the
soul?
Surprisingly,
there
is.
Each
unique
personality
a
person
has
(even
in
circumstances
of
memory
loss
and
other
illnesses),
the
feeling
and
identity
of
the
self
beyond
age
(especially
experienced
as
we
grow
older),
and
our
inevitable
subjective
experience
as
an
individual
consist
of
a
scientific
foundation
for
the
soul.
Despite__the_c_onstant
shift
in
the
links
between
our
brain
cells,
we
remain
essentially
the
same
personality.
This
consistency
is
most
obvious
in
the
case
of
mentally
ill
patients
or
people
who
have
experienced
memory
loss.
According
to
Scientific
American:
Basically,
no
matter
what
happens
to
our
brain,
our
unique
personality
seems
to
shine
through.
Besides
on_e???s_pe_rsonality,
the
soul
of
a
person
can
be
identified
through
one’s
consciousness.
Though
we
commonly
identify
with
our
body
and
what
we
see
in
the
mirror,
we
also
have
a
sense
that
we
are
not
a
certain
age—as
our
sense
of
self
usually
leans
less
on
age
and
rather
on
our
subjective
feeling
of
who
we
are
essentially.
Lastly,
eac_h_pers_on
is
inevitably
subjective
about
his
or
her
experience.
Despite
humans
being
very,
very
similar
to
each
other
in
DNA
and
overall
composition,
our
understanding
of
reality
is
vastly
different
from
individual
to
individual.
According
to
Psychology
Today,
“While
science
has
made
tremendous
progress
explaining
the
functioning
of
the
brain,
why
we
have
a
subjective
experience
remains
mysterious.
The
problem
of
the
soul
lies
exactly
here,
in
understanding
the
nature
of
the
self,
the
“I”
in
existence
that
feels
and
lives
life.
The
soul
_of_a_p_erson
is
incredibly
challenging
to
prove
scientifically.
However,
we
can
say
that
the
soul
has
some
basis
in
science.
These
realities
of
our
behavior,
character,
and
the
way
you
notice
things
might
not
be
tested
strictly,
but
they
are
very
difficult
to
deny.
答案：One
possible
version:
The
personality,__the_f_eeling
and
identity
of
the
self,
and
subjective
experience
comprise
a
scientific
basis
for
the
soul
of
a
person.
Whatever
happens
to
the
brain,
the
personality
seems
to
exist.
The
soul
can
also
be
recognized
mainly
through
the
sense
of
the
self
and
their
own
understanding
of
the
nature.
There
is
no
reason
to
deny
it
scientifically.
60
words
原文出处：
_https:///samples/academics/essays/expository/beyond-identity.html_
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。_??????????????????_、自我的感觉和身份，以及主观经验构成了一个人的灵魂的科学基础。不管大脑发生了什么，人格似乎是存在的。灵魂也可以主要通过自我意识和自己对自然的理解来认识。没有理由从科学上否认它。
【详解】1.
要点摘录
1）We
often
think
of
ourselves
as
our
body,
mind,
and
emotions.
2）Despite
t_he_con_stant
shift
in
the
links
between
our
brain
cells,
we
remain
essentially
the
same
personality.
3）Besi_des_on_e’s
personality,
the
soul
of
a
person
can
be
identified
through
one’s
consciousness.
4）Lastl_y,_eac_h
person
is
inevitably
subjective
about
his
or
her
experience.
5）The
_soul_o_f
a
person
is
incredibly
challenging
to
prove
scientifically.
However,
we
can
say
that
the
soul
has
some
basis
in
science.
These
realities
of
our
behavior,
character,
and
the
way
you
notice
things
might
not
be
tested
strictly,
but
they
are
very
difficult
to
deny.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2、3、4四个要点综合进行文章主旨概括，将第2个要点单独具体概括，将第3、4两个要点进行整合，将第5要点总结概括。
3.遣词造句
The
per_sonali_ty,
the
feeling
and
identity
of
the
self,
and
subjective
experience
comprise
a
scientific
basis
for
the
soul
of
a
person.
Whatever
happens
to
the
brain,
the
personality
seems
to
exist.
The
soul
ca_n_also_
be
recognized
mainly
through
the
sense
of
the
self
and
their
own
understanding
of
the
nature.
There
is
no
reason
to
deny
it
scientifically.
【点睛】[高分句型1]__Whate_ver
happens
to
the
brain,
the
personality
seems
to
exist.运用一个复合句对原文第二段进行了概括。其中Whatever引导的让步状语从句。
[高分句型2_]???The__soul
can
also
be
recognized
mainly
through
the
sense
of
the
self
and
their
own
understanding
of
the
nature.
用情态动词+被动语态的简单句对第三段和第四段进行了概括。
2.崇明区
Train
Your
Brain
When
was
_the_la_st
time
something
important
slipped
your
mind?
Fortunately,
memory
can
be
improved.
People’s
ability
to
remember
has
less
to
do
with
natural
talent
than
it
does
with
training
and
practice.
When
stud_ents_w_ant
to
prepare
for
a
test,
they
often
try
to
study
by
simply
reading
over
the
material
again,
copying
notes,
etc.
But
these
methods
of
remembering
are
not
always
effective.
People
remember
more
when
they
actively
engage
with
the
material
they
are
learning
rather
than
passively
receiving
it.
One
great
way
to
do
this
is
to
test
yourself
on
the
material.
Come
up
with
questions
about
the
topic,
and
try
to
answer
them
without
looking
at
your
notes.
It
also
helps
to
try
to
engage
with
the
material
in
different
ways.
For
example,
you
could
write
your
own
outline
or
study
guide.
The
more
you
use
the
information,
the
more
likely
you
are
to
remember
it.
My
music
instruc_tor_sa_id
that
it’s
better
to
practice
for
five
minutes
a
day,
seven
days
a
week,
than
for
two
hours
on
one
day.
The
same
goes
for
remembering
information.
The
more
you
spread
out
the
time
you
spend
reviewing
information,
the
more
likely
you
are
to
remember
it.
A
psychologist,__Herma_nn
Ebbinghaus,
made
an
important
discovery
about
memory
and
forgetting.
He
found
that
people
tend
to
forget
information
in
a
regular
pattern.
They
forget
the
most
information
shortly
after
learning
it.
The
rate
at
which
they
forget
then
slows
down
over
time.
Every
time
the
person
reviews
the
information,
it
causes
them
to
forget
less
of
it—which
means
they
remember
more.
So
it
is
essential
to
review
things
you
want
to
remember
shortly
after
learning
them.
Over
time,
you
can
review
them
less
and
less
frequently.
Applying
t_hese_s_trategies
will
help
improve
your
memory
so
that
you
can
access
everything
you
learn
whenever
you
need
it.
答案:Your
memory
_can_im_prove
if
properly
trained
and
practiced.
Firstly,
instead
of
receiving
what
you
learn
passively,
use
it
actively
and
frequently
in
various
ways,
which
helps
you
remember
it
better.
Secondly,
spend
less
time
reviewing
it
each
time
but
more
frequently.
Lastly,
review
it
soon
after
the
learning.
(49
words)
题源出处：
_https://wenku./view/d90fa5e8876a561252d380eb6294dd88d0d23d78.html_
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，_??????è???????????_习得当，你的记忆力会提高。首先，不要被动地接受你所学的东西，而是积极地、频繁地以各种方式使用它，这有助于你更好地记住它。其次，每次花更少的时间复习，但要更频繁地复习。最后，在学习后很快复习。
【详解】1
要点摘录
①Fortunately_,_memo_ry
can
be
improved.
People’s
ability
to
remember
has
less
to
do
with
natural
talent
than
it
does
with
training
and
practice.21教育网
②People__remem_ber
more
when
they
actively
engage
with
the
material
they
are
learning
rather
than
passively
receiving
it.
It
also
helps
to
try
to
engage
with
the
material
in
different
ways.
③My
musi_c_inst_ructor
said
that
it’s
better
to
practice
for
five
minutes
a
day,
seven
days
a
week,
than
for
two
hours
on
one
day.
The
more
you
spread
out
the
time
you
spend
reviewing
information,
the
more
likely
you
are
to
remember
it.
④Every
tim_e_the__person
reviews
the
information,
it
causes
them
to
forget
less
of
it—which
means
they
remember
more.
2.缜密构思
将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。
3.遣词造句
Your
memory
can
improve
if
properly
trained
and
practiced.
Firstly,
inste_ad_of__receiving
what
you
learn
passively,
use
it
actively
and
frequently
in
various
ways,
which
helps
you
remember
it
better.
Secondly,
spend
less
time
reviewing
it
each
time
but
more
frequently.
Lastly,
review
it
soon
after
the
learning.
3.奉贤区
Population
Change
of
European
Birds
The
breeding
bir_d_popu_lations
in
Europe
have
seen
a
great
shift
over
the
past
three
decades,
driven
by
both
climate
crisis
and
human
interferences,
according
to
one
of
the
world’s
largest
citizen
science
projects
on
biodiversity.
Overall,
35_%_of_b_irds
increased
their
breeding
range.
Dr.
Iván
Ramírez,
senior
head
of
conservation
at
BirdLife
Europe
and
central
Asia,
said:
“Those
birds
that
have
been
legally
protected
have
been
doing
better
than
those
which
are
not
protected.
This
is
a
really
important
message
within
the
European
Union.
We
have
one
of
the
oldest
policies
–
the
Birds
Directive
–
and
we
can
prove
that
it
works.”
In
additi_on,_as_
the
climate
warms,
forests
are
stretching
into
northern
and
agricultural
regions.
In
parts
of
northern
Europe,
there
has
also
been
tree
planting
(mainly
for
wood
and
paper)
and
land
abandonment
(specifically
in
Mediterranean
areas),
which
benefited
many
woodland
species
such
as
woodpeckers
and
warblers
but
caused
damage
to
a
number
of
other
species
as
well.
The
research
shows
a
total
of
25%
of
birds
now
occupy
a
smaller
area.
Gene_rally,_
farmland
birds
are
bigger
losers,
suffering
overall
declines
in
population
and
reduced
distribution
because
agricultural
intensification
means
there
is
less
food,
such
as
insects
and
remainder
from
harvesting.
The
State
of
Nature
in
the
EU
2013-2018
assessment
showed
80%
of
key
habitats
were
in
poor
or
bad
condition,
and
intensive
farming
is
a
major
driver
of
decline.
The
UK’s
farmland
birds
have
declined
by
55%
since
1970.
“Predicta_bly,_t_here
are
winners
and
losers.
We
can
see
how
some
species
have
expanded
across
the
continent
rapidly
and
have
begun
to
colonize
UK
wetlands.
In
contrast,
we
can
see
ranges
shrinking
as
species
of
northern
Europe
feel
the
impact
of
climate
change,
and
species
such
as
the
dotterel
are
declining
in
numbers
and
range
in
northern
Britain,”
he
said.
答案：European
bird__popul_ations
have
changed
dramatically
due
to
climate
change
and
human
intervention.
Over
one-third
of
birds
have
expanded
breeding
range,
especially
those
legally
protected.
Global
warming
enables
forests
to
expand
further,
benefiting
woodland
inhabitants.
However,
intensive
farming
and
climate
change
caused
reduced
number
and
range
of
some
bird
species,
farmland
birds
in
particular.(54)
题源出处：
_https://theguardian.com/environment/2020/dec/03/atlas-reveals-birds-pushed-further-north-amid-climate-crisis-aoe_
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介_???è???????±????°?_候变化和人类的干预，欧洲鸟类的数量发生了巨大的变化。超过三分之一的鸟类扩大了繁殖范围，特别是那些受法律保护的鸟类。全球变暖使森林面积进一步扩大，使森林居民受益。然而，集约化农业和气候变化导致一些鸟类的数量和范围减少，特别是农田鸟类。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①Th_e_bree_ding
bird
populations
in
Europe
have
seen
a
great
shift
over
the
past
three
decades,
driven
by
both
climate
crisis
and
human
interferences,…
②Overall,
35%
of
birds
increased
their
breeding
range.
③Those
birds
that
have
been
legally
protected
have
been
doing
better
than
those
which
are
not
protected.
④In
addition,
as
the
climate
warms,
forests
are
stretching
into
northern
and
agricultural
regions.⑤The
State
of
Nature
in
the
EU
2013-2018
assessment
showed
80%
of
key
habitats
were
in
poor
or
bad
condition,
and
intensive
farming
is
a
major
driver
of
decline.
The
UK’s
farmland
birds
have
declined
by
55%
since
1970.
2.缜密构思
将第2、3两个要点进行重组，将第5个要点进行精简整合。
3.遣词造句__Over__one-third
of
birds
have
expanded
breeding
range,
especially
those
legally
protected.
However,
intensive
farming
and
climate
change
caused
reduced
number
and
range
of
some
bird
species,
farmland
birds
in
particular.
【点睛】[高分句型1]_Europe_an
bird
populations
have
changed
dramatically
due
to
climate
change
and
human
intervention.用介词短语due
to…改写原句driven
by…，表达非常高级；
[高分句型_2]Glob_al
warming
enables
forests
to
expand
further,
benefiting
woodland
inhabitants.使用现在分词短语作状语，且要点概括精当；
[高分句型3]H_owever_,
intensive
farming
and
climate
change
caused
reduced
number
and
range
of
some
bird
species,
farmland
birds
in
particular.用一个简单句概括了最后一段内容，且用恰当的表转折的副词however连接上下文，使短文连接紧凑条理，逻辑性强。
4.虹口区
Want
to
be
a
Smart
Gift
Giver?
During
all
_kinds__of
holidays,
millions
of
people
will
buy
gifts
for
loved
ones,
which
is
great
except
that
tons
of
those
people
will
make
the
same
glaring
mistake,
and
buy
the
wrong
gifts.
What’s
going
on?21世纪教育网版权所有
Gift
buying
has__becom_e
a
deceivingly
selfish
pursuit.
We
don’t
actually
look
for
things
people
want
to
receive.
Instead,
we
tend
to
look
for
things
that
we
want
to
give.
It’s
a
subtle,
but
pretty
significant
problem.
Research
_has_sh_own
that
givers
tend
to
value
the
gifts
they
buy
considerably
more
than
receivers.
Gifts
are
valued
roughly
10
to
33
percent
less
by
receivers
than
what
givers
paid
for
them.
Joel
Waldfogel
noted
this
in
Scroogenomics:
Why
You
Shouldn’t
Buy
Presents
for
the
Holidays,
his
2009
book
on
gift-giving.
The
difference
s_eems_t_o
come
from
a
simple
misplaced
belief
that
thoughtful
presents
are
the
best
presents.
They
are
not.
In
fact,
they
might
just
be
the
worst
presents.
The
more
thought
you
put
into
a
present,
the
more
likely
you
are
to
stray
from
buying
what
the
person
you
are
buying
the
presents
for
actually
wants.
In
other
wor_ds,_pe_ople
let
their
gift-giving
egos
(自我)
get
in
the
way
of
great
presents,
especially
when
the
receiver
is
someone
they
want
to
show
they
know
really
well.
Fortunately,
the
answer
to
our
collective
insistence
on
guessing
what
people
want
is
simple:
stop
it.
If
that’s
too
i_mperso_nal,
there’s
another
helpful
rule
of
thumb
(经验之谈).
Instead
of
buying
restrictive
gifts,
like
gift
cards
for
specific
stores,
buy
gifts
that
allow
for
flexibility,
like
gift
cards
that
can
be
used
more
broadly
(or,
better
yet,
cash).
People
tend
to
prefer
gift
cards
to
actual
gifts,
and
cash
to
both,
Steffel
explained.
Steffel’s
latest
research,
which
focuses
on
gift
card
giving,
points
to
exactly
this
point
--
that
versatility
(用途广泛)
is
the
key
to
better
gift
giving.
答案：Alt_hough__many
people
buy
gifts
during
holidays,
some
may
choose
the
wrong
gifts.
They
buy
what
they
want
to
give
instead
of
what
recipients
prefer.
As
research
shows,
recipients
value
/
appreciate
gifts
far
less
than
givers.
Actually,
thoughtful
presents
turn
out
the
worst
ones.
Therefore,
stopping
buying
gifts
or
picking
flexible
ones,
preferably
cash,
may
work.
(55w)
原文出处：
_http://language.chinadaily./2015-05/05/content_20622762.htm_
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇说明文。虽然很多_?????¨è????????é??_买礼物，但有些人可能选错了礼物。他们买的是他们想给的东西，而不是受赠者喜欢的东西。研究表明，受赠者对礼物的重视程度远远低于送礼者。实际上，体贴的礼物往往是最糟糕的。因此，停止购买礼物或选择灵活的礼物，最好是现金，可能会奏效。21
cnjy
com
【详解】1
要点摘录
①Durin_g_holi_days,
many
people
will
buy
gifts
for
loved
ones
but
they
may
buy
the
wrong
gifts.
②We
do_n???t_ac_tually
look
for
things
people
want
to
receive
but
choose
things
that
we
want
to
give.
③Research
has
_shown__that
givers
tend
to
value
the
gifts
they
buy
considerably
more
than
receivers.
④Some
believe
_that_t_houghtful
presents
are
the
best
presents.
In
fact,
they
might
just
be
the
worst
presents.
⑤Buying
g_ifts_t_hat
allow
for
flexibility
is
a
good
idea.
People
prefer
cash
to
gift
cards
and
actual
gifts.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2、3、4三个要点进行整合。将5保留，
3.遣词造句
Although__many__people
buy
gifts
during
holidays,
some
may
choose
the
wrong
gifts.
They
buy
what
they
want
to
give
instead
of
what
recipients
prefer.
As
research
show_s,_rec_ipients
value
/
appreciate
gifts
far
less
than
givers.
Actually,
thoughtful
presents
turn
out
the
worst
ones.
Therefore,
stopp_ing_bu_ying
gifts
or
picking
flexible
ones,
preferably
cash,
may
work.
【点睛】[高分句型1]__???They_
buy
what
they
want
to
give
instead
of
what
recipients
prefer.
运用两个what引导的宾语从句对第二段进行了概括，两个从句由instead
of连接，用法高级。
[高分句型2]：_As_res_earch
shows,
recipients
value
/
appreciate
gifts
far
less
than
givers.运用as引导的非限制性定语从句概括了第三段的内容，且从句中用了比较级，表达高级。
[高分句型3]：_Theref_ore,
stopping
buying
gifts
or
picking
flexible
ones,
preferably
cash,
may
work.运用动名词做主语总结了最后一段的内容。
5.黄浦区
Singapore’s
Information
Technology
Strategy
Singapore’s
inf_ormati_on
technology
strategy
rests
on
two
major
legs.
The
first
leg
is
world-class
basic
facilities.
Being
a
city-state,
it
is
relatively
easy
to
connect
every
home,
office
and
hotel
room.
Our
objective
is
to
provide
broad-band
everywhere,
either
wired
or
wireless.
We
will
make
it
a
readily
available
utility
like
water,
electricity,
gas
and
telephone.
We
are
well
on
our
way
there.
We
now
require,
by
regulation,
every
new
home
to
be
equipped
with
broad-band
in
the
same
way
as
it
is
required
to
have
water
and
electricity.
The
sec_ond_le_g
is
the
education
of
our
entire
population
in
IT(information
technology).
Like
reading,
writing
and
arithmetic,
computers
are
best
learnt
when
we
are
young.
Today’s
children
can
click
the
mouse
faster
than
we
can
blink.
In
many
countries,
children
of
middle-class
families
have
no
difficulty
with
this
new
technology.
But,
without
special
effort,
there
is
a
danger
that
children
of
poorer
families
will
miss
out
on
the
opportunity
to
learn
IT.
Like
the
piano
and
violin,
one
can
still
learn
the
computer
as
an
adult.
But
rarely
does
one
acquire
the
same
facility.
The
strategy
in
Singapore
is
therefore
to
teach
information
technology
to
every
child
regardless
of
his
family
background.
The
Education
Ministry
now
has
a
multi-billion
dollar
programme
to
provide
one
computer
for
every
2
schoolchildren
in
Singapore
from
first
grade
onwards.
Every
teacher
will
have
a
notebook.
Most
Sin_gapore_ans
now
understand
the
importance
of
IT,
if
not
for
themselves,
at
least
for
their
children
and
grandchildren.
Over
40%
of
households
in
Singapore
now
own
PCs.
Over
one-third
of
households
in
Singapore
already
enjoy
access
to
Internet.
What
we
want
is
for
every
Singaporean
to
be
computer
literate
so
that
he
can
function
effectively
in
any
bank,
factory
or
restaurant,
just
as
one
would
expect
an
employee
to
be
able
to
read,
write
and
count.
An
employer
in
Singapore
in
the
future
should
not
have
to
worry
that
his
employee
does
not
know
how
to
use
a
computer
or
the
Internet.
答案：
Singapor_e???s_in_formation
technology
strategy
depends
on
two
major
ways.
One
is
to
construct
world-class
basic
facilities
by
providing
broad-band
everywhere.
The
other
is
to
teach
each
child
information
technology
whatever
his
family
background
is,
providing
computers
to
students
and
teachers.
The
strategy
has
aroused
the
recognition
of
most
Singaporeans
and
the
employers
will
hopefully
have
computer
literate
employees.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇说_??????????????????_要介绍了新加坡信息科技战略的两个方面。一方面是通过提供宽带，建立世界级的基础设施；另一方面是对全体人民进行信息技术教育。而且，大多数新加坡人民已经明白了信息技术的重要性。
【详解】1
要点摘录
1)
Singapor_e's_in_formation
technology
strategy
rests
on
two
major
legs.
2)
The
first
leg
is
world-class
basic
facilities.
3)
Our
ob_jectiv_e
is
to
provide
broad-band
everywhere,
either
wired
or
wireless.
4)
The
second
_leg_is_
the
education
of
our
entire
population
in
IT
(information
technology).
5)
The__strat_egy
in
Singapore
is
therefore
to
teach
information
technology
to
every
child
regardless
of
his
family
background.
6)
Most
Singaporeans
now
understand
the
importance
of
IT.
7)
An
emplo_yer_in_
Singapore
in
the
future
should
not
have
to
worry
that
his
employee
does
not
now
how
to
use
a
computer
or
the
Internet.
2.缜密构思
将第2、3两个要点进行重组，将第4、5两个要点进行整合，将第6、7两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
One
is
to
_constr_uct
world-class
basic
facilities
by
providing
broad-band
everywhere.
The
other
is__to_te_ach
each
child
information
technology
whatever
his
family
background
is,
providing
computers
to
students
and
teachers.2·1·c·n·j·y
The
strate_gy_has_
aroused
the
recognition
of
most
Singaporeans
and
the
employers
will
hopefully
have
computer
literate
employees.
6.嘉定区
Tai
Chi
Can
Reduce
Falls
in
Old
People
Old
pe_ople_w_ho
took
part
in
a
structured
programme
of
Tai
Chi
found
that
their
balance
and
physical
strength
improved,
reducing
the
risk
of
falls,
according
to
a
paper
in
the
latest
Journal
of
Advanced
Nursing.
Researchers
_studie_d
a
group
of
fall-prone
(易摔跤的)
adults,
with
an
average
age
of
78,
living
in
residential
care.
29
people
undertook
a
12-week
Tai
Chi
programme
and
the
other
30
formed
the
non-exercise
control
group.
The
exercise
programme
consisted
of
10
minutes
of
warming-up
exercises,
20
minutes
of
Sun-style
Tai
Chi
movement
and
5
minutes
of
cooling
down
exercises.
During
the
exercise,
traditional
instrumental
music
was
used.
It
helped
the
group
maintain
slow
and
continuous
movements
and
provide
a
comforting
effect.
Both
group_s_unde_rwent
a
series
of
tests
before
and
after
the
12-week
exercise
programme.
They
measured
their
muscle
strength,
balance
and
confidence
in
avoiding
falls.
Researchers
analyzed
the
data
and
compared
them
with
those
of
the
non-exercise
control
group.
They
found
that
the
physical
fitness
of
the
exercise
group
showed
significant
improvement,
with
stronger
knee
and
ankle
muscles,
improved
flexibility
and
better
balance.
Tai
Chi,
an
anci_ent_Ch_inese
martial
art
(武术),
consists
of
a
series
of
slow,
gentle,
continuous
movements.
It
is
particularly
suitable
for
old
people
as
it
helps
them
to
develop
stronger
muscles
and
better
balance
and
concentration.
“Our
study
shows
that
low-intensity
exercise
such
as
Tai
Chi
has
great
potential
for
health
promotion.
It
can
help
old
people
to
avoid
falls
by
developing
their
balance,
muscle
strength
and
confidence,”
says
Professor
Song.
“We
believe
that
regular
exercise
should
be
a
fundamental
part
of
caring
for
old
people
living
both
in
the
community
and
in
residential
care.”
答案：A
s_tructu_red
Tai
Chi
program
can
help
old
people
avoid
falls.
Researchers
divided
59
fall-prone
adults
aged
78
on
average
into
two
groups.
The
exercise
group
receiving
12-week
Tai
Chi
programs
showed
remarkable
improvement
in
muscles,
flexibility
and
balance
compared
with
the
non-exercise
group.
Researchers
suggest
old
people
should
practice
Tai
Chi
to
promote
health.
原文出处：
_https://21?????????è?????sciencedaily.com/releases/2005/06/050627233059.htm_
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍_è????????????¤????_拳可以帮助老年人避免跌倒。在一项研究中，研究人员将平均年龄为78岁的老人分为两组，一组参加为期12周的太极拳锻炼，另一组不参加。研究结果表明，参加太极拳锻炼的那一组在肌肉、柔韧性和平衡方面有显著改善。研究人员建议老年人应该练习太极来促进健康。
7.金山区
Will
people
reduce
car
use
in
20
years？
Nowaday_s,_the_
ownership
of
cars
is
no
longer
being
recognized
as
a
symbol
of
one’s
wealth
and
social
position.
Tracking
back
to
the
past
when
only
the
rich
were
qualified
to
possess
private
cars,
we
couldn’t
help
marveling
at
the
historic
change
such
a
convenient
invention
brought
to
people’s
daily
lives.
Nevertheless,
the
increase
in
the
number
of
car
owners
is
spelling
many
negative
effects.
These
rising
problems
also
cause
some
people
to
predict
that
the
use
of
cars
might
be
reduced
in
two
decades.
Above
al_l,_the_
use
of
cars
remarkably
threatens
our
environment,
if
such
a
tendency
is
not
brought
under
control
in
time,
the
Earth
will
no
longer
be
a
suitable
place
for
humans
to
survive
in
the
future.
People
have
to
face
the
consequence.
It
is
a
reality
from
which
no
one
is
able
to
escape.
Every
day,
thousands
of
private
cars
are
emitting
tons
of
exhausted
gas
that
seriously
pollutes
the
air.
The
carbon
dioxide
leads
to
the
worldwide
greenhouse
effect,
which
causes
the
sea
level
to
rise
and
produces
negative
impacts
on
weather.
In
addition,
more
energy
is
being
wasted
because
of
the
production
of
private
cars.
In
order
to
build
a
resource-conserving
and
environment-friendly
society,
people
ought
to
reduce
the
use
of
cars.
In
fact,
divers_ified__measures
are
being
taken
by
the
government
to
limit
the
use
of
cars.
If
such
a
tendency
continues,
the
effect
will
be
shown
in
the
near
future.
For
example,
to
reach
the
goal
of
building
a
safe
and
harmonious
society,
Beijing
Traffic
Management
Bureau
has
restricted
regional
traffic
in
rush
hours
on
working
days.
A
number
of
private
cars
are
prohibited
on
no-driving-days.
Last,
the__advan_cement
of
public
transportation
systems
also
helps
change
car
owners’
way
of
travelling.
Efforts
are
being
made
to
construct
more
agreeable
networks
of
buses,
subways,
trains
and
airplanes.
In
the
meanwhile,
advances
in
technology
might
help
cut
down
the
cost
of
travelling
in
public
vehicles.
答案：Despite
its__symbo_lization
of
wealth
in
the
past
and
great
changes
to
people’s
life,
cars
have
caused
many
negative
effects.
First,
by
emitting
greenhouse
gases,
they
threaten
the
environment.
Besides,
energy-consuming
cars
are
not
sustainable
to
the
society.
Therefore,
the
government
has
taken
various
measures
like
restrictions.
Last,
public
transport
is
a
good
remedy
thanks
to
the
high-tech.
(58words)
原文出处：
_https://zhuanlan./p/78746419_
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了_???????±?è???·????_是财富和社会地位的象征，有车一族数量的增加带来了许多负面影响，威胁着我们的环境，浪费了更多的能源，并提出人们应该减少汽车的使用，通过政府采取措施，公共交通系统进步改变人们出行方式，技术进步降低乘坐公共交通成本等方法减少私家车的使用。
【详解】1
要点摘录
①Tracking
back
t_o_the__past
when
only
the
rich
were
qualified
to
possess
private
cars,
we
couldn’t
help
marveling
at
the
historic
change
such
a
convenient
invention
brought
to
people’s
daily
lives.
②Never_theles_s,
the
increase
in
the
number
of
car
owners
is
spelling
many
negative
effects.
③Every
day,
_thousa_nds
of
private
cars
are
emitting
tons
of
exhausted
gas
that
seriously
pollutes
the
air.
21cnjy.com
④In
addi_tion,__more
energy
is
being
wasted
because
of
the
production
of
private
cars.
⑤In
fact,
di_versif_ied
measures
are
being
taken
by
the
government
to
limit
the
use
of
cars.
⑥In
the
meanwhi_le,_ad_vances
in
technology
might
help
cut
down
the
cost
of
travelling
in
public
vehicles.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2两个要点进行重组；将3、4两个要点进行整合；将5、6两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Despite__its_s_ymbolization
of
wealth
in
the
past
and
great
changes
to
people’s
life,
cars
have
caused
many
negative
effects.
By
emitting
greenhouse
gases,
they
threaten
the
environment.
Energy-consuming
cars
are
not
sustainable
to
the
society.
the
government
has
taken
various
measures
like
restrictions.
public
transport
is
a
good
remedy
thanks
to
the
high-tech.
【点睛】[高分句型1_]_Desp_ite
its
symbolization
of
wealth
in
the
past
and
great
changes
to
people’s
life,
cars
have
caused
many
negative
effects.
运用介词“Despite+名词”表示“即使”，对原文第一段进行了概括。表达高级。
[高分句型2]：B_y_emit_ting
greenhouse
gases,
they
threaten
the
environment.
用介词短语作方式状语对第二段的大量使用私家车造成空气污染的消极影响进行了概括，表达非常高级。
8.静安区
Surveys
indicat_e_that_
a
third
of
Britons
regularly
eat
on
their
own.
OpenTable,
an
online
restaurant
booking
app,
found
that
solo
dining
in
New
York
increased
by
80%
during
the
past
5
years.
And
in
Japan,
the
world
capital
of
solo
dining,
a
trend
for
"low
interaction
dining"
has
taken
off.
Restaurants
are
opening
which
facilitate
the
ultimate
solo
dining
experience:
passing
bowls
of
noodles
through
black
curtains
into
individual
booths.
Is
this
a
wo_rrying_
trend?
We
think
so.
Research
is
revealing
the
negative
impacts
of
eating
alone,
which
has
been
found
to
be
linked
to
a
variety
of
mental
and
physical
health
conditions,
from
depression
and
diabetes
to
high
blood
pressure.
So
it's
cheeri_ng_tha_t
hundreds
of
food
sharing
initiatives
have
sprung
up
around
the
world.
There's
London's
Casserole
Club,
for
example,
whose
volunteers
share
portions
of
home-cooked
food
with
people
in
their
area
who
aren't
always
able
to
cook
for
themselves,
in
which
case
they
put
an
end
to
food
waste.
Or
there
is
South
Africa's
Food
Jams,
social
gatherings
in
which
participants
are
paired
up,
preferably
with
strangers,
and
given
a
portion
of
the
meal
to
prepare.
Many
participants
interviewed
mentioned
that
their
loneliness
was
greatly
relieved.
Such
initiatives
offer
lessons
of
all
kinds
to
those
thinking
about
how
our
food
systems
need
to
change.
They
also
somewhat
compensate
for
the
undesirable
outcomes
sole
eating
brings.
So
why__do_pe_ople
stop
eating
together?
There
are
a
variety
of
reasons.
Authors
such
as
Michael
Pollan
argue
that
it
is
due
to
the
fact
that
people
attach
less
value
to
home-based
labor,
including
cooking.
The
widening
of
the
workforce,
which
brought
many
women
out
of
the
kitchen
and
into
the
workplace
during
the
20th
century,
also
contributed.
Meanwhile,
the
growth
in
insecure
and
inconsistent
working
patterns
among
a
growing
proportion
of
the
population
also
discourages
meals
eaten
communally.
答案：The
tr_end_of_
sole
dining
is
catching
on
in
major
countries.
However,
it
does
harm
physically
and
mentally.
Fortunately
food-sharing
programs
make
up
for
its
bad
effects
by
avoiding
food
waste
and
combating
loneliness.
Eating
together
has
declined
because
of
people’s
undervaluing
of
cooking
at
home,
more
women’s
entry
into
the
workforce
and
weakening
work
relationships.
原文出处：
_https:///1738347/eating-alone-is-bad-for-our-mental-health-and-the-planet/_
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文_???????????¨é¤????_趋势正在主要国家流行起来。然而，它确实会伤害身体和精神。幸运的是，食物共享计划通过避免食物浪费和对抗孤独来弥补它的不良影响。由于人们低估了在家做饭的价值，更多的女性进入职场，以及工作关系的弱化，在一起吃饭的人数有所下降。
【详解】1
要点摘录①._Survey_s
indicate
that
a
third
of
Britons
regularly
eat
on
their
own.
OpenTable,
an
online
restaurant
booking
app,
found
that
solo
dining
in
New
York
increased
by
80%
during
the
past
5
years.
②.Rese_arch_i_s
revealing
the
negative
impacts
of
eating
alone,
which
has
been
found
to
be
linked
to
a
variety
of
mental
and
physical
health
conditions,
from
depression
and
diabetes
to
high
blood
pressure.
③.There'_s_Lond_on's
Casserole
Club,
for
example,
whose
volunteers
share
portions
of
home-cooked
food
with
people
in
their
area
who
aren't
always
able
to
cook
for
themselves,
in
which
case
they
put
an
end
to
food
waste.
④.The
wide_ning_o_f
the
workforce,
which
brought
many
women
out
of
the
kitchen
and
into
the
workplace
during
the
20th
century,
also
contributed.
2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句The
tr_end_of_
sole
dining
is
catching
on
in
major
countries.
However,
it
does
harm
physically
and
mentally.
Fortunately
food-sharing
programs
make
up
for
its
bad
effects
by
avoiding
food
waste
and
combating
loneliness.Because
of
people’s
undervaluing
of
cooking
at
home,
more
women’s
entry
into
the
workforce
and
weakening
work
relationships,
they
often
choose
to
eat
alone.
【点睛】[高分句型1_]_Howe_ver,
it
does
harm
physically
and
mentally.
(使用however对前文内容表达转折，physically和mentally副词作状语修饰动作does
harm。)
[高分句型2]F_ortuna_tely
food-sharing
programs
make
up
for
its
bad
effects
by
avoiding
food
waste
and
combating
loneliness.(运用介词by+doing作方式状语，表达比较高级。)
[高分句型3]Eating
to_gether_
has
declined
because
of
people’s
undervaluing
of
cooking
at
home,
more
women’s
entry
into
the
workforce
and
weakening
work
relationships.(使用动名词eating作主语，because
of后接名词短语和动名词作并列宾语，充分使用了非谓语动词里的高级表达。)
9.闵行区
Perhaps__you???v_e
heard
the
old
saying
“curiosity
killed
the
cat.”
It’s
a
phrase
that’s
often
used
to
warn
people,
especially
children,
not
to
ask
too
many
questions.
Yet
it’s
widely
agreed
that
curiosity
actually
makes
learning
more
effective.
In
fact,
research
has
shown
that
curiosity
is
just
as
important
as
intelligence
in
determining
how
well
students
do
in
school.
Curiosity
c_an_als_o
lead
us
to
make
unexpected
discoveriesand
open
up
new
possibilities.
In
science,
basic
curiosity-driven
research
can
have
unexpected
important
benefits.
For
example,
one
day
in
1831,
Michael
Faraday
was
playing
around
with
a
coil
(线圈)
and
a
magnet
(磁铁)
when
he
suddenly
saw
how
he
could
produce
an
electrical
current.
The
discovery
changed
the
world.
However,
curio_sity_i_s
currently
under
the
biggest
threat,
coming
from
technology.
On
one
level,
this
is
because
technology
has
become
so
advanced
that
many
of
us
are
unable
to
think
too
deeply
about
how
exactly
things
work
anymore.2-1-c-n-j-y
In
addition
_to_thi_s,
there’s
the
fact
that
we
all
now
connect
so
deeply
with
technology,
particularly
with
our
phones.
The
more
we
stare
at
our
screens,
the
less
we
talk
to
other
people
directly.
All
too
often
we
accept
the
images
of
people
that
social
media
provides
up
with.
Then
we
feel
we
know
enough
about
a
person
not
to
need
to
engage
further
with
them.
The
final—and__perha_ps
most
worrying—way
in
which
technology
stops
us
from
asking
more
has
to
do
with
algorithms,
the
processes
followed
by
computers.
As
we
increasingly
get
our
news
via
social
media,
algorithms
find
out
what
we
like
and
push
more
of
the
same
back
to
us.
That
means
we
end
up
inside
our
own
little
bubbles,
no
longer
coming
across
new
ideas.
Perhaps
the
real
key
to
developing
curiosity
in
the
21st
century,
then,
is
to
rely
less
on
the
tech
tools
of
our
age.
www.21-cn-jy.com
答案：Curi_osity__determines
one’s
academic
performance
and
can
lead
to
new
discoveries（1分）.
However,
technology
seriously
endangers
curiosity
（1分）.
It
prevents
people
from
thinking
deeply
and
engaging
with
each
other
（1分）.
Worst
of
all,
it
keeps
feeding
us
what
it
thinks
we
like
instead
of
exposing
us
to
new
ideas（1分）.
Therefore,
to
develop
curiosity,
we
need
to
rely
less
on
technology（1分）.
(57
words)【来源：21cnj
y.co
m】
原文出处：
_http://21?????????è?????/shiti/yingyu/2020-03-09/30944.html_
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了好奇心在人们学习新知识和发现新事物方面的促进作用，并指出现代技术的日益发达对人们好奇心的消极影响。
【详解】1
要点摘录①Cur_iosity_
is
just
as
important
as
intelligence
in
determining
how
well
students
do
in
school.
②Techno_logy_h_as
become
so
advanced
that
many
of
us
are
unable
to
think
too
deeply
about
how
exactly
things
work
anymore.
③Then
we
fee_l_we_k_now
enough
about
a
person
not
to
need
to
engage
further
with
them.
④As
we
increasin_gly_ge_t
our
news
via
social
media,
algorithms
find
out
what
we
like
and
push
more
of
the
same
back
to
us.
⑤Perhaps
_the_re_al
key
to
developing
curiosity
in
the
21st
century,
then,
is
to
rely
less
on
the
tech
tools
of
our
age.
2.缜密构思：
将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合，将第5个要点作为总结。
3.遣词造句
①Curiosity
det_ermine_s
one’s
academic
performance
and
can
lead
to
new
discoveries.
②Technol_ogy_pr_events
people
from
thinking
deeply
and
engaging
with
each
other
.
③Techn_ology__keeps
feeding
us
what
it
thinks
we
like
instead
of
exposing
us
to
new
ideas.
④We
need
to
rely
less
on
technology.
【点睛】[高分句型1]__It_pr_events
people
from
thinking
deeply
and
engaging
with
each
other
.
运用一个简单句对原文第三段和第四段进行了概括。其中prevent
sb.
from
doing
sth.这个固定短语的运用显得很高级。thinking和engaging两个动名词作from的宾语。
[高分句型2]
W_orst_o_f
all,
it
keeps
feeding
us
what
it
thinks
we
like
instead
of
exposing
us
to
new
ideas.
用一个复杂的主从复合句概括了第五段内容。其中what引导宾语从句、固定短语instead
of和expose
sb.
to
sth.的使用非常巧妙。【版权所有：21教育】
10.浦东新区
Solving
the
Problem
of
E-Waste
One
of
the__probl_ems
damaging
our
planet
is
the
number
of
things
we
throw
away.
A
more
recent
addition
to
the
list
of
things
we
chuck
away
is
e-waste
–
electronic
items
that
are
broken
and
not
recycled.
Tonnes
_of_tel_evisions,
phones,
and
other
electronic
equipment
are
discarded
chiefly
because
we
lack
the
skills
to
repair
them.
Fortunately,
now
solutions
are
being
found
to
give
e-waste
a
new
life.
There’s
a
gro_wing_t_rend
for
repair
events
and
clubs
which
could
be
part
of
a
solution
to
the
growing
amount
of
electrical
and
electronic
junk.
A
Restart
Project
in
London,
is
one
that
many
found
around
the
world.
One
of
its
volunteers,
Francesco
Calo,
said
that
"this
project
allows
you
to
reduce
waste,
extend
the
life
of
objects,
and
it
helps
people
who
cannot
afford
to
get
rid
of
items
that
have
developed
a
fault."
As
many
e_lectri_cal
items
contain
valuable
metals,
another
idea
is
e-waste
mining.
An
experiment
at
the
University
of
New
South
Wales
involves
extracting
these
materials
from
electronic
appliances.
It’s
thought
that
doing
this
could
be
more
profitable
than
traditional
mining.
These
p_roject_s
make
total
sense
---
collections
of
e-waste
for
recycling
are
“depressing
or
even
decreasing”
according
to
Ruediger
Kuehr,
of
the
United
Nations
University.
And
in
countries
where
there
are
no
laws,
much
of
it
just
gets
dumped.
However,
the
European
Union,
for
example,
is
trying
to
tackle
the
problem
by
insisting
manufacturers
have
to
make
appliances
longer-lasting
and
will
have
to
supply
spare
parts
for
machines
for
up
to
10
years.
答案：E-wast_e_is_o_ne
of
the
damaging
problems
due
to
lack
of
repairing
skills.
However,
here
are
some
solutions.
First,
it
is
a
growing
trend
to
repair
electronic
junks.
Besides,
e-waste
mining
is
more
profitable
to
abstract
valuable
metals.
Furthermore,
manufacturers
should
make
longer-lasting
electrical
items
and
supply
spare
parts
for
them.
(51words)
原文出处：
_http://downloads.bbc.co.uk/learningenglish/features/tae/bbc_tae_e-waste.pdf_
【解析】
【分析】本文是一篇说明_??????????????????_说，破坏人类地球环境的问题之一是我们扔掉的东西太多了。近年来，在我们扔掉的东西清单上又增加了一项——坏了、无法回收的电子产品。本文介绍一些用来处理电子垃圾问题的新方法。
【详解】1
要点摘录
①One
of
th_e_prob_lems
damaging
our
planet
is
the
number
of
things
we
throw
away..
②
now
solutions
are
being
found
to
give
e-waste
a
new
life.
③There's
_a_grow_ing
trend
for
repair
events
and
clubs
which
could
be
part
of
a
solution
to
the
growing
amount
of
electrical
and
electronic
junk.
④As
many
ele_ctrica_l
items
contain
valuable
metals,
another
idea
is
e-waste
mining.
⑤the
Europea_n_Unio_n,
for
example,
is
trying
to
tackle
the
problem
by
insisting
manufacturers
have
to
make
appliances
longer-lasting
2.缜密构思
将第1、3两个要点进行重组，将第2、3两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
One
of
the
probl_ems_de_stroying
our
planet
is
the
stuff
we
throw
away,
especially
broken
and
not
recycled
electronic
items.
Fortunately,
_People_
are
finding
solutions
to
give
e-waste
a
new
life.
Repair
ev_ents_a_s
well
as
club
could
be
of
help,
and
e-waste
mining
is
also
a
new
ways
to
deal
with
the
problem
of
e-waste.
Besides,
there__are_e_ven
laws
insisting
manufacturers
make
appliances
longer-lasting
in
some
countries.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
One__of_th_e
problems
destroying
our
planet
is
the
stuff
we
throw
away,
especially
broken
and
not
recycled
electronic
items.
运用一个定语从句对原文第一段进行了概括。
[高分句型2]_???_Repa_ir
events
as
well
as
club
could
be
of
help,
and
e-waste
mining
is
also
a
new
way
to
deal
with
the
problem
of
e-waste.
用并列句对三四段内容进行概括。
11.普陀区
How
to
Protect
Your
Personal
Privacy
Online?
Cyber
crimes
ar_e_now__part
of
today’s
digital
era,
affecting
people’s
lives
professionally
as
well
as
personally.
It
is
annoying
but
true
that
you
do
not
actually
have
absolute
control
over
who
might
be
watching
you
online.
More
than
ever,
government
agencies
have
focused
on
fighting
against
illegal
surveillance
(监控)
programs,
raising
concerns
about
protecting
online
privacy.
Here
are
some
suggestions
for
you
to
follow.【出处：21教育名师】
Evaluating
_your_o_nline
activities
is
the
most
crucial
task
towards
protecting
your
online
privacy.
You
need
to
assess
what
personal
or
private
data
you
are
storing
or
sharing
on
your
computer/mobile
devices
or
online
platforms.
It
is
important
to
identify
the
value
of
your
information
and
analyze
the
risks
such
as:
how
safe
is
your
data
offline
or
online?
What
happens
if
your
personal
data
gets
leaked?
These
are
some
basic
questions
so
that
you
can
take
necessary
steps
to
solve
your
online
privacy
issues.
Everythi_ng_you_
do
comes
out
once
you
go
online.
Your
data
is
being
misused
by
some
advertisers
and
online
marketers.
Some
illegal
programs
make
your
system
threatened,
invade
your
privacy
and
steal
your
confidential
information.
So,
installing
genuine
and
latest
anti-virus
software
is
critically
important
to
protect
your
devices
from
such
threats.
That
is
to
use
original
or
latest
anti-virus
software,
browsers,
etc.
Also,
stay
up-to-date
with
the
current
tools,
methods
and
technology.
You
can
reduce
the
risks
by
becoming
more
educated
on
the
leading
tools,
and
methods
available
in
the
digital
world.
You
should
learn
and
follow
the
security
rules
and
pay
attention
to
the
information
you
share
on
social
networking
sites.
To
prevent
un_author_ized
access
to
your
system,
you
should
choose
a
strong
password
string
that
will
never
be
easy
for
hackers
to
get.
That
is
to
enforce
a
strong
password.
And
do
not
use
one
common
password
for
multiple
services
because
if
one
service
is
broken,
you’ll
lose
control
of
the
others.
Tony,
a
security
software
maker,
suggests
that
consumers
should
use
different
email
addresses
for
different
purposes
so
that
hackers
cannot
match
an
email
stolen
from
a
website
to
one
from
a
bank.
答案：There
are
se_veral__ways
for
people
to
protect
online
privacy.
First,
evaluate
online
activities
to
make
sure
the
online
information
is
secure.
Second,
it’s
better
to
use
original
antivirus
software
and
browsers
and
keep
up
with
the
latest
technology.
Third,
use
a
sufficiently
secure
password,
and
use
different
passwords
and
different
email
addresses
for
different
purposes.
(56
words)
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍_è????????????§????_法可以保护人们的网络隐私。首先，评估网上活动，确保网上信息的安全。其次，最好使用原装杀毒软件和浏览器，并跟上最新的技术。第三，使用足够安全的密码，并为不同的目的使用不同的密码和不同的电子邮件地址。
12.青浦区
Changing
Times
Bring
New
Standards
The
Academy__Award_s,
popularly
known
as
the
Oscars,
have
long
been
one
of
the
film
industry’s
most
famous
awards.
However,
despite
its
92-year
history,
the
awards
show
has
come
under
fire
in
recent
years
for
not
recognizing
enough
multicultural
performers
and
directors.?
In
respons_e_to_t_his
lack
of
representation,
the
American
Academy
of
Motion
Picture
Arts
and
Sciences,
the
group
that
oversees
the
Oscars,
has
announced
new
diversity
(多样性)
requirements
for
future
films
to
be
submitted
to
the
Best
Picture
category
in
2024.?
They
require__nomin_ees
(提名者)
to
meet
at
least
two
out
of
four
sets
of
standards,
aiming
to
increase
inclusion
for
underrepresented
groups
—
people
of
color,
women
and
people
with
disabilities
—
both
on
and
off-screen.
These
standards
include
a
minimum
requirement
for
underrepresented
groups
at
the
executive
level.
Four
years
ag_o,_Osc_arsSoWhite
quickly
drew
attention,
highlighting
the
absence
of
minority
representation
among
previous
nominees.
It
also
pointed
out
that
the
voting
committee
has
been
largely
white
and
male
for
decades,
noted
The
New
York
Times.
?
Ever
since,
th_e_Acad_emy
has
looked
to
increase
its
diversity
by
promising
to
double
female
and
minority
members
in
2016.
For
example,
the
South-Korean
film
Parasite
(《寄生虫》),
which
features
an
all-Asian
cast,
won
four
Oscars
at
the
2020
Academy
Awards.?
However,
t_he_lat_est
move
has
its
doubters.
Some
have
said
that
the
awards
body
should
be
focusing
on
awarding
what
they
consider
to
be
the
best
film,
rather
than
limiting
what
can
be
nominated,
noted
Forbes.
Richard
Grenell,
the
current
US
ambassador
to
Germany,
also
criticized
the
move,
saying
that
“It’s
no
longer
the
Best
Picture,
it’s
the
Most
Politically
Correct
Picture.”
Others,
t_hough,_
have
praised
the
initiative.
Culture
critic
Sonny
Bunch
wrote
that,
“The
academy
is
finally
—
finally!
—
doing
something
to
ensure
that
underrepresented
groups
have
a
shot.”
Arguabl_y,_The_
New
York
Times
said
it
best.
While
it
noted
that
the
requirements
were
“easy
for
most
studios
to
satisfy”,
the
initiative
will
show
voters
the
extent
to
which
diversity
standards
were
met.?
答案：Recently
Osca_rs_hav_e
been
blamed
for
not
representing
enough
minorities,
like
people
of
color.
To
make
up
for
the
lack
of
diversity,
the
governing
body
of
Oscars
has
issued
new
criteria
intending
to
include
more
underrepresented
people.
Doubters
argue
Oscars
shouldn't
focus
on
political
correctness
but
quality
of
films,
while
advocates
think
the
initiative
will
give
minorities
more
opportunities.
(59
words)
原文出处：
高三教案
第724期（1）-
21英语教师网
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，_???è??????????????_被指责没有代表足够多的少数族裔，比如有色人种。为了弥补缺乏多样性，奥斯卡管理机构发布了新的标准，打算纳入更多代表性不足的人。持怀疑态度的人认为奥斯卡不应该关注政治正确性，而应该关注电影质量，而支持者则认为这一举措将给少数族裔更多机会。21教育名师原创作品
【详解】1.要点摘录
①However,
d_espite_
its
92-year
history,
the
awards
show
has
come
under
fire
in
recent
years
for
not
recognizing
enough
multicultural
performers
and
directors.
Four
years
ago,
OscarsSoWhite
quickly
drew
attention,
highlighting
the
absence
of
minority
representation
among
previous
nominees.
②In
respons_e_to_t_his
lack
of
representation,
the
American
Academy
of
Motion
Picture
Arts
and
Sciences,
the
group
that
oversees
the
Oscars,
has
announced
new
diversity
requirements
for
future
films
to
be
submitted
to
the
Best
Picture
category
in
2024.
They
require
nominees
to
meet
at
least
two
out
of
four
sets
of
standards,
aiming
to
increase
inclusion
for
underrepresented
groups
—
people
of
color,
women
and
people
with
disabilities
—
both
on
and
off-screen.
③However,
the__lates_t
move
has
its
doubters.
Some
have
said
that
the
awards
body
should
be
focusing
on
awarding
what
they
consider
to
be
the
best
film,
rather
than
limiting
what
can
be
nominated,
noted
Forbes.
Others,
though,
have
praised
the
initiative.
Culture
critic
Sonny
Bunch
wrote
that,
"The
academy
is
finally
—
finally!
—
doing
something
to
ensure
that
underrepresented
groups
have
a
shot."
2.缜密构思
将第1个要点作为总说，将第2、3两个要点作为分说。
3.遣词造句
Recentl_y_Osca_rs
have
been
blamed
for
not
representing
enough
minorities,
like
people
of
color.
To
make
up
f_or_the_
lack
of
diversity,
the
governing
body
of
Oscars
has
issued
new
criteria
intending
to
include
more
underrepresented
people.
Doubters
ar_gue_Os_cars
shouldn't
focus
on
political
correctness
but
quality
of
films,
while
advocates
think
the
initiative
will
give
minorities
more
opportunities.
13.松江区
Storytelling
The
art
of
s_toryte_lling
is
a
respected
skill.
Over
the
course
of
history,
community
elders
and
their?stories
have
been
regarded
as
treasures
of
society’s
knowledge,
history,
and
wisdom.
Today,
medical
and
social
science
researchers
are
interested
in
more
than
just
the
importance
of
storytelling
as
a
means
of
teaching,
but
also
overall
health.21·cn·jy·com
There
have
b_een_lo_ts
of
studies
that
have
looked
at
the
psychological
and
therapeutic
effects
of
storytelling.
Perhaps
one
of
the
most
interesting
things
in
the
world
of
the
research
of
long
life,
however,
is
the
growing
number
of
people
with
dementia
(痴呆)
who
are
benefiting
from
participating
in
group-based
community
storytelling.
Studies
of
the
use
of
reminiscence
(怀旧)
therapy
with
people
suffering
from
dementia
have
looked
at
the
impact
the
therapy
has
on
both
mental
function
and
quality
of
life,
which
are
positively
influenced
by
the
use
of
storytelling.
Expert_s_say__that
storytelling
also
effectively
fights
against
the
initial
denial
that
can
arise
when
a
patient
learns
of
a
new
diagnosis,
or
is
asked
to
change
deeply
fixed
behaviors
which
are
definitely
influencing
health
in
the
long
run.
Patients
may
react
to
this
news
by
thinking,
“This
is
not
directly
related
to
me,”
or
“My
experience
is
somewhat
different.”
Stories
help
break
down
that
denial
by
engaging
the
listener,
often
through
some
degree
of
identification
with
the
storyteller
or
one
of
the
characters.
The
magic
of
stories
lies
in
the
relatedness
they
promote.
This
is
why
many
stories
in
advertisements
are
being
made
full
use
of
to
reach
the
target
customers.
Patients
a_nd_doc_tors
have
understood
the
power
of
storytelling.
Whether
among
patients
in
peer
support
groups
or
between
doctors
and
patients
in
the
exam
rooms
or
even
between
doctors
during
consultations,
storytelling
is
always
playing
the
essential
part.www-2-1-cnjy-com
答案：Besides
be_ing_ed_ucational,
storytelling
is
found
effective
in
promoting
overall
health.
Studies
show
people
suffering
from
dementia
function
better
psychologically
and
their
life
quality
is
improved
through
storytelling.
Moreover,
relatedness
in
storytelling
can
successfully
help
patients
accept
new
diagnoses
and
change
deep-rooted
behaviors.
And
its
effects
have
been
recognized
among
patients
and
doctors.
(53
words)
14.徐汇区
Things
to
Do
After
You
Study
Many
stude_nts_st_udy
with
little
thought
about
what
comes
after
their
study
session.
But
what
you
do
after
studying
could
have
an
effect
on
how
well
you
learn
and
remember
new
information.
Today
on
Education
Tips,
we
will
explore
two
no-cost
ways
that
can
help
you
improve
your
learning:
wakeful
rest
and
sleep.
When
many__stude_nts
finish
studying,
they
often
go
straight
to
another
activity.
But
research
suggests
that
resting
after
you
study
may
help
you
remember
what
you
studied.
The
basic
idea
is
this:
by
reducing
your
activity
after
the
study
session,
your
brain
gets
a
chance
to
rest.
Resting
is
difficult
when
you
have
too
much
stimulation
from
electronic
devices,
games,
lights
and
so
on.
While
this
migh_t_soun_d
unusual
to
you,
many
studies
have
explored
the
benefits
of
resting
after
learning
-
what
is
called
“wakeful
rest.”
A
2019
study
found
that
both
young
and
older
adults
were
able
to
better
remember,
or
recollect,
information
from
prose
passages
after
doing
wakeful
rest.
The
findings
appeared
in
Neuroscience
Letters.
This
study
involved
45
younger
people
and
40
elderly
adults.”
Wakeful
resting
led
to
higher
overall
recollection
in
both
age
groups,”
the
researchers
noted.
If
you
want
to
give
“wakeful
rest”
a
try,
here
are
a
few
simple
things
to
do.
Rest
quietly
for
five
to
ten
minutes.
Do
not
look
at
your
phone,
read
stories
or
play
games.
Just
limit
the
amount
of
stimulation
you
get.
It
is
really
that
easy!
In
addition
_to_wak_eful
rest,
sleep
is
also
important
for
learning.
The
Division
of
Sleep
Medicine
at
Harvard
Medical
School
notes
that
sleep
helps
people
to
learn
in
two
ways.
A
report
on
the
school's
website
explains
that
“a
sleep-deprived
person
cannot
focus
attention
optimally
and
therefore
cannot
learn
efficiently.”
It
also
says,
“sleep
itself
has
a
role
in
the
consolidation
of
memory,
which
is
essential
for
learning
new
information.”
Robert
Stickgold,
a
doctor
and
sleep
expert
at
Harvard
Medical
School,
noted
that
new
memories
can
be
hard
to
keep.
“When
we
first
form
memories,
they're
in
a
very
raw
and
fragile
form,”
he
said.
Sleep
is
important
for
forming
memories.
Now
you
have__two_s_uggestions
for
how
to
learn
new
information.
Try
to
get
some
“wakeful
rest”
after
a
study
session.
Then
try
to
get
a
good
night's
sleep.
That's
a
simple
way
to
help
you
remember
what
you
learn.
答案：There
a_re_two_
no-cost
ways
to
help
you
improve
your
learning:
wakeful
rest
and
sleep.
Resting
after
you
study
may
help
you
remember
what
you
studied.
By
reducing
your
activity
after
the
study
session,
your
brain
gets
a
chance
to
rest.
In
addition,
sleep
is
also
important
for
learning
and
forming
memories.
原文出处：
_https://learningenglish./a/things-to-do-after-you-study/5404967.html_
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文_???????????????è??_，有两种不花钱的方法可以帮助你提高学习质量：良好的休息和睡眠。学习后休息可以帮助你记住所学的内容。通过在学习后减少你的活动，你的大脑得到了休息的机会。此外，睡眠对学习和形成记忆也很重要。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①Today
on
Edu_cation_
Tips,
we
will
explore
two
no-cost
ways
that
can
help
you
improve
your
learning:
wakeful
rest
and
sleep.
②But
research
s_uggest_s
that
resting
after
you
study
may
help
you
remember
what
you
studied.
③The
basic
i_dea_is_
this:
by
reducing
your
activity
after
the
study
session,
your
brain
gets
a
chance
to
rest.
④In
addi_tion_t_o
wakeful
rest,
sleep
is
also
important
for
learning.
Sleep
is
important
for
forming
memories.
2.缜密构思
将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。
3.遣词造句
There
are
two
n_o-cost_
ways
to
help
you
improve
your
learning:
wakeful
rest
and
sleep.
Resting
after
you
study
may
help
you
remember
what
you
studied.
【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
By
reducing
y_our_ac_tivity
after
the
study
session,
your
brain
gets
a
chance
to
rest.
In
add_ition,_
sleep
is
also
important
for
learning
and
forming
memories.21·世纪
教育网
15.杨浦区
What
Is
Zero
Waste?
The
goal
of
_the_???z_ero
waste”
movement
is
to
get
rid
of
all
waste
from
products.
“Zero
waste”
means
using
every
part
of
a
product.
Today,
the
zero
waste
idea
can
be
found
everywhere
from
food
to
fashion.
Creating
a
ze_ro_was_te
restaurant
is
a
challenge.
It
is
very
difficult
to
use
every
part
of
produce
and
leave
nothing
behind.
Creating
a
soup
from
unused
ingredients
is
a
popular
way
to
use
up
extra
food
items.
Other
ways
are
more
advanced.
Some
restaurants
use
coffee
grounds（咖啡渣）to
flavor
dishes.
Some
cooks
also
crush
shrimp
shells
and
reuse
them
in
sauces.
While
it’s
challenging,
zero
waste
restaurants
appear
to
be
on
the
rise.
In
the
fashi_on_ind_ustry,
zero
waste
isn’t
a
new
idea.
But
in
today’s
world
of
fast
fashion,
zero
waste
is
growing
more
popular.
Usually,
cutting
cloth
creates
lots
of
waste.
In
zero
waste
fashion,
designers
try
to
avoid
this.
One
way
to
do
so
is
by
adding
these
extra
pieces
of
cloth
to
the
final
design.
Another
way
is
to
design
clothing
without
wasteful
cuts.
Beyond
re_staura_nts
and
fashion,
there
are
many
other
possibilities
for
zero
waste
products.
All
restaurants
need
utensils（器皿）.
Bakey’s
is
a
company
that
is
developing
edible（可食用的）utensils.
After
using
them,
you
can
eat
them!
Their
spoons
are
made
of
flour
and
come
in
all
kinds
of
flavors.
While
these
spoons
are
not
hard
enough
to
cut
meat,
they
are
perfect
for
rice
dishes.
Meanwhile,
Air
New
Zealand
is
experimenting
with
edible
coffee
cups
that
are
made
by
the
company
Twice.
They
have
already
introduced
a
line
of
flavored
cups.
After
you
finish
your
coffee,
you
eat
the
cup,
just
like
a
cookie!
Whether
products__are_m_ade
to
be
edible
or
reusable,
hopefully
the
movement
will
help
reduce
waste
all
over
the
world.
答案：71.
Zer_o_wast_e
means
eliminating
all
the
wastes
from
a
product
and
the
movement
is
gaining
popularity.
Some
restaurants
are
using
creative
ways
to
use
unused
ingredients
or
food
leftovers.
Fashion
designers
either
avoid
unnecessarily
cutting
cloth
or
finding
new
uses
for
extra
cuts.
Besides,
Many
companies
are
creating
edible
products
especially
utensils.
Hopefully,
zero
waste
campaign
can
help
reduce
waste
worldwide.
(60)
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章讲述了什么_???é?????è?????é??_浪费意味着从一个产品中消除所有的浪费，这个运动越来越流行。一些餐馆正在创造性地使用未使用的配料或食物残羹剩饭。时装设计师要么避免不必要的裁剪布料，要么寻找额外布料的新用途。此外，许多公司正在创造食用产品，特别是餐具。希望零浪费运动可以帮助减少全球的废物。
【详解】1
要点摘录
1）“Zero
waste_???_mean_s
using
every
part
of
a
product.
Today,
the
zero
waste
idea
can
be
found
everywhere
from
food
to
fashion.
2）Some
_restau_rants
use
coffee
grounds（咖啡渣）to
flavor
dishes.
Some
cooks
also
crush
shrimp
shells
and
reuse
them
in
sauces.
While
it’s
challenging,
zero
waste
restaurants
appear
to
be
on
the
rise.
3）One
way
_to_do__so
is
by
adding
these
extra
pieces
of
cloth
to
the
final
design.
Another
way
is
to
design
clothing
without
wasteful
cuts.
4）Beyond
rest_aurant_s
and
fashion,
there
are
many
other
possibilities
for
zero
waste
products.
5）Whether__produ_cts
are
made
to
be
edible
or
reusable,
hopefully
the
movement
will
help
reduce
waste
all
over
the
world.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2、3、4、5五个要点分别概括。
3.遣词造句
Zero
waste
_means__eliminating
all
the
wastes
from
a
product
and
the
movement
is
gaining
popularity.
Some
r_estaur_ants
are
using
creative
ways
to
use
unused
ingredients
or
food
leftovers.
Fashion
d_esigne_rs
either
avoid
unnecessarily
cutting
cloth
or
finding
new
uses
for
extra
cuts.
Besides,
Many
companies
are
creating
edible
products
especially
utensils.
Hopefully,
zero
waste
campaign
can
help
reduce
waste
worldwide.21
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16.长宁区
If
you’re
l_ike_mo_st
of
the
world,
you
make
time
for
following
friends
on
social
media.
That
is
not
a
bad
thing
at
all.
Positive
posting
and
communication
can
help
improve
your
confidence
and
sense
of
connection
to
others.
It
can
be
surprisingly
easy,
though,
to
unconsciously
slip
into
less
healthful
behavior
on
social
media,
and
that
can
lead
to
anxiety
and
depression.
New
research
has
identified
which
habits
can
lead
to
troubles.
Do
you
feel
jeal_ous_ev_ery
time
you
read
on
social
media
about
your
cousin’s
beautiful
new
home
or
your
boss’
exciting
European
vacation?
“Surveillance”（监视）of
those
you
know
in
order
to
get
an
inside
look
of
their
material
success
is
a
potentially
destructive
behavior,
according
to
researchers
at
the
University
of
Missouri.
Measuring
material
or
lifestyle
achievements
of
someone
you
know
can
lead
to
negative
feelings,
and
can
easily
lead
you
to
create
tension
in
a
relationship
where
there
was
none.
A
second
study
_by_the_
University
of
Missouri
found
that
people
who
post
often
--
about
anything
and
everything
they
are
doing
--
experience
more
troubles
in
their
marriages
and
romantic
relationships
than
those
who
don’t
post
about
their
lives
in
detail.
Another
study
by
researchers
at
Boston
University
also
found
that
heavy
social
media
users
are
32%
more
likely
to
think
about
leaving
their
husbands
or
wives.
This
is
most
lik_ely_be_cause
over-sharing
your
life
with
others
by
direct
messaging
and
posting
images
can
create
relationship
conflict.
Not
only
are
you
potentially
developing
bonds
with
new
people,
but
also
that
bonding
may
deepen
and
affect
your
own
relationship,
according
to
the
study
of
a
doctoral
student,
Russell
Clayton.
答案：It’s
no_rmal_t_o
follow
others
on
social
media.
Positive
behaviors
on
it
help
improve
your
confidence
and
sense
of
connection
to
others
while
inappropriate
behaviors
may
make
you
feel
anxious
and
depressed.
Reading
too
much
of
others’
material
success
may
cause
negative
feelings,
and
over-sharing
your
life
with
others
may
also
create
relationship
conflicts.
(57
words)
原文出处：
_https://21?????????è?????/health/la-he-social-wellbeing-20150606-story.html_
【详解】1.要点摘录
①If
you’_re_lik_e
most
of
the
world,
you
make
time
for
following
friends
on
social
media.
That
is
not
a
bad
thing
at
all.
②Positive__posti_ng
and
communication
can
help
improve
your
confidence
and
sense
of
connection
to
others.
It
can
be
surprisingly
easy,
though,
to
unconsciously
slip
into
less
healthful
behavior
on
social
media,
and
that
can
lead
to
anxiety
and
depression.
③Measurin_g_mate_rial
or
lifestyle
achievements
of
someone
you
know
can
lead
to
negative
feelings,
and
can
easily
lead
you
to
create
tension
in
a
relationship
where
there
was
none.
This
is
most
likely
because
over-sharing
your
life
with
others
by
direct
messaging
and
posting
images
can
create
relationship
conflict.
2.缜密构思
将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3两个要点进行分说。
3.遣词造句
It’s
normal
to
follow
others
on
social
media.
Positive
be_havior_s
on
it
help
improve
your
confidence
and
sense
of
connection
to
others
while
inappropriate
behaviors
ma
make
you
feel
anxious
and
depressed.
Reading
too
much__of_ot_hers’
material
success
may
cause
negative
feelings
and
over-sharing
your
life
with
others
may
also
create
relationship
conflicts.
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