新目标2021年中考英语一轮话题写作（五）人际交往 （写作思路+范文+模拟练习）

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话题写作（五）人际交往
教材话题链接
七年级上册
Unit
1
My
name
is
Gina
七年级上册
Unit
8
When
is
your
birthday
?
八年级上册
Unit
9
Can
you
come
to
my
party
?
八年级下册
Unit
4
Why
don’t
you
talk
to
your
parents
?
典/例/分/析
假设你是李华，你的朋友刘明在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到焦虑和郁闷。请众多根据以下内容用英语给也发一封电子邮件，帮助他克服焦虑情绪，轻松、快乐地学习和生活，内容包括：
1
每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候；
2
一定要告诉他人你的烦恼；
3
遇到困难时，多与同学交流或和老师，家长及时沟通；
4
可就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活等适当发挥；
注意：
1
词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3
文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear
Liu
Ming
,
Everyone
may
feel
worried
or
sad
sometimes
.
__________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours.
Li
Hua
满分作文五步法
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：___________________
人称:___________________
时态：___________________
功能:____________________
要点：
1._____________________
2.______________
3.
_______________
4.
_______________
适当发挥....
Step
2
搭-列提纲，搭好框架
框架结构
引入主题：
Everyone
may
feel
worried
or
sad
....
提出建议：tell
others
your
trouble
communicate
with
sb
listen
to
music
take
part
in
outdoor
activities
给予鼓励:
We
can
overcome
the
problems.....
Step
3
:
连-连词成句
引入主题：
Everyone
may
feel
____________________________________________________
.
主体内容：
You
can
tell
others
_________________________________________
It’s
good
________________your
classmates,
teachers
or
parents
.
You
get
relaxed
____________________________________
.
Smile
at
yourself
and
never
__________________________
about
your
problems
.
总结收尾
We
have
______________________________________
,
but
I
believe
all
of
them
can
be
overcome
in
the
end
Step
4.
组-组句成篇
Dear
Liu
Ming
,
Everyone
may
feel
worried
or
sad
sometimes
.
When
you
are
anxious
,
you
can
tell
others
your
trouble
.
I
think
communicating
with
your
classmates
,
teachers
or
parents
is
a
good
choice
.
Then
,
you’ll
find
that
you
can
solve
the
problems
from
study
or
life
easily
.
You
can
get
relaxed
by
listening
to
music
or
taking
part
in
outdoor
activities
.
Try
to
smile
at
yourself
and
never
keep
silent
about
your
problems.
Please
do
remember
:
you’re
not
alone
.
We
may
have
many
difficulties
,
but
I
believe
all
of
them
can
be
overcome
in
the
end
.
Yours
Li
Hua
Step
5
修-修饰美化
it作形式主语：
_______
all
right
___________
when
you
are
anxious
.
改为动名词作主语
______________________________________
is
another
way
to
help
you
get
relaxed
.
扩句：
What’s
more
,
we
______________________
have
a
heart-to-heart
communication
with
our
parents
or
friends
around
us
______________________________get
their
understanding
and
support
.
改为让步状语从句：
________
how
many
difficulties
we
have
,
I
believe
all
of
them
can
be
overcome
in
the
end
.
美文诵读
Dear
Liu
Ming
,
Everyone
may
feel
worried
or
sad
sometimes
.
It’s
all
right
to
tell
others
your
trouble
when
you
are
anxious
.
I
think
communicating
with
your
classmates
,
teachers
or
parents
is
a
good
choice
.
Then
,
you’ll
find
that
you
can
solve
the
problems
from
study
or
life
easily
.
Listening
to
music
or
taking
part
in
outdoor
activities
is
another
way
to
help
you
get
relaxed
.
Try
to
smile
at
yourself
and
never
keep
silent
about
your
problems
.
What’s
more
,
we
are
supposed
to
have
a
heart-to-heart
communication
with
our
parents
or
friends
around
us
so
as
to
get
their
understanding
and
support
.
No
matter
how
many
difficulties
we
have
,
I
believe
all
of
them
can
be
overcome
in
the
end
.
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
友谊类
forever
,
be
friendly
to
,
tell
the
truth
,
believe
in
,
help
each
other
,
communicate
with
,
between
...and
..
,
make
sb
.
happy
,
help
sb
.
with
sth
,
give
sb
.
a
hand
,
care
about
,
deepen
your
friendship
....
关系类
family
rules
,
build
a
happy
family
,
share
happiness
and
sadness
,
face
difficulties
,
smile
at
others
,
be
strict
with
,
pay
too
much
attention
to
my
exam
results
,
do
your
homework
,
respect
sb
,
show
love
and
concern
....
交往类
talk
with
,
argue
with
,
share
with
,
the
feeling
of
,
with
the
help
of
,
look
forward
to
,
get
on
well
with
,
cheer
up
,
help
with
,
understand
each
other
,
a
harmonious
relationship
,
be
kind
and
friendly
....
佳句积累
【开头句】
A
true
friend
reaches
for
your
hand
and
touches
your
heart
.
I
think
everyone
may
have
trouble
in
life
and
we
should
help
each
other
.
It’s
said
that
people
who
have
friends
are
happier
than
those
who
don’t
.
Being
kind
and
friendly
can
make
us
live
happily
and
get
along
with
other
people
.
The
more
we
get
together
,
the
better
we
understand
each
other
.
I
want
to
say
thank
you
to
my
dear
mother
.
Looking
back
at
the
past
three
years
,
I’d
like
to
say
thanks
to
you
for
helping
me
with
my
English
.
【发展句】
If
everyone
shows
his
/her
love
to
others
,
our
life
will
become
better
and
better
.
It’s
a
pleasure
to
offer
help
to
those
who
are
in
trouble
.
I’m
going
to
take
part
in
some
social
activities
so
that
I
can
know
more
about
society
.
Family
members
should
share
happiness
and
worries.
Sometimes
,
even
the
smallest
thing
like
walking
with
family
makes
them
happier
.
With
my
mother’s
help
,
I
didn’t
lose
my
best
friend
and
learned
how
to
deal
with
problems
with
friends.
【结尾句】
If
you
do
as
I
mentioned
above
,
you
can
get
on
well
with
your
parents
.
As
far
as
I’m
concerned
,
true
friends
should
be
honest
and
understanding
,
I
hope
you
can
be
good
friends
again
.
I
believe
you
can
get
along
well
with
everyone
.
All
in
all
,
I
hope
you
can
repair
your
friendship
and
understand
the
true
meaning
of
friendship
.
No
man
is
an
island
.
As
the
saying
goes
,
“A
man
without
friends
is
an
angel
without
wings
.”
I
am
sure
I
can
fly
higher
and
farther
with
the
wings
of
friendship
.
No
matter
what
will
happen
in
the
future
,
I
will
love
her
forever
.
Let’s
forget
about
the
past
and
become
good
friends
again
.
佳/篇/创/作
英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What
can
we
do
to
make
home
a
happier
place
?”
为主题的讨论，同学们把自己的想法写在了卡片上，请结合卡片信息，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English
Learning
投稿。
★spend
more
time
with
family
★share
happiness
and
worries
★remember
family’s
birthdays
注意：
词数90左右；
2短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3
文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
In
our
English
class
,
we
had
a
discussion
about
what
we
can
do
to
make
home
a
happier
place
.
____________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：电子邮件
人称：第一人称或第二人称
时态
：一般现在时
功能：提建议
要点：
情绪认同
说出烦恼
找人交流
其他缓解方式
......
Step3
-连-连词成句
worried
or
sad
sometimes
your
trouble
when
you
are
anxious
;
to
communicate
with
;
by
listening
to
music
or
taking
part
in
activities
;
keep
silent
many
difficulties
Step
5
修-修饰美化
It’s
;
to
tell
others
your
trouble
Listening
to
music
or
taking
part
in
outdoor
activities
.
are
supposed
to
;
so
as
to
No
matter
One
possible
version
：
In
our
English
class
,
we
had
a
discussion
about
what
we
can
do
to
make
home
a
happier
place
.
We
shared
different
ideas
.
Some
say
it’s
better
to
spend
more
time
with
family
.
The
more
we
get
together
,
the
better
we
understand
each
other
.
Family
members
should
share
happiness
and
worries
.
For
example
,
when
we
have
problems
,
we
should
try
to
cheer
each
other
up
.
Others
believe
it’s
important
to
give
small
presents
to
our
family
on
their
birthdays
.
I
think
,
showing
love
for
family
is
necessary
.
If
we
help
them
with
the
housework
,they
may
feel
warmer
.
Sometimes
,
even
the
smallest
thing
like
walking
with
family
makes
them
happier
.
Though
we’re
young
,
we
can
do
much
to
make
a
happier
home
.
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