新目标2021年中考英语一轮话题写作（六）节假日活动 （写作思路+范文+模拟练习）

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话题写作（六）节假日活动
教材话题链接
八年级上册Unit
8
How
do
you
make
a
banana
milk
shake
?
-Thanksgiving
in
the
United
States
P61.
九年级全一册Unit
2
I
think
that
mooncakes
are
delicious
.
九年级全一册Unit
12
Life
is
full
of
the
unexpected
.
-April
Fool’s
Day
P94.
典/例/分/析
假如你叫王宁，你的美国笔友Tom
对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣，他想请你介绍你最喜欢的一个节目，如中秋节、端午节、春节等。
你通常是怎么庆祝的，以及你喜欢
这个节日的原因，请用英语回复邮件。
注意：
1
词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3
文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear
Tom
,
How
is
it
going
?
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours.
Wang
Ning
满分作文五步法
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：___________________
人称:___________________
时态：___________________
功能:____________________
要点：
1._____________________
2.______________
3.
_______________
4.
_______________
适当发挥....
Step
2
搭-列提纲，搭好框架
框架结构
引入主题：
I’m
glad
to
hear
that
....be
提出建议：my
favorite
festival
...
introduction
to
the
festival
the
reason
I
like
the
festival
总结收尾：I
hope
that
my
letter
will
help
you
...
Step
3
:
连-连词成句
引入主题：
I’m
glad
to
hear
that
you
___________________________________Chinese
traditional
festival
.
.
主体内容：
My
favorite
Chinese
festival
is
________________________________
Celebration
:
our
family
members
usually
_____________________________________
.
I
always
admire
the
moon
and
___________________________________
my
family
.
Reasons:
I
like
eating
mooncakes
.
My
family
can
get
together
.
总结收尾
I
hope
that
my
e-mail
will
help
you
_____________________________
the
Chinese
festival
Step
4.
组-组句成篇
Dear
Tom
,
How
is
it
going
?
I’m
glad
to
hear
that
you
are
interested
in
Chinese
traditional
festivals
.
My
family
Chinese
festival
is
the
Mid-Autumn
Festival
.
It
usually
comes
in
September
or
October
.
On
that
day
,
we
usually
get
together
to
have
a
big
dinner
.
After
that
I
always
admire
the
moon
and
share
mooncakes
with
my
family
.
I
like
eating
mooncakes
.
They
are
in
the
shape
of
a
full
moon
.
They
carry
people’s
wishes
to
the
family
they
love
and
miss
.
In
short
,
the
Mid
Autumn
Festival
is
the
day
of
pleasure
and
happiness
.
I
hope
that
my
e-mail
will
help
you
know
more
about
the
Chinese
festival
.
Yours
.
Wang
Ning
Step
5
修-修饰美化
变换句式：
It
_______________________________
the
15th
day
of
the
8th
lunar
month
,
usually
in
September
or
early
October
of
the
Gregorian
calendar
.
扩句：
This
festival
is
___________
the
harvest
and
to
admire
the
beautiful
moon
.
On
that
day
_________________________________usually
get
together
and
have
a
nice
big
meal
.
合并句子：
I
love
this
festival
because
I
like
eating
mooncakes
_______________
which
are
made
from
peanuts
and
fruit
and
etc
.
美文诵读
Dear
Tom
,
How
is
it
going
?
I’m
glad
to
hear
that
you
are
interested
in
Chinese
traditional
festival
.
My
favorite
Chinese
festival
is
the
Mid
Autumn
Festival
.
It
falls
on
the
15th
day
of
the
8th
lunar
month
,
usually
in
September
or
early
October
of
the
Gregorian
calendar
.
This
festival
is
to
celebrate
the
harvest
and
to
admire
the
beautiful
moon
.
On
that
day
our
family
members
from
different
places
usually
get
together
and
have
a
nice
big
meal
.
After
that
I
always
admire
the
moon
and
share
mooncakes
with
my
family
.
I
love
this
festival
because
I
like
eating
mooncakes
shaped
like
a
full
moon
which
are
made
from
peanuts
and
fruit
and
etc
.
The
mooncake
has
the
meaning
of
family
reunion
and
it
carries
people’s
wishes
to
the
family
they
love
and
miss
.
In
short
,
the
Mid-Autumn
Festival
is
the
day
of
pleasure
and
happiness
.
I
hope
that
my
e-mail
will
help
you
know
more
about
the
Chinese
festival
.
Yours.
Wang
Ning
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
节日类
New
Year’s
Day
,
the
Spring
Festival
,
the
Mid-Autumn
Festival
,
the
Lantern
Festival
,
National
Day
,
the
Dragon
Boa
Festival
,
Double
Ninth
Day
,
Christmas
Day
,
Thanksgiving
Day
,
Mother’s
Day
,
Father’s
Day
,
Children’s
Day
,
World
Sight
Day
活动类
get
together
,
come
back
home
,
stay
up
late
,
share
something
,
eat
dumplings
,
wish
each
other
,
take
part
in
,
chat
,
sit
around
the
table
,
hang
out
,
go
on
holiday
,
go
to
visit
,
have
a
good
rest
and
relax
,
go
sightseeing
,
do
more
outdoor
sports
,
climb
the
mountains
,
travel
around
the
world
....
愿景类
I
hope
that
....
,
come
true
,
dream
of
doing
,
best
wishes
,
good
luck,
look
forward
to
,
I
think
....
,
I
believe
....,
I’m
sure
that
....
佳句积累
【开头句】
I’m
glad
to
hear
that
you
are
interested
in
Chinese
traditional
festivals
.
I
will
take
part
in
many
kinds
of
activities
.
I
am
going
to
admire
the
moon
and
talk
about
Chinese
folk
stories
.
We’re
going
to
get
together
to
celebrate
the
Mid-Autumn
Festival
.
I’m
going
to
have
a
good
rest
and
relax
myself
in
the
Mid-Autumn
Festival
.
Now
some
students’
eyesight
is
declining
,
so
it
is
important
to
protect
eyesight
.
It
is
one
of
the
Chinese
traditional
festivals
which
has
about
two
thousand
years
of
history
.
The
Spring
Festival
is
the
most
important
for
us
Chinese.
【发展句】
It
is
held
on
the
15th
day
of
the
8th
month
of
the
lunar
calendar
.
The
festival
is
celebrated
to
honor
the
great
poet
Qu
yuan
.
I
like
eating
mooncakes
that
are
shaped
like
the
moon
.
The
mooncake
has
the
meaning
of
family
reuion
and
it
carries
people’s
wishes
to
the
family
they
love
and
miss
.
It
is
a
time
for
family
members
to
get
together
.
We
also
watch
the
Spring
Festival
Gala
and
stay
up
late
,
hoping
to
have
a
new
start
in
the
following
year
.
What
I’m
interested
in
most
is
the
show
of
beautiful
tea
sets,
which
has
left
a
deep
impression
on
me
.
First
of
all
,
I
want
to
introduce
the
Lantern
Festival
.
We
eat
yuanxiao
,
and
go
to
watch
lantern
shows
and
the
dragon
dance
to
pray
for
health
and
happiness
for
the
whole
year
.
【结尾句】
I’m
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you
all
.
I
hope
that
my
letter
will
help
you
know
more
about
Chinese
festivals
.
In
short
,
the
Mid-Autumn
Festival
is
the
day
of
pleasure
and
happiness
.
I’m
sure
I’ll
have
an
interesting
and
meaningful
festival
.
I
hope
you
will
come
here
and
experience
this
wonderful
festival
.
You
will
have
an
unforgettable
experience
if
you
come
to
China
before
this
festival
.
The
Spring
Festival
can
not
only
make
us
feel
love
and
happiness
,
but
also
the
importance
of
home
and
family
.
I
will
never
forget
the
smile
on
my
mother’s
face
when
we
are
having
dinner
together
.
Meanwhile
,
teamwork
plays
an
important
role
in
the
relay
race
.
佳/篇/创/作
假定你是林立，刚从英国结束为期五天的旅游回来，感谢好友Rick
的款待，得知他对中国的文化非常感兴趣，特别是即将到来的端午节，请你写一封信介绍中国的端午节，请你写一封信介绍中国的端午节。
内容要点：
感谢他的款待。
介绍中国的端午节（时间、意义、风俗等）
欢迎他来中国。
.......
注意：
词数90左右；
2短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3
文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear
Rick
,
How
is
everything
going
?
__________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best
wishes
参考答案
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：电子邮件
人称：第一人称
时态
：一般现在时
功能：节日介绍
要点：
点明最喜欢的节日
庆祝方式
喜欢原因
Step3
-连-连词成句
are
interested
in
the
Mid-Autumn
Festival
;
get
together
and
have
a
nice
meal
;
share
mooncakes
with
know
more
about
Step
5
修-修饰美化
falls
on
to
celebrate
;
our
family
members
from
different
places
.
shaped
like
a
full
moon
One
possible
version
：
How
is
everything
going
?
I
had
a
five-day
trip
to
London
last
week
.
I
would
like
to
express
my
gratitude
for
your
hospitality
and
kindness
when
I
was
in
London
.
Knowing
that
you
take
a
great
interest
in
Chinese
culture
,
especially
the
Dragon
Boat
Festival
,
I
would
love
to
introduce
it
to
you
.The
Dragon
Boat
Festival
,
one
of
the
most
traditional
festival
in
China
,
falls
on
May
5th
of
the
lunar
calendar
.
People
celebrate
this
festival
in
memory
of
Qu
Yuan
,
who
was
a
Chinese
poet
.
People
in
China
will
also
hold
a
variety
of
activities
to
honor
him
,
such
as
dragon
boat
racing
,
eating
zongzi
and
so
on
.
Besides
,
we
also
have
a
3-day
holiday
during
the
festival
.
Hope
to
see
you
in
China
soon
.
You
will
have
an
unforgettable
experience
if
you
come
to
China
before
this
festival
.
Best
wishes
.
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