(共16张PPT)
外研版七年级下
写作素养提升练
Module
4 Life
in
the
future
外研版七年级下
本模块以“未来生活”为话题,要求学生能够使用一般将来时表达对未来生活的想象和向往。
different,
robot,
machine,
weather,
clothes,
school,
traffic,
everywhere,
pollution…
单
词:
in
the
future,
long
holidays,
light
work,
free
time,
in
twenty
years’
time,
some
day,
more
and
more,
a
big
change…
短
语:
1.
Life
in
the
future
will
be
different.
2.
In
ten
years’
time,
maybe
there
won’t
be
any...
3.
Students/
Teachers
will/
won’t...
4.
Will
there
be.../
Is
there
going
to
be…?
5.
What
will
our
future
life
be
like?
6.
I’m
looking
forward
to...
句
型:
我们无法改变过去,却能用勤奋和智慧创造美好未来。亲爱的同学,你对未来的生活有着怎样的期待呢?请以“My
life
in
the
future”为题写一篇英语短文,畅想自己未来的学习、工作和生活。
要求:
1.
语句通顺,合乎逻辑,书写规范。60~80
词。
2.
文中不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称。
1.
体裁:记叙文
2.
人称:第一人称
3.
时态:一般将来时
【审题指导】
【思路构建】
未来生活
引出话题
My
life
in
the
future
will
be...
学习、工作和生活
I’m
going
to
be
a
...
I
will
never
give
up
studying...
We’ll
travel
a
lot
and
do
lots
of
sports.
...
表达愿望
I
hope...
My
life
in
the
future
My
life
in
the
future
will
be
colorful
and
meaningful.
I’m
going
to
be
a
good
doctor
after
I
leave
school.
But
I
will
never
give
up
studying
and
my
robot
teacher
will
help
me
get
more
education
at
home.
I
believe
I’ll
help
my
parents
to
be
healthy
and
happy.
In
my
spare
time,
I’ll
stay
with
my
【范文赏析】
family.
We’ll
travel
a
lot
and
do
lots
of
sports.
I’ll
also
read
as
many
books
as
I
can,
for
I
want
to
be
a
better
man.
I
hope
my
dream
will
come
true
with
my
hard
work
and
that
the
life
in
the
future
will
get
better
and
better.
点评:本文结构清晰,语言精炼,时态明显而准确。充满想象力的观点让文章富有个性化色彩,此为亮点所在。使用经典三段式行文方法,对未来生活进行了设想和介绍,并在最后表达了愿望。will
和be
going
to
表示对将来的计划和打算,for,with
的使用使内容富有逻辑,紧密相连。
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暑假将至,你校English
Club
在社刊上发起了征文活动,
题目为“
My
Plan
for
Summer
Holiday”。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80
词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1.
学习计划
2.
运动计划
3.
娱乐计划
4.
你的愿望
写作要求:
1.
内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2.
语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.
文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分;
4.
开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My
Plan
for
Summer
Holiday
Summer
holiday
is
coming.______________________
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My
Plan
for
Summer
Holiday
Summer
holiday
is
coming.
I
will
make
a
plan
for
it.
First,
I
will
finish
my
homework.
Then
I'll
read
more
good
books
to
improve
myself.
Second,
I
will
keep
exercising
and
learn
to
play
table
tennis.
It's
good
for
my
health.
Third,
I'll
stay
in
Nanning
for
two
weeks.
Also,
I
plan
to
climb
mountains.
I
hope
I
can
be
a
volunteer.
I
want
to
visit
the
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old
people,
give
them
gifts
and
sing
for
them.
I'm
looking
forward
to
having
a
good
summer
vacation.