新目标2021年中考英语一轮话题写作（七）学习提升 （写作思路+范文+模拟练习）

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话题写作（七）学习提升
教材话题链接
七年级上册
Unit
9
My
favorite
subject
is
science
.
八年级上册
Unit
6
I’m
going
to
study
computer
science
.
九年级全一册
Unit
1
How
can
we
become
good
learners
?
典/例/分/析
假定你是刘芳，你看到美国学生Sharon
在网上发的帖子，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin)水平，她可以教对方英语。请根据以下提示，用英语给她写一封电子
邮件。
1
表达向她提供帮助的意愿；
2
说明你能胜任的理由；
3
给出学好普通话的建议；
4
提出想学习英语的要求；
注意：
1
词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3
文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear
Sharon
,
How
is
it
going
?
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
Yours
Liu
Fang
满分作文五步法
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：___________________
人称:___________________
时态：___________________
功能:____________________
要点：
1._____________________
2.______________
3.
_______________
4.
_______________
适当发挥....
Step
2
搭-列提纲，搭好框架
框架结构
开篇点题：
关注到需求...want
to
improve
the
level
of
Mandarin
可提供帮助：offer
help
主体内容：
Reasons
：learn
Mandarin
for
many
year
Mandarin
is
a
must
in
my
daily
life
.
Advice
:
practice
Mandarin
every
day
read
more
books
in
Chinese
see
some
Chinese
films
....
My
request
:
to
learn
English
The
study
way
:
can
chat
online
.
总结收尾
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
Step
3
:
连-连词成句
开篇点题：
Your
post
said
that
you
___________________________________
Mandarin
.
I’m
quite
interested
in
it
.
I
think
______________________________
it
.
2
主体内容：
I
have
____________
Mandarin
_____________
many
years
.
I
can
__________________________________________________
.
You
should
__________________________every
day
.
You
can
read
more
books
_________________
,
see
some
Chinese
films
____________________
some
Chinese
songs
.
We
can
_________________and
______________
each
other
.
3
总结收尾：
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
Step
4.
组-组句成篇
Dear
Sharon
,
How
is
it
going
?
Your
post
said
that
you
want
to
improve
your
Mandarin
.
I’m
quite
interested
in
it
.
I
think
I’m
fit
for
it
.
I
have
been
learning
Mandarin
for
many
years,
and
Mandarin
is
a
must
in
my
daily
life
.
So
I
can
help
you
learn
Mandarin
well
.
You
should
practice
Mandarin
every
day
.
Besides
,
you
can
read
more
books
in
Chinese
,
see
Chinese
films
,
listen
to
some
Chinese
songs
and
so
on
.
You
know,
speaking
and
listening
are
very
important
for
language
learning
.
In
your
post
,
you
said
you
can
teach
English
as
a
reward
.
It’s
just
what
I
want
.
I’m
eager
to
improve
my
English
.
If
you
agree
,
we
can
chat
online
to
learn
from
each
other
.
We
can
both
learn
well
soon
.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
Yours
Liu
Fang
Step
5
修-修饰美化
合并句子：
I’m
quite
_________________________
your
post
_____________
you
want
to
improve
your
Mandarin
.
扩句：
___________
China
.
I
have
been
learning
Mandarin
for
many
years
.
变换句型：
You’d
better
____________________________________
Mandarin
every
day
扩句：
I
believe
__________________________
can
improve
our
oral
speaking
___________________
.
美文诵读
Dear
Sharon
,
How
is
it
going
?
I’m
girl
from
China.
I’m
quite
interested
in
your
post
that
you
want
to
improve
your
Mandarin.
I
think
I’m
fit
for
it
.
As
born
in
China
.
I
have
been
learning
Mandarin
for
many
years
.
Mandarin
is
a
must
for
me
to
communicate
with
others
in
my
daily
life
.
So
I’m
quite
confident
that
I
can
help
you
learn
Mandarin
well
.
Learning
Mandarin
takes
time
.
You’d
better
spare
some
time
to
practice
Mandarin
every
day
.
Besides
,
you
can
read
more
books
in
Chinese
,
see
some
Chinese
films
,
listen
to
some
Chinese
songs
and
so
on
.
You
know
,
speaking
and
listening
are
very
important
for
language
learning
.
In
your
post
,
you
said
you
can
teach
English
as
a
reward
.
It’s
just
what
I
want
.
I’m
eager
to
improve
my
English
.
If
you
agree
,
we
can
chat
online
for
an
hour
every
night
,
half
in
Chinese
and
the
rest
in
English
.
I
believe
both
of
us
can
improve
our
oral
speaking
as
soon
as
possible
.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply
.
Yours,
Liu
Fang
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
学习类
learn
from
each
other
,
improve
,
communicate
with
sb
,
more
practice
,
study
in
China
,
open
and
free
,
interesting
and
lively
,
use
the
computer
,
take
notes
,
read
English
aloud
,
prepare
for
,
be
good
for
...
建议类
spend
much
time
,
practice
makes
perfect
,
read
more
books
,
see
some
Chinese
films
,
listen
to
some
Chinese
songs
,
chat
online
,
by
listening
to
music
/
watching
films
,
discuss
in
groups
,
work
together
,
study
tips
,
offer
some
great
advice
...
佳句积累
【开头句】
Here
are
my
learning
ways
that
I
want
to
share
with
you
.
I’m
quite
confident
that
I
can
help
you
.
I’m
quite
interested
in
it
.
I
think
I’m
fit
for
it
.
I
am
glad
to
receive
your
e-mail
and
I’d
like
to
tell
you
something
about
how
we
study
in
class
.
I’d
like
to
share
my
study
tips
with
you
.
【发展句】
As
born
in
China
,
I
have
been
learning
Mandarin
for
many
years
.
I’m
Chinese
,
which
means
Mandarin
is
a
must
for
me
to
communicate
with
others
in
my
daily
life
.
As
an
old
saying
goes
,
“Practice
makes
perfect
.”
So
you
are
sure
to
make
great
progress
.
First
,
you’d
better
communicate
with
your
teachers
regularly
.
In
this
way
they
may
offer
some
great
advice
on
both
your
study
and
life
.
Listen
to
the
teacher
attentively
and
take
notes
carefully
so
that
you
can
review
them
later
.
Our
teachers
give
us
enough
time
to
study
and
think
for
ourselves
.
..which
will
help
you
practice
what
you
have
learned
and
make
it
fresh
in
your
mind
.
【结尾句】
I’m
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you
all
.
Hope
for
your
early
reply
.
We
can
help
each
other
to
improve
our
speaking
ability
.
We’d
better
chat
online
for
half
an
hour
in
English
.
I
believe
both
of
us
can
improve
our
oral
speaking
as
soon
as
possible
.
I
really
hope
my
advice
can
be
helpful
to
you
and
that
you
can
enjoy
your
new
school
life
.
I
hope
that
you
can
share
your
school
life
with
me
.
If
you
have
any
suggestions
,
feel
free
to
tell
me
.
I
do
believe
we’ll
have
a
great
time
.
佳/篇/创/作
假定你是王一鸣，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得了一等将，校报想你写一篇文章介绍你课外学习英语的经验，刊登在英文版上。
要点如下：
参加“英语角”的益处；
坚持用英语写日记的作用；
英语阅读网站对你的帮助；
.....
注意：
词数90左右；
2短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3
文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
I’m
Wang
Yiming
,
a
student
from
Xinhua
Middle
School
.______________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：电子邮件
人称：第一人称、第二人称
时态
：一般现在时
功能：请求与提供帮助
要点：
关注到需求
希望提供帮助
胜任的理由
学好普通话的建议
提出想学英语的要求
Step3
-连-连词成句
want
to
improve
your
;
I’m
fit
for
(1)
been
learning
;
for
;
help
you
learn
Mandarin
well
(2
)
practice
Mandarin
;
in
Chinese
;
and
listen
to
chat
online
;
learn
from
Step
5
修-修饰美化
interested
in
;
that
As
born
in
spare
some
time
to
practice
both
of
us
;
as
soon
as
possible
One
possible
version
：
I’m
Wang
Yiming
,
a
student
from
Xinhua
Middle
School
.
Not
long
ago
I
won
the
first
prize
in
the
English
contest
held
in
our
school
.
Here
I’d
like
to
share
my
English
learning
experience
after
class
with
you
.
First
,
I
find
taking
part
in
English
Corner
can
be
of
great
help
in
learning
English
.
By
practicing
there
,
I
can
talk
freely
with
my
English
teachers
and
classmates
in
English
.
Second
,
keeping
a
diary
in
English
is
my
another
hobby
and
it
benefits
a
lot
to
my
English
writing
.
It
can
help
me
not
only
use
the
knowledge
of
English
.
Third
,
English
Reading
is
a
very
useful
website
,
which
has
many
interesting
is
a
very
useful
website
,
which
has
many
interesting
English
articles
.
By
reading
these
articles
I
have
got
a
lot
.
All
in
all
,
whatever
measures
you
take
,
stick
to
them
and
there’s
no
doubt
that
you
can
make
greater
progress
in
English
learning
in
your
life
.
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