2021中考英语二轮复习题型突破七 书面表达话题7　难忘之事【解题指导】

2021中考英语二轮复习 模拟适应测试
题型七　书面表达
话题七　难忘之事
以“难忘的事”为主题的书面表达近几年在全国考查频繁，主要出题角度有：1.描述自己的亲身经历和感受；2.描述他人的经历以及对自己的影响，如2020年天津要求描写李华的一次难忘经历；3.描述重大的事件给自己带来的影响或启发，如2020年铜仁描写新冠疫情期间的见闻；4.描写亲人和朋友之间发生的难忘的事，如2020年泰州描写和朋友Mike之间的难忘的经历。
(2020·铜仁)全球新冠疫情依然严峻，而我国的疫情防控成就令人瞩目，全国万众一心，团结抗疫的画面令我们永生难忘。你的美国笔友Michael想了解你对此的所见所闻和所思所想。请你根据下面的提示内容，回一封邮件。
提示：(所见所闻)我们政府采取了很多措施：执行(carry out)隔离(quarantine)治疗(treatment)的政策(policy)；兴建(build)许多特殊的(special)医院；许多优秀的(excellent)医护人员自愿(volunteer)去帮助灾区(disaster areas)。
(所思所想)作为学生，我们要保护好自己，比如……(至少两点)。
希望全世界人民……(work together; save more lives)。
要求：1.80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.句子通顺，语意连贯，符合逻辑；
3.必须包含所有提示内容，但不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
4.务必书写正确规范，卷面整洁。
【思路点拨】
根据题目要求和要点提示可知，文章的主体部分(文章首段已给出)应该分为三部分来写。第一部分写自己的所见所闻，即新冠疫情爆发以来政府采取的各项有效措施和医护人员的无私奉献；第二部分写经过此事之后，谈谈关于如何保护自己的想法；第三部分表达自己的希望。
【写作导图】
【标准范文】
Dear Michael，
I'm glad to receive your e?mail.Now I'd like to share my opinions with you.Since COVID?19 broke out，our government has taken many measures.
①First，we carried out quarantine treatment policy.①Second，we built some special hospitals，such as Huoshenshan Hospital and Leishenshan Hospital to reduce the stress of the increasing number of patients.①Third，thousands of excellent medical workers volunteered to help the disaster areas.They were so brave that they considered it as their battle field.
②As a student，we are supposed to take care of ourselves.On the one hand，we should try not to go to crowded places.②On the other hand, we'd better wear masks outdoors.
③I hope all people around the world can work together to follow the rules above.In this case，we can save more lives.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming
点评：①描写中国政府和医护人员为抗击疫情所作的努力，用first，second和third来分条叙述，使文章条理清晰。
②叙述作为学生应该如何保护自己。使用了大量短语和丰富的句型结构。
③简短地表达了自己的愿望。
【短语】
积极正面的感受：
1.be moved deeply by 被……深深地感动
2.be thankful to sb. 对某人有感激之情
3.be proud of 为……感到骄傲/自豪
4.be pleased with 对……感到满意
5.be surprised at 对……感到惊讶
6.be sure about 确信；对……有把握
7.be excited about 对……感到兴奋
8.be of help/helpful 有帮助的
9.enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
担心或其他非正面的感受：
1.be afraid of (doing) sth.害怕/担心做某事/某物
2.be afraid to do sth. 因害怕而不敢做某事
3.be/feel sorry for 为……感到可惜
4.be tired of/be bored with 对……感到厌倦
5.be angry with sb. 生某人的气
6.be angry at/about sth.因某事生气
7.be mad at sb. 生某人的气
【句型——开头句】
1.There is one thing which has impressed me a lot.
2.Last Sunday，I did something amazing for my best friend Judy.
3.On a cold morning，I saw a boy helping an old lady go across the street.
【句型——中间句】
1.With the help of Lisa，I did't fall behind the other students in my class.
2.Mr.Lu gave me some useful advice when I didn't know how to deal with it.
3.I used to be a basketball player.My dad trained me so hard although he was tired after a day's work.
4.I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study.
5.In fact，what they did upset me deeply，but I was proud of what I did.
6.Without thinking twice，Jim gave the old man a hand，which impressed me a lot.
7.That was a big challenge for him，but he was not afraid at all.
8.My cousin lost his right arm in a car accident，but he didn't give up his dream of being a violinist.I admire him very much.
9.To my surprise，he tried to practice playing the piano with his feet.
10.He spent one hour every day helping Lucy with her study.Lucy has made much progress.
【句型——结尾句】
1.I was so thankful to him that I made a decision to help others from then on.
2.In short，I think the excellent game will be in my mind forever.
3.What a strong?minded woman she is！I have learned a lot from her.
4.No matter how hard life is，we shouldn't give up our hope.
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