2021中考英语二轮复习题型突破七 书面表达话题2　梦想与计划【解题指导】

2021中考英语二轮复习 模拟适应测试
题型七　书面表达
话题二　梦想与计划
2019年黄石中考的书面表达要求考生写一封书信，向同学介绍自己的暑期计划。从全国范围看，“梦想与计划”是近年英语中考书面表达的考查热点话题之一。本话题在中考书面表达中通常从以下几个角度去考查：1.谈论职业规划：如2020年黔南州“谈谈你对未来职业选择的想法”，2020年岳阳“谈对未来职业的憧憬”；2.谈论计划或安排：如2020年武汉“谈英语学习计划”。
(2019·黄石)假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请给Tom回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来黄石游玩。
内容包括：1.读几本好书；
2.参加社会实践活动；
3.帮父母做家务；
4.和朋友一起锻炼；
5.邀请Tom。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关信息；
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：有意义的 meaningful；经典文学作品classic literature works；社会实践活动social practice activities
【思路点拨】
本题要求写一封邮件向朋友介绍自己的暑期安排，主要内容提示已给出。写作时，可以分三部分来写。第一部分打招呼，并简要说明写作意图；第二部分：按照提示具体叙述自己的暑期计划并说明原因；第三部分：邀请对方来黄石游玩。
文章的主体部分是介绍自己的暑期计划，这一部分主要用一般将来时。写作时，句式结构可以丰富一些，不要通篇使用“I will”的结构；要点之间可以适当地使用连词，使得文章语意连贯。
【写作导图】
【标准范文】
Dear Tom，
I'm happy to hear from you.①You asked me about my plan for the summer vacation.Now let me tell you about it.
②First，I will read some classic literature works.Reading makes people wise.②Second，I will take part in some social practice activities，such as volunteering in an after?school study program to teach kids and helping clean up our city parks.②Besides that，I plan to help my parents do some housework.Doing housework helps us to understand the idea of fairness.It also helps to develop our independence.
②What's more，I plan to take exercise with my friends.As long as the weather is fine，we will play basketball in our neighborhood.
③Would you like to come to visit Huangshi? ③If you come，I will show you around our city.
Yours，
Li Hua
点评：①用简短的语句介绍自己这封邮件的主要内容，引出下文。
②逐条叙述了自己的暑期计划，要点之间用了first，second，besides that和what's more，层次清晰，衔接自然。本段用到了很多短语和丰富的句型，文章读起来很流畅。
③最后一段邀请对方来黄石，用了if引导的状语从句结束全文。
【短语】
1.grow up 长大
2.dream to be/dream of being 梦想成为
3.be good at/do well in 在……方面做得好
4.plan to do sth.计划做某事
5.make a decision/make decisions to do sth.做决定/决定做某事
6.in the future 在将来
7.in ten years 十年后
8.give away 赠送，分发
9.have a better future 有一个更美好的未来
10.look forward to 期盼
11.make new friends 结交新朋友
12.share sth.with sb.与某人分享某物
13.take up the challenge 接受挑战
14.expect to do sth.期待做某事
15.would like to do sth.想要做某事
【句型——开头句】
1.Everyone has his or her own dream/dream job. So do I.
2.The dream is regarded as the goal of a person's life.
3.The life goal is just like a light，guiding you in darkness and helping you overcome difficulties.
4.Life is full of challenges and hopes.That's why everyone wishes for the future.
5.Different people have different ideas in choosing their jobs.
6.To have a colorful and meaningful experience，I made a plan for the coming journey.
7.Here are my summer vacation plans that I want to share with you.
【句型——中间句】
1.To achieve my dream，I will try to get much knowledge on medicine.
2.I will give away my clothes to the children in poor areas so that they can keep warm in cold winter.
3.I want to be a teacher because I think I can get along well with the kids I teach.
4.It's necessary for us to work harder to achieve our goals.
5.In order to realize my dream，I will do/try my best from now on.
6.I have made up my mind to do what I really want to so that I can realize my dream.
7.We plan to send our cards on which we have written our thanks to our teachers.
【句型——结尾句】
1.I strongly believe that we should never give up our dreams.
2.I'm sure I can do better in the coming school year.
3.As long as we work hard, we will realize our dreams.
4.I believe if I put my heart into it，I can be a famous dancer one day.
5.Whether it's successful or not，I believe that trying to achieve my dream will make my life meaningful.
https://www.21cnjy.com/help/help_extract.php