2021中考英语二轮复习题型突破七 书面表达话题1　健康与安全【解题指导】

2021中考英语二轮复习 模拟适应测试
题型七　书面表达
题型一　完形填空
2020年黄石书面表达的题目是“How to keep healthy”，要求考生就保持健康提出建议。
“健康与安全”是全国中考书面表达常考的话题，有以下几种出题角度：1.就保持身体或身体某一局部健康提出自己的建议，如2019年黔三州“如何保护视力”；2020年黄石“如何保持健康”；2.就饮食健康提出自己的见解，如2019年乐山“谈对陪餐制的看法”；2020年泰安“谈网上点餐的利弊”；3.就保护人身安全提出建议，如2020年黔东南“How to Keep Safe”。
(2020·黄石)我市某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择两到三点，写一篇题为“How to keep healthy”的短文，参加此次活动。
要点：
1.运动有益身心健康。多锻炼，如跑步、爬山、骑车等；
2.养成健康的饮食习惯，如多喝水和牛奶，多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃垃圾食品和快餐；
3.学习有计划，早睡早起不熬夜，劳逸结合；
4.乐观、积极、友好，与同学和睦相处。
要求：
1.可结合自身事例、适当发挥；语言通顺，意思连贯；
2.80词左右。(无须写标题，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)
参考词汇：keep healthy physically and mentally保持身心健康；regularly有规律地；optimistic乐观的
【思路点拨】
本题为材料作文，要求就“How to keep healthy”为题写一篇短文。题目中已给出4条要点，要求考生从中选择2～3点展开论述。
文章可以分三部分来写，第一部分用于引出文章主题，第二部分则详细叙述应该如何健康生活，第三部分提倡人们按照上面的建议去做。
【写作导图】
【标准范文】
①Keeping healthy plays an important role in our daily life.What should we do to keep healthy?
②First，exercise is good for keeping healthy physically and mentally.We can participate in regular exercise，such as cycling，mountain climbing，running and so on.②Second，it's very important for us to form healthy eating habits.We should drink more water and milk，and eat more vegetables and fruits.And we should avoid eating too much junk food and fast food.②Third，we should be optimistic，positive and friendly.We should also get along well with classmates.
③If we try to do that，we'll be a healthier person.
点评：
①第一段写了保持健康的重要性，然后用一个问句引出下文。
②从运动、饮食、情绪三个方面具体叙述了如何保持健康。使用First，Second，Third来衔接上下文，使文章层次清晰。
③最后用一句话简短总结全文，告诉读者只要按照上述的建议做，就能保持健康。
【短语】
1.stay up 熬夜
2.junk food 垃圾食品
3.spend too much time(in)playing with mobile phones/playing computer games
花太多时间玩手机/电脑游戏
4.be bad for/be harmful to… 对……有害
5.do/take exercise 锻炼
6.take part in 参加
7.keep a balanced diet 保持均衡的饮食
8.had better do sth.最好做某事
9.pay attention to注意
10.be good for 对……有好处
11.ask teachers for help 向老师寻求帮助
12.be strict with sb. 对某人要求严格
13.call the police 报警
14.follow/obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则
15.go upstairs/downstairs上/下楼
16.keep away from 远离……
【句型——开头句】
健康：
1.As is known to us all，it is very important to keep healthy.
2.After experiencing the pain caused by illness，I realized the value of health.
3.As far as I am concerned，health is the most precious gift that a man can ever have.
4.Nowadays，more and more people have known about the importance of keeping healthy.
5.There is no doubt that junk food is made delicious to attract us.
安全：
1.As teenagers，we must learn something about how to keep safe.
2.Friends can make our life colorful，but we must be careful to make friends，especially online.
3.When we are in danger，we should call the police or ask teachers for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.
4.When we are facing an accident，the first and most important rule is to stay calm.
【句型——中间句】
健康：
1.We should develop a good habit of eating.
2.You'd better eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food.
3.Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy，wealthy and wise.
4.It's necessary to play different kinds of sports because we can keep fit by exercising.
安全：
1.At home，we should be careful with fire and electricity.
2.It's dangerous to swim in the river alone，so don't go to the river without permission.
3.Don't push each other，especially when we go upstairs or downstairs.
4.Besides，you'd better not ride side by side，or you may be in danger.
【句型——结尾句】
1.In short/All in all，health must come first!
2.I hope everyone can be happy and healthy.
3.If you follow my advice，you will be in good health.
4.As long as you pay enough attention，you can protect yourself well.
5.In a word，a balanced diet can help make us stronger and healthier.
6.In short，we should develop a good habit of eating healthy food.
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