写作能力提升练
Unit 8 It must belong to Carla.
浩瀚的宇宙充满神秘和无限的可能,大自然中有许多奥秘有待我们去探索。本单元我们讨论的重点是猜测和判断。对于不确定的事物, 我们总想去猜测它是什么, 我们如何进行推测呢?
河南人教版九年级上
史密斯先生是一位太空爱好者,做梦都想去探索宇宙。昨晚,他梦到自己去太空探险了。请根据下面的文字及图片提示,充分发挥想象力,写一篇英语短文,描述史密斯先生的梦境。
提示: 史密斯先生去太空旅行,遇到了一个外星人,他邀请史密斯先生去自己的星球做客,可是星球的首领不同意。之后会发生什么奇妙的事情呢?
要求: 1.短文应包括以上提示内容,语言通顺,意思连贯;2.发挥想象力,为故事设计一个完美的结局。
参考词汇: trumpet小号;喇叭_________________________________________________
【谋篇布局】
【遣词造句】
1. 昨天晚上,他梦到去太空旅行。
Last night, ____________________________________.
2. 史密斯先生乘宇宙飞船进入到太空并且遇到了一位外星人。
Mr. Smith____________________________________
___________________________________________.
he dreamed about traveling in space
went into space in a spaceship and met an alien
3.那位外星人很友好,邀请史密斯先生去他的星球。
The alien was so friendly that______________________
______________________.
4.然而那个星球的首领不同意外星人的提议。他阻止史密斯先生进入他们的星球。
However, the leader of the planet disagreed with the alien. _____________________________________________.
he invited Mr. Smith to
his planet
He prevented Mr. Smith from entering their planet
5. 最后,史密斯先生受到这个星球上所有外星人的热烈欢迎。
At last, Mr. Smith _______________________________
___________________________________.
was warmly welcomed by all the aliens on the planet
【巧妙衔接】
文章中通过动词的前后配合,使上下文很自然地建立起一种逻辑顺序关系。
佳句妙用
It takes all sorts to make a world.
大千世界,无奇不有。
【精彩范文】
Mr. Smith loves space very much. Last night, he dreamed about traveling in space. What happened in his dream? Mr. Smith went into space in a spaceship and met an alien. The alien was so friendly that he invited Mr. Smith to his planet. However, the leader of the planet disagreed with the alien. He prevented Mr. Smith from entering their planet. Mr. Smith thought he must do something to make the leader
believe in him. So he had a conversation with the leader and gave a special gift to him. The gift was a trumpet, because the alien’s mouth looked like a trumpet. With the instrument, he could make beautiful music. At last, Mr. Smith was warmly welcomed by all the aliens on the planet.
假如英语课上老师向你们展示了一段视频,你们对视频中的内容——夜晚天空中移动着的一个不明物体很感兴趣,你们纷纷对这一物体进行了大胆的猜测。以下是你们组的猜测结果,请你根据表格内容提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你组各成员的猜测情况。
{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A}人物
猜测
原因
Jenny
不明飞行物
飞行速度快
Peter
发光风筝
飞得不够高
Tom
飞机
发出像飞机一样的声音
You
一只鸟
形状像鸟,鸟的羽毛(feather)会发光
要求:
1.短文须包括表格中的提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.注意运用本单元所学语法——情态动词表示推测;
3. 80词左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! What’s that strange thing in the sky? Here are answers from my group.
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Hello, everyone! What's that strange thing in the sky? Here are answers from my group.
Jenny says it must be a UFO because it's flying very fast and no man?made things can fly so fast. Peter thinks it can't be a UFO because it isn't flying high enough in the sky. It might be a kite. He used to fly a kite that could give off light. But Tom doesn't agree with them. He
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thinks it must be a plane because it sounds like a plane. But I think it might be a bird according to its shape. Maybe its feathers look bright in the dark evening.