人教版（新课标）高中英语必修四 Unit 2 Working the land Writing_ How to introduce a person课件（30张ppt）

(共30张PPT)
Working
the
Land
Unit
2
writing:
How
to
introduce
a
person
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom想了解一下中国的名人-杂交水稻之父袁隆平。特写信向你了解他的一些情况。请你给他回一封信。要点如下：
1.袁隆平,
1930年9月7日，出生在北京的一个贫困农民家庭。
2.1953年，他毕业于西南农学院Southwest
Agriculture
College
，毕业后，他被分配到湘西农校Agriculture
School
in
the
west
of
Hunan任教。多年后，他出国深造并获得博士学位。
3.自从1964年，他把自己都奉献给了农业教育（agricultural
education）及研究工作。1981年被称为“杂交水稻之父”。
“Father
of
Hybrid
Rice”
4.他喜欢打麻将mah-jong
，游泳和读书。人们对他的评价很高。如此伟大的科学家，一个努力工作的，博学的，有责任感的人。
Dear
Tom,
How
are
you
doing
these
days?
I’m
writing
this
letter
to
tell
you
something
about
Yuan
Longping.
______________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
一．main
points：
1.introduce
the
person
in
general，including：time，place，age，family's
background，educational
background，appearance...
2.quality
:sometimes
using
a
brief
example.
3.
experience
and
main
achievement.
4.evaluate
the
person
or
your
feeling.
二．matters
needing
attention:
appearance------present
sense
example----
past
tense
evaluate,your
feeling----present
sense
person---
the
third
person
(he,
she)
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom想了解一下中国的名人-杂交水稻之父袁隆平。特写信向你了解他的一些情况。请你给他回一封信。要点如下：
1.袁隆平,
1930年9月7日，出生在北京的一个贫困农民家庭。
2.1953年，他毕业于西南农学院Southwest
Agriculture
College
，毕业后，他被分配到湘西农校Agriculture
School
in
the
west
of
Hunan任教。多年后，他出国深造并获得博士学位。
3.自从1964年，他把自己都奉献给了农业教育（agricultural
education）及研究工作。1981年被称为“杂交水稻之父”。
“Father
of
Hybrid
Rice”
4.他喜欢打麻将mah-jong
，游泳和读书。人们对他的评价很高。如此伟大的科学家，一个努力工作的，博学的，有责任感的人。
Dear
Tom,
How
are
you
doing
these
days?
I’m
writing
this
letter
to
tell
you
something
about
Yuan
Longping.
______________________________
Yours,
Li
Hua
Let's
“appreciate”
six
writing
passages
together
!
三.main
mistakes
：
1.
人名，地名，时间等书写不规范。
2.
时态误用。
3.
谓语，非谓语用法混淆。主谓没有配合。
4.
介词误用。
5.
套用给定句型不准确。
6.
句式过于简单，缺少逻辑性和亮点。
7.
书写差。
8.
要点句子翻译不准确，遗落或者无中生有。
四.
讲练巩固：
1.time：
be
born
....(谓语）
born....(非谓语）
preposition：
有日用on，没日用in
writing
perform：月日，年
Yuanlongping
was
born
in
a
poor
farmer's
family
in
September
7,
1930.
Yuan
Longping
on
2.
place：
be
born
....(predicate
verb.）
born
in
....(non-predicate
verb.）
writing
perform：由小到大。
袁隆平,
1930年9月7日，出生在北京的一个贫困农民家庭。
润色：非谓语
Born
on
September
7,
1930,
Yuan
Longping
comes
from
a
poor
farmer's
family
in
Beijing.
3.age：
at
the
age
of...
4.family's
background：
(be)
born
in
a
poor/
rich
family
,
spent
one’s
childhood
in
.....
5.educational
background：
graduate
from
+
大学（university、
college）
graduate
in
+
专业（English,
history,
computer...)
have
a
further
study
继续深造
study
abroad
出国留学
get
a
master’s/
doctor’s
degree
获得硕士/
博士学位
1953年，他毕业于西南农学院Southwest
Agriculture
College
毕业后，他被分配到湘西农校Agriculture
School
in
the
west
of
Hunan任教
多年后，他出国深造并获得博士学位
分散，流水账！！！缺少逻辑性！
In
1953,
he
graduate
from
Southwest
Agriculture
College.
After
graduation,
he
taugh
in
Agriculture
School
in
the
west
of
Hunan.
After
many
years
,
he
studied
abroad
and
got
a
doctor's
degree.
润色：年龄，逻辑关系
At
the
age
of
23,
he
graduated
from
Southwest
Agriculture
College.
And
then,
his
first
work
is
being
a
teacher
in
Agriculture
School
in
the
west
of
Hunan.
Moreover,
he
studied
abroad
and
got
a
doctor's
degree
after
many
years.
graduated
taught
6.hobby：
be
good
at,
have
a
gift
for,
be
interested
in,
be
fond
of,
be
crazy
about
,
one’s
hobbies
can
be
listed
as
follows
in
detail.
他喜欢打麻将mah-jong
，游泳和读书。
He
like
playing
mah-jong,
swimming
and
reading.
润色：主语从句
What
he
likes
are
playing
mah-jong,
swimming
and
reading.
likes
7.相貌：
tall,
short
,
thin，
handsome,
beautiful,
cool...
8.品质和个性：
friendly,
gentle,
kind,
wise,
helpful,
determined,
hard-working,
responsible,
easy-going,
considerate,
learned,
single-minded,
diligent,
reliable.....
如此伟大的科学家，一个努力工作的，博学的，有责任感的人。（
Such
is
....,
a....one.
）
仿写：
Such
is
a
great
scientist,
a
hard-working,
learned,
and
responsible
one.
9.experience：
devote
oneself
to
doing
sth
try
one’s
best
to
do
sth.
get
the
prize
of...
10.brief
example：
11.
evaluate
the
person：
We
all
show
great
respect
for
....
Such
is
....,
a....one.
speak
highly
of...
set
a
good
example
to...
the
pride
of...
make
great
contributions
to....
be
regarded/
considered
as...
1964年开始，他把自己都奉献给了农业教（agriculture
education）及研究工作。
Since
1964,
he
has
devoted
himself
in
agricultural
education
and
research.
人们对他的评价很高。
People
all
speak
highly
of
him.
1981年被称为“杂交水稻之父”。“Father
of
Hybrid
Rice”
He
was
regarded
as
the
“Father
of
Hybrid
Rice”
in
1981.
润色：定语从句
People
all
speak
highly
of
him
who
was
regarded
as
the
“Father
of
Hybrid
Rice”
in
1981.
to
Dear
Tom,
How
are
you
doing
these
days?
I
am
writing
this
letter
to
tell
you
something
about
Yuan
Longping.
Born
on
September
7,
1930,
Yuan
Longping
comes
from
a
farmer's
family
in
Beijing.At
the
age
of
23,
he
graduated
from
Southwest
Agriculture
College.
And
then,
his
first
work
is
being
a
teacher
in
Agriculture
School
in
the
west
of
Hunan.
Moreover,
he
studied
abroad
and
got
the
doctor's
degree
after
many
years.Since
1964,
he
has
devoted
himself
to
agricultural
education
and
research.What
he
likes
are
playing
mah-jong,
swimming
and
reading.People
all
speak
high
of
him
who
was
regarded
as
the
“Father
of
Hybrid
Rice”
in
1981.Such
a
great
scientist,
a
hard-working,
learned,
and
responsible
one.
I
am
looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
I
wish
my
introduction
will
help
you.
Yours,
Li
Hua
针对性练习题：
1.
My
mother
was
born
on
September
1970
in
Deqing.
2.
Our
neighnour
has
devoted
all
his
life
to
take
care
of
animals.
3.
Achievements
that
he
has
gained
make
great
contribution
to
our
research.
4.
Such
is
a
good
teacher,
a
kind,
easy-going
and
determine
one.
5.
Graduating
from
Zhongshan
University,
he
is
the
first
set
up
an
English
Corner.
in
taking
contributions
determined
to
translation：（4'
per
sentence）
1.
被当作最受欢迎的男演员，他今年将会在新电影中出演角色（play
a
role
in...）。（非谓语动词）
Regared
as
the
most
popular
actor,
he
will
play
a
role
in
a
new
film.
2.
林巧稚把她的一生都奉献给了中国的医疗事业，这一点是公认的。（主语从句）
It
is
universally
acknowledged
that
Lin
Qiaozhi
devoted
himself
to
Chinese
medical
career.
3.
1980年，汤姆出生于江苏省，他是一名医生，他的童年是在英国度过的。（定语从句）
Born
in
1980,
Tom,a
doctor,
who
spent
his
childhood
in
England,was
born
in
Jiangsu
province.
Dear
Tom,
How
are
you
doing
these
days?
I
am
writing
this
letter
to
tell
you
something
about
Yuan
Longping.
Born
on
September
7,
1930,
Yuan
Longping
comes
from
a
famer's
family
in
Beijing.At
the
age
of
23,
he
graduated
from
Southwest
Agriculture
College.
And
then,
his
first
work
is
being
a
teacher
in
Agriculture
School
in
the
west
of
Hunan.
Moreover,
he
studied
abroad
and
got
the
doctor's
degree
after
many
years.Since
1964,
he
has
devoted
himself
to
agricultural
education
and
research.What
he
likes
are
playing
mah-jong,
swimming
and
reading.People
all
speak
highly
of
him
who
was
regarded
as
the
“Father
of
Hybrid
Rice”
in
1981.Such
is
a
great
scientist,
a
hard-working,
learned,
and
responsible
one.
I
am
looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
I
wish
my
introduction
will
help
you.
Yours,
Li
Hua