中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
第21讲写作指导二
知识梳理
小六作文解题技巧
小六英语作文解题三部曲
审题
审题这部分主要包括要写文章的文体、时态、人称
草拟
在草稿纸上先草拟一份作文大致框架及要运用的精彩句型、短语
3
实践
在这部分要注意字迹的整洁、清楚
教学重难点
掌握一些常见素材和好词好句；
重点短语及重点单词的积累、讲解
特色讲解
(1)
以“A
Farewell
Party”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。
要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。???????
??2.不得少于50个单词。?
(2)
以“Tom’s
Holiday”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。
要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。???????
??2.不得少于50个单词。?
当堂练习
以“A
Post
Card
from
John
”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。
要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。???????
??2.不得少于50个单词。?
A
当堂检测
（1）
题目：写一篇介绍自己老师的短文
要求:
1条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2单词在50-60
个之间。
（2）
题目：写一篇关于自己最喜欢的节日的短文
要求:
1条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2单词在50-60
个之间。
家庭作业
1.写作
(1)
题目：“My?mother”为题写一篇作文
要求:1条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2单词在50-60个之间。
(2)
以“Myself”为题写一篇作文
要求:
1条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2单词在50-60个之间。
(3)
以“My?Days?of?the
Week?”为题写一篇作文
要求:
1条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2单词在50-60个之间。
2.阅读短文判断正确与否
Something
about
Thailand
Bangkok
is
the
capital
of
Thailand,
and
it
is
very
different
from
Guangzhou.
There
are
many
temples
in
Bangkok.
It
is
hot
all
year
round,
so
there
are
a
lot
of
fruits,
the
most
famous
fruit
is
durian.
There
are
many
rivers
in
the
city,
so
the
―market
on
the
water‖
is
very
famous,
you
can
buy
flowers,
vegetables,
fruits
and
other
things
on
the
boats.
The
best
time
to
visit
Thailand
is
at
the
end
of
March
or
the
beginning
of
April,
because
it
is
the
biggest
festival
in
Thailand---Water
Festival.
It
is
the
beginning
of
their
New
Year.
Before
the
festival,
people
clean
their
house
and
cook
nice
food.
During
the
festival,
people
sing,
dance
and
throw
water
on
each
other.
They
think
that
water
can
clean
away
bad
things
and
bring
good
luck.
How
interesting
it
is!
T
or
F:
(
)
1.Bangkok
is
the
capital
of
England.
(
)
2.It
is
very
cold
in
winter
in
Thailand.
(
)
3.We
can
visit
many
temples
and
the
famous---market
on
the
water
in
Bangkok.
(
)
4.Water
Festival
is
the
most
popular
festival
in
Thailand.
(
)
5.During
Water
Festival
the
people
throw
water
on
each
other.
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第21讲写作指导二
知识梳理
小六作文解题技巧
小六英语作文解题三部曲
审题
审题这部分主要包括要写文章的文体、时态、人称
草拟
在草稿纸上先草拟一份作文大致框架及要运用的精彩句型、短语
3
实践
在这部分要注意字迹的整洁、清楚
教学重难点
掌握一些常见素材和好词好句；
重点短语及重点单词的积累、讲解
特色讲解
(1)
以“A
Farewell
Party”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。
要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。???????
??2.不得少于50个单词。?
A
Farewell
Party
It’s
the
end
of
the
school
year.
The
students
in
Class
Three
have
a
farewell
party.
They
invite
their
parents
to
the
party.
Many
students
have
performance
at
the
party.
Look!
Chen
Jie
is
singing
songs.
Zhang
Peng
is
playing
the
piano.
Sarah
is
playing
the
erhu.
Mike
is
doing
Chinese
Kung
fu.
What
is
Miss
White
doing?
She
is
dancing.
Everybody
has
a
lot
of
fun.
But
Liu
Yun
isn’t
here.
She
has
a
cold.
She
is
at
home.
The
classmates
are
going
to
visit
her
after
party.
They
prepare
many
gifts
for
her.
And
they
will
take
a
picture
together.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目，以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。
时态：这篇习作可采用三种时态来写。由于本单元主要出现的时态是一般将来时和现在进行时，所以这里我们才用一般现在时，现在进行时和一般将来时来写。
句型：一般现在时：主语+动词原形+其他。
现在进行时：主语+现在分词+其他。
一般将来时：主语+
be
going
to
/
will
+动词原形+其他。
注意：
由于本篇文章中所涉及的时态比较多，所以要注意一下时态的变化。学生们都在表演什么节目可以用现在进行时，将要去做什么，要用将来时。另外还要注意，一般现在时在肯定句中，主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词也要用第三人称单数。
(2)
以“Tom’s
Holiday”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。
要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。???????
??2.不得少于50个单词。?
Tom’s
Holiday
Tom
went
to
Beijing
by
plane
on
his
holiday.
Every
day
he
had
fun
with
his
parents.
They
went
to
the
NaturePark.
They
saw
elephants.
They
went
swimming.
They
ate
lots
of
delicious
food.
They
also
took
many
beautiful
pictures.
They
will
come
back
home
tomorrow.
In
a
word,
they
enjoy
their
holiday.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动，记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。
时态：这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法，所以这里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。
句型：主语+动词过去式+其他……
主语+will+动词原形+其他……
注意：活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写，但要注意动词过去式的变化规则。例：eat
的过去式为ate，为不规则变化。
当堂练习
以“A
Post
Card
from
John
”为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。
要求：1.语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。???????
??2.不得少于50个单词。?
A
A
Post
Card
from
John
Dear
Sarah,
This
post
card
shows
you
a
picture
from
my
holiday.
We
got
Kunming
on
Wednesday.
On
the
first
day
we
visited
StoneForest.
It’s
very
beautiful.
I
love
it
very
much.
On
Thursday
Kathy
and
I
got
lost
in
the
city.
We
asked
a
policeman
for
help.
He
helped
us
find
the
hotel.
On
Friday
we
went
to
a
small
village.
We
saw
folk
dances
and
ate
some
fresh
vegetables
from
the
farm.
We
enjoyed
ourselves.
Last
day
we
went
shopping
and
bought
some
presents
for
friends.
Tomorrow
we
will
be
back
home
【要领点评】
写法：这是一封明信片，按照时间顺序记叙了约翰假期去昆明度假这几天的活动。分别记叙了游览石林，迷路，看民族舞，购物，买礼物等活动。
时态：这篇文章由于是记叙已经发过的事，所以大部分可以采用一般过去时来写。
句型：主语+动词过去式+其他。
注意：描述已经发生过的事要用一般过去时，在写这篇文章的时候要注意动词的过去式的变化，尤其是动词过去式的不规则变化。没发生过的事要用一般将来时。
当堂检测
题目：写一篇介绍自己老师的短文
要求:
1条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2单词在50-60
个之间。
【参考范例】
My
Teacher
Miss
Lin
is
my
English
teacher.
In
my
eyes,
she
is
not
only
my
teacher,
but
also
my
good
friend.
She
is
not
tall.
She
is
thin.
She
has
long
hair.
Her
face
is
round.
Her
eyes
are
small.
She
likes
swimming.
She
likes
singing
English
songs,
too.
She
often
teaches
us
English
songs.
I
love
her
very
much.
I
also
want
to
be
a
teacher
when
I
grow
up.
题目：写一篇关于自己最喜欢的节日的短文
要求:
1条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2单词在50-60
个之间。
【参考范例】
My
favorite
Holiday
My
favorite
holiday
is
the
Christmas
Day.Christmas
Day
is
on
December,25th
of
every
year.On
that
day,
I
always
send
a
lot
of
holiday
letters
to
all
of
my
teachers
and
classmates.I
also
send
e-mails
to
my
friends
on
the
Internet.Moreover,
I
can
receive
many
surprising
Christmas
gifts
from
my
family
members
and
friends.such
as
food
and
chocolate.So
I
feel
very
excited
when
the
Christmas
Day
is
coming.Therefore,
the
Christmas
Day
becomes
my
favorite
holiday.
家庭作业
1.写作
(1)
题目：“My?mother”为题写一篇作文
要求:1条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2单词在50-60个之间。
参考例文：
My?Mother
My?mother?is?a?shop?assistant.?She’s?thirty-six?years?old.?She’s?tall?and?thin?too.?She’s?pretty.?Her?hair?is?short?and?straight.?She?likes?to?sing?and?she?likes?Zhang?Xueyou’s?songs?and?English?
songs.She?likes?to?eat?crabs.?She?always?goes?shopping?with?me.?She’s?good?at?Maths.?When?I?
have?problems?with?Maths?she?will?help?me.?She?doesn’t?like?pets;?because?she?thinks?they?are?
dirty.?I?like?my?mother?very?much.
(2)
以“Myself”为题写一篇作文
要求:
1条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2单词在50-60个之间。
参考例文：
Myself
My
name
is
Winnie.I'm
a
15
years
old
girl.
I
live
in
the
beautiful
city
of
Rizhao.
I'm
an
active，lovely
and
clever
girl.In
the
school,
my
favorite
subject
is
math.Perhaps
someone
thinks
it's
difficult
to
study
well.But
I
like
it.I
believe
that
if
you
try
your
best，everything
can
be
done
well.
I
also
like
sports
very
much
such
as，running，volleyball
and
so
on.
I'm
kind-hearted.
If
you
need
help,
please
come
to
me
.
I
hope
we
can
be
good
friends!
OK.This
is
me
.A
sunny
girl.
(3)
以“My?Days?of?the
Week?”为题写一篇作文
要求:
1条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
2单词在50-60个之间。
参考例文：
My?Days?of?the
Week
???I’m?a?student?and?I?am?in?Grade?5.Iget?up?at?six?o’clock?every?day.?I?have?breakfast?at?half?
past?six,?and?go?to?school?at?seven?o’clock.?I?have?classes?from?Monday?to?Saturday.?I?have?an?
English?class?on?Friday?and?I?have?a?PE?class?on?Tuesday.?I?don’t?have?to?go?to?school?on?school,?and?Ilike?to?go?swimming?on?that?day.?
2.阅读短文判断正确与否
Something
about
Thailand
Bangkok
is
the
capital
of
Thailand,
and
it
is
very
different
from
Guangzhou.
There
are
many
temples
in
Bangkok.
It
is
hot
all
year
round,
so
there
are
a
lot
of
fruits,
the
most
famous
fruit
is
durian.
There
are
many
rivers
in
the
city,
so
the
―market
on
the
water‖
is
very
famous,
you
can
buy
flowers,
vegetables,
fruits
and
other
things
on
the
boats.
The
best
time
to
visit
Thailand
is
at
the
end
of
March
or
the
beginning
of
April,
because
it
is
the
biggest
festival
in
Thailand---Water
Festival.
It
is
the
beginning
of
their
New
Year.
Before
the
festival,
people
clean
their
house
and
cook
nice
food.
During
the
festival,
people
sing,
dance
and
throw
water
on
each
other.
They
think
that
water
can
clean
away
bad
things
and
bring
good
luck.
How
interesting
it
is!
T
or
F:
(
)
1.Bangkok
is
the
capital
of
England.
(
)
2.It
is
very
cold
in
winter
in
Thailand.
(
)
3.We
can
visit
many
temples
and
the
famous---market
on
the
water
in
Bangkok.
(
)
4.Water
Festival
is
the
most
popular
festival
in
Thailand.
(
)
5.During
Water
Festival
the
people
throw
water
on
each
other.
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