2020-2021学年仁爱版英语七年级下学期Unit6 Topic 3作文课件17张

(共17张PPT)
Which is the way to the hospital
Unit 6 Topic 3 Writing
Learning Aims
1. To master writing pattern
2. To use sentence patterns:
(1) to start with
(2) besides
(3) also
(4) last but not least
(5) It is very important for us to obey ____ rules.
(6) ____ rules are strict（严格的）, but they are useful（有用的）.
3. To learn to how to write a writing about obeying traffic rules and school rules
4. To learn to obey traffic rules and school rules
being speeding
look both ways before crossing the street
精彩导入
run the red light
play mobile phones
help old people cross the street
play on the street
eat in the classroom
say hello to teachers
fight with others
wear uniforms
keep quiet in the classroom
cheat in a test
cut in line
画一幅关于“遵守交通规则如何做”的思维导图 (3’)
Should
do
Can
not
do
研学前置
—··— —··— —··— —··— —··— —··—
Obey the traffic rules
Look both ways before crossing the street
When we see the red sign, we must stop
Help children and old people cross the street
Playing mobile phones when we are crossing the street
Play with others on the street
Run the red light
Being speeding
Obeying the ____ Rules
It is very important（重要的） for us to obey the ____ rules. So what should we do And what can’t we do
To start with（首先）, we must _____________. Besides（此外）, we should ________________. Also（其次）, we need to ___________. Last but not least（最后）, we can not ____________.
____ rules are strict（严格的）, but they are useful（有用的）. Therefore（因此）, we must obey them.
题目
第一段：表达观点，提出如何遵守规则
第二段：分点罗列应该/不该做的事情
第三段：总结全文，我们必须遵守XXX规章制度
作文模板
规则①
规则②
规则③
规则④
Obeying the _______ Rules
It is very important for us to obey the _____ rules. So what should we do And what can’t we do
To start with, we must _______________
________________________. Besides, we should _______________________________
_____________________. Last but not least, we can not ____________________________.
______ rules are quite strict, but they are useful. Therefore, we must obey them.
Traffic
traffic
not play mobile phones when we are crossing the street
look both ways before crossing the street
play with others on the street
Traffic
范文
“不以规矩，不成方圆。”国有国法，家有家规，每个学校都有学校的规章制度。请你根据下面的表格，写一篇80字关于学校规章制度的短文。
Things we should do Wear school uniform（校服）
Keep quiet in the classroom
Say hello to our teachers
Things we can not do Fight（打架） with others
作文题目
Obeying the ____ Rules
It is very important for us to obey the _____ rules. So what should we do And what can’t we do
To start with, we must _____________. Besides, we should ___________________. Also, we need to _______________. Last but not least, we can not ____________.
____ rules are strict, but they are useful. Therefore, we must obey them.
题目
第一段：表达观点，提出如何遵守规则
第二段：分点罗列应该/不该做的事情
第三段：总结全文，我们必须遵守XXX规章制度
作文模板
规则①
规则②
规则③
规则④
评分参考标准
一、内容分：10分表格中的四个要点，每个点2.5分
能涵盖以上所有内容，内容要完整且词数符合作文要求的作文可以的10分，次数在80以下的作文在内容分上酌情扣分
二、语言分：分 5分：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别不影响交际的语言错误
3-4分：内容涵盖绝大部分要点，表达较为清楚、连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误
1-2分：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚、连贯，但有一些语言错误
0分：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少数正确句子，但整体不太连贯，且语言错误较多
空白卷或完全没有相关内容:确定语言分档次时，要考虑内容的涵盖，每少一个要点，语言分降一个档次给分
Obeying the _______ Rules
It is very important for us to obey the _____ rules. So what should we do And what can’t we do
To start with, we must _______________
_______. Besides, we should _____________
____________. Also, we need to__________
______________. Last but not least, we can not __________________.
______ rules are strict, but they are useful. Therefore, we must obey them.
School
traffic
keep quiet in the classroom say hello
to our teachers
wear school uniform
fight with others
School
范文
梳理小结
写如何做作文步骤
1、认真审题
2、写出作文框架（1’）
题目
第1段：表达观点，提出如何XXXXX
第2段：分点罗列应该/不该做的事情
第3段：总结全文，我们必须XXXXXX
3、完成作文
4、写完检查是否写完内容、是否有语法错误
Should do
Can not do
Homework
1、把作文模板和2篇范文抄到范文本
2、读范文① 五遍
3、抽背：
林琳 19:30前
何菲 20:00前
Thank you!