Unit 11
Sad movies make me cry
Writing
Guess how they feel!
happy
sad
want to cry
angry
surprised
nervous / stressed out
excited
annoyed
tired/sleepy
哇!
comfortable
Pre-writing
get good grades
It makes me happy.
How does it make you feel when …?
It makes me upset.
you fail a test
How does it make you feel when …?
you see someone off
It makes me sad.
How does it make you feel when …?
you listen to rock music
It makes me excited.
How does it make you feel when …?
How do you feel about these pictures?
The tidy room
makes me comfortable.
makes me feel comfortable.
The snake
makes me scared.
makes me cry.
makes me want to eat.
The delicious food
makes me______.
The beautiful beach
makes me _______.
makes me want to
have a holiday.
hungry
relaxed
make sb + adj. 使某人…样
make sb + do. 使某人做某事
words:
N(things)
V
Adj.
make(s) sb
feelings
总结:在表达情感时,我们常用的句式结构是什么?
Sentences
sentences:
N(things)
V
Adj.
make(s) sb
feelings
表达情感的其它句式
Waiting for her drove me crazy.
It was so sad that it made
us cry.
...
who
a story
when
sth made
sb. adj.
sth. made
sb. do
what
how
整体评价
注意:
叙事
线索
叙事
顺序
topic sentence
where
在你的生活经历中,一定会有一些令你伤
心或高兴的事。请你仔细回忆一下,
谈一谈当时事件的经过和你的感受。
说出你的故事
words:
feelings
sentences
others
passages
sth made
sb. adj.
sth. made sb. do
Learn to face challenges
bravely and make us
stronger!
adj.
V
noun(things)
While-writing
话题
1. Betty昨天上午去学校路上,想到要出
考试结果。
2. 取得优异成绩,受到老师表扬。
3.昨天下午回家,告诉妈妈成绩。妈妈
微笑了。
4.被告知不久后妈妈会生一个弟弟。
5. 感觉会受到冷落。
6.晚餐后父母亲与我长谈。
It made me happy .
The news made me crazy and
also made me feel left out.
The idea made me cry.
It made me relaxed at last.
adj
feelings
verb
everything
who
Title
when
sth made sb. adj.
sth. made sb. do
what
how
整体评价
注意:
叙事线索
叙事顺序
Mind map
topic sentence
where
Useful words and phrases
on one’s way to get good grades praise get home smile sit down have a baby brother lose my parents’ love have a long talk love me forever
Adjectives
nervous worried happy crazy feel left out
Useful sentences
It made me happy.
The news made me crazy
The news made me feel left out
Dear Ms. Li,
I'm Betty , a 15-year-old girl of Grade 9. I thought yesterday was really bad.
Yesterday morning , _____________________________. It made me feel _________.But when the teacher told me that _________________and I ____________by the teacher. I was really ________.Yesterday afternoon when I got home, my mother smiled happily. And it made me happy.Then when I sat down, she told me that I would have a baby brother. The news made me crazy and also made me feel left out. I realized that I would lose my parents’ love. The idea made me cry.
After supper, my parents had a long talk with me. They said they would love me forever. It made me relaxed at last.
yours,
Betty
Standards of the best passage
Correct Expression 语言准确
Right Mind Logic 逻辑合理
Smooth Flow 条理清晰
Diverse Sentence Pattern 句式多样
Complete Structure 结构完整
Post-writing
Marking ladders
Homework
上网搜集与“情感”有关的语篇,扩充词汇和佳句,完善自己的单元复习思维导图。
Thank you