Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came? Section B Writing课件16张PPT

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What were you doing when the rainstorm came?
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Let’s watch a video and know something about the event(事件).
Let's listen and complete the mind map.
Event：
1000-meter race
When : Last November
Where： ___________________
What：
Jack _____________________
His friends __________________
to cheer him on.
in the school
was running
were shouting
Let's talk about the event.
1000-meter race (event)
last November (when)
in our school (where)
was running (what)
were shouting
It was a ______________________. ______________________, I took part in the 1000-meter race ________________________. While I was running, my friends ________________ loudly to cheer me on. I tried my best to run, and at last I _____________ the first prize.
1000-meter race
Last November
in our school
were shouting
got
Let's read & discuss:
Why is the 1000-meter race important to Jack?
While I was running, my friends were shouting to cheer me on.
I was so tired that I wanted to give up.
My friends kept encouraging me.
I tried my best to run and at last I got the first prize.
Because he knows that ___________ are important in his life.
Because he learns to keep _______________.
Because it tells him not to ______________.
going
friends
give up
Jack's composition.
I'm Jack. Let me share an important event with you.
Last November, I take part in the 1000-meter race
in our school.
While I ran, my friends are shouting loudly to cheer me on. But later I was so tired that I wanted to give up. My friends kept encouraging me, so I tried my best to run and I get a good prize at last.
It is an important event to me. Because it tells me not to give up. And it also tells me that I can't get a good prize without my friends' encourage.
Can you help to make it better?
I'm Jack. Let me share an important event with you .
Last November, I take part in the 1000-meter race
in our school.
While I ran, my friends are shouting loudly to cheer me on. But later I was so tired that I wanted to give up. My friends kept encouraging me, so I tried my best to run and I get a good prize at last.
It is an important event to me. Because it tells me not to give up. And it also tells me that I can't get a good prize without my friends' encourage.
Did Jack organize his composition well?
第一段：
事件
时间
地点
第二段：
事情的经过和结果
第三段：
原因
I'm Jack. Let me share an important event with you .
Last November, I take part in the 1000-meter race in our school.
While I ran, my friends are shouting loudly to cheer me on. But later I was so tired that I wanted to give up. My friends kept encouraging me, so I tried my best to run and I get a good prize at last.
It is an important event to me. Because it tells me not to give up. And it also tells me that I can't get a good prize without my friends' encourage.
Did Jack use the correct tense(时态) and spelling?
第一段：
事件
时间
地点
第二段：
事情的经过和结果
第三段：
原因
took
While I was running,my friends were shouting
got
encouragement.
I'm Jack. Let me share an important event with you .
Last November, I took part in the 1000-meter race in our school.
While I was running, my friends were shouting loudly to cheer me on. But later I was so tired that I wanted to give up. My friends kept encouraging me, so I tried my best to run and I got a good prize at last.
It is an important event to me. Because it tells me not to give up. And it also tells me that I can't get a good prize without my friends' encouragement.
Wow! It is much better! Thank you all.
Jack's composition.
Do you have any unforgettable (难忘的) events in your life?
Your parents bought you a new computer/...
You passed an exam.
You got a letter from your best friend/...
Your photo was put in the newspaper/on...
You had a baby sister/ brother.
Your father/ mother got badly ill.
Your parents argued…..
After reading:
注意：多用第一人称，时态以一般过去时和过去进行时为主。
Let's learn: how to write a past event
when时间
where地点
event事件
第一段：Introduction (引入)
第二段：
details of the event
(事件的详细过程)
描述当时某事正在进行 was/were doing
做了某事，结果怎样,感受如何 did
第三段：
reasons (原因)
it tells/reminds me (not)to do
it tells me that...
Homework
你给妈妈庆祝过母亲节吗？请写一篇不少于70词的文章，谈谈当时的经历，内容包括：
1．你印象最深刻的母亲节是哪一次？
2．当时你做了什么？
3．你在做这些时，妈妈、爸爸(和其他家人)正在做什么？
4．以后的母亲节，你准备怎么给妈妈庆祝？

参考词汇:Mother’s Day, impressive（印象深刻的）
可以按照提供的作文框架完成写作，也可以自由创作。
Sample.
Let me share an important event in my life. __________, I ______________________(做某事)to/in __________________ .
While I ____________________(当时正在进行的动作）, my friends/family __________________________（当时正在进行的动作）. I _____________________________(做了什么，结果怎样）. .......
This event is important to me. Because it tells me that ________________________________ (这件事告诉我什么道理)， and it tells/reminds me （not）to do sth______________________
(这件事告诉/提醒我（不)去做某事）.
when
event
where
was doing
were doing
did
why
why
Mother's Day has become one of the most popular festivals in China．Many people celebrate it with their mothers．So do I．
The most impressive Mother's Day for me is when I celebrated it with my mom for the first time．At that time，I was six years old．I planned to cook a big breakfast for my mother on that morning．I got up really early and nobody was awake．I went to the kitchen to cook some noodles．My father woke up and I asked for his help．While my mother was sleeping，my father and I cooked the beef noodles．I was glad that my mother loved it．
My mother is always busy taking care of our family．I hope that I can take her to some places of interests when I grow up．
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Thank you very much!