新目标2021年中考英语一轮话题写作（九）情感情绪（写作思路+范文+模拟练习）

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话题写作（九）情感情绪
教材话题链接
八年级上册
Unit
10
If
you
go
to
the
party
,
you’ll
have
a
great
time
!
-How
to
deal
with
worries
/
problems
八年级下册
Unit
10
I’ve
had
this
bike
for
three
years
.
九年级全一册
Unit
11
Sad
movies
make
me
cry
.
九年级全一册
Unit
12
Life
is
full
of
the
unexpected
.
典/例/分/析
临近中考，为了更好地发现及解决同学们存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以“Less
Pressure
,
Better
Life＂为主题的英语演比赛，请你准备一篇发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享。内容包括:
同学们普通存在的压力是什么
我的压力是什么
我是如何成功缓解压力的。
注意：
1
词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3
文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Hello,
boys
and
girl!
___________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s
all
.
Thank
you
！
满分作文五步法
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：___________________
人称:___________________
时态：___________________
功能:____________________
要点：
1._____________________
2.______________
3.
_______________
4.
_______________
适当发挥....
Step
2
搭-列提纲，搭好框架
Less
Pressure
,
Better
Life
开篇点题：
称呼:Dear
teachers
and
classmates
/Boys
and
girls
.
点题：Pressure
is
a
serious
problem
in
today’s
world
.
主体内容
Pressures
among
students
.
My
pressure
Ways
to
deal
with
pressure
总结收尾
I
hope
all
of
us
have
a
better
life
and
less
pressure
.
Step
3
:
连-连词成句
开篇点题：
Pressure
is
______________________
in
today’s
world
.
2
主体内容：
Students
in
our
class
are
___________________________
.
Some
students
can’t
________________________their
classmates
;
others
may
_____________
their
exams
.
I’m
always
under
pressure
,
too.
My
parents
want
me
_______________
the
top
student
in
class.
So
they
________________
all
kinds
of
after-school
classes
at
weekends
.
Last
Monday
,
I
________________________
my
mother
and
my
mother
understood
me
at
last
.
3
总结收尾：
I
hope
all
of
us
have
a
better
life
and
less
pressure
.
That’s
all.
Thank
you
.
Step
4.
组-组句成篇
Hello
,
boys
and
girls
!
Pressure
is
a
serious
problem
among
students
.
Most
of
the
students
in
our
class
are
under
too
much
pressure
.
Some
students
can’t
get
on
well
with
their
classmates
,
while
others
may
worry
about
their
exams.
I’m
always
under
pressure
,
too.
My
parents
want
me
to
be
the
top
student
in
class
.
They
send
me
to
all
kinds
of
after-school
classes
at
weekends
.
I
really
feel
tired
.
Last
Monday
,
I
had
a
talk
with
my
mother
.
I
told
her
my
feelings
and
that
I
needed
time
to
relax
.
My
mother
understood
me
at
last
.
So
we
should
talk
to
our
parents
to
solve
the
problems.
There
are
some
other
ways
to
deal
with
the
problems
such
as
talking
with
friends
,
listening
to
music
,
playing
sports
etc
.
I
hope
all
of
us
have
a
better
life
and
less
pressure
.
That’s
all
.
Thank
you!
Step
5
修-修饰美化
扩句：
As
we
know,
the
school
course
is
scheduled
______________
and
competition
________
is
________day
by
day
.
巧用介词短语：
__________________
getting
me
to
be
the
top
student
in
class
,
my
parents
send
me
to
all
kinds
of
after-school
classes
.
扩句：
So
_________________________
a
conversation
with
our
parents
is
necessary
__________________the
problems
.
美文诵读
Hello
,
boys
and
girls
！
A
s
we
all
know
,
the
school
course
is
scheduled
one
after
another
and
competition
is
getting
hotter
day
by
day
.
Most
of
the
students
in
our
class
are
under
too
much
pressure
.
Some
students
can’t
get
on
well
with
their
classmates
,
while
others
may
worry
about
their
exams
.
I’m
always
under
pressure
,
too.
In
the
hope
of
getting
me
to
be
the
top
student
in
class
,
my
parents
send
me
to
all
kinds
of
after-school
classes
.
Last
Monday
,
I
had
a
talk
with
me
mother
.
I
told
her
feelings
and
that
I
needed
time
to
relax
.
My
mother
understood
me
at
last
.
So
I
think
a
conversation
with
our
parents
is
necessary
to
solve
the
problem
.
There
are
some
other
ways
to
deal
with
the
problems
such
as
talking
with
friends
,
listening
to
music
,
playing
sports
etc.
All
in
all
,
I
hope
all
of
us
have
a
better
life
and
less
pressure
.
That’s
all
.
Thank
you
！
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
情感情绪
in
blue
,
stay
up
late
,
can’t
sleep
well
,
be
stressed
out
,
lose
heart
,
complain
to
,
shout
back
,
too
much
pressure
,
have
problem
with
,
argue
with
,
face
to
face
,
have
difficulties
,
be
worried
about
,
feel
stressed
,
be
strict
with
/in
,have
no
time
for
....
方法建议
read
books
,
watch
TV
,
play
sports
,
go
on
holiday,
go
to
visit
,
have
a
good
rest
and
relax
,
go
sightseeing
,
chat
with
sb
,
have
a
patient
talk
with
sb
,
talk
to
each
other
,
get
on/along
with
,
deal
with
,
talk
part
in
,
apologize
to
,
with
one’s
help
,
share
your
sadness
and
happiness
with
sb
,
solve
the
problem
...
鼓励：
be
honest
to
,
look
froward
to
,
I
hope
,
have
a
better
life
and
less
pressure
,
work
hard
together
,
turn
our
dream
into
reality
,
I
believe
,
put
your
heart
into
,
be
proud
of
....
佳句积累
【开头句】
Pressure
is
a
serious
problem
in
today’s
word
.
Students
in
our
class
are
under
too
much
pressure
.
My
parents
gave
me
a
lot
of
pressure
about
school.
As
we
all
know
,
the
school
course
is
scheduled
one
after
another
and
competition
is
getting
hotter
day
by
day
.
Looking
back
at
the
past
three
years
,
I’d
like
to
say
thanks
to
you
for
helping
me
with
my
English
.
I
want
to
say
thanks
to
my
dear
mother
.
She
not
only
cares
about
my
life
,
but
always
helps
me
out
.
We
teenagers
have
more
and
more
pressure
while
growing
up
.
Here
are
two
main
reasons
.
To
celebrate
the
70th
birthday
of
our
school
,
our
school
held
all
kinds
of
colorful
activities
last
weekend
.
【发展句】
I
can’t
sleep
well
before
the
entrance
exam
.
I
have
to
compete
with
my
classmates
at
school
.
However
,
you
had
a
patient
talk
with
me
and
encouraged
me
to
be
more
active
in
class
.
One
is
the
problems
in
their
schoolwork
,
and
the
other
is
the
problems
in
getting
on
with
other
people
.
In
order
to
let
me
live
a
pleasant
life
and
receive
a
good
education
,
you
always
work
hard
from
morning
to
evening
.
With
my
mother’s
help
,
I
didn’t
lost
my
best
friend
and
learned
how
to
deal
with
the
problems
with
friends
.
Last
but
not
least
,
you
have
to
be
honest
to
your
friends
.
Then
you
will
make
more
friends
.
Why
don’t
you
talk
about
this
feeling
with
your
family
?
You
could
do
more
jobs
around
the
house
so
that
they
have
more
time
for
proper
communication
.
Doctors
say
too
much
pressure
is
not
good
for
children’s
development
.
【结尾句】
I
hope
things
will
be
better
for
you
soon.
Although
it’s
normal
to
want
successful
children
,
it’s
even
more
important
to
have
have
happy
children
.
You
won’t
get
good
grades
if
you
are
stressed
out
all
the
time
.
I
hope
that
everyone
can
reduce
the
stress
in
their
work
and
study
and
live
a
relaxed
and
happy
life
.
Making
time
for
fun
such
as
listening
to
music
may
be
good
medicine
.
Sometimes
every
crying
is
an
efficient
way
to
reduce
stress
.
All
in
all
,
we
should
try
our
best
to
deal
with
the
stress
and
keep
healthy
in
the
body
and
mind
.
I
hope
you
will
be
happy
and
healthy
forever
.
/
I
hope
everything
will
go
well
with
your
son
.
/I
truly
hope
my
letter
will
help
you
understand
better
about
Chinese
red
.
She
does
all
that
she
can
do
for
me
.
No
matter
what
happens
in
the
future
.
I
will
love
her
forever
.
I
will
never
forget
the
smile
on
my
mother’s
face
when
we
were
having
dinner
together
.
佳/篇/创/作
假定你是梁丽，你的美国朋友
Tony因考试发挥失常，成绩不理想而情绪低落。请给他写一封信表示安慰。要点如下：
1
表示难过和理解
。
2
让他找出失败的原因并及时改正。
3
鼓励他重拾自信，实现梦想；
.........
注意：
词数90左右；
2短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3
文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
____________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Liang
Li
参考答案
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：演讲稿
人称：第一、三人称
时态
：一般现在时
功能：分享缓解压力的办法
要点：
1
点明问题
2
具体问题
3
本人的压力
4
缓解压力
Step3
-连-连词成句
a
serious
problem
under
too
much
pressure
;
get
on
well
with
;
worry
about
;
to
be
;
send
me
to
;
had
a
talk
with
Step
5
修-修饰美化
one
after
another
;
getting
hotter
In
the
hope
of
I
think
;
to
solve
One
possible
version
：
Dear
Tony
,
I’m
sorry
to
hear
that
you
didn’t
do
well
in
your
exam
and
that
you
are
worried
about
your
study
.
I
quite
understand
how
you
feel
now
There
is
no
doubt
that
we
should
keep
a
good
state
of
mind
.
As
we
all
know
,
failure
is
the
mother
of
success
.
We
should
spare
no
effort
to
analyze
the
cause
of
failure
,
which
could
help
us
find
out
the
mistakes
we
made
so
we
can
try
to
make
up
for
the
lack
of
knowledge
and
skills
in
those
areas
.
Only
in
this
way
can
we
make
progress
in
our
study
.
I
hope
that
by
the
time
this
letter
reaches
you
,
you’ll
have
felt
much
better.
Let’s
work
hard
together
and
turn
our
dream
into
reality
.
Yours
.
Liang
Li
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