新目标2021年中考英语一轮话题写作（十）环境保护（写作思路+范文+模拟练习）

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话题写作（十）环境保护
教材话题链接
七年级下册
Unit
5
Why
do
you
like
pandas
?－Protect
the
elephant
P29
八年级下册
Unit
7
What’s
the
highest
mountain
in
the
world
?
-Try
to
help
save
pandas
P54.
九年级全一册　　Unit
13
We’re
trying
to
save
the
earth
!
典/例/分/析
动物是我们的好朋友
，但是越来越多的动物濒临灭绝，我们应该如何
保护它们呢？请以
“How
to
protect
animals”为题写一篇短文，呼吁人们热爱动物，保护动物。内容包括：
１
停止杀戮
２
保护动物的家园
３
加强宣传。
注意：
1
词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3
文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
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满分作文五步法
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：___________________
人称:___________________
时态：___________________
功能:____________________
要点：
1._____________________
2.______________
3.
_______________
4.
_______________
适当发挥....
Step
2
搭-列提纲，搭好框架
How
to
protect
animals
开篇点题：
Animals
are
our
good
friends
More
and
more
animals
are
in
danger
.
主体内容
What
should
we
do
?
How
to
protect
them
?
live
with
animals
in
peace
protect
the
environment
make
more
people
realize
the
importance
of
protecting
animals
总结收尾
call
on
people
to
be
kind
to
animals
.
Step
3
:
连-连词成句
开篇点题：
Animals
are
________________________.
But
now
more
and
more
animals
__________________________________
.
2
主体内容：
As
friends
of
animals
.what
should
we
do
_________________________
them
?
We
should
learn
to
_______________________________.
We
must
______________________________
wild
animals
.
We
shouldn’t
__________________________so
many
trees
.
We
can
put
up
notices
to
make
more
people
realize
_________________________.
3
总结收尾：
I
think
if
we
love
animals
and
we
are
kind
to
them
,
our
world
will
______________________
.
Step
4.
组-组句成篇
How
to
protect
animals
.
Animals
are
our
good
friends
!
But
now
more
and
more
animals
are
in
danger
.
As
friends
of
animals
,
what
should
we
do
to
protect
them
?
First
,
I
think
we
should
learn
to
live
with
animals
in
peace
.
So
we
must
stop
killing
wild
animals
.
Second,
we
shouldn’t
cut
down
so
many
trees
.
Instead
,
we
should
plant
more
trees
.
Third
,
the
government
should
set
up
more
nature
parks
for
them
.
And
for
most
of
us
,
we
should
help
the
animals
.
I
think
that
if
we
love
animals
and
we
are
kind
to
them
,
our
world
will
be
better
and
better
.
Step
5
修-修饰美化
添加开头句：
______________________________
,
animals
are
our
good
friends
.
加不定式：
Instead,
we
should
plant
more
trees
____________________________________________
.
扩句：
And
for
most
of
us
,
we
can
do
what
we
can
______________________
.
For
example
,
we
can
______________________________________
to
make
more
people
realize
the
importance
of
protecting
animals
in
danger
.
美文诵读
How
to
protect
animals
As
we
know
,
animals
are
our
friends
.
But
now
more
and
more
animals
are
in
danger
.
As
friends
of
animals
,what
should
we
do
to
protect
them
m?First
,
I
think
we
should
learn
to
live
with
animals
in
peace
.
So
we
must
stop
killing
wild
animals
.
Second
,
we
shouldn’t
cut
down
so
many
trees
.
Instead
,
we
should
plant
more
trees
to
provide
the
animals
with
a
better
living
environment
.
Third
,
the
government
should
set
up
more
nature
parks
for
them
.
And
for
most
of
us
,
we
can
do
what
we
can
to
help
the
animals
.
For
example
,
we
can
take
some
measures
to
make
more
people
realize
the
importance
of
protecting
animals
in
danger
.
I
think
that
if
we
love
animals
and
we
are
kind
to
them
,
our
world
will
be
better
and
better
.
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
现象类
animals
/plants
in
danger
,
air/water/light/soil
pollution
,
no
clean
water
to
drink
,
plastic
bags
,
throw
the
rubbish
everywhere
,
make
noise
,
get
warmer
,
food
,
takeaway
food
....
原因类
cut
down
trees
,
build
more
factories
,
be
polluted
,
kill
animals
,
pour
dirty
water
,
litter
everywhere
....
措施类
take
action
/take
measures
/
take
steps
,
try
our
best
,
call
on
,
plant
more
trees
,
protect
our
environment
,
take
a
bus
,
ride
a
bike
,
take
bags
to
go
shopping
,
put
litter
in
different
bins
,
recycle
,
use
new
energy
,
turn
off
the
lights
,
take
shorter
showers
.....
佳句积累
【开头句】
As
we
all
know
,
animals
are
our
good
friends
.
But
now
more
and
more
animals
are
in
danger
.
It’s
our
duty
to
save
the
environment
.
Environment
pollution
is
worse
and
worse
/more
and
more
serious
today
.
My
school
is
making
its
effort
to
be
a
civilized
school
.
Let
me
introduce
it
.
The
earth
is
in
trouble
!
We
need
to
take
steps
to
protect
the
environment
.
【发展句】
To
keep
our
school
clean
,
we
should
ask
others
not
to
litter
everywhere
.
I
hope
I
can
do
something
to
help
reuse
something
we
don’t
need
.
We
must
stop
killing
wild
animals
.
We
can
take
some
measures
to
make
people
realize
the
importance
of
protecting
animals
in
danger
.
Remember
to
turn
off
the
lights
when
you
leave
a
room
.
I
can
save
water
by
turning
off
the
tap
when
I
brush
my
teeth
,
and
taking
shorter
showers
.
【结尾句】
Only
if
we
protect
animals
well
can
we
have
a
bright
future
!
Use
things
for
as
long
as
possible
,
which
helps
to
save
money
and
reduce
pollution
.
We
can
plant
more
trees
and
call
for
protecting
animals’
habitats
.
In
order
to
live
a
better
life
,
we
need
protect
our
world
.
Let’s
act
now
from
everything
to
save
the
animals
.
佳/篇/创/作
“绿水青山就是金山银山”请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法，以“How
to
Make
Our
Hometown
More
Beautiful
.”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：
1
节约用水用电；
2
绿色出行；
3
爱护环境，不乱扔垃圾等。
4
其他.....
注意：
词数90左右；
2短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3
文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
参考词汇：environment
,pollution
;
reduce
;
sort
the
rubbish
(垃圾分类）
How
to
Make
Our
Hometown
More
Beautiful
The
clean
water
and
green
mountains
are
our
treasures
.
____________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Liang
Li
参考答案
Step
1
审-审清题意
文体：说明文
人称：第一人称
时态
：一般现在时
功能：呼吁保护动物
要点：
1
动物是我们的朋友
2
越来越多的动物濒临灭绝
3
保护措施
停止杀戮
保护动物的家园
加强宣传
Step3
-连-连词成句
our
good
friends
;
are
in
danger
to
protect
;
live
with
animals
in
peace
;
stop
killing
;
cut
down
;
the
importance
of
protecting
animals
in
danger
be
better
and
better
Step
5
修-修饰美化
As
we
all
know
to
provide
the
animals
with
a
better
living
environment
to
help
the
animals
;
take
some
measures
One
possible
version
：
How
to
Make
Our
Hometown
More
Beautiful
The
clean
water
and
green
mountains
are
our
treasures
.
But
environmental
pollution
is
a
bit
serious
these
days
.
In
order
to
make
our
hometown
more
beautiful,
we
students
should
do
something
to
protect
the
environment
.
First
,
we
should
turn
off
the
lights
to
save
electricity
when
we
leave
the
room
.
Second
,
let’s
walk
or
ride
a
bike
to
school
.
IT
is
not
only
good
for
the
environment
but
also
for
our
health
.
Third
,
we
should
also
advise
our
parents
to
take
the
bus
to
work
instead
of
driving
We
should
stop
using
plastic
bags
to
reduce
pollution
.
Last
but
not
least
,
we
should
try
to
sort
the
rubbish
and
throw
it
into
the
dustbin
e
very
day
.
How
important
for
us
to
protect
the
environment
!
Only
if
we
know
what
to
do
in
our
daily
life
can
we
make
a
difference
.
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