2012中考英语冲刺：书面表达技巧点拨与满分训练【上】

2012中考英语冲刺：书面表达技巧点拨与满分训练【上】
该精品资源精选了6篇命题作文，11篇应用文， 10篇情景作文，都配有参考范文。并且有作文技巧点拨。是训练什么表达的好材料。
一、命题作文【6篇】
[范例点拨]
1．If we don't save water，the last drop 0f water will be our tear．
环境污染是当今世界上最大的问题。根据提示，请你用自己的话说说应该怎样保护我们的水资源。
1．生命离不开水； 2．饮用水在减少； 3．水污染严重； 4．应该保护和再利用水。
注意:1．根据所给题目，请用英语写一篇短文或对话，分值相等；
2．写短文：词数不少于80个；
3．表达真实可行，内容连贯正确，语言流畅。





写作指导：
1. 分析所给提示的重点关联处：水的重要性、目前水的状况以及如何保护并再利用（recycle）水资源。
2. 直接翻译是不能很好地完成本文的写作的，因此和合理的安排和组织。一定要按照第一点的提示顺序来写作。
3. 注意字数的控制，同时因为是中考形式，“注意”的第四点一定要特别留意，尤其是“不得使用真实人名”，否则该试卷会按舞弊处理的。
One possible version: 参考范文
Water is very important to us．We can’t 1ive without water. But some people don’t care about this．They often waste a lot of drinking water．They pour dirty water into rivers or lakes, and they throw rubbish into them, too. So we have less and less drinking water. At the same time, many rivers and lakes are seriously po1luted．We must do something to stop the po1lution．we must protect the water．We must find ways to recycle it．If we don’t，the last drop of water will be a tear drop．
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2．请你参考所给信息，写一篇关于你的一位同学或朋友的小短文，
Zhou Yi; 14; tall/short; thin/strong; kind; favorite sport; listen to music; read books….
要求：
1、可用所给信息，也可适当发挥；2、词数: 60---80词(2005陕西)




写作指导:
1. 文章要求里没有说明男女，因此可以根据自己的理解来选用。对于所给的选用词语，应当结合自己的写作进行选择。
2. 所给的词语比较简单，在书写时要注意选用不同的句型，避免一个句型用到底。建议合理使用一下复合句。
3. 由于是人物介绍，因此时态使用一般现在时是毫无疑问的，但要注意第三人称单数的变化。
One possible version: 参考范文
Today I want to tell you something about my classmate/ one of my best friends, Zhou Yi. He / She is a boy/ a girl of 14 years old. He / she is tall/ short and thin/ strong. He / She likes reading books very much. He / She likes sports, such as swimming and playing basketball. Sometimes when he / she is free, he / she enjoys listening to music. He / She is kind. I’m not good at English and he / she often helps me with my English. I’m happy that I have such a good friend.
[技巧点拨]
1．正确理解命题人的命题要求，读懂命题写作的具体要求；
2．写作要围绕着所给命题内容来展开，不要加上没有必要的语句；
3．注意所写句子的流畅程度和上下句的连贯性；
4．合理地掌握句型的使用，并对词语的搭配及变化形式要充分掌握；
5．理顺自己的思路后开始写作，同时要注意对完成的写作要进行适当的修改、润色。
[实践------写作文]
1．用100个左右的单词, 写一篇The Importance of Plants的说明文.内容提要:
1). 没有植物, 生命就不能延续;
2) 植物能从阳光, 空气和水中生成食物, 而人和动物则不能;
3) 人类主要靠吃植物而生存;
4) 植物能使空气清新, 有利于人类健康.
参考范文
The Importance of Plants
Plants are very important living things. Life cannot go on if there are no plants. This is because air, water and sunlight make plants grow and at the same time plants can make food from them while man and animals can’t. Animals get their food by eating plants and other animals. Man gets his food by eating plants and animals, too. So, animals and man need plants in order to live. This is why we find that there are so many plants around us. As we know, plants can make air fresh. This is good to our health.
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2． 以Am I ready for a higher school?为题写作文一篇，要求内容表达完整。
内容提示:
时间过得很快，进入初三就要面临中考。感觉到老师上课的速度快了，时间也紧了，作业量增加了，课外活动的时间在逐渐地减少……
参考范文
2.
Am I ready for a high school?
How times flies! It seemed to me that I began my grade three only a few months ago, but then I got a smell for something different: I’m going to have my exams for higher school!
I can’t have time to do my homework at home, so I have to do some of it at school. When I learn this, I am surprised. Is this the time for Grade Three?
I can feel my teachers are a little nervous and some of them seem to be easier to get angry with our students when we don’t do well in our studies. It seems to me they have lost some of their patience. I’m feeling nervous.
At the same time, I realize we have no classes for activities. Sure we have PE classes. But where are the classes for art? Where are your breaks? Why do we have classes after classes? …
Does it mean we are machines and our teachers are mechanics?
I am not ready, yet!
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3. 不论在家还是在学校，总是要吃午饭的。是吃中式盒饭还是西式快餐呢？就你所了解的情况，写短文一篇，说说为什么快餐非常受欢迎。
参考范文
3.
Meals
Everybody must eat. But they have different ways.
America is a busy country. To save every second of time, people have to work faster and better. Usually Americans don’t have breakfast, and most of them don’t have enough time to have lunch, either. Fast food is their best choice. Fast restaurants are almost everywhere in America. Hamburgers, sandwiches, pizzas, potato chips etc., they are easy to get, and not expensive.
But in China, things are a little different. Most people like to have breakfast in snack bars, because it’s convenient and not expensive. But more and more people, especially in big cities, prefer to have fast food because of heavy work and busy time. But it’s quite different from American fast food. We call it “Hefan”, which means a share of meal. It saves time and is cheap. It can make people free from housework, too.
American fast food is getting more and more popular in China, I think.
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4. 根据下面的写作要求，回忆发生在你身边的一件难以忘怀的事情，字数不少于100字。内容必须包括：
1. 事件中的人物、时间和地点。 2. 事情的经过、较为具体的内容描述。
3. 有什么收获。 4. 不少于两种时态。
参考范文
4.
Catch crabs
I can’t forget the day I caught crabs with my parents in the summer of 2001.
My family went to a reservoir to smell the flowers that day. On the way there was a small river. The water was very clear. I could see fish swimming around. We decided to stop to have a rest by the river. I saw some crabs in the water and tried to catch some. Suddenly I saw a small crab climbing under a stone. I tried to move the stone away and catch the crab, but I was a little afraid of it. My father told me that if I caught the crab by side, it wouldn’t hurt me. After thinking for a while, I decided to have a try. I quickly caught one with my right hand. Some time later I got used to it, and caught a lot more.
Well, I learned some knowledge from it and it brought me fun. I’ll never forget it!
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5. 以I like science. 为题，写短文一篇。
根据学校的实际情况，说说自己对学校所开的科学课有什么看法, 为什么?
参考范文
5.
I like science
It surprised me when I learned we were going to have science lessons.
A Mr Yang taught us science. He was medium height and a little bit heavy. At first we didn’t think he would teach us well. But by and by we got interested in his lessons because when he had his lesson, we could see he had prepared really well and he really knew much about science, specially about handicraft.
One day in spring, he even taught us how to make kites on the school playground. We were so surprised and excited that we got there much earlier before the lesson started. That was a flying-kite season. We wanted to fly kites so much. Just in that lesson, I learned how to make kites.
And from then on, I learned a lot in his lessons until one day he left our school. But my interest in science has been going on.
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6. 根据提示要求，完成下列：标题为The climate in my city
要点内容:
我市位于山区，湖北省西北部。冬天时间比较长, 基本上没有风。虽然下雪不多，但还是很冷。夏天很长，天气很热, 没有地方去游泳；秋天很干燥, 也很热，白天和晚上的温差比较大。总是还没有感觉到春天到来的时候就已经走了。
参考范文
6.
The Climate in my city
My city is in the northwest of Hubei, a mountainous city. It has a long winter, and there is almost no wind. It snows little, but it is very cold. We have a long hot summer, but we can’t find good places to swim because we can’t find lakes or big rivers to swim in. It is dry in autumn, and it is hot, too. And the difference in temperature is great! Spring is too short. When we feel spring comes, summer follows soon.
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二、应用文【11篇】
[范例点拨]
1．暑假即将来临，张涛给王刚发了个电子邮件。假如你是王刚，请根据邮件内容予以回复。回件的开头和结尾已经给出（不计入总词数）。
要求：1．词数 60—80。
2．条理清楚，语意连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。
3．以下内容供参考，也可以自行安排计划。
地点：南京，北京，海南…… 活动：游览，拍照，划船，潜水，购物……
名胜：玄武湖，天安门，长城，天涯海角…… 食物：北京烤鸭，水果，海鲜（sea food）……
交通工具：汽车，火车，飞机 ……
From: zhangtao@yahoo.com
To: wanggang@sina.com
Dear Wang Gang,
How are you these days?
The summer holiday is coming. It’s really a long holiday, isn’t it? I still remember that you once invited me to travel with you. Maybe we’ll have enough time soon. I’d like to visit some places of great interest, and eat delicious snacks. It must be exciting to travel with you without any homework. Ha! Ha! You are a good traveler. Could you tell me when and where to go, how to get there and what to do there?
Please email me soon. Good luck with the exams. Yours,
Zhang Tao
From: wanggang@sina.com
To: zhangtao@yahoo.com
Dear Zhang Tao,
Glad to hear from you. I’m fine, thank you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Gang
写作指导:
1. 写email时首先要考虑来信中提出的、需要你回答的问题，即：when and where to go, how to get there and what to do there.因此，要结合所给的提示内容，进行合理的写作。
2. 因为是书信格式，因此要注意书写部分问候话语。
3. 在文字说明时间地点时一定要准确明白，内容表达要清晰，使看信的人对你所写的内容一目了然。
4. 要注意正确理解要点中的“以下内容供参考，也可以自行安排计划。”内容，也就是说你可以自行安排合理的旅游路线。但在设计自己的旅游线路时，一定注意内容的长度和句型使用的控制。
One possible version: 参考范文
Dear Zhang Tao,
Glad to hear from you. I’m fine, thank you.
It is really a good idea to travel with you. I’d like to start our travel on July 10th. First, we take a bus to Nanjing. We can go boating on Xuanwu Lake. Then we’ll go to Beijing by train at night. In Beijing, we’ll visit the Great Wall, Tian’anmen Square and the Palace Museum… We can take photos there, do some shopping and eat some famous food like Beijing Duck. We may spend one week there. I’m sure we’ll have a good time!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Gang
2．根据中文提示，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。
假如你叫Li Ming，是个中学生，经常收听音乐节目。请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信。
信的要点如下：
1. 你很喜欢这个节目，特别（especially）是英语歌曲。
2. 你学习很忙，疲劳时，会打开收音机听这个节目。
3. 从英语节目里你学到了……
4. 你最喜欢……
英文提示：
my name, a middle school student, like, listen to, programme, especially, busy with, tired,
注意：①信的内容要通顺、连贯。
②信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
No. 28 Middle School
Beijing
April 22, 2005
Dear Sir
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
写作指导:
1. 在书写具体内容时不要忽略了前面的提示内容，即“叫Li Ming，是个中学生，经常收听音乐节目”否则书信的内容就不够完整。
2. 在使用所给的英文提示词的时候要注意，不能每造一个句子就使用一个提示词；要注意适当地增加部分相关的词语或句子，使书信内容更加完整和有序。
3. 在补充所缺的提示内容时，所使用的句型要尽量简洁，明了，内容不能罗唆，必须符合写信的目的。
4. 保证在字数上不少于50，以符合写作要求，但也不能多出太多，因为所写的内容越多，就越容易出错。
One possible version: 参考范文
No. 28 Middle School
Beijing
April 22, 2005
Dear Sir.
My name is Li Ming. I’m a middle school student. I like listening to music, so I often listen to your music program. I like the program very much, especially the English songs.
As a student, I’m busy with my studies. When I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to your program. I’ve also learned many English words from these songs.
Of all the English songs, I like “My Heart Will Go On” best. Would you please send me the words of the songs?
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
[技巧点拨]
应用文就是指人们在日常生活、工作和学习中经常运用的文体，包括书信、电子邮件、通知、广告、日记等。
写应用文，首先要明确自己想要表达的要点；第二，掌握格式，行文准确。各种不同的运用文体要使用不同的格式来表达。要注意用简洁的语言把该表达的人、地、时、事交代清楚。尽可能用你最熟悉的最有把握的句式和词语，力求避免不符合英语习惯的表达；第三，认真检查，纠正语病。成文后通读一遍，检查内容是否完整，有无遗漏或误解，格式是否正确，语法是否正确，有无句式或用词错误。特别要注意时态，检查书写是否规范，有无拼写、大小写、标点符号等的错误。
[实践------写作文]
1．假如你叫邓娇，在湖北十堰东风二中学习。你有一位笔友叫Nick在英国学习。不久前他说他要和父母一起到中国武汉来旅游。你于2005年6月10日写信给他，告诉他以下事情：
听到他将来中国旅游的消息，非常高兴；
请他在英国帮助买一些邮票，钱以后补给他；
欢迎他来学校参观，相信他会过得愉快。词数：100左右。已给出的内容不计算在数字内。
Dong Feng No. 2 Middle School
Shiyan, Hubei, P.R.China
Dear Nick,
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Yours,
Deng Jiao
参考范文
1.
Dong Feng No. 2 Middle School
Shiyan, Hubei, P.R.China
Dear Nick,
How are you? I’m very glad to hear that you’ll come to visit Wuhan, China with your parents. We’ll meet each other at that time. How happy I will be!
By the way, would you please do me a favor? I’d like to have some British stamps. But I can’t find any here in my city. Will you please buy some for me in your country? I’ll pay you the money when you come here.
Welcome to visit my school. I’ll show you around it and the whole city of Wuhan. I’m sure you’ll have a good time.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Deng Jiao
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2．假如你班长，你们学校要举行一次英语讲座，请根据下面的内容用英语草拟一份口头通知。字数100左右。
时间：5月20日星期天晚上7:00---9:00。
地点：205教室。 主讲人：Mr. Wang.
讲座内容：如何学好英语。
可邀请自己的朋友或外班同学出席。但不要迟到，听完后回班讨论。
参考范文
2.
Announcement
Classmates:
Please be quiet. I have an announcement to make. I am very glad to tell you that an English talk will be held in our school. It is to be on Sunday evening of May 20, from seven to nine in the classroom No. 205. Mr. Wang will give us a talk about how to learn English well. You may invite your friends or the students in other classes to come to the talk. After the talk, we’ll have a discussion on the subject in our classroom. Please be there on time for the talk.
That’s all. Thank you!
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3. 假如你是刘明珠，将于今年七月参加中学生英语夏令营（the English Summer Camp）。你将寄住在英国某家庭，请你给该家庭发一封E-mail，介绍一下自己的情况。词数：80词左右。
参考范文
3.
Dear Mr and Mrs White, My name is Liu Mingzhu. I’m going to take part in the English Summer Camp this July. I’m very glad to know I would live with you for some time. I think it’s necessary for me to introduce myself to you so that you can know something about me before you see me. I’m a girl student of 15 now. My hobby is listening music and reading different kinds of books. I’m good at playing the violin. I am a pleasant girl. I like to make friends with others though sometimes I am a little bit forgetful, which brings me quite a lot of trouble. I will try my best not to forget things any more. I hope I can get on well with you. Best wishes! Liu Mingzhu
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4. 假设你是王雪，你的妈妈病了，而爸爸不在家。你得在家照顾妈妈，不能前去上开学了，因此向李老师请假。字数在70左右。
参考范文
4.
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m sorry to tell you that my mother is not feeling well today. My father is out on business. So I took my mother to a hospital near my home. The doctor took her temperature and said she had a bad cold and a fever. He told her to stay in bed for a day. I have to look after her at home. So I can’t go to school and ask for a day’s leave.
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5. 根据中文提示，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。
假如你叫Li Ming，是个中学生，经常收听音乐节目。请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信。信的要点如下：
1. 你很喜欢这个节目，特别（especially）是英语歌曲。
2. 你学习很忙，疲劳时，会打开收音机听这个节目。
3. 从英语节目里你学到了……
4. 你最喜欢……
英文提示：
my name, a middle school student, like, listen to, programme, especially, busy with, tired,
注意：①信的内容要通顺、连贯。 ②信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
No. 28 Middle School
Beijing
April 22, 2005
Dear Sir
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考范文
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No. 28 Middle School
Beijing
April 22, 2005
Dear Sir.
My name is Li Ming. I’m a middle school student. I like listening to music, so I often listen to your music program. I like the program very much, especially the English songs.
As a student, I’m busy with my studies. When I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to your program. I’ve also learned many English words from these songs.
Of all the English songs, I like “My Heart Will Go On” best. Would you please send me the words of the songs?
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
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6. 你班班委会决定将于6月18日上午举行初三离校前的最后一次班级活动。假如你是班长，请你根据表格中的活动内容，用英语写一篇短文，向你班外籍老师汇报这次活动的安排。短文的开头和结尾己给出。
时 间
内 容
8：00~9：00
1．谈谈“长大后你想做什么？”
2．谈谈如何过暑假
9：00~10：10
1．唱歌、跳舞 2．表演短剧
3．其它
10：10~11：00
1．打扫教室 2．修理桌椅
3．其它
11：00~11：30
1．拍照 2．互留电话号码、地址
3．其它
说明：
1．请自行设计表格中“其它”的内容，所设计的内容必须具体、合理；
2．要求语言连贯，条理清楚；
3．词数：70左右(不包括已给出的短文的开头和结尾)。
Our class is going to have a farewell party on the morning of June 18,___________________
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参考范文
6.
Our class is going to have a farewell patty on the morning of June 18. At eight, we'll begin to talk about what we are going to do when we grow up. And we'll talk about how we are going to spend our summer holiday. At nine, we'll sing, dance, and put on short plays. We'll play games together. From 10:10 to 11:00, we'll clean the classroom and repair the desks and chairs. We'll clean the teachers' offices. At eleven, we'll enjoy some fruit(s) and drinks, take photos and give each other telephone numbers and addresses. At 11:30, the party will be over.
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7. 下面描述的是2005年5月15日（周三，晴天）你的一次经历，请根据其内容，用英语写一篇80词左右的日记。日记的开头格式已给出，不计入文章总词数。注意要点完整，语法正确，上下文连贯，并适当发挥。
要点：1、下午放学后
2、爸爸出差，妈妈生病卧床
3、照顾妈妈，送医院，买药，煮饭、洗衣服等等
4、后来受父母表扬
5、该经历对自己的感触
May 15, 2005, Wednesday Fine




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May15, 2005,Wednesday Fine
When I got home this afternoon, I found my mother was lying in bed sick and my father was away on business. What should I do then?
Since Mother was ill, I should take care of her. I first sent her to hospital and bought some medicine. When we got home, I began to cook dinner and wash clothes.
I was praised by my parents later for this. I think I have grown up now and I should help do something for my family.
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8. 根据中英文提示，与一篇日记，记叙一次（西塞山）郊游。（短文的开头已经给出。）要求：1.短文应包括汉语和英语提示内容：??? 2.语句通顺，意思连贯；??? 3.书写工整，卷面整洁，标点符号正确；??? 4.字数不少于80个英语单词（不包括短文开头已给出的词语）。??? Sunday, May 1st I got to school very early. Our class took a special bus to Xisai Mount. We got to the foot of the mount at 8:30.___________________ _________


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Sunday, May 1st??? I got to school very early. Our class took a special bus to Xisai Mount. We got to the foot of the mount at 8:30.)??? We began climbing the mount soon. On our way the air was so fresh and the scenery was so beautiful. Everybody was talking and laughing.??? We reached the top at about 10:00.The Yangtze River appeared in the north, and over the river there was a great bridge. We felt very relaxed.??? Seeing some birds flying in the sky, I suddenly remembered a popular poem of Tang dynasty. " Birds are flying in front of Xisai Mount…". I kept feeling proud of our city.*************************
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三、情景作文
[范例点拨]
1． 随着时代的发展，我们的生活将会发生许多变化，下面三幅图片所描绘的情景有可能在未来的生活中变为现实，同学们可结合图片，发挥想象，展望未来的生活，以Life in the Future为题，用英文写一篇60—80瓷的短文（开头语已给出，不计入总词数）。
要求：书写规范，语法正确，语句通顺，主题鲜明（也可不受所给图片的限制）
LIFE IN THE FUTRE
As time goes by, there are going to be big changes in our everyday lives. For example,




写作指导:
分析三幅图之间的联系。既然要求使用三幅图来进行写作，就一定有连接点。
弄明白第一幅图所给的词语tale pills only是什么意思呢？联想一下，然后考虑它与后面的两幅图有什么关系。什么情况下可以乘spaceship旅行呢？第三幅图中城市怎么会和鱼儿在一起呢？会不会是和take pills有关呢？
分析完了后，要弄明白，本文写作时要注意的时态问题！以将来时间为主，be going to 的形式最佳。但别忘了if条件句。
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As time goes by, there are going to be big changes in our everyday lives. For example, cars are going to drive us to places without a driver. We’re going to tell the car where we want to go, and the car is going to get us there! Also, we can talk to people on small video telephones that we can wear like a watch. If we are free, there are cities under the sea or space stations to visit. What about meals? It is easy— taking only one pill is OK! (75 words)
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2．假如你叫李强，是个中学生，想应聘《英语学习辅导报》的业余小记者。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。
姓名
李强
出生年月
1990年2月
出生地
黑龙江省哈尔滨市
相关经历
有两年校报工作经历
获奖情况
2004年在全校英语竞赛中获第一名
特长
英文写作、电脑
爱好
看英文小说、集邮、篮球
联系方式
lipiang@hotmail.com
注意：1．情况介绍必须采用短文形式；
2．短文要通顺、连贯；
3．词数80左右，短文的第一句已为你写好，不计入总词数。
My name is Li Qiang. ________________________________________________________




写作指导:
1. 弄清楚表格中的内容及相互之间的联系，在动手写之前组织好所给材料的前后顺序；
2. 在明确主语人称后，注意时态的使用。要注意一般现在时和一般过去时之间的转换，同时也要注意时间和地点状语的先后位置。
3. 要注意句型的选择和使用，不要将一个句型写到底。
4. 千万不要将所给的表格提示内容逐一按顺序翻译，要灵活地写作。
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My name is Li Qiang. I was born in Harbin, Heilongjiang Province in February 1990. I have worked for our school newspaper for two years. I like English writing and computer best and I am very good at them. Last year, I won first prize in the school English competition. As for my interests, I enjoy reading English novels and collecting stamps. My favorite sport is basketball. I often play basketball with my friends after school. And I think I can play it well.
My e-mail address is liqiang@hotmail.com.
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[技巧点拨]
(1) 仔细观察，了解文字提示、表格或图示的具体要求
了解具体要求是写作的第一步，文字或表格或图画提供了写作的重要信息，一切写作的内容都必须以它们为依据来展开；
(2) 通读提示和对图画的分析来掌握关键内容，确定写作需要使用的主要词汇
写作之前，仔细阅读所提供的关键词语或图片内容，掌握表达所给的或图中情景中所给出的时间、地点、人物、事件的过程等信息，为进一步答题做好准备。
(3) 逐图描述，综合思考；但一定要注意故事的连贯性
运用所学的词汇、句型语法知识合理地进行分析思考，按照英语表达习惯选择词语，编写句子，并使所写的作文符合要求。
(4)不要忽略标点符号和字迹的工整，对字数的要求也不要忽略。
[实践—----写作文]
1．同学们的大部分时间都花在学校了，要是学校的生活过得full of fun的话，那一定是很cool了吧。可是，在学校能做些什么使自己的心态变得好些，从而使自己的学生生活很cool呢？下面请根据提示词语，完成一篇词语在80—100左右的小短文，描述一下你的学校生活吧，写作完美的composition吧！
Time duration
Things to do or want to do
School time
busy, tired
Noon time
relaxing, take a walk, free talk, games online
Break
discuss, interesting, homework
Sports time
full of fun
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I love school time very much, though it is so busy, and sometimes tiring. We, however, have more fun at school.
Noon time belongs to us students. We usually feel relaxing and enjoyable. We can take a walk on the playground unless it’s raining. We can talk about anything we are interested in and discuss it warmly. We enjoy talking about pop music, famous actors or computer games online.
When we finish class work at school, sports time starts. Have fun! It’s our world! You can see me almost anytime on the basketball court after school!
School life is full of fun, and I enjoy it.
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2．标题：Take my American Teacher to Hospital
内容说明：
外教左脚很疼，行走不便，我陪他一起头医院去看病，因为他不会说汉语。医生给他做了检查后，需要动一个小手术。他有点怕疼，但没有办法，否则会疼得更厉害。最后他动了手术，我打的送他回家了。他非常感谢我。数字不少于80词。
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Take my American Teacher to Hospital
My American teacher’s left foot hurt him a lot. He couldn’t walk well. One day, I took him to a hospital because he didn’t know any Chinese. The doctor looked him over carefully, and said he needed a small operation. He was afraid of pain, but he had no choice. If he didn’t have this operation, it could hurt him much worse. After the small operation, he didn’t feel so much pain. So I took a taxi and sent him home. He couldn’t thank me too much.
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3. 如果你是图中的学生，有一天在放学的路上目睹了图中的情景。请你以What shall I do?为题，用英语写一篇字数不少于80个的短文。要求以第一人称描述图画情景，并谈谈你会怎么办?说出自己的理由。注意：本题不能出现真实姓名、学校等有关信息。（2004年台州）
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One day, I was on my way home when I saw a man and a lady get off a bus. The lady had a beautiful handbag with her. To my surprise, I found the man began to follow the lady quietly. I was afraid something might happen and decided to follow them. Seeing the street was almost empty, the man went up, snatched (grabbed) the handbag from the lady, and got away with it.
Now the lady was running after him, shouting, "Stop thief! Stop thief!" "What shall I do?
Shall I call 110 or..."
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4. 一些来自美国的学生到你们学校参观。老师安排了一些英语成绩好的学生与他们进行座谈。你有幸成为其中一员。请你根据自己的实际情况，简述一下与他们交流的过程。要求不少于100词。下面的要点必须包括在内：
1）在交谈中你如何从被动到主动与他们交谈；
2）在听不懂的情况下你是怎么做的？
3）你对此次的交谈满意吗？为什么？
4）此次交谈对你学英语有何启发？
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Last week a group of American students came to visit our school. After they were shown around the school, they wanted to have a talk to some of the students in my school. I was lucky to be one of the students. At first I was afraid to talk to them because I thought my spoken English was poor and they would laugh at me. But then one of the American students named Peter asked me some questions. To be polite I had to answer him. I spoke very slowly, but he just encouraged me to go on talking. And he spoke slowly so that I could understand him. Gradually I began to speak better and better. At last we exchanged our addresses and we became good friends. From that I understand that if you are brave enough to speak out, it’s easy to speak English. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.
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5. 内容提示：昨天你在街上遇见了多年未见的孩提时代的好朋友。他发生了很大的变化。以前的他话语不多，现在很健谈；以前个子不高，现在已经很高了；以前的短发，现在则又长还带卷。看上去也比以前健康多了，他已经不再是以前的他了。我非常高兴再次见到他。同时我邀请他到我家去玩。
要求：不能按照提示内容一句一句的翻译。字数不少于90.
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Yesterday I met one of my old friends in the street. I haven’t seen him for a long time. We were good friends when we were classmates in the same school. But now he has changed a lot. He used to be very shy , but now he can talk a lot. He used to be short, but now he is growing much taller. He used to have short hair, but now he has long straight hair. And he looks much healthier than he used to. He is not the boy I have known before anymore. I am very happy to meet him again and asks him to visit me some day.
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6. 这是一个五口之家。今天是周末，各人有各人的安排。请根据下面的提示，进行适当的判断，说出他们在干什么。字数在80---100词之间。
提示：Mr. Green----in the living room; Mrs. Green---in the kitchen Susan Green---at a shop; Jenny Green---at a shop; Jimmy Green---in the study(书房)
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See who is busy preparing for lunch? It must be Mrs. Green. She is always cooking in the kitchen at this time of day. Mr. Green is in the living room. He must be reading books there because he is used to doing some reading. Where are the two girls? They could do some shopping at a shop. They are free during the weekends and they need some new dresses. Oh, poor Jimmy. He is busy with his work in the study. He must be doing his homework now. He often has a lot of homework to do on Sunday.
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7. 根据所给提示内容，写80字左右的短文。
1）非常喜欢看电影，尤其是体育方面的，因为这类电影很令人振奋
2）最喜欢的电影之一是A Super Man。篮球明星Kobe Brant担纲主演。最后在可爱的动物帮助下，他赢得了比赛
3）我看这部电影时非常激动的。
注意：文章必须要使用状语从句和定语从句。
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I like watching movies very much. I love movies that are about sports. They are very exciting. Watching this kind of movies can make me feel excited. One of my favorite films is “A Super Man” in which Kobe Brant, a very famous basketball player, plays an important part. When I saw that he won the game with the help of those cute animals, I was so excited that I jumped up and down. It was really interesting. I love to watch it once more.
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8. 根据下列四幅图和提示词语。写出一篇语法正确、意思连贯、语句通顺、符合逻辑的短文。
要求：1．叙述要用第三人称。 2．词数80个左右。
3．要表达自己的看法或想法。
4．选择下列词语：rush hour cross make sure come over traffic rules
开头已给出
Last Monday, Tim got up at 7: 40 in the morning.
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Last Monday, Tim got up at 7: 40 in the morning. It. was the rush hour. He rode his bike to school very fast. He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment. Tim's bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily. The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right. Then a policeman came over. He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous. Tim thanked him and went to school. All the young men should obey the traffic rules.
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