2012广东省最新高考英语专题解析课件：基础写作

(共35张PPT)
1. complain about 投诉
2.go wrong出毛病
3. return my money to me退还我钱
4. apply for申请
5.worse still更糟糕的是
6.delay in delivering推迟交货
相关短语
7. for the above reasons基于上述理由
8. a full refund全额退款
9. pay for the postage付邮资
10. travel agency旅行社
11. historical attractions历史名胜
12. make mistakes犯错误
13. be forced to被迫
14. a person with patience 有耐心的人
15. a pair of black shoes一双黑鞋子
16. make an apology道歉
17. to our disappointment让我们失望的是
18.again and again反复; 再三
1. I’m writing to complain about a pair of sneakers I recently purchased from your website. 我写信的目的是要向你投诉我最近在你们网站上购买的一双运动鞋。
2. Worse still, there was a ten-day delay in delivering my shoes.更糟糕的是, 交鞋的日期推迟了10天。
相关句式
3. I demand either a new pair of black shoes be posted to me immediately or I be given a full refund.我要求要么马上寄给我一双新的黑鞋子, 要么全额退款。
4. Please give 30% of my money back, or I shall be forced to take the matter further.请退还我30%的钱, 否则我会被迫采取进一步的措施。
5. She was not a person with patience and didn’t patiently answer my questions at all. 她是个没有耐心的人, 根本不耐心回答我的问题。
6. I demand that she make an apology to me face to face.我要求她当面向我道歉。
1. 投诉信要开门见山写明来信目的, 即投诉的具体内容, 切忌表达转弯抹角, 久久不入正题。
2. 写信时, 要注意写信的对象, 运用得体的语言表达, 并可在句中适当增加to one’s disappointment, unluckily, unfortunately, worse still, to make matters worse等符合投诉信感彩的副词短语,以加强语气, 使表达更加丰富。例如：What I ordered was a pair of black size-nine shoes but to my disappointment, I received a pair of white, size-8.5 shoes instead. Worse still, there was a ten-day delay in delivering my shoes, which should have been received on April 10.
申购情况 实际情况
颜色 黑色 白色
号数 9 8.5
到货日期 4月10日 4月20日
3.要求：重新邮寄或退款；
4. 询问：若寄回, 谁承担寄费
假设你叫李华, 最近在某英文购物网站上购买了一双鞋子，但出现了一些问题。
［写作内容］
请给网站写一封投诉信, 包括以下内容：
1.写信的目的；
2.投诉内容：
[例题导写]
1. 开门见山、写明目的。凡书信开头, 一般可使用“I’m writing to...”的句型开门见山点明写信目的。请根据中文完成句子。
(1) I am writing to make a complaint about ____________________________________.(我在你网站上购买的鞋子)
the pair of shoes I bought on your website
(2) I am writing to complain that __________________________________________________________. _______(我在你网站上购买的鞋子有点问题)
there is something wrong with the pair of shoes I bought on your website
(3) I am writing to inform you that _____
___________________________________
_______. (我不满意在你网站上购买的鞋子)
(4) I am writing to ___________________
_____ (对……表示失望)the shoes I bought from your website.
show my disappointment
about
satisfied with the shoes bought on your
I am not
website
2. 确定文体、规范语言。这是一封投诉信, 因此必须注意语言的规范性和得体性, 不能使用与朋友书信交流时的亲切语言, 但也不能出现语气倔强等不礼貌用语。
3. 划分信息、统筹全文。根据写作内容, 可把五句话写作信息划分如下：(1)写信目的; (2)申购情况; (3)实际情况; (4)要求; (5)询问。写信目的可在引入部分找到, 投诉的主要内容是“在某英文购物网站上购买了一双鞋子, 但出现了一些问题。”特别需要注意, 写作前要把“要求和询问”的内容补充为完整句子, 明确动作的主语, 写作时才不会出错。
4.突破难点、正确翻译。请翻译：
在你的网站上 :on your website
(2) 投诉……:complain about...
(3) 从……购买……:purchase/buy sth. from ...
(4) 一双九码的鞋子:_____________
_________________________
(5) 寄回: ____________
(6) 为……付款: _________
pay for ...
send /post ...back
a pair of size-nine
shoes, a pair of shoes of size nine
(7) 邮费 _________
(8) 给某人退款/某人获得退款
___________________________
(9) (申购情况和实际情况的对比)我订购的是……, 但我收到的是……
__________________________
What I ordered was... but I received...
postage
give sb. a refund/get one’s refund
[参考范文]
Dear Sir，
I’m writing to complain about a pair of sneakers I recently purchased from your website. What I ordered was a pair of black size-nine shoes but I received a pair of white, size-8.5 shoes instead. Worse still, there was a ten-day delay in delivering my shoes, which should have been received on April 10.
For the above reasons, I demand either a new pair of black size-nine shoes be posted to me immediately or I be given a full refund. Also, if I send back the wrong shoes, will your company pay for the postage
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5.连句成篇。
[能力提高]
(1)我写信是要投诉你们餐厅服务差。
I am writing to complain about the poor service in your restaurant.
(2)我写信是要投诉你们公司产品质量差, 并要求你们尽快解决问题。
I am writing to complain about the poor quality of the products of your company and ask for solutions to the problem as soon as possible.
2.请根据括号给出的中文提示填空。
Dear Sir / Madam，
I have just returned from the English Summer Camp at your School of Language, and I’m writing to express my unhappiness with your program.
I took part in the program in order to improve my English but(1) __________________ (使我失望的是), there were too many students in a class, in which case students were not able to practise a lot.
to my disappointment
Moreover, (2) _______________________ _____________________________(课程内容简单, 话题不够新颖) so that students’ interest in English could not be aroused. (3)__________(更为糟糕的是), no lunch was provided and therefore I had to go to the nearest restaurant, which was 30 minutes away.
the course was simple and
the topics were not fresh enough
Worse still
It was once said in your ad that(4)________
_________________________________________________(学生可以参加丰富的社会实践活动) but badminton was the only activity organized. You can imagine how upset I am to have wasted my time and money and please(5) ________ ___________(请在此处合理地提出你的赔偿要求), or I shall be forced to take the matter further.
Yours，
Li Hua
be provided with many chances to enjoy social
students could
practice
money back
give half of my
你参加了某旅行社组织安排的云南六天游。以下是旅行社广告宣传与你参团后实际情况的对比：
广告宣传 实际情况
行程安排 游览当地十处著名景点 仅游览了八处景点,行程乏味
酒店住宿 入住五星级酒店,配套设施齐全 配套设施陈旧,没有热水供应
[写作内容]
请给旅行社写一封投诉信, 内容包括：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 行程安排、酒店住宿旅游广告宣传与实际情况的对比；
3. 要求退回30%团费, 否则将采取进一步行动。
[参考范文]
Dear Sir，
I’m writing to complain about the six-day trip to Yunnan organized by your travel agency. As it was promised in your advertisement, we would visit ten famous historical attractions of the local place. However, we only visited eight places of interest, tired of the boring journey as well.
Besides, it was claimed that we would enjoy the stay in a five-star hotel which was well furnished, but to our disappointment, we were arranged to stay in a poorly equipped hotel with no hot water supply. Please give 30% of my money back, or I shall be forced to take the matter further.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely，
Chen Ming
[精华点评]
这是一篇关于旅行参团后的投诉信。因事情已发生, 描述广告宣传与实际情况对比时, 应该使用合适的过去时态。当谈及广告宣传时, 可使用“As it was promised / claimed in your advertisement, ...; It was claimed in your advertisement that... ”等句型, 并使用However / On the contrary等副词或while, but等连词, 引出实际情况的描述。
在词汇运用方面, 对重复出现的词句, 可尝试运用多种表达, 如游览(visit, pay a visit to)著名景点(historical attraction, place of interest, scenic spot)、配套设施(well /poorly furnished / equipped)，并可通过使用相同单词的不同词性来变换表达, 如enjoy the stay(名词) in a five-star hotel和stay(动词) in a poorly equipped hotel。
[参考范文]
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about
the working attitude of the clerk called Zhang Xin of your bank. Poor at computer skills, Zhang Xin spent more than half an hour in helping me apply for a credit card on line, which made me late for work.
She was not a person with patience and didn’t patiently answer my questions. Worse still, she was so careless that she made mistakes again and again when filling my information in the document. I demand that she make an apology to me face to face.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely，
Li Gang
[精华点评]
这是一篇关于投诉员工工作态度的投诉信。因事情已发生, 当描述员工具体表现时, 使用一般过去时。写作时, 可通过穿插使用非谓语结构、定语从句以及“so...that”这个句型来丰富表达。例如, Poor at computer skills, Zhang Xin spent more than half an hour in... 也可改写为：Zhang Xin, who was poor at computer skills, spent more than half an hour in...。
投诉信的最后一句, 通常是提出赔偿要求, 若态度强硬, 可使用“I demand / require that sb. should do sth. ”, 若语气相对委婉, 可使用：Would you be so kind as to do sth.; Please ...; It would be highly appreciated if...等句型。(共29张PPT)
1. learn about 了解
2. be to set for 将前往
3. places of interest 名胜古迹
4. an exchange visit 回访
5. gather together 集中
6. get close to 靠近
相关短语
7. release pressure 释放压力
8. grow up happily 快乐地成长
9. according to 根据
10. appreciate poetry 欣赏诗歌
11. exchange thoughts 交流想法
12. recite one’s works 背诵作品
13. at the invitation of 在……的邀请下
14. be impressed by 被……给予深刻印象
15. encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
16. the best-known tourist spot 最著名的旅游景
1. During their one-week stay in Foshan,
the students experienced the campus life
of Chinese students.在佛山为期一周的逗留
中, 这些学生们体验了中国学生的校园生活。
2. The British students were impressed by the kindness of Chinese students. 英国的学
生们对中国学生的友好印象深刻。
相关句式
3. At the invitation of a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March.在一个英国学校的邀请下, 华文中学的38名学生明年三月将启程去英国进行交流访问。
4. It was also said that poetry could help them release pressure.据说诗歌还有助于缓解压力。
5. It’s likely that that famous sports star will also run with the torch.很可能那位著名的体育明星也要参加火炬接力。
1. 新闻通讯的第一句往往为全文的中心句(topic sentence), 因此这个句子中常包含四大元素what(事件), when(时间), where(地点)和who(人物), 而在下文则要补充事件的过程和细节, 往往包括why(目的或原因)和how(具体过程)等。
2. 注意新闻类型题材的一些常用语, 如It is reported that..., As is reported..., According to the report...等。
3. 新闻通讯报道在于平实客观的语言, 考生不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。
时间 上周
地点 华文中学
事件 一批英国学生到访
行程 了解中国学生的校园生活、参观佛山的著名景点，体验当地文化
佛山印象 洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品
回访计划 华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国
(2008年佛山一模)
上周, 一批英国学生到达佛山华文中学进行访问交流。假设你是该校通讯员, 请根据以下内容给当地一家报社写一篇英文报道。
[写作内容]
[例题导写]
认真审题。新闻报道也是记叙文的一种, 但是与日记类型的经历感受又不完全一样。 日记类型的文章考生不但把自己的所见所闻描绘出来, 还要注意情感的表达, 而新闻报道类型的文章需要客观的报道, 因此语言方面可以相对平实一点。
句2：
(1) 感受校园生活：_____________________
____________________
句3：
(2) 参观著名景点：_____________________
_________________________________
(3) 体验当地文化：__________________
词汇整理 翻译或完成下列短语。
learn/know about the local culture
experience the campus life
of Chinese students
visit / pay a visit to some
places of interest / tourist attractions
句4：
(4) 洁净的市容, 友善的学生, 美味的食品：
_____________________________________
_____________________________________
_____________________________________
__________________
句5：
(5) 回访：________________
the clean city, friendly students and delicious food / the cleanness of the city, kindness of the students and niceness of food(注意并列词组的词性一致)
an exchange visit
难句翻译 请用高级结构或优美的句式翻译下列句子。
句4：
洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品给学生留下了深刻的印象。
The British students were deeply impressed by the clean city, friendly students and delicious food. / What expressed the British students deeply was the clean city, friendly students and delicious food. / The clean city, friendly students and delicious food left a deep impression on the British students.
句5：
华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国。
In return, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are invited to visit Britain next March. / At the invitation of a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March.
连句成篇
[参考范文]
Huawen Middle School in Foshan City received a group of students from Britain last week. During their one-week stay in Foshan, the students experienced the campus life of Chinese students.
They also visited some places of interest in Foshan and learned about the local culture. The British students were impressed by the kindness of Chinese students, cleanness of the city and niceness of food. At the invitation of a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March.
假设为了让青少年更了解诗歌, 上个周末广州市教育局在你校举办了一场诗歌大赛。假设你是学校报社的通讯员, 为这个活动写一篇报道。
[写作内容]
举办目的 让青少年更了解和学会欣赏诗歌
举办时间 2011年12月11日, 上周日
举办地点 第一中学
参与人数 200多个来自全市不同学校的高中生
举办详情 参赛者背诵自己的作品, 交流经验
参赛者感受 1. 通过比赛与诗歌更靠近了
2. 诗歌可以帮助释放压力, 帮助我们快乐成长
校长感受 鼓励大家像诗人那样思考, 对世界更敏感和真诚
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
In order to help teenagers learn more
and appreciate poetry, a poetry contest was held in the No. 1 High School last Sunday, December 11th, 2011. 200 senior students from different high schools all over the city gathered together, reciting their works and exchanging thoughts.
Many competitors said that they
were getting close to poems through
this competition. It was also said that poetry could help them release pressure and grow up happily. The headmaster encouraged us to think like a poet, that
is, be sensitive and sincere towards the world.
[精华点评]
活动报道的第一句是开门见山地介绍活动的情况：活动的时间、地点、目的和内容都包含在里面。第二句包含了参与人数与比赛详情, 范文用了伴随状语reciting their works and exchanging thoughts连接了这两个内容。第三句和第四句都是陈述比赛者的感受, 因此范文为了显示句子多样性, 用了两个不同的句型: Many competitors said that...(陈述句, 主动语态)和It was also said that...(形式主语, 被
动语态)。
假设你是《英文早报》的兼职小记者, 伦敦组委会公布了奥运火炬传递的路线, 你将为这一事件进行报道, 以下是报道的内容。
基本情况 伦敦奥组委员会公布伦敦奥运火炬传递路线
公布时间 11月7日
具体详情 1. 途经多个著名景点
2. 历经1000多个村庄， 城镇和城市
3. 6200多万英国人中的95%的人口都可以目睹
4. 历时70天
5. 在温德米尔湖火炬在汽船(steamboat)上传播, 在泰晤士(the Thames)河在划艇(rowboat)上传播, 在某处还会在马上传播
火炬传递者 8000名, 大多数是普通的公众, 但也可能有著名球星,如:贝克汉姆
［写作内容］
参考词汇：伦敦奥组委员 the London Organizing Committee of the Olympic Games
火炬传递 Torch Relay温德米尔 Lake Windermere
As is reported, the London Organizing Committee of the Olympic Games released the route of the London 2010 Olympic Torch Relay on November 7. The Olympic Torch will visit some of Britain’s best-known tourist spots, covering 1, 000 villages, towns and cities across the country and reaching more than 95% of Britain’s 62 million population.
The 70-day torch relay will be carried in a steamboat across Lake Windermere, on a rowboat on the Thames, and on horseback elsewhere. According to the Committee, most of the 8, 000 torchbearers will be ordinary members of the public, but it’s likely that famous sports stars like David Beckham will also run with the torch.
[精华点评]
新闻报道的关键在于客观，通俗易懂。考生写作的时候不用考虑花哨的词汇, 但是要注意新闻文体的常用语，如本文用到的As is reported..., According to...等。本文的另一个写作难点就是写作内容较多, 考生要运用各种技巧进行信息点合并融合,如范文通过现在分词作伴随状语把具体详情中的第一、二、三点进行了合并。
而第四点，范文用了一个短语the 70-day torch relay表达出来, 简洁明了。至于最后一点关于火炬传递者, 很多考生喜欢用there are 8, 000 torchbearers 这样的there be句型,这个句型不仅容易显得累赘, 而且容易出现语法错误, 因此范文直接用most of the 8, 000 torchbearers will be...的句型来表达, 显得简洁直接很多。(共41张PPT)
相关短语
1. the minority/majority of... 少数/大多数……
2. traffic safety 交通安全
3. disapprove of 不同意；不赞成
4. persuade sb. not to do... 说服某人不做……
5. follow the advice 听从劝告
6. as far as I am concerned 就我所知
7. carry out 实施
8. think highly of 高度评价
9. a good solution to... 一个做……的解决好办法
10. in addition 此外
11. become more rebellious 变得更加叛逆
12. from my perspective 在我看来
13. be suitable for 适合……
14. have a heated discussion 进行一次热烈的讨论
15. provide a stage for sb. 给某人提供一个舞台
16. draw the conclusion that... 得出结论
17. key to success 成功的秘诀
18. focus more on... 更加关注……
相关句式
1. Recently we have had a discussion about whether parents should accompany their children at school. 最
近我们讨论了父母是否该在学校陪读。
2. Nearly 70% of us disagree because they think it makes them fall into the habit of dependence.我们中有将近70%的人不赞同,因为他们认为这会使他们养成依赖性。
3. While about 30% of my classmates think it necessary for our parents to accompany us.而我的同学中大约30%的人认为父母有必要陪读。
4. Some people say yes, who think that the Internet helps make friends on line. 有些人同意, 他们认为互联网有助于网上交友。
5. My opinion is that students should place their study, health and safety before other things.我的意见是学生应该把学习、健康、和安全放在其他事情之前。
1. 基础写作是根据所给的内容组织成文, 不是自由发挥。部分考生喜欢在文章中使用 “Every coin has two sides”过渡, 但是这个句子并不包含任何信息点, 不适合在基础写作中使用。
2. 正反论证的议论文要注意使用转折和对比的词, 如however, in contrast, compared with等。
3. 如果文章最后要求考生发表自己观点, 考生不能简单地说I agree with...或者I disagree with..., 而是要言之有物, 有理有据。
你班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客”的讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息, 给报社写一封信, 介绍讨论的情况, 并发表你的看法。
［写作内容］
少数同学赞成处罚乘客 大多数同学反对处罚乘客
减少交通事故,促进
交通安全
2. 不乘坐醉酒司机的车,
不仅是对自己负责, 也
是对司机和路人负责 乘客难以判断司机是否
醉酒
2. 即使乘客知道司机饮
酒, 如果司机不听从乘客的
劝诫, 处罚乘客是不公平的
你的看法：……
［例题导写］
1. 确定文体结构。本文是正反论证, 因此正反观点之间的论证应该是属于并列关系, 而双方观点的论点和分论点则为总分关系。而最后，考题要求考生写出自己的观点, 这个属于对全文的总结。因此, 文章的信息点划分非常明确, 正反观点各占两个句子, 考生的观点应该为最后一个句子。考生可以采用两种方法使自己的观点明确。第一种：第一句的信息点可以包含“少数同学赞成处罚乘客”(总起)和第一个原因, 而第二句则讲述第二个原因(递进); 第二种：第一句为总起，第二句则包含了两个赞成的理由。陈述“大多数同学反对处罚乘客”这方面也是同理。
2. 词汇整理
句1：
(1) 少数同学: the minority of students
句2：
(2) 交通事故 : traffic accidents
(3) 交通安全 : traffic safety
(4) 对……负责任 : be responsible for
句3：
(4) 大部分学生 :the majority of students
句4：
(5) 劝说某人做某事 : persuade sb. to do sth.
(6) 听从某人的劝说 : follow one’s advice
3. 难句翻译
句2：不乘坐醉酒司机的车, 不仅是对自己负责,也是对司机和路人负责。
分析：本句的主语是 “不乘坐醉酒司机的车”, 因此考生可以考虑使用动词不定式not to do sth.作主语。不仅……也……可以使用not only...but also...或者as well as这些短语。
翻译 : Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only a responsible behavior for passengers themselves but also for the drivers and other people on the road. / Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver is responsible for passengers themselves as well as the drivers and other people on the road.
句4：即使乘客知道司机饮酒, 如果司机不听
从乘客的劝诫, 处罚乘客是不公平的。
分析：本句的主句是“处罚乘客是不公平的”, 考生可以考虑用it作形式主语的句型it is unfair to...，而“即使……”可以使用even if引导的让步状语从句。
翻译: Even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive, it is unfair to punish the passenger when the driver does not follow the advice.
4. 连句成文
(1)不同意某个观点:
disagree with sb. /be against the opinion that /disapprove of the idea
(2)表述“转折”的连接词:
although /instead /rather than/ nevertheless/otherwise / on the one hand...on the other hand...
(3) 表示“对照”的连接词
(3)whereas /in contrast /unlike /on the contrary /while / by contrast /compared with
(4) 表示“让步”的连接词
(4)after all /in spite of /still /provided / while it is true...
[参考范文]
Dear Editor，
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.
The minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps to reduce traffic accidents and increase traffic safety.
Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only a responsible behavior for passengers themselves but also for
the drivers and other people on the road.
The majority of the students, however, disapprove of the idea, stating that it is difficult for common passengers to know whether the driver has been drinking or not.
What’s more, even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive, it is unfair to punish the passenger when the driver does not follow the advice.
As far as I am concerned, punishing passengers as well as the drivers is not only unfair but is also hard to carry out.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[能力提高]
1. 短语翻译
(1)尽管: despite / in spite of / although / though
(2)由于: due to / because of / owing to / on account of
(3)然而: however / yet
(4) 因为 :because / since / as
(5) 此外 : Besides / What’s more / In addition / Furthermore / Moreover
(6) 即使 :even if / even though
(7) 总之 : In general /In short /All in all / To draw a conclusion / On the whole
(8) 但是 :but
(9) 导致 :bring about/give rise to / lead to /result in
(10) 与……无法相比: can’t be compared with
2. 作文填空
We have had a class meeting today on whether we should give money to beggars and we have different opinions.
Some believe that we should give money to those who are in bad need of our help. Among these beggars are the elderly， drop-outs and the disabled, who can hardly make a living 1 ______________________ old age, poverty or physical inability.
due to/because of /owing to
Many more students, 2 _______, think we shouldn’t give them money 3 _____________ most of the beggars are begging in the hope of earning some easy money. 4 ________________
___________________________, to give money would encourage them to be lazy 5 __________ ______ they have the ability to work.
6 ____________________________________, __________we should help the people of the inferior group, 7 ____ we should remain sensible when giving them money.
but
however
because/since/as
Besides/What’s
more/In addition/Furthermore
even if /even
though
In general/In short/All in all/To draw a
conclusion
3. 翻译句子
(8) 尽管自行车有很多明显的优点, 但是它也存在它的问题, 因为在速度和舒适度等方面, 自行车是无法和汽车、火车这样的交通工具相比的。
Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problems because bicycle can’t be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.
(9)很多人存在这样的误解, 认为离开学校就意味着结束了他们的教育。显然, 他们忽视了教育是人生重要部分这一基本事实。
A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that /wrongly believe that they have completed their education when they finish their schooling. Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that a person’s education is a most important aspect of his life.
(10)越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而, 越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了很多严重的问题, 如：犯罪等。
An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will have positive effects on the construction of cities. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought about /given rise to /led to / resulted in many serious problems like crime.
最近一则关于“狼爸”通过严厉的家教, 甚至鞭打子女促使他们考上北大的报道掀起了讨论的热潮。你们学校上周末也因此开展了一场“Is Wolf Dad approach wrong ”的讨论, 你对辩论赛作了一份总结。
20%的学生认为“狼爸”方法正确 80%的学生不赞成这种方法
1. 教会孩子自律
2. 解决中国父母过分溺爱孩子的问题 1. 方法粗暴, 甚至是违法的
2. 使孩子更叛逆
3. 孩子童年快乐更重要
［写作内容］
1. 以上表格的内容；
2. 你的看法。
参考词汇：rebellious adj. 叛逆的
[参考范文]
Last weekend, a debate was held in my school about whether Wolf Dad approach is wrong
and students hold different opinions. 20% of the students think highly of Wolf Dad approach because they firmly believe that it can teach a child self-discipline, which is very important for their growth. What is more, too many Chinese children are ruined with excessive love and care so Wolf Dad approach is a good solution to
this big problem.
However, the majority of the students disapprove of this approach, believing that it is rude and even illegal. In addition, children may become more rebellious and it is more important for them to have a happy childhood. From my perspective, Wolf Dad approach is too extreme and is not suitable for every family.
[精华点评]
在正反论证的议论文中, 在表达观点的时候, 很多考生只是会用they think, agree, disagree等简单低级的词汇。考生要注意语言的丰富性。在而本范文则使用了多个不同的词组：think highly of, firmly believe that, disapprove of和believing that。
另外考生不要把基础写作看成简单的翻译, 如“解决中国父母过分溺爱孩子的问题”倘若简单翻译为solve the problem of Chinese parents’ spoiling their children, 语法上虽然没有错, 但是并不地道,因此可以根据信息点的语意和内在逻辑对句子改造为“孩子受到过分的宠爱, 而‘狼爸’方法可以解决这个问题：Too many Chinese children are ruined with excessive love and care so Wolf Dad approach is a good solution to this big problem.
如今, 选美比赛在青少年中越来越普及, 因此你们班就此开展了一场“Should beauty contests be held among teenagers ”的讨论, 请你根据下面表格内容写一份总结。
一些同学认为 另一部分同学认为
1. 爱美之心是人之常情
2. 提供了展示美和欣赏美的平台
3. 提高青少年审美品味, 如在重要场所应该如何穿衣 1. 着重外貌，麻木追求外表美
2. 商业化，参与比赛浪费时间和金钱
总结：外貌并非成功的关键，应注重内在美……
[参考范文]
Recently our class has had a heated discussion about whether beauty contests should be held among teenagers. Some students hold the opinion that love of beauty is part of human nature, so beauty contests not only provide a stage for people to show off their beauty but also a good chance to appreciate beauty.
Beauty contests, in their opinion, can help improve teenagers’ tastes like helping them choose the right clothes for important occasions. However, other students disagree because they are afraid that most beauty contests focus on contestants’ appearance, which encourages teenagers to run blindly after appearances.
Moreover, many beauty contests
are too commercialized and it is
a waste of time and money to take part. Although our classmates’ opinions vary, we can still safely draw the conclusion that a good
face is not the key to success and we should focus more on inner beauty.
[精华点评]
首先, 本文的语言比较丰富和地道, 如“人之常情”可以翻译为human nature, “提供平台”可以翻译为provide a stage for sb., “提高品位”可以翻译为“improve one’s taste”, 而“麻木追求”可以翻译为“run blindly after”。因此, 考生在平时的学习中应该多点积累丰富的词汇短语。
另外, 本文的句型也比较丰富, 第一句使用了not only...but also...的句型; 第二句把in their opinion 放在句子中间, 使句子显得更灵活; 第三句用了because原因状语从句; 第四句是并列句; 而最后一句则使用了一个Although our classmates’ opinions vary...“让步状语从句+主句”的复合句句型。(共18张PPT)
与[写作内容] 中规定的内容有关的, 能写一点就写一点, 哪怕是不成句子的零星的一个或几个单词, 也一定要写, 千万不留空白！这是基础差的考生必须记住的黄金法则。
因为从近年广东高考英语阅卷情况看, 只要能写出与写作内容相关的一个或几个单词就会给分！若能用正确的简单句表达全部内容的, 可以得该题满分的60%, 即9分, 这已大大超过全省的平均分了啊！
但是若是抄试卷中阅读理解等地方的段落或句子, 或者乱写一些与写作内容无关的话, 写得再多也是零分！
(详见第五章写
作基础的“基本句型特训”)
根据广东高考基础写作的评分标准中“句子结构准确”的要求，我们必须具备有关句子结构的三点基础：
1. 掌握六个基本句型结构
所谓并列复合句就是两个或两个以上的简单句用并列连词组合在一起构成的句子。即：简单句+并列连词(and，but，yet，or，etc.)+简单句。如：
Work hard, or you will fail.努力工作, 否则你就要失败。
I made no answer and she went away.我没有回答,接着她就走了。
She invited me, but I turned her down.她请了我,但我拒绝了她。
2. 掌握并列复合句的结构
主从复合句指的是含有两个或更多的主谓结构的句子, 其中有一个(或更多)主谓结构充当整个句子的某一(些)成分。充当定语的句子(有主谓结构)叫定语从句, 充当状语的句子叫状语从句, 充当主语、宾语、表语或同位语的句子叫名词性从句。主句与从句之间用关联连词(when, before， until，unless，if，although，that, which, who，when，where，etc.)连接起来。大体上
可表述为以下两种结构：
3. 掌握主从复合句的结构
(1) 主句+关联词+从句
He was fond of drawing when he was a child.他还是个孩子时就喜欢画画。
(2) 关联词+从句，主句
When he was a child, he was fond of drawing.他还是个孩子时就喜欢画画。
凡是有两个或多个句子(有主谓关系的称句子), 若之间没有句号或分号, 就必须要有连词, 否则句子结构就不完整。
根据中文提纲、表格或图表等, 以及题头的所有中文说明, 特别是[内容要点], 列出所有信息点, 并根据信息点之间的逻辑关系, 合并或拆分成五组句子。
1. 仔细审题, 明确具体要求
审题一般应包括：(1)文章主题；(2)内容信息；(3)主体时态；(4)主体人称。
2. 列出要点，分成五组句子
根据各句之间的逻辑关系，使用恰当的连接性词语或适当增加词语，将五句话连成一篇通顺自然的短文。
3. 善用语言功底，译好每个句子
将五组句子翻译成英语，并将其整合成五个句子来表达。
4. 根据逻辑关系，连成通顺短文
连句成篇后, 还要通读检查一遍，根据评分标准，应着重检查以下内容：
(1)查内容信息是否完整。
(2)查句子结构是否完整。如英文句子除祈使句外一定要有主语和谓语，还要注意主谓一致；两个句子之间一定要有连接词。
(3)查是否有单词拼写错误、时态错误等。
5. 核查准确无误，认真规范誊写
(4) 看整个语篇是否连贯。
在准确无误后, 用规范的书法认真誊写,做到整洁美观, 给评卷老师留下美好印象。誊写完后再度核查, 以防抄写时出错。
基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力：能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。
本试题要求考生根据所提供的信息, 使用5个句子表达 [写作内容] 所提供的全部内容。命题思想是希望考生在表达这些内容时能够：
基础写作评分说明
正确使用同位语、分词短语等来整合信息。
正确使用复合句，比如：宾语从句、主语从句、状语从句等。例如：It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011.
评分时, 应注意以下几个方面：
1. 按照评分标准，实行分析法评分：按语言、内容和连贯三项标准分别给分；
2. 在语言方面，重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范、考生是否使用了合适的句子结构；
3. 在内容方面，重点评判考生是否表达了所提供的全部信息；如果考生在表达完整的内容时，适当添加一些内容，不扣分；
4. 在连贯方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文。
基础写作评分标准
略，见资料书P125(共26张PPT)
1. be born on/in 出生于
2. be in good health 身体健康
3. meet your ability requirements 符合你的能力要求
4. be skillful at 熟悉……
5. communicate with 与……交流
相关短语
6. have some related knowledge about 关于……有一些相关的知识
7. be informed of 获悉；听说
8. be skilled at 熟练于
9. fill in the form 填表
10. on the website 在网站上
11. upload a photo of life 上传一张生活照
12. website maintenance 网站维护
13. warm-hearted and patient 热心和耐心的
14. in my spare time 在我的空余时间
15. ability of communication 交际能力
16. teamwork spirit 团队精神
1. I’m willing to work for your company. 我愿意为贵公司工作。
2. Would you please tell me whether I can get the job 你可以告诉我我能否得到这个工作吗？
3. The applicants are supposed to have relevant experience. 申请者应该具备相关的工作经验。
相关句式
4. Don’t hesitate any more; it’s now or never. 不要再犹豫了; 机不可失, 时不再来。
5. I am writing to ask about your work.我写信来询问你的工作状况。
6. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.我期待不久收到你的来信。
1. 招聘广告的写作属于应用文, 写作时往往使用被动语态和第三人称使文章显得客观、公平。
2. 考生在写应聘信的时候要注意写作语气, 不能口气狂妄, 但要有自信。
3. 无论招聘广告还是应聘信, 都涉及到对应聘者的要求, 因此考生要多掌握表示技能技巧的短语句子,写作过程中才能显示出语言的多样性, 避免过分单调。
假如你是李华, 你看到了“第26届世界大学生运动会”组委会招聘志愿者的广告,请根据下列内容用英语写一篇自荐信。 内容略
[写作内容]
1. 你的基本情况和条件；
2. 询问的内容。
Dear Sir，
I’m glad to see your advertisement...
Many thanks, and I’m expecting your early reply.
Yours，
Lu Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Sir，
I’m glad to see your advertisement. I’m willing to be a volunteer for the 26th Universiade to be held in Shenzhen. I was born on March 28th, 1993, and I am in good health. I think I can meet your ability requirements because I am skillful at communicating with foreigners in English.
Besides, I can drive and have some related knowledge about sports and computers. Would you please tell me whether there will be any training before the Universiade and how I will be informed of the result
Many thanks, and I am expecting your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(1) 应聘 ___________
(2) 符合应聘的要求
___________________
(3) 关于……的笔试 ___________________
(4) 体检 ___________________
[能力提高]
1. 短语翻译
meet the requirements of application
apply for
a physical examination
a written exam on sth.
(5) 对……感兴趣
______________________
(6) 适合这份工作
______________________
(7) 擅长于做某事
______________________
be good at/be skilled at/be capable of/ have
good performance in
show great interest in/be greatly interested in
be fit for this job/be qualified for this job
(8) 团队精神 ________________
(9) 期待你的答复________________
(10) 截止日期是…… ________________
the deadline is...
teamwork spirit
look forward to your reply
2. 翻译句子 请用适当的高级表达或优美句型等将下列中文句子翻译成英文。
(11)贵公司在6月30日的报纸上登载的招聘记者的广告引起了我极大的兴趣, 我希望能到公司供职。
(11)Your advertisement for a reporter on June 30th newspaper arouses my interest a great deal and I hope to offer my service at you company.
(12)你们在昨天的广州日报上登载的广告非常有吸引力。我认为自己非常适合做这份工作。
(12)Your advertisement in yesterday’s Guangzhou Daily is very attractive and I believe it is fit for me.
(13)我能够在学习、兼职工作和课外活动之间合理安排繁忙的时间。
(13)I can arrange time properly for my study, part-time jobs and extracurricular activities.
(14)在暑假期间, 我曾到一家公司工作，获得了很多有关外贸的第一手资料, 并且, 学会了怎样与不同兴趣和不同背景的人进行沟通。
During my summer job in a company, I gained
a great deal of first-hand knowledge about foreign trade and learned how to communicate with people of different interests and backgrounds. /During my summer, I worked in a company, where I gained a great deal of first-hand knowledge about foreign trade and learned how to communicate with
people of different interests and backgrounds.
(15) 我的英语和法语的流利程度是一流的。
(15) My fluency in English and French is first-rate. / I can speak English and French fluently.
要求 (1) 性格外向, 善于与人沟通，有奉献精神
(2) 较强的英语听说能力和写作能力
(3) 懂得运用微博获得信息
其他 优秀的小记者将在工作结束后获得“优秀小记者”证书
报名方式 (1) 登录www.(网上填写表格, 上传一张生活照）
(2) 截止日期为：6月10日
(3) 6月31日前网上公布结果
假定你是《英文早报》的编辑, 你需要招聘兼职小记者在暑假做暑期工, 请根据下列内容用英语写一则招聘广告。
[写作内容]
[参考范文]
The English Morning Post is looking for part-time young reporters who can work in this summer vacation from July 25th to August 25th. The applicants are supposed to be out-going, good at communicating with others as well as devoted. Besides, not only must the applicants have high speaking, listening and writing ability in English but also be skilled at attaining information through micro-blogging.
The successful applicants who have excellent performance in this job can get a certificate of “Outstanding young reporter”. Anyone who is interested in it can fill the form on the website www. and then upload a photo of life. Don’t hesitate as the deadline for your application is June 10th and the result will be announced on line on June 31st.
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本文的第一个亮点是词汇的丰富, 表示“擅长于……”, 作者使用了不同的词组表达： be good at(第一句), have high ability in, be skilled at(第二句)和have excellent performances in(第三句)。本文的第二个亮点在于句型的多样性。如第二个句型使用了not only...but also的倒装句型, 第三句(The successful applicants that have excellent performances in this job...)和第四句(Anyone who is interested in it...)使用了定语从句, 最后一个句子使用了祈使句。
假定你们学校的学生会招募志愿者为学生会网站做定期维护, 你对此非常有意愿, 打算写一份自我介绍的申请信。请根据以下内容完成这份自我介绍。
基本情况 高一（2）班的学生
自我介绍 (1)有爱心、有耐性
(2)乐意在业余时间为其他同学服务
(3)沟通能力强
(4)有合作精神
(5)有制作网站和维护网站的经验
[写作内容]
1. 表示对志愿者工作的兴趣；
2. 你的基本情况和自我介绍；
3. 表示自己能胜任的信心, 期待答复。
[参考范文]
I am writing to inquire about the opportunity to do the website maintenance for the Students’ Union. I am a student from Class Two, Senior One, who is warm-hearted and patient and willing to serve my fellow students in my spare time.
I believe my strong ability of communication and my teamwork spirit can qualify me for the job. What’s more, I have experience of making and maintaining website. I trust that I am capable of doing the work well and I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
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本文的写作难度不大, 但是考生要注意英语地道的表达。比如说，在表达“使我更胜任这份工作”, 有考生会表达为make me qualified for, 这个表达没有错, 但是就不如qualify sb. for sth.更地道和简练。另外考生可以多使用高中所学的高级词汇, 比如说表达“有能力做某事”, 考生可以考虑用be capable of代替be able to do。(共48张PPT)
相关短语
1. come to realize 开始意识到
2. as important as 和……一样重要
3. push sb. to do 使某人做某事
4. focus more on 更加关注
5. spoken language skills 口语技能/水平
6. communicate with 和……交流
7. therefore 因此
8. more attention should be given to 应该更加关注
9. in summary 总之
10. both necessary and beneficial 既有必要又有利
11. in return 反过来
12. far outweigh... 远远比……重要
13. first of all 首先
14. shopping online 网上购物
15. due to lack of supervision 由于缺乏监督
16. what’s worse 更糟糕的是
17. bank account 银行账户
18. be harmful to 对……有害
19. for instance 例如
20. search for 寻找
21. end up doing 以做……结束
22. become disoriented 变得不知所措
1. Most students agree that it helps them develop the habits of reading aloud. 很多学生认为它有助于培养朗读的习惯。
2. Therefore, more attention should be given to teaching and learning spoken English.因此要更加注意教学英语口语。
相关句式
3. Second, some of the products sold online are probably fake ones due to lack of supervision. 其次, 由于缺乏监督, 有些网上出售的产品很可能是假货。
4. There is no doubt that it is very convenient for us to have online shopping.毫无疑问, 网上购物很方便。
6. Ｍany students rely so much on the Internet that they have lost their ability to create.很多学生过度依赖互联网, 以致于失去了创新能力。
1. 注意审题, 避免缺漏信息点。一般而言, 观点论证的文章通常都是总～分或总～分～总的结构。
2. 考生在论证观点的时候要注意行文严密的逻辑性, 因此考生要注意使用相关的连词、副词或者短语提升文章的层次感。
3. 在语言运用方面, 考生可以掌握一
些常用于议论文写作的短语和句型, 如compared with..., it is clear /obvious that..., From what I have mentioned above we can see that...等。
你校进行题为“是否应该考查英语口语”的
英语辩论赛。以下是正方的主要观点：略
［写作内容］
请你根据以上内容写一篇短文, 代表正方作
最后的总结陈词。
1. 阐述考查英语口语对各方面的积极影响；
2. 呼吁各界重视英语口语教学。
［写作要求］
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容; 首句
已给出,不计入句子总数。
[例题导写]
1. 认真审题。在本作文题的完成中, 不少考生都集中精力对图表内容进行描述, 却忽略了写作内容里的第二个要点：呼吁各界重视英语口语教学。因此, 考生在下笔前,要通读题目, 不能漏掉细节。
2. 分析文体。论证观点无疑属于议论文的范畴, 着重于说理性和逻辑性。考生在写作前要对信息点进行分析，理清信息点之间的关系是递进，转折还是因果关系。本文中, 考查口语对学生、教师和社会三方面都是有利的, 这就是递进关系, 而最后呼吁各界重视英语口语教学则与前面内容构成因果关系, 因此考生可以选用适
当的连词提高文章的逻辑性。
3. 划分信息。本题的信息点较多, 考生在写作前一定要先划分信息点, 否则就会导致写作过程中漏掉信息点或者导致思维混乱。呼吁各界重视口语教学无疑可以作为最后一个信息点, 而对学生、教师、社会有利则要用四个句子概括。因此考生可以考虑2个句子表达口语考试对学生的有利因素, 1个句子表达其对教师的好处,
1个句子表达其对社会的好处。
4. 词汇整理 翻译或完成下列短语。
句1：
(1)养成……的习惯
______________________
(2)提高水平
______________________
improve one’s level
develop /form the habit of...
(3)认识到
______________________________
(4)同等重要
____________________________________
句3：
(5)关注
____________________________________
focus on/focus one’s attention on/
concentrate on
come to realize that/be aware that
be as important as/be of the same importance as
句2：
(6) 提高能力/技能
___________________
(7) 增加趣味性
____________________________________
句5
(8) 重视
____________________________________
attach importance to/pay attention to
develop one’s skill
make...more interesting/add interest to
5. 难句翻译 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。
句1：(1)促使(学生)多阅读, 多对话。
(1)It helps students develop the habits of reading aloud and having conversations in English.
(2)提高(学生)英语水平。
(2)It improves their English level.
合并：
Most students agree that it can improve their English level by helping them develop the habits of reading aloud and having conversations in English. (by... 表示手段)
或Most students agree that it helps them develop the habits of reading aloud and having conversations in English so that
they can improve their English level.
(结果状语从句)或Most students agree that it helps them develop the habits of reading aloud and having conversations in English which in turn improves their English level.(定语从句)
句3：(1)(口语测试使教师)关注口语教学。(1)The speaking test pushes our teachers to focus more on teaching spoken English.
(2)(口语测试使教师)提高自身口语水平。
(2)The speaking test encourages teachers to improve their own spoken language skills.
(3)(口语教学)提高课堂趣味性。
(3)English teaching makes the class more interesting.
合并：
The speaking test pushes our teachers to focus more on teaching spoken English, makes the class more interesting and encourages teachers to improve their own spoken language skills.
4. 连句成文
(1)在某人看来：in one’s opinion /as far as sb. is concerned / from where one stands / from one’s perspective /in one’s viewpoint
(2)同意某个观点: agree with sb. /be for the opinion that/firmly support the view that
(3)首先：above all /first of all/to start with/to begin with/in the first place/in the first instance
(4) 表示“递进”的词汇：What’s more/in addition/besides /moreover /furthermore /additionally/For one thing, for another... (一方面……,另一方面……)
(5)因此: as a result / thus /hence /so / therefore / accordingly / consequently/as consequence
(6)表示“总结”的词汇: on the whole /in conclusion /in a word/to sum up/in brief / in summary /to conclude/to summarize/in short
[参考范文]
Ladies and gentlemen, in summary our team has argued that the testing of spoken English is both necessary and beneficial. Most students agree that it helps them develop the habits of reading aloud and having conversations in English which in return improves their English level.
Students come to realize that oral English is as important as reading and writing.
In addition, the speaking test pushes our teachers to focus more on teaching spoken English, makes the class more interesting and encourages teachers to improve their own spoken language skills.
Nowadays, English is considered to
be a global language so we can use it to communicate with people from other countries more easily. Therefore, we believe that more attention should be given to teaching and learning spoken English and this can be done by testing spoken English.
[能力提高]
1. 短语翻译
(1)众所周知 :
(2)基于；根据 :
(3)以致 :
(4)有助于 :
contribute to
as is known to all
on the basis of
so that
(5) 考虑到这严重的状况:
in view of such serious situation/having considered this serious situation
(6) 以往任何时候 :than ever before
(7) 通过以上讨论 :from what has been discussed above
(8) 得出一个结论 :draw a conclusion
(9) 远比……重要 :far outweigh...
(10) 把……置于一个有利的位置 :put... in a beneficial position
on the basis of, due to, so that, without, As is known to all, Similarly, leads to, Therefore
2. 作文填空
1 ________________, all the achievements of mankind are 2 ______the development of science and technology. Social science and natural science are inseparable from each other, although the former 3 _______the spiritual development of human beings and the latter is concerned with
the understanding of the world and the
making of things.
leads to
As is known to all
due to
Social science will not develop 4 _______ the new discoveries of natural science about the world. 5 _________, natural science will stop to advance without the philosophy provided by social science. This kind of relationship has become even closer in modern society. A great number of new inventions come into existence 6
_____________ the two sciences.
on the basis of
without
Similarly
7 _________, as college students, we need to broaden our knowledge. We ought to learn as much knowledge of the two sciences as possible 8 ______ we may be of great help in the construction of our country.
so that
Therefore
3. 翻译句子
(1)许多家长相信通过额外的教育活动, 他们
的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识, 当他们长大后. 这些对他们就业是大有好处的。
Many parents hold the opinion that through additional educational activities their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job
markets when they grow up.
(2)许多专家指出体育锻炼有助于身体健康。
(2) Many experts point out that physical exercise is of great benefit to a person’s health. /Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes to a person’s physical fitness.
(3)大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力, 而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
(3) The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their inter-personal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets /which may be of great help for them to find a job
in the future.
(4)考虑到这严重的状况, 我们比以往任何
时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。
(4) In view of such a serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycles are more important than any time before. /Having considered
this serious situation, we need such environmentally-friendly vehicles as bicycles more than ever before.
(5) 通过以上讨论, 我们可以得出如下结论：尽管家长想亲自照看孩子的愿望是可以理解的, 但是这样做的缺点远大于优点。
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that, although the parents’ desire to look after children by themselves is understandable, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.
假设你的朋友John写信告诉你他打算开通网银进行网上购物, 但你并不赞成网上购物, 于是给他写了一封信, 陈述了网上购物的弊端。
1. 浪费钱
(1) 购买不需要的物品 (2)商品可能是伪劣产品
2. 不安全
(1)个人资料容易泄密 (2)银行帐号被盗用
[写作内容]
1. 你对网上购物的看法；
2. 你为何持有这种看法；
3. 建议理智的消费。
[参考范文]
You are writing to tell me that you are going to open the online bank service for shopping online but I don’t think it’s a good idea. There is no doubt that it is very convenient for us to have online shopping but the disadvantages of it far outweigh the advantages. First of all, shopping online is a waste of money because buyers tend to be persuaded into buying something they
don’t really need.
Second, some of the products sold online are probably fake ones due to lack of supervision. What’s worse, nowadays there are also many reports related to online shopping that personal information and even bank accounts are stolen. Therefore,
I suggest that you think twice and remain rational when you are shopping online.
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根据写作的内容, 本文的结构应该是总～分～总，第一句总起说明作者的观点，而最后一句使用therefore总结作者的观点。范文开篇通过there is no doubt that的句型，采用了先抑后扬的写作手法, 使观点更客观和鲜明。
考生平时注意积累词汇, 如使用了tend to be persuaded into doing sth.表示消费者容易被误导消费, fake表示“伪劣的”。最后, 建议“理智消费”, 很多考生可以用think twice和remain rational。 在连贯性方面, 本文使用了first of all, second, what’s worse等递进连词使文章的层次分明。
［写作内容］
1. 阐述现代技术对于学生的负面影响；
2. 呼吁学生重视传统的学习手段。
1. 容易使学生分神
例子：开电脑查资料，最后变成看视频
2. 在大量的信息中不知所措
3. 依赖网络
4. 失去创造力和独立思考能力
假设你们班就“现代技术对学生的学习是否有好处”展开了讨论, 你作为反方代表进行发言。
[参考范文]
Marvelous as it looks at first sight,
modern technology does not help students learn information at a greater speed and with higher efficiency in most cases.
First of all, modern technology is harmful to a learning mind because it distracts. For instance, a student is likely to turn on his computer to search for resources, but end
up watching videos. Also, students would
easily become disoriented in the huge
sea of information.
Furthermore, many students rely so much on the Internet that they have lost their ability to create and think independently. From what I have stated above, I can draw a conclusion that modern technology does not help students learn more quickly or better and students should not ignore the traditional means of learning.
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这篇范文语言精炼，言简意赅。很多考生误以为英语写作要长篇大论，但有时却容易使文章显得累赘。范文使用distract表示使学生分心, 使用become disoriented表示使学生(在大量信息中)不知所措，这些用词都是比较地道的，另外在举例说明时，范文用end up doing sth的短语生动地说明了网上信息如何让学生分心。最后，考生不要忘记议论文的逻辑性和连贯性，如本文用了first of all， for instance， but， also， furthermore， from what I have stated above等连词提高文章的连贯性。(共38张PPT)
1. have a discussion讨论
2. pack sth into the suitcase把某物装进箱子
3. search the Internet上网查询
4. see sb off为某人送行
5. a five-day tour为期五天的旅行
6. drop out of school辍学
相关短语
7.live a...life过着……的生活
8.pay the tuition fees支付学费
9.once-in-a-life-time难得的
10.together with sb 同某人一起
11.win the first prize获得一等奖
12. be thought highly of 受到高度赞扬
e to a conclusion that... 得出结论如下
14. take great pains to do sth不遗余力地做某事
15. set a good example for us为我们树
立了一个好榜样
16. be impressed by... 对……印象深刻; 为……所感动
17. devote one’s spare time to helping others 利用业余时间帮助他人
1. Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.我们正在上语文课, 老师突然滑倒了。
2. We were about to set off when it began to rain. 我们正要出发, 这时天下起雨来了。
相关句式
3. I had just lain down when the telephone rang. 我刚刚躺下, 这时电话铃响了。
4. Hardly had he finished his speech when the audience started cheering. 他一演讲完
观众就欢呼起来。(同义句式: no sooner... than... /as soon as...)
5. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.一到达, 我们就开始工作。
6. On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could.一听到铃声, 学生都尽快跑进教室。
7. Shortly after I let him come in, he cried on his desk.我让他进来后不久, 他就伏在桌上哭了起来。
8. After that we had a party. Some of us sang; others danced or told stories in turn. 在那之后, 我们举行了聚会。有的人唱歌, 有的人跳舞或轮流讲故事。
1. 记叙事件的写作一般按照事件发展的顺序来写作。
2. 由于活动往往有很多环节, 考生可以用一些与时间相关的副词如then, later, next, afterwards, soon after that等或一些时间状语从句After...., before...等把要点合理连贯地连接在一起。
3. 若试题要求考生写自己的感受, 考生不能只是用I am very happy等简单句, 而是尽量用复合句来充分表达自己的观点。另外, 记叙文多涉及情感相关的用词, 考生平时可以多积累这样的单词或短语, 如an unforgettable experience, to my joy/delight, be satisfied/ content with等等。
(2008年深圳一模)
假设你参加了你校组织的“关爱生命 携手‘艾滋’儿童”的活动。
[写作内容]
请你写一篇英文日记，叙述活动情况, 内容包括：
时间：2007年12月1日 星期六8：30 启程
集合地点：校门口
车程：一个半小时自行车车程
目 的 地：红十字会医院
活动内容：亲切交谈、牵手跳舞、赠送礼物、拍照留念、共进午餐后返回
感受：……
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。注意: 日记的开头已写好。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。
December 1st 2007SaturdayFine
[例题导写]
认真审题。因为是日记, 所以用第一人称; 叙述已发生的事应该用一般过去时, 感受则用一般过去时或者一般现在时都可以。
信息重组。第一个句子为总起, 描述自己何时何地参加了何种活动。由于是记叙事件, 接下去可以按照时间发展顺序进行信息点的划分。第二句是出发时间, 出发地点和路程。活动的内容比较多, 可以用两句话分别表述。最后一句就是活动的感受。
句1：(1) 组织活动：________________
句2：(2) 志愿者：_________
句3：(3) 红十字会医院： ____________________
词汇整理 翻译或完成下列词汇或短语。
the Red Cross Hospital
organize an activity
volunteer
(4) 同……亲切交谈： _________________
(5) 牵手跳舞： _________________
句4：
(6) 赠送礼物： ___________
(7) 拍照：___________
take photos
have close chats with sb.
dance happily together
present gifts
难句翻译 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一
句。
句2：
(1) 8：30 启程, 在校门口集中, 开始车程。
(1) We volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip.
(2) 花了一个半小时自行车车程。
(2) It took us about one hour and a half.
合并:
We volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half.
[参考范文]
December 1st 2007 Saturday Fine
Today is the World Aids Day, so our school organized an activity called “Take care of our lives, hand in hand with Aids children”. At 8:30 a.m. , we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half.
Soon after we got to the Red Cross Hospital, where most Aids children are staying, we began
to have close chats with them to see how their life is going, and then we danced happily together. Having got to know them so well, we presented our gifts, took lots of photos and ate lunch together before we came back. I feel very great to see the Aids children so happy when they are not ignored and taken good care of.
[能力提高]
1. 作文填空 请考生将括号中的中文翻译成英文完成此篇作文。
I (1) _________________________________ (参加)a fantastic English talent show in People’s Park on Dec. 25， 2009. Middle school students from all over Guangzhou (2)____________________________ (表演了各种各样的节目), like English songs,
English short plays and English stories.
performed all kinds of programs
participated in / took part in / joined in
(3) _______________________________________
_______________________________________ (这场表演的目的在于)encourage students to introduce Guangzhou and the 2010 Asian Games in English and to arouse students’ interest in English as well.
I was very excited because I was the leading actor/actress in an English short play at the show. Though I was(4) ________________(一点点紧张) at the beginning, later on I felt relaxed and the performance was a great success.
a little bit nervous
The purpose / aim of this show is to或This show
aims / is aimed to / is meant to / is intended to
2. 翻译句子 请根据括号中的提示将下列中文句子翻译成英文。
(1) 我觉得, 帮助那些急切渴望我们帮助和关心的小孩, 是我们应有的职责。(feel it+ 名词+ to do, give a hand to sb., be in need of/desire for/be dying for)
(1)I feel it our responsibility to give a hand to those children who are greatly in need of our help and care.
(2) 我觉得这次活动很有意义, 我学会了怎
样与人沟通, 并意识到帮助他人的重要性和
感受到与之带来的乐趣。(meaningful, communicate with...)
(2) I find the activity meaningful, for I
have leant how to communicate with others, realized the importance of helping others
and enjoyed the fun brought by my active participation.
时间 8月12日—8月23日
总体情况 (1)招募了127万来自国内外的志愿者
(2)2500 名志愿者来自深圳各大学
(3)这2500名志愿者为住在运动村的五万多人服务
个人工作 (1)在器械部门工作
(2)把器械搬去运动场地和搬回去
(3)工作时间为早上6：30—11：00
(4)因工作需要, 从6：30自愿工作到17：30
感受 辛苦，但是值得
假设你参加了深圳大运会的志愿者活动, 回来以后感触良多。请你根据以下信息, 写一篇英文日记, 叙述活动情况。
[写作内容]
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。
参考词汇：
深圳大运会 Shenzhen Universiade
运动村 Village 运动场地 court
[参考范文]
August 24th 2011 Wednesday Fine
I found it a great honor to work as a volunteer in the Shenzhen Universiade from August 12th to 23rd. Shenzhen recruited more than 1.27 million people from home and abroad to provide services, including about 2500 volunteers from universities in Shenzhen who were providing services
to the 50, 000 people staying in the Village.
I worked in the equipment department, responsible for moving all the equipment
to the court and then carry it back. I was required to work from 6:30 a.m. to 11:00 a.m., but I volunteered to work all the day from 6:30 in the morning to 19:30 in the evening because of the job requirement. It was very tiring and I felt exhausted but it was worth it, because I was proud to have done what I could for this great event.
这是一篇关于活动感受的日记类写作。在内容方面, 考生在写作中应该注重情感态度的表达, 使日记更具有真实感, 如范文中的第一句“I found it a great honor to work...”和最后 “because I was proud to have done what I could for this great event都表达了作者的情感态度。
[精华点评]
在词汇运用方面, 考生可以有意识地使用高中所学到的一些词汇或短语来代替初中所学的词汇, 如表达“来自世界各地”, 范文使用了from home and abroad而不是all over the world; 表示疲倦, 范文使用了exhausted而不是用tired。
在句型方面, 考生要熟练地运用非谓语动词作伴随状语和定语从句等复合句,使文章的句式更多样化, 如范文的第二句就使用了including作伴随状语, 以及在伴随状语中带有一个who引导的定语从句。
沙展介绍 1. 南沙区政府主办 2. 宏伟、壮观
3. 最大的沙雕高达7米，长达12米
活动经过 1. 早上9点出发，10点到达 2. 欣赏沙雕
3. 中午吃海鲜 4. 下午去湿地公园赏鸟
感受 1. 广州发展快 2. 担忧游客过多会破坏环境
假设你们班同学听说你和家人上周末去了广州南沙参观沙雕后都对此很感兴趣，邀请你在课堂上介绍这次参观活动。请你根据以下内容, 写一篇短文, 向你的同班同学讲述此次旅游经历及感受。
[写作内容]
[写作要求]
1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容；
2. 文章开头已给出, 不计入总句数。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确, 信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。(注：因篇幅限制, 以下写作要求、评分标准、例题导写和能力提高等栏目可能被省略, 但教师课件中仍会保留)
Last weekend, I enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family.
[参考范文]
Last weekend, I enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family. We set out at 9:00 a.m. and arrived at 10 a.m. On arriving, we couldn’t wait to enjoy the exhibition of sand statues there, which was hosted by the local government of Nansha. The statues were very grand and fantastic, with the largest one as high as 7 meters and as long as 12 meters.
Then, we had delicious seafood for
lunch, after which we went to watch birds in the Nansha Wetland Park. It
is an unforgettable trip and we are all happy because Guangzhou has been developing fast, but I am a little worried that too many tourists may destroy the ecological balance of Nansha.
[精华点评]
文章是描述一次旅游活动, 如果考生简单按照表格内容顺序写作, 就显得不自然。因此考生可以根据时间顺序写作来调整表格内容。作文的主线是活动过程, 沙雕展览的介绍可以穿插其中, 最后是作者的感受。
由于写作的内容比较多, 考生在写作过程中要注意过渡和从句的使用。如第二句的On arriving...和第四句的..., after which...这两个句型提高了文章的连贯性。在语言运用方面, 考生可以运用有感彩的词汇和句子, 避免平铺直叙, 如文章中使用了we couldn’t wait to enjoy和it is an unforgettable trip等句子。(共41张PPT)
1. cover topics like... 涵盖的主题有……
2. arouse one’s interest 激发某人的兴趣
3. get involved in 参与，涉及
4. be well-received 广受欢迎
5. make some suggestions 提一些建议
相关短语
6. protect our environment 保护我们的环境
7. the environmental pollution 环境污染
8. be of great benefit to... 对……大有好处
9. get well-prepared (for)(为……)做好充分的准备
10. take responsibility to do sth. 有责任做某事
11. the coming speech contest 即将到来的演讲比赛
12. leave a deep impression on 给……留下深刻的印象
13. take my suggestion into consideration 考虑我的建议
14. have the chance to do sth. 有机会做某事
15. help students improve their English 帮助学生提高英语水平
1. The main reason is that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.其主要原因是父母的压力使他们几乎没有时间参加其他活动。
2. The reason why I’m late is that I missed the bus. 我迟到的原因是没赶上公共汽车。
相关句式
3. I like it very much mainly for two reasons.我喜欢它, 主要有两个原因。
4. In my opinion, there are three reasons for this.在我看来, 有三个原因。
5. My views are based on the following reasons. 我的观点是基于以下理由。
6. The reasons for this are as follows.其理由如下。
7. So I suggest that you take your friends? advice.因此, 我建议你接受你朋友的建议。
8. Here I have some suggestions.这里我有几条建议。
8. It would be better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.如果你能分担更多的家务, 如扫地、洗衣、做饭, 那就更好了。
1. 在建议倡议的写作中, 应开门见山指出写作目的, 陈述建议或倡议的内容。如：I am writing to give suggestions about... (建议信)或In order to..., I am going to make the following suggestions (倡议书)。
2. 建议倡议类型的作文都有相关的一些固定句型, 考生需要熟练掌握使用这些句型和相关的语法。比如, 在句中使用到advise, suggest或advice, suggestion等表示建议的词时, 要考虑到虚拟语气的使用。
广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观
众的英语节目, 新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。现在, John就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。
[写作内容]
假如你是学生李华, 建议开办“广州全接触” (All-round Guangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给John写信：
节目内容 介绍广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人
播放时间 每周六、日, 方便学生周末观看
其他设想 邀请中学生参加节目, 提高学生的收看兴趣
开办理由 1. 中学生可以更多地了解广州文化, 以便向外国游客介绍广州
2. 有助于提高中学生的英语水平
预期效果 将会受到中学生的欢迎
Dear John，
I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program — “All-round Guangzhou”.
...
I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
[例题导写]
确定文体。建议信属于应用文信件类的范畴, 写作的时候一般使用将来时或者一般现在时。建议信在于给对方合理并且能够接受的建议, 考生应该注意使用一些委婉的语气。
信息重组。我们可以把题中信息整合成以下5个汉语句子：
1. 节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人。
2. 建议每周六、日举办，方便学生周末观看。
3. 建议邀请中学生参加节目, 激发学生的收看兴趣。
4. 这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化, 还有助于提高中学生的英语水平, 这样他们就能向外国游客介绍广州。
5. 我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎。
词语翻译 翻译或完成下列词或短语。
句1：
(1)包括……(节目) _____________
(2)历史，教育，景点 ，饮食，名人
____________________________________________________________
History, education, scenic spots / tourist attractions, food, famous people / celebrities
cover / include
句3：
(3) 激发某人的兴趣
____________________________________
句4：
(4)提高英语水平______________________
句5：
(5)受到欢迎
______________________________________
______________________________________
be popular among/with sb. / be well-received
by/be welcomed by
spark / stimulate / arouse one’s interest
improve one’s English
难句翻译 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。
句2：(1) (这个节目将于)每周六、日(播放)。
(1) It would be better to broadcast it on weekends. / I suggest that the program be broadcast on weekends. / It is a good idea to broadcast it on weekends.
(2)方便学生周末观看。
(2)We students can have the chance to watch it. /It will be convenient for us students to watch it.
合并：It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.(因果关系, 可以使用so... that...句型)
句3：(3) (你也可以)邀请中学生参加节目。
(3)You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in / take part in the program.
(4) (这个节目可以)提高学生的收看兴趣。
(4) It will surely arouse /spark /stimulate other students’ interest in it.
合并：
You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in / take part in the program, which will surely arouse / spark / stimulate other students’ interest in it.(补充说明关系, 可以使用which非限制性定语从句)
句4：(5)(这个节目帮助)中学生可以更多地了解广州文化。
(5) This program can get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou.
(6) (中学生可以)向外国游客介绍广州。
(6) The students can introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.
(7) (这个节目)有助于提高中学生的英语水平。
(7) This program helps students improve their English.
合并：
Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.(第5个句子和第7个句子是并列关系, 因此我们可以用not only...but also...这组连词把它们连接起来, 并且注意统一主语,第6句是作者提出建议的原因, 可以用so as to 引导出目的状语。)
[参考范文]
Dear John，
I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program — “All-round Guangzhou”. This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Guangzhou. It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.
Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse other students’ interest in it. Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors. I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.
Sincerely yours, Li Hua
连句成篇。考生把句子合并成篇章的时候, 需要注意建议信常用的一些句型结构。如在建议信开头表示来信的目的, 如：You have asked me for my advice on...and I will try to make suggestions./ Thanks for trusting me. /Regarding..., I’d like to make some suggestions等句型。在表示建议的时候, 考生可以使用I feel that it would be beneficial if.../ I would like to suggest that...等句型。另外, 考生若是使用虚拟语气的句子If I were you, I would..., 也会让文章增色不少。
[能力提高]
To Whom It May Concern
As 1 __ student of this university, I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation 2 ___ your kind assistance as always. Meanwhile, I feel that 3 __would be 4 _________(benefit) to express my views 5 ____________(concern) the quality of the library service.
concerning
a
for
it
beneficial
In the first place, I find that most keyboards of the library computers are in poor operation, 6 _____ brings much inconvenience to the users. I would also recommend the library 7 _________ (improve) the efficiency of buying new books and academic journals. Last 8 ____not least, the study rooms need to be furnished 9 ____a better lighting system.
I hope that you take my suggestions into serious 10 ____________(consider).
Yours sincerely,
John
which
to improve
but
with
consideration
假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。
赛前准备 做好充分准备：如平时可对着镜子练习
用语简练, 使评委印象深刻
比赛时
保持微笑
忘词时不紧张，继续演讲
[写作内容]
1. 说明回信的意图；
2. 向小明提出建议；
3. 预祝小明比赛成功。
Dear Xiaoming，
...
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Xiaoming,
You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror.
Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, don’t be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech!
Yours，
Li Hua
[精华点评]
建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯, 使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使用祈使句或者You should的句型表示建议, 这样比较生硬，因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富, 如范文中使用了you should..., you had better..., remember to do等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候, 可以用简明扼要的句型, 如wish you good luck / wish you success / may you succeed, 使文章长短句结合得当。
由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存, 为鼓励大家节能环保,你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动, 假设你是高三6班的一名学生, 将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议,以下是倡议的内容：
1. 尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式;
2. 少喝一次瓶装水；
3. 尽量不用一次性制品, 如一次性木筷子和塑
料袋；
4. 每周至少手洗衣服一次；
5. 每周少开手机、电视一天。
[写作内容]
1. 活动背景; 2. 倡议目的; 3. 倡议内容。
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three.
...
I believe everyone, as a member of this global village, should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign!
[参考范文]
I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three.
We human beings are seriously threatened by
the environmental pollution, such as waste gases, dirty water and white pollution. In order to encourage all of us to save energy and protect our environment, I am going to make the following suggestions. It is suggested that we should walk or take bikes if we go out. To avoid white pollution， we can reduce the use of bottled water and unrecyclable items such as disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.
What’s more, if we can wash clothes by ourselves at least once a week as well as
turn off our TVs and mobile phones for one day every week, it will be of great benefit to saving energy. I believe everyone, as a member of this global village, should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign!
Li Hua
[精华点评]
本文的难度在于如何合并信息点, 考生需要用三个句子覆盖五个倡议。这时通过分析, 可以发现, 绿色出行是减少废气排放; 减少使用瓶装水和一次性物品是为了减少白色污染; 手洗衣服和减少使用手机、电视机是节能, 因此考生可以把信息点按照这个逻辑分成三句, 并且做出适当的补充,如to avoid white pollution..., ...it will be of great benefit to saving energy等。
考生可以使用不同的词组表达同一个概念,使文章语言更丰富, 如表示建议, 考生既可以说make a suggestion..., 也可以用it is suggested that...; 又如“一次性(物品)”的表达, 既可以使用unrecyclable也可以用disposable表达。总之一篇好的作文, 是非常有必要在词、短语、习惯表达、过渡词和句型等方面下功夫的。(共34张PPT)
1. as for how to至于怎样
2. update the website更新网站
3. 50% of the girls 50%的女生
4. next in line接下来; 位居第二
5. compared with同……比起来
相关短语
6. communicate with与……交流
7. account for/take up占(多少比例)
8. be in favor of... 支持/赞成……
9. as far as sb. is concerned就某人看来
10. have a lot in common有很多共同点
11. get along well with... 与……相处融洽
12. arouse their interest激发了他们的兴趣
13. have a better understanding of更好地了解
14. put... in the second place把……放在第二位
15. rank the first place / rank first / be in the first place排在第一位
相关句式
1. Last week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”.上周我们就“谁是你的偶像”在2, 600人中进行了调查。
2. Recently our League Committee has carried out a survey, whose results are as follows.最近我们团委进行了一次调查, 其结果如下。
3. According to the survey, about half of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble. 根据调查结果, 大约一半的学生有困难的时候会去找他们的同学或朋友。
4. Different persons may have different choices on how to spend pocket money.关于怎样用零花钱, 不同的人有不同的选择。
5. A recent survey suggests that students are different from each other in learning styles.最近的一项调查显示, 学生在学习方式上是各有差异的。
6. As is shown in the survey, drunk driving may result in serious accidents. 正如调查所显示的那样, 酒后驾驶会导致严重事故。
1. 注意审题, 转换图表。撰写调查报告时, 通常需要结合图表, 观察、对比调查数据, 并把调查结果和数据转换为文字表达, 并按写作内容给出的要点按顺序进行写作 。
2. 确定时态, 规范全文。引出报告结果或数据时，发表议论和个人观点, 通常用一般现在时。若出现具体的时间状语, 如last year， next year, recently等时, 应根据具体使用适当的时态。
3. 变换表达, 丰富语汇。调查报告中多出现相同内容的描述或分析, 为避免重复, 建议使用不同语言和句式表达同类信息。
(2007年广东)
上周, 我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题, 在2600名考生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据：
偶像(idol) 女生 男生
伟人 18% 18%
父母 25% 11%
影视明星 50% 14%
体育明星 6% 48%
没有偶像 1% 9%
[写作内容]
根据以上数据, 写一篇短文, 包括以下内容：
1. 调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；
2. 男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；
3. “父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异；
4. 男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；
5. 你的偶像及理由。
[例题导写]
1. 认真审题, 理清要点。第一点写作内容“调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象”是在表格以外的写作引入说明部分找到具体信息, 第二至四写作点中, 要求找出男女生数据的“差异”，写作时要一语中的, 第五点写作内容则让考生自由表达观点。
2. 第五点写作内容, 给予考生很大的发挥空
间,也是体现考生写作水平的很好机会。考生尽量避免使用“I like Jay Chow because he is handsome.”等语言简单、观点肤浅的句子，而应该运用高级语句, 争取高分, 如：My idol is Langlang because he is a person with strong determination. 或The person I admire most is Gou Jian because he is able to realize his dream with his courage and strong will.
3. 扫清难点, 译句成文。翻译以下重要短语句式, 为写作作准备。
(1) 开展了一项关于……的调查
______________________________________
_________________
(2) 调查结果表明……
____________________________
make /do / conduct/carry out a survey about / on sth.; survey sb. about sth.
The survey /result shows that ...
(3) 把……看作偶像
______________________________________
_________
(4) 50%的女生
_____________________________
(5) ……与……是一样的________________
consider / choose / figure sb. as idols; think of
sb. as idols
be the same as
50% of the girls, half of the girls
(6) 某人或某物排在第一位
_____________________________________
_____________
(7) 某人把……放在第二位
________________________
(8) 据某人看来
_____________________________________
sb. / sth. rank the first place, sb. / sth. is in
the first place
as far as sb. be concerned, in one’s opinion
sb. put...in the second place
(9) 某人持……的观点
__________________________________
___________
(10) 表示对比、比较
_______________________________
however, on the contrary, but，while
sb. hold the opinion that，sb. be of the
opinion that
[参考范文]
Last week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “who is your idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols, while 48% of the boys figure sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.
［能力提高］
一、填空 请用所给动词的适当形式填空。
1. Recently, I ① _____________ (survey) my classmates about their views on the new English textbook. According to the survey, 80% of the students are quite satisfied with it, while 15% ② ______ (dislike) it and 5% ③ ____ (have) no opinion. Students who ④ ____(like) it say the pictures with the texts are very attractive, which greatly arouse their interest in learning.
have surveyed
dislike
have
like
Moreover, the book is very interesting, ⑤ ________(cover) many hot topics and ⑥ __________(provide) lots of cultural knowledge of the world. However, students who dislike it ⑦ ________(complain) there ⑧ _____(be) too many new words and difficult sentences, ⑨ ______(make) the texts difficult to understand. In conclusion, the new English textbook ⑩ _________ (help) most students improve their English enormously already.
has helped
covering
providing
complain
are
making
2. The result ① ______ (show) that 75% of the students ② _____(be) in favor of surfing the Internet for information last year. And the data also ③ _______(suggest) that the number ④ ____________(continue) to rise next year.
shows
were
suggest
will continue
二、勘误 请用横线划出下列句子中的错误, 并将其改正过来。(错误可能不止一处)
1. There are 50% of the girls think of film and TV stars as idols, however, 48% of the boys choose sports stars.
1. 改法一：There are 50% of the girls think (改为thinking 或who think) of film and TV stars as idols， however，(改为but，或把however前的逗号改为句号，然后另起一句，使用However)48% of the boys choose sports stars.
改法二：There are (删除There are)50% of the girls
think of film and TV stars as idols, ...
2. Last week, we did a survey on idols among 2,600 students and find that the choices from boys and girls are different.
2. Last week, we did a survey on idols among 2,600 students and find (改为found) that the choices from boys and girls are (改为were) different. [注释]该处动词时态与last week, did等相呼应。
上月，我们公司以35岁以下的人群作为调查对象, 选取了1000人进行了关于“网上购物”的一项调查, 调查情况如下：
你是否愿意在网上购物？
结果 64%愿意 36%不愿意
原
因 1.方便, 在家可买到所需物品
2.网上商品比较便宜, 而且可选择的品牌多 1.害怕买到赝品
2.担心被骗钱
结论 只要防范网上购物的弊端, 将有越来越多的人选择
网上购物。
[写作内容]
根据以上数据，写一篇调查报告, 内容包括：
1. 调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象;
2. 愿意网上购物的人占调查人数的百分比；
3.人们愿意在网上购物的主要原因；
4. 人们不愿意在网上购物的主要原因；
5. 本次调查的结论。
[参考范文]
Last month, our company carried out a survey about shopping on line among 1000 interviewees younger than 35 years old. 64% of those interviewed are willing to shop on line, mainly because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although they are staying at home.
Besides, they believe that goods on line are cheaper, with a variety of brands to choose from. The rest of the interviewees don’t want to shop on line, claiming that goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out of money. In conclusion, only by guarding against the disadvantages of on-line shopping will more and more people choose the shop on line.
[精华点评]
考生写作时必须排除不必要信息的干扰, 因写作内容中并没有要求写“不愿意网上购物的人所占百分比为32%”这一信息点, 所以不必把表格内容全部翻译。此外, 写作时尽量使用与写作内容相对应的英语翻译, 使文章表达更切题。
例如, 写作内容中出现“主要原因”和“结论”这些重要的写作线索, 考生应该尽量使用与之相应的语句进行翻译, 如“...for the main reason that...; ...mainly because; In conclusion; Finally, we arrive at the conclusion that...”, 使阅卷老师对写作信息一目了然，以获取高分。
上月, 为了给顾客提供更好的服务, Sun-flower餐厅作了一次调查, 以下是调查问卷以及调查结果：略
[写作内容]
根据以上数据, 写一篇短文, 内容包括：
1. 顾客最满意餐厅的两个方面；
2. 顾客最希望通过什么途径了解到餐厅最新信息；
3. 愿意再次到餐厅就餐的顾客所占调查人数的比例；
4. 顾客对餐厅提出的主要建议。
[参考范文]
In order to serve the customers better, Sun-flower Restaurant carried out a survey last month. It can be learnt from the data that 85% of the customers are satisfied with the service and 72% of them are satisfied with the food ordered. 71% of the customers are willing to learn about the latest information of the restaurant through Internet and 81% of them show that they are glad to have meals in the restaurant again.
As is recommended, the restaurant should give away some coupons regularly. In order to provide convenience for the consumers, the restaurant should frequently update the website. It is also suggested that those who dine in the restaurant on their birthday should be presented with a birthday cake for free.
[精华点评]
审题并认真阅读调查问卷及其数据是关键。考生必须按照写作内容的提示, 在调查结果中查找相应数据, 排除不必要信息的干扰。写作内容第一点要求考生找出“顾客最满意餐厅的两个方面”, 根据调查结果百分比, 得知顾客最满意“食物味道”和“服务态度”。另外, 调查问卷的开头已经给出, 考生可通过句型“It can be learnt from the data that...”衔接写作内容, 若擅自更改题目提供的开头,或在data后加逗号或句号, 都违反了写作要求,而且会使语言表达不得体。(共37张PPT)
相关短语
1. originate as... 以……出现/起源
2. a means of survival 一种生存手段
3. develop into 发展成为
4. be allowed to 被允许
5. grow steadily 稳定增长
6. twice in history 历史上两次
7. participate in 参加；参与
8. is considered to be(as)被认为是
9. what is more 此外
10. offer sb. help 给某人提供帮助
11. be similar to 与……相似
12. choose two subjects out of... 从……中选
择两个科目
13. earn its status as a sport 作为一项运动
取得它的地位
14. related reading materials 相关的阅读材料
15. broaden one’s horizons 开阔视野
16. provide sb. with a platform 给某人提供
一个平台
相关句式
1. Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.射击, 原先是一种生存手段, 只是到了十九世纪晚期才发展成一种运动项目。
2. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting only in 1968.到了1968年才允许女子参加奥运射击项目。
3. The iPhone 4, a touch-screen smart phone, is the fifth generation of the iPhone.苹果4, 即触屏智能手机, 是苹果的第五代产品。
4. What is most amazing is that you can order it to do things like sending messages with your voice.最令人称奇的是, 你可以利用声音命令它发出信息。
5. Students are encouraged to do a lot of related reading, which provides us with a platform for development.鼓励学生阅读相关的读物, 提供他们一个发展的平台。
6. Every student can choose two subjects out of 20 according to their own interests.
根据自己的兴趣, 每个学生可以从20名课程中选两门。
1. 项目描写一般是对某个事物、某项活动、某种风俗习惯等的描写, 考生平时应多阅读英语报刊杂志, 了解最新的技术发展, 掌握一些相关的地道英语, 如“畅销书”可以翻译为best sellers，“卖断货”可以翻译为 “sell out of stock”。
2. 考生在项目描写的作文中需要特别注意词性, 比如说“这个产品是高质量的”, 考生容易错翻译为 “This product is high quality”, 这就是考生直接按照字面翻译, 没有注意到quality是个名词而不是形容词, 所以考生应该翻译为 “This product is of high quality”。
你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者, 负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。
[写作内容]
请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：
背景：射击最初只是生存工具, 19世纪末
才发展成为一项体育运动
1896：第一次成为奥运项目
1904：中断
1928：中断
1932：重回奥运会
1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛
现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射
击项目, 现今有17项
[例题导写]
1. 首先, 认真审题, 归纳信息。对于事物的描写和说明, 考生可以根据事物的性质、特点划分信息。本题目里对奥运射击的项目的陈述, 是按照时间顺序排列, 因此在信息点的划分这步相对容易。射击的背景和现状分别是第一句和第五句, 射击的发展中1896-1932年的变化可以用两句话表述, 1968年妇女第一次获得参加奥运会的权利可以放在第四句描述。
2. 接着, 词汇整理,草拟提纲。项目描写的文章考生要注意使用正确、地道的语言把句子组织在一起。
词汇整理 翻译或完成下列单词或短语。
句1：
(1) 射击 ________
(2) 生存工具 _____________________
(3)直到……才…… __________
means of survival/means of making a living
shooting
not...until...
句2～句3：
(4) (运动)项目 ____________
(5) 中断 ______________________
(6) 重回奥运会 ________________________
The sport returned to the
Olympics / The Olympics were restarted.
sports event
be suspended/be paused
句4：
(7)允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛
______________________________________
______________________________________
______________________________________
_________
句5
(8)稳步发展 ______________
allow/permit women to take part in/join in/compete in / participate in the Olympics或women are admitted as competitors in the Olympics
develop steadily
3. 难句翻译 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。
句1：(1)射击最初只是生存工具。
(1)Shooting originated as a means of survival.
(2)19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。
(2)Shooting developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.
合并：Version 1: Shooting was originated as a means of survival and developed into a sport in the late 19th century.(并列句) / Shooting, (which was)originated as a means of survival, didn’t develop into a sport only until the late 19th century. /It was not until the late 19th century that shooting, (which was originated as a means of survival), developed into a sport.(定语从句, not...until的句型)
句2～句3：
(1) 1896：第一次成为奥运项目
(1) Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896.
(2) 1904：中断; (3)1928：中断
(2-3) Shooting was suspended in 1904 and 1928.
(4) 1932：重回奥运会
(4) It returned to the Games in 1932.
合并：Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896, but it was suspended in 1904 and 1928. It didn’t return to the Games until 1932. /Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Then, it was suspended in 1904 and 1928 but finally returned to the Games in 1932.
[参考范文]
Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
4. 连句成文。考生在写作过程中不要被中文提示限制了思路。如第一个信息点的“生存工具”, 考生容易翻译为 “the tool of survival”, 但在这里用tool是不贴切的, 射击不是实物, 应该是指“生存的方式”, 所以考生应该用 “the means of survival/the means of making a living”更贴切。又如最后的一个信息点“稳步发展, 1896奥运会只有三项射击项目, 现今有17项。”看上去似乎有三个分句, 但其实通过逻辑分析，这个句子用一个简单句就可以表示出来(“奥运会从只用三项射击项目稳步发展到现今的17项”), 也就是学生只需要使用 develop steadily from...to...这个词组就可以把这个句子表述清楚了。
［能力提高］
1. 短语翻译
(1)我很荣幸…… __________________
(2)有超过十年的历史 __________________
(3)高的品质 ______________
of high quality
I am honored to do
has a history of over 10 years
(4) 不但……而且…… _________________
(5) 国内外 _________________
(6) 良好的售后服务_________________
(7) 团圆、运气、财富的象征 _________________
a symbol of reunion, luck and fortune
Not only...but also
at home and abroad
good after-sale service
(8) 表达祝福 __________________
(9) 家庭聚会 __________________
(10) 完善的功能 __________________
complete functions
express best wishes
have a family reunion
2. 作文填空
(1)
I am honored to introduce one kind of laptop — Venus laptop produced by our company which(1) _____________________ ______________________ (有生产手提电脑十年以上的历史). Our product, Venus laptop, with a charming appearance, is
(2) _____________ (高的品质)and has(3) _________________ (完善的功能).
complete functions
laptops for over 10 years
has a history of producing
of high quality
Not only is it easy to operate and carry but also the price of the product is reasonable. What’s more, it was once awarded the first prize in a provincial laptop appraisal. It sells well at home and abroad and has a good(4) ______ _______ (售后服务).
service
after-sale
(2)
The Mid-autumn Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year.(5) _______(不仅仅)is it popular in China ____it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries.
but
Not only
People believe that the moon is(6) _________ _________________________ (团圆、运气、财富的象征), and it is a custom to(7)______ ___________(表达祝福)to the beloved ones at this particular time. On that day people usually go back home to(8) ______________ ________(家庭聚会), enjoying a large meal with their family. They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.
of reunion, luck and fortune
a symbol
best wishes
express
have a family
reunion
假设你想说服你爸爸给你购买最新的一款手机—iphone 4, 请你根据以下写作内容给他描述iphone 4的情况。
［写作内容］
介绍 1. 触摸屏, 第五代iphone
2. 独创的, 被认为世界上最好的智能机
外型 与iphone 3相似, 黑白两种颜色
功能 1. 电池功能强大, 支持200小时待机时间(standly time), 8小时3G通话时间
2. 照相系统提高 3. 用声音指示手机发短信等
4. 它能理解你说的话, 给你帮助
[参考范文]
The iPhone 4, a touch-screen smart phone, which is the fifth generation of the iPhone, is considered ground-breaking and the best smart phone in the ing in two colors, black and white, it retains(保留)almost all of the same design features as its predecessor (前身), the iPhone 3.
However, with more powerful battery, it has 200 hours standby time and 8 hours talk time on 3G. What is more, the camera inside it is greatly developed. What is most amazing is that not only can you order it to do things like sending messages with your voice but also it can understand what you say and offer you help.
[精华点评]
这是对一个新的电子产品的描述, 考生可以使用生动的语言描述, 避免文章枯燥无味。如表示“突破性的”, 考生可以使用形容词ground-breaking, 或者名词breakthrough; 表示外形与iphone 3相似的时候, 很多考生可以考虑到be similar to iphone 3 in appearance, 但范文中使用了retain almost all of the same design features as这个短语，使文章的语言更加高级和生动。
最后两句是表现iphone 4改善了的和新的功能, 因此范文中补充了两个细节with more powerful battery(第四句)和What is most amazing is that...(第五句), 使整个描述更有吸引力。
最近, 你的英国笔友Jack的学校开展了选修课, 他来信询问你校选修课的开展情况。请你根据以下提示, 写一封回信介绍你校选修课情况。包括以下内容要点：
开展时间 每周三下午4：00-5：00，一个学期
科目 1. 20门课程可供选择，包括中国文学简介， 电影鉴赏，书法等课程
2. 每学生可以报两门
作业 没有作业，鼓励学生大量阅读相关书籍
考试 论文方式
体会 有趣，开拓眼界，有意义
参考词汇：选修课 elective course书法 calligraphy
[参考范文]
Dear Bob，
I am pleased to introduce to you the elective courses of our school. The elective courses are held from 4:00 to 5:00 in the afternoon every Wednesday, lasting a term. Every student can choose two subjects out of 20 according to their own interests, such as the Brief Introduction of Chinese Literature, the Appreciation of Movies, and Calligraphy.
There is no homework for the elective courses,
but students are encouraged to do a lot of related reading, which provides us with a platform for our development. No exams will be taken and instead students are required to write an essay.
I like our selective courses because they are not only interesting and meaningful but also help to broaden my horizons.
Yours，
Li Hua
[精华点评]
这篇文章的写作内容是以表格形式呈现, 表格的内容都是片段而不是完整的句子, 因此往往省略主语, 考生在写作时候要注意避免句子不完整。因此, 考生可以考虑使用被动语态, 如范文中使用了“The elective courses are held...”, “students are encouraged to do...”, “No exams will be taken...students are required to...”等。(共39张PPT)
相关短语
1. sign up 报名
2. save our energy 节约能源
3. increase our knowledge about 增加对……的了解
4. improve our spoken English 提高我们的口语
5. will be held 将被举行
6. participate in the contest 参加比赛
7. are supposed to 应该; 理应
8. you are warmly welcome to 热烈欢迎你……
9. thanks for your participation 谢谢你的参与
10. organize an English-speaking contest 组织一次英语演讲比赛
11. promote the campus culture 弘扬校园文化
12. hold an English writing activity called... 举行叫作……的英语写作活动
13. aim to 目的是；旨在
14. arouse our interest 激发兴趣
15. develop our ability in 培养……的能力
16. are encouraged to 被鼓励做……
17. enter for 报名参加
18. know more details 了解更多细节
19. don’t miss the deadline 别错过截止日期
20. witness the development of 见证……的发展
相关句式
1. It’s a pity that you have to go back soon, so a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club at 6: 00 pm this Saturday evening. 你很快就要回去, 所以我们将于本周六晚上六点在阳光俱乐部302房举行欢送会。
2. I’m writing to (do sth)我写信的目的是……
3. If you are interested in..., please take part in ... contest ... 如果你对……感兴趣, 请参加……比赛
4. In the morning you can first visit... After that, you can go to...In the afternoon, I suggest you visit... where not only you can enjoy...but also you can... 上午, 你可以先参观……然后, 你可以去……下午, 我建议你参观……在那里你不但可以欣赏……而且你还可以……
5. Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11：00.我们的户外活动将持续3个小时, 大约11点返回。
6. If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5: 00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements. 如果你有兴趣, 请在下周四下午五点前到办公室报名, 以便我们作必要的安排。
7. All are welcome.欢迎大家参加。
1. 活动安排的写作一般使用将来时, 文章结构以总分为主, 第一句往往要清楚说明活动举办的意义和内容。
2. 活动安排的写作基本都涉及到地点和时间的安排, 考生应该注意表达时间和地点的介词使用。
3. 活动安排的应用文多属于通知类, 其给出的中文提示往往隐藏主语, 考生可以考虑使用祈使句或者被动语态。
(2009年深圳二模)
为迎接6月5日“世界环境日”，学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知, 欢迎大家积极参与。
[写作内容]
目的 增长环保知识；提高英语口语
内容 “保护环境，节约能源”
地点 教学楼五楼演讲大厅
报名时间 5月25日前
报名方式 studentcenter@163?com
比赛时间 6月5日星期五下午4：00-5：30
评奖 一等奖3名，二等奖6名，三等奖12名
[例题导写]
认真审题。活动安排属于应用文范畴, 写作的时候一般使用将来时或者祈使句。这一类应用文最重要的是把活动的目的、时间、地点、报名方式等信息清楚地传达给大家, 并且最后呼吁大家参加活动。
信息重组。第一个句子表述活动的背景、目的和内容。第二句是交待清楚活动举办的时间和地点。第三句是出发时间,出发地点和路程。第四句是报名的方式和报名的截止日期。最后一句则是号召大家参加活动。
1.学生会将要举办一次演讲比赛,主题为“保护环境,节约能源”,目的是增长环保知识和提高英语口语。
2. 演讲比赛将在6月5日星期五下午4: 00-5：30, 教学楼五楼演讲大厅举办。
3. 参赛者需要在5月25日前在studentcenter@ 上报名。
4. 比赛将评选出一等奖3名, 二等奖6名, 三等奖12名。
5. 希望大家积极参与比赛。
翻译句子。将分好的五组信息翻译成英语, 并各自用一句话来表达。
词语翻译 翻译或完成下例短语。
句1：
(1)增长环保知识：
______________________________________
_______________
gain / enrich / increase our knowledge about
the environment
(2)保护环境： __________________
(3)节约能源： __________________
(4)表示目的的短语： ___________________
_______________________________
protect our environment
save energy
the purpose of... / with the aim of...
in order to... /with
句2：
(5)在6月5日星期五下午4: 00-5: 30：_____ 4: 00 p.m. ___5: 30 p.m., ___ Friday June 5th
(6) 教学楼：_________________
on
from
teaching/classroom building
to
(7) 在五楼：____ the 5th floor
(8) 演讲大厅：___________
句3：
(9) 参加比赛的人：_________________
_____________________
on
the lecture hall
those who want to
participate in the contest
(10) 在5月25日前：_____ May 25th
(11) 在studentcenter@上：__ studentcenter@
(12) 报名：__________________
sign up for / enter for
before
at
句4：
(13) 三个一等奖： ___________________
句5：
(14) 欢迎参加：______________________
__________________________________
three first prizes
You are welcome to be there.
/Welcome to join us. / Welcome to attend.
难句翻译 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。
句1：(1) 为了增长我们的环保知识, 提高英语口语, 学生会将要举办一个演讲比赛；
(1)The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English.
(2) 演讲的主题是“保护环境, 节约能源”。
(2)The theme of the contest is: “Protect
our environment and save our energy”.
合并：
The Students’ Union is going to
organize an English-speaking contest, the theme of which / whose theme is: “Protect our environment and save
our energy” to increase our knowledge
about the environment and improve
our spoken English. (定语从句)
句4：
(1)大赛将评出多个奖项。
(1) Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest.
(2) 将会有3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
(2) There are three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones.
合并：Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest, including three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones.(介词)
Notice
World Environment Day is approaching, so the Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, the theme of which / whose theme is: “Protect our environment and save our energy ” to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English. The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m. to
5:30 p.m., on Friday June 5th.
Those who want to participate in the contest are supposed to sign up at studentcenter@ before May 25th. Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest, including three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones. Dear fellow schoolmates, you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation.
The students’ Union
[能力提高]
1. 为了提高我们的环保意识, 我们将会邀请中山大学的李教授给我们开展一个关于环境问题的讲座, 他将会给我们讲述近年来广州的环境污染问题。
In order to arouse our awareness of environmental protection /With the purpose of arousing our awareness of environmental protection, we will invite Dr. Li from Sun Yat-sen University to give
us a wonderful lecture about the environment problem and /where he will also tell us about
the pollution of environment in recent years
in Guangzhou.
2. 我们很荣幸请来了何教授在本周五下午4: 00-5: 00给我们讲述关于中西方文化差异的讲座, 讲座将会在学校体育馆开展。
2. We have the great honor to have invited Professor He to give us a wonderful lecture about the differences between eastern and western cultures this Friday afternoon, which will be held in the school stadium between 4:00 p.m. and 5:00 p.m.
3. 请大家做好笔记, 这次讲座将会帮助我们为下周的演讲比赛做好充分的准备。
Everyone should make full notes, because this lecture can help us make good preparations for the coming speech competition next week. / Everyone should make full notes in this lecture, which can fully prepare us for the coming speech competition next week. / Everyone should make full notes in this lecture so that he can be fully prepared for the coming speech competition next week.
4. 所有的学生将要在本周六早上8：30在学校门口集合。
4. All the students should gather at the gate of our school at 8:30 a.m.
你们学校正在开展读书月活动, 英语科组举办了一个名为“青春校园”的英语写作大赛。假设你是这个活动的组织者, 请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知, 欢迎大家积极参与。
［写作内容］略
[参考范文]
In order to promote the campus culture, our school is going to hold an English writing activity called “Youth Campus”, which also aims to arouse our interest in learning English and develop our ability in English writing. Anyone who is interested in it can attend the lecture given by Mr. He at 3:00 p.m. on Nov. 2nd in the school auditorium hall, where students can learn a lot of writing skills and ask Mr. He questions about writing.
Students are encouraged to enter for
the writing competition. The participants should send their own compositions to 1431@ before Nov. 20th and they can also know more details at www.sceu. / comp. Every student are welcome to join us, and don’t miss the deadline.
[精华点评]
这篇通知的内容比较多, 考生在写作的过程中要先思考信息点的划分和句子的连接。如活动的目的有三点, 如果考生用in order to把三点都囊括了, 这个句子就会头重脚轻, 显得累赘, 因此范文用了一个定语从句which aims to do...来解决这个问题, 使句子显得更灵活。
为了避免句型结构的重复, 考生可以考虑句子的不同表达法。在鼓励学生参加活动的三个句子中, 本范文用的句型都是不一样的, 如第二句的 “Anyone who is interested in it can...”(定语从句)和第三句的“Students are encouraged to...”(被动语态)。
你们学校将要组织所有高三学生在本周末参加一次郊游活动。假设你是这个活动的组织者, 请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知。
活动地址 黄埔古港
活动目的 (1)放松心情 (2)了解广州的历史和文化
活动计划 (1)本周六4月2日上午8点在学校正门集中, 乘车前往黄埔古港
(2)到达后, 游览古港, 参观博物馆, 感受广州的变迁
(4)午餐后，参观黄埔军校
(5)下午5点返程回校
温馨提示 天气预测下雨, 带雨伞以防万一
参考词汇：黄埔古港 Ancient port Whampoa黄埔军校 Whampoa Military Academy
[参考范文]
To help us get relaxed as well as knowing more about the history and culture of Guangzhou, our school is going to organize
a trip for all the senior three students. We should gather at the school gate at 8:00 a.m.
this Saturday, April 2nd, and then take a bus to Ancient port Whampoa.
We will have a visit to the ancient port and the museum, which have witnessed the development of Guangzhou. Later, we will pay a visit to Whampoa Military Academy after lunch and then go back to school at 5:00 p.m.. It is forecasted in the weather report that it is going to rain that day, so please take umbrellas with you in case.
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这篇通知的重点在于把活动的流程讲述清楚, 所以考生在写作过程中注意时间的用法, 以及时间过渡的一些连词, 如and then..., later..., after lunch...等。
考生在翻译的过程中, 要避免完全按照字面翻译, 如表达“放松心情”时, 考生若按照字面翻译为relax our mood就是中式英语, 因此可以用get relaxed来表达。
另外“感受广州的变迁”也比较难翻译, 考生可以采取迂回方法，把这个意思改为“黄埔古港和博物馆见证了广州的发展”, 那就可以用witness the development of Guangzhou这个短语清楚地把意思表达出来。
名师提示：考生要意识到一个事实, 并不是每个中文或短语都能直接翻译成英文, 也不是每个英文或短语都能直接翻译成中文。因此, 在翻译的过程中, 一定要注意灵活性 。(共35张PPT)
1.neighbor与……为邻
2.be made up of/consist of由……组成
3.be located /situated in/near坐落在
4. serve as当……用
5.with /has a history of有……的历史
相关短语
6. with/has a population of有……人口
7.cover an area of 面积有...
8. the third largest city第三大城市
9. be famous for以……而著名
10. be well-known for/as因为/作为……而出名
11. on its east lies 东边有……
12. a fantastic place 一个极好的地方
13. be rich /abundant in盛产
14. a three-storeyed building一栋三层楼的房子
1. I would like to introduce my hometown to you. 我向你介绍一下我的家乡。
2. My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong, is located in Guangdong Province. 我的家乡, 毗邻香港, 位于广东省。
相关句式
3. Guangzhou, a city with a population
of about thirteen million, has a history of more than 2,200 years.广州, 拥有一千三百人口的一座城市, 有三百多年的历史了。
4. Covering a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers this city has a population of about ten million.这座城市占地面积达7, 434平方公里, 人口大约是10, 000, 000。
5. It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold, and has mild climate. 它自然资源得天独厚, 有丰富的煤和金矿, 而且气候温和。
6. Our school is no longer what it used to be.我们学校再也不是过去的样子了。
1. 介绍或描述地点的基础写作, 通常以表格形式来呈现写作点。该类表格通常有两列,其中一列概括事物特征、属性, 另一列对此特征、属性展开描述。学生必须重新组织表格内容, 不能死板地依据表格从左到右翻译, 如不能写成“The location of Guangzhou is in the south of China”这样不地道的句子,相应的表达应该是: Guangzhou lies in the south of China.
2. 确定时态。介绍地点等描述基本特征的文章通常使用一般现在时。
3. 避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对象或设定情景，避免用it作主语引导第一句, 而应该具体写出描述的对象，如the Great Wall, Hong Kong等。但如果整篇文章 多处用“it” 等作主语,文章会稍显逊色, 所以在写作过程中, 可根据文意适当变换主语, 如改写为the place, the city等。
你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请根据以下的信息要点，用5个规范的英语句子写一篇长城的简单介绍。你的介绍应包括全部信息要点，介绍的开头已经给出，不计入5个句子中。
【信息要点】
历史 有两千多年的历史。
特点 世界上最长的城墙, 长6000多千米;
建筑材料主要为石头, 砖头, 修建工作都是人工进行;
主要用于防御外来入侵者, 沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台(watchtower)。
现状 世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。
[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
[评分标准] 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
[例题导写]
1. 按顺序写作。学生应该按照表格内容(即“历史、特点、现状”)的先后顺序进行写作，这样既可避免重整顺序而浪费时间, 也避免错改顺序而给老师带来阅卷困难。
2. 草拟提纲、简单翻译是写作重要步骤之一。请翻译要点：
(1) 有(多久)的历史 _________________
It has a history of ...
(2) 世界最长的城墙 ________________
(3) 6000多千米长 __________________
(4) 由石头, 砖头做成 ______________
(5) 由人工修建 __________________
be constructed by hand
the longest wall in the world
6000 kilometers long
be made of stones and bricks
6) 防御外来入侵者
_________________________________
_________________________________
(7) 每隔几百米
_____________________
every few hundred meters
prevent the country from being invaded;
defend the country against foreign invaders
(8) 著名旅游景点之一
___________________________________
___________________________________
(9) 吸引许多外国游客
___________________________________
one of the famous scenic spots; one of the
famous places of interest; one of the famous
tourist attractions
attract many foreign visitors
3. 规范表达名词。如果名词修饰语过长, 应转用 “a / an / the +名词+of”的表达, 例如, “两千多年的历史”应该写成“a history of two thousand years”, 而不能写成“two thousand years’ history”。
4. 变换表达, 丰富句式。
请按要求完成句子：
(1) It is more than 6000 kilometers in length, ______________________________________(“是世界上最长的城墙”, 使用非限制性定语从句)
(2) It was the Great Wall ____________________ _________________________in ancient times. (“帮助人们防御外来入侵者”, 使用强调句)
that helped people fight
against the foreign invaders
which makes it the longest wall in the world
(3)______________________________________
___________________, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall.(“长城主要用于防御外来入侵者”, 使用原因状语从句)
(4) The Great Wall is one of the well-known places of interest on earth, _________________
____________________________.(“每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游”, 使用非谓语结构)
As the Great Wall was built to defend people
against the invaders
appealing to a large
number of foreigners every year
(5) The Great Wall is ____ a famous historical attraction ____ it attracts hundreds of thousands of foreign visitors each year.(使用“如此……以致”的句型表达)
(6) So ________________________that it attracts hundreds of thousands of visitors home and abroad every year.(“长城如此吸引”, 使用倒装句)
attractive is the Great Wall
such
that
[参考范文]
Ladies and Gentlemen，
Welcome to the Great Wall. The Great Wall, which is more than 6, 000 kilometers long, is the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2, 000 years. It is made of stones and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine.
As the wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. Now, the Great wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many foreign visitors every year.
［能力提高］
1. 请根据中文提示, 完成有关地点介绍的语汇积累。
(1) 位于 ______________________
(2) 靠近 ______________________
_________________________
next to / close to, in the
neighborhood of, neighboring...
be located /situated in；lie(s)in
(3)有(多少)人口
____________________________________
____________________________________
(4)有(多久)历史
____________________________________
It has a population of ... ; With a population
of ..., sth. ...; The population has reached...
It has a history of ...; With a history of ...，
sth...
(5) 占(多大)面积
_________________________________
_______________________
(6) 表达“容量”
The hotel ________(拥有)120 rooms; The building can _____(容纳)5000 people.
cover an area of ...(square kilometers /
square meters)
possesses
hold
(7) 是(多少)长/宽/深 It is... ____/ ____ / ___. =It is... in _____/ _____/ _____ .
(8) 著名景点 a place of ______, a historical _________, a scenic spot
(9) 表达“吸引、著名”
sth. ________________sb.;
sth. be__________________________ (形容词);
be famous ____(因……而著名);
be famous __(作为……而著名)
as
long
wide
deep
length
width
depth
interest
attraction
attract / appeal to
attractive / appealing / wonderful
for
2. 请根据中文, 完成短文。
Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, also known as City of Flowers, serves as the capital city of Guangdong and (1) ___________________ ________________________________________________________(政治，经济，科学，教育，文化中心).(2) _______________________________ _________________ (全市面积7434.4平方公里), it is home to more than 11 million people.
Covering / With an area of 7434.4
square kilometers
the centre of its
political，economic，scientific，educational，
and cultural life
Located in the middle of Guangdong, north of the Pearl River Delta with the Pearl River winding its way through the city, Guangzhou (3)___________________________ (气候温暖湿润). Besides, it is a famous city with (4)________ ______________________(有着2, 200多年历史)and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road. With its beautiful scenery, Guangzhou (5) _______ _____________________ (旅游资源丰富).
enjoys a warm and wet climate
a history
of more than 2, 200 years
abundant in traveling resources
is also
你参加了学校的旅游兴趣小组，在汇报课上，各小组成员要介绍一个独具魅力的城市，以下是你搜集到的关于香港的信息。
基本信息 靠近广东省南端, 西邻澳门, 以旅游、美食、购物、影视等闻名
地方特色 1.汇聚来自世界各地的名牌, 是购物的理想胜地;
2.在众多著名旅游景点, 如迪士尼乐园, 海洋公园, 南丫岛等, 是人们休闲度假的好去处;
3.在香港人开设的餐厅, 游客可以以实惠的价格品尝地方美食；
4.香港人富有创造力和热情, 他们用智慧和勤劳的双手创造美好的将来。
参考词汇：澳门 Macao南丫岛 Lemma Island
[写作内容]
请根据以上表格内容, 介绍香港的有关情况。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确, 信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
[参考范文]
Hong Kong, a city situated close to the south of Guangdong and to the east of Macao, is famous for traveling, food, shopping and film industry as well. In this modern city, there are various kinds of brands from all over the world for people to choose from, which makes Hong Kong an ideal place for shopping.
Hong Kong is also an exciting place where people can enjoy their leisure time and holiday by visiting the famous scenic spots, such as the Disneyland, the Ocean Park, the Lemma Island and so on. In the restaurants run by the local people, visitors can enjoy the delicious food at a reasonable price. What’s more, Hong Kong people are creative and passionate, creating their promising future with wisdom and diligence.
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介绍地点的文章, 往往涉及一些地方著名景点的介绍。在日常阅读积累中, 学生必须记住一些著名的、常用的景点, 如本文出现的“迪士尼乐园” (Disneyland), “海洋公园”(the Ocean Park), 这些香港著名景点也曾经出现在学生课本, 需引起重视。此外, 对于语言表达的难点, 要学会转换思维方式,了解中英文表达的差异, 这样才可以在写作时准确、地道地翻译要点, 如题目中出现的“勤劳的双手”, 英语表达时不能直接翻译, 而用diligence或hard work便可表达中心要点。
2012年体育盛事—奥运会将在伦敦举行。你校一年一度的英语体育节将至，请你根据以下表格内容, 用英语写一篇介绍伦敦的文章，张贴在体育节的宣传栏上。
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概况 伦敦是英国政治、经济、文化中心和首要工业城市。位于英国东南部, 面积1580平方公里
天气 天气多变，时常下雨
交通 交通方便、发达, 但费用较高
旅游 风光旖旎, 吸引了四方游客, 给游客留下了深刻的印象
London, the most important industrial city
of England, serves as the centre of its political, economic and cultural life. Located in the southeast of England, it covers an area of 1580 square kilometers. The weather is changeable and it rains often. People can enjoy the convenience of the means of transportation, but at a relatively expensive price. With its beautiful scenery, London attracts visitors from all over the world, leaving them a deep impression.
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写作时, 分清题目背景引入说明部分和真正的写作内容。本题中, “2012年体育盛事—奥运会将在伦敦举行”、“你校一年一度的英语体育节将至”只是引入该基础写作的一个背景说明。根据题目要求,真正的写作内容仅仅是表格内的信息, 写作时不能画蛇添足。对于信息量较大的句子, 可考虑使用“with+宾语+宾语补足语”的结构, 例如：(1) London is situated in the southeast of England, with an area of 1580 square kilometers.(共37张PPT)
1.be born in a poor family出生贫穷家庭
2. attend school 上学
3.at the age of 在……岁时
4.during his childhood在他童年时
5.sense of humour幽默感
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6. be always ready to总是乐于
7. modest and honest谦虚诚实
8. be regarded as被认为是
9. have a gift for在……方面有天赋
10. work hard at致力于
11. devote one’s life to致力于
12. graduate from 从……毕业
13. take an active part in积极参加
14. open-minded and optimistic乐观开朗
15. be admitted to被……录取; 考入
16. go abroad for further studies出国深造
17. be honored for因……而受到尊敬
18. dream of being a writer梦想成为作家
19.make contributions to对……做出贡献
20.have a strong interest in对……有浓厚兴趣
1. When he was a boy, he showed a great interest in maths.他小时候就对数学非常感兴趣。
2. Born in a small town in 1812, Charles Dickens was able to attend school for only two years owing to his poor family.查尔斯·狄更斯于1812年出生在一个小镇, 由于家里穷,只上了两年的学。
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3. As a teacher, she is kind, helpful and patient, so all of us like her.作为一名教师, 她善良、助人而有耐心, 因此我们都喜欢她。
4. Wang Ping, an 18-year-old girl from Class 3, Senior 3, loves reading books.王萍, 来自高三三班的一个十八岁女孩, 热爱读书。
5. She is always ready to help her fellow classmates improve their reading.她总是
乐于帮助同学提高他们的阅读。
6. She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country.她为科研献出了一切, 对国家作出了巨大贡献。
7. He is considered to be one of the greatest scientists in China.他被认为是中国最伟大的科学家之一。
8. She was awarded the Nobel prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievement.她因在化学方面的科研成就被授予了诺贝尔奖。
1. 介绍人物特征时, 多使用一般现在时。若描
述人物具体的过去行为, 则使用一般过去时。
2. 积累常用的人物外貌描写和性格描写的语汇。
3. 描写人物性格特征时, 可使用以下句型结构, 丰富人物形象。
(1)“so + adj. /adv. + that”, 例：Mary is so diligent that she always comes first in her study.
(2) adj. +enough to do sth., 例：Bob was confident enough to solve all the problems by himself.
(3) “a person with + n.”, 例：John, a person with imagination, is able to make up many new stories.
4. 可使用副词或“with+n.”的状语结构进一步描写人物行为动作。例：
(1) David carefully positioned the cup on the edge of the shelf.
(2) David positioned the cup on the edge of the shelf with care.
5. 使用同位语、定语从句、非谓语丰富人物信息。例：
(1) Mr. Smiths, an experienced professor, is willing to help and therefore is thought highly of by all his students.
(2) Chen Ming, who was once the champion of the English Speech Contest, is glad to share his learning methods with us.
(3) Zhang Ming, furthering his study at Cambridge University, does a part-time job to earn extra money.
你校将在假期组织部分学生赴英国学习。作为该项目的负责人, 你需负责将两位赴英学生的情况介绍给英方家庭。
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请根据以下表格内容, 写信给英方家庭介绍这两位学生的情况。
姓名 李华 陈伟
特点 开朗、乐观 待人友善.有点害羞
爱好 体育活动、阅读、听音乐 与李华一样
担心的问题 饮食不习惯 沟通困难
期望 多了解英国的历史文化 多交朋友，提高英语水平
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1. 弄清写作内容。考生需要对比、介绍李华和陈伟两位学生特点、爱好、担心的问题和期望这四方面的情况。有两种写作思路供选择，思路一：先介绍完李华的情况, 再介绍陈伟的情况。思路二：对比地介绍李华和陈伟在特点、爱好等四个方面的情况。学生可使用but, while, however, on the contrary等连词和副词(短语)承接句子。
2. 确定全文时态。描写人物特征，应使用一般现在时。陈述“期望”时,也可使用一般将来时。
3. 切忌生硬翻译表格内容。部分学生可能会根据表格直译, 写成：The character of Li Hua is optimistic and active. Li Hua’s hobbies are sports, reading and listening to music. 地道的表达应该是：Li Hua is (considered to be) optimistic and active. Li Hua is keen on sports, reading and listening to music.
4. 本文涉及人物在相同方面的描述, 写作时要注意变换表达, 增添语言色彩。请尝试使用多种表达翻译：
(1) 爱好、喜欢
like to do; like doing; be keen on; be fond of; enjoy (doing)sth.; be interested in
(2) 担心、害怕
be worried about sth.; be worried that ...; worry about sth.; be concerned about sth.; be afraid of sth.; be afraid that...; sb. fear that ...
(3) 习惯、适应
(3) adapt(oneself)to; accustom oneself to; be/get accustomed to; be /get used to
(4) 做……有困难
(4) find it difficult to do; have difficulty / trouble in doing sth. / with sth.
(5) 期望
(5) look forward to(doing)sth.; hope /long/desire /expect to do sth.; be eager to do sth.
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Dear Mr. & Mrs. Smith，
Thank you for your offer to host two of our students. The boys’ names are Li Hua and Chen Wei. Here is a little bit about them.
Li is an open-minded and optimistic boy and Chen Wei is very friendly but a little shy. Both boys love sports, especially basketball and football and they also enjoy reading and listening to music. As it’s the first trip to the U.K, they both feel a little anxious.
Li Hua is worried that he has trouble adjusting to British food while Chen Wei is more concerned about being able to communicate clearly with others. Li Hua is really looking forward to learning more about the history of UK and culture and Chen is eager to make some new friends and improve his English.
Once again thank you for your generosity.
Sincerely Yours，
Secretary of the project
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Li Hua is active and optimistic while
Chen Wei is friendly and a bit shy. However, they both enjoy playing sports, reading and listening to music. When it comes to what they worry about, Li Hua is concerned about (1) __________________________________ and Chen Wei is afraid of the situation (2) _______________________________
________________________.
in which he will have difficulty in
communicating with others
whether he will be accustomed to the diet
In terms of their expectations, Li Hua desires to(3) ______________________
__________________________. As for Chen Wei he wants to(4) ___________ _______ and improve his English.
know more about the
culture and history of Britain
make more
friends
2.请尝试使用不同表达完成句子翻译。
(1)他是个既聪明又友好的人。
He is _________________________________
______________________________.
(2)他是如此的诚信, 以致所有认识他的人都称赞他。
He is ________________________those who know him all ______________him.
He is ____________those who know him all _____ him.
both smart and friendly/clever as well as friendly/intelligent and nice(as well)
such an honest person that
think highly of
so honest that
praise
(3)他的谦虚, 给我们留下了很深刻的印象。
His _______left us a deep ________.
We were all ___________________________.
(4)每当我们向他求助时,他总是很耐心地帮助我们。
Whenever we ______________, he will always help us __________.
Every time we __________________, he will always ___________________.
modesty
impression
deeply impressed by his modesty
ask him for help
patiently
give us a helping hand with patience
turn to him for help
你校同学李华刚被评为“广州三好学生(Merit Student of Guangzhou)”, 以下是李华的个人资料：
姓名 李华
现任职务 学校学生会主席、班长
爱好 阅读、运动、登山
特长 演讲、英语口语、钢琴
曾获奖项 学校英语演讲比赛一等奖、校园才艺大赛第一名
师生评价 李华乐观开朗、多才多艺(versatile), 是一名深受师生喜爱的学生
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请根据以上表格内容, 在校园博客上宣传介绍李华, 内容包括：
1. 李华刚被评为“广州市三好学生”, 呼吁大家向她学习；
2. 李华现任职务、爱好、特长、曾获奖项;
3. 师生对李华的评价。
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Li Hua, who has just been awarded with the title of Merit Student of Guangzhou, is the model that we should learn from. Li Hua, the monitor and the chairman of the Students’ Union of our school, likes reading, sports and mountain climbing.
She is good at delivering speeches, oral English speaking and playing the piano as well. With her hard work, she once won the champion of the School English Speech Contest and came first in the talent show of our school. Li Hua, considered as optimistic and versatile, is liked by both students and teachers.
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这篇人物介绍的写作涉及课外单词, 如“广州市三好学生”、“多才多艺”。既然题目已经给出这些单词的提示，学生必须按照题目提供的生词进行写作, 切勿随意编造或改写单词。其次，本文也涉及了较多固定用语，如“学校学生会主席”(chairman of the Students’ Union of our school)、“英语演讲比赛”(School English Speech Contest)、“校园才艺大赛”(the talent show of our school或School Talent Show)等, 学生要大写专有名词的首字母,并要在日常学习中积累与此相关用语, 如团委(the Student League)、校园歌手大赛(School Singing Contest)等等。
本题五个句子全是介绍李华的信息, 为避免累赘, 写作时要避免通篇使用Li Hua或she。首句必须使用Li Hua作主语, 具体指出描述对象, 但在接下来的句子中, 可穿插使用she、Li Hua作为句子的主语。特别需要注意的是,学生必须细心审题, 李华是女孩, 该细节提示可在写作内容第一点“呼吁大家向她学习”找到。
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Charles Dickens, a famous novelist of England, was born in February, 1812 and passed away in June, 1870. When he was young, his family lived in poverty and therefore he was forced to work in the factory.
Later, he developed an interest in writing and came up with many novels which showed the poor situation of the inferior group. Deeply affected by his childhood experiences, his writings reflected the darkness and unfairness of the society of his time. Many of his works are still popular in the world.
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人物介绍, 多使用一般现在时描述人物特征、贡献、影响等, 若描述具体的过去行为, 则使用一般过去时, 如本题中狄更斯“生平简介”的描写便应该使用一般过去时。名人传记介绍，往往涉及出生日期和逝世日期, 学生应该遵循英语日期从小单位到大单位的表达, 并熟记月份的拼写以及月份首字母要大写这些细节。此外, 介绍名人生平事迹, 要注意使用规范用语, 避免使用口语化表达。英文中, 词组比单词更为正规, 如pass away, live in poverty与die, be poor相比, 显得更为正规。