2021年中考书面表达指导04-居住环境 课件(共37张PPT)

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2021
英语中考写作指导
04.
居住环境
·
依据中考
·
精选话题
·
素材积累
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五步成文
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目录
contents
Methods
思路方法
01
Material
素材积累
02
Guide
写作示范
03
Models
优秀作品
04
01
思路方法
（
METHODS）
强化思路
形成习惯
审好题
·
体裁
·
人称
·
时态
·
主题
基本思路
列好纲
·
框架
·
要点
写好句
·
扩展
·
补充
·
解释
成好文
·
衔接
·
检查
时态
体裁
人称
主题
审好题
一般现在时
一般过去时
一般将来时
现在完成时
看提示
看要点
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
记叙文
议论文
说明文
应用文
列好纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
写好句
让语义更准确
利用高级词汇
不怕词数限制
短语替换单词
表达层次清晰
增强句子关联
并列以及复合
提升句子质量
表达强烈感情
感叹疑问祈使
地道英语表达
名言成语俗语
成好文
用连词
巧衔接
查错误
做检查
好书写
认真誊
02
素材积累
（MATERIAL）
积累佳句
提升质量
佳句积累
喜欢某处的原因
I
often
exercise
at
the
park
because
I
love
the
clean
air
and
sunshine.
(状语从句)
We
are
proud
of
our
city
as
it
has
a
long
history.
(状语从句)
One
reason
(why)
I
like
my
hometown
is
that
the
weather
here
is
neither
too
hot
nor
too
cold.
(定语从句)
I
love
my
community
not
only
for
her
beauty
but
also
for
the
people
here.
(短语)
佳句积累
居住环境的变化
In
the
past,
there
were
only
narrow
and
dirty
roads
in
the
small
town.
But
now
the
streets
are
wide
and
clean,
with
many
green
trees
on
both
sides.
(并列句)
Local
people
used
to
live
in
old
flats,
but
now,
most
of
them
have
moved
into
new
houses.
(并列句)
Another
big
change
is
that
many
tall
buildings
in
the
town
have
appeared.
(从句)
The
river
was
once
full
of
rubbish.
Later
people
realized
the
problem
and
took
action
to
protect
it.
(短语)
佳句积累
城乡生活差异
I
prefer
to
live
in
the
countryside
because
I’m
able
to
enjoy
the
beautiful
country
scenery,
breathe
fresh
air
and
own
a
peaceful
mind.
(短语；状语从句)
However,
the
cost
in
the
city
is
higher
and
the
traffic
is
much
heavier
in
the
city.
(并列句)
Now
it
is
easy
to
travel
from
the
city
to
the
countryside.
(句型)
The
air
in
the
countryside
is
fresher,
which
is
good
to
your
health.
(定语从句)
俗语谚语
If
bees
stay
at
home,
rain
will
soon
come.
If
they
fly
away
,fine
will
be
the
day.蜜蜂迟归，雨来风吹。
Only
to
obey
nature
in
order
to
overcome
nature.要征服自然就只能遵从自然。
Actions
speak
louder
than
words.
事实胜于雄辩。
A
good
beginning
is
half
done.
良好的开端是成功的一半。
God
helps
those
who
help
themselves.
天助自助者。
Easier
said
than
done.
说起来容易做起来难。
03
写作引领
（GUIDE）
步步引领
实现高分
真题再现
每个人都生活在一个特定的环境，请以“What
I
like
about
where
I
live”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你的生活环境。
要点：1）你生活在什么样的环境；
2）你喜欢这个环境的什么；
3）你对这个环境有何期望;
要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数80左右。
审好题
时态：一般现在时
人称：第一人称
体裁：说明文
主题：居住环境
列提纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
每个人生活都有一个特定环境。
我住在河南省的一个小村里。
环境美。
自然美；空气新鲜；让人舒适。
人文美。
平静地生活；友好相处，互相帮助。
期待有个大超市。
因为购物需要去远处。
我认为这是世界上最美的地方。
我会努力让她越来越美丽。
主题句：这个村子环境美，人也美。
写好句
开头
Everyone
has
a
special
environment
to
live
in.
(背景)
I
live
in
a
small
village
in
Henan
province.
(入题)
句子升格：
?
Everyone
has
a
special
environment
to
live
in.
As
for
me,
I
live
in
a
small
but
beautiful
village
in
Henan
province.
(短语)
写好句
正文
The
village
is
beautiful
because
both
the
environment
and
the
people
are
nice.
(主题句)
句子升格：
?
The
village
I
live
in
is
beautiful
because
of
both
the
environment
and
the
people
here.
(短语；从句)
写好句
要点一：
There
are
many
tall
trees
and
beautiful
flowers
around
it.
The
air
is
fresh
and
the
water
is
clear.
It’s
a
comfortable
place.
句子升格：
?
It
has
not
only
tall
trees
and
colorful
flowers
but
also
fresh
air
and
clear
water.
So
people
here
can
be
healthier.
(短语;状语从句)
写好句
要点二：
People
here
live
a
peaceful
life.
We
are
kind
to
each
other.
We
like
to
help
each
other.
句子升格：
?
People
there
live
a
peaceful
life.
We
are
kind
to
each
other
and
help
one
another
as
well.
(短语)
写好句
要点三：
There
isn't
a
big
supermarket
in
this
village.
So
it’s
a
little
difficult
to
go
shopping.
I
hope
there
will
be
one
soon.
句子升格：
?
The
only
regret
is
that
there
isn't
a
big
supermarket
in
this
village.
I
hope
there
will
be
one
so
that
I
can
go
shopping
easily.
(从句；短语)
写好句
结尾
I
think
my
village
is
the
most
wonderful
place
to
live.
I’ll
try
my
best
to
help
her
more
and
more
beautiful.
句子升格：
?
In
a
word,
the
village
I
live
in
is
the
most
wonderful
place
to
live.
And
I
will
try
to
help
her
more
and
more
beautiful.
(短语；从句)
成好文
Everyone
has
a
special
environment
to
live
in.
As
for
me,
I
live
in
a
small
but
beautiful
village
in
Henan
province.
The
village
I
live
in
is
beautiful
because
of
both
the
environment
and
the
people
here.
It
has
not
only
tall
trees
and
colorful
flowers
but
also
fresh
air
and
clear
water.
So
people
here
can
be
healthier.
People
there
and
live
a
peaceful
life.
We
are
kind
to
each
other
and
help
one
another
as
well.
The
only
regret
is
that
there
isn't
a
big
supermarket
in
this
village.
I
hope
there
will
be
one
so
that
I
can
go
shopping
easily.
In
a
word,
the
village
I
live
in
is
the
most
fantastic
place
to
live.
And
I
will
try
to
make
her
more
and
more
beautiful.
04
佳作欣赏
（MODELS）
满分佳作
他山之玉
范文
I?live?in?a?small?and?quiet?city?in?Henan?Province.
Different?from?other?cities,?it?has?no?skyscrapers?or?endless?cars?on?the?streets.?People?there?are?seldom?late?for?their?work?and?enjoy?a?slow?and?peaceful?life.?And?that?is?what?I?like?most?about?my?city.?
However,?my?city?has?her?problems.?She?has?no?high?speed?train.?I?hope?she?will?soon?have?high?speed?trains?so?that?I?can?travel?to?other?cities?more?easily!
佳作欣赏
01
假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tony对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位
最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表
幸福，可以带来好运
使用场所
婚礼，春节等
表达方式
剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼
提示词：婚礼wedding，中国结Chinese
Knot，红包
red
packet，代表stand
for
佳作欣赏
01
Dear
Tony，
It's
great
to
receive
your
letter.
I'm
writing
to
tell
you
something
about
Chinese
Red.
As
we
all
know,
Chinese
Red
is
one
of
the
most
popular
colors
in
China,
and
it
is
deeply
loved
by
people
of
all
ages.
The
reason
why
Chinese
people
love
red
is
that
it
stands
for
happiness
and
fortune.
What’s
more,
it
can
bring
people
good
luck
as
well.
When
the
traditional
Chinese
Spring
Festival
is
coming,
Chinese
Red
will
come
into
your
eyes
whenever
and
wherever
you
are.
When
you
attend
someone’s
wedding
ceremony,
what
impresses
you
most
is
the
Chinese
Red.
On
these
occasions,
Chinese
Red
is
put
into
many
things,
such
as
paper
cuttings,
Chinese
Knots,
red
packets
and
lanterns,
which
can
be
used
to
expect
a
promising
future.
The
Chinese
Red
has
deeply
affected
every
Chinese.
It
is
not
only
a
color
but
also
a
kind
of
Chinese
spirit
and
culture.
I
truly
hope
my
letter
will
help
you
understand
better
about
Chinese
Red.
Yours，
Li
Hua
佳作欣赏
02
随着时间的推移，你周围的居住环境也在发生改变。请以“Great
changes
in
my
living
environment”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的居住环境的变化。
1.
要点：1)你居住环境过去的样子；
2)你居住环境的变化；
3)你对这些变化的感受。
2.
要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
佳作欣赏
02
Great
changes
have
taken
place
in
my
living
environment.In
the
past,
the
street
was
narrow
and
the
transportation
was
not
convenient.
The
water
was
dirty
and
the
sky
was
gray.
People
lived
a
poor
life.
But
now,
the
living
conditions
have
improved
a
lot.
The
roads
are
wider
and
the
trees
are
greener.
Meanwhile,
the
sky
is
bluer
and
the
water
is
clearer.
What's
more,
we
can
see
tall
buildings
here
and
there.
People
now
enjoy
a
better
life.
And
thanks
to
the
airport
and
the
high?speed
train
station,
the
traffic
becomes
more
convenient.
I
believe
my
living
environment
will
be
better
and
better
in
the
future.
广州某电台英文频道将开设
Welcome
to
Guang
zhou栏目,目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文,向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
佳作欣赏
03
注意:
1.词数:80词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数);
2.
不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
佳作欣赏
03
佳作欣赏
04
我们生活学习在美丽的甘肃．假设你所在的学校正在组织一个"让世界了解甘肃走向世界"的活动，请根据以下思维导图的提示，以"
The
Introduction
of
Gansu
Province"为题，写篇介绍甘肃的英语短文．
要求：1．文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容；
2．句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；
3．可做适量拓展；
4．词数：80词左右．（标题需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域，不计入总词数）
佳作欣赏
04
The
Introduction
of
Gansu
Province
Location：
in
the
northwest
of
China
Area：an
area
of
425，900km2
Capital
City：Lanzhou
Population：26
million
Weather：different
from
place
to
place：
the
temperature
is
quite
different
from
day
to
night…
May
to
October
is
the
best
time
for
travelling．
Must﹣see
places
of
interest：
Mogao
Crottos
the
wold
famous
art
palace；
Jinyuguan
Pass：
the
western
end
of
the
Great
Wall…
佳作欣赏
04
Gansu
Province
lies
in
the
northwest
of
China．
It
covers
an
area
of
425.900
km．
There
are
26
million
people
living
there，
Lanzhou
is
the
capital
city
of
Gansu
Province．
The
weather
in
Gansu
is
different
from
place
to
place
and
the
temperature
is
usually
quite
different
from
day
to
night．
If
you
want
to
go
travelling
in
Gansu，
May
to
October
is
the
best
time．Mogao
grotto
which
is
the
world
famous
art
palace
and
Jiayuguan
Pass，
the
western
end
of
the
Great
wall，
are
two
of
the
must-see
places
of
interest
in
Gansu．
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