2021年中考书面表达指导05-成长变化 课件(共34张PPT)

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2021
英语中考写作指导
05.
成长变化
·
依据中考
·
精选话题
·
素材积累
·
五步成文
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目录
contents
Methods
思路方法
01
Material
素材积累
02
Guide
写作示范
03
Models
优秀作品
04
01
思路方法
（
METHODS）
强化思路
形成习惯
审好题
·
体裁
·
人称
·
时态
·
主题
基本思路
列好纲
·
框架
·
要点
写好句
·
扩展
·
补充
·
解释
成好文
·
衔接
·
检查
时态
体裁
人称
主题
审好题
一般现在时
一般过去时
一般将来时
现在完成时
看提示
看要点
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
记叙文
议论文
说明文
应用文
列好纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
写好句
让语义更准确
利用高级词汇
不怕词数限制
短语替换单词
表达层次清晰
增强句子关联
并列以及复合
提升句子质量
表达强烈感情
感叹疑问祈使
地道英语表达
名言成语俗语
成好文
用连词
巧衔接
查错误
做检查
好书写
认真誊
02
素材积累
（MATERIAL）
积累佳句
提升质量
佳句积累
外貌及性格变化
She
used
to
have
short
hair.
But
now,
she
has
long
hair.
(短语；并列句)
He
has
more
greatly
changed
than
before
and
he
becomes
outgoing
and
active.
(比较级；并列句)
When
I
was
in
Grade
8,
I
was
so
shy
that
I
didn’t
dare
to
speak
English
in
front
of
my
classmates.
Now
I
am
not
shy
any
more.
(从句；词组)
佳句积累
兴趣爱好的变化
He
has
changed
a
lot
and
he
takes
an
active
part
in
all
kinds
of
activities.
(短语)
Now
I
really
enjoy
reading.
This
is
the
best
progress
I’ve
ever
made.
(从句)
On
weekends,
I
usually
spend
more
time
in
reading
books
instead
of
playing
computer
games.
(短语)
I
didn’t
love
playing
basketball
at
all
before.
However,
I’m
crazy
about
it
now.
(短语；连词)
佳句积累
其它方面变化
I’m
much
happier
and
I
work
even
harder
than
I
used
to.
(比较级)
Thanks
to
taking
an
active
part
in
the
volunteer
activity,
I
gained
more
experience
on
caring
for
others.
(短语)
The
biggest
change
is
that
I
began
to
be
more
positive.
(从句)
佳句积累
变化带来的感受
I’m
glad
that
I
have
made
such
rapid
progress
in
learning
English
in
the
past
three
years.
(短语；从句)
We’re
so
happy
to
see
the
result
of
our
efforts.
(短语)
I’m
sure
(that)
I
have
the
power
to
realize
my
dream
in
the
future
by
increasing
my
knowledge.
(短语；从句)
I
believe
that
nothing
is
impossible
as
long
as
I
stick
to
it.
(短语；从句)
俗语谚语
Knowledge?is?a?treasure,?but?practice?is?the?key?to?obtain?it.
知识是宝藏，实践是钥匙。
Thought?feeds?itself?with?its?own?words?and?grows.
思想以其言语而生。
Where
there
is
a
will,
there
is
a
way.
有志者，事竟成。
Well
begun
is
half
done.
好的开端是成功的一半。
There
is
no
royal
road
to
learning.
学无坦途。
It
is
never
too
late
to
mend.
亡羊补牢，犹为未晚。
03
写作引领
（GUIDE）
步步引领
实现高分
真题再现
我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长．请以"The
biggest
personal
change
I've
ever
made"为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文．
1．要点：
1）变化是什么；
2）变化是如何发生的；
3）变化后有何感受．
2．要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数100左右．
审好题
时态：一般现在时、一般过去时
人称：第一人称
体裁：记叙文
主题：成长变化
列提纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
我们在变化中成长。
我做过最大的变化是我喜欢上了读书。
我一点都不喜欢读书。
因为觉得读书很没意思。
开始尝试读书。
妈妈给我讲故事，让我自己找答案。
我爱上了读书。
学到了很多知识；充分利用了时间。
我很高兴我喜欢上了读书。
我相信我会读更多的书以更好地实现梦想。
写好句
开头
We
grow
in
change.
(背景)
The
biggest
personal
change
I’ve
ever
made
is
that
I
have
loved
reading.
(入题)
句子升格：
?
As
the
saying
goes,
“we
grow
in
change.”
I
have
made
many
changes
as
well
and
the
biggest
one
is
that
I
have
fallen
in
love
with
reading.
(短语)
写好句
要点一：
I
didn’t
like
reading
at
all.
I
thought
it
was
boring.
句子升格：
?
When
I
was
a
child,
I
wasn’t
interested
in
reading
at
all,
because
it
was
so
boring
in
my
mind.
(短语;状语从句)
写好句
要点二：
I
began
to
read.
My
mother
told
me
stories
and
asked
me
to
answer
some
questions.
I
read
books
to
find
out
the
answers.
句子升格：
?
My
mother
read
many
stories
for
me
and
asked
me
to
answer
some
questions
for
each
story.
I
had
to
read
the
books
on
my
own.(短语)
写好句
要点三：
I
love
reading.
I
have
learnt
a
lot
from
reading
kinds
of
books.
Reading
can
help
me
make
full
use
of
time.
句子升格：
?
I
like
reading.
It
can
not
only
make
me
learn
a
lot
but
also
help
me
make
full
use
of
time.
(连词；短语)
写好句
结尾
I’m
happy
that
I
enjoy
reading
now.
I
believe
reading
more
books
can
help
me
realize
my
dreams
better.
句子升格：
?
I’m
happy
that
I
enjoy
reading
now.
I
believe
that
the
more
I
read,
the
better
I
can
realize
my
dreams.
(句式；从句)
成好文
As
the
saying
goes,
“we
grow
in
change.”
I
have
made
many
changes
as
well
and
the
biggest
one
is
that
I
have
been
in
love
with
reading.
When
I
was
a
child,
I
wasn’t
interested
in
reading
at
all,
because
it
was
so
boring
in
my
mind.
Later,
my
mother
read
many
stories
for
me
and
asked
me
to
answer
some
questions
for
each
story.
I
had
to
read
the
books
on
my
own.
It
not
only
made
me
learn
a
lot
but
also
helped
me
make
full
use
of
time.
So
I
like
reading
now.
I’m
happy
that
I
enjoy
reading
now.
I
believe
that
the
more
I
read,
the
better
I
can
realize
my
dreams.
04
佳作欣赏
（MODELS）
满分佳作
他山之玉
范文
The
biggest
personal
change
I've
ever
made
is
that
I
have
fallen
in
love
with
reading．（高分句型）（变化）
When
I
was
a
child，I
didn't
enjoy
books
at
all．Later，my
mother
always
read
stories
for
me
and
bought
me
books．Gradually
I
began
to
love
reading．（变化的发生）While
reading，I
feel
like
talking
with
a
wise
man．（高分句型）Reading
is
also
a
fantastic
way
to
spend
my
free
time．（变化后的感受）
Books
are
my
friends．And
they
will
benefit
me
a
lot．
佳作欣赏
01
时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I
have
changed
a
lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。
要求：
l.
短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2.不少于60词。
提示：
l.
What
did
you
use
to
be
like?
2.
What
is
the
most
important
change?
3.
And
how
did
it
happen?
Tell
a
story
about
it.
佳作欣赏
01
Great
changes
have
happened
to
me
during
the
past
three
years.
The
most
important
change
is
my
attitude
to
English.
I
used
to
be
tired
of
learning
English.
And
I
was
not
interested
in
it.
I
couldn’t
remember
the
words
freely
or
pronounce
them
correctly.
Thanks
to
my
mother,
she
often
encourages
me
to
learn
it.
Besides,
with
the
help
of
my
English
teacher,
I
find
a
better
way
to
learn
English.
I
read
it
every
morning.
I
listen
to
her
carefully
in
class,
take
grammar
notes.
I
often
ask
my
classmates
for
help.
Now
I
like
English
so
much
that
it
is
my
favorite
subject.
Seeing
the
great
change
in
my
English
study,
how
happy
I
am!
佳作欣赏
02
初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。
提示：1.
初中阶段你有哪些收获；
2.
初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；
3.
你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求：1.
80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.
字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
佳作欣赏
02
The
life
of
my
junior
high
school
is
coming
to
an
end.
Since
I
came
to
the
junior
high
school,
I’ve
gained
confidence
and
happiness.
With
the
help
of
our
teachers,
I’ve
learned
how
to
be
a
good
person
as
well
as
plenty
of
knowledge.
I’ve
also
made
some
good
friends.
However,
there
is
still
something
that
I
feel
sorry
about.
Because
I
was
busy
with
my
schoolwork,
I
couldn’t
keep
on
reading.
Once
in
a
while,
I
felt
so
upset
and
anxious
that
I
quarreled
with
my
parents.
In
the
future,
I’ll
try
to
make
good
use
of
time
and
spend
more
free
time
reading
books.
Meanwhile,
I’ll
get
on
well
with
my
parents.
I
believe
I’ll
have
a
happy
and
colorful
life.
每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功。请你用英语写一篇80词以上的短文，谈谈你在成长过程中所经历的最大的一次蜕变。
要求：1.变化前后分别是什么样子的?
　　
2.促成你转变的主要原因是什么?
3.你为变化而付出了怎样的努力?
注意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。
佳作欣赏
03
佳作欣赏
03
I
used
to
be
a
naughty
boy
and
my
mother
used
to
be
angry
with
me.
Now
I’d
like
to
say
I’ve
changed
a
lot.
　　One
day
I
saw
my
mother’s
diary
book
by
accident
while
I
was
looking
for
my
notebook.
I
was
curious
and
began
to
read
my
mother’s
diaries.
In
her
diaries,
she
showed
her
deep
love
for
me.
She
also
expressed
her
disappointment
when
I
made
mistakes.
She
said
she
loved
me
so
much
and
she
believed
I
could
be
a
good
boy.
I
couldn’t
help
crying
after
reading
my
mother’s
diaries.
　　Since
that
day,
I
have
changed
a
lot.
I
work
hard
and
share
some
housework.
I
also
try
to
understand
my
mother’s
feelings.
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