Week
10-提升卷
（考试时间：45分钟
试卷满分：60分）
Part
2语法填空（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
During
World
War
II,
Anne’s
best
friend
was
her
diary
to
6．
she
could
tell
everything.
Her
family
was
Jewish
so
they
had
to
hide
in
order
to
escape
7．
(catch)
by
the
German
Nazis.
During
8．
(she)
stay
in
the
hiding
place,
Anne
became
crazy
9．
everything
to
do
with
nature.
One
evening
she
stayed
10．
(wake)
on
purpose
until
11:30
to
have
11．
good
look
at
the
moon.
She
saw
the
night
face
to
face
that
12．
(rain)
evening.
At
that
moment
she
was
held
13．
(entire)
in
the
power
of
nature.
14．
(fortune),
Anne
and
her
family
had
hidden
away
for
nearly
25
months
before
they15．(discover)
and
went
to
prison.
Part
3短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
删除：在错的词下划横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last
winter
holiday,
my
brother
and
I
went
to
countryside
to
live
with
our
grandparents
for
nearly
three
week.
Although
the
weather
here
was
much
colder,
but
we
got
used
to
it
and
felt
at
home.
Every
morning,
we
got
up
early
than
our
grandparents
and
go
for
a
walk.
After
breakfast,
we
went
to
have
a
chat
with
our
new
friends
Peter,
which
we
happened
to
come
across
during
the
holiday.
Peter
was
a
native
and
quite
warm-heartedly
boy
and
he
was
familiar
to
country
life
well.
After
parting,
Peter
and
I
have
kept
write
to
each
other.
Part
4书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是高一学生李华，你校下个月将举办全市英语口语大赛,请用英语给你的朋友李雷写一封信,邀请他参加这次比赛。内容包括：
1.比赛的时间、地点
2.比赛的内容
3.发出邀请
注意：
1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
答案
语法填空
6．which/whom
7．being
caught
8．her
9．about
10．awake
11．a
12．rainy
13．entirely
14．Unfortunately
15．were
discovered
【分析】
本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了二战期间犹太女孩安妮和家人在藏在一个藏身处，期间她对一切与自然有关的事物都很着迷，不幸的是，25个月后安妮一家人被德国纳税发现并被送进监狱。
6．考查定语从句。句意：在第二次世界大战期间，安妮最好的朋友是她的日记，她可以对它（她）倾述一切。此处为定语从句，关系词指代先行词her
diary并在从句中作to的宾语，故填which，根据“best
friend”可知，此处也可用whom表示拟人，故填which/whom。
7．考查非谓语动词。句意：她的家人是犹太人，所以他们不得不躲藏起来，以免被德国纳粹抓住。escape后接动名词作宾语，they与catch之间是被动关系，所以用动名词的被动式作宾语，故填being
caught。
8．考查代词。句意：呆在藏身处那段时间里，安妮对一切与自然有关的事物都很着迷。修饰名词stay用形容词性物主代词，故填her。
9．考查介词。句意同上，be
crazy
about表示“迷恋、热衷于”，故填about。
10．考查形容词。句意：一天晚上，为了好好看一看月亮，她故意熬夜到11点半。系动词stayed
后接形容词作表语，故填awake。
11．考查冠词。句意同上，此处的look是可数名词，用不定冠词表泛指，good的发音以辅音音素开头，故填a。
12．考查形容词。句意：在那个下雨的晚上，她面对面地看着黑夜。修饰名词evening用形容词，故填rainy。
13．考查副词。句意：在那一刻，她完全被大自然的力量所控制。修饰动词held用副词，故填entirely。
14．考查副词。句意：不幸的是，安妮和她的家人在藏了25个月后在被发现并被送进监狱。修饰整个句子用副词，根据“they_____10_____(discover)
and
went
to
prison”可知此处表示“不幸的是”，故填Unfortunately。
15．考查时态语态。句意同上，陈述的是过去的事情，they与discover之间是被动关系，所以用一般过去时的被动语态，主语是they，谓语动词用复数，故填were
discovered。
短文改错
1.countryside前加the
2.here→
there
3.去掉but
4.
early→
earlier
5.go→
went
6.friends→
friend
7.which→
who/whom
8.warm-heartedly→
warm-hearted
9.to→
with
10.write→
writing
【分析】
本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了去年寒假作者和弟弟去乡下奶奶家生活以及结识新朋友彼得的经历。
【详解】
第一处：考查定冠词。句意：去年寒假，我和弟弟去乡下和爷爷奶奶住了将近三个星期。根据“countryside
to
live
with
our
grandparents”可知此处特指“爷爷奶奶所居住的乡下”，应该用定冠词the修饰，故countryside前加the。
第二处：考查here与there的区别。句意：尽管那里的天气要冷得多，我们还是习惯了，觉得很自在。根据句意可知此处表示“那里”而不是“这里”，故here改为there。
第三处：考查连词。句意同上，前面已经有了Although，此处不能再用but，故去掉but。
第四处：考查副词比较级。句意：每天早上，我们比爷爷奶奶起得更早，出去散步。后面的“than”表明此处用副词比较级形式，故early改为earlier。
第五处：考查时态。句意同上，陈述的是去年寒假的事情，应该用一般过去时，故go改为went。
第六处：考查名词的数。句意：早饭后，我们去和我们的新朋友彼得聊天，他是我们在假期中偶然结识的。根据后面的“Peter”可知此处指“一个朋友”，应该用可数名词单数，故friends改为friend。
第七处：考查非限定性定语从句。句意同上，此处为非限定性定语从句，关系词指代先行词Peter（指人），并在从句中作come
across的宾语，既可用who也可用whom，故which改为who/whom。
第八处：考查形容词。句意：彼得是一个土生土长，很热心的男孩，他对乡村生活很熟悉。修饰名词boy用形容词，故warm-heartedly改为warm-hearted。
第九处：考查固定短语。句意同上，be
familiar
with表示“熟悉……”，故to改为with。
第十处：考查非谓语动词。句意：和彼得分别后，我和他一直保持通信联系。keep
doing表示“一直做某事”，故write改为writing。
书面表达
Dear
Li
Lei，
How
has
everything
been
going
recently?
I’m
writing
to
invite
you
to
take
part
in
the
English
Oral
Competition.
What
is
known
to
all
is
that
we
learn
English
not
just
for
tests
but
mainly
for
communication.
That
is
why
the
English
Oral
Competition
counts.
The
competition
will
be
held
in
our
school
hall
on
the
afternoon
of
December
the
15th.
Participants
are
expected
to
give
an
English
speech
on
a
given
topic
and
then
answer
some
questions
related
to
your
speech.
The
top
three
will
be
awarded
prizes.
Since
I
know
you
are
willing
to
show
yourself,
I
am
expecting
you
to
come
to
participate
in
the
competition.
For
further
information,
you
can
visit
our
school
website
or
contact
me.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【分析】
本篇表达属于应用文，要求考生描述对自己影响最大的人，具体描写人物的特点和产生的具体影响
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时
要求：
1.比赛的时间、地点
2.比赛的内容
3.发出邀请
第二步:列提纲
（重点词组）
take
part
in;
be
expected
to
do;
given
topic;
participate
in;
further
information;
be
willing
to
第三步：连词成句
1.
I’m
writing
to
invite
you
to
take
part
in
the
English
Oral
Competition.
2.
Participants
are
expected
to
give
an
English
speech
on
a
given
topic
and
then
answer
some
questions
related
to
your
speech.
3.
Since
I
know
you
are
willing
to
show
yourself,
I
am
expecting
you
to
come
to
participate
in
the
competition.
4.
For
further
information,
you
can
visit
our
school
website
or
contact
me.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all,
Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second…
And
then,
Finally,
In
the
end,
At
last
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more,
Besides,
Moreover,
Furthermore,
In
addition
As
well
as,
not
only…but
(also),
including,
3.表转折对比关系：However,
On
the
contrary,
but,
Although+clause(从句),
In
spite
of+n/doing,On
the
one
hand…,On
the
other
hand…
Some…,while
others…,as
for,
so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because,
As,
So,
Thus,
Therefore,
As
a
result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和非谓语动词，如：What
is
known
to
all
is
that
we
learn
English
not
just
for
tests
but
mainly
for
communication.这句话运用了主语从句和表语从句，连接词分别是what和that。Participants
are
expected
to
give
an
English
speech
on
a
given
topic
and
then
answer
some
questions
related
to
your
speech.中的related是过去分词做后置定语，修饰questions。固定搭配运用了如take
part
in;
be
expected
to
do;
given
topic;
participate
in;
further
information;
be
willing
to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。Week
10-提升卷
（考试时间：45分钟
试卷满分：60分）
Part
2语法填空（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
During
World
War
II,
Anne’s
best
friend
was
her
diary
to
6．
she
could
tell
everything.
Her
family
was
Jewish
so
they
had
to
hide
in
order
to
escape
7．
(catch)
by
the
German
Nazis.
During
8．
(she)
stay
in
the
hiding
place,
Anne
became
crazy
9．
everything
to
do
with
nature.
One
evening
she
stayed
10．
(wake)
on
purpose
until
11:30
to
have
11．
good
look
at
the
moon.
She
saw
the
night
face
to
face
that
12．
(rain)
evening.
At
that
moment
she
was
held
13．
(entire)
in
the
power
of
nature.
14．
(fortune),
Anne
and
her
family
had
hidden
away
for
nearly
25
months
before
they15．(discover)
and
went
to
prison.
Part
3短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
删除：在错的词下划横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last
winter
holiday,
my
brother
and
I
went
to
countryside
to
live
with
our
grandparents
for
nearly
three
week.
Although
the
weather
here
was
much
colder,
but
we
got
used
to
it
and
felt
at
home.
Every
morning,
we
got
up
early
than
our
grandparents
and
go
for
a
walk.
After
breakfast,
we
went
to
have
a
chat
with
our
new
friends
Peter,
which
we
happened
to
come
across
during
the
holiday.
Peter
was
a
native
and
quite
warm-heartedly
boy
and
he
was
familiar
to
country
life
well.
After
parting,
Peter
and
I
have
kept
write
to
each
other.
Part
4书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是高一学生李华，你校下个月将举办全市英语口语大赛,请用英语给你的朋友李雷写一封信,邀请他参加这次比赛。内容包括：
1.比赛的时间、地点
2.比赛的内容
3.发出邀请
注意：
1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
