2021年中考英语书面表达指导06-事物介绍 课件（32张PPT）

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2021
英语中考写作指导
06.
事物介绍
·
依据中考
·
精选话题
·
素材积累
·
五步成文
全国通用版
目录
contents
Methods
思路方法
01
Material
素材积累
02
Guide
写作示范
03
Models
优秀作品
04
01
思路方法
（
METHODS）
强化思路
形成习惯
审好题
·
体裁
·
人称
·
时态
·
主题
基本思路
列好纲
·
框架
·
要点
写好句
·
扩展
·
补充
·
解释
成好文
·
衔接
·
检查
时态
体裁
人称
主题
审好题
一般现在时
一般过去时
一般将来时
现在完成时
看提示
看要点
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
记叙文
议论文
说明文
应用文
列好纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
写好句
让语义更准确
利用高级词汇
不怕词数限制
短语替换单词
表达层次清晰
增强句子关联
并列以及复合
提升句子质量
表达强烈感情
感叹疑问祈使
地道英语表达
名言成语俗语
成好文
用连词
巧衔接
查错误
做检查
好书写
认真誊
02
素材积累
（MATERIAL）
积累佳句
提升质量
佳句积累
事物的基本信息
China
is
the
capital
of
China.
Here
you
will
find
many
famous
places
of
interest
such
as
the
Great
Wall.
(短语；倒装句)
Suzhou
lies
in
the
southeast
of
China,
and
it
is
known
for
its
silk.
(短语；并列句)
I
love
it
because
it
is
made
in
China.
(短语；从句)
It
looks
like
a
small
sun.
(短语)
It
is
a
tall
building
with
a
height
of
nearly
500
meters.
(高级表达)
佳句积累
事物的用途
The
clock
can
provide
you
with
suggestions
on
improving
your
sleep
according
to
the
date.
(短语)
You
can
use
it
to
know
the
temperature.
(短语)
The
bag
is
used
to
collect
stones.
(短语)
With
the
paintbrush,
I
can
draw
a
new
earth
where
there
will
be
no
pollution.
(从句)
I
have
learnt
a
lot
from
those
stamps.
(短语)
俗语谚语
Every
coin
has
its
two
sides.
事物总是有两面。
No
garden
without
its
weeds.
没有无杂草的花园。
Success
is
the
child
of
details.
成功是细节之子。
Beauty
is
the
purpose
of
art
and
the
driving
force.美是艺术的目的和推动力。
Whatever
is
worth
doing
at
all
is
worth
doing
well.凡是值得做的事，就值得做好。
03
写作引领
（GUIDE）
步步引领
实现高分
真题再现
在每个人的心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西，你想拥有什么？请
以“I
want
to
have______”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受。
要求：
1.请补全标题，如
a
football，
a
mountain
bike
或
a
magic
paintbrush
等；
2.
文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.
词数100词左右。
审好题
时态：一般将来
人称：第一人称
体裁：说明文
主题：事物介绍
列提纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
每个人都会渴望拥有某样东西。
我想拥有一支有神奇魔力的笔。
这支笔外观漂亮。
而且，它可以让画成真。
我想画一个美丽的地球。
没有污染、战争、饥饿和贫穷。
我想画许多宽敞的大房子。
世界上每个人都有一个幸福的家。
我想有一支魔笔画一个新世界。
我会尽力让这个世界变得更美好。
写好句
开头
Everyone
wants
to
have
something.
(背景)
I
want
to
have
a
magic
paintbrush.
(入题)
句子升格：
?
It’s
believed
that
everyone
longs
for
something.
As
for
me,
I
want
to
have
a
paintbrush
with
magic
power.(短语；高级词汇)
写好句
要点一：
The
paintbrush
looks
nice.
It
can
realize
whatever
I
draw.
句子升格：
?
The
paintbrush
has
a
nice
looking.
What’s
more,
it
has
the
ability
to
realize
what
I
draw.
(短语;宾语从句)
写好句
要点二：
I
want
to
draw
a
beautiful
earth.
There
will
be
no
pollution,
wars,
hunger
or
poverty.
句子升格：
?
With
the
paintbrush,
I
will
draw
a
beautiful
new
earth
where
there
will
be
no
pollution,
wars,
hunger
or
poverty.(定语从句)
写好句
要点三：
I
want
to
draw
many
nice
and
big
houses.
I
hope
everyone
can
live
a
happy
life
in
them.
句子升格：
?
I
also
want
to
draw
many
nice
and
big
houses
so
that
everyone
can
live
in
a
happy
life
in
them.
(连词；短语)
写好句
结尾
I
want
to
draw
a
beautiful
world
by
it.
I
will
try
my
best
to
make
the
world
better
and
better.
句子升格：
?
In
a
word,
I
want
to
have
a
magic
paintbrush
so
that
I
can
draw
a
beautiful
world.
I’ll
try
my
best
to
make
the
world
better
and
better.
(短语；从句)
成好文
It’s
believed
that
everyone
longs
for
something.
As
for
me,
I
want
to
have
a
paintbrush
with
magic
power.
The
paintbrush
has
a
nice
looking.
What’s
more,
it
has
the
ability
to
realize
what
I
draw.
With
the
paintbrush,
I
will
draw
a
beautiful
new
earth
where
there
will
be
no
pollution,
wars,
hunger
or
poverty.
I
also
want
to
draw
many
nice
and
big
houses
so
that
everyone
can
live
in
a
happy
life
in
them.
In
a
word,
I
want
to
have
a
magic
paintbrush
so
that
I
can
draw
a
beautiful
world.
I’ll
try
my
best
to
make
the
world
better
and
better.
In
a
word,
I
want
to
use
a
magic
paintbrush
to
make
a
beautiful
new
world.
I
will
try
my
best
to
realize
it.
04
佳作欣赏
（MODELS）
满分佳作
他山之玉
范文
I
want
to
have
a
magic
paintbrush
I
want
to
have
a
paintbrush
with
magic
power.
It
can
make
whatever
I
draw
become
a
reality.
With
the
paintbrush,
I
can
draw
a
new
earth.
There
will
be
so
pollution
on
it.
The
rivers
will
be
clean
and
the
sky
will
be
blue.
With
the
paintbrush,
I
also
want
to
draw
a
nice
home
where
people
can
live
happily
together
like
a
big
family.
I
want
to
have
the
magic
paintbrush
to
draw
a
beautiful
new
world.
佳作欣赏
01
每个人都会有许多最喜欢做的事情，请以“My
Favorite
…”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢做的事情。
要求：
l.
短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2.100词左右。
佳作欣赏
01
I
like
sports
very
much,
such
as
running,
skating,
playing
basketball.
But
swimming
is
my
favorite
sport
.
　　When
I
was
six
years
old,
my
parents
often
took
me
to
a
swimming
pool
.They
taught
me
how
to
swim.
They
told
me
not
to
be
afraid
of
water
,and
told
me
to
jump
into
water
bravely.
Later
I
became
very
interesting
in
swimming.
Swimming
is
really
very
interesting
.If
you
swim
in
the
water,
you
will
look
like
a
lovely
fish
.Great
fun.
I'm
sure
you
will
feel
very
happy.
And
the
most
important
thing
is
,if
you
swim,
you’ll
be
strong.
　　By
the
way,
I
took
part
in
the
swimming
match
last
week
in
our
town.
I
was
the
winner.
Dear
friends,
swimming
is
really
very
good
for
us.
Let’s
enjoy
swimming
.
佳作欣赏
02
你是否有过做发明家的梦想？你想发明什么？请写一篇英语短语介绍你的发明吧。
提示：1.
你的发明是什么；
2.
为什么会有这项发明；
3.
这项发明有什么用途。
要求：1.
80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.
字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
佳作欣赏
02
Clouds
bring
the
rain.
So
my
invention
is
a
cloud
controller.
It
can
be
used
to
control
rain
in
a
simple
way.
It
has
a
screen.
It
can
show
the
weather.
When
the
weather
becomes
too
hot,
it
can
let
the
clouds
cover
the
sun,
and
make
people
cool.
When
there
is
a
drought
in
a
place,
it
can
control
the
dark
clouds,
and
bring
some
raindrops.
When
there
is
too
much
rain,
it
can
keep
a
part
of
clouds
away.
And
the
weather
will
become
good
quickly.
My
invention
will
make
the
Earth
more
and
more
beautiful.
The
people
can
live
a
better
life.
狗被看作人类的朋友，也常被当作宠物，给人们带来许多乐趣。请以“______
Pet
Dog”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍你的或者别人的宠物狗。
要点：1.为什么要把它当作宠物?
　　
2.怎么对待它的?
3.你有什么感想?
注意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。
佳作欣赏
03
佳作欣赏
03
As
we
know,
dogs
are
friends
of
human
beings.
I
keep
a
pet
dog
called
Litter
Dark
as
my
friend.
It
is
a
white
dog
with
black
patches.
　　There
are
lots
of
reasons
for
keeping
dog.
First,
dog
is
really
cute
and
it
is
faithful
to
me
.
Second,
I
can
learn
responsibility
from
keeping
dog.
Third,
it
is
nice
to
see
it
grow
up.
　　This
is
my
way
to
keep
dog.
First,
I
feed
it
and
brush
it
on
time
every
day.
Second,
if
it
is
sicks,
I
will
take
it
to
see
doctor.
Third,
dogs
are
like
running.
So
I
take
it
to
the
park
every
weekend.
　　My
dog
brings
me
lots
of
fun.
I
will
love
it
more.
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