2021年中考英语书面表达指导07-理想打算 课件（37张PPT）

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2021
英语中考写作指导
07.
理想打算
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依据中考
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·
素材积累
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五步成文
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目录
contents
Methods
思路方法
01
Material
素材积累
02
Guide
写作示范
03
Models
优秀作品
04
01
思路方法
（
METHODS）
强化思路
形成习惯
审好题
·
体裁
·
人称
·
时态
·
主题
基本思路
列好纲
·
框架
·
要点
写好句
·
扩展
·
补充
·
解释
成好文
·
衔接
·
检查
时态
体裁
人称
主题
审好题
一般现在时
一般过去时
一般将来时
现在完成时
看提示
看要点
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
记叙文
议论文
说明文
应用文
列好纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
写好句
让语义更准确
利用高级词汇
不怕词数限制
短语替换单词
表达层次清晰
增强句子关联
并列以及复合
提升句子质量
表达强烈感情
感叹疑问祈使
地道英语表达
名言成语俗语
成好文
用连词
巧衔接
查错误
做检查
好书写
认真誊
02
素材积累
（MATERIAL）
积累佳句
提升质量
佳句积累
介绍自己的梦想、目标
My
parents
want
me
to
be
a
doctor,
but
I
hope
to
be
a
teacher
like
Mr.
Ding,
my
English
teacher.
(并列句)
As
for
me,
I
am
anger
to
be
an
scientist
so
that
I
can
make
great
contributions
to
our
country.
(短语；从句)
I
would
like
to
be
an
engineer
because
I
want
to
make
new
things
for
people
to
use.
(短语；从句)
My
dream
is
to
be
a
teacher.
The
reason
is
that
I
want
to
teach
students
and
help
them
succeed
in
the
future.
(短语；从句)
佳句积累
实现梦想、目标的方法
I’m
going
to
keep
a
diary
in
English
every
day
to
improve
my
writing
ability.
(短语)
I’m
sure
that
I’ll
make
progress
in
English
as
long
as
I
stick
to
working
hard.
(短语；从句)
Don’t
be
afraid
of
failure
if
you
want
to
succeed.
(短语；从句)
In
my
opinion,
I
must
work
hard
and
insist
on
my
goals.(短语)
佳句积累
如何努力
I
will
study
hard
to
get
more
knowledge
in
order
to
achieve
my
dream.
(短语)
From
now
on,
I
will
study
harder
and
harder.
(比较级)
I
know
it’s
not
easy
to
be
a
good
pianist,
so
I’m
going
to
work
harder.
I
will
keep
practicing
for
at
least
an
hour
every
day.
(短语；句式)
It’s
necessary
for
us
to
work
hard
to
achieve
our
goals.
(句式)
佳句积累
规划未来生活
I
am
going
to
take
up
a
new
hobby
which
can
make
my
school
life
more
colorful.
(短语；从句)
I
decide
to
get
along
well
with
my
teachers
and
classmates.
I’m
willing
to
care
more
about
others.
(短语)
I
plan
to
go
to
bed
early
and
get
up
early
in
order
that
I
can
live
a
healthy
life.
(短语；从句)
词组积累
努力做…
try
to
do努力做…
try
one’s
best
to
do=
do
one’s
best
to
do
竭尽全力做…
make
efforts
to
do
=
make
every
effort
to
do
尽力做…
do
what
sb
can
(do
)
to
do
尽力做…
spare
no
effort
to
do
不遗余力的做…
do
what
/
everything
sb.
can
to
do
尽某人全力做…
词组积累
打算做…
/
计划做…
intend
/
plan
to
do
打算做…
be
going
to
do
打算/计划做…
decide
to
do
决定做…
determine
to
do决定做…
make
up
one’s
mind
to
do下定决心做…
表示想/希望
want
to
do
=
would
like
to
do
想做…
hope/wish
to
do
希望做…
expect
to
do
期待着做…
desire
to
do=have
a
great
desire
to
do
俗语谚语
Where
there
is
a
will,
there
is
a
way.
有志者，事竞成。
A
dream
is
a
promise
for
life.
梦想是对生命的期许。
Sleep
can
only
dream,
only
efforts
can
realize
the
dream.
睡觉只能做梦，只有付出才能实现梦想。
Good
study
methods
can
help
us
achieve
better
results
with
less
effort.
好的学习方法可以帮助我们事半功倍。
俗语谚语
If
the
boat
of
your
dream
doesn't
come
to
you,
swim
to
it.
若梦想之船没有靠过来，就努力向它游过去。
Rome
was
not
built
in
a
day.伟业非一日之功。
No
pain,
no
gain.一分耕耘,一分收获。
One
minute
on
the
stage
needs
ten
years'
practice
off
stage.台上一分钟,台下十年功。
03
写作引领
（GUIDE）
步步引领
实现高分
真题再现
一场新冠病毒疫情在全世界蔓延，对各行各业影响很大，使人们对未来的工作选择有了新的认识和思考。请你以“What
is
my
dream
job？”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对未来职业选择的想法。
1.
要点：
1)疫情前你的梦想职业和原因；
2)疫情后你的梦想职业和原因；
3)你现阶段应该怎么做。
2.
要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
审好题
时态：一般过去时、一般现在时
人称：第一人称
体裁：说明文
主题：理想打算
列提纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
新冠疫情改变了世界。
也改变了我的梦想的工作。
过去我想当一名摄影师。
因为摄影师可以去周游世界。
疫情后，我想当一名科学家。
我要发明让人们更健康生活的东西。
我要为了这个梦想而奋斗。
努力学习；掌握更多的知识。
我梦想的职业是做一名科学家。
只要我不断努力就可以实现我的梦想
。
写好句
开头
The
COVID-?19
has
changed
the
world.
(背景)
It
has
changed
my
dream
job
as
well.
(入题)
句子升格：
?
My
dream
job
has
changed
as
the
COVID-?19
has
changed
the
world.
(从句)
写好句
要点一：
Before
the
COVID-?19,
I
wanted
to
be
a
photographer.
Then
I
could
travel
around
the
world.
句子升格：
?
Before
the
COVID-?19,
I
wanted
to
be
a
photographer
so
that
I
could
travel
around
the
world.
(从句)
写好句
要点二：
I
want
to
be
a
scientist
now.
I
want
to
invent
something
to
help
people
live
a
much
healthier
life.
句子升格：
?
I
want
to
be
a
scientist
now
because
I
want
to
invent
something
that
can
help
people
live
a
much
healthier
life.(短语)
写好句
要点三：
I’ll
struggle
to
be
a
scientist.
I’ll
try
my
best
to
work
harder.
I’ll
learn
more
knowledge.
句子升格：
?
I’ll
struggle
to
be
a
scientist.
For
example,
I
will
work
harder
and
try
my
best
to
master
more
knowledge
and
useful
skills.
(短语)
写好句
结尾
My
dream
job
is
to
be
a
scientist.
I
believe
that
I’ll
realize
my
dream
as
long
as
I
keep
working
hard.
句子升格：
?
In
short,
my
dream
job
is
to
be
a
scientist.
And
I
believe
that
I’ll
realize
my
dream
as
long
as
I
stick
to
working
hard.
(短语；从句)
成好文
My
dream
job
has
changed
as
the
COVID-?19
has
changed
the
world.
Before
the
COVID-?19,
I
wanted
to
be
a
photographer
so
that
I
could
travel
around
the
world.
However,
I
want
to
be
a
scientist
now
because
I
want
to
invent
something
that
can
help
people
live
a
much
healthier
life.
In
order
to
be
a
scientist,
I’ll
try
my
best.
For
example,
I
will
work
harder
and
spare
no
effort
to
master
more
knowledge
and
useful
skills.
In
short,
my
dream
job
is
to
be
a
scientist.
And
I
believe
that
I’ll
realize
my
dream
as
long
as
I
stick
to
working
hard.
04
佳作欣赏
（MODELS）
满分佳作
他山之玉
范文
Before
the
COVID?19，I
wanted
to
be
a
photographer,
so
I
could
travel
around
the
world,
seeing
amazing
sights,
meeting
different
people
and
experiencing
different
cultures
and
traditions.
However,
after
it,
I
want
to
be
a
scientist,
who
shoulders
even
greater
responsibilities.
The
scientist
can
invent
things
to
make
people
lead
a
more
convenient
and
healthier
life.
The
scientist
can
invent
the
things
that
make
people's
life
much
more
convenient.
What's
more,
I
want
to
make
contributions
to
the
scientific
area
in
the
future.
No
matter
what
I
want
to
be
in
the
future,
I
must
learn
to
take
responsibilities
and
challenges.
Now
I
should
study
hard
to
realize
my
dream.
佳作欣赏
01
在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间，你一定有过小小的心愿并为实现它而做出过努力。请以“My
greatest
wish
during
the
COVID?19”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.
要点：1)你在疫情期间最大的心愿是什么；
2)你是如何实现你的心愿的；
3)你实现心愿后的感受是什么。
2.
要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
佳作欣赏
01
During
the
COVID?19,
when
we
stayed
at
home
safely,
I
watched
doctors
and
nurses
save
and
look
after
patients
carefully
without
considering
personal
safety.
I
was
so
moved
that
I
wished
to
show
my
respect
and
thanks
to
these
heroes.
Therefore,
I
decided
to
make
an
MV.
I
asked
my
parents
for
help.
I
was
in
charge
of
planning
and
designing.
My
father
created
the
music,
then
my
mother
and
I
recorded
and
made
the
video
with
all
my
efforts.
At
last,
the
MV
was
seen
through
Weibo
and
has
been
liked
thousands
of
times.
By
doing
this,
I
feel
proud
and
satisfied.
I'm
glad
to
let
more
people
see
how
selfless
and
great
our
medical
workers
are!
佳作欣赏
02
规划人生,
成就未来。请以
"My
Dream
Job"
为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点:
1.你梦想的工作是什么?
2.结合经历谈谈你为什么选择它?
3.为实现梦想,你打算怎么做?
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;
2.词数80左右。短文开头已给出,
不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
be
friendly
to...,
help,
study
hard,
come
true
佳作欣赏
02
My
dream
job
is
to
be
a
doctor.
When
I
was
in
Grade
Seven,
I
was
sick
and
often
went
to
see
doctors.
The
doctors
were
very
friendly
to
me
and
they
often
cheered
me
up.
With
the
help
of
them,
I
was
getting
better.
Now
I'm
very
healthy.
Since
then
I
have
hoped
to
become
a
doctor.
I
will
study
hard
to
get
more
knowledge
in
order
to
achieve
my
dream.
I'll
give
my
love
to
the
patients
as
much
as
possible
and
help
them
out
of
illness.
To
be
a
doctor
is
really
great.
I
believe
my
dream
will
come
true
one
day.
为了解同学们的理想，我们在学校的100名学生中进行了一次调查采访。采访主要是围绕“What
do
you
want
to
be
when
you
grow
up?”和“Why?”这两个问题进行的，请你根据以下调查数据写—份以“the
dream
jobs”为主题的报告．并谈谈你自己的理想与原因。词数80个左右。(报告开头语已给出，不计入作文总词数。)
The
Dream
Jobs
　　In
order
to
help
us
form
good
ideals
(理想)，we
made
a
survey
among
100
students
in
our
school.
Here
are
the
results.
佳作欣赏
03
佳作欣赏
03
　In
order
to
know
about
the
students'
ideals,
we
made
a
survey
among
100
students
in
our
school
last
week.
Here
are
the
results.
　　Most
of
the
students
want
to
be
businessmen,
because
they
want
to
be
rich
and
buy
what
they
need
in
the
future.
More
students
are
dreaming
of
being
doctors,
because
they
are
proud
of
saving
the
sick
people
.
And
being
good
teachers
is
some
students’
dream.
They
think
it’s
a
pleasure
to
make
students
learn
more
from
them.
　　Different
students
have
different
ideals.
As
for
me,
I
want
to
be
a
policeman,
and
make
our
society
much
safer.
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