2021年中考英语书面表达指导08-健康安全 课件（36张PPT）

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2021
英语中考写作指导
08.
健康安全
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依据中考
·
精选话题
·
素材积累
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五步成文
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目录
contents
Methods
思路方法
01
Material
素材积累
02
Guide
写作示范
03
Models
优秀作品
04
01
思路方法
（
METHODS）
强化思路
形成习惯
审好题
·
体裁
·
人称
·
时态
·
主题
基本思路
列好纲
·
框架
·
要点
写好句
·
扩展
·
补充
·
解释
成好文
·
衔接
·
检查
时态
体裁
人称
主题
审好题
一般现在时
一般过去时
一般将来时
现在完成时
看提示
看要点
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
记叙文
议论文
说明文
应用文
列好纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
写好句
让语义更准确
利用高级词汇
不怕词数限制
短语替换单词
表达层次清晰
增强句子关联
并列以及复合
提升句子质量
表达强烈感情
感叹疑问祈使
地道英语表达
名言成语俗语
成好文
用连词
巧衔接
查错误
做检查
好书写
认真誊
02
素材积累
（MATERIAL）
积累佳句
提升质量
佳句积累
健康安全的重要性
It’s
true
that
health
comes
first
on
the
way
to
success
and
you
should
pay
attention
to
it.
(短语；从句)
Life
is
so
valuable
that
we
should
take
it
seriously
and
never
waste
time.
(从句)
It’s
of
great
importance
to
treasure
our
lives.
(高阶词汇)
There
is
no
doubt
that
safety
is
one
of
the
most
important
things
that
we
should
care
for.
(短语；从句)
佳句积累
如何保持健康
You’d
better
eat
more
fruit
and
vegetables
instead
of
junk
food.
(短语)
It’s
necessary
to
play
different
sports
because
we
can
keep
fit
only
if
we
exercise
more.
(句式；从句)
Early
to
bed
and
early
to
rise
makes
a
man
healthy,
wealthy
and
wise.
(表达)
To
stay
healthy,
teenagers
need
about
one
hour
of
physical
exercise
every
day.
(句式)
佳句积累
如何保证安全
If
we
are
in
danger
on
the
way,
we
should
ask
the
police
for
help
in
time.
(短语；从句)
When
we
are
surfing
on
the
Internet,
we
should
be
careful
to
make
friends
online.
(短语；从句)
You
can’t
go
swimming
alone
in
a
river,
because
it
may
be
dangerous.
(从句)
We
should
obey
the
rules
everywhere.
(短语)
俗语谚语
健康相关
An
apple
a
day
keeps
the
doctor
away.
一天一苹果，医生远离我。
He
who
has
health
has
hope.
有健康，有希望。(留着青山在，不怕没柴烧)
Health
is
the
first
wealth.
健康是第一财富。
Happiness
lies
first
of
all
in
health。幸福的首要条件在于健康。
All
work
and
no
play
makes
Jack
a
dull
boy.
只工作,
不玩耍,
聪明小伙也变儍。
Better
wear
out
shoes
than
sheets.
宁愿把鞋子穿漏,
不愿把床单磨破。
俗语谚语
安全相关
Didn't
fill
holes,
difficult
to
block.
漏洞不补，事故难堵。
The
first
step
in
the
long
life
is
safety.
漫漫人生路，安全第一步。
Safety
by
choice,
not
by
chance.
安全是选择，事故无偶然。
Safety
is
as
easy
as
ABC-
Always
Be
Careful.
安全很简单，小心不间断。
More
care,
less
cost.
多点小心，就少点代价。
03
写作引领
（GUIDE）
步步引领
实现高分
真题再现
某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园，健康生活”的征稿活动，倡导同学们“爱护校园环境，健康快乐生活”。根据以下要求用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对如何爱护校园环境的建议。
要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数100左右．
审好题
时态：一般现在时、一般过去时
人称：第一人称
体裁：说明文
主题：健康安全
列提纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
学生都希望过健康快乐的校园生活。
很高兴可以分享些我的想法。
我们要保护好校园环境。
让校园干净美丽。有助于学习和健康。
我们要有健康的生活习惯。
运动；饮食；
我们要与其他人友好相处。
快乐即健康。
希望这些建议有用。
愿每个学生都可以过健康快乐的校园生活。
写好句
开头
Students
hope
to
live
a
healthy
school
life.
(背景)
I’m
glad
to
share
some
ideas.
(入题)
句子升格：
?
Students
hope
to
live
a
healthy
school
life.
What
can
we
do
to
make
it?
I’m
glad
to
share
some
ideas.
(过渡句)
写好句
要点一：
We
should
protect
the
environment
of
our
school.
We
should
keep
our
school
clean.
It’s
helpful
to
our
study
and
health.
句子升格：
?
It’s
important
for
us
to
protect
our
school
environment.
For
example,
We
should
keep
our
school
clean,
because
it’s
helpful
to
both
study
and
health.
(句式；短语;状语从句)
写好句
要点二：
We
should
have
healthy
living
habits.
We’d
better
do
some
sports
every
day.
We
should
have
healthy
eating
habits.
句子升格：
?
We
are
supposed
to
have
healthy
living
habits,
such
as
doing
sports
every
day,
having
healthy
eating
habits
and
so
on.
(短语)
写好句
要点三：
We
should
get
on
well
with
others.
Be
happy
to
be
healthy.
句子升格：
?
We
ought
to
get
on
well
with
each
other.
As
the
saying
goes,
“
Be
happy
to
be
healthy.”
(俗语；短语)
写好句
结尾
I
hope
these
suggestions
are
useful.
I
hope
every
student
can
live
a
happy
and
healthy
school
life.
句子升格：
?
I
hope
these
suggestions
are
useful.
And
I
wish
everyone
could
enjoy
a
happy
and
healthy
school
life.
(连词)
成好文
Students
hope
to
live
a
healthy
school
life.
What
can
we
do
to
make
it?
I’m
glad
to
share
some
ideas.
First,
it’s
important
for
us
to
protect
our
school
environment.
For
example,
we
should
keep
our
school
clean,
because
it’s
helpful
to
both
study
and
health.
Second,
we
are
supposed
to
have
healthy
living
habits,
such
as
doing
sports
every
day,
having
healthy
eating
habits
and
so
on.
What’s
more,
we
ought
to
get
on
well
with
each
other.
As
the
saying
goes,
“
Be
happy
to
be
healthy.”
I
hope
these
suggestions
are
useful.
And
I
wish
everyone
could
enjoy
a
happy
and
healthy
school
life.
04
佳作欣赏
（MODELS）
满分佳作
他山之玉
范文
Students
are
supposed
to
have
a
healthy
school
life.
What
can
we
do
to
make
it?
There
are
some
ideas
to
share
with
you.
First,
it's
important
for
us
to
keep
our
school
clean.
For
example,
we
can
clean
the
desks
and
floor
every
day,
because
good
environment
is
helpful
to
our
study
and
health.
Second,
it
is
good
to
do
some
sports
every
day
like
running,
playing
basketball
and
so
on.
Third,
we'd
better
look
after
ourselves
well,
such
as
washing
hands
in
time
and
wearing
masks
when
it
is
necessary.
Finally,
if
we
always
get
along
well
with
each
other
and
keep
happy,
we'll
enjoy
a
happy
and
healthy
school
life.
I
hope
they
will
work
for
you.
佳作欣赏
01
健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会，请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法，写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。
　　（1）保持健康的重要性
　　（2）保持健康的方法
　　（3）保持健康的结论
　　（4）
（你的看法？）
佳作欣赏
01
Dear
boys
and
girls
：
　　Here
is
my
advice
about
how
to
keep
health
/
fit.
　　As
a
middle
school
student
，
first
you’d
better
do
more
exercise
such
as
playing
ball
games
running
swimming
and
jumping
rope。
Then
you
should
pay
attention
to
your
diet
or
meals.
Don’t
eat
too
much
meat
and
sugar
but
more
vegetables
and
fruit.
Third
you
need
enough
sleep
or
rest
.
Next
keep
yourself
happy.
As
people
often
say
smiling
makes
younger.
Last
you
mustn’t
drink
wine
or
smoke
.They
are
bad
for
your
health.
　　That
is
my
advice.
I
hope
you
are
healthy
and
enjoy
your
life.
Thank
you，bye！
佳作欣赏
02
良好的生活习惯让我们的生活更加舒心。请以“Good
living
habits
make
me
comfortable”为题，并根据以下要求用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的好的生活习惯是什么及它对你的影响。
要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
佳作欣赏
02
I
have
some
good
living
habits
to
share
with
you.
Let
me
introduce
them.
First,
I
like
to
eat
fresh
vegetables,
rice,
noodles,
drink
milk
and
so
on.
I
think
they
can
give
me
energy
and
keep
me
healthy.
Second,
I
enjoy
running.
Every
morning,
I
get
up
early
to
run
half
an
hour
and
this
makes
me
feel
relaxed
and
full
of
energy.
Third,
I
go
to
bed
at
9：30
after
I
finish
my
homework
every
night.
I
get
up
early
at
6：30.
I
can
sleep
9
hours
every
night.
Finally,
I
like
to
listen
to
music
and
see
the
movies.
In
a
word,
I
like
my
living
habits
and
they
are
helpful.
Having
a
healthy
body
is
really
important.
近年来全国发生数起严重的校园暴力事件，某中学九三班围绕校园安全问题召开主题班会。假定你是班长李华，以“How
to
protect
ourselves
in
campus
violence”为标题写一篇发言稿，主要包括如下内容：
1．校园暴力事件已引起广泛关注。
2．要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力。
3．遇到校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括：保持冷静，判断清楚自己的处境和可能的危险；尽一切可能避免人身伤害；及时报警。
注意：1．词数100左右；开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：增强—enhance
佳作欣赏
03
佳作欣赏
03
Dear
friends,
This
year,
some
seriously
violent
incidents
happened
in
campus,
resulting
in
very
bad
results.
The
incidents
of
campus
violence
have
drawn
widespread
attention
in
our
country.
As
a
student,
we
should
learn
some
knowledge
about
how
to
deal
with
the
violence
and
enhance
the
ability
of
self-protection.
Of
course,
if
we
meet
the
violence,
we
should
take
measures
to
protect
ourselves.
At
first,
we’d
better
keep
calm,
judge
the
situation
and
be
aware
of
the
possible
dangers.
Then,
we
should
try
our
best
to
escape
or
prevent
the
violence.
At
last
but
not
least,
we
should
call
the
police
or
teachers
as
soon
as
possible
to
avoid
the
physical
injury.
That’s
all.
Thank
you.
假如你们英语老师想举办以“How
to
keep
safe
at
school”为主题的宣传班会。请你根据以下内容写一篇100词左右的英语宣传稿。
学校存在的安全隐患
解决措施
晚上可能有坏人闯入学校
只允许校内人员进入学校
白天有时会发生打架事件
学校一定要严惩打架的学生
提示词:校内人员
school
staff　惩罚
punish
佳作欣赏
04
佳作欣赏
04
Nowadays,
there
are
all
kinds
of
accidents
in
school.
For
example,
some
bad
people
may
enter
the
school
at
night.
In
the
daytime,
some
students
fight
from
time
to
time.
What
should
the
students
at
school
do
with
these?
To
keep
safe,
we
should
follow
the
two
steps.
First,
only
allow
school
staff
to
enter
the
school.
Second,
our
school
must
punish
the
students
who
fight
badly.
Actually,
I
don’t
think
the
two
steps
are
enough
to
keep
safe.
We’d
better
always
be
careful
in
our
daily
life.
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