(共17张PPT)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能之策略
表达微技能之同义/近义词（组）替换篇
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：
主题：
结构：
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：说明文
主题：
shyness
结构：
Para
1
Para
3
Para
2
Para
4
1.文本内容与结构解读
Para
5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are
you
shy?
If
you
are,
you
are
not
alone.
In
fact,
close
to
50
percent
of
people
are
shy.
Almost
80
percent
of
people
feel
shy
at
some
point
in
their
lives.
These
days,
shyness
is
becoming
more
and
more
common.
Now,
scientists
are
trying
to
understand
shyness.
They
have
some
interesting
ideas
about
why
people
are
shy.
Is
it
possible
to
be
born
shy?
Many
scientists
say
yes.
They
say
15
to
20
percent
of
babies
behave
shyly.
These
babies
are
a
little
quieter
and
more
watchful
than
other
babies.
Interestingly,
these
shy
babies
usually
have
shy
parents.
As
a
result,
scientists
think
that
some
shyness
is
genetic.
Family
size
might
cause
people
to
be
shy
as
well.
Scientists
at
Harvard
University
studied
shy
children.
They
found
66
percent
of
them
had
older
brothers
and
sisters.
As
a
result,
they
became
shy.
At
the
same
time,
children
with
no
brothers
and
sisters
may
be
shy
as
well.
Growing
up
alone,
they
often
play
by
themselves.
They
are
not
able
to
learn
the
same
social
skills
as
children
from
big
families.
You
may
also
be
shy
because
of
where
you
were
born.
When
scientists
studied
shyness
in
different
countries,
they
found
surprising
differences.
In
Japan,
most
people
said
they
were
shy.
But
in
Israel,
only
one
of
three
people
said
so.
What
explains
the
difference?
One
scientist
says
the
Japanese
and
Israelis
have
different
opinions
of
failure.
In
Japan,
when
people
do
not
succeed,
they
feel
bad
about
themselves.
They
blame
themselves
for
their
failure.
In
Israel,
the
opposite
is
true.
Israelis
often
blame
failure
on
outside
reasons,
such
as
family,
teachers,
friends,
or
bad
luck.
In
Israel,
freedom
of
opinion
and
risk
taking
are
strongly
supported.
This
may
be
why
Israelis
worry
less
about
failure
and
are
less
shy.
For
shy
people,
it
can
be
difficult
to
make
friends,
speak
in
class,
and
even
get
a
good
job.
But
scientists
say
you
can
get
over
your
shyness.
They
suggest
trying
new
things
and
practicing
conversation.
And
don’t
forget---if
you
are
shy,
you
are
not
the
only
one.
②
④
③
①
⑤
cause
1
phenomenon
evaluation/
suggestion
cause
2
cause
3
写作思路解读
Para.
1
Are
you
shy?
If
you
are,
you
are
not
alone.
In
fact,
close
to
50
percent
of
people
are
shy.
Almost
80
percent
of
people
feel
shy
at
some
point
in
their
lives.
These
days,
shyness
is
becoming
more
and
more
common.
Now,
scientists
are
trying
to
understand
shyness.
They
have
some
interesting
ideas
about
why
people
are
shy.
要点1:
Shyness
is
becoming
more
and
more
common,
and
scientists
have
some
interesting
ideas
about
why
people
are
shy
写作思路解读
Para.
2:
Is
it
possible
to
be
born
shy?
Many
scientists
say
yes.
They
say
15
to
20
percent
of
babies
behave
shyly.
These
babies
are
a
little
quieter
and
more
watchful
than
other
babies.
Interestingly,
these
shy
babies
usually
have
shy
parents.
As
a
result,
scientists
think
that
some
shyness
is
genetic.
要点2:Some
shyness
is
genetic.
总分总
结构
写作思路解读
Para.
3:
Family
size
might
cause
people
to
be
shy
as
well.
Scientists
at
Harvard
University
studied
shy
children.
They
found
66
percent
of
them
had
older
brothers
and
sisters.
As
a
result,
they
became
shy.
At
the
same
time,
children
with
no
brothers
and
sisters
may
be
shy
as
well.
Growing
up
alone,
they
often
play
by
themselves.
They
are
not
able
to
learn
the
same
social
skills
as
children
from
big
families.
要点3:
Family
size
might
cause
people
to
be
shy
as
well.
主
题
句
写作思路解读
Para.
4:
You
may
also
be
shy
because
of
where
you
were
born.
When
scientists
studied
shyness
in
different
countries,
they
found
surprising
differences.
In
Japan,
most
people
said
they
were
shy.
But
in
Israel,
only
one
of
three
people
said
so.
What
explains
the
difference?
One
scientist
says
the
Japanese
and
Israelis
have
different
opinions
of
failure.
In
Japan,
when
people
do
not
succeed,
they
feel
bad
about
themselves.
They
blame
themselves
for
their
failure.
In
Israel,
the
opposite
is
true.
Israelis
often
blame
failure
on
outside
reasons,
such
as
family,
teachers,
friends,
or
bad
luck.
In
Israel,
freedom
of
opinion
and
risk
taking
are
strongly
supported.
This
may
be
why
Israelis
worry
less
about
failure
and
are
less
shy.
要点4:
You
may
also
be
shy
because
of
where
you
were
born,
as
different
countries/cultures
shape
people’s
attitudes
towards
failure,
which
affects
shyness.
主
题
句
写作思路解读
Para.
5:
For
shy
people,
it
can
be
difficult
to
make
friends,
speak
in
class,
and
even
get
a
good
job.
But
scientists
say
you
can
get
over
your
shyness.
They
suggest
trying
new
things
and
practicing
conversation.
And
don’t
forget—if
you
are
shy,
you
are
not
the
only
one.
要点5:
Shyness
can
cause
people
some
trouble,
but
scientists
say
you
can
get
over
your
shyness
by
trying
new
things
and
practicing
conversation.
写作思路解读
Shyness
is
becoming
more
and
more
common,
and
scientists
have
some
interesting
ideas
about
why
people
are
shy.
Some
shyness
is
genetic.
Family
size
might
cause
people
to
be
shy
as
well.
You
may
also
be
shy
because
of
where
you
were
born,
as
different
countries/cultures
shape
people’s
attitudes
towards
failure,
which
affects
shyness.
Shyness
can
cause
people
some
trouble,
but
scientists
say
you
can
get
over
your
shyness
by
trying
new
things
and
practicing
conversation.
若将上述的所有要点连句成文，便得到了这样一段概要：
点评：该概要完全覆盖了文章全部要点，但是有多处表达抄袭原文。仔细观察，我们发现本概要多处涉及表达原因的内容，
因此，在表达微技能中，我们将聚焦如何表达因果关系。
3.表达微技能之因果关系
1
2
因果关系词
原因
account
for;
be
a
result/cause
of;
be
a
(leading/major)
cause
of;
be
responsible
for;
be
a
contributing
factor;
be
to
blame（for);
lie
in
;
play
a
(major)
role/part
in;
result
from;
as
a
result/consequence
of;
because
of
due
to;
owing
to
;
on
account
of;
thanks
to
结果
bring
about;
cause
sb
to
do;
contribute
to
lead
to;
give
rise
to;
as
a
result;
accordingly;
consequently;
therefore;
thus;
so;
so
that
一、根据要求完成下列句子改写和翻译
1.不同的文化造就了人们对于失败的不同态度，因此，也造成了人们不同程度的害羞。
_______________
the
fact
that
different
cultures
shape
people’s
different
attitudes
to
failure,
people
growing
up
in
some
cultures
tend
to
be
more
shy
than
others.
Different
cultures
shape
people’s
different
attitudes
to
failure.
________________________________________,
people
growing
up
in
some
cultures
tend
to
be
more
shy
than
others.
5.牛刀小试
Due
to;
Owing
to
As
a
result;
As
a
consequence;
Consequently;
Therefore
2.
因特网的广泛使用引起了社会的巨大变化。
①
The
popularity
of
the
Internet
_________________
enormous
changes
in
society.
②
The
Internet
is
being
widely
used,
which
_______________________________________.
(用非限制性定语从句)
③
The
Internet
is
being
widely
used,__________________________________.
(用现在分词作结果状语)
5.牛刀小试
has
brought
about
has
brought
about
enormous
changes
in
society
bringing
about
enormous
changes
in
society
3.
以下是几个可能导致害羞的原因。（一句多译）
①
_____________________________________________.
(account
for)
②___________________________________________________.
(contribute
to)
③____________________________________________________.
(responsible
for)
5.牛刀小试
Here
are
some
possible
reasons
accounting
for
shyness
The
following
are
the
possible
reasons
contributing
to
shyness
The
following
may
be
the
factors
responsible
for
shyness
4.
家庭规模的大小也可能会导致害羞。（一句多译）
______________________________________.
(lead
to)
②
____________________________________.
(cause
sb.
to
do)
③
________________________________________________________.
(play
a
part
in)
5.牛刀小试
Family
size
can
also
lead
to
some
shyness
Family
size
may
also
cause
people
to
be
shy
Family
size
may
also
play
a
part
in
people’s
shyness.
5.
大量摄入盐被认为会引起高血压。(一句多译)
______________________________________________________.
(give
rise
to)
_____________________________________________________________.
(be
to
blame)
③
________________________________________________________________.
(a
contributing
factor)
5.牛刀小试
High
intake
of
salt
is
believed
to
give
rise
to
high
blood
pressure
It
is
believed
that
high
intake
of
salt
is
to
blame
for
high
blood
pressure
High
intake
of
salt
is
believed
to
be
a
contributing
factor
of
high
blood
pressure
参考范文欣赏
Shyness
is
becoming
increasingly
common.
Now
scientists
have
worked
out
the
possible
reasons
for
shyness.
Some
shyness
is
decided
by
genes.
Family
size
may
also
play
a
role.
Besides,
where
you
were
born
can
be
another
factor,
as
different
cultures
shape
people's
attitudes
towards
failure.
Surely,
shyness
can
cause
people
some
troubles,
but
scientists
say
people
can
get
over
it
by
trying
something
new
and
practicing
conversation.(共19张PPT)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能之主题词策略
表达微技能之高度概括篇
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：记叙文
主题：
a
deadly
infectious
disease
结构：
Para
1
Para
4
Para
2&3
Para
6
Para
5
1.文本内容与结构解读
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
On
the
20th
of
January
1925
in
Nome,
North
Alaska,
Dr.
Welch
diagnosed
a
Sick
boy,
Billy,
with
diphtheria,
a
deadly
infectious
(传染的)
disease
mainly
affecting
children.
The
children
of
Nome
would
be
helpless
if
it
hit
the
town.
Dr.
Welch
needed
medicine
as
soon
as
possible
to
prevent
the
sickness
from
spreading.
However,
the
closest
supply
was
over
1,000
miles
away.
What’s
worse,
the
town
was
cut
off
from
the
outside
world
a
heavy
snow
---
the
medicine
seemed
impossible.
By
January
26,
Billy
and
three
other
children
had
died.
Twenty
more
were
sick.
Nome’s
town
officials
came
up
with
a
plan.
They
would
sent
the
medicine
by
train
to
Nenana.
From
there,
dogsled
(狗拉雪橇)
drivers
—
known
as
“mushers”
—
would
carry
it
to
Nome
in
a
relay
(接力).
The
race
began
on
January
27.
The
first
musher,
Shannon,
picked
up
the
medicine
from
the
train
at
Nenana
and
rode
all
night.
His
face
was
black
from
the
extreme
cold.
②
③
①
要把握好记叙文的文章脉络必须掌握好记叙文的六个要素：时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果。
On
January
31,
a
musher
named
Seppala
had
to
cross
a
frozen
body
of
water
called
Norton
Sound.
It
was
the
most?dangerous
part
of
the
journey.
Norton
Sound
was
covered
with
ice,
which
could
break
up
without
warning.
If
that
happened,
Seppala
might
fall
into
the
icy
water
below.
He
and
the
sick
children
would
all?die.
But?Seppala
made
it
across.
A
huge
snowstorm
hit
on
February1.
A
musher?named
Kaasen
had
to
brave
this
storm.
At
one
point,
huge
piles
of
snow
blocked
his
way.
He
had
to
leave
the
trail
to
get
around
them.
Conditions
were
so
bad
that
it
was
impossible
for
him
to?find
the
trail
again.
The
only
hope
was
Kaasen’s
lead
dog.
The
dog
put
his
nose
to
the
ground,
trying
to
find
the
smell
of
other
dogs
that
had
traveled
on
the
trail.
If
Balto
failed,
it
would
mean
disaster
for
Nome.
Minutes
later,
the
dog
finally
found
the
trail.
At
5:30
am
on
February
2,
Kaasen
and
his
dog?arrived?in
Nome.
Within
minutes,
Dr.
Welch
had
the
medicine.
He
quickly
gave
it
to
the
sick
children.
All
of
them
recovered.
④
⑤
⑥
1.文本内容与结构解读
时间（when）
the
20th
of
January
1925,
January
26,
January
27,
January
31,
February
1,
February
2
地点（where）
Nome,
North
Alaska
人物
（who）
Dr.
Welch,
the
children
of
Nome,
mushers
起因
（why）
a
deadly
infectious
disease,
the
town
was
cut
off
经过
（how）
a
relay
结果（what）
All
of
them
recovered.
Para
1.
On
the
20th
of
January
1925
in
Nome,
North
Alaska,
Dr.
Welch
diagnosed
a
Sick
boy,
Billy,
with
diphtheria,
a
deadly
infectious
(传染的)
disease
mainly
affecting
children.
The
children
of
Nome
would
be
helpless
if
it
hit
the
town.
Dr.
Welch
needed
medicine
as
soon
as
possible
to
prevent
the
sickness
from
spreading.
However,
the
closest
supply
was
over
1,000
miles
away.What’s
worse,
the
town
was
cut
off
from
the
outside
world
a
heavy
snow
---
medicine
seemed
impossible.
写作思路解读
On
the
20th
of
January
1925,
a
deadly
infectious
disease
endangered
the
children’s
lives
of
Nome
and
a
heavy
snow
made
the
medicine
seem
impossible.（要点1）
一个问题：disease
写作思路微技能：主题词是全文发展的核心，统帅全文。
Para
2.
By
January
26,
Billy
and
three
other
children
had
died.
Twenty
more
were
sick.
Nome’s
town
officials
came
up
with
a
plan.
They
would
sent
the
medicine
by
train
to
Nenana.
From
there,
dogsled
(狗拉雪橇)
drivers
—
known
as
“mushers”
—
would
carry
it
to
Nome
in
a
relay(接力).
Para
3.
The
race
began
on
January
27.
The
first
musher,
Shannon,
picked
up
the
medicine
from
the
train
at
Nenana
and
rode
all
night.
His
face
was
black
from
the
extreme
cold.
写作思路解读
After
four
deaths
by
January
26,
the
officials
of
the
town
decided
to
carry
the
medicine
by
dogsled
and
the
plan
began
on
January
27.
（要点2）
方案的提出和实施：plan
Para
4.
On
January
31,
a
musher
named
Seppala
had
to
cross
a
frozen
body
of
water
called
Norton
Sound.
It
was
the
most?dangerous
part
of
the
journey.
Norton
Sound
was
covered
with
ice,
which
could
break
up
without
warning.
If
that
happened,
Seppala
might
fall
into
the
icy
water
below.
He
and
the
sick
children
would
all?die.
But?Seppala
made
it.
写作思路解读
On
January
31,
the
musher
had
to
cross
a
frozen
body
of
water
in
danger
of
losing
his
life
and
it’s
the
dangerous
part
of
the
journey.（要点3）
运输过程中遇到的主要困难之一：a
frozen
body
of
water
Para
5.
A
huge
snowstorm
hit
on
February1.
A
musher?named
Kaasen
had
to
brave
this
storm.
At
one
point,
huge
piles
of
snow
blocked
his
way.
He
had
to
leave
the
trail
to
get
around
them.
Conditions
were
so
bad
that
it
was
impossible
for
him
to?find
the
trail
again.
The
only
hope
was
Kaasen’s
lead
dog.
The
dog
put
his
nose
to
the
ground,
trying
to
find
the
smell
of
other
dogs
that
had
traveled
on
the
trail.
If
Balto
failed,
it
would
mean
disaster
for
Nome.
Minutes
later,
the
dog
finally
found
the
trail.
写作思路解读
A
huge
snowstorm
blocked
the
way
on
February
1
and
the
musher
needed
to
depend
on
the
lead
dog
to
find
the
trail
again.
Luckily,
he
finally
made
it.（要点4）
运输过程中遇到的主要困难之二：A
huge
snowstorm
Para
6.
At
5:30
am
on
February
2,
Kaasen
and
his
dog?arrived?in
Nome.
Within
minutes,
Dr.
Welch
had
the
medicine.
He
quickly
gave
it
to
the
sick
children.
All
of
them
recovered.
写作思路解读
The
medicine
finally
on
February
2
and
the
children
of
the
town
were
saved.（要点5）
最后结果：recover
若将上述的所有要点连句成文，便得到了这样一段概要：
On
the
20th
of
January
1925,
a
deadly
infectious
disease
endangered
the
children’s
lives
of
Nome
and
a
heavy
snow
made
the
medicine
seem
impossible.
After
four
deaths
by
January
26,
the
officials
of
the
town
decided
to
carry
the
medicine
by
dogsled
and
the
plan
began
on
January
27.
On
January
31,
the
musher
had
to
cross
a
frozen
body
of
water
in
danger
of
losing
his
life
and
it’s
the
dangerous
part
of
the
journey.
A
huge
snowstorm
blocked
the
way
on
February
1
and
the
musher
needed
to
depend
on
the
lead
dog
to
find
the
trail
again.
Luckily,
he
finally
made
it.
The
medicine
finally
arrived
on
February
2
and
the
children
of
the
town
were
saved.
(121
w)
写作思路解读
点评：该概要尽管覆盖了文章的全部要点，但字数严重超标，此外，有些表达过于单一、冗长，又缺乏连贯性。这些与概要写作的评分标准要求相差甚远。那么我们该如何用自己的话进行改写，让文章更简洁精炼呢？
3.表达微技能之合并句子
在概要写作阅卷的评分标准中，五档（21—25分）的评分要求为：①
理解准确，涵盖全部要点；②
能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；③
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑；④
完全使用自己的语言。这五个评分要求是有内在的逻辑关系的，可将其连接成一个句子：完全使用自己的语言，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，同时有效使用句子间的连接成分，使形成一篇结构紧凑、涵盖全部要点的概要写作。
3.表达微技能之合并句子
在此之外字数必须控制在60字左右。也就是说在找到全部要点的大前提下，必须使用相应手段使字数控制在60字左右，这也就要求概要的内容和形式都必须具备高度的概括性。
但是我们在进行概要写作时有时候会面对这样的问题：
1.一个要点需要涵盖的内容分布在多个句子之中，即使在进行初步的概括之后仍需要复数单句才能完整表达,记叙文要点信息尤为分散。
2.要点之间存在一定的相似性。这时候学会如何合并句子或者糅合存在相似性的要点就显得至关重要。
下面我们将以此文本为例，聚焦“合并句子”技能在概要写作中的运用。
1.
On
the
20th
of
January
1925,
a
deadly
infectious
disease
endangered
the
children’s
lives
of
Nome
and
a
heavy
snow
made
the
medicine
seemed
impossible.
要点一是由“and”连接的并列句，主要信息为：疫情袭击小镇；大雪使药物供给困难。经整合即为：因为一场大雪，小镇所需控制疫情的药物供给变得困难。经重新整合如下：
A
heavy
snow
made
the
medicine
for
the
disease
seem
impossible,
endangering
the
children’s
lives
in
Nome
.
要点一的整合是以“A
heavy
snow
made
the
medicine
seemed
impossible.”为主句，运用“endangering
the
children’s
lives
in
Nome”
的非谓语动词结构完成了并列句的合并。
2.
After
four
deaths
by
January
26,
the
officials
of
the
town
decided
to
carry
the
medicine
by
dogsled
and
the
plan
began
on
January
27.
要点二同样是由“and”连接的并列句，主要信息为：小镇官员最后计划以狗拉雪橇来运输药品，并于计划提出次日开始实施。经重新整合如下：
The
town
officials
finally
put
forward
a
plan
of
carrying
medicine
by
dogsled,
which
began
on
the
next
day.
3.表达微技能之合并句子
3.
On
January
31,
the
musher
had
to
cross
a
frozen
body
of
water
in
danger
of
losing
his
life
and
it’s
the
dangerous
part
of
the
journey.
4.
A
huge
snowstorm
blocked
the
way
on
February
1
and
the
musher
needed
to
depend
on
the
lead
dog
to
find
the
trail
again.
Luckily,
he
finally
made
it.
要点三和要点四在作用和存在的形式上存在一定的相似性，而且在原文中也是举例的形式存在的，因此我们不妨将要点三与要点四重新整合如下：
The
dogsled
drivers
overcame
a
lot
of
difficulties,
such
as
a
frozen
body
of
water
and
a
huge
snowstorm.
当然此句中的“such
as”也可以用“like,
for
example,
for
instance”等词替换，再做句型的相应调整。
5.
The
medicine
finally
arrived
on
February
2
and
the
children
of
the
town
were
saved.
要点五同样是由“and”连接的并列句，主要信息为：药物最终送达，小镇病儿最终得救。“and”前后连接的两个句子存在一定的因果联系，因此可以整合如下：
The
children
of
the
town
were
saved
as
the
medicine
finally
arrived.
要点五的整合中运用了一个由“as”引导的原因状语从句。
3.表达微技能之合并句子
一、运用从句、独立主格等技巧改写句子或将句子补充完整。
1.
The
meeting
was
over.
All
of
us
went
home.?(运用独立主格结构合并句子)
The
meeting
_________,
all
of
us
went
home.?
2.
If
the
condition
is
favorable,
he
may
succeed.
(运用独立主格结构合并句子)
The
condition
______________,
he
may
succeed.?
3.
Since
there
was
no
taxi,
we
had
to
walk.
(运用独立主格结构合并句子)
_________
no
taxi,
we
had
to
walk.
4.
Almost
all
metals
are
good
conductors,
and
silver
is
the
best
of
all.
(运用独立主格结构合并句子)
Almost
all
metals
are
good
conductors,
silver
__________________.
5.牛刀小试
being
over
being
favorable
There
being
being
the
best
of
all
5.甚至当空中没有飞机的时候也能在唐山市外听见飞机的声。
The
sound
of
planes
could
be
heard
outside
the
city
of
Tangshan
even
__________________________.
(运用状语从句将句子补充完整)
6.
很遗憾，因为我不是在那里出生的，所以我没有有色人种省份证。
Sadly
I
did
not
have
a
passbook
___________________________.
(运用状语从句将句子补充完整)
7.
He
is
a
great
boy.
His
name
will
be
remembered.(运用非限制性定语从句合并句子)
_____________________________________________________.
5.牛刀小试
when
no
planes
were
in
the
sky
because
I
was
not
born
there
He
is
a
great
boy,
whose
name
will
be
remembered.
8.
This
is
the
factory.
I
worked
in
the
factory
ten
years
ago.
(运用定语从句合并两个句子)
______________________________________________________________________________.
9.
He
can
speak
four
foreign
languages.
He
can
speak
English
and
Japanese.
(合并句子)
_____________________________________________________________________________.
5.牛刀小试
He
can
speak
four
foreign
languages
like/
such
as/
including
English
and
Japanese.
This
is
the
factory
where
I
worked
ten
years
ago.
/
This
is
the
factory
in
which
I
worked
ten
years
ago.
参考范文欣赏
In
January,
1925,
a
heavy
snow
made
medicine
for
the
disease
impossible,
endangering
the
children’s
lives
in
Nome.
(要点1)
The
town
officials
finally
planned
to
carry
medicine
by
dogsled
on
January
26,
which
began
on
the
next
day.
(要点2)
The
dogsled
drivers
overcame
a
lot
of
difficulties,
like
a
frozen
body
of
water
and
a
huge
snowstorm.
(要点3、4)
The
children
of
the
town
were
saved
as
the
medicine
finally
arrived
on
February
2.
(要点5)
(73w)(共22张PPT)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能之信号词策略
表达微技能之句式变化篇
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：
主题：
结构：
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：说明文
主题：Teens
lacking
enough
sleep
结构：
Para
1
Para
4
Para
2&3
Para
5
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：说明文
主题：Teens
lacking
enough
sleep
结构：
Para
1
Para
4
Para
2&3
Para
5
1.文本内容与结构解读
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Most
teens
need
about
8
to
more
than
9
hours
of
sleep
each
night.
The
right
amount
of
sleep
is
essential
for
anyone
who
wants
to
do
well
in
tests
or
sports.
And
lack
of
sleep
impacts
everything
from
a
person's
ability
to
pay
attention
in
class
to
his
or
her
mood.
It
also
damages
teens
ability
to
do
their
best
in
athletics.
Unfortunately,
Research
shows
that
many
teens
don't
get
enough
sleep,
and
more
than
20%
of
high
school
students
fall
asleep
in
class.
Until
recently,
teens
were
often
blamed
for
staying
up
late,
oversleeping
for
school,
and
falling
asleep
in
class.
But
recent
studies
show
that
adolescent
sleep
patterns
actually
differ
from
those
of
adults
or
kids.
These
studies
show
that
during
the
teen
years,
the
body's
circadian
rhythm(昼夜节奏),
which
is
controlled
by
a
biological
clock
in
the
brain,
is
temporarily
reset,
telling
a
person
to
fall
asleep
later
and
wake
up
later.
This
change
might
arise
from
the
fact
that
the
brain
hormone
melatonin（褪黑激素）is
produced
later
at
night
for
teens
than
it
is
for
kids
and
adults.
This
can
make
it
harder
for
teens
to
fall
asleep
early.
These
changes
in
the
body's
circadian
rhythm
are
in
line
with
a
time
when
we're
busier
than
ever.
For
most
teens,
the
pressure
to
do
well
in
school
is
more
intense
than
when
they
were
kids,
and
it's
harder
to
get
by
without
studying
hard.
And
teens
also
have
other
time
demands---everything
from
sports
and
other
extracurricular
activities(课外活动)
to
fitting
in
a
part-time
job
to
save
money
for
college.
Early
start
time
in
some
schools
may
also
play
a
role
in
this
sleep
deficit.
Teens
who
fall
asleep
after
midnight
may
still
have
to
get
up
early
for
school,
meaning
that
they
may
only
squeeze
in
6
or
7
hours
of
sleep
a
night.
A
couple
ours
of
missed
sleep
a
night
may
not
seem
like
a
big
deal,
but
can
create
a
noticeable
sleep
deficit
over
time.
②
⑤
④
③
①
reason1
phenomenon
reason3
reason2
写作思路解读
Para.
1:
Most
teens
need
about
8
to
more
than
9
hours
of
sleep
each
night.
The
right
amount
of
sleep
is
essential
for
anyone
who
wants
to
do
well
in
tests
or
sports.
And
lack
of
sleep
impacts
everything
from
a
person's
ability
to
pay
attention
in
class
to
his
or
her
mood.
It
also
damages
teens
ability
to
do
their
best
in
athletics.
Unfortunately,
research
shows
that
many
teens
don't
get
enough
sleep,
and
more
than
20%
of
high
school
students
fall
asleep
in
class.
Para.
2:
Until
recently,
teens
were
often
blamed
for
staying
up
late,
oversleeping
for
school,
and
falling
asleep
in
class.
But
recent
studies
show
that
adolescent
sleep
patterns
actually
differ
from
those
of
adults
or
kids.
Para.
3:
These
studies
show
that
during
the
teen
years,
the
body's
circadian
rhythm(昼夜节奏),
which
is
controlled
by
a
biological
clock
in
the
brain,
is
temporarily
reset,
telling
a
person
to
fall
asleep
later
and
wake
up
later.
This
change
might
arise
from
the
fact
that
the
brain
hormone
melatonin（褪黑激素）is
produced
later
at
night
for
teens
than
it
is
for
kids
and
adults.
This
can
make
it
harder
for
teens
to
fall
asleep
early.
biological
factor
2.写作思路解读
Para.
4:
These
changes
in
the
body's
circadian
rhythm
are
in
line
with
a
time
when
we're
busier
than
ever.
For
most
teens,
the
pressure
to
do
well
in
school
is
more
intense
than
when
they
were
kids,
and
it's
harder
to
get
by
without
studying
hard.
And
teens
also
have
other
time
demands---everything
from
sports
and
other
extracurricular
activities(课外活动)
to
fitting
in
a
part-time
job
to
save
money
for
college.
2.写作思路解读
Para.
5:
Early
start
time
in
some
schools
may
also
play
a
role
in
this
sleep
deficit.
Teens
who
fall
asleep
after
midnight
may
still
have
to
get
up
early
for
school,
meaning
that
they
may
only
squeeze
in
6
or
7
hours
of
sleep
a
night.
A
couple
ours
of
missed
sleep
a
night
may
not
seem
like
a
big
deal,
but
can
create
a
noticeable
sleep
deficit
over
time.
lack
of
sleep
2.写作思路解读
The
right
amount
of
sleep
is
essential
...
Unfortunately,
Research
shows
that
many
teens
don't
get
enough
sleep...
Para.1:(要点1)
...adolescent
sleep
patterns
actually
differ
from
those
of
adults
or
kids.
/fall
asleep
later
and
wake
up
later/a
biological
factor
Para.2&3:(要点2)
These
changes
in
the
bodys
circadian
rhythm
are
in
line
with
a
time
when
we're
busier
than
ever./the
pressure
to
do
well
in
school
/
other
time
demands
Para.4:(要点3)
Early
start
time
in
some
schools
may
also
play
a
role
in
this
sleep
deficit.
Para.5:(要点4)
要点
3.写作思路微技能之信号词策略
1
2
3
4
常见信号词
连续内容信号词语（后面会跟新的一部分内容）
also,
and,
another,
besides,
furthermore,
moreover,
as
well
(as)...
意义改变信号词（往往引出段落要点）
although,but,
despite,
different
from,
even
if/though,
however,
in
contrast,
instead
of,
in
spite
of,
nevertheless,
yet...
顺序信号词（表明顺序）
first,
second,
third,
firstly,
secondly,
thirdly,
then,
next...
举例信号词（例子常要删去）
for
example,
for
instance,
such
as,
specifically,
to
illustrate...
Most
teens
need
about
8
to
more
than
9
hours
of
sleep
each
night.
The
right
amount
of
sleep
is
essential
for
anyone
who
wants
to
do
well
in
tests
or
sports.
And
lack
of
sleep
impacts
everything
from
a
person's
ability
to
pay
attention
in
class
to
his
or
her
mood.
It
also
damages
teens
ability
to
do
their
best
in
athletics.
Unfortunately,
Research
shows
that
many
teens
don't
get
enough
sleep,
and
more
than
20%
of
high
school
students
fall
asleep
in
class.
Until
recently,
teens
were
often
blamed
for
staying
up
late,
oversleeping
for
school,
and
falling
asleep
in
class.
But
recent
studies
show
that
adolescent
sleep
patterns
actually
differ
from
those
of
adults
or
kids.
These
studies
show
that
during
the
teen
years,
the
body's
circadian
rhythm(昼夜节奏),
which
is
controlled
by
a
biological
clock
in
the
brain,
is
temporarily
reset,
telling
a
person
to
fall
asleep
later
and
wake
up
later.
This
change
might
arise
from
the
fact
that
the
brain
hormone
melatonin（褪黑激素）is
produced
later
at
night
for
teens
than
it
is
for
kids
and
adults.
This
can
make
it
harder
for
teens
to
fall
asleep
early.
These
changes
in
the
body's
circadian
rhythm
are
in
line
with
a
time
when
we're
busier
than
ever.
For
most
teens,
the
pressure
to
do
well
in
school
is
more
intense
than
when
they
were
kids,
and
it's
harder
to
get
by
without
studying
hard.
And
teens
also
have
other
time
demands---everything
from
sports
and
other
extracurricular
activities(课外活动)
to
fitting
in
a
part-time
job
to
save
money
for
college.
Early
start
time
in
some
schools
may
also
play
a
role
in
this
sleep
deficit.
Teens
who
fall
asleep
after
midnight
may
still
have
to
get
up
early
for
school,
meaning
that
they
may
only
squeeze
in
6
or
7
hours
of
sleep
a
night.
A
couple
ours
of
missed
sleep
a
night
may
not
seem
like
a
big
deal,
but
can
create
a
noticeable
sleep
deficit
over
time.
The
right
amount
of
sleep
is
essential
for...
Unfortunately,
research
shows
that
many
teens
don't
get
enough
sleep...(要点1)
is
essential
for=
It
is
important/significant/vital
for
sb.
to
do
many
teens
don't
get
enough
sleep=
lacking
sleep
is
common
among
them
①
Despite
the
fact
that
it
is
important
for
teens
to
get
enough
sleep,
lacking
sleep
is
common
among
them.
②
Though
enough
sleep
is
vital
to
teens,
many
of
them
are
short
of
sleep.
4.表达微技能之句式变化篇
要点一
But
recent
studies
show
that
adolescent
sleep
patterns
actually
differ
from
those
of
adults
or
kids....telling
a
person
to
fall
asleep
later
and
wake
up
later.
(要点2)
adolescent
sleep
patterns
actually
differ
from
those
of
adults
or
kids
=
different
from
adults
or
kids...
telling
a
person
to
fall
asleep
later
and
wake
up
later
=
teens
tend
to
sleep
later
and
get
up
later
①
Different
from
adults
or
kids,
teens
tend
to
sleep
later
and
get
up
later
due
to
a
biological
factor.
②
The
sleep
patterns
of
the
teens
are
different
from
others.
They
are
used
to
sleeping
later
and
getting
up
later
because
of
a
biological
factor.
4.表达微技能之句式变化篇
要点二
....
we're
busier
than
ever.
For
most
teens,
the
pressure
to
do
well
in
school
is
more
intense
than
when
they
were
kids,
and
it's
harder
to
get
by
without
studying
hard.
And
teens
also
have
other
time
demands...（要点3）
①
Teens
lead
a
busier
life,
because
they
have
to
bear
higher
study
pressure
and
also
face
different
challenges
from
life.
②
Teens
not
only
have
to
shoulder
higher
study
pressure,
but
also
face
different
challenges
from
life.
4.表达微技能之句式变化篇
要点三
Early
start
time
in
some
schools
may
also
play
a
role
in
this
sleep
deficit.（要点4）
①
Students
have
to
go
to
school
early,
accounting
for
another
reason
of
lacking
enough
sleep.
②
Some
schools
require
the
students
to
get
to
school
early,
which
worsens
the
problem.
4.表达微技能之句式变化篇
要点四
一、复合句变简单句
1.
This
wastefulness
has
got
us
into
the
great
trouble
we
are
in
now.
This
wastefulness
has
caused
___________________________.
2.
The
food
we
eat
seems
to
have
a
great
effect
on
our
health.
_________________________________________________.
3.
If
we
get
up
early
and
do
some
morning
exercise,
we
can
build
our
bodies
and
become
much
healthier.
①
_________________________________________,
we
can
build
our
bodies
and
become
much
healthier.
②
We
can
build
our
bodies
and
become
much
healthier
by
______________________________.
4.
Weight
loss
is
more
likely
to
be
successful
when
people
change
their
habits.
Changing
habits
_______________________________________________.
Keys:
1.
us
a
lot
of
trouble
2.
Our
food
affects
our
health
3.
Getting
up
early
and
doing
some
morning
exercise;
getting
up
early
and
doing
some
morning
exercise
4.
a
good
way
to
lose
weight/can
help
people
lose
weight
5.牛刀小试
us
a
lot
of
trouble
Our
food
affects
our
health
Getting
up
early
and
doing
some
morning
exercise
getting
up
early
and
doing
some
morning
exercise
a
good
way
to
lose
weight/can
help
people
lose
weight
二、将两个句子合并成一个句子
1.
It
is
cheaper
to
throw
them
away
than
to
repair
them.
This
has
led
to
a
great
waste
of
the
earth's
resources.
①
It
is
cheaper
to
throw
them
away
than
to
repair
them,
________________________________.
②
It
is
cheaper
to
throw
them
away
than
to
repair
them,
________________________________.
2.
We
can
watch
some
English-speaking
TV
programs
and
movies.
They
can
broaden
our
horizons.
①
We
can
watch
some
English-speaking
TV
programs
and
movies,
_______________________.
②
We
can
watch
some
English-speaking
TV
programs
and
movies,
_______________________.
Keys:
1.
which
has
led
to
a
great
waste
of
the
earth's
resources;
leading
to
a
great
waste
of
the
earth's
resources
2.
which
can
broaden
our
horizons;
broadening
our
horizons
5.牛刀小试
which
has
led
to
a
great
waste
of
the
earth's
resources
leading
to
a
great
waste
of
the
earth's
resources
which
can
broaden
our
horizons
broadening
our
horizons
三、语态变化
1.
We
should
attach
great
importance
to
getting
up
early.
Great
importance
________________________________.
2.
Some
farmers
raise
their
animals
with
additives
not
for
their
health,
but
just
to
make
a
profit.
Additives
___________(supply)
to
animals
not
for
their
health,
but
just
to
make
a
profit.
3.
We
should
read
more
magazines
and
newspapers
every
day.
__________________________________________________________.
Keys:
1.should
be
attached
to
getting
up
early
2.
are
supplied
3.More
magazines
and
newspapers
should
be
read
every
day
5.牛刀小试
should
be
attached
to
getting
up
early
are
supplied
More
magazines
and
newspapers
should
be
read
every
day
四、改变主语
1.
It
is
cheaper
to
throw
them
away
than
to
repair
them.
To
throw
them
away
is
____________________________.
2.
According
to
some
experts,
the
effect
of
technology
on
human
relationships
is
worrying.
Some
experts
______________________________________________________.
3.
Because
of
the
sports
stars,
our
life
becomes
more
exciting
and
happier.
Sports
stars
bring
__________________________________
Keys:
1.
cheaper
than
to
repair
them
2.fear/are
worried
that
technology
can
affect
human
relationships
3.
us
more
excitement
and
happiness
5.牛刀小试
cheaper
than
to
repair
them
fear/are
worried
that
technology
can
affect
human
relationships
us
more
excitement
and
happiness
五、特殊句式
How
it
affects
our
family
relationships
depends
on
our
attitude
toward
technology.（It
is...that...）
_____________________________________________________________
Key:
It
is
our
attitude
toward
technology
that
affects
our
family
relationships
5.牛刀小试
It
is
our
attitude
toward
technology
that
affects
our
family
relationships
参考范文欣赏
Getting
enough
sleep
is
important
for
teens
in
many
aspects.
However,
many
teens
lack
sleep
time
and
tend
to
fall
asleep
in
class(要点
1),
because
biological
factor
causes
them
to
possess
the
sleeping
patterns
different
from
adults’
and
kids’
(要点2).
Besides,
teens
are
busy
in
working
harder
to
catch
up
with
the
challenging
life(要点
3).
Additionally,
early
start
time
in
school
also
contributes
to
teens’
sleep
loss(要点
4).(共17张PPT)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能之策略
表达微技能之抽象名词作主语篇
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：
主题：
结构：
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：说明文
主题：
news
reader
结构：
Para
1&2
Para
4&5
Para
3
Para
6
1.文本内容与结构解读
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Technology
is
forever
changing
the
way
we
get
our
news.?Many
people
now
get
a
lot
of
their
news
on
electronic
devices,
instead
of
traditional
media,
such
as
newspapers,
television
or
radio.
An
increasing
number
of
people
also
report
turning
to
social
media
for
information.
Now,
there
is?a
new
technology?that
could
greatly
change
the
way
we
get
the
news:
computer-created
news
readers.
Recently,
China
launched
what
it
called?the
world’s
first
artificial
intelligence,
or
Al
news
presenters.
The
news
readers,
supported
by
machine
learning
technology,
are
based
on
two
real-life
Chinese
newsmen.?One
is
able
to
present
newscasts?in
English;
the
other,
in
Mandarin?Chinese.
Report
said
machine
learning
was
used
to
examine
video
images
and
sounds
of
the
two
newsmen.
Similar
technology
has
been
used
to
create
video
products
known
as
“deepfake
videos”.
A
deep
fake
is
a
video
that
looks
real,
but
was
electronically
changed.
Such
videos
can
make
people
appear
to
say
things
they
never
said.
It’s
said
that
the
Al
presenters
will
be
a
great
improvement
to
the
news
team
because
they
“can
work
24
hours
a
day”
on
its
website
and
on
social
media.
One
of
the
presenters
even
promised
to
“work
tirelessly”
to
keep
people
informed.
Some
machine
learning
experts
said
the
system
showed
off
China's
latest
progress
in
voice
recognition,
text-to-speech
technology
and
data
analysis.
Others
wondered
about?the
effects
robots
might
have
on
employment
and
workers.?Some
people
argued?that
only
low-level
jobs
requiring
heavy
labor
will
be
easily
replaced
by
robots.?Others
praised?the
technology
as
a
way
for
companies
to
make
money
from
low-cost
labor
machines.?Some
businesses?have
experimented
with
similar
technology
for
possible
use
in
news
operations.
Britain’s
BBC?recently
released
a
video
that
used
machine
learning
to
make
it
look
like
one
of
its
news
readers
speaking
different
languages.
The
London-based
company
that
developed
the
system
says
its
goal
is
to
“remove
the
language
barrier”
for
many
different
kinds
of
video
across
the
Internet.
Also,?Amazon’s
working
on
Alexa
smart
speaker
system
to
create
a
special
news
reader
voice.
Amazon
is
reportedly
preparing
to
launch
Alexa’s
news
reader
voice
in
the
near
future.
②
④
③
①
⑤
system
phenomenon
prospect
opinions
⑥
写作思路解读
Para.
1:?Technology
is
forever
changing
the
way
we
get
our
news.?Many
people
now
get
a
lot
of
their
news
on
electronic
devices,
instead
of
traditional
media,
such
as
newspapers,
television
or
radio.
An
increasing
number
of
people
also
report
turning
to
social
media
for
information.
Para.
2:
Now,
there
is?a
new
technology?that
could
greatly
change
the
way
we
get
the
news:
computer-
created
news
readers.
Recently,
China
launched
what
it
called?the
world’s
first
artificial
intelligence,
or
AI
news
presenters.
文章主题：news
reader成为人们新的获取信息的方式。（要点1）
写作思路解读
Para.
3:
The
news
readers,
supported
by
machine
learning
technology,
are
based
on
two
real-life
Chinese
newsmen.?One
is
able
to
present
newscasts?in
English;
the
other,
in
Mandarin?Chinese.
Report
said
machine
learning
was
used
to
examine
video
images
and
sounds
of
the
two
newsmen.
Similar
technology
has
been
used
to
create
video
products
known
as
“deepfake
videos”.
A
deepfake
is
a
video
that
looks
real,
but
was
electronically
changed.
Such
videos
can
make
people
appear
to
say
things
they
never
said.
主题的补充信息：news
reader的工作机制。（要点2）
写作思路解读
Para.
4:
It’s
said
that
the
AI
presenters
will
be
a
great
improvement
to
the
news
team
because
they
“can
work
24
hours
a
day”
on
its
website
and
on
social
media.
One
of
the
presenters
even
promised
to
“work
tirelessly”
to
keep
people
informed.
Some
machine
learning
experts
said
the
system
showed
off
China’s
latest
progress
in
voice
recognition,
text-to-speech
technology
and
data
analysis.
评价：news
reader的好处。（要点3）
写作思路解读
Para.
5:
Others
wondered
about?the
effects
robots
might
have
on
employment
and
workers.?Some
people
argued?that
only
low-level
jobs
requiring
heavy
labor
will
be
easily
replaced
by
robots.?Others
praised?the
technology
as
a
way
for
companies
to
make
money
from
low-cost
labor
machines.?Some
businesses?have
experimented
with
similar
technology
for
possible
use
in
news
operations.
评价：对于news
reader的担心（要点4）
写作思路解读
Para.
6:?Britain’s
BBC?recently
released
a
video
that
used
machine
learning
to
make
it
look
like
one
of
its
news
readers
speaking
different
languages.
The
London-based
company
that
developed
the
system
says
its
goal
is
to
“remove
the
language
barrier”
for
many
different
kinds
of
video
across
the
internet.
Also,?Amazon’s
working
on
Alexa
smart
speaker
system
to
create
a
special
news
reader
voice.
Amazon
is
reportedly
preparing
to
launch
Alexa’s
news
reader
voice
in
the
near
future.
附加信息：举例说明人们对于这新技术的进一步行动（要点5）
写作思路解读
然后，我们可以将这些要点串起来，连成一篇涵盖所有要点的概要写作：
Many
people
now
get
a
lot
of
their
news
on
electronic
devices,
instead
of
traditional
media.
The
news
readers,
supported
by
machine
learning
technology,
are
based
on
two
real-life
Chinese
newsmen.
AI
presenters
will
be
a
great
improvement
to
the
news
team
because
they
“can
work
24
hours
a
day”.
Others
wondered
about?the
effects
robots
might
have
on
employment
and
workers.
Some
businesses?have
experimented
with
similar
technology
for
possible
use
in
news
operations.
评点：该概要尽管覆盖了文章的全部要点，对文本的要点也作了一些整合，但存在以下问题：字数超过80字；有多处表达抄袭原文；要点的整合不够到位，导致表达过于冗长；没有组织好要点之间的逻辑关系，导致文章缺乏连贯性。这些与概要写作的评分标准要求相差甚远。
3.表达微技能之抽象名词主语
1
2
大纲出现词汇1
ability,
abortion,
abuse,
acceptance,
access,
acknowledge/
recognition,
acquaintance,
admission,
advance,
agreement,
analysis,
apology,
appreciation,
assistance,
attempt,
attention,
balance,
barrier,
belief,
birth,
bite,
bond,
boom,
boost,
campaign,
care,
challenge,
change,
collection,
combination,
commitment,
command/knowledge,
concentration,
concern,
contribution,
delay
大纲出现词汇2
delivery,
demand,
devotion,
dislike,
division,
effort,
evolution/progress,
expectation,
failure,
fear,
growth,
hope,
influence,
involvement,
motivation,
objection,
opposition,
participation,
performance,
preference,
preparation,
progress,
promotion,
recovery,
reference,
rise,
search,
shortage,
spread,
struggle,
success,
thirst,
understanding,
visit,
waste,
worry
写作思路解读
我们在概要写作中如果能关注那些有动词意义的抽象名词，用它们作主语、表语、宾语等，可以替代从句、动宾词组，使句子变得简练。
1.
It
will
be
a
serious
problem
if
we
don't
solve
the
serious
problem
of
pollution.
—
Failure
to
solve
the
problem
of
pollution
will
be
a
disaster.
2.
If
the
books
can't
be
delivered
in
time,
it
will
disturb
our
teaching
schedule.
—
Any
delay
in
the
delivery
of
books
will
disturb
your
schedule.
3.
If
we
learn
the
English
language
well,
we
will
have
more
chances
to
be
admitted
into
the
top
universities.
—
A
good
knowledge/command
of
English
means
easier
access
to
top
universities.
4.
He
lacks
experience,
so
he
is
at
a
disadvantage
compared
to
others
employees.
—
A
lack
of
experience
puts
him
at
a
disadvantage
compared
to
other
employees.
5.
If
you
compare
two
ways
of
life
carefully,
you
will
find
the
former
is
superior
to
the
latter.
—
Careful
comparison
of
two
ways
of
life
will
show
the
superiority
of
the
former
over
the
latter.
一、运用抽象名词作主语策略，使改写后的句子与原句句意保持不变。
1.
If
you
are
able
to
work
out
the
solution,
you
are
more
likely
to
be
admitted
into
the
club.
—
The
________
to
work
out
the
solution
will
more
likely
admitted
into
the
club.
—
The
________
to
solve
the
problem
will
make
your
_________
into
the
club
possible.
5.牛刀小试
ability
ability
admission
If
they
abuse
the
power,
they
will
end
up
in
prison.
—
The
________
of
power
will
put
them
in
prison.
abuse
4.
We
firmly
believe
that
our
attitude,
rather
than
our
aptitude,
that
determines
our
altitude.
—
We
hold
the
_______
that
our
attitude,
rather
than
our
aptitude,
that
determines
our
altitude.
—
We
are
firm
_______
that
our
attitude,
rather
than
our
aptitude,
that
determines
our
altitude.
3.
After
they
analyzed
the
whole
matter,
the
eventually
found
out
the
truth.
—
The
_______
of
the
whole
matter
help
them
find
out
the
truth
eventually.
—
The
_______
of
the
whole
matter
led
to
the
truth
being
found
out.
5.牛刀小试
analysis
analysis
belief
believers
5.
If
we
combine
a
balanced
diet
with
proper
exercise,
we’ll
be
healthy,
wealthy
and
wise.
—
A
balanced
diet
________
with
proper
exercise
will
keep
people
healthy,
wealthy
and
wise.
—
A__________
of
a
balanced
diet
and
proper
exercise
will
keep
people
healthy,
wealthy
and
wise.
5.牛刀小试
combined
combination
参考范文欣赏1
As
China’s
AI
news
presenters
appear,
the
new
technology
will
greatly
change
the
way
we
obtain
information.
That’s
because
machine
learning
technology
has
been
applied
to
broadcast
news
programmes
without
a
break
and
make
“deepfake
videos”,
which
displays
China’s
latest
advance
in
AI.
Some
worry
that
it
may
cause
unemployment
while
others
hold
positive
attitudes.
Lately,
Britain's
BBC,
along
with
America’s
Amazon,
also
develops
similar
products
by
using
machine
learning.
(70w)
参考范文欣赏2
Technology
has
been
updating
our
source
of
information.?Now,
another
technology,
AI
news-reader,
has
become
a
hit?which?uses
the
voices
of
two
great
Chinese
newsmen,
broadcasting
both
in
English
and
Chinese.?Though?some
people
worry
about
its
influence
on
employment,?there
are
several
advantages.
It
can
work
non-stop,?so?some
regard
it
as
a
way
of
making
money
and
do?further
research.
Many
companies,
including
BBC
and
Amazon,
are
trying
to
produce
better
learning
machine.
(75w)
