高中英语概要写作课件（10份打包）

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一、运用身份名词、抽象名词
1.
Tony
was
upset
because
he
didn’t
pass
the
exam.
_______________________________
made
Tony
upset/
_______________________________
made
Tony
upset.
2.
He
fell
ill
and
was
sent
to
the
hospital
after
working
on
the
project
around
the
clock
without
any
rest
for
three
days.
He
was
.
After
working
on
the
project
around
the
clock
without
any
rest
for
three
days,
he
fell
ill
and
was
sent
to
the
hospital.
Failure
to
pass
the
exam
Failure
in
the
exam
a
workaholic
a
workaholic:
a
person
whoworks
obsessively
and
finds
it
difficult
to
stop;
a
good
listener:
a
person
who
you
can
rely
on
to
listen
with
attention
or
sympathy;
a
shopaholic:
a
person?who
loves
to
go
shopping
and
buys
lots
of
things
they
may
not
need;
a
couch
potato:
a
person
who
spends
a
lot
of
time
sitting
and
watching
television;
a
tough
nut:
a
person
who
is
hard
to
deal
with
and
get
along
with.
3.
My
father
died
early,
and
my
uncle
takes
my
father’s
role,
who
teaches
me
many
things
at
every
step
of
my
life.
My
uncle
has
been
a
________________
to
me,
teaching
memany
things
at
every
step
of
my
life.
4.
Hearing
that
he
had
been
admitted
to
Beijing
University,
he
was
every
delighted.
______________________________________________________________________________________
filled
him
with
great
delight.
father
figure
The
news
that
he
had
been
admitted
to
Beijing
University/
Admission
to
Beijing
University
5.
After
the
manager
comparedall
the
tencandidates
carefully,
he
found
Brucewas
superior
to
the
others.
__________________________
contributed
to
the
manager’s
belief
that
Brucewas
superior
to
the
other
nine
candidates.
6.
He
and
his
father
both
believe
that
that
people
should
work
hard
for
their
living.
He
_______________________________
that
people
should
work
hard
for
their
living.
Careful
comparison
shared
his
father’s
belief
7.
Joe
lacked
experience,
so
he
was
at
a
disadvantage
compared
with
other
applicants.
__________________________
put
Joe
at
a
disadvantage
compared
with
other
applicants.
8.
A
policeman
suddenly
appeared,
which
caused
the
thieves
to
run
away.
________________________________________
caused
the
thieves
to
run
away.
A
lack
of
experience
The
sudden
appearance
of
a
policeman
9.
These
years
you
have
supported
us
generously,
which
is
meant
a
lot
to
us.
__________________________________________
has
meant
a
lot
to
us.
Your
generous
support
over
these
years
二、运用名词动化和形容词动化
1.
Who
is
____________________(主持)
the
meeting?
2.
Don’t
_________(娇惯)
your
child.
3.
The
escaped
prisoner
was
____________(使…走投无路)
at
last.
4.
Whenever
I
go,
my
little
brother
_________(紧跟，跟踪)
my
footsteps.
5.
The
road
_________(蜿蜒伸展)
away
into
the
distance.
chairing/
hosting
baby
cornered
dogs
snaked
6.
After
this
year’s
harvest,
lots
of
grapes
were
_________
(赠与)
to
his
neighbours
by
Mr.
Brown.
7.
We
were
_________
(乘大巴)
from
the
airport
to
our
hotel.
8.
Maybe
we
need
to
____________
(预约)
a
taxi
or
just
go
by
bus.
9.
Before
peaches,
pears
and
plums
_________
(结果子),
I’ll
add
a
big
sign
to
the
yard
to
encourage
sharing.
10.
The
smells
from
the
kitchen
made
our
mouths
_________
(流口水).
gifted
bussed
book/order
fruit
water
11.
It
rained
for
two
weeks
on
end,
completely
__________
(毁了)
my
holiday.
12.
Large
quantities
of
water
____________________
(用管道输送)
to
the
dry
area
since
last
year.
13.
Some
penguins
________________
(用船运送)
or
flown
back
to
colder
waters
farther
south.
14.
However,
that
increase
of
products
__________
(放缓)
down
in
2017.
ruining
have
been
piped
are
shipped
slowed
15.
The
work
he
produced
early
in
his
career
has
never
been
_________
(胜过；超过).
16.
They
hoped
the
new
project
would
__________
(促进；增进)
the
cause
of
cultural
cooperation
in
Europe.
17.
He
did
not
feel
up
to
__________
(勇敢面对)
the
journalists
at
the
airport.
18.
John
___________________
(用轮椅推)
out
of
the
hospital
because
he
had
lost
both
his
legs
below
the
knees.
bettered
further
braving
was
wheeled
19.
It
_________
(渐渐明白，开始理解)
on
me
that
the
Monkees
were
so
popular.
It
was
their
hard
work,
humor,
honesty
and
bravery
that
contributed
to
their
success.
20.
She?shoved?him?away?and?stood,screaming
at?him
as?tears?____________(止不住流下)?down?her?face.
dawned
streamed
三、运用物做主语
1.
When
I
saw
this
picture,
I
couldn’t
help
thinking
of
my
happy
childhood.
When
I
saw
this
picture,
________________
of
my
childhood
flooded
over
me.
2.
I
went
on
vacation
to
Beijing,
which
took
me
back
to
the
happiest
years
of
my
life.
________________________
took
me
back
to
the
happiest
years
of
my
life.
happy
memories
My
vacation
to
Beijing
3.
Linda
is
so
pretty
that
I
can’t
describe
how
she
is.
___________________
is
beyond
my
description.
4.
Mr.
Green
got
angry
because
Mary
had
made
the
same
mistakes
again.
__________________________________
made
Mr.
Green
angry.
5.
They
came
to
help
us
timely,
which
encouraged
us
greatly.
_________________________________________________________________
was
a
great
encouragement
to
us.
Linda’s
beauty
Mary’s
same
repeated
mistakes
Their
timely
help
(assistance)
/Their
coming
to
help
(assist)
us
timely
6.
We
drove
for
two
hours
and
arrived
at
the?beautiful
Taohua
Island.
______________________
took
us
to
the
beautiful
Taohua
Island.
7.
Miss
Lucy
is
such
an
observant
teacher
that
she
notices
everything
happening
in
her
class.
Miss
Lucy
is
so
observant
a
teacher
that
____________________
escapes
her
attention.
A
two-hour
drive
nothing
in
her
class
8.
The
teacher
insisted
that
the
girl’s
parents’
should
go
with
her.
The
teacher
insisted
on/upon
________________________________.
9.
How
difficult
it
was
for
a
woman
to
get
medical
training
at
that
time,
I
suddenly
thought.
Suddenly
______________________________
how
difficult
it
was
for
a
woman
to
get
medical
training
at
that
time.
the
girl’s
parents’
going
with
her
it
hit/occurred
to/struck
me
四、运用动态动词
1.
The
dark,
rainy
evening,
the
wind,
the
thundering
clouds
made
me
entirely
suffocated.
The
dark,
rainy
evening,
the
wind,
the
thundering
clouds
__________________________________.
2.
The
development
of
technology?makes?our
life
more
convenient.
The
development
of
technology?_________________?our
life.
held
me
entirely
in
their
power
facilitates
3.
The
letter
from
his
parents?made?him
homesick.
The
letter
from
his
parents?___________________________.
4.
Joe’s
parents
always?let?him
do
homework
when
he
arrives
home.
Joe’s
parents
always?__________________________
when
he
arrives
home.
5.
Mutual
respect?is?the
key
to
friendship.
Mutual
respect?_________
friendship.
aroused
his
homesickness
urge?him
to
do
homework
maintains
6.
We
should
try
to
improve
ourselves
through
learning
and
prepare
for
the
future.
We
should
________________________
to
improve
ourselves
through
learning
and
__________________
for
the
future.
7.
Suddenly
I
thought
of
an
idea
that
someone
had
taken
my
book.
Suddenly
_______________________________________________
that
someone
had
taken
my
book.
take
pains/
struggle
get
prepared
I
came
up
with
an
idea/an
idea
occurred
to
me
五、运用形容词
1.
Mark
was
surrounded
by
his
classmates
as
if
he
was
a
sports
star.
He
felt
cheerful
and
proud.
_______________________________,
Mark
seemed
like
a
sports
star,
__________________________.
2.
We
offer
hot
water
24
hours
every
day
in
our
hotel
and
the
swimming
pool
is
free
to
use
any
time
you
want.
Hot
water
is
____________
24
hours
every
day
in
our
hotel
and
you
can
have
_________
access
to
the
swimming
pool
any
time
you
want.
Surrounded
by
his
classmates
available
free
cheerful
and
proud
3.
In
next
three
years,
our
school
life
will
be
difficult.
In
the
________
three
years,
our
school
life
will
be
____________.
4.
Under?more
and
more?pressure,
he
felt
nervous
and
decided
to
go
to
the
beach
for
a
relaxation.
Under?_____________________
pressure,
he
felt
nervous
and
decided
to
go
to
the
beach
for
a
relaxation.
5.
The
wagon
which?was
pulled?by
a
horse?lost
its
balance
and
fell
off
the
cliff.
The
___________
wagon
lost
its
balance
and
fell
off
the
cliff.
coming
challenging
mounting/increasing
horse-drawn
6.
When
he
saw
the
terrible
scene,
he
froze
on
the
spot
and?his
eyes
were
wide
open.
He
froze
on
the
spot,??______________
at
the
horrible
scene.
7.
My
announcement
drewdifferent
reactions
from
my
friends.
My
announcement
drew
__________
reactions
from
my
friends.
8.
She
stood
besides
her
chair,
in
surprise
on
one
hand
and
embarrassment
on
the
other.
She
stood
besides
her
chair,
____________________________.
wide-eyed
mixed
surprised
and
embarrassed
六、运用副词
1.
It
was
luck
that
the
door
was
firm
enough
to
stop
the
frightening
wolf.
_______________,
the
door
was
firm
enough
to
stop
the
frightening
wolf.
Luckily
2.
It
is
reported
that
Hong
Kong-Zhuhai-Macao
Bridgecan
stand
magnitude-8
earthquake,
scale-16
typhoon
as
well
as
the
collision
with
a
300,000-ton
ship.
______________,
Hong
Kong-Zhuhai-Macao
Bridgecan
stand
magnitude-8
earthquake,
scale-16
typhoon
as
well
as
the
collision
with
a
300,000-ton
ship.
Reportedly
3.
It
is
obvious
that?China?can?make
a?difference?in?the
world?today?and?tomorrow.
_____________,
China?can?make
a?difference?in?the
world?today?and?tomorrow.
4.
I’m
not
joking.
Those
were
his
actual
words.
I’m
not
joking.
____________,
those
were
his
words.
5.
Graham
was
warned
not
to
work
so
hard
again
and
again.
_______________,
Graham
was
warned
not
to
work
so
hard.
Obviously
Actually
Repeatedly
6.
It
is
general
that,
when
taken
according
to
directions,
the
drug
has
no
side-effect.
_____________,
when
taken
according
to
directions,
the
drug
has
no
side-effect.
7.
Instead
of
replying,
he
turned
on
his
heel
and
left
the
room.
He
didn’t
reply.
_____________,
he
turned
on
his
heel
and
left
the
room.
Generally
Instead
8.
He
voted
for
the
change
and
he
expected
his
colleagues
to
do
the
same.
He
voted
for
the
change
and
he
expected
his
colleagues
to
do
____________.
9.
In
my
opinion,
I
want
to
talk
frankly
and
sincerely
with
my
child
about
it.
_____________,
I
want
to
talk
with
my
child
about
it,
__________
and
__________.
likewise
Personally
frankly
sincerely
10.
There
is
no
doubt
thatyour
contribution
will
certainly
make
the
event
a
huge
success.
__________________,
your
contribution
will
certainly
make
the
event
a
huge
success.
Undoubtedly
七、运用介词及介词的复合结构
1.
As
soon
as
he
arrived,
he
got
down
to
work
at
once.
_____________________,
he
got
down
to
work
at
once.
2.
Some
of
us
chase
happiness
and
equal
it
with
wealth
and
success,
but
they
don’t
notice
that
the
people
having
those
things
are
not
necessarily
happier.
Some
of
us
chase
happiness
and
equal
it
with
wealth
and
success,
_____________________
that
the
people
having
those
things
are
not
necessarily
happier.
On/Upon
his
arrival
without
noticing
3.
While
developing
tourism,
the
government
should
also
protect
wildlife
and
build
national
parks.
Tourist
development
should
go?______________________?the
protection?________
wildlife
and
the
creation________
nationalparks.
4.
I
will
have
the
exam
to
take
tomorrow,
so
I
have
to
stay
up
tonight.
__________________________________,
I
have
to
stay
up
tonight.
hand
in
hand
with
of
of
With
the
exam
to
take
tomorrow
5.
The
boy
led
the
way,
so
I
had
no
difficulty
in
finding
the
library.
_______________________________,
I
had
no
difficulty
in
finding
the
library.
6.
The
murderer
was
brought
to
the
room,
and
his
hands
were
tied
behind
his
back.
The
murderer
was
brought
to
the
room,
____________________________________.
With
the
boy
leading
the
way
with
his
hands
tied
behind
his
back
7.
I
opened
the
door
slowly,
concerned
and
fearful.
_________________________________________________,
I
opened
the
door
slowly.
8.
“Do
you
regret
for
what
you
have
done?”
“No!”
the
butterfly
didn’t
hesitate
and
said
firmly.
“Do
you
regret
for
what
you
have
done?”
“No!”
the
butterfly
said
firmly,
____________________.
With
concern
on
one
hand
and
fear
on
the
other
without
hesitation
9.
It
was
reported
in
China
Daily
that
there
were
13
percent
more
convenience
store
sales
in
2016
in
China
than
that
of
2015.
__________________________,
convenience
store
sales
in
2016
in
China
increased
_______
13
percent
________________
that
of
2015.
According
to
China
Daily
by
compared
to/with
八、运用连词构成的并列句和复合句
1.
If
you
work
hard,
you
will
make
it.
Work
hard,
_______
you
will
make
it.
2.
I
worked
hard
at
maths
and
I
devoted
all
my
spare
time
to
practising
it.
However,
I
failed
to
pass
the
mid-term
examination.
I
worked
hard
at
maths
________
devoted
all
my
spare
time
to
practising
it,
________
I
failed
to
pass
the
mid-term
examination.
and
and
but
3.
By
attending
this
meaningful
activity,
we
can
help
people
in
need
and
enjoy
the
satisfaction
of
helping
others
as
well.
By
attending
this
meaningful
activity,
we
can
____________________________________________
the
satisfaction
of
helping
others.
4.
Mi
Li,
my
most
respected
teacher,
is
always
giving
a
helping
hand
to
me
whenever
I
am
in
need.
Mi
Li,
___________________________________,
is
always
giving
a
helping
hand
to
me
whenever
I
am
in
need.
not
only
help
people
in
need
but
also
enjoy
who
is
my
most
respected
teacher
5.
I
don’t
want
to
end
the
friendship.
However,I
hate
others
gossiping.
I
don’t
want
to
end
the
friendship,____________________________.
6.
That
the
meeting
will
be
put
off
till
next
week
has
been
announced.
____
has
been
announced
___________________________________
___________.
but
I
hate
others
gossiping
It
that
the
meeting
will
be
put
off
till
next
week
7.
That
was
a
generation,and
in
that
generation
girls’
education
was
always
placed
second
to
boys’.
That
was
a
generation
_________
girls’
education
was
always
placed
second
to
boys’.
8.
When
the
cows
ran
down
the
road,
it
seemed
that
they
were
driven
by
an
unseen
hand.
When
the
cows
ran
down
the
road,
they
looked
___________
they
were
driven
by
an
unseen
hand.
when
as
if
9.
It’s
good
to
look
on
the
other
side
of
the
fence.
However,
you
should
make
sure
you
take
a
good
long
look.
It’s
good
to
look
on
the
other
side
of
the
fence
__________
make
sure
you
take
a
good
long
look.
10.
It
is
beneficial
to
some
people,
butat
the
same
time
it
puts
others
into
a
dilemma
over
whether
to
vote
or
not.
It
is
beneficial
to
some
people,
___________
it
puts
others
into
a
dilemma
over
whether
to
vote
or
not.
but
while
九、运用非谓语动词和独立主格结构
1.
The
other
day,
a
bomb
fell
on
the
market
in
front
of
his
house
and
destroyed
everything
in
sight.
The
other
day,
a
bomb
fell
on
the
market
in
front
of
his
house,
___________________________________.
2.
It
is
the
green
shade
from
the
trees
that
protect
us
from
the
sun,
which
makes
us
feel
more
energetic.
It
is
the
green
shade
from
the
trees
that
protect
us
from
the
sun,
____________________________________.
destroying
nearly
everything
in
sight
making
us
feel
more
energetic
3.
What
they
did
had
spread
warmth
and
love
to
others,
which
added
to
the
beauty
of
the
world.
What
they
did
had
spread
warmth
and
love
to
others,
____________________________________.
4.
When
the
moon
appeared,
they
decided
to
go
on
with
their
journey.
______________________,
they
decided
to
go
on
with
their
journey.
5.
As
the
weather
was
hot,
we
all
went
swimming.
_________________________,
we
all
went
swimming.
adding
to
the
beauty
of
the
world
The
moon
appearing
The
weather
(being)
hot
6.
If
you
are
to
learn
English
well,
a
lot
of
practice
must
be
done.
_______________________,you
must
do
a
lot
of
practice.
7.
As
soon
as
he
heard
his
grandpa
had
passed
away,
he
couldn’t
help
crying.
____________________________________,
he
couldn’t
help
crying.
8.
After
he
finished
his
homework,
he
went
out
to
play
basketball.
_______________________________,
he
went
out
to
play
basketball.
Hearing
his
grandpa
had
passed
away
To
learn
English
well
Having
finished
his
homework
9.
As
many
farmers
are
encouragedby
the
advances
in
technology,
they
have
set
up
wind
farms
on
their
land.
__________________________________________,
many
farmers
have
set
up
wind
farms
on
their
land.
10.
After
he
had
been
told
many
times,
he
finally
understood
it.
___________________________
many
times,
he
finally
understood
it.
Encouragedby
the
advances
in
technology
Having
been
told/Told
11.
A
small
plane
crashed
into
a
hillside
five
miles
east
of
the
city,
which
killed
all
four
people
on
board.
A
small
plane
crashed
into
a
hillside
five
miles
east
of
the
city,
________
all
four
people
on
board.
12.
After
the
job
was
done,
I
went
to
the
cinema,
but
I
was
told
the
film
had
been
over.
With
the
job
______,
I
went
to
the
cinema,
only
_____________
(tell)
the
film
had
been
over.
killing
done
to
be
told
13.
As
he
buried
himself
in
his
study,
he
didn’t
know
that
the
others
had
left.
①
________
himself
in
his
study,
he
didn’t
know
that
the
others
had
left.
②
________
in
his
study,
he
didn’t
know
that
the
others
had
left.
Burying
Buried
十、运用倒装句
1.
Students
can
not
only
improve
their
writing
ability
in
this
way,
but
(also)
strengthen
their
self-confidence.
________________________
improve
their
writing
ability
in
this
way,
but
(also)
strengthen
their
self-confidence.
2.
Though
we
were
cold
and
tired,the
kids’
enjoyable
and
happy
faces
cheered
us
up.
_____________________________________,
the
kids’
enjoyable
and
happy
faces
cheered
us
up.
Not
only
can
students
Cold
and
tired
though/as
we
were
3.
I
have
never
seen
such
breath-taking
wonder
——Hong
Kong-Zhuhai-Macao
Bridgein
my
life!
___________________
such
breath-taking
wonder
——Hong
Kong-Zhuhai-Macao
Bridgein
my
life!
4.
All
the
residents
rushed
out
when
they
heard
the
alarm
of
the
earthquake.
____________________________
when
they
heard
the
alarm
of
the
earthquake.
Never
have
I
seen
Out
rushed
all
the
residents
5.
All
the
candidates,
who
were
selected
from
different
fields
of
our
life
are
present
at
the
meeting.
______________________________________________,
who
were
selected
from
different
fields
of
our
life.
6.
Her
to-be-husband
is
standing
at
the
foot
of
the
tree.
________________________________
her
to-be-husband.
Present
at
the
meeting
are
all
the
candidates
Standing
at
the
foot
of
the
tree
is
7.?The?days?when?the?Chinese
people?were?looked
down
upon
are
gone?forever?.
______________________________?the?Chinese
people?were?looked
down
upon.
8.
If
he
had
listened
to
me,
he
would
not
be
in
such
trouble
now.
______________________,
he
would
not
be
in
such
trouble
now.
9.
Iwill
never
regret
what
I
have
done
to
achieve
my
goal.
_______________
regret
what
I
have
done
to
achieve
my
goal.
Gone?forever?are?the?days?when
Had
he
listened
to
me
Never
will
I
10.
While
he
was
rescuing
survivors
in
the
ruins,
he
cared
little
about
his
own
safety.
While
he
was
rescuing
survivors
in
the
ruins,
________________
about
his
own
safety.
little
did
he
care
十一、运用强调句
1.
Not
how
much
we
do
but
how
much
love
we
put
into
what
we
do
benefits
our
work
most.
___________
how
much
we
do
but
how
much
love
we
put
into
what
we
do
________
benefits
our
work
most.
It
is
that
2.
I
wonder
if
I’ve
grown
so
crazy
about
everything
to
do
with
nature
because
I
haven’t
been
able
to
be
outdoors
for
so
long.
I
wonder
if
_________________
I
haven’t
been
able
to
be
outdoors
for
so
long
_________
I’ve
grown
so
crazy
about
everything
______________
nature.
it
is
because
that
to
do
with
3.
Further
reading
made
me
realize
that
hard
work
and
determination
as
well
as
her
gentle
nature
got
her
into
medical
school.
Further
reading
made
me
realize
that
___________
hard
work
and
determination
as
well
as
her
gentle
nature
________
got
her
into
medical
school.
it
was
that
4.
What
really
sticks
in
my
mind
is
how
happy
he
looked.
①
_____________________________
really
sticks
in
my
mind.
②
What
________________
in
my
mind
is
how
happy
he
looked.
It
is
how
happy
he
looked
that
does
stick
5.
I?began?to?appreciate
their?beauty
only?when?I?reread?his?poems
recently.
①
_______________________________________________________
?I?began?to?appreciate
their?beauty.
②
I?_______________?to?appreciate
their?beauty
only?when?I?reread?
his?poems
recently.
It?was?only?when?I?reread?his?poems
recently
that
did
begin
十二、运用虚拟语气
1.
要是我不那么任性就好了！
If
only
__________________________________!
2.
要是你听从你老师的建议，你一定会通过上周的考试。
If
you
_________________
your
teacher’s
advice,
you
______________________
the
exam
last
week.
3.
要是你遵循医嘱，你的病可能会好了。
If
you
______________
the
doctor’s
suggestion,
you
____________
all
right
now.
I
had
not
acted
so
willfully
had
followed
would
have
passed
had
followed
would
be
4.
房子倒塌时，听起来好像一座山被炸毁了。
When
the
houses
fell
down,
it
sounded
as
if
_________________________________________.
5.
决堤时，看上去似乎大海来到了我们家门口。
When
the
dam
broke,
it
looked
as
if
_________________________________________________.
6.
该睡觉了。明天你还要早起去城里。
It’s
high
time
you
_____________________.
Tomorrow
you
will
have
to
get
up/rise
early
to
go
to
the
town.
a
mountain
had
been
blown
up
the
sea
had
arrived
suddenly
on
our
doorstep
went/should
go
to
bed
十三、运用修辞
1.
There
was
almost
no
wind
—
only
the
flames
of
our
fire
___________________
(作伴).
(运用拟人personification)
2.
Slowly,
the
city
_________________________
(开始出现了生机)
again.
(运用拟人personification)
3.
Our
legs
were
so
heavy
and
cold
that
they
_________________________.
(感觉就像大冰块)(运用明喻simile)
4.
The
lakes
_________________
(闪亮如镜)
in
the
setting
sun
and
looked
wonderful.
(运用明喻simile)
for
company
began
to
breathe
felt
like
blocks
of
ice
shonelike
glass
5.
Bricks
_________________________________________(就像秋天的红叶覆盖着大地).
No
wind,
however,
could
blow
them
away.
(运用明喻simile)
6.
At
the
thought
of
staying
here
for
the
night,
_____________________________________________________(我就感到悲伤，开始哭起来了).(运用暗喻metaphor)
7.
Have
you
ever
seen
_____________________________
(雪人骑自行车)?
(运用暗喻metaphor)
covered
the
ground
like
red
autumn
leaves
I
felt
a
lump
in
my
throat,
tears
welling
up
in
my
eyes.
snowmen
ride
bicycles
8.
That’s
________________________.
(看上去就像那样)(运用设问rhetorical
question)
9.
It
seemed
as
if
_______________________(世界似乎到了末日).(运用夸张exaggeration)
10.
____________________________________________(这是我一生中尝过最好吃的东西).
(运用夸张exaggeration和never倒装)
what
we
looked
like
the
world
was
at
an
end
Never
in
my
life
haveI
tasted
anything
better.
11.
When
the
shock(休克)
hit
us,
we
________________________________(感觉我们似乎要死了).
(运用夸张exaggeration)
12.For
three
days
the
water
in
the
village
wells
___________________________
(升升降降，起起伏伏).
(运用重复repetition)
felt
as
if
we
were
going
to
die
rose
and
fell,
rose
and
fell
谢谢观看(共21张PPT)
Pictures
about
some
famous
colleges
Which
is
your
dream
college?/university?
Make
a
decision
about
college
application
do
the
research
make
the
right
decision
Summary
Writing
It's
a
really
good
idea
to
visit
colleges
before
you
apply
because
their
websites
can
all?start
to
look
and
sound
the
same.?Nothing
will
give
you
the
sense
of
what
it
will
actually
be?like
to
live
on
a
college
campus(校园)?like
visiting
and
seeing
for
yourself
the
dorms,?classrooms
and
athletic
equipment
and,
of
course,
the
students.
It
seems
a
little
crazy
once?senior
year
hits
to
find
the
time
to
visit
college
campuses,
and
it
can
also
be
pricey
if
the?schools
you
are
applying
to
happen
to
be
more
than
a
car
ride
away.
But
keep
in
mind
that?you
are
making
a
decision
about
the
next
four
years
of
your
life,?and
do
all?the
research
you?can
to
make
sure
you
are
making
the
right
one.
There's
no
excuse
not
to
visit
the
schools
in
your
local
area.?In
fact,?a
lot
of
college?applications
even
ask?if
you
have
visited
campus,?and
obviously,?if
you?live
across?the
country?that
won't
be
as
much
of
a
possibility,?but
if
you?live
nearby,?go
check
it
out!
If
campus
visits
aren't
going
to
happen
before
you
apply,?at
the
very
least
you
should?find
some
time
between
applying
and
getting
your
acceptance?letters
to
visit
the
schools
you'd?like
to
attend.?It
can
save
you
a?lot
of
heartache
if
you
rule
out
now
the?things
that
you
don't?like
about
certain
campuses,?things?that
you
wouldn't
know
unless
you
actually
visit.
Now,?if
time
and
money
are
making
it
impossible,?then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs?at
College
Week
Live.?It‘s
a
chance
to
chat?online
with
admissions
officers,?students,?and?college
counselors(顾问)，and
it
won't
cost
you
a
penny!
You
can
register?for
its
online?college
fair?at
.?While
visiting
an
online?college?fair
can't
take
the
place?of
an
actual
campus
visit,?it
can
be
a
very
useful
tool
that
along
with
all
your
other
research?will
help
you
make
an
informed
decision
about
which
colleges
or
universities
you'd
like
to?attend.
Reading
for
01
Reading
for
02
Polishing
for
perfection
03
Writing
for
summary
04
CONTENT
Summary
Writing
topic
&
structure
key
information
1
College
application
PART
ONE
Reading
for
topic
&
structure
Identify
the
writing
style,
topic
and
the
structure:
Writing
style:
Topic:
Structure:
Detailed
suggestions
Exposition
how
to
make
a
right
decision
about
choosing
your
future
college
Para1:
The
topic
and
the
Suggestion
(Visit
the
college
in
person)
Para2:
Suggestion
1
Para3:
Suggestion
2
Para4:
Suggestion3
2
College
application
PART
TWO
Reading
for
key
information
Paragraph
1
It's
a
really
good
idea
to
visit
colleges
before
you
apply
It
seems
a
little
crazy
once?senior
year
hits
to
find
the
time
to
visit
college
campuses,
and
it
can
also
be
pricey
if
the?schools
you
are
applying
to
happen
to
be
more
than
a
car
ride
away.
But
keep
in
mind
that?you
are
making
a
decision
about
the
next
four
years
of
your
life,?and
do
all?the
research
you?can
to
make
sure
you
are
making
the
right
one.
Topic?
Theme?
suggestion
because
their
websites
can
all?start
to
look
and
sound
the
same.?Nothing
will
give
you
the
sense
of
what
it
will
actually
be?like
to
live
on
a
college
campus(校园)?like
visiting
and
seeing
for
yourself
the
dorms,?classrooms
and
athletic
equipment
and,
of
course,
the
students.
Detailed
Reasons
Tip2:
Delete
the
detailed
reasons,
examples.
Tip1:
The
topic
sentence
is
usually
in
the
beginning
or
at
the
end.
Tip3:
The
information
after
“But”
is
more
important.
Paragraph
2&3
There's
no
excuse
not
to
visit
the
schools
in
your
local
area.?In
fact,?a
lot
of
college?applications
even
ask?if
you
have
visited
campus,?and
obviously,?if
you?live
across?the
country?that
won't
be
as
much
of
a
possibility,?but
if
you?live
nearby,?go
check
it
out!
If
campus
visits
aren't
going
to
happen
before
you
apply,
at
the
very
least
you
should
find
some
time
between
applying
and
getting
your
acceptance
letters
to
visit
the
schools
you'd
like
to
attend.
It
can
save
you
a
lot
of
heartache
if
you
rule
out
now
the
things
that
you
don't
like
about
certain
campuses,
things
that
you
wouldn't
know
unless
you
actually
visit.
Tip2:
Delete
the
detailed
reasons,
examples.
Tip1:
The
topic
sentence
is
usually
in
the
beginning
or
at
the
end.
Tip3:
The
information
after
“But”
is
the
key
information.
Detailed
Example
Detailed
Reasons
Paragraph
4
Now,
if
time
and
money
are
making
it
impossible,
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
College
Week
Live.
It’s
a
chance
to
chat
online
with
admissions
officers,
students,
and
college
counselors(顾问)，and
it
won't
cost
you
a
penny!
You
can
register
for
its
online
college
fair
at
.
While
visiting
an
online
college
fair
can't
take
the
place
of
an
actual
campus
visit,
it
can
be
a
very
useful
tool
that
along
with
all
your
other
research
will
help
you
make
an
informed
decision
about
which
colleges
or
universities
you'd
like
to
attend.
Tip2:
Delete
the
detailed
reasons,
examples.
Tip1:
The
topic
sentence
is
usually
in
the
beginning
or
at
the
end.
Tip3:
The
information
after
“But”
is
the
key
information.
Detailed
Reasons
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
Para.4
A
topic
is
introduced:
It's
a
really
good
idea
to
visit
colleges
before
you
apply
…you
are
making
a
decision
about…
Something
about
college
application
One
suggestion:
There's
no
excuse
not
to
visit
the
schools
in
your
local
area.
Another
suggestion:
find
some
time
…
to
visit
the
schools
you'd
like
to
attend.
One
more
suggestion:
…check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
College
Week
Live…make
an
informed
decision
3
PART
THREE
College
application
Writing
for
summary
College
application
本文是一篇说明文，主要讨论了学生选择大学前要了解大学的问题。
此类文章在写概要时，首先要抓住文章主旨和关键词；其次，要对每一段的主要信息进行总结和概括；
最后在各个信息要点中，加入适当的连接词，使上下文连贯，过渡自然。
Paraphrase
（1）同义替换法:
同义词synonym替换
正话反说
（2）信息重组法：把几个简单句重组成一个并列句或复合句
（3）句式变化法：with结构
非谓语（non-finite）动词等替换从句
非限制定语从句
主被动转换
强调句/倒装句
It形式主语或宾语
（4）把上面几种方法综合起来使用
!
Paraphrase
It’s
a
really
good
idea
to
visit
colleges
before
you
apply.
Keep
in
mind
that?you
are
making
a
decision
about
the
next
four
years
of
your
life,?and
do
all?the
research
you?can
to
make
sure
you
are
making
the
right
one.
同义替换
句式变化
信息重组
衔接词
_______________
to
make
sure
you
are
making
the
right
decision
about
your
future
college,
it’s
a
really
good
idea
to
visit…
In
order
to
It’s
not
a
bad
idea/better/essential/worthwhile/advisable
for
you
to
visit
colleges
before________
to
make
sure…the
_________decision.
applying
Applying
to
colleges
is
an
important
decision,
_____
you
should
visit
the
colleges
before
you
apply.
so
in
advance
Visiting
colleges
you
want
to
attend
in
advance
is
a
good
idea,
_____
is
important
in
decision
making.
appropriate
which
Applying
to
colleges
is
an
important
decision
in
your
life,
so
you
should
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
in
advance.
Para1.
Paraphrase
同义替换
句式变化
信息重组
Para2.
There's
no
excuse
not
to
visit
the
schools
in
your
local
area.
But
if
you?live
nearby,?go
check
it
out!
There’s
no
________not
to
visit
the
schools________.
reason
nearby
There’s
____________reason
to
visit
the
schools
____________________.
within
your
reach
local
colleges
It’s
___________for
you
to
visit
the
local
colleges.
It’s
___________for
you
to
visit
the
local
campuses.
necessary
a
must
You’ll
_______________________to
visit
the
…
When
the
schools
are
near
_______________,
don’t
___________
visit
them.
find
it
a
must/necessary
hesitate
to
where
you
live
When
the
schools
are
near
where
you
live,
don’t
hesitate
to
visit
them.
good/sound
Paraphrase
同义替换
句式变化
信息重组
Para3.
If
campus
visits
aren't
going
to
happen
before
you
apply,
at
the
very
least
you
should
find
some
time
between
applying
and
getting
your
acceptance
letters
to
visit
the
schools
you'd
like
to
attend.
If
______inconvenient
for
you
to
visit
the
campuses
,
you’d
better
spare
time
to
visit
the
school
before
being
accepted/
admitted.
If
_____can’t
_________before
application,
you
should
do
it
before
the
acceptance
letters
arrive.
_______
visit
before
applying,
you
should
seize
the
chance
to
make
it
before
being
accepted.
If
campus
visits
__________________before________,
at
the
very
least
you
should
_______
some
time
_________getting
your
acceptance
letters
to
visit
the
schools
you'd
like
to
attend.
can’t
be
achieved
spare
before
make
it
application
fail
to
visit
it
Failing
to
If
you
can’t
make
it
before
application,
you
should
do
it
before
the
acceptance
letters
arrive.
you
it
is
Paraphrase
同义替换
句式变化
信息重组
Para4.
Now,
if
time
and
money
are
making
it
impossible,
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
College
Week
Live.
It
can
be
a
very
useful
tool
that
along
with
all
your
other
research
will
help
you
make
an
informed
decision.
If
time
and
money
are
making
it
impossible,
_____________the
online
college
fairs
at
College
Week
Live
can
still
be
a
useful
tool
_______________make
an
informed
decision.
If
you
have_____________________,
visiting
the
online
college
fairs
can
also
_______________in
making
the
right
decision.
__________________________,
you
should
never
forget
to
check
out
online
for
it
is
beneficial
to
your
final
decision.
no
time
or
money
for
it
be
of
great
help
checking
out
to
help
you
Time
and
money
not
permitting
If
you
have
no
time
or
money
for
it,
visiting
the
online
college
fairs
can
also
be
of
great
help
in
making
the
right
decision.
4
PART
THREE
Polishing
for
perfection
College
application
Polish
Applying
to
colleges
is
an
important
decision
in
your
life,
so
you
should
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
in
advance.
When
the
schools
are
near
where
you
live,
don’t
hesitate
to
visit
them.
If
you
can’t
make
it
before
application,
you
should
do
it
before
the
acceptance
letters
arrive.
If
you
have
no
time
or
money
for
it,
visiting
the
online
college
fairs
can
also
be
of
great
help
in
making
the
right
decision.
especially
Tips:
Polish
with
connectives,
adverbials
to
make
it
coherent.
Make
further
improvement.
.
Finally
Applying
to
colleges
is
an
important
decision
in
your
life,
so
you
should
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
in
advance,
especially
when
they
are
near
where
you
live.
(要点1,
2)
If
you
can't
make
it
before
application,
you
should
do
it
before
the
acceptance
letters
arrive.(要点3)
Finally,
if
you
do
have
no
time
or
no
money
for
it,
visiting
the
online
college
fairs
can
also
help
you
make
the
right
decision.
(要点4)
(70words)
Conclusion
Tip2:
Delete
the
detailed
reasons,
examples.
Tip1:
The
topic
sentence
is
usually
in
the
beginning
or
at
the
end.
Tip3:
Pay
attention
to
the
information
word“but”“while”
Tips
for
exploring
the
key
information:
Tips
for
paraphrasing:
（1）同义替换法
（2）信息重组法
（3）句式变化法：非谓语（non-finite）动词等替换从句
非限制定语从句
主被动转换
It形式主语或宾语
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读后续写
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4、能够准确归纳文本大意,推断叙述意图
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影
答案:上文中的句②影响了文章的逻辑与衔接。这个句子用客观的语气总结性陈述了“被忽视的孩子的统i
数量可能比实际的少”。而其他句子都用来描写一个特别的孩子,属于小说的风格,无论是意义还是文
句②与其他三句都不一致
阅读下列短文,判断其
案:本文开始部分写到母亲对于处于叛逆期的女儿很是头疼,接着叙述
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无法与开头呼应或者产生联系,情节不完整的记叙文会令读者无法理解作者的写作意图。
习读下列短文,判断其组织结构是
答所第
案:本文的
先通读整段,掌握其大意为“我带孩子
并买东西帮助
头应该为⑤。其次,梳理人物关系
现的求助
第③
oLl
以及
⑦句中的
应该指同一个人
的无序性转换让人无法理解人物之间的关系
文章中的动作先后顺序很混乱
然后决定帮助他等等。通过梳理文
的人物和事件发生的先后主次关系,重新组织本文结构,合理的顺序为:⑤①③②④⑧⑥⑦
课中讲
读后续写命题规律和趋势
续写
整
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南新东方学校优能个性
pounding
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ffered
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a
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所给短文及
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救
到续写部分克服困难得以成功救人,符合原文的情节发展。另外,续写部分与两段的开头语
也十分紧密
内
性
关
覆盖情况:续
放人的危
难
一起脱险
合理又
关键词语的使用方面,本
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构与词汇的丰
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等语法结构,更是准确
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文十分生动形象
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接紧凑连贯,句子之间意义紧密相连。也有衔接词
thoug
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作文档次和得分区间:第四档(1620分
短文及段落
原文故事的发展方向,继续写
并成
火场,复合原
发展。另外,续写的内
的开头语衔接十分紧密(共17张PPT)
Daily
News
Conservationists
have
warned
that
the
entire
species
of
the
critically
endangered
Javan
rhino
could
be
wiped
out
if
a
tsunami
were
to
strike
again.
They
once
roamed
the
jungles
of
South
East
Asia
and
India,
but
today
only
67
exist
in
the
Ujung
Kulon
National
Park,
which
was
hit
by
last
week's
tsunami.
The
park
sits
in
the
shadow
of
Anak
Krakatau,
the
volcano
which
triggered
waves
that
killed
hundreds
of
people.
The
volcano
remains
active
and
officials
are
now
rushing
to
move
them.
Javan
/'d?ɑ:v?n/:
n.
爪哇人
rhino
/'ra?n??/:
n.
犀牛
wipe
out:
灭绝
tsunami
/tsu:'nɑ?m?/:
n.
海啸
roam
/r??m/:
v./n.
漫步；游荡
jungle
/'d???ɡl/:
n.
丛林
Ujung
Kulon
National
Park:
乌戎格库龙国家公园,
trigger
/'tr?g?/:
v.
导致
Daily
News
Javan
rhinos
are
threatened
by
tsunami
and
volcano.
技术更新我们的信息来源。(update)
最近,中国新AI新闻阅读器使用的声音两大中国记者和广播中英文,已成为一个畅销品。(become
a
hit)
尽管担心这项新技术将对就业产生负面影响,工作不间断和成本低是这项新发明值得称赞的地方。(despite,
同位语从句)
除了中国,许多公司,包括英国广播公司和亚马逊,也在探索这个领域以研发更好的学习机器。（apart
from）
Technology
updates
our
sources
of
information.Recently,
China's
new
AI
news
reader
using
the
voice
of
two
Chinese
journalists
and
broadcasting
in
English
and
Chinese
has
become
a
hit.Despite
concerns
that
the
new
technology
will
have
a
negative
impact
on
employment,
the
non-stop
work
and
low-cost
of
the
new
invention
are
laudable.
Apart
from
China,
many
companies,
including
the
BBC
and
amazon,
are
exploring
this
area
to
develop
better
learning
machines.(69')
科技使人们能够获得更多的新闻。(allow
more
access
to)
最近发布的一款人工智能新闻阅读器受到了好评。该阅读器使用了两名中国记者的声音，有中文和英文两个版本。（recently-released,
is
well
received,
）
尽管这项新发明可能会给失业带来负面影响，但它因其不间断的工作和低成本而受到赞扬。(despite,
is
praised
for)
中国不是个例，包括英国广播公司(BBC)和亚马逊(Amazon)在内的全球许多公司都致力于开发新型学习机。(no
exception,
is
devoted
to
)
Technology
allows
more
access
to
news.
A
recently-released
AI
news
reader,
which
uses
the
voice
of
two
Chinese
journalists
and
comes
in
the
version
of
Mandarin
and
English,
is
well
received.
Despite
negative
impacts
on
employment
it
may
bring
about,
the
new
invention
is
praised
for
its
non-stop
work
and
low
cost.
China
is
no
exception
and
many
corporations
around
the
world,
including
BBC
and
Amazon,
are
devoted
to
new
learning
machines.
With
the
Internet
having
become
accessible
to
nearly
everyone,
it's
now
possible
to
study
and
get
knowledge
on
any
subject
without
having
to
attend
a
college,
or
going
for
a
university
course.
However,
as
convenient
as
it
may
seem,
can
learning
on
your
own
really
be
even
better
than
formal
education?
Perhaps
the
biggest
advantage
of
being
self-taught
is
that
you're
able
to
save
a
lot
of
money.
Today,
to
get
a
degree,
one
has
to
spend
thousands
of
dollars
on
colege
fees
hods,
transportation,
etc.
However,
being
self-taught
means
that
you
don'
t
have
to
pay
most
of
these
expenses.
You're
only
required
to
spend
on
Important
books.
Besides,
it's
also
possible
to
learn
faster
on
your
own,
by
concentrating
on
only
those
areas
you're
interested
in.
By
being
self-taught,
you'tl
be
able
to
avoid
unimporant
subjects
and
instead
concentrate
only
on
those
which
are
necessary
for
the
field
you
want
to
get
into.
What's
more,
unlike
a
formal
education
system,
there
are
no
set
rules
when
you
choose
to
self-educate.
This
lets
you
manage
your
study
time
based
on
your
own
convenience.
However,
there
are
also
advantages
of
formal
education.
You
can
get
a
degree
which
means
youve
achieved
a
level
of
knowledge
in
that
particular
field.
Many
companies
tend
to
prefer
those
who
have
a
college
degree.
So,
If
you
possess
a
degree,
you
automatically
gain
an
advantage
over
other
people
while
looking
for
a
job.
It
also
offers
the
student
much
more
in
terms
of
the
actual
structure
of
the
learning
process.
These
curriculum
are
designed
to
impart
as
complete
a
level
of
knowledge
on
the
subject
as
possible
and
are
based
on
tried
and
tested
methods.
Being
formally
educated
also
means
that
you'l
get
into
a
college
or
other
similar
educational
institutions,
where
you
will
be
guided
by
learned
teachers
and
other
subject
experts.
Thus,
both
formal
education
and
self-education
have
their
own
advantages.
No
one
of
these
is
better
than
the
other.
In
the
end,
the
choice
between
the
two
comes
down
to
individual
preferences
and
personal
situation.
With
the
Internet
having
become
accessible
to
nearly
everyone,
it's
now
possible
to
study
and
get
knowledge
on
any
subject
without
having
to
attend
a
college,
or
going
for
a
university
course.
However,
as
convenient
as
it
may
seem,
can
learning
on
your
own
really
be
even
better
than
formal
education?
With
the
Internet
having
become
accessible
to
nearly
everyone,
it's
now
possible
to
study
and
get
knowledge
on
any
subject
without
having
to
attend
a
college,
or
going
for
a
university
course.
However,
as
convenient
as
it
may
seem,
can
learning
on
your
own
really
be
even
better
than
formal
education?
互联网使得远程学习成为可能，但自学是否比正规教育好仍存疑问。
（make
it
possible,remain
in
doubt）
互联网使得远程学习成为可能，但自学是否比正规教育好仍存疑问。
（allow
access
to,it
is
doubtful）
随着互联网的发展，网校越来越受欢迎，但自学是否比正规教育好仍存疑问。
（with
the
aid,enjoy
popularity,
controversial）
互联网使得远程学习成为可能，但自学是否比正规教育好仍存疑问。
（make
it
possible,remain
in
doubt）
互联网使得远程学习成为可能，但自学是否比正规教育好仍存疑问。
（allow
access
to,it
is
doubtful）
随着互联网的发展，网校越来越受欢迎，但自学是否比正规教育好仍存疑问。
（with
the
aid,enjoy
popularity,
controversial）
Perhaps
the
biggest
advantage
of
being
self-taught
is
that
you're
able
to
save
a
lot
of
money.
Today,
to
get
a
degree,
one
has
to
spend
thousands
of
dollars
on
colege
fees
hods,
transportation,
etc.
However,
being
self-taught
means
that
you
don'
t
have
to
pay
most
of
these
expenses.
You're
only
required
to
spend
on
Important
books.
Besides,
it's
also
possible
to
learn
faster
on
your
own,
by
concentrating
on
only
those
areas
you're
interested
in.
By
being
self-taught,
you'tl
be
able
to
avoid
unimporant
subjects
and
instead
concentrate
only
on
those
which
are
necessary
for
the
field
you
want
to
get
into.
What's
more,
unlike
a
formal
education
system,
there
are
no
set
rules
when
you
choose
to
self-educate.
This
lets
you
manage
your
study
time
based
on
your
own
convenience.
Perhaps
the
biggest
advantage
of
being
self-taught
is
that
you're
able
to
save
a
lot
of
money.
Today,
to
get
a
degree,
one
has
to
spend
thousands
of
dollars
on
colege
fees
hods,
transportation,
etc.
However,
being
self-taught
means
that
you
don'
t
have
to
pay
most
of
these
expenses.
You're
only
required
to
spend
on
Important
books.
Besides,
it's
also
possible
to
learn
faster
on
your
own,
by
concentrating
on
only
those
areas
you're
interested
in.
By
being
self-taught,
you'll
be
able
to
avoid
unimporant
subjects
and
instead
concentrate
only
on
those
which
are
necessary
for
the
field
you
want
to
get
into.
What's
more,
unlike
a
formal
education
system,
there
are
no
set
rules
when
you
choose
to
self-educate.
This
lets
you
manage
your
study
time
based
on
your
own
convenience.
通过网络自学不仅省钱，而且在学习时间和内容上有很大的自由度。
通过网络自学不仅省钱，而且在学习时间和内容上有很大的自由度。
self-study
through
the
Internet,
not
only,
but
also,
动宾短语
be
applauded/
welcomed
for
,
in
constrast
with，
抽象名词
形容词（economical,
flexible）
However,
there
are
also
advantages
of
formal
education.
You
can
get
a
degree
which
means
you've
achieved
a
level
of
knowledge
in
that
particular
field.
Many
companies
tend
to
prefer
those
who
have
a
college
degree.
So,
If
you
possess
a
degree,
you
automatically
gain
an
advantage
over
other
people
while
looking
for
a
job.
It
also
offers
the
student
much
more
in
terms
of
the
actual
structure
of
the
learning
process.
These
curriculum
are
designed
to
impart
as
complete
a
level
of
knowledge
on
the
subject
as
possible
and
are
based
on
tried
and
tested
methods.
Being
formally
educated
also
means
that
you'l
get
into
a
college
or
other
similar
educational
institutions,
where
you
will
be
guided
by
learned
teachers
and
other
subject
experts.
However,
there
are
also
advantages
of
formal
education.
You
can
get
a
degree
which
means
you've
achieved
a
level
of
knowledge
in
that
particular
field.
Many
companies
tend
to
prefer
those
who
have
a
college
degree.
So,
If
you
possess
a
degree,
you
automatically
gain
an
advantage
over
other
people
while
looking
for
a
job.
It
also
offers
the
student
much
more
in
terms
of
the
actual
structure
of
the
learning
process.
These
curriculum
are
designed
to
impart
as
complete
a
level
of
knowledge
on
the
subject
as
possible
and
are
based
on
tried
and
tested
methods.
Being
formally
educated
also
means
that
you'l
get
into
a
college
or
other
similar
educational
institutions,
where
you
will
be
guided
by
learned
teachers
and
other
subject
experts.
而正规教育在获取学位、课程结构和师资等方面有优势。（have
advantages
in）
而正规教育在获取学位、课程结构和师资等方面有优势。（advantageous/
distinguished,
in
terms
of）
而正规教育在获取学位、课程结构和师资等方面有优势。（win
out,
when
it
comes
to）
而正规教育在获取学位、知识体系和师资等方面有优势。（have
advantages
in）
而正规教育在获取学位、知识体系和师资等方面有优势。（advantageous/
distinguished,
in
terms
of）
而正规教育在获取学位、知识体系和师资等方面有优势。（win
out,
when
it
comes
to）
Thus,
both
formal
education
and
self-education
have
their
own
advantages.
No
one
of
these
is
better
than
the
other.
In
the
end,
the
choice
between
the
two
comes
down
to
individual
preferences
and
personal
situation.
Thus,
both
formal
education
and
self-education
have
their
own
advantages.
No
one
of
these
is
better
than
the
other.
In
the
end,
the
choice
between
the
two
comes
down
to
individual
preferences
and
personal
situation.
因此，选择哪一种受教育形式取决于个人情况。（depend
on)
The
access
to
the
Internet
makes
self-study
possible,
but
is
it
better
than
formal
education?
The
advantages
of
self-
ducation
include
saving
much
money,
learning
faster
and
studying
whenever
it's
convenient
for
you.
While
the
merits
of
formal
education
are
the
degree
helping
you
have
strengths
in
job
search,
the
systematic
structure
of
knowledge
and
the
guidance
from
teachers
and
experts.
In
summary,
when
choosing
between
the
two,
you
should
take
your
preferences
and
situation
into
account.
The
Internet
allows
access
to
distance
learning,
but
it
remains
doubtful
whether
it
is
better
than
formal
education.
Self-study
online,undoubtedly,
is
applauded
for
its
low
cost
and
more
flexibility
in
study
time
and
content.
While
formal
education
is
also
advantageous
in
terms
of
getting
a
degree,
knowledge
system
as
well
as
teachers.
Therefore,
which
form
of
education
to
choose
depends
on
the
individuals.
（64’）
With
the
aid
of
the
Internet,
online
schools
are
enjoying
increasing
popularity,
but
it
is
controversial
whether
it
is
better
than
formal
education.
Self-study
through
the
Internet
not
only
costs
less,
but
also
offers
more
flexibility
in
time
and
content.
While
formal
education
wins
out
when
it
comes
to
the
degree,
the
curriculum
structure
and
teaching
staff.
Thus,
the
choice
is
up
to
you
and
depends
on
your
preference
and
situation.
(70')(共14张PPT)
Gossip
Gossip
Reading
for
structure.
Task
1:
What’s
the
topic
of
the
whole
passage?
Task
2:
How
many
parts
can
we
divide
the
passage?
Gossip
can
do
______
to
others.
Part
1
Part
2
Part
3
Para
1
Para
2-4
Para
5
An
____________
to
gossip.
harm
introduction
The
____________
of
gossip.
three
effects
Advise/
Suggestion.
The
style
of
this
article
is
______________.
argumentation
Gossip
Part
1:
Introduction
①“
Did
you
hear
what
happened
to
Adam
last
Friday?”
Lindsey
whispered
to
Tori.
②
With
her
eyes
shining
,
Tori
brags,
“
You
bet
I
did.
Sean
told
me
two
days
ago.”
③
Who
are
Lindsey
and
Tori
talking
about?
④
I
can
tell
you
that
what
they
are
saying
is
not
nice
and
not
even
true.
⑤Still,
Lindsey
and
Tori
aren’t
very
different
from
most
high
school
students,
including
me.
⑥Many
of
our
conversations
are
gossip.
Gossip
Part
1:
Introduction.
①“
Did
you
hear
what
happened
to
Adam
last
Friday?”
Lindsey
whispered
to
Tori.
②
With
her
eyes
shining
,
Tori
brags,
“
You
bet
I
did.
Sean
told
me
two
days
ago.”
③
Who
are
Lindsey
and
Tori
talking
about?
④
I
can
tell
you
that
what
they
are
saying
is
not
nice
and
not
even
true.
⑤Still,
Lindsey
and
Tori
aren’t
very
different
from
most
high
school
students,
including
me.
⑥Many
of
our
conversations
are
gossip.
What’re
the
characteristics
gossip
may
have
in
this
part?
Not
nice.
Even
not
true.
Example
Gossip
Part
2:
The
three
effects
of
gossip.
Para
2
Para
3
Para
4
①An
important
negative
effect
of
gossip
is
that
it
can
hurt
the
person
being
talked
about.
secret
lie
cause
pain
②The
answer
lies
in
another
effect
of
gossip:
the
satisfaction
it
gives
us.
important
belonging
superiority
①Gossip
can
have
a
third
effect:
it
strengthens
unwritten,
unspoken
rules
about
how
people
should
act.
influencing
behavior
in
a
group
Gossip
Part
3:
Conclusion.
①The
effects
of
gossip
vary
depending
on
the
situation.
②The
next
time
you
feel
the
urge
to
spread
the
latest
news,
think
about
why
you
want
to
gossip
and
what
effects
your
“juicy
story”
might
have.
Before
______________________,
we
should
___________.
spreading
the
latest
news
think
twice
Part
1
Part
2
Part
3
Many
of
our
conversations
are
gossip.
Before
spreading
the
latest
news,
we
should
think
twice.
Gossip
Gossip
Work
out
an
excellent
summary.
⑥Many
of
our
conversations
are
gossip.
Gossip
Work
out
an
excellent
summary.
Gossip
is
a
____________________
among
high
school
students.
Many
_________________
have
conversations
which
are
gossip.
______
is
______
talked
by
many
high
school
students.
Gossip
is
a
_____
thing
_______
many
high
school
students.
high
school
students
Gossip
usual
often
among
common
phenomenon
Gossip
Work
out
an
excellent
summary.
TIPs:
Transform;
Change;
Simplify;
Replace;
Use
linking
words;
Combine
some
key
points;
……
KEEP
TO
THE
AUTHOR’S
TONE！
(遵循原文语气)
Part
1
Part
2
Part
3
Gossip
is
a
common
phenomenon
among
high
school
students.
Before
spreading
the
latest
news,
we
should
think
twice.
Gossip
Gossip
Work
out
an
excellent
summary.
Part
1
Part
2
Part
3
Gossip
is
a
common
phenomenon
among
high
school
students.
Gossip
has
negative
effects.
It
can
hurt
the
person
being
talked
about
because
people
spread
his/her
secrets
or
even
rumors.
Spreading
gossip
can
give
people
satisfaction,
which
includes
the
sense
of
belonging
and
superiority,
and
people’s
feeling
importance.
Gossip
strengthens
unwritten,
unspoken
rules
about
how
people
should
act,
and
influences
group
behaviors.
Before
spreading
the
latest
news,
we
should
think
twice.
Gossip
Gossip
Work
out
an
excellent
summary.
Gossip,
a
common
phenomenon
among
high
school
students,
can
actually
be
quite
harmful.
With
secrets
or
even
rumors
being
spread,
the
victim
will
suffer
a
lot
mentally
while
the
gossip
(gossiper)
himself
gets
some
satisfaction.
Worse
still,
gossip
will
probably
have
a
negative
influence
on
all
group
members,
naturally
restraining
their
behaviors.
Therefore,
before
spreading
the
gossip,
we
should
think
twice.
Gossip
A
possible
version
Gossip,
a
common
phenomenon
among
high
school
students,
can
actually
be
quite
harmful.
Secrets
or
even
lies
being
spread,
the
victim
will
suffer
a
lot
mentally,
although
the
gossip
(gossiper)
himself
gets
some
so-called
satisfaction.
Worse
still,
in
a
group,
gossip
about
another
person
will
probably
insert
a
negative
influence
on
all
group
members,
naturally
restraining
their
behavior.
Therefore,
think
twice
before
you
feel
like
starting
gossip.
Gossip
A
possible
version(共21张PPT)
台州一中
读后续写
2016.5.18
met
each
other
and
fell
in
love
got
married
and
had
babies
the
Goddess
got
angry
forced
to
leave
each
other
cross
the
Milky
Way
to
meet
only
once
a
year
The
Story
of
The
Herd
Boy
and
The
Weaving
Girl
If
the
story
doesn't
end
here,
imagine...
auctioneer拍卖人
__________________
bidder出价人
___________________
lot拍卖物
__________________________________
__________________________
for
appreciation
and
for
sale
fine
pieces
of
artistry
and
craftsmanship
An
auction
conduct
the
auction
make
a
bid
for
the
lot
Who:
What:
Para1
I
was
taken
to
an
______
at
the
___________
downtown
where
everything
was
for
______.
Para2.3.4
Since
nothing
______
my
eye,
I
climbed
upstairs
and
ate
some
_____
while
______(lean)
on
the
railing(栏杆).
As
I
pulled
a
pack
of
mints
from
my
______
to
get
rid
of
onion
_______,
I
_________
pull
out
my
keychain,
which
dropped
inside
an
expensive
_____.
I
ran
downstairs
to
stage
a
_______
but
unfortunately
my
hand
was
______.
I
felt
__________
Para5.6.7
What's
worse,
I
heard
the
_________
began
the
auction
with
the
vase.
Everyone
was
walking
toward
me,
including
my
________.
auction
art
gallery
caught
snacks
leaning
accidentally
vase
rescue
stuck
embarrassed
auctioneer
the
author;
his
parents;
auctioneer
sale
pocket
breath
parents
Para(2.3.4)
Para(8)
Para(1)
Para(5.6.7)
A.Development
B.
Climax(高潮)
C.
Beginning
D.
End
What's
the
style
of
the
passage?
A.
Narration(记叙)
B.
Exposition(说明)
C.
Argumentation(议论)
The
underlined
key
words:
auction
parents
snacks
and
drinks
keychain
vase
dropped
rescue
my
hand
stuck
auctioneer
underlined
words（选5个以上）
who
(人物）：
scene（场景）：
vase（事件）：
parents
auctioneer
auction
vase
keychain
dropped
my
hand
stuck
rescue
？
Focus
on
the
connection
of
the
two
given
sentences
Paragraph
7:
Everyone
was
walking
toward
me,
including
my
parents.
Paragraph
8:
My
dad
leaned
in
close
and
whispered
in
the
auctioneer’s
ear.
It
was
my
dad
who
got
me
out
of
trouble.
in
trouble
my
dad
wisdom/
idea
get
me
out
of
trouble
In
Para7,
I
told
my
dad
that
I
was
in
trouble.
In
Para8,
my
dad
came
up
with
an
idea
to
get
me
out
of...
Paragraph
7:
Everyone
was
walking
toward
me,
including
my
parents.
Q1:
What's
their
feeling
when
seeing
me
holding
a
vase?
embarrassed/nervous
Q2:
How
would
I
feel?
surprised
Q3:
What
would
my
parents
do?
asked
for
what
had
happened
Paragraph
7:
Everyone
was
walking
toward
me,
including
my
parents.
1.
They
were
very
surprised.
2.
I
felt
very
embarrassed
and
nervous.
3.
My
dad
asked
me
what
had
happened.
4.
I
told
the
fact
to
my
dad.
The
underlined
key
words:
auction
parents
snacks
and
drinks
keychain
vase
dropped
rescue
my
hand
stuck
auctioneer
My
hand
was
stuck
in
the
vase.
add
some
details
Use
advanced
words,
phrases
&
sentences
Use
transitional
words（过渡语）
Paragraph
7:
Everyone
was
walking
towards
me,
including
my
parents.
They
were
very
surprised.
I
felt
very
embarrassed
and
nervous.
My
dad
asked
me
what
had
happened.
I
told
the
fact
to
my
dad.
With
the
entire
room
staring
at
me,
they
were
whispering
in
surprise
why
I
was
holding
the
vase.
As
a
result,
I
lowered
my
head
with
embarrassment,
standing
there
like
a
fool.
Meanwhile,
I
was
so
nervous
that
my
heart
was
beating
very
fast.
Then
my
dad
made
his
way
to
me
and
asked,
“What
are
you
doing?”
Nothing
was
going
to
sound
more
unbelievable
than
the
truth.
“My
hand
is
stuck,”
I
said
in
a
low
voice.
“Oh,
Mark,”
my
mom
cried.
Paragraph
7:
Everyone
was
walking
towards
me,
including
my
parents.
With
the
entire
room
staring
at
me,
they
were
whispering
in
surprise
why
I
was
holding
the
vase.
As
a
result,
I
lowered
my
head
with
embarrassment,
standing
there
like
a
fool.
Meanwhile,
I
was
so
nervous
that
my
heart
was
beating
very
fast.
Then
my
dad
made
his
way
to
me
and
asked,
“What
are
you
doing?”Nothing
was
going
to
sound
more
unbelievable
than
the
truth.
“My
hand
is
stuck,”
I
said
in
a
low
voice.
“Oh,
Mark,”
my
mom
cried.
add
some
details
Use
advanced
words,
phrases
&
sentences
Proper
transition
Paragraph
8:
My
dad
leaned
in
close
&
whispered
in
the
auctioneer’s
ear.
Q1:
What
would
my
dad
whisper
to
the
auctioneer?
Yes.
Q2:
Did
they
agree
or
not?
told
my
trouble
and
asked
if
he
could
buy
the
vase
Q3:
How
did
my
dad
get
my
hand
out
of
the
vase?
used
vegetable
oil/soapy
water
to
slide
my
hand
out
Paragraph
8:
My
dad
leaned
in
close
and
whispered
in
the
auctioneer’s
ear.
1.
My
dad
told
the
fact
to
him
and
decided
to
buy
the
vase.
2.
The
auctioneer
asked
for
agreement.
3.
Nobody
opposed
and
my
parents
took
me
home
with
the
vase.
4.
My
dad
used
oil
to
get
my
hand
out
together
with
the
keychain.
The
underlined
key
words:
auction
parents
snacks
and
drinks
keychain
vase
dropped
rescue
my
hand
stuck
auctioneer
The
way
to
get
me
out
of
the
vase
Paragraph
8:
My
dad
leaned
in
close
and
whispered
in
the
auctioneer’s
ear.
The
auctioneer
nodded
and
spoke,
“Ladies
and
gentlemen,
since
it
appears
this
vase
also
comes
with
a
red-faced
young
man,
are
there
any
objections
to
letting
his
parents
purchase
the
piece
at
a
reasonable
price?”
I
heard
some
laughs
at
the
idea
of
a
bidding
war
breaking
out
for
a
vase
with
me
attached,
but
luckily
no
one
did.
“Sold
to
the
parents
of
the,
uh,
lucky
young
man!”
The
auctioneer
announced.
When
we
got
home
and
I
was
more
relaxed,
my
dad
dipped
in
some
vegetable
oil
and
I
was
able
to
slide
my
hand
out,
with
my
keychain
of
course.
I
hoped
the
auctioneer
would
start
with
the
paintings.
The
auction
chose
the
vase
as
the
first
piece
for
sale.
I
tried
desperately
to
get
the
keychain
out.
My
hand
was
stuck.
I
leaned
on
the
railing
while
enjoying
my
snacks.
I
stood
in
the
middle
of
an
art
gallery
with
my
hand
stuck
in
the
vase.
I
pulled
a
pack
of
mints
from
my
pocket.
I
pulled
out
my
keychain
as
well,
which
dropped
inside
a
vase.
An
_________
Day
Unlucky
Unluckily,
Unluckily,
Unluckily,
Unluckily,
an
unlucky
day
a
lucky
young
man
The
big
contrast(对比)
in
the
story
achieves
a
tone
of
____________________
humor/fun/amusement
use
different
structures（结构）
use
transitional
words
（过渡）
add
some
details
（细节）
1
list
the
possible
steps（过程）
put
them
in
an
order（顺序）
given
two
sentences（段首语）
main
plots
of
the
passage
（故事情节）
Step3
polish
（润色）
Step
2
draft
（拟稿）
Step
1
read
(阅读）
第二节：读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语
若词数少于130，从总分中扣去2分。
Basic
requirements
on
“how
to
complete
a
story”:
Based
on
the
main
plots(情节)
of
the
passage
and
2
given
sentences,
you
should
write
2
paras
which
consist
of
about
150
words(including
at
least
5
underlined
words).
Your
writing
should
be
coherent/reasonable.(共20张PPT)
Paraphrase
blame
for
=
damage
=
can't
=
situation
=
evaluate
=
Government
should
do
something
to
reduce
haze
before
its
too
late.
=
be
to
blame/
be
responsible
for...
harm/
do
harm
to/disturb/destroy/ruin...
be
unable
to...
condition/
case...
judge/
assess…
take
actions
/
in
advance…
Summary
Writing
---
How
to
write
a
better
summary?
Writing
Types
Type
Function
Structure
人物+时间+地点+事件（起因+发展+结果）
描写某事物的性质功用，即“对象+性质功用+利好”；
针对某问题提出解决方法或措施，即“问题+解决方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果，即“现象+原因+结果”。
论点+论据(+结论)
记叙文
Narration
Tell
a
story
说明文
Exposition
Merely
state
the
facts
议论文
Argumentation
Convince
readers
that
he
is
right
phenomenon
reason
result
suggestion
Structure
Read
for
the
structure
phenomenon
reason
result
suggestion
Paragraphs
Key
sentences/words
②
①
④
③
1
Cell
phones
are
one
of
the
most
useful
inventions
of
the
last
50
years,
but
not
everything
that
is
said
about
them
is
good.
The
phones
are
frequently
blamed
for
a
number
of
things,
from
thumb
injuries
and
headaches
to
house
fires.
One
theory
even
blames
cell
phones
for
the
disappearance
of
bees!
2
The
theory
is
that
the
bees'
navigation
systems
are
damaged
by
the
radiation
that
is
given
off
by
cell
phones.
Bees
have
a
built-in
system
a
little
like
a
GPS,
and
this
helps
them
find
their
way
back
to
their
hives.
But
recently,
thousands
of
bees
have
failed
to
find
their
way
home.
It
is
believed
that
they
are
dying
far
from
their
hives.
3
The
problem
was
first
noticed
by
beekeepers
in
the
U.S.
and
is
a
lot
more
complicated
than
it
seems
at
first.
Did
you
know
that
most
of
the
world's
crops
are
pollinated
by
bees?
Without
bees,
the
crops
can't
continue
to
grow.
Many
beekeepers
in
the
U.S.
and
Europe
have
reported
losing
between
50
and
70
percent
of
their
bees.
Rick
Smith,
a
beekeeper
in
Arizona,
says
that
bees
are
dying
in
numbers
that
"we
haven't
seen
in
the
past."
At
one
time
Smith
had
8,500
hives.
Now
the
number
has
been
reduced
to
1,280.
4
Nobody
has
proven
that
the
cell
phone
theory
is
true,
but
it's
a
fact
that
bees
are
disappearing
in
very
large
numbers.
And
we
can't
manage
without
them.
Einstein
said
that
if
all
of
our
bees
disappeared,
man
would
only
live
for
four
more
years!
The
situation
needs
to
be
evaluated
by
the
world's
best
scientists.
If
the
cell
phone
theory
is
correct,
we
need
to
do
something
about
it
immediately,
before
it's
too
late.
Key
sentences/words
1
Cell
phones
are
one
of
the
most
useful
inventions
of
the
last
50
years,
but
not
everything
that
is
said
about
them
is
good.
The
phones
are
frequently
blamed
for
a
number
of
things,
from
thumb
injuries
and
headaches
to
house
fires.
One
theory
even
blames
cell
phones
for
the
disappearance
of
bees!
Key
sentences/words
1
Cell
phones
are
one
of
the
most
useful
inventions
of
the
last
50
years,
but
not
everything
that
is
said
about
them
is
good.
The
phones
are
frequently
blamed
for
a
number
of
things,
from
thumb
injuries
and
headaches
to
house
fires.
One
theory
even
blames
cell
phones
for
the
disappearance
of
bees!
2
The
theory
is
that
the
bees'
navigation
systems
are
damaged
by
the
radiation
that
is
given
off
by
cell
phones.
Bees
have
a
built-in
system
a
little
like
a
GPS,
and
this
helps
them
find
their
way
back
to
their
hives.
But
recently,
thousands
of
bees
have
failed
to
find
their
way
home.
It
is
believed
that
they
are
dying
far
from
their
hives.
phenomenon
2
The
theory
is
that
the
bees'
navigation
systems
are
damaged
by
the
radiation
that
is
given
off
by
cell
phones.
Bees
have
a
built-in
system
a
little
like
a
GPS,
and
this
helps
them
find
their
way
back
to
their
hives.
But
recently,
thousands
of
bees
have
failed
to
find
their
way
home.
It
is
believed
that
they
are
dying
far
from
their
hives.
reason
Key
sentences/words
3
The
problem
was
first
noticed
by
beekeepers
in
the
U.S.
and
is
a
lot
more
complicated
than
it
seems
at
first.
Did
you
know
that
most
of
the
world's
crops
are
pollinated
by
bees?
Without
bees,
the
crops
can't
continue
to
grow.
Many
beekeepers
in
the
U.S.
and
Europe
have
reported
losing
between
50
and
70
percent
of
their
bees.
Rick
Smith,
a
beekeeper
in
Arizona,
says
that
bees
are
dying
in
numbers
that
"we
haven't
seen
in
the
past."
At
one
time
Smith
had
8,500
hives.
Now
the
number
has
been
reduced
to
1,280.
3
The
problem
was
first
noticed
by
beekeepers
in
the
U.S.
and
is
a
lot
more
complicated
than
it
seems
at
first.
Did
you
know
that
most
of
the
world's
crops
are
pollinated
by
bees?
Without
bees,
the
crops
can't
continue
to
grow.
Many
beekeepers
in
the
U.S.
and
Europe
have
reported
losing
between
50
and
70
percent
of
their
bees.
Rick
Smith,
a
beekeeper
in
Arizona,
says
that
bees
are
dying
in
numbers
that
"we
haven't
seen
in
the
past."
At
one
time
Smith
had
8,500
hives.
Now
the
number
has
been
reduced
to
1,280.
result
Key
sentences/words
4
Nobody
has
proven
that
the
cell
phone
theory
is
true,
but
it's
a
fact
that
bees
are
disappearing
in
very
large
numbers.
And
we
can't
manage
without
them.
Einstein
said
that
if
all
of
our
bees
disappeared,
man
would
only
live
for
four
more
years!
The
situation
needs
to
be
evaluated
by
the
world's
best
scientists.
If
the
cell
phone
theory
is
correct,
we
need
to
do
something
about
it
immediately,
before
it's
too
late.
4
Nobody
has
proven
that
the
cell
phone
theory
is
true,
but
it's
a
fact
that
bees
are
disappearing
in
very
large
numbers.
And
we
can't
manage
without
them.
Einstein
said
that
if
all
of
our
bees
disappeared,
man
would
only
live
for
four
more
years!
The
situation
needs
to
be
evaluated
by
the
world's
best
scientists.
If
the
cell
phone
theory
is
correct,
we
need
to
do
something
about
it
immediately,
before
it's
too
late.
suggestion
Ways
of
rewriting
（1）替换：
同义词替换；单词替换短语；短语替换句子……
（2）转换：
词性转换；句式转换；语态转换；主语转换……
2
The
theory
is
that
the
bees'
navigation
systems
are
damaged
by
the
radiation
that
is
given
off
by
cell
phones…
1
…One
theory
even
blames
cell
phones
for
the
disappearance
of
bees!
Rewrite
Cell
phones
_____________
the
____________
of
bees.
Phones
____________________
the
bees’
navigation
system.
What
linking
word
can
be
used
to
link
them?
Think
&
Discuss
Version
A:
Cell
phones
are
responsible
for
the
extinction
of
bees
as
phones
disturb
their
navigation
systems.
Thinking:
Are
the
statements
“the
extinction
of
bees
”
and
“phones”
accurate
enough?
Why
or
why
not?
If
not,
how
to
improve
them?
Version
A:
Cell
phones
are
responsible
for
the
extinction
of
bees
as
phones
disturb
their
navigation
systems.
2
The
theory
is
that
the
bees'
navigation
systems
are
damaged
by
the
radiation
that
is
given
off
by
cell
phones.
Bees
have
a
built-in
system
a
little
like
a
GPS,
and
this
helps
them
find
their
way
back
to
their
hives.
But
recently,
thousands
of
bees
have
failed
to
find
their
way
home.
It
is
believed
that
they
are
dying
far
from
their
hives.
3
The
problem
was
first
noticed
by
beekeepers
in
the
U.S.
and
is
a
lot
more
complicated
than
it
seems
at
first.
Did
you
know
that
most
of
the
world's
crops
are
pollinated
by
bees?
Without
bees,
the
crops
can't
continue
to
grow.
Many
beekeepers
in
the
U.S.
and
Europe
have
reported
losing
between
50
and
70
percent
of
their
bees.
Rick
Smith,
a
beekeeper
in
Arizona,
says
that
bees
are
dying
in
numbers
that
"we
haven't
seen
in
the
past."
At
one
time
Smith
had
8,500
hives.
Now
the
number
has
been
reduced
to
1,280.
Improved
version:
Cell
phones
are
responsible
for
the
sharp
decrease
of
bees
population
as
the
radiation
of
phones
disturbs
their
navigation
systems.
Tip1:
Details
should
be
left
out,
but
also
deserve
to
be
read
in
order
to
improve
your
accuracy
of
wording.
Version
A:
Cell
phones
are
responsible
for
the
sharp
decrease
of
bees
population
as
the
radiation
of
phones
disturbs
their
navigation
systems.
Version
B:
According
to
one
theory,
cell
phones
are
responsible
for
the
sharp
decrease
of
bees
population
as
the
radiation
of
phones
is
said
to
disturb
their
navigation
systems.
Think
&
Discuss
Other
people’s
theory
The
writer’s
theory
Tip2:
The
tone
of
your
writing
should
be
consistent
with
that
of
the
passage,
which
can
also
improve
your
accuracy.
3
…Did
you
know
that
most
of
the
world's
crops
are
pollinated
by
bees?
Without
bees,
the
crops
can't
continue
to
grow.
…
result
Rewrite
Most
of
the
world’s
crops
are
pollinated
by
bees.
Thinking:
Are
the
statements
“however”
and
“crops
stop
growing”
accurate
enough?
Why
or
why
not?
If
not,
try
to
improve
it.
However,
most
crops
________________
without
being
pollinated
by
bees.
Version
A:
However,
most
crops
stop
growing
without
being
pollinated
by
bees.
Version
A:
However,
most
crops
stop
growing
without
being
pollinated
by
bees.
3
The
problem
was
first
noticed
by
beekeepers
in
the
U.S.
and
is
a
lot
more
complicated
than
it
seems
at
first.
Did
you
know
that
most
of
the
world's
crops
are
pollinated
by
bees?
Without
bees,
the
crops
can't
continue
to
grow.
Many
beekeepers
in
the
U.S.
and
Europe
have
reported
losing
between
50
and
70
percent
of
their
bees.
Rick
Smith,
a
beekeeper
in
Arizona,
says
that
bees
are
dying
in
numbers
that
"we
haven't
seen
in
the
past."
At
one
time
Smith
had
8,500
hives.
Now
the
number
has
been
reduced
to
1,280.
Improved
version:
Worse
still/
Even,
most
crops
will
be
extinct
without
being
pollinated
by
bees.
Tip3:
Understanding
the
meaning
behind
the
words
helps
us
improve
accuracy.
4
…The
situation
needs
to
be
evaluated
by
the
world's
best
scientists.
If
the
cell
phone
theory
is
correct,
we
need
to
do
something
about
it
immediately,
before
it's
too
late.
suggestion
Rewrite
What
linking
words
can
be
used
to
link
them?
Best
scientists
should
_______________________________.
We_____________________________________
if
the
theory
is
true
.
Best
scientists
should
assess
the
case
so
that
we
can
take
immediate
actions
in
advance
if
the
theory
is
true.
According
to
one
theory,
cell
phones
are
responsible
for
the
sharp
decrease
of
bees
population
as
the
radiation
of
phones
is
said
to
disturb
their
navigation
systems.
Worse
still/
Even,
most
crops
will
be
extinct
without
being
pollinated
by
bees.
________,
best
scientists
should
assess
the
case
so
that
we
can
take
immediate
actions
in
advance
if
the
theory
is
true.
Therefore
One
possible
version
How
to
write
a
better
summary?
Take
advantage
of
details
to
improve
your
accuracy.
Make
sure
your
tone
of
writing
is
consistent
with
that
of
the
passage
so
that
your
accuracy
will
be
improved.
Try
to
understand
the
meaning
behind
the
words
to
improve
your
accuracy.
Homework
Rewrite
the
passage
with
your
own
words.
Please
polish
your
summary
before
handing
in.
How
to
polish
your
summary?
Check
if
there
is
any
grammar/spelling
mistakes
in
your
writing.
Check
if
you
keep
the
same
tone
with
the
passage.
Make
sure
that
you
express
the
meaning
behind
the
words.
Make
sure
you
have
fully
used
the
details
to
improve
your
accuracy
of
wording.(共21张PPT)
台州一中
读后续写
2016.5.18
met
each
other
and
fell
in
love
got
married
and
had
babies
the
Goddess
got
angry
forced
to
leave
each
other
cross
the
Milky
Way
to
meet
only
once
a
year
The
Story
of
The
Herd
Boy
and
The
Weaving
Girl
If
the
story
doesn't
end
here,
imagine...
auctioneer拍卖人
__________________
bidder出价人
___________________
lot拍卖物
__________________________________
__________________________
for
appreciation
and
for
sale
fine
pieces
of
artistry
and
craftsmanship
An
auction
conduct
the
auction
make
a
bid
for
the
lot
Who:
What:
Para1
I
was
taken
to
an
______
at
the
___________
downtown
where
everything
was
for
______.
Para2.3.4
Since
nothing
______
my
eye,
I
climbed
upstairs
and
ate
some
_____
while
______(lean)
on
the
railing(栏杆).
As
I
pulled
a
pack
of
mints
from
my
______
to
get
rid
of
onion
_______,
I
_________
pull
out
my
keychain,
which
dropped
inside
an
expensive
_____.
I
ran
downstairs
to
stage
a
_______
but
unfortunately
my
hand
was
______.
I
felt
__________
Para5.6.7
What's
worse,
I
heard
the
_________
began
the
auction
with
the
vase.
Everyone
was
walking
toward
me,
including
my
________.
auction
art
gallery
caught
snacks
leaning
accidentally
vase
rescue
stuck
embarrassed
auctioneer
the
author;
his
parents;
auctioneer
sale
pocket
breath
parents
Para(2.3.4)
Para(8)
Para(1)
Para(5.6.7)
A.Development
B.
Climax(高潮)
C.
Beginning
D.
End
What's
the
style
of
the
passage?
A.
Narration(记叙)
B.
Exposition(说明)
C.
Argumentation(议论)
The
underlined
key
words:
auction
parents
snacks
and
drinks
keychain
vase
dropped
rescue
my
hand
stuck
auctioneer
underlined
words（选5个以上）
who
(人物）：
scene（场景）：
vase（事件）：
parents
auctioneer
auction
vase
keychain
dropped
my
hand
stuck
rescue
？
Focus
on
the
connection
of
the
two
given
sentences
Paragraph
7:
Everyone
was
walking
toward
me,
including
my
parents.
Paragraph
8:
My
dad
leaned
in
close
and
whispered
in
the
auctioneer’s
ear.
It
was
my
dad
who
got
me
out
of
trouble.
in
trouble
my
dad
wisdom/
idea
get
me
out
of
trouble
In
Para7,
I
told
my
dad
that
I
was
in
trouble.
In
Para8,
my
dad
came
up
with
an
idea
to
get
me
out
of...
Paragraph
7:
Everyone
was
walking
toward
me,
including
my
parents.
Q1:
What's
their
feeling
when
seeing
me
holding
a
vase?
embarrassed/nervous
Q2:
How
would
I
feel?
surprised
Q3:
What
would
my
parents
do?
asked
for
what
had
happened
Paragraph
7:
Everyone
was
walking
toward
me,
including
my
parents.
1.
They
were
very
surprised.
2.
I
felt
very
embarrassed
and
nervous.
3.
My
dad
asked
me
what
had
happened.
4.
I
told
the
fact
to
my
dad.
The
underlined
key
words:
auction
parents
snacks
and
drinks
keychain
vase
dropped
rescue
my
hand
stuck
auctioneer
My
hand
was
stuck
in
the
vase.
add
some
details
Use
advanced
words,
phrases
&
sentences
Use
transitional
words（过渡语）
Paragraph
7:
Everyone
was
walking
towards
me,
including
my
parents.
They
were
very
surprised.
I
felt
very
embarrassed
and
nervous.
My
dad
asked
me
what
had
happened.
I
told
the
fact
to
my
dad.
With
the
entire
room
staring
at
me,
they
were
whispering
in
surprise
why
I
was
holding
the
vase.
As
a
result,
I
lowered
my
head
with
embarrassment,
standing
there
like
a
fool.
Meanwhile,
I
was
so
nervous
that
my
heart
was
beating
very
fast.
Then
my
dad
made
his
way
to
me
and
asked,
“What
are
you
doing?”
Nothing
was
going
to
sound
more
unbelievable
than
the
truth.
“My
hand
is
stuck,”
I
said
in
a
low
voice.
“Oh,
Mark,”
my
mom
cried.
Paragraph
7:
Everyone
was
walking
towards
me,
including
my
parents.
With
the
entire
room
staring
at
me,
they
were
whispering
in
surprise
why
I
was
holding
the
vase.
As
a
result,
I
lowered
my
head
with
embarrassment,
standing
there
like
a
fool.
Meanwhile,
I
was
so
nervous
that
my
heart
was
beating
very
fast.
Then
my
dad
made
his
way
to
me
and
asked,
“What
are
you
doing?”Nothing
was
going
to
sound
more
unbelievable
than
the
truth.
“My
hand
is
stuck,”
I
said
in
a
low
voice.
“Oh,
Mark,”
my
mom
cried.
add
some
details
Use
advanced
words,
phrases
&
sentences
Proper
transition
Paragraph
8:
My
dad
leaned
in
close
&
whispered
in
the
auctioneer’s
ear.
Q1:
What
would
my
dad
whisper
to
the
auctioneer?
Yes.
Q2:
Did
they
agree
or
not?
told
my
trouble
and
asked
if
he
could
buy
the
vase
Q3:
How
did
my
dad
get
my
hand
out
of
the
vase?
used
vegetable
oil/soapy
water
to
slide
my
hand
out
Paragraph
8:
My
dad
leaned
in
close
and
whispered
in
the
auctioneer’s
ear.
1.
My
dad
told
the
fact
to
him
and
decided
to
buy
the
vase.
2.
The
auctioneer
asked
for
agreement.
3.
Nobody
opposed
and
my
parents
took
me
home
with
the
vase.
4.
My
dad
used
oil
to
get
my
hand
out
together
with
the
keychain.
The
underlined
key
words:
auction
parents
snacks
and
drinks
keychain
vase
dropped
rescue
my
hand
stuck
auctioneer
The
way
to
get
me
out
of
the
vase
Paragraph
8:
My
dad
leaned
in
close
and
whispered
in
the
auctioneer’s
ear.
The
auctioneer
nodded
and
spoke,
“Ladies
and
gentlemen,
since
it
appears
this
vase
also
comes
with
a
red-faced
young
man,
are
there
any
objections
to
letting
his
parents
purchase
the
piece
at
a
reasonable
price?”
I
heard
some
laughs
at
the
idea
of
a
bidding
war
breaking
out
for
a
vase
with
me
attached,
but
luckily
no
one
did.
“Sold
to
the
parents
of
the,
uh,
lucky
young
man!”
The
auctioneer
announced.
When
we
got
home
and
I
was
more
relaxed,
my
dad
dipped
in
some
vegetable
oil
and
I
was
able
to
slide
my
hand
out,
with
my
keychain
of
course.
I
hoped
the
auctioneer
would
start
with
the
paintings.
The
auction
chose
the
vase
as
the
first
piece
for
sale.
I
tried
desperately
to
get
the
keychain
out.
My
hand
was
stuck.
I
leaned
on
the
railing
while
enjoying
my
snacks.
I
stood
in
the
middle
of
an
art
gallery
with
my
hand
stuck
in
the
vase.
I
pulled
a
pack
of
mints
from
my
pocket.
I
pulled
out
my
keychain
as
well,
which
dropped
inside
a
vase.
An
_________
Day
Unlucky
Unluckily,
Unluckily,
Unluckily,
Unluckily,
an
unlucky
day
a
lucky
young
man
The
big
contrast(对比)
in
the
story
achieves
a
tone
of
____________________
humor/fun/amusement
use
different
structures（结构）
use
transitional
words
（过渡）
add
some
details
（细节）
1
list
the
possible
steps（过程）
put
them
in
an
order（顺序）
given
two
sentences（段首语）
main
plots
of
the
passage
（故事情节）
Step3
polish
（润色）
Step
2
draft
（拟稿）
Step
1
read
(阅读）
第二节：读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
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续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语
若词数少于130，从总分中扣去2分。
Basic
requirements
on
“how
to
complete
a
story”:
Based
on
the
main
plots(情节)
of
the
passage
and
2
given
sentences,
you
should
write
2
paras
which
consist
of
about
150
words(including
at
least
5
underlined
words).
Your
writing
should
be
coherent/reasonable.(共23张PPT)
Life
is
all
about
making
choices.
How
to
choose
a
right
college?
It's
a
really
good
idea
to
visit
colleges
before
you
apply
because
their
websites
can
all
start
to
look
and
sound
the
same.
Nothing
will
give
you
the
sense
of
what
it
will
actually
be
like
to
live
on
a
college
campus
(校园)
like
visiting
and
seeing
for
yourself
the
dorms,
classrooms
and
athletic
equipment
and,
of
course,
the
students.
It
seems
a
little
crazy
once
senior
year
hits
to
find
the
time
to
visit
college
campuses,
and
it
can
also
be
pricey
if
the
schools
you
are
applying
to
happen
to
be
more
than
a
car
ride
away.
But
keep
in
mind
that
you
are
making
a
decision
about
the
next
four
years
of
your
life,
and
do
all
the
research
you
can
to
make
sure
you
are
making
the
right
one.
It's
a
really
good
idea
to
visit
colleges
before
you
apply
reason
do
all
the
research
you
can
to
make
sure
you
are
making
the
right
one.
“
to
support
the
point
”
“
to
lead
in
the
topic
sentence”
Q1:
Visiting
the
college
in
person
or
online,
which
one
is
better?
?
Point
1:
It's
a
really
good
idea
to
visit
colleges
before
you
apply.
Topic
sentence:
Do
all
the
research
you
can
to
make
sure
you
are
making
the
right
decision.
Point
1:
It’s
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application.
Topic
sentence:
Doing
all
the
research
can
help
you
make
a
right
decision.
Main
idea
rewrite
There's
no
excuse
not
to
visit
the
schools
in
your
local
area.
In
fact,
a
lot
of
college
applications
even
ask
if
you
have
visited
campus,
and
obviously,
if
you
live
across
the
country
that
won't
be
as
much
of
a
possibility,
but
if
you
live
nearby,
go
check
it
out!
There's
no
excuse
not
to
visit
the
schools
in
your
local
reason
if
you
live
nearby,
go
check
it
out!
“
to
support
the
point
”
“
to
address
the
point
again”
area.
Q2:
Is
it
necessary
to
visit
all
ideal
colleges
despite
the
distance?
?
Point
2:
It's
a
must
to
visit
the
local
colleges.
Point
2:
There's
no
excuse
not
to
visit
the
schools
in
your
local.
rewrite
Main
idea
If
campus
visits
aren’t
going
to
happen
before
you
apply,
at
the
very
least
you
should
find
some
time
between
applying
and
getting
your
acceptance
letters
to
visit
the
schools
you’d
like
to
attend.
It
can
save
you
a
lot
of
heartache
if
you
rule
out
now
the
things
that
you
don't
like
about
certain
campuses,
things
that
you
wouldn’t
know
unless
you
actually
visit.
find
some
time
between
applying
and
benefits
“
to
support
the
point
”
getting
your
acceptance
letters
to
visit
the
schools
you’d
like
to
attend.
“
to
add
another
possibility
to
the
last
point
”
Q3:
What
if
we
have
no
time
before
we
apply?
?
Point
3:
If
it
is
impossible
to
visit
the
colleges
before
application,
at
least
you
should
visit
them
before
getting
your
acceptance
letters.
Point
3:
You
should
find
some
time
between
applying
and
getting
your
acceptance
letters
to
visit
the
schools
you’d
like
to
attend.
rewrite
Main
idea
Now,
if
time
and
money
are
making
it
impossible,
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
CollegeWeekLive.
It’s
a
chance
to
chat
online
with
admissions
officers,
students,
and
college
counselors(顾问),
and
it
won’t
cost
you
a
penny!
You
can
register
for
its
online
college
fair
at
.
While
visiting
an
online
college
fair
can’t
take
the
place
of
an
actual
campus
visit,
it
can
be
a
very
useful
tool
that
along
with
all
your
other
research
will
help
you
make
an
informed
decision
about
which
colleges
or
universities
you'd
like
to
attend.?
specific
explanation
help
you
make
an
informed
decision
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
CollegeWeekLive.
about
which
colleges
or
universities
you'd
like
to
attend.?
transitional
sentence---
“
to
address
the
topic
sentence
again”
“
to
support
the
point
”
Q4:
What
if
both
money
and
time
make
it
impossible?
?
Point
4:
If
time
and
money
are
making
it
impossible,
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
CollegeWeekLive.
Point
4:
There's
no
excuse
not
to
visit
the
schools
in
your
local.
rewrite
Main
idea
How
to
connect
all
the
points?
Point
1
Point
2
Point
3
Point
4
Topic
sentence
It’s
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application.
Doing
all
the
research
can
help
you
make
a
right
decision.
If
it
is
impossible
to
visit
the
colleges
before
application,
at
least
you
should
visit
them
before
getting
your
acceptance
letters.
It's
a
must
to
visit
the
local
colleges.
If
time
and
money
are
making
it
impossible,
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
CollegeWeekLive.
Logical
Connectors
1
2
3
4
添加类
（在前句基础上添加补充信息）
and,
also,
nor,
neither,
in
addition,
besides,
furthermore,
moreover,
that
is
to
say,
in
other
word,
on
the
other
hand
...
转折类
（前后文之间表转折关系）
but,
yet,
however,
by
contrast,
on
the
contrary,
actually,
in
fact,
instead,
at
least,
anyhow...
因果类
（前后文之间表因果关系）
as,
because,
since,
owing
to,
due
to,
for
fear
of,
as
a
result
of,
so,
therefore,
consequently,
hence,
thus
...
时空类
（后文之间表先后关系或位置关系）
firstly,
before
that,
then,
meanwhile,
later,
finally,
at
last,
all
in
all,
in
a
word,
to
conclude,
on
the
whole,
under,
in
front
of
,
at
the
bottom
of,
in
the
middle
of,
near,
close
to...
常见逻辑连接词
Point
1
Topic
sentence
It’s
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application.
Doing
all
the
research
can
help
you
make
a
right
decision.
cause
effect
Practice
!
(1)
It's
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application
___________________________________________
you
can
make
a
right
decision.
(表“因此”的连接词)
(2)______________________________________________________
can
help
you
make
a
right
decision.
(动名词作主语)
(3)_____________________,
it's
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application.(非谓语动词作目的状语)
(4)______________________________________________________,
it's
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application.(介词短语作目的状语)
(5)It's
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application,
_________________________________.(定语从句)
so/
so
that/
in
order
that/
and
therefore/
and
as
a
result
Visiting
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application
Aiming
to
make
a
right
decision
In
order
to
make
/
For
the
purpose/sake
of
making
a
right
decision
which
can
help
you
make
a
right
decision
Point
1
It’s
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application.
general
specific
Practice
!
(1)It’s
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application,
__________________________________________.
(副词+名词变成同位语结构)
(2)It’s
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application,
__________________________________________.
(名词+介词短语变成同位语结构)
especially/
particularly
the
local
ones.
the
local
ones
in
particular.
Point
2
It's
a
must
to
visit
the
local
colleges.
Point
1+2
It’s
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application,
especially/
particularly
the
local
ones.
preferential
alternative
Practice!
It’s
suggested
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application,
especially/particularly
the
local
ones.
___________
________________________,
at
least
you
should
visit
them
before
getting
your
acceptance
letters.
(1)
用whereas表转折,
并用if
you
fail
to
do
it简化重复部分
(2)用However表转折,
并用when
you
can’t
make
it简化重复部分
(3)用However表转折,
并用time
not
permitting独立主格简化重复部分
Whereas,
if
you
fail
to
do
it
However,
when
you
can’t
make
it
Point
3
If
it
is
impossible
to
visit
the
colleges
before
application,
at
least
you
should
visit
them
before
getting
your
acceptance
letters.
However,
time
not
permitting
preferential
alternative
Practice!
If
it
is
impossible
to
visit
the
colleges
before
application,
at
least
you
should
visit
them
before
getting
your
acceptance
letters.
____________,
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
CollegeWeekLive.
(1)用
finally引出最次的条件,
并用do强调情况之差。
(2)用
finally引出最次的条件,
并用both...and...和独立主格句型强调情况之差。
(3)用but
luckily/
unfortunately引出最次的条件,
并用when引导的状语从句的省略和lacking
both...and...强调情况之差。
Finally,
if
you
do
have
no
time
or
money
Finally,
both
time
and
money
not
permitting
Point
3
If
it
is
impossible
to
visit
the
colleges
before
application,
at
least
you
should
visit
them
before
getting
your
acceptance
letters.
But
unluckily/unfortunately,
when
lacking
both
time
and
money
Point
4
If
time
and
money
are
making
it
impossible,
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
CollegeWeekLive.
One
possible
version
Aiming
to
make
a
right
decision,
it’s
strongly
recommended
that
you
visit
the
colleges
you
want
to
attend
before
your
application,
especially
the
local
ones.
(Topic
sentence
+
Point
1&2)
However,
if
you
can’t
make
it,
at
least
you
should
visit
them
before
the
acceptance
letters
arrive.
(Point
3)
Finally,
both
time
and
money
not
permitting,
then
check
out
the
online
college
fairs
at
CollegeWeekLive
to
help
you
make
wise
choices.
(Point
4)
(64w)
Another
possible
version
To
make
a
right
decision,
you
are
strongly
advised
to
visit
your
ideal
colleges
personally
in
advance
to
be
fully
prepared.
(Topic
sentence
+
Point
1)
Actually
it's
required
by
many
colleges
to
do
so
before
application
unless
too
far
away.
(Point
2)
But
if
time
bothers,
alternatively
the
time
period
before
the
letter
of
admission
is
also
appropriate
for
exploring
campuses,
truly
benefiting
the
college
life
ahead.
(Point
3)
Ultimately
when
lacking
both
time
and
money,
you
can
visit

to
acquire
the
necessary
information.
(Point
4)(79
w)
Passage
1.
More
and
more
parents
engage
their
children
in
the
expensive
micro-foreign
study
tours.
________________
(转折关系),
they
fail
to
see
the
expected
results
and
begin
to
question
the
value
of
the
study
tours.
Keys:
转折关系：However/
Nonetheless/
Nevertheless
Consolidation
Passage
2.
Great
importance
has
been
attached
to
getting
up
early.
_____________________
(因果关系)
morning
is
a
fantastic
time
to
enjoy
the
freshest
air
and
have
a
more
accurate
memory.
_____________________
(递进关系),
getting
up
early
to
do
some
physical
exercise
can
help
us
keep
healthy
(并列关系)
enable
us
to
make
a
good
preparation
for
the
day.
_____________________
(另起话题)
as
a
late
riser,
you
can
overcome
it
by
sleeping
early
and
setting
an
alarm
clock
or
asking
other
people
to
call
you.
Keys:
因果关系：That
is
because/
The/One
reason
is
that
;
What
accounts
for
it
is
that/
For
one
thing/
On
the
one
hand/
Above
all...；
Consolidation
递进关系：Besides/
Apart
from
it/
In
addition/
What’s
more/
Furthermore/
Also/
Plus/
For
another/
On
the
other
hand...；
并列关系：and
/
as
well
as/
(...not
only...)
+
but
also...；
另起话题：Despite
once
being
a
late
riser/
Even
if
you
are
a
late
riser...
Passage
3.
Caused
by
their
fear
and
improper
way
of
learning,
many
Chinese
students
find
themselves
incapable
of
speaking
English
fluently
despite
ten-year
learning.
___________________________
(由现状过渡到措施的衔接词),
we
are
supposed
to
learn
it
as
a
child
learns
his
native
language
by
listening
and
repeating
a
lot.
___________________
(表并列关系),
what
teachers
should
do
is
to
praise
and
encourage
students
like
parents
do
rather
than
criticize
them.
___________________
(引出最重要的一点的衔接词)
great
self-esteem
should
be
built
by
us
students
in
speaking
English.
Keys:
由现状过渡到措施的衔接词：
To
better/
improve
the
situation/
In
order
to
change
it...；
Consolidation
表并列关系：Besides
it/
Apart
from
it/
In
addition/
What’s
more/
Furthermore/
Also/
Plus...；
引出最重要的一点的衔接词：But
most
importantly/
Yet
above
all...
Passage
4.
The
word
“selfie”
was
first
used
by
an
Australian
man
in
2002.
______________
(现在),
an
increasing
number
of
people
grow
crazy
about
taking
selfies,
including
some
famous
people.
________________
(表转折关系)
the
popularity
of
selfie
has
meanwhile
brought
about
some
safety
problems.
______________
(表因果关系),
some
governments
show
great
concern
about
visitors'
safety
and
begin
to
take
some
measures.
______________
(表因果关系),
Walt
Disney
World
don't
allow
visitors
to
use
selfie-sticks
in
its
theme
parks.
Keys:
现在：Now/
Nowadays/
Today/
At
present/
Currently...；
Consolidation
表转折关系：However/
Yet/
Whereas/
But
actually/
But
in
fact/
As
a
matter
of
fact...；
表因果关系：Therefore/
Thus/
Hence/
As
a
result/
As
a
consequence/
Consequently/
Accordingly...；
表因果关系：Resulting
from
/
Because
of/
Owing
to/
Due
to
the
same
reason...
The
chance
favors
the
prepared
mind!
May
all
of
you
choose
a
right
college
!(共26张PPT)
概
要
写
作
---说
明
文
Writing
steps
Step
1:
Get
the
____________
of
the
passage.
Step
3:
Explore
for
the
_______________
of
each
paragraph.
Step
2:
Find
out
the
________
of
the
passage
and
the
________
of
each
paragraph.
topic
sentence
Yes
If
it
includes
all
the
key
points,
it
serves
as
the
main
idea;
If
not,
add
supporting
details.
No
Get
the
main
idea
by
combining
all
the
key
infomation.
Step
4:
Paraphrase.
（改写）
Step
5:Connect
the
sentences
to
a
passage.
（连全文）
general
idea
structure
topic
information
function
1.现象分析类：
介绍某现象及其成因、结果，即“现象+成因+结果”
2.利弊对比类：
描写某事物的性质功能，即“对象+性质功能+利弊”
3.研究报告类：
针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施,
即“问题+解决方法”
Different
writing
types
for
expository
Tip
1:
Keep
these
types
in
mind
which
can
help
us
to
figure
out
the
of
a
expository.
structure
1.
Read
for
writing
style:
现象分析类：
Expository
Topic/Phenomenon
Cause
2.
Read
for
the
main
idea
Result/Suggestion
3.
Read
for
the
structure
The
authors
points
out
the
that
the
school
bus
is
the
safest
and
smartest
choice
to
school
in
the
US
and
the
to
parents.
reasons
suggestion
Para1
Para2
Para3
Para4
Para5
Part
1
Part
2
Part
3
Phenomenon
Reasons
Suggestion
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Para
1:
Phenomenon
The
familiar
yellow
school
bus
is
the
largest
system
of
mass
transportation
in
the
US
and
every
school
day
transports
roughly
25
million
young
people
to
school
and
home
again
after
the
school
day
ends.
they
are
the
safest
method
for
getting
kids
to
and
from
school,
according
to
the
National
Highway
Traffic
Safety
Administration(NHTSA).
Children
are
70
times
more
likely
to
arrive
at
school
safely
on
the
school
bus
than
if
they
had
traveled
to
school
driving
themselves
or
riding
with
friends.?
Meanwhile,
Tip
2:
If
there
is
no
topic
sentence,
try
to
divide
the
paragraph
into
several
meaning
groups
and
summarize
by
yourself.
the
most-chosen
transportation
Summary:
_____________________________________
The
school
bus
is
the
most-chosen
and
safest
transportation
to
school
in
the
US.
These
school
buses
meet
more
of
the
nation’s
motor
vehicle
safety
standards
than
any
other
vehicles
on
the
road.
,
several
new
technologies
available
today
are
making
school
buses
even
safety,
such
as
video
cameras
on
the
inside
and
outside,
stop
arm
cameras,
GPS
tracking
and
collision
lessening
systems.
Another
safety
tool
on
school
buses
is
high
seat
backs，
closely-spaced
seats
and
energy-absorbing
seating.?
Summary:
_____________________________________
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Para
2:
Reasons
The
school
buses
meet
the
highest
vehicle
safety
standard
and
are
technologically
equipped.
Also
The
bus
is
only
as
safe
as
the
professional
men
and
women
who
drive
them.
Tip
3:
If
the
topic
sentence
is
too
general,
add
the
supporting
details.
Summary:
_____________________________________
too
general?
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Para
3:
Reasons
obtain
a
Class
B
or
C
Commercial
Driver’s
License
complete
a
training
course
The
bus
drivers
are
professional
as
they
need
to
get
the
required
license
and
finish
a
training
course.
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Para
4:
Reasons
School
buses
are
safe
for
the
environment.
replaces
36
passenger
cars
use
alternative
green
fuels
Summary:
_____________________________________
reduce
the
number
of
cars
on
the
road
The
school
buses,
powered
by
green
fuels,
are
environmentally
safe
by
reducing
the
number
of
cars
on
the
road.
Para
5:
Suggestions
Todd
Monteferrario,
President
of
the
National
School
Transportation
Association,
said
parents
should
remember
that
the
safest
and
smartest
choice
is
to
put
their
children
on
the
big
yellow
bus
when
they
can.
?
Summary:
_____________________________________
Parents
are
suggested
to
choose
the
school
bus
as
the
transportation
to
school.
Para.
Key
points
1
2
3
4
5
Parents
are
suggested
to
choose
the
school
bus
as
the
transportation
to
school.
The
school
buses
meet
the
highest
vehicle
safety
standard
and
are
technologically
equipped.
The
bus
drivers
are
professional
as
they
have
to
get
the
required
license
and
finish
a
training
course.
The
school
buses,
powered
by
green
fuels,
are
environmentally
safe
by
reducing
the
number
of
cars
on
the
road.
The
school
bus
is
the
most-chosen
and
safest
transportation
to
school
in
the
US.
5.
Connect
the
sentences
into
a
passage.
The
school
bus
is
the
most-chosen
and
safest
transportation
to
school
in
the
US.
The
school
buses
meet
the
highest
vehicle
safety
standards
and
are
technologically
equipped.
The
bus
drivers
are
professional
as
they
have
to
get
the
required
license
and
finish
a
training
course.
The
school
buses,
powered
by
green
fuels,
are
environmentally
safe
by
reducing
the
number
of
cars
on
the
road.
Parents
are
suggested
to
choose
the
school
bus
as
the
transportation
to
school.
A
possible
version
The
school
bus
is
the
most-chosen
and
safest
transportation
to
school
in
the
US
.
,
school
buses
meet
the
highest
vehicle
safety
standard
and
are
technologically
equipped.
,
bus
drivers
are
professional
as
they
need
to
get
the
required
license
and
finish
a
training
course.
,
school
buses,
powered
by
green
fuels,
are
environmentally
safe
by
reducing
the
number
of
cars
on
the
road.
,
parents
are
suggested
to
choose
the
school
bus
as
the
transportation
to
school.
for
the
following
reasons
Firstly
Secondly
Thirdly
Therefore
Tip
4:
Add
proper
linking
words
or
transitional
words
to
polish
the
passage.
研究报告类
1.
Read
for
writing
style:
Expository
Problem
Solutions
2.
Read
for
the
main
idea
The
author
points
out
the
about
the
poaching
of
rhino
and
the
to
it.
solutions
problems
3.
Read
for
the
structure
Para1
Para2
Para3
Para4
Para5
Part
1
Part
2
Problems
Solutions
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Para
1:
Problems
Summary:
_____________________________________
The
poaching,
or
illegal
killing,
of
rhinos(犀牛)
in
South
Africa
is
growing
worse
each
year.
The
government
recently
reported
that
a
record
number
of
rhinos
were
poached
in
2014,
a
year
which
had
more
rhino
killings
in
South
Africa
than
ever
before．The
World
Wildlife
Fund,
or
WWF,
says
about
20,000
rhinos
live
in
South
Africa.
That
is
more
than
80
percent
of
the
rhinos
in
the
world.
Edna
Molewa，South
Africa’s
environmental
issues
minister,
says,
“During
2014,
we
are
sad
to
say
this:
1,215
rhinos
were
killed.
This
is
a
rise
in
the
number
of
poached
rhinos
from
1004
in
2013
and
indeed
very
worrying.”
The
poaching,
or
illegal
killing,
of
rhinos(犀牛)
in
South
Africa
is
growing
worse
each
year.
The
poaching
of
rhinos
is
getting
worse
each
year
in
South
Africa.
Evidence
The
animals
are
hunted
for
their
horns(犀牛角)．Many
people
in
Asia
believe
the
horn
has
curing
power,
which
drives
poachers,
at
all
costs,
mad
for
more
horns.
Para
2:
Problems
But
there
is
no
scientific
evidence
for
this
belief.
The
horn
is
made
of
keratin.
That
is
the
same
thing
as
human
hair,
fingernails
and
toenails．
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Summary:
_____________________________________
Rhinos
are
killed
for
their
horns
which
is
thought
to
have
curing
power.
Tip
5:
Figuring
out
the
key
information
need
to
refer
to
the
main
idea.
Para
3:
Problems
Ms.
Molewa
said
386
suspected
poachers
were
arrested
last
year,
an
increase
from
the
year
before.
South
Africa’s
legal
system
is
ineffective．
But
rhino
protection
workers
say
poachers
often
go
unpunished
after
arrest.
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Summary:
_____________________________________
Many
arrested
poachers
hardly
get
punished.
Tip
5:
The
information
after
the
words
“but”
is
more
important.
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Para
4:
Solutions
The
efforts
include
moving
some
of
the
animals
to
secret
places
in
neighboring
countries.
Jo
Shaw,
the
rhino
program
manager
at
the
WWF,
said,
“we’re
talking
about
a
loss
of
a
hundred
rhinos
a
month.
Or
more
than
three
a
day.
She
says
officials
should
find
the
criminal
groups
responsible
for
the
poaching
and
punish
them．
“Now
approximately
100
rhinos
have
been
moved
to
neighboring
states
in
the
SADC
region
during
2014
and
200
more
rhinos
will
be
moved
this
year.”
Molewa
said．
We
really
need
to
see
effective
action
not
just
at
a
national
level
but
internationally.”
Para
5:
Solutions
Ms.
Molewa
said
more
needs
to
be
done
and
South
Africa
is
taking
strong
measures
to
protect
rhinos.
example
Summary:
_____________________________________
In
order
to
reducing
the
poaching
of
rhinos,
measures
need
to
be
taken
both
nationally
and
internationally.
Para.
Key
points
1
2
3
4
The
poaching
of
rhinos
is
getting
worse
each
year
in
South
Africa.
Rhinos
are
killed
for
their
horns
which
is
thought
to
have
curing
power.
Many
arrested
poachers
hardly
get
punished.
Measures
need
to
be
taken
both
nationally
and
internationally.
Step
5:
Connect
the
sentences
to
a
passage.
A
possible
version
The
poaching
of
rhinos
is
getting
worse
each
year
in
South
Africa
.
Firstly,
Rhinos
are
killed
for
their
horns
which
is
thought
to
have
curing
power.
many
arrested
poachers
hardly
get
punished.
,
,
for
the
following
two
problems
Secondly
In
order
to
reducing
the
poaching
of
rhinos,
measures,
such
as
moving
the
living
places,
need
to
be
taken
both
nationally
and
internationally.
利弊对比类
1.
Read
for
writing
style:
Expository
Topic
Advantages/
Disadvantages
Solutions
2.
Read
for
the
main
idea
The
author
introduces
to
us,
especially
its
,
,
and
its
to
the
problem.
Chin’s
bike-sharing
advantages
disadvantages
solutions
3.
Read
for
the
structure
Para1
Para2
Para3
Para4
Introduction
to
the
topic
Advantages
and
Disadvantages
Solutions
Part
1
Part
2
Part
3
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Para
1:
Introduction
to
the
topic
China's
bike-sharing
has
exploded
from
nothing
about
a
year
ago
into
a
transport
phenomenon
in
major
cities.
Just
by
scanning
the
QR
code（二维码）that
appears
behind
the
seat,
one
can
unlock
a
shared
bicycle.
Once
the
service
has
finished,
the
user
blocks
the
bike
and
the
total
is
charged
to
his
mobile
account.
The
process
lasts
less
than
30
seconds
and
costs
no
more
than
one
penny.
Just
by
scanning
the
QR
code（二维码）that
appears
behind
the
seat,
one
can
unlock
a
shared
bicycle.
Once
the
service
has
finished,
the
user
blocks
the
bike
and
the
total
is
charged
to
his
mobile
account.
The
process
lasts
less
than
30
seconds
and
costs
no
more
than
one
penny.
China's
bike-sharing
has
exploded
from
nothing
about
a
year
ago
into
a
transport
phenomenon
in
major
cities.
gain
with
public
popularity
convenient
cheap
Summary:
_____________________________________
China’s
bike-sharing
is
gaining
popularity
with
the
society
as
a
cheap
and
convenient
transportation.
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Para
2:
Advantages
Many
young
people
believe
shared
bicycles
have
many
advantages.
environment
friendly
lower
the
use
of
cars
relieve
traffic
Summary:
_____________________________________
not
expensive
to
rent
do
not
have
to
be
protected
from
thieves
no
need
to
repair
them
cheap
convenient
Tip4:
When
writing
a
summary,
we
should
delete
repeated
information.
Shared
bicycles
have
many
advantages,
as
they
are
environmental
friendly
and
relieve
traffic
by
reducing
cars.
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Para
3:
Disadvantages
Since
they
appeared,
shared
bicycles
have
raised
a
lot
of
dust.
There
is
no
doubt
of
the
benefits
but
the
disadvantages
cannot
be
ignored.
Many
problems
related
to
shared
bicycles
have
emerged.
…but
the
disadvantages
cannot
be
ignored.
bad
behavior
from
some
users
mess
for
leaving
the
bike
anywhere
poorly
parked
bikes
block
the
street
Summary:
_____________________________________
The
bad
behavior
of
some
users
and
the
mess
they
cause
lead
to
some
problems
such
as
poorly-parked
bikes.
4.
Explore
for
the
main
idea
of
each
paragraph
Para
4:
Solutions
In
Xi
Luoyuan,
Beijing,
the
"Civilized
Use
of
Bicycles"
campaign
has
been
launched.
In
addition
to
having
40
officially
permitted
stops,
there
are
also
clear
signals
to
lead
users
to
these
stops.
A
team
of
supervisors
keep
order
in
the
area.
This
is
the
first
area
that
is
part
of
an
official
system
to
manage
bicycles.
The
purpose
of
this
campaign
is
to
solve
the
mess
that
the
popularity
of
shared
bicycles
is
causing
in
Beijing,
both
with
the
participation
of
companies
and
the
users.
If
the
pilot
plan
works
out
well
in
Xi
Luoyuan,
it
will
be
extended
to
all
of
the
cities
in
China.
campaign
measures
purpose
Summary:
_____________________________________
Beijing
has
launched
a
campaign
to
regulate
bike-parking，
which
will
set
a
good
example
to
other
cities
in
China.
Para.
Key
points
1
2
3
4
China’s
bike-sharing
is
gaining
popularity
with
the
society
as
a
cheap
and
convenient
transportation.
Shared
bicycles
have
many
advantages,
as
they
are
environmental
friendly
and
relieve
traffic
by
the
decrease
of
cars.
The
bad
behavior
of
some
users
and
the
mess
they
cause
lead
to
some
problems
such
as
poorly-parked
bikes.
Beijing
has
launched
a
campaign
to
regulate
bike-parking，which
will
be
extended
to
other
cities
in
China.
A
possible
version
China’s
shared
bikes
are
gaining
popularity
with
the
society
as
a
cheap
and
convenient
transportation.
have
many
advantages,
as
they
are
environmentally
friendly
and
relieve
traffic
by
reducing
cars.
,the
bad
behavior
of
some
users
and
the
mess
they
cause
also
lead
to
some
problems
such
as
poorly-parked
bikes.
Beijing
has
launched
a
campaign
，which
will
set
a
good
example
to
the
other
cities
in
China.
They
However
To
regulate
bike-parking,