2021中考书面表达指导09-传统节日 课件（32张PPT）

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2021
英语中考写作指导
09.
传统节日
·
依据中考
·
精选话题
·
素材积累
·
五步成文
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目录
contents
Methods
思路方法
01
Material
素材积累
02
Guide
写作示范
03
Models
优秀作品
04
01
思路方法
（
METHODS）
强化思路
形成习惯
审好题
·
体裁
·
人称
·
时态
·
主题
基本思路
列好纲
·
框架
·
要点
写好句
·
扩展
·
补充
·
解释
成好文
·
衔接
·
检查
时态
体裁
人称
主题
审好题
一般现在时
一般过去时
一般将来时
现在完成时
看提示
看要点
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
记叙文
议论文
说明文
应用文
列好纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
写好句
让语义更准确
利用高级词汇
不怕词数限制
短语替换单词
表达层次清晰
增强句子关联
并列以及复合
提升句子质量
表达强烈感情
感叹疑问祈使
地道英语表达
名言成语俗语
成好文
用连词
巧衔接
查错误
做检查
好书写
认真誊
02
素材积累
（MATERIAL）
积累佳句
提升质量
佳句积累
节日的基本信息
The
Spring
Festival,
falls
on
the
first
day
of
the
first
lunar
month,
and
ends
on
the
fifteenth
day.
(连词)
The
Dragon
Boat
Festival
is
celebrated
on
the
fifth
day
of
the
fifth
month
according
to
the
Chinese
lunar
calendar.
(短语)
The
Lantern
Festival
is
a
traditional
Chinese
festival
and
a
symbol
of
reunion.
(短语)
The
Mid?-Autumn
Festival
is
a
Chinese
traditional
festival.
It
is
a
time
for
the
family
to
get
together
and
celebrate
harvest.
（短语；句式）
佳句积累
庆祝传统节日的方式
People
started
the
tradition
of
admiring
the
moon
and
sharing
mooncakes
with
their
families.
(短语)
No
matter
where
they
are,
people
come
home
to
celebrate
the
festival
with
their
families.
(从句)
When
the
Lantern
Festival
draws
near,
Chinese
people
take
part
in
all
kinds
of
activities,
like
singing
and
dancing.
(短语；从句)
On
Double
Ninth
Festival,
climbing
mountains
is
a
popular
way
to
exercise
and
wish
our
beloved
ones
a
longer
life
as
well.
(短语)
佳句积累
喜欢某个传统节日的原因
We
all
like
the
Dragon
Boat
Festival
because
it‘s
a
good
reminder
to
look
back
on
history.
(短语；从句)
From
the
activity,
we
learned
that
it‘s
time
for
us
to
do
something
for
our
parents
in
return
for
their
great
love.
(短语；句式；从句)
Traditional
festivals
are
part
of
culture,
so
I
believe
(that)
it
is
everyone's
duty
to
pass
them
on.
(句式；从句)
03
写作引领
（GUIDE）
步步引领
实现高分
真题再现
年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰盛、美味，像年糕、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。请以“The
family
dinner
on
Spring
Festival
Eve”为题，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解中国丰富多彩的文化习俗。
1.
要点：1)年夜饭的重要性；
2)年夜饭有寓意的食物。
2.
要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
提示词汇：
New
Year
cake
年糕
having
more
luck
and
becoming
better
步步高升
审好题
时态：一般现在时
人称：第三人称
体裁：说明文
主题：传统节日
列提纲
开头
正
文
结尾
描述背景
引入正文
要点一
要点二
要点三
展开要点一
展开要点二
展开要点三
总结正文
表达感想
春节是中国最重要的节日。
而年夜饭是最重要的团圆饭。
年夜饭的重要性。
历史悠久；家人团聚。
年夜饭有各种美味的食物。
年糕；鱼
年夜饭是中国传统文化的重要组成部分。
希望你有机会来体验一下。
写好句
开头
The
Spring
Festival
is
the
most
important
festival.(背景)
The
family
dinner
on
Spring
Festival
Eve
is
the
most
important
dinner.
(入题)
句子升格：
?
As
we
know,
the
Spring
Festival
is
the
most
important
event
in
China.
In
Chinese
traditional
culture,
the
family
dinner
on
Spring
Festival
Eve
is
the
most
important
dinner.
(短语)
写好句
要点一：
The
family
dinner
on
Spring
Festival
Eve
is
important.
It
has
a
long
history.
Family
members
get
together
to
spend
a
happy
holiday.
句子升格：
?
The
family
dinner
on
Spring
Festival
Eve
is
important
because
of
its
long
history.
Besides,
It’s
a
chance
for
family
members
to
spend
a
happy
holiday
together.
(过渡；句式；状语从句)
写好句
要点二：
There
are
many
dishes
for
the
big
dinner.
New
Year
cake
is
often
the
first
dish,
which
means
“having
more
luck
and
becoming
better”
in
Chinese
pronunciation.
Another
dish
is
fish,
which
means
“having
more
than
we
need”.
句子升格：
?
There
are
many
dishes
for
the
big
dinner.
For
example,
New
Year
cake
is
often
the
first
dish,
which
means
“having
more
luck
and
becoming
better”
in
Chinese
pronunciation.
Another
dish
which
is
necessary
is
fish,
which
means
“having
more
than
we
need”.
(短语；从句)
写好句
结尾
The
family
dinner
on
Spring
Festival
Eve
plays
an
important
part
in
traditional
Chinese
culture.
I
hope
you
can
come
and
have
a
try
some
day.
句子升格：
?
The
family
dinner
on
Spring
Festival
Eve
plays
an
important
part
in
traditional
Chinese
culture.
I
hope
that
you
can
come
and
have
a
try
some
day.
(短语；从句)
成好文
As
we
know,
the
Spring
Festival
is
the
most
important
event
in
China.
In
Chinese
traditional
culture,
the
family
dinner
on
Spring
Festival
Eve
is
the
most
important
dinner.
The
family
dinner
is
important
because
of
its
long
history.
Besides,
it’s
a
chance
for
family
members
to
spend
a
happy
holiday
together.
There
are
many
dishes
for
the
big
dinner.
For
example,
New
Year
cake
is
often
the
first
dish,
which
means
“having
more
luck
and
becoming
better”
in
Chinese
pronunciation.
Another
dish
which
is
necessary
is
fish,
which
means
“having
more
than
we
need”.
The
family
dinner
plays
an
important
part
in
traditional
Chinese
culture.
I
hope
you
can
come
and
have
a
try
some
day.
04
佳作欣赏
（MODELS）
满分佳作
他山之玉
范文
The
family
dinner
on
Spring
Festival
Eve
is
the
most
important
dinner
in
traditional
Chinese
culture.
On
Spring
Festival
Eve,
family
members
get
together
to
enjoy
the
dinner.
New
Year
cake
is
often
the
first
dish,
which
means
“having
more
luck
and
becoming
better”
in
Chinese
pronunciation.
Another
dish
is
fish,
which
has
the
meaning
that
“having
more
than
we
need”．Children
all
like
this
family
dinner.
At
dinner
they
receive
not
only
best
wishes
but
also
lucky
money
from
their
parents
.
It
is
a
Chinese
tradition
which
we
look
forward
to
every
year
and
brings
us
more
pleasure.
佳作欣赏
01
近年来我国的发展令世界瞩目，我国的传统文化也越来越受到世界各国人民的关注。假如你校举办中国的传统节日——中秋节的征文比赛，请你根据以下要点和要求介绍一下该节日。
1.
要点：1)中秋节在什么时候；
2)人们如何庆祝中秋节；
3)中秋节的意义。
2.
要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右。
佳作欣赏
01
Among
many
traditional
festivals
in
China,
I
like
the
Mid-?autumn
Festival
best.
It
falls
on
the
15th
day
of
August
in
the
lunar
calendar
and
is
considered
to
be
a
time
for
family
reunion.
On
that
day,
people
would
have
a
big
dinner
with
their
family.
After
dinner,
they
often
admire
the
full
moon
which
is
round
and
bright.
Meanwhile,
children
will
be
told
stories
between
Chang'e
and
Houyi.
Another
tradition
is
eating
mooncakes
and
fruit,
which
is
a
symbol
of
reunion.
At
the
same
time,
our
government
advocates
that
we
should
avoid
wasting
food
while
celebrating
this
important
festival.
The
Mid?-autumn
Festival
can
not
only
make
us
feel
happy,
but
also
help
us
realize
the
importance
of
home
and
family.
佳作欣赏
02
假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友MIKE
想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike
写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。
提示：1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)<
Spring
Festival,
traditional,
decorate,
on
the
eve
of
the
festival,
get
together,
set
off
fireworks,
lucky
money>
要求：1.
100词左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.
字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
佳作欣赏
02
Dear
Mike,
　　How
are
you?
I’m
really
glad
that
you
are
interested
in
traditional
Chinese
festivals.
There
are
many
traditional
festivals
in
China,
such
as
Spring
Festival,
Mid-Autumn
Day
and
so
on.
I’d
like
to
introduce
the
Spring
Festival
to
you.
Spring
Festival
is
the
most
important
traditional
holiday
in
China.
It
usually
lasts
for
15
days.
　　Days
before
the
festival,
people
clean
their
houses.
They
think
cleaning
sweeps
any
bad
luck.
They
decorate
their
houses
with
paper
cuts.
On
the
eve
of
the
festival,
family
members
get
together
and
have
big
meals.
Then
they
watch
the
Spring
Festival
Gala
on
TV.
At
midnight,
they
set
off
fireworks
to
welcome
the
New
Year.
During
the
festival,
kids
get
lucky
money
from
old
people.
People
visit
their
relatives
and
friends.
They
wish
each
a
happy
year
and
good
luck.
How
happy
we
are.
　　Best
wishes!
　　Yours,
　　Liu
Wei
假定你是李华。想邀请外教Charlie参加学生会举办的端午节庆祝活动。请给他写封邮件。
内容包括：
1.
简要介绍端午节；
2.
活动时间、地点和内容。
注意：
1.
词数100左右；
2.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.
端午节（the
Dragon
Boat
Festival）。
佳作欣赏
03
佳作欣赏
03
Dear
Charlie,
I’m
LiHua,
president
of
the
Student
Union.
I’m
writing
to
invite
you
to
our
Dragon
Boat
Festival
celebration,
which
is
to
be
held
in
the
Lecture
Hall
at
14:00
next
Monday.
The
Duanwu
or
Dragon
Boat
Festival,
generally
celebrated
on
the
fifth
month
of
the
Chinese
lunar
calendar,
falls
on
June
18
this
year.
It
is
one
of
the
oldest
festivals
in
China,
with
a
history
of
more
than
2,000
years.
Legend
holds
that
this
festival
is
in
memory
of
Qu
Yuan,
a
patriotic
poet
during
the
Warring
States
Period.
佳作欣赏
03
In
the
celebration,
you
can
enjoy
a
performance
about
that
legend
and
watch
live
broadcast
of
dragon
boat
racing.
In
the
meanwhile,
varieties
of
Zongzi,
an
essential
food
for
this
unique
occasion,
are
available,
which
take
different
shapes
and
various
fillings.
Come
and
join
us!
Your
early
reply
is
highly
appreciated!
Yours,
Li
Hua
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