中考作文专练课件
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文档简介
(共23张PPT)
sun
Guess and talk
Basic elements:
When
Where
Who
What
Given words:
a scene (场景，一幕) castle(城堡)；have a date (约会)；
Maybe it is a scene from a play. In the scene there are a young man and a girl. One evening they come to a corner of a castle. Maybe they are having a date. From their eyes we can see they love each other very much.
Writing 书面表达
中考考点要求：
根据中文提示，写一篇80字左右的英文表达。
内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词拼写和标点符号正确，书写工整。
(1) 认真审题，看清题目中的要求。
(2) 根据提示内容，列出要点及每个要点应列的
词语。
(3) 紧扣提纲，动笔写作。
(4) 检查句子的语法结构，注意英汉表达的差
异，查字母大小写是否规范，字数是否合
要求。
中考书面表达常见题型：
看图作文和提示作文
Writing steps
六要素： 5W1H：何 时， 何 地， 何 人， 为何， 如 何， 做 了 何 事
全，不可漏落
Peter 出生于英国，去年来到中国的一所中学教英语。有一天，在他回家的路上,遇见他的中国朋友李雷，李雷告诉Peter 他住在哪儿，并邀请他去家里吃晚饭。Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜。
Peter 出生于英国。
2. 去年他来到中国，并在一所中学教英语。
3. 有一天,在他回家的路上,Peter正好遇见他的中国朋友李雷
4. 李雷告诉Peter他住在哪儿。
5. 然后他邀请他去家里吃晚饭。
6. Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜。
时态：一般过去时
人称：第三人称
1. Peter 出生于英国。
2. 去年他来到中国，并在一所中学教英语。
3. 有一天,在他回家的路上,Peter正好遇见他的
中国朋友李雷。
4. 李雷告诉Peter他住在哪儿。
5. 然后他邀请他去家里吃晚饭。
6. Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜。
was born in
came to China; taught English
on his way home; met
told; where he lived
invited him to
was very glad; liked
One possible version:
Peter was born in England. Last year, he came to China and taught English in a middle school. One day, on his way home, Peter met his Chinese friend, Li Lei. Li Lei told him where he lived. Then he invited Peter to his home for supper. Peter was very happy because he liked Chinese food very much.
我是个中学生, 对电脑特别感兴趣, 一放学回家就开电脑，有时玩游戏，有时在网上和朋友聊天，有时给朋友发电子邮件。尽管我喜欢玩电脑，但我父母阻止我这样做，他们认为我在电脑上花太多时间。于是我在晚上做完作业后才玩一会儿电脑。
1.我是个中学生。
2.我对电脑特别感兴趣。
3.我一放学回家我就开电脑。
4.我有时玩游戏, 有时在网上和朋友聊天, 有时给朋友发电子邮件。
5.尽管我喜欢电脑，但我父母阻止我这样做。
6.他们认为我在电脑上花太多时间。
7.于是我在晚上做完作业后才玩一会儿电脑。
It’s your turn now!
One possible version:
I’m a middle school student, and I am interested in the computer. I turn on the computer as soon as I get home every day. Sometimes I play computer games, talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails to them. Though I like it very much, my parents stop me from doing that. They think I spend too much time on the computer. So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.
1. 他学习认真，但是英语成绩不好。
2. 王兰，15岁，文昌中学的一名学生。
3.我不喜欢和汤姆一起工作，他太懒了（lazy）。
be weak in sth. / be poor at sth. / isn’t good at sth.
don’t/doesn’t do well in sth.
1) Wang Lan is a student in Wenchang Middle School. She’s fifteen years old.
Wang Lan is a fifteen-year-old student in Wenchang Middle School.
I don’t want to work with Tom. He is too lazy.
I don’t want to work with Tom who is too lazy.
4. 他身体很好。
5.自从我到文昌以来，已经半年了.
6. 从我家步行到学校需30分钟。
He is very healthy.
He is in good health.
He has a very good body.
It is half a year since I came to Wenchang.
Half a year has passed by since I came to Wenchang.
I have been in Wenchang for half a year.
It takes half an hour to walk from my house to our school.
×
Our school is half an hour’s walk from my house.
7. 有很多人在等公共汽车。
There are many people wait for the bus.
There are many people waiting for the bus.
Choose the best sentence patterns for your translation! (No mistakes!)
There are many people who are waiting for
the bus.
4分
5分
14分
Beautiful handwriting!
卷面整洁不一定加分，
卷面潦草一定要扣分！
请牢记：
列
审
扩
连
改
抄
书面表达
Summary
Homework
假如你是陈红， 你昨天在放学回家的路上发生了交通事故，你从自行车上摔了下来，受了伤，被好心人及时送到医院，医生叫你卧床休息三天。你只得向老师请假（ask for a sick leave）。
提示：
请根据以上内容，写一篇短文。
词数：80词左右
sun
Guess and talk
Basic elements:
When
Where
Who
What
Given words:
a scene (场景，一幕) castle(城堡)；have a date (约会)；
Maybe it is a scene from a play. In the scene there are a young man and a girl. One evening they come to a corner of a castle. Maybe they are having a date. From their eyes we can see they love each other very much.
Writing 书面表达
中考考点要求：
根据中文提示，写一篇80字左右的英文表达。
内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词拼写和标点符号正确，书写工整。
(1) 认真审题，看清题目中的要求。
(2) 根据提示内容，列出要点及每个要点应列的
词语。
(3) 紧扣提纲，动笔写作。
(4) 检查句子的语法结构，注意英汉表达的差
异，查字母大小写是否规范，字数是否合
要求。
中考书面表达常见题型：
看图作文和提示作文
Writing steps
六要素： 5W1H：何 时， 何 地， 何 人， 为何， 如 何， 做 了 何 事
全，不可漏落
Peter 出生于英国，去年来到中国的一所中学教英语。有一天，在他回家的路上,遇见他的中国朋友李雷，李雷告诉Peter 他住在哪儿，并邀请他去家里吃晚饭。Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜。
Peter 出生于英国。
2. 去年他来到中国，并在一所中学教英语。
3. 有一天,在他回家的路上,Peter正好遇见他的中国朋友李雷
4. 李雷告诉Peter他住在哪儿。
5. 然后他邀请他去家里吃晚饭。
6. Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜。
时态：一般过去时
人称：第三人称
1. Peter 出生于英国。
2. 去年他来到中国，并在一所中学教英语。
3. 有一天,在他回家的路上,Peter正好遇见他的
中国朋友李雷。
4. 李雷告诉Peter他住在哪儿。
5. 然后他邀请他去家里吃晚饭。
6. Peter很高兴，因为他很喜欢吃中国菜。
was born in
came to China; taught English
on his way home; met
told; where he lived
invited him to
was very glad; liked
One possible version:
Peter was born in England. Last year, he came to China and taught English in a middle school. One day, on his way home, Peter met his Chinese friend, Li Lei. Li Lei told him where he lived. Then he invited Peter to his home for supper. Peter was very happy because he liked Chinese food very much.
我是个中学生, 对电脑特别感兴趣, 一放学回家就开电脑，有时玩游戏，有时在网上和朋友聊天，有时给朋友发电子邮件。尽管我喜欢玩电脑，但我父母阻止我这样做，他们认为我在电脑上花太多时间。于是我在晚上做完作业后才玩一会儿电脑。
1.我是个中学生。
2.我对电脑特别感兴趣。
3.我一放学回家我就开电脑。
4.我有时玩游戏, 有时在网上和朋友聊天, 有时给朋友发电子邮件。
5.尽管我喜欢电脑，但我父母阻止我这样做。
6.他们认为我在电脑上花太多时间。
7.于是我在晚上做完作业后才玩一会儿电脑。
It’s your turn now!
One possible version:
I’m a middle school student, and I am interested in the computer. I turn on the computer as soon as I get home every day. Sometimes I play computer games, talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails to them. Though I like it very much, my parents stop me from doing that. They think I spend too much time on the computer. So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.
1. 他学习认真，但是英语成绩不好。
2. 王兰，15岁，文昌中学的一名学生。
3.我不喜欢和汤姆一起工作，他太懒了（lazy）。
be weak in sth. / be poor at sth. / isn’t good at sth.
don’t/doesn’t do well in sth.
1) Wang Lan is a student in Wenchang Middle School. She’s fifteen years old.
Wang Lan is a fifteen-year-old student in Wenchang Middle School.
I don’t want to work with Tom. He is too lazy.
I don’t want to work with Tom who is too lazy.
4. 他身体很好。
5.自从我到文昌以来，已经半年了.
6. 从我家步行到学校需30分钟。
He is very healthy.
He is in good health.
He has a very good body.
It is half a year since I came to Wenchang.
Half a year has passed by since I came to Wenchang.
I have been in Wenchang for half a year.
It takes half an hour to walk from my house to our school.
×
Our school is half an hour’s walk from my house.
7. 有很多人在等公共汽车。
There are many people wait for the bus.
There are many people waiting for the bus.
Choose the best sentence patterns for your translation! (No mistakes!)
There are many people who are waiting for
the bus.
4分
5分
14分
Beautiful handwriting!
卷面整洁不一定加分，
卷面潦草一定要扣分！
请牢记：
列
审
扩
连
改
抄
书面表达
Summary
Homework
假如你是陈红， 你昨天在放学回家的路上发生了交通事故，你从自行车上摔了下来，受了伤，被好心人及时送到医院，医生叫你卧床休息三天。你只得向老师请假（ask for a sick leave）。
提示：
请根据以上内容，写一篇短文。
词数：80词左右
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