备战2021高考英语之短文改错(老高考）
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备战2021高考英语之短文改错(老高考）
（A）
A Chinese spacecraft calling Chang'e 4 landed on the far side of the moon on January 3, 2019. It is the first time that a craft landed there successfully. The far side is the part of the moon faced away from Earth. China landed a craft on the near side in 2013. The landing on the far side, what was not easy, shows China's technology is powerfully. China first had to send a satellite into the space, which passes messages between Earth with Chang'e 4. However, the moon itself will block the information passage. Yutu-2, the craft's rover(巡视器), is taking photo. Scientists hope the exploration will throw light in the development of our solar system.
（B）
John went shopping in a store, and he forgot to bring a bag. So he buys a shopping bag. After arriving home, it occurred him that he could make a bag by using his old trousers. Several hours earlier, he made himself a very nice bag. His mother was amazing at what he had done. Avoiding spending money unnecessarily is a way of saving. And making a good use of things is an approach to protect the environment. What's more, it is helpful for you to improve the ability to make things by hands. It not only brings us pleasure but reduce waste around us.
（C）
I will never forget the day on that my father taught me how to fly a kite.
It was spring and the sun was shining brightly with wind blowing gentle. When we set off to the riverside with a new kite, I felt extremely exciting. At first my father held the kite for me, told me to run as quickly as I could when he threw the kite into the air. Although the kite fell to the ground again and again, but I kept on trying with help of my father. Finally I got the hang of them and managed to fly my kite high in the sky.
It was then that I learn a valuable life lesson: we were likely to fail many time before we finally succeeded in doing something.
（D）
I was far behind most of my classmate when I become a senior three student. Moreover, I couldn't follow the teacher completely in class. One day, I was too much exhausted and confused to concentrate on which the teacher taught. Unfortunate, I was invited to share my own idea. As you can imagine, I couldn't say a word. Feeling embarrassing, I ready to be criticized. Much on my astonishment, the teacher instructed and encouraged me patiently. I was such touched that I was determined to try his best to study hard. Now I am quite confident about my study.
（E）
What is the standard of beauty？Different time have different standards. In our parents' generation, it is believed that a girl should be a little fatter, because it meant that she lived better life. While the thin girls ,which would be thought to be lacking for happiness, were not appreciated. And today, the most important standard of beauty is to be thin. The thinner , the better. At the commercial ads, all of the models are skinny, look so elegant. When I see my friends work hardly to lose weight, I feel worried about them. The beauty's standard will change over time and that health is more important than meeting any supposing standard of beauty.
（F）
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rain Sunday afternoon.I was waiting for the green lights that a girl of about ten was knocked down by a pass car.The car then drives off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid,but I joined in without any hesitation.Luckily she was not bad injured and we sent her to the near hospital.
I am proud of what I did for the girl.As member of the society,I am aware of that being responsible is what it takes to make a better community.
（G）
Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside.We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am.On the way,we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole.She felt so frightening and even burst into tears.One of my classmate found a long rope and we finally got him out.Fortunately,she didn’t suffer seriously injuries,but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted.We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital.It is an experience we’ll never forget it,though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.
参考答案：
A
第一处：calling→called 考查非谓语动词。此处call和spacecraft之间为动宾关系，用过去分词作后置定语。句意：2019年1月3日，一艘名为娣娥四号的中国航天器在月球背面着陆。
第二处：landed 前加 has 考查动词时态。It is/was the first time that sb.has/had done...是固定句式，that 从句应用完成时态。句意：这是第一次航天器成功降落在那里。
第三处：faced→facing 考查非谓语动词。此处应用现在分词短语作后置定语修饰part,并与其构成主谓关系
第四处：what→which 考查连接词。此处应为非限制性定语从句，故用which引导。句意：在月球背面着陆并不容易，这表明中国的技术是强大的。
第五处：powerfully→powerful 考查形容词。此处位于be动词的后面，用作表语，故用形容词。
第六处：去掉space前的the 考查冠词。space意为”太空”时其前不加冠词。句意：中国首先要向太空发射一颗卫星，它在地球和娣娥四号之间传递信息。
第七处：with→and 考查连接词。between...and...意为“在……和……之间”，是固定短语。
第八处：However→Otherwise 考查副词。根据前后语境可知，此处表示”否则”。句意：否则，月球本身会阻塞信息通道。
第九处：photo→photos 考查名词。photo是可数名词，其前无冠词时要用复数形式。
第十处：in→on 考查介词。throw light on是固定短语，意为”照亮，阐明，使……显得清楚”。句意：科学家们希望这次探索将有助于我们了解太阳系的发展。
B
第一处：and→but 句意为：约翰到一家商店购物，但是他忘了带购物袋。根据句意可知，此处前后为转折关系，并非顺承关系，故将and改为but。
第二处：buys→bought根据前一句中的went shopping可知，此处讲述发生在过去的事情，故应用一般过去时。故将buys改为bought。
第三处：在occurred后加to it occurred to sb.that为固定句式，意为“某人突然想到……”，故在occurred后加to。
第四处：earlier→later根据上下文语境可知，此处指几小时后，他自己做了一个很好的袋子。故将earlier改为later。
第五处：amazing→amazed amazing用于形容物的性质，意为“令人惊异的",amazed用于描述人的感觉，意为“感到惊讶的”，本句的主语为His mother,指人，故此处应用表示人感觉的形容词作表语，故将amazing改为amazed。
第六处：删除a .make good use of sth.为固定搭配，意为“充分利用某物”，a多余，故删除a。
第七处：protect→protecting .approach后的to为介词，其后应用动名词，作介词to的宾语，故将protect改为protecting。
第八处：you→us根据下文中的“It not only brings us...around us"可知，此处应用第一人称，故将you改为us。
第九处：hands→hand. by hand为固定搭配，意为“用手工做……”，故将hands改为hand。
第十处：reduce→reduces本句主语为It,谓语应用第三人称单数形式，设空处与brings为本句的两个并列谓语，故将reduce改为reduces。
C
第一处：that→which 考查关系词。先行词为the day,指物，后跟”介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句，故关系代词用which。
第二处：gentle→gently 考查副词。此处修饰动词blow应用副词，故将gentle改为gently。
第三处：to→for 考查介词。句意：当我们带着一只新风筝动身去河边时，我感到异常兴奋。set off for为固定短语，意为“动身去……”，故将to改为for。
第四处：exciting→excited 考查形容词。句意参见上题解析。exciting意为“令人兴奋的”，而此处是形容人的感受的，应用excited,表示"兴奋的"。
第五处：told→telling 考查非谓语动词。句子的主语为my father,谓语动词为held,故told应改为非谓语动词形式。又因tell与其逻辑主语之间为主谓关系，故应用现在分词形式在句中作状语，故把told改为telling。
第六处：去掉but 考查连词。句首有Although,不可与but连用，故去掉but
第七处：with与help之间加the 考查固定搭配中的冠词。with the help of sb.意为"在某人的帮助下”，为固定用法。
第八处：them→it 考查代词。句意：最后我掌握了放风筝的要领，使我的风筝在空中飞得很高。此处指的是掌握了"放风筝"这件事的要领，故将them改为it。
第九处：learn→learned 考查动词时态。此处表示正是在那时候，作者学到了宝贵的人生一课。本文整体时态为一般过去时，谓语动词was也提示了此处应该用一般过去时，故把learn改为learned。
第十处：time→times 考查名词的数。time在此处为可数名词，且其前有many修饰，故应用复数形式，表示许多次。故将time改为times。
D
E
1.time→times 2.is→was 3.在better前加a 4.which→who 5.for→in
6.And→But 7.look→looking 8.hardly→hard 9.删除that 10.supposing→supposed
F
I can well remember an incident that happened on a Sunday afternoon.I was waiting for the green lights a girl of about ten was knocked down by a car.The car then off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give first aid, I joined in without any hesitation.Luckily she was not injured and we sent her to the hospital. I am proud of what I did for the girl.As member of the society,I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better community.
Last Saturday our class went hiking in countryside.We at our school gate and set off at 8:00am.On the way,we were singing and laughing happily a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole.She felt so and even burst into tears.One of my found a long rope and we finally got out.Fortunately,she didn’t suffer injuries,but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted.We managed to her to the nearest hospital.It is an experience we’ll never forget ,though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.
G
（A）
A Chinese spacecraft calling Chang'e 4 landed on the far side of the moon on January 3, 2019. It is the first time that a craft landed there successfully. The far side is the part of the moon faced away from Earth. China landed a craft on the near side in 2013. The landing on the far side, what was not easy, shows China's technology is powerfully. China first had to send a satellite into the space, which passes messages between Earth with Chang'e 4. However, the moon itself will block the information passage. Yutu-2, the craft's rover(巡视器), is taking photo. Scientists hope the exploration will throw light in the development of our solar system.
（B）
John went shopping in a store, and he forgot to bring a bag. So he buys a shopping bag. After arriving home, it occurred him that he could make a bag by using his old trousers. Several hours earlier, he made himself a very nice bag. His mother was amazing at what he had done. Avoiding spending money unnecessarily is a way of saving. And making a good use of things is an approach to protect the environment. What's more, it is helpful for you to improve the ability to make things by hands. It not only brings us pleasure but reduce waste around us.
（C）
I will never forget the day on that my father taught me how to fly a kite.
It was spring and the sun was shining brightly with wind blowing gentle. When we set off to the riverside with a new kite, I felt extremely exciting. At first my father held the kite for me, told me to run as quickly as I could when he threw the kite into the air. Although the kite fell to the ground again and again, but I kept on trying with help of my father. Finally I got the hang of them and managed to fly my kite high in the sky.
It was then that I learn a valuable life lesson: we were likely to fail many time before we finally succeeded in doing something.
（D）
I was far behind most of my classmate when I become a senior three student. Moreover, I couldn't follow the teacher completely in class. One day, I was too much exhausted and confused to concentrate on which the teacher taught. Unfortunate, I was invited to share my own idea. As you can imagine, I couldn't say a word. Feeling embarrassing, I ready to be criticized. Much on my astonishment, the teacher instructed and encouraged me patiently. I was such touched that I was determined to try his best to study hard. Now I am quite confident about my study.
（E）
What is the standard of beauty？Different time have different standards. In our parents' generation, it is believed that a girl should be a little fatter, because it meant that she lived better life. While the thin girls ,which would be thought to be lacking for happiness, were not appreciated. And today, the most important standard of beauty is to be thin. The thinner , the better. At the commercial ads, all of the models are skinny, look so elegant. When I see my friends work hardly to lose weight, I feel worried about them. The beauty's standard will change over time and that health is more important than meeting any supposing standard of beauty.
（F）
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rain Sunday afternoon.I was waiting for the green lights that a girl of about ten was knocked down by a pass car.The car then drives off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid,but I joined in without any hesitation.Luckily she was not bad injured and we sent her to the near hospital.
I am proud of what I did for the girl.As member of the society,I am aware of that being responsible is what it takes to make a better community.
（G）
Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside.We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am.On the way,we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole.She felt so frightening and even burst into tears.One of my classmate found a long rope and we finally got him out.Fortunately,she didn’t suffer seriously injuries,but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted.We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital.It is an experience we’ll never forget it,though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.
参考答案：
A
第一处：calling→called 考查非谓语动词。此处call和spacecraft之间为动宾关系，用过去分词作后置定语。句意：2019年1月3日，一艘名为娣娥四号的中国航天器在月球背面着陆。
第二处：landed 前加 has 考查动词时态。It is/was the first time that sb.has/had done...是固定句式，that 从句应用完成时态。句意：这是第一次航天器成功降落在那里。
第三处：faced→facing 考查非谓语动词。此处应用现在分词短语作后置定语修饰part,并与其构成主谓关系
第四处：what→which 考查连接词。此处应为非限制性定语从句，故用which引导。句意：在月球背面着陆并不容易，这表明中国的技术是强大的。
第五处：powerfully→powerful 考查形容词。此处位于be动词的后面，用作表语，故用形容词。
第六处：去掉space前的the 考查冠词。space意为”太空”时其前不加冠词。句意：中国首先要向太空发射一颗卫星，它在地球和娣娥四号之间传递信息。
第七处：with→and 考查连接词。between...and...意为“在……和……之间”，是固定短语。
第八处：However→Otherwise 考查副词。根据前后语境可知，此处表示”否则”。句意：否则，月球本身会阻塞信息通道。
第九处：photo→photos 考查名词。photo是可数名词，其前无冠词时要用复数形式。
第十处：in→on 考查介词。throw light on是固定短语，意为”照亮，阐明，使……显得清楚”。句意：科学家们希望这次探索将有助于我们了解太阳系的发展。
B
第一处：and→but 句意为：约翰到一家商店购物，但是他忘了带购物袋。根据句意可知，此处前后为转折关系，并非顺承关系，故将and改为but。
第二处：buys→bought根据前一句中的went shopping可知，此处讲述发生在过去的事情，故应用一般过去时。故将buys改为bought。
第三处：在occurred后加to it occurred to sb.that为固定句式，意为“某人突然想到……”，故在occurred后加to。
第四处：earlier→later根据上下文语境可知，此处指几小时后，他自己做了一个很好的袋子。故将earlier改为later。
第五处：amazing→amazed amazing用于形容物的性质，意为“令人惊异的",amazed用于描述人的感觉，意为“感到惊讶的”，本句的主语为His mother,指人，故此处应用表示人感觉的形容词作表语，故将amazing改为amazed。
第六处：删除a .make good use of sth.为固定搭配，意为“充分利用某物”，a多余，故删除a。
第七处：protect→protecting .approach后的to为介词，其后应用动名词，作介词to的宾语，故将protect改为protecting。
第八处：you→us根据下文中的“It not only brings us...around us"可知，此处应用第一人称，故将you改为us。
第九处：hands→hand. by hand为固定搭配，意为“用手工做……”，故将hands改为hand。
第十处：reduce→reduces本句主语为It,谓语应用第三人称单数形式，设空处与brings为本句的两个并列谓语，故将reduce改为reduces。
C
第一处：that→which 考查关系词。先行词为the day,指物，后跟”介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句，故关系代词用which。
第二处：gentle→gently 考查副词。此处修饰动词blow应用副词，故将gentle改为gently。
第三处：to→for 考查介词。句意：当我们带着一只新风筝动身去河边时，我感到异常兴奋。set off for为固定短语，意为“动身去……”，故将to改为for。
第四处：exciting→excited 考查形容词。句意参见上题解析。exciting意为“令人兴奋的”，而此处是形容人的感受的，应用excited,表示"兴奋的"。
第五处：told→telling 考查非谓语动词。句子的主语为my father,谓语动词为held,故told应改为非谓语动词形式。又因tell与其逻辑主语之间为主谓关系，故应用现在分词形式在句中作状语，故把told改为telling。
第六处：去掉but 考查连词。句首有Although,不可与but连用，故去掉but
第七处：with与help之间加the 考查固定搭配中的冠词。with the help of sb.意为"在某人的帮助下”，为固定用法。
第八处：them→it 考查代词。句意：最后我掌握了放风筝的要领，使我的风筝在空中飞得很高。此处指的是掌握了"放风筝"这件事的要领，故将them改为it。
第九处：learn→learned 考查动词时态。此处表示正是在那时候，作者学到了宝贵的人生一课。本文整体时态为一般过去时，谓语动词was也提示了此处应该用一般过去时，故把learn改为learned。
第十处：time→times 考查名词的数。time在此处为可数名词，且其前有many修饰，故应用复数形式，表示许多次。故将time改为times。
D
E
1.time→times 2.is→was 3.在better前加a 4.which→who 5.for→in
6.And→But 7.look→looking 8.hardly→hard 9.删除that 10.supposing→supposed
F
I can well remember an incident that happened on a Sunday afternoon.I was waiting for the green lights a girl of about ten was knocked down by a car.The car then off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give first aid, I joined in without any hesitation.Luckily she was not injured and we sent her to the hospital. I am proud of what I did for the girl.As member of the society,I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better community.
Last Saturday our class went hiking in countryside.We at our school gate and set off at 8:00am.On the way,we were singing and laughing happily a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole.She felt so and even burst into tears.One of my found a long rope and we finally got out.Fortunately,she didn’t suffer injuries,but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted.We managed to her to the nearest hospital.It is an experience we’ll never forget ,though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.
G