Unit 8 A green world Study skills：Checking your work 课件（36张PPT）

8下 Unit 8 Study Skills
How to improve your writing skills
_________is very important in the senior entrance
exam of English.
Writing
主观题（非选题）分值60’
Learning objectives:
学会作文审题并构建文章基本结构。
2.能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。
3.根据主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。
4.学会检查修改润色自己的作文。
一、作文得分：_________
二、扣分原因：1._______2.________3.______...
三、合理建议：1._______2.________3.______...
要点齐全吗？字数够吗？
有语法错误吗？
大小写规范吗？
结构、过渡自然吗？
书写美观吗？
Lead in
Good articles must be revised again and again.
好文章是改出来的。
-----Hemingway
Lead in
How to get higher marks in writing?
1.To cover all the_____________________.
2.To ________ sentences well.
3.To combine(结合) __________ well.
4.To _______ the composition carefully.
5.To ________ neatly(整洁地).
一档文17-20分：
写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅，有句式变化，有复
杂结构（至少2-3个），基本无语法错误（1-2个错误），或有
少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意
义理解。
main points and details
write
sentences
check
write
Pre-writing
历年扬州中考作文：
2016年
2017年
2018年
open composition
开放性作文
How to get higher marks in writing?
Writing
Design
Build
Decorate
审题；列要点；依要点，拟提纲，组词成句
构篇章，扩句成文
检查润色，书写
Pre-writing
2019年高邮一模作文：
随着中考的临近，九年级同学的学习生活愈加紧张。作为一名九年级的同学，你如何评价自己的生活状态？在最后两个月里，你有什么样的打算和希望？请根据以下问题，写一篇题为“The life as a Grade Nine Student”的短文，介绍自己的迎考状态和学习愿景。
问题：
1. What do you think of your school life now?(Including what you do and how do you feel )
2. What's your plan about the following two months?(Including the plan for subjects or others)
3. What's your hope?(Including the aims or others)
要求:1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2)必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥； 3)词数：100词左右(开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
The life as a Grade Nine Student
How time flies! The big day is coming soon.
There’s an old saying, “He who fails to plan plans to fail.”
As a Grade Nine student, I hope that
随着中考的临近，九年级同学的学习生活愈加紧张。作为一名九年级的同学，你如何评价自己的生活状态？在最后两个月里，你有什么样的打算和希望？请根据以下问题，写一篇题为“The life as a Grade Nine Student”的短文，介绍自己的迎考状态和学习愿景。
问题：
1. What do you think of your school life now? (Including what you do and how do you feel )
2. What's your plan about the following two months? (Including the plan for subjects or others)
3. What's your hope? (Including the aims or others)
Task1.Cover all the main points and details
1、审题
主题
要点
人称
第一人称
时态
以一般将来时为主。
要求:1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2)必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥； 3)词数：100词左右(开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

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Example 1:
Example 2:
Well-paragraphed
段落分明的
随着中考的临近，九年级同学的学习生活愈加紧张。作为一名九年级的同学，你如何评价自己的生活状态？在最后两个月里，你有什么样的打算和希望？请根据以下问题，写一篇题为“The life as a GradeNine Student”的短文，介绍自己的迎考状态和学习愿景。
问题：1. What do you think of your school life now?(Including what you do and how do you feel )
2. What's your plan about the following two months?(Including the plan for subjects or others)
3. What's your hope?(Including the aims or others)
What do you think of your school life now?
What's your hope?
What's your plan about the following two months?
Questions
what you do and how do you feel
the aims or others
2、列要点
Topic :The life as a Grade Nine Student
Details
Tip: Change the questions into a table
the plan for subjects or others
2-3 points
....
3、依要点 列提纲
What do you think of your school life now?
What's your plan about the following two months?
What's your hope?
work all day long from Monday to Friday
tired, hard but meaningful
......
work hard on each subject
liten to the teacher carefully in class
solve the problems on weak subject
......
get into the best school in Gaoyou
go on working hard to ernter a satisfying university
......
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Cover all the details

what you do
how you feel
Plans
Others
aims
others
1.Think of correct words ﹠phrases.
2.Think of correct tenses.
3.Think of correct orders.
3. It can in study encourage them a lot.
1. Students can learn to face successful and failure
2. They think sport had a bad effect.
success
has
3. It can encourage them a lot in their studies
Task2. To write sentences well
1. 避免简单错误
2. 优化词汇
1.The sports meeting is good.
meaningful
2. It influences my study.
makes a great difference to
★ About 70% of the students think it’s good for them to
do some exercise.
About 70% of the students think they should do some exercise. They think it is good.
It’s good for my body and mind and it’s good for study.
★ It’s good for not only my body and mind but also my study.
3. 优化句子结构
Have a try: Better these sentences
1. I am lucky, and I have so many good friends.
2. He is my friend. He has a kind heart.
3.Youth is like a song. It is full of joy and troubles.
4. I found learning English well is difficult..
How lucky I am to have so many good friends!
He is my friend with a kind heart.
I found it difficult to learn English well.
1. 使用感叹句(exclamatory sentence)
2. 使用with复合结构(compound sentence)
3. 使用定语从句(attributive clause)
4. 使用it做形式宾语或形式主语句型(formal object)
Youth is just like an exciting song which is full of joy as well as troubles.
Task3. To combine(结合) sentences well
构篇章，扩句成文
Can you circle the words to combine sentences well?
Group discussion: Useful expressions (transitions过渡 between ideas):
First of all, Firstly/First,
Secondly/Second,
… next …, and then,
finally/in the end/ at last
What’s more, especially, not only …but also
at the same time, and, also, too, again,
and then, Either,moreover
On one hand… On the other hand…,Some…, while others…
however, but, though
/although
because;
since; as;
so; as a result
As far as I know ,
In my opinion,
to tell the truth,
I suggest/think that…
1.表文章结构顺序： 4.陈述正反方的观点：
2.表示补充、增加信息的： 5.表示原因和结果的：
3.表转折对比关系的： 6.表达自己观点：
A
B
C
D
F
B
E
F
D
C
E


A

Better our coherence (连贯性)
★Spelling mistakes
★Word usage mistakes
★Grammatical mistakes (语法错误)
★Punctuative mistakes (标点符号错误)
★Missing words
Task4. To check the composition(作文) carefully
检查润色
Correct the mistakes
make
seems to go
practice
practice
much
challenge
make
例1、他太累了。
He is too tired.
As the saying goes, “
.” He is too tired.
Don't burn the candle at both ends
Tips1: Add proverbs if necessary
例2、如果我们可以把控好自己，我们就可以充分利用电脑了。
If we can control ourselves, we can make the best use of computer.
As the saying goes,
If we can control ourselves, we can make the best use of computer.
“Every coin has two sides”
1.实现目标的唯一途径就是努力学习。
The only way to achieve one’s goal is to work hard.?
The only way to achieve one’s goal is to work hard.?
Just as the saying goes, “　　　　　　　　　 .”
No pains, no gains
2.我已经去过长城了。
I have been to the Great Wall.
As the saying goes,“
　　　　　　　　　 .” I have been to the Great Wall.
He who has never been to the
Great Wall is not a true man
Where there is a will, there is a way.
Can you write down the suitable sayings?
Tips2: Avoid using Chinglish(中国式英语)
例1、people mountain people sea 人山人海
例2、good good study day day up 好好学习天天向上
例3、My heart is very heavy.我的心情很沉重
例4、The price is very suitable for me.这个价格挺适合的
例5、I like eating lion head我喜欢吃狮子头
Task5. To write neatly(整洁地)
书写
write carelessly
too close and not enough words
too far away from each other
Good or Bad
Good or Bad
Task5. To write neatly(整洁地)
书写
Tips :
字不能太紧或太松;不能太大或太小。
字要清晰，用0.5毫米黑色水笔书写。
字要工整,尽量不涂改。字母要写的规范。
字数要足，最多留一到两行。但也不能太多。
While-writing
写作要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3. 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
岁月无语，青春有言，每个同学都可能遇到一些烦心的事。请以“The Troubles of Growth”为题，记录一下自己在成长道路上的烦恼，帮助过你的朋友，指引过你前行的梦想及自己的感想。
问题：
1. What is your trouble? (at least 2 points)
2. How can you deal with them? (help and dream)
3. What is your feeling about growth? (at least 2 points)
Challenge yourself
岁月无语，青春有言，每个同学都可能遇到一些烦心的事。请以“The Troubles of Growth”为题，记录一下自己在成长道路上的烦恼，帮助过你的朋友，指引过你前行的梦想及自己的感想。
问题：
1. What is your trouble? (at least 2 points)
2. How can you deal with them? (help and dream)
3. What is your feeling about growth? (at least 2 points)
Try your best to write a wonderful composition.
While-writing
写作要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3. 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
审题
主题
要点
人称
时态
第一人称和第三人称
一般现在时为主
Writing Time
岁月无语，青春有言，在初中三年即将结束，踏进美好高中前。请以“The Troubles of Growth”为题，记录一下自己在成长道路上的烦恼，帮助过你的朋友，指引过你前行的梦想及自己的感想。
问题：
1. What is your trouble? (at least 2 points)
2. How can you deal with them? (help and dream)
3. What is your feeling about growth? (at least 2 points)
Try your best to write a wonderful composition.
While-writing
写作要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3. 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
审题
主题
要点
人称
时态
Writing Time
Correct your compositions with each other.
Post-writing
pair work
一档文17-20分:写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语言流畅
有句式变化，有复杂结构（至少2-3个）,基 本无语
法错误（1-2个错误），或有少量由于使用复杂结
构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。
二档文13-16分:基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚，语
言流畅，有少量语法错误（3-4个错误）。
三档文9-12分:写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺，
有一些语法和拼写错误，基本不影响意思表达。
四档文5-8分:写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不太
通顺，语法结构单调，错误较多，只有少数句子可
读，影响理解。
五档文0-4分:言不达意，不知所云，只有2-3个短语可读。
中考写作评分标准
Level 3
Level 4
Level 5
Level 1
Level 2
Sample writing
Youth is just like an exciting song which is full of joy as well as troubles. As a student, I have to do much homework and sometimes I feel sleepy the next day. When I get low marks, I feel stressed. I wonder how I can change this.
But luckily, I have my friends around me. They will cheer
me up when I am sad. They can also offer me some suggestions. My dream is to be a basketball player like Spud Webb, he shows us that anyone can realize his dream only if he keeps on trying and never gives up. Just as an old saying goes: “Where there is a will, there is away.”
Growth is like climbing a mountain. With dreams and friends' help, all of us can reach the top of the mountain some day in the future.
How to get higher marks in writing
审题；列要点；依要点，拟提纲，组织成句
构篇章，扩句成文
检查润色，书写
Writing
Summary
Better one of your compositions.
Homework
Practice makes perfect!