Parents
everywhere
praise
their
kids.
Jenn
Berman,
author
of
The
A
to
Z
Guide
to
Raising
Happy
and
Confident
Kids,
says,
“We've
gone
to
the
opposite
extreme
of
a
few
decades
ago
when
parents
tended
to
be
more
strict.”
By
giving
kids
a
lot
of
praise,
parents
think
they're
building
their
children's
confidence,
when,
in
fact,
it
may
be
just
the
opposite.
Too
much
praise
can
backfire
and,
when
given
in
a
way
that's
insincere,
make
kids
afraid
to
try
new
things
or
take
a
risk
for
fear
of
not
being
able
to
stay
on
top
where
their
parents'
praise
has
put
them.
Still,
don't
go
too
far
in
the
other
direction.
Not
giving
enough
praise
can
be
just
as
damaging
gas
giving
too
much.
Kids
will
feel
like
they're
not
good
enough
or
that
you
don't
care
and,
as
a
result,
may
see
no
point
in
trying
hard
for
their
accomplishments.
So
what
is
the
right
amount
of
praise?
Experts
say
that
the
quality
of
praise
is
more
important
than
the
quantity.
If
praise
is
sincere
and
focused
on
the
effort
not
the
outcome,
you
can
give
it
as
often
as
your
child
does
something
that
deserves
a
verbal
reward.
“We
should
especially
recognize
our
children's
efforts
to
push
themselves
and
work
hard
to
achieve
a
goal,”
says
Donahue,
author
of
Parenting
Without
Fear:
Letting
Go
of
Worry
and
Focusing
on
What
Really
Matters.
“One
thing
to
remember
is
that
it’s
the
process
not
the
end
product
that
matters.”
Your
son
may
not
be
the
best
basketball
player
on
his
team.
But
if
he’s
out
there
every
day
and
playing
hard,
you
should
praise
his
effort
regardless
of
whether
his
team
wins
or
loses.
Praising
the
effort
and
not
the
outcome
can
also
mean
recognizing
your
child
when
she
has
worked
hard
to
clean
the
yard,
cook
dinner,
or
finish
a
book
report.
But
whatever
it
is,
praise
should
be
given
on
a
case-by-case
basis
and
be
proportionate(相称的)to
the
amount
of
effort
your
child
has
put
into
it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Parents
tend
to
go
to
extremes
when
it
comes
to
praising
their
kids.
(要点一)
Yet,
both
too
much
and
too
little
praise
can
be
equally
damaging.
(要点二)
When
giving
praise,
parents
should
be
sincere
and
concentrate
on
the
process
instead
of
the
result.
(要点三)
Similarly,
they
ought
to
give
praise
for
how
much
effort
their
kids
have
invested
in
the
work
they’re
involved
in.
(要点四)
【2020·遵化市教育局中学教研室期末】
Retirement
is
the
point
where
a
person
stops
employment
completely.
The
“standard”
retirement
age
varies
from
country
to
country,
but
it
is
generally
between
50
and
70,
according
to
the
latest
statistics,
2011.
However,
for
a
long
time,
people
have
got
into
an
argument
about
whether
the
age
of
retirement
should
be
increased
or
reduced
in
their
own
countries.
There
are
several
arguments
for
allowing
older
people
to
continue
working
as
long
as
they
are
able.
Many
people
think
that
older
employees
have
a
large
amount
of
knowledge
and
experience
which
can
be
lost
to
a
business
or
organization
if
they
are
made
to
retire.
Besides,
older
employees
are
often
extremely
faithful
employees
and
are
more
willing
to
implement
(执行)
company
policies
than
the
young.
A
more
important
point
is
regarding
the
attitudes
in
society
to
old
people.
To
force
someone
to
resign
or
retire
at
60
or
65
indicates
that
the
society
does
not
value
the
input
of
these
people
and
that
practically
their
useful
life
is
over.
Allowing
old
people
to
work
indefinitely
(无限地),
however,
is
not
always
a
good
policy.
Some
people
took
the
strong
view
that
age
alone
is
no
guarantee
of
ability.
Many
young
employees
have
more
experience
or
skills
than
older
staff,
who
may
have
been
stuck
in
one
area
for
most
of
their
working
lives.
Having
compulsory
(强制性的)
retirement
allows
new
ideas
in
an
organization.
On
the
other
hand,
older
people
should
be
rewarded
by
society
for
their
life’s
labor
by
being
given
generous
pensions
(退休金)
and
the
freedom
to
enjoy
leisure.
They
can
have
time
to
do
whatever
they
like,
that
is,
they
can
have
their
own
plans
or
roles
and
achieve
their
retirement
goals.
With
many
young
people
unemployed
or
frustrated
in
low-level
positions,
there
are
often
calls
to
compulsorily
retire
older
workers.
However,
this
can
affect
the
older
individual’s
freedom—and
right—to
work.
In
my
opinion,
giving
workers
more
choices
over
their
retirement
age
will
benefit
both
society
and
the
individual.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】There
has
been
an
ongoing
debate
about
the
proper
retirement
age(要点1).
Some
argue
that
older
people
should
be
allowed
to
delay
retirement
considering
their
ability
and
loyalty
as
well
as
recognition
from
society(要点2).
However,
opponents
advocate
compulsory
retirement
to
make
room
for
young
innovative
employees
and
reward
older
people
for
their
work
(要点3).
The
writer
claims
that
it
is
beneficial
to
society
and
individuals
to
provide
more
options
about
retirement
age(要点4).
(70
words)
【2020·浙江上虞·二模】
When
the
pandemic
started,
some
people
were
wondering
if
the
internet
could
stand
up
to
the
rise
in
demand.
The
answer
is
not
only
a
clear
“yes”
but
this
whole
period
made
it
even
stronger.
How
would
our
world
survive
without
Internet
in
pandemic
situation?
The
answer
is
simple:
differently
but
not
better
or
worse.
We
know
that
the
internet
available
is
changing
a
lot
of
things.
Thanks
to
it,
people
were
able
to
keep
on
working
from
their
home,
others
were
able
to
keep
contact
with
their
loved
ones
and
friends
and
most
found
their
entertainment
relief
through
it.
Had
it
not
ever
existed,
people
would
have
stayed
at
home
and
enjoyed
their
family
or
created
more
since
they
would
have
had
more
time
on
their
hands.
But
in
today’s
world,
the
Internet
has
become
the
one
link
that
unites
us
all.
It
is
the
reason
why
people
were
able
to
forget
for
minutes
and
hours
at
a
time
through
the
use
of
Internet.
It
is
the
reason
why
so
many
companies
will
survive
and
most
probably
grow
stronger
afterwards,
since
they
were
able
to
plan
through
Skype
and
Zoom.
It
is
the
reason
why
lovers
did
not
fall
into
full
depression,
having
to
live
away
from
their
partner
for
a
few
months,
since
they
were
at
least
able
to
talk
and
see
each
other
while
sharing
moments
of
their
lives.
There
cannot
be
any
doubts
anymore:
The
Internet
is
the
one
link
that
unites
us
all.
In
the
first
three
months
of
this
year,
Internet
use
has
grown
by
25%
in
most
major
cities
around
the
world.
This
number
is
reflected
in
the
use
of
various
applications
and
websites.
One
of
the
clearest
jumps
up
is
the
use
of
video
calls.
This
should
not
be
surprising
since
it
is
used
both
for
business
and
for
personal
purposes.
PC
Game
stores
have
also
seen
a
huge
increase
in
their
sales
during
this
period.
A
bit
more
surprising
maybe,
is
the
increase
of
online
grocery
stores
usage
as
the
stores
were
breaking
down
under
the
demand.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】The
Internet
supports
the
rising
demand
and
grew
stronger
confronting
the
pandemic.
The
life
without
Internet
would
be
then
different
but
not
better
or
worse
since
Internet
offers
ease
to
work
and
connection
but
steals
personal
time.
Nowadays
the
Internet
connects
us
all
so
that
people
forget
about
time
and
distance
and
companies
maintain
growth.
In
the
first
quarter
of
2020,
Internet
use
has
surged
worldwide
in
terms
of
video
calls,
PC
games
and
even
online
grocery
stores.
【2019·浙江温州·高考模拟】
High
school
exit
tests
are
tests
that
students
must
pass
to
graduate
from
high
school.
In
the
last
few
years,
however,
a
number
of
states
in
America
have
dropped
them.
Although
some
states
still
use
them
for
diplomas,
the
number
is
down
from
a
high
of
27
states
during
the
testing
craze
promoted
by
No
Child
Left
Behind
(NCLB).
The
appearance
of
this
phenomenon
is
small
wonder.
Researches
clearly
show
that
exit
tests
have
little
positive
effects
on
students.
A
2014
report
found
exit
testing
was
associated
with
lower
graduation
rates,
negatively
affected
labor
market
outcomes,
and,
most
alarmingly,
produced
a
12.5
percent
increase
in
incarceration(监禁)
rates.
Exit
exams,
the
study
concluded,
had
tended
to
add
little
value
for
most
students.
Exit
testing
relies
on
the
following
assumptions.
One
is
that
standardized
testing
can
serve
as
a
kind
of
“quality
control”
for
high
school
graduates,
guaranteeing
that
graduates
are
college
ready.
The
other
is
that
they
have
predicting
value
for
future
success
in
academic
situations.
But
there
is
little
evidence.
The
tests
don’t
exactly
measure
what
they
pretend
to
measure.
For
example,
qualities
such
as
intelligence,
academic
ability,
college
readiness
are
not
determined.
Those
that
should
be
developed
in
all
young
people,
like
responsibility,
critical
thinking,
and
empathy(移植),
are
not
measured,
either.
Even
supporters
of
exit
tests
have
acknowledged
that
they
don’t
offer
reliable
data.
Thus,
more
and
more
people
are
suggesting
that
exit
test
scores
ought
to
be
just
one
component
of
the
high
school
diploma.
Schools
should
consider
many
other
records
including
credits
earned,
courses
taken,
activities,
service,
projects
and
other
elements
of
academic
accomplishment
so
that
students
can
be
evaluated
flexibly.
In
other
words,
exit
test
scores
should
never
be
the
only
criterion
for
high
school
diplomas.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
High
school
exit
tests
have
been
cancelled
in
some
states
in
America
in
recent
years(要点1).
This
is
not
surprising
because
studies
show
they
do
little
good
to
students(要点2).
Instead
of
ensuring
college
readiness
and
academic
success,
they
actually
don’t
measure
what
should
be
measured(要点3).
Therefore,
exit
test
scores
should
only
be
one
part
of
the
standards
of
high
school
diplomas(要点4).
优培10
概要写作
真题在线
【2019·浙江卷】
提分训练Parents
everywhere
praise
their
kids.
Jenn
Berman,
author
of
The
A
to
Z
Guide
to
Raising
Happy
and
Confident
Kids,
says,
“We've
gone
to
the
opposite
extreme
of
a
few
decades
ago
when
parents
tended
to
be
more
strict.”
By
giving
kids
a
lot
of
praise,
parents
think
they're
building
their
children's
confidence,
when,
in
fact,
it
may
be
just
the
opposite.
Too
much
praise
can
backfire
and,
when
given
in
a
way
that's
insincere,
make
kids
afraid
to
try
new
things
or
take
a
risk
for
fear
of
not
being
able
to
stay
on
top
where
their
parents'
praise
has
put
them.
Still,
don't
go
too
far
in
the
other
direction.
Not
giving
enough
praise
can
be
just
as
damaging
gas
giving
too
much.
Kids
will
feel
like
they're
not
good
enough
or
that
you
don't
care
and,
as
a
result,
may
see
no
point
in
trying
hard
for
their
accomplishments.
So
what
is
the
right
amount
of
praise?
Experts
say
that
the
quality
of
praise
is
more
important
than
the
quantity.
If
praise
is
sincere
and
focused
on
the
effort
not
the
outcome,
you
can
give
it
as
often
as
your
child
does
something
that
deserves
a
verbal
reward.
“We
should
especially
recognize
our
children's
efforts
to
push
themselves
and
work
hard
to
achieve
a
goal,”
says
Donahue,
author
of
Parenting
Without
Fear:
Letting
Go
of
Worry
and
Focusing
on
What
Really
Matters.
“One
thing
to
remember
is
that
it’s
the
process
not
the
end
product
that
matters.”
Your
son
may
not
be
the
best
basketball
player
on
his
team.
But
if
he’s
out
there
every
day
and
playing
hard,
you
should
praise
his
effort
regardless
of
whether
his
team
wins
or
loses.
Praising
the
effort
and
not
the
outcome
can
also
mean
recognizing
your
child
when
she
has
worked
hard
to
clean
the
yard,
cook
dinner,
or
finish
a
book
report.
But
whatever
it
is,
praise
should
be
given
on
a
case-by-case
basis
and
be
proportionate(相称的)to
the
amount
of
effort
your
child
has
put
into
it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Parents
tend
to
go
to
extremes
when
it
comes
to
praising
their
kids.
(要点一)
Yet,
both
too
much
and
too
little
praise
can
be
equally
damaging.
(要点二)
When
giving
praise,
parents
should
be
sincere
and
concentrate
on
the
process
instead
of
the
result.
(要点三)
Similarly,
they
ought
to
give
praise
for
how
much
effort
their
kids
have
invested
in
the
work
they’re
involved
in.
(要点四)
【2020·遵化市教育局中学教研室期末】
Retirement
is
the
point
where
a
person
stops
employment
completely.
The
“standard”
retirement
age
varies
from
country
to
country,
but
it
is
generally
between
50
and
70,
according
to
the
latest
statistics,
2011.
However,
for
a
long
time,
people
have
got
into
an
argument
about
whether
the
age
of
retirement
should
be
increased
or
reduced
in
their
own
countries.
There
are
several
arguments
for
allowing
older
people
to
continue
working
as
long
as
they
are
able.
Many
people
think
that
older
employees
have
a
large
amount
of
knowledge
and
experience
which
can
be
lost
to
a
business
or
organization
if
they
are
made
to
retire.
Besides,
older
employees
are
often
extremely
faithful
employees
and
are
more
willing
to
implement
(执行)
company
policies
than
the
young.
A
more
important
point
is
regarding
the
attitudes
in
society
to
old
people.
To
force
someone
to
resign
or
retire
at
60
or
65
indicates
that
the
society
does
not
value
the
input
of
these
people
and
that
practically
their
useful
life
is
over.
Allowing
old
people
to
work
indefinitely
(无限地),
however,
is
not
always
a
good
policy.
Some
people
took
the
strong
view
that
age
alone
is
no
guarantee
of
ability.
Many
young
employees
have
more
experience
or
skills
than
older
staff,
who
may
have
been
stuck
in
one
area
for
most
of
their
working
lives.
Having
compulsory
(强制性的)
retirement
allows
new
ideas
in
an
organization.
On
the
other
hand,
older
people
should
be
rewarded
by
society
for
their
life’s
labor
by
being
given
generous
pensions
(退休金)
and
the
freedom
to
enjoy
leisure.
They
can
have
time
to
do
whatever
they
like,
that
is,
they
can
have
their
own
plans
or
roles
and
achieve
their
retirement
goals.
With
many
young
people
unemployed
or
frustrated
in
low-level
positions,
there
are
often
calls
to
compulsorily
retire
older
workers.
However,
this
can
affect
the
older
individual’s
freedom—and
right—to
work.
In
my
opinion,
giving
workers
more
choices
over
their
retirement
age
will
benefit
both
society
and
the
individual.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【2020·浙江上虞·二模】
When
the
pandemic
started,
some
people
were
wondering
if
the
internet
could
stand
up
to
the
rise
in
demand.
The
answer
is
not
only
a
clear
“yes”
but
this
whole
period
made
it
even
stronger.
How
would
our
world
survive
without
Internet
in
pandemic
situation?
The
answer
is
simple:
differently
but
not
better
or
worse.
We
know
that
the
internet
available
is
changing
a
lot
of
things.
Thanks
to
it,
people
were
able
to
keep
on
working
from
their
home,
others
were
able
to
keep
contact
with
their
loved
ones
and
friends
and
most
found
their
entertainment
relief
through
it.
Had
it
not
ever
existed,
people
would
have
stayed
at
home
and
enjoyed
their
family
or
created
more
since
they
would
have
had
more
time
on
their
hands.
But
in
today’s
world,
the
Internet
has
become
the
one
link
that
unites
us
all.
It
is
the
reason
why
people
were
able
to
forget
for
minutes
and
hours
at
a
time
through
the
use
of
Internet.
It
is
the
reason
why
so
many
companies
will
survive
and
most
probably
grow
stronger
afterwards,
since
they
were
able
to
plan
through
Skype
and
Zoom.
It
is
the
reason
why
lovers
did
not
fall
into
full
depression,
having
to
live
away
from
their
partner
for
a
few
months,
since
they
were
at
least
able
to
talk
and
see
each
other
while
sharing
moments
of
their
lives.
There
cannot
be
any
doubts
anymore:
The
Internet
is
the
one
link
that
unites
us
all.
In
the
first
three
months
of
this
year,
Internet
use
has
grown
by
25%
in
most
major
cities
around
the
world.
This
number
is
reflected
in
the
use
of
various
applications
and
websites.
One
of
the
clearest
jumps
up
is
the
use
of
video
calls.
This
should
not
be
surprising
since
it
is
used
both
for
business
and
for
personal
purposes.
PC
Game
stores
have
also
seen
a
huge
increase
in
their
sales
during
this
period.
A
bit
more
surprising
maybe,
is
the
increase
of
online
grocery
stores
usage
as
the
stores
were
breaking
down
under
the
demand.
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【2019·浙江温州·高考模拟】
High
school
exit
tests
are
tests
that
students
must
pass
to
graduate
from
high
school.
In
the
last
few
years,
however,
a
number
of
states
in
America
have
dropped
them.
Although
some
states
still
use
them
for
diplomas,
the
number
is
down
from
a
high
of
27
states
during
the
testing
craze
promoted
by
No
Child
Left
Behind
(NCLB).
The
appearance
of
this
phenomenon
is
small
wonder.
Researches
clearly
show
that
exit
tests
have
little
positive
effects
on
students.
A
2014
report
found
exit
testing
was
associated
with
lower
graduation
rates,
negatively
affected
labor
market
outcomes,
and,
most
alarmingly,
produced
a
12.5
percent
increase
in
incarceration(监禁)
rates.
Exit
exams,
the
study
concluded,
had
tended
to
add
little
value
for
most
students.
Exit
testing
relies
on
the
following
assumptions.
One
is
that
standardized
testing
can
serve
as
a
kind
of
“quality
control”
for
high
school
graduates,
guaranteeing
that
graduates
are
college
ready.
The
other
is
that
they
have
predicting
value
for
future
success
in
academic
situations.
But
there
is
little
evidence.
The
tests
don’t
exactly
measure
what
they
pretend
to
measure.
For
example,
qualities
such
as
intelligence,
academic
ability,
college
readiness
are
not
determined.
Those
that
should
be
developed
in
all
young
people,
like
responsibility,
critical
thinking,
and
empathy(移植),
are
not
measured,
either.
Even
supporters
of
exit
tests
have
acknowledged
that
they
don’t
offer
reliable
data.
Thus,
more
and
more
people
are
suggesting
that
exit
test
scores
ought
to
be
just
one
component
of
the
high
school
diploma.
Schools
should
consider
many
other
records
including
credits
earned,
courses
taken,
activities,
service,
projects
and
other
elements
of
academic
accomplishment
so
that
students
can
be
evaluated
flexibly.
In
other
words,
exit
test
scores
should
never
be
the
only
criterion
for
high
school
diplomas.
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【范文】There
has
been
an
ongoing
debate
about
the
proper
retirement
age(要点1).
Some
argue
that
older
people
should
be
allowed
to
delay
retirement
considering
their
ability
and
loyalty
as
well
as
recognition
from
society(要点2).
However,
opponents
advocate
compulsory
retirement
to
make
room
for
young
innovative
employees
and
reward
older
people
for
their
work
(要点3).
The
writer
claims
that
it
is
beneficial
to
society
and
individuals
to
provide
more
options
about
retirement
age(要点4).
(70
words)
【范文】The
Internet
supports
the
rising
demand
and
grew
stronger
confronting
the
pandemic.
The
life
without
Internet
would
be
then
different
but
not
better
or
worse
since
Internet
offers
ease
to
work
and
connection
but
steals
personal
time.
Nowadays
the
Internet
connects
us
all
so
that
people
forget
about
time
and
distance
and
companies
maintain
growth.
In
the
first
quarter
of
2020,
Internet
use
has
surged
worldwide
in
terms
of
video
calls,
PC
games
and
even
online
grocery
stores.
【范文】
High
school
exit
tests
have
been
cancelled
in
some
states
in
America
in
recent
years(要点1).
This
is
not
surprising
because
studies
show
they
do
little
good
to
students(要点2).
Instead
of
ensuring
college
readiness
and
academic
success,
they
actually
don’t
measure
what
should
be
measured(要点3).
Therefore,
exit
test
scores
should
only
be
one
part
of
the
standards
of
high
school
diplomas(要点4).
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