外研版（2019）必修三Unit 5-What an adventure!单元核心考点解析&随堂专练学案（含答案）-Section C
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Unit 5-What an adventure!
单元核心考点解析&随堂专练-Section C
【词汇解析】
adapt vt. 使适应;改编
【课文原句】
In this part adapted from a chapter of the book,Aronnax describes the experience of walking on the sea bed...
在这一部分改编自该书的一章,阿伦纳克斯描述了在海床上行走的经历……
【词汇精讲】
adapt为及物动词,在该句子中表示“改编”。
同时,adapt还有“使适应”之意。
As far as I know,he is going to adapt his novel for TV play.
据我所知,他将把自己的小说改编成电视剧。
【词汇拓展】
adapt (oneself) to 使……适应于……
adapt sth from根据……改编某物
adapt ...for 为……而改写/改编
adaptable adj.能适应的;可修改的
adaptation n. 适应;改编;改写本
It was the culture,rather than the language,that made it hard for him to adapt to the new environment abroad.
是文化而不是语言使得他很难适应国外的新环境。
It is well known that the film Red Sorghum is adapted from the novel of the same title by Mo Yan.
众所周知,电影《红高粱》是根据莫言的同名小说改编而成的。
ahead adv.(时间、空间)在前面;提前,预先;领先
【课文原句】
Ahead of its time,the submarine is also a secret from the rest of the world.
在它的时代之前,潜艇也是来自世界其他地方的秘密。
【词汇精讲】
ahead在该句子中为副词,表示“在前面”。
同时,ahead还有“提前,预先;领先”之意。
Pay ahead,and you’ll receive a discount.若预先付款,你便可以享受折扣。
【词汇拓展】
ahead of指时间或空间的“在……之前”;表示“比……强 (高)” (主要用作表语)
go ahead表示同意、允许或继续,意为“说吧”“做吧”“继续……吧”
He left one day ahead of me.
他比我早走一天。
He is two grades ahead of me.
他比我高两级。
astonish vt.使十分惊讶,使吃惊
【课文原句】
The light,which lit the soil thirty feet below the surface of the ocean,astonished me by its power.
那光照亮了海面下30英尺的土壤,它的力量使我吃惊。
【词汇精讲】
astonish为动词,表示“使十分惊讶,使吃惊”。
它的派生词有
astonished adj.“吃惊的”
astonishing adj.“令人吃惊的”
astonishment n.“惊讶,吃惊”。
It astonished me that he made such rapid progress.
他进步如此之快让我很吃惊。
【词汇拓展】
It astonishes sb that ...令某人感到吃惊的是……
What astonishes sb is ...使某人吃惊的是……
be astonished at/by ...对……感到惊讶
be astonished to do sth做某事感到惊讶
be astonished that...对……感到惊讶
to one’s astonishment 让某人感到惊讶的是
in astonishment 惊讶地
What astonished me was that you failed in the exam.
让我惊讶的是你竟然考试不及格。
He is astonished to see how his hometown has changed in the past 10 years.
家乡过去十年的变化使他感到惊奇。
charge n.负责,掌管;费用 vt.使承担责任;收费,要价;控告
【课文原句】
They are captured and taken inside the submarine,where they meet the man in charge,Captain Nemo.
他们被俘虏并被带进潜艇,在那里他们遇到了负责人尼莫船长。
【词汇精讲】
该句子中charge为名词,表示“负责,掌管”,与介词in构成短语in charge,表示“掌管”。
同时,charge还有动词的词性,表示“使承担责任;收费,要价;控告”。
You are in charge of the job.How could you evade the issue?
你是这个工作的负责人,你怎么能逃避这个问题呢?
【词汇拓展】
in charge of负责,掌管
in the charge of由……负责,掌管
free of charge免费
take charge of负责,掌管
charge sb sth for为……向某人要价……
charge sb with sth控告某人有……罪
The company was in the charge of Mr Smith.
公司由史密斯先生掌管。
The man who had taken charge of the company was charged with stealing a car.
曾经掌管这家公司的那个人被指控偷车。
The restaurant charged us ￡40 for the wine.
这家餐厅收了我们40英镑的酒钱。
【名师点津】
in charge of 多以人作主语,指“某人负责/主管某事”;
in the charge of 多以物作主语,指“某物由某人掌管”。
有类似用法的还有:
in possession of,in the possession of;
in control of,in the control of等。
distinguish vt.& vi. 显示……的差别;使……有所不同;辨别;看清;认出
【课文原句】
The solar rays shone through the watery mass easily,and consumed all colour,and I clearly distinguished objects at a distance of a hundred and fifty yards.
太阳光很容易穿过水团,把所有的颜色都消耗掉,我在150码外清楚地分辨出物体。
【词汇精讲】
distinguish在该句子中为及物动词,表示“辨别;看清;认出”
同时,它还有不及物动词的词性,表示“区别,辨别”。
【词汇拓展】
distinguish between ...and ...区分/辨别……和……
distinguish ...from ...使……有别于……
distinguish oneself (as ...)(作为……)表现突出
distinguished adj.卓越的;著名的;杰出的
be distinguished for ...因……而出名
distinguishable adj. 易分辨的;能区分的
Reading good books enriches our mind and teaches us to distinguish between right and wrong.
阅读好书既能丰富我们的思想又能教我们明辨是非。
It is the superior intelligence and the use of language that distinguish man from the other animals.
正是高超的智力和语言的使用把人和其他动物区别开来。
Honestly speaking,I admire your distinguished achievements.
诚实地说,我真羡慕你卓越的成就。
permit v.许可;允许;准许 n. 许可证;执照
【课文原句】
In order to keep this secret,Captain Nemo tells his three newest passengers that they are not permitted to leave the submarine.
为了保守这个秘密,尼莫船长告诉他的三名新乘客,他们不准离开潜艇。
【词汇精讲】
permit 在该句子中为动词,表示“许可”,构成短语permit sb to do sth,表示“允许某人做某事”。
Mobile phone conversations are not permitted anywhere in the library.
在这个图书馆的任何地方,都不允许打电话。
You simply ask how to apply for a library card,which will permit you to take books out regularly.
你仅仅问明白怎么申请借书证就行了,用借书证你可以定期地将书借出。
【词汇拓展】
permit doing sth 允许做某事
a driving permit 驾驶执照
permission n.[U] 允许;许可
with/without one’s permission 获得某人同意/未经某人允许
ask for permission 请求允许
With your permission,I will carry out the project as soon as possible.
如果你答应的话,我将尽快展开这项计划。
【名师点津】
permit用作不及物动词,可表示时间、条件、天气等“允许的话”,此时常用于独立主格结构,即“名词+动词-ing形式”。
We’ll have a picnic in the woods,weather permitting.
如果天气允许的话,我们将在树林里野餐。
relate vt.& vi. 联系,把……联系起来;叙述,讲述
【课文原句】
Words are not enough to relate such wonders!
言语不足以形容这种奇迹!
【词汇精讲】
relate为动词,在该句子中表示“叙述,讲述”。
同时,它还有“联系,把……联系起来”的意思。
She relates her childhood experiences in the first chapters.
在开始的几章中,她描述了自己童年的经历。
【词汇拓展】
relate ...to ...把……和……联系在一起
relate sth to sb向某人叙述/讲述某事
relate to ...和……有关联;和……合得来
related adj.相关的;有(亲属)关系的
be related to ...和……有关的;和……有联系的
relation n.关系
in/with relation to关于;与……相比
If you love gardening,do something related to this.
如果你喜欢园艺,就做一些和这个相关的事。
I don’t see any relation between the two problems.
我看不出这两个问题间的联系。
Tiredness is directly related to (=in direct relation to) a driver’s response.
疲劳和司机的反应密切相关。
surround vt. 围绕,环绕
【课文原句】
Truly this water which surrounded me was but another air heavier than the Earth’s atmosphere,but almost as clear.
事实上,环绕我的水不过是比地球大气重的另一种空气,但几乎同样清澈。
【词汇精讲】
surround为及物动词,在该句子中表示“围绕,环绕”。
I found myself surrounded by a group of children full of curiosity.
我发现自己被一群充满好奇心的孩子围住了。
【词汇拓展】
surround sb/sth with sb/sth使某人/物包围某人/物
be surrounded by/with ...被……包围
surrounding adj. 周围的
surroundings n. 环境(指周围具体的物质环境)
I live in a big house,which is surrounded with/by trees.
我住在一所大房子里,四周被树环绕着。
He looked more relaxed,as if some of the harmony from his surroundings had flowed into him.
他看起来放松了些,仿佛周围的和谐环境感染了他。
The surrounding villages have been absorbed by/into the growing city.
周围的村庄已经并入了不断扩展的城市之中。
【句式解析】
This dazzling carpet,really a reflector,drove away the rays of the sun with wonderful intensity,which accounted for the vibration which passed through every atom of liquid.
这条耀眼的地毯,实际上是一个反射器,以惊人的强度驱走了太阳光,这就解释了穿过每一个液体原子的振动。
【句式剖析】
该句子的主干是This dazzling carpet drove away the rays of the sun with wonderful intensity.
句中really a reflector 为carpet的同位语;
第一个定语从句修饰名词intensity,第二个定语从句修饰名词vibration。
【句式拓展】
一个名词(或其他形式)对另一个名词或代词进行解释或补充说明,这个名词(或其他形式)就是同位语。
Yesterday I met Tom,a friend of my brothers’.
昨天我遇到了我弟弟的朋友汤姆。(a friend of my brothers’是Tom的同位语,指同一个人。)
某些名词后面,可以跟that或连接代词(副词)引导的从句作同位语,说明其内容时,该从句就称为同位语从句。
常跟同位语从句的名词有:
idea,fact,news,hope,belief,thought,doubt,promise,truth,agreement,decision等。如:
I have no idea that you were here.
我不知道你在这里。
The news that our team has won the match is true.
我们队赢了这场比赛的消息是真的。
【写作指导】
如何写好描述一次经历的记叙文
记叙文是最常见、最基本的写作文体,它以真实的社会生活、自然景物为材料,以记人、叙事、状物、写景为主要内容,以叙述、描写或对话为主要表达方式,通过形象叙述来表达思想。
这种题材有利于体现学生思维的完整性,符合新课程标准的理念。
绝大部分记叙文基本上宜用“三段式”的写法,具体来讲就是:
第一段:开头——事情的背景。介绍事情发生的缘由、开端。
第二段:主体——事情的经过。全文的主要部分,按照事情发展的先后顺序,对事情发生的经过进行详细、完整的阐述,情节要合理。
第三段:结尾——事情的评价。对事情的结果进行评价,表明个人的看法或感受,总结全文。
记叙文的写作主题要鲜明,内容要完整。
一般说来,记叙文包含六大要素:when(时间),where(地点),who(人物),what(事件),why(原因),how(结果)。
文章要有始有终,确保内容的完整性;情节要合理。
按照事情发展的先后顺序,使用恰当的过渡词,使文章连贯、自然、详略得当;用词要恰当,描写事件时,切忌词不达意,影响理解;时态通常用一般过去时。
一、审题定调
该习作要求记录一次潜水活动的过程,是一篇记叙文。因此写作时首先说明一下事情发生的背景,然后按照事情发生的时间顺序描述活动的过程,最后对活动的结果进行阐述,并表达自己对活动的感受。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主。
二、谋篇布局
就本篇习作而言,我们可以把全文分为三部分。
第一部分:引出话题,点明此次活动是什么(就对方观点提出反对意见);
第二部分:对这次潜水活动的过程进行详细描述,可特别提到印象深刻的事情;
第三部分:说明此次潜水活动的意义和自己的感受。
三、组织语言
就本篇习作而言,每个部分可围绕以下内容组织语言。
1.第一部分:说明此次活动。
2.第二部分:叙述事情的经过。
3.第三部分:评价活动,分享感受。
星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次潜水(diving)活动。如果你是星光中学的一名学生,请你写一篇短文,记录一下此次活动。
内容包括:
1.时间与地点:7月10日,三亚湾(Sanya Bay);
2.活动的过程 (如准备中、进行中、结束);
3.你对于这次活动的评论(感受)。
注意:
1.词数80左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文:
In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise,our school organized a diving activity on July 10.Most of us took part in it.
Gathering at the Sanya Bay at 10:00 am,we made preparations for the diving.With the help of the trainers,we all experienced something unforgettable.What impressed me most was that whoever felt too afraid to go,others would come and offer help.About four hours later,we all accomplished the diving activity.Bathed in sunshine,we enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.
The activity benefited us a lot.Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school-work,it also promoted the friendship among us.What a wonderful time!
【随堂专练】
**介词填空
1.There is a librarian charge of the new library.?
2.The official ordered the guards to drive people .?
3.He could not account his absence from school.?
4.The care and love from an instructor will leave everlasting impression students.?
5.The film has been adapted a play of the same title.?
**单句填空
1.By doing extra homework,he soon got of his classmates.?
2.Spending a year working in the big city helped to (broad) his horizons.?
3.He has concern for nothing except what is in (relate) to himself.?
4.I found it (astonish) that a pigeon appeared out of the magician’s empty hand.?
5.The scientist is (distinguish) for its diligence and courage.?
6. (surround) yourself with people who’ll provide you with support can be very beneficial.?
7.With time going by,I gradually adapted myself the school life.?
8.My parents don’t permit me (go) out at night.?
**语法填空
In 1866,a terrible sea creature is seen by several 1. (ship).Biologist Professor Pierre Aronnax and his servant,Conseil,join a ship 2. (find) and kill the creature.After a long journey into the Pacific Ocean,3. creature is finally seen.While attacking from the ship,Aronnax and Conseil,along with the whale hunter Ned Land,4. (fall) into the sea,and discover that the“creature” is 5. (actual) a submarine.They are captured and taken inside the submarine,6. they meet the man in charge,Captain Nemo.Ahead of 7. (it) time,the submarine is also a secret from the rest of the world.In order to keep this secret,Captain Nemo tells his three newest passengers that they are not permitted 8. (leave) the submarine.While Ned Land can think only of 9. (escape),Aronnax and Conseil 10. (fascinate) by their adventures in the new underwater world.?
参考答案：
介词填空：
in;away;for;on/upon;from
单句填词：
答案:ahead
答案:broaden
答案:relation
答案:astonishing
答案:distinguished
答案:Surrounding
答案:to
答案:to go
语法填空：
ships;to find;the;fall;actually;where;it’s;to leave;escaping;are fascinated
单元核心考点解析&随堂专练-Section C
【词汇解析】
adapt vt. 使适应;改编
【课文原句】
In this part adapted from a chapter of the book,Aronnax describes the experience of walking on the sea bed...
在这一部分改编自该书的一章,阿伦纳克斯描述了在海床上行走的经历……
【词汇精讲】
adapt为及物动词,在该句子中表示“改编”。
同时,adapt还有“使适应”之意。
As far as I know,he is going to adapt his novel for TV play.
据我所知,他将把自己的小说改编成电视剧。
【词汇拓展】
adapt (oneself) to 使……适应于……
adapt sth from根据……改编某物
adapt ...for 为……而改写/改编
adaptable adj.能适应的;可修改的
adaptation n. 适应;改编;改写本
It was the culture,rather than the language,that made it hard for him to adapt to the new environment abroad.
是文化而不是语言使得他很难适应国外的新环境。
It is well known that the film Red Sorghum is adapted from the novel of the same title by Mo Yan.
众所周知,电影《红高粱》是根据莫言的同名小说改编而成的。
ahead adv.(时间、空间)在前面;提前,预先;领先
【课文原句】
Ahead of its time,the submarine is also a secret from the rest of the world.
在它的时代之前,潜艇也是来自世界其他地方的秘密。
【词汇精讲】
ahead在该句子中为副词,表示“在前面”。
同时,ahead还有“提前,预先;领先”之意。
Pay ahead,and you’ll receive a discount.若预先付款,你便可以享受折扣。
【词汇拓展】
ahead of指时间或空间的“在……之前”;表示“比……强 (高)” (主要用作表语)
go ahead表示同意、允许或继续,意为“说吧”“做吧”“继续……吧”
He left one day ahead of me.
他比我早走一天。
He is two grades ahead of me.
他比我高两级。
astonish vt.使十分惊讶,使吃惊
【课文原句】
The light,which lit the soil thirty feet below the surface of the ocean,astonished me by its power.
那光照亮了海面下30英尺的土壤,它的力量使我吃惊。
【词汇精讲】
astonish为动词,表示“使十分惊讶,使吃惊”。
它的派生词有
astonished adj.“吃惊的”
astonishing adj.“令人吃惊的”
astonishment n.“惊讶,吃惊”。
It astonished me that he made such rapid progress.
他进步如此之快让我很吃惊。
【词汇拓展】
It astonishes sb that ...令某人感到吃惊的是……
What astonishes sb is ...使某人吃惊的是……
be astonished at/by ...对……感到惊讶
be astonished to do sth做某事感到惊讶
be astonished that...对……感到惊讶
to one’s astonishment 让某人感到惊讶的是
in astonishment 惊讶地
What astonished me was that you failed in the exam.
让我惊讶的是你竟然考试不及格。
He is astonished to see how his hometown has changed in the past 10 years.
家乡过去十年的变化使他感到惊奇。
charge n.负责,掌管;费用 vt.使承担责任;收费,要价;控告
【课文原句】
They are captured and taken inside the submarine,where they meet the man in charge,Captain Nemo.
他们被俘虏并被带进潜艇,在那里他们遇到了负责人尼莫船长。
【词汇精讲】
该句子中charge为名词,表示“负责,掌管”,与介词in构成短语in charge,表示“掌管”。
同时,charge还有动词的词性,表示“使承担责任;收费,要价;控告”。
You are in charge of the job.How could you evade the issue?
你是这个工作的负责人,你怎么能逃避这个问题呢?
【词汇拓展】
in charge of负责,掌管
in the charge of由……负责,掌管
free of charge免费
take charge of负责,掌管
charge sb sth for为……向某人要价……
charge sb with sth控告某人有……罪
The company was in the charge of Mr Smith.
公司由史密斯先生掌管。
The man who had taken charge of the company was charged with stealing a car.
曾经掌管这家公司的那个人被指控偷车。
The restaurant charged us ￡40 for the wine.
这家餐厅收了我们40英镑的酒钱。
【名师点津】
in charge of 多以人作主语,指“某人负责/主管某事”;
in the charge of 多以物作主语,指“某物由某人掌管”。
有类似用法的还有:
in possession of,in the possession of;
in control of,in the control of等。
distinguish vt.& vi. 显示……的差别;使……有所不同;辨别;看清;认出
【课文原句】
The solar rays shone through the watery mass easily,and consumed all colour,and I clearly distinguished objects at a distance of a hundred and fifty yards.
太阳光很容易穿过水团,把所有的颜色都消耗掉,我在150码外清楚地分辨出物体。
【词汇精讲】
distinguish在该句子中为及物动词,表示“辨别;看清;认出”
同时,它还有不及物动词的词性,表示“区别,辨别”。
【词汇拓展】
distinguish between ...and ...区分/辨别……和……
distinguish ...from ...使……有别于……
distinguish oneself (as ...)(作为……)表现突出
distinguished adj.卓越的;著名的;杰出的
be distinguished for ...因……而出名
distinguishable adj. 易分辨的;能区分的
Reading good books enriches our mind and teaches us to distinguish between right and wrong.
阅读好书既能丰富我们的思想又能教我们明辨是非。
It is the superior intelligence and the use of language that distinguish man from the other animals.
正是高超的智力和语言的使用把人和其他动物区别开来。
Honestly speaking,I admire your distinguished achievements.
诚实地说,我真羡慕你卓越的成就。
permit v.许可;允许;准许 n. 许可证;执照
【课文原句】
In order to keep this secret,Captain Nemo tells his three newest passengers that they are not permitted to leave the submarine.
为了保守这个秘密,尼莫船长告诉他的三名新乘客,他们不准离开潜艇。
【词汇精讲】
permit 在该句子中为动词,表示“许可”,构成短语permit sb to do sth,表示“允许某人做某事”。
Mobile phone conversations are not permitted anywhere in the library.
在这个图书馆的任何地方,都不允许打电话。
You simply ask how to apply for a library card,which will permit you to take books out regularly.
你仅仅问明白怎么申请借书证就行了,用借书证你可以定期地将书借出。
【词汇拓展】
permit doing sth 允许做某事
a driving permit 驾驶执照
permission n.[U] 允许;许可
with/without one’s permission 获得某人同意/未经某人允许
ask for permission 请求允许
With your permission,I will carry out the project as soon as possible.
如果你答应的话,我将尽快展开这项计划。
【名师点津】
permit用作不及物动词,可表示时间、条件、天气等“允许的话”,此时常用于独立主格结构,即“名词+动词-ing形式”。
We’ll have a picnic in the woods,weather permitting.
如果天气允许的话,我们将在树林里野餐。
relate vt.& vi. 联系,把……联系起来;叙述,讲述
【课文原句】
Words are not enough to relate such wonders!
言语不足以形容这种奇迹!
【词汇精讲】
relate为动词,在该句子中表示“叙述,讲述”。
同时,它还有“联系,把……联系起来”的意思。
She relates her childhood experiences in the first chapters.
在开始的几章中,她描述了自己童年的经历。
【词汇拓展】
relate ...to ...把……和……联系在一起
relate sth to sb向某人叙述/讲述某事
relate to ...和……有关联;和……合得来
related adj.相关的;有(亲属)关系的
be related to ...和……有关的;和……有联系的
relation n.关系
in/with relation to关于;与……相比
If you love gardening,do something related to this.
如果你喜欢园艺,就做一些和这个相关的事。
I don’t see any relation between the two problems.
我看不出这两个问题间的联系。
Tiredness is directly related to (=in direct relation to) a driver’s response.
疲劳和司机的反应密切相关。
surround vt. 围绕,环绕
【课文原句】
Truly this water which surrounded me was but another air heavier than the Earth’s atmosphere,but almost as clear.
事实上,环绕我的水不过是比地球大气重的另一种空气,但几乎同样清澈。
【词汇精讲】
surround为及物动词,在该句子中表示“围绕,环绕”。
I found myself surrounded by a group of children full of curiosity.
我发现自己被一群充满好奇心的孩子围住了。
【词汇拓展】
surround sb/sth with sb/sth使某人/物包围某人/物
be surrounded by/with ...被……包围
surrounding adj. 周围的
surroundings n. 环境(指周围具体的物质环境)
I live in a big house,which is surrounded with/by trees.
我住在一所大房子里,四周被树环绕着。
He looked more relaxed,as if some of the harmony from his surroundings had flowed into him.
他看起来放松了些,仿佛周围的和谐环境感染了他。
The surrounding villages have been absorbed by/into the growing city.
周围的村庄已经并入了不断扩展的城市之中。
【句式解析】
This dazzling carpet,really a reflector,drove away the rays of the sun with wonderful intensity,which accounted for the vibration which passed through every atom of liquid.
这条耀眼的地毯,实际上是一个反射器,以惊人的强度驱走了太阳光,这就解释了穿过每一个液体原子的振动。
【句式剖析】
该句子的主干是This dazzling carpet drove away the rays of the sun with wonderful intensity.
句中really a reflector 为carpet的同位语;
第一个定语从句修饰名词intensity,第二个定语从句修饰名词vibration。
【句式拓展】
一个名词(或其他形式)对另一个名词或代词进行解释或补充说明,这个名词(或其他形式)就是同位语。
Yesterday I met Tom,a friend of my brothers’.
昨天我遇到了我弟弟的朋友汤姆。(a friend of my brothers’是Tom的同位语,指同一个人。)
某些名词后面,可以跟that或连接代词(副词)引导的从句作同位语,说明其内容时,该从句就称为同位语从句。
常跟同位语从句的名词有:
idea,fact,news,hope,belief,thought,doubt,promise,truth,agreement,decision等。如:
I have no idea that you were here.
我不知道你在这里。
The news that our team has won the match is true.
我们队赢了这场比赛的消息是真的。
【写作指导】
如何写好描述一次经历的记叙文
记叙文是最常见、最基本的写作文体,它以真实的社会生活、自然景物为材料,以记人、叙事、状物、写景为主要内容,以叙述、描写或对话为主要表达方式,通过形象叙述来表达思想。
这种题材有利于体现学生思维的完整性,符合新课程标准的理念。
绝大部分记叙文基本上宜用“三段式”的写法,具体来讲就是:
第一段:开头——事情的背景。介绍事情发生的缘由、开端。
第二段:主体——事情的经过。全文的主要部分,按照事情发展的先后顺序,对事情发生的经过进行详细、完整的阐述,情节要合理。
第三段:结尾——事情的评价。对事情的结果进行评价,表明个人的看法或感受,总结全文。
记叙文的写作主题要鲜明,内容要完整。
一般说来,记叙文包含六大要素:when(时间),where(地点),who(人物),what(事件),why(原因),how(结果)。
文章要有始有终,确保内容的完整性;情节要合理。
按照事情发展的先后顺序,使用恰当的过渡词,使文章连贯、自然、详略得当;用词要恰当,描写事件时,切忌词不达意,影响理解;时态通常用一般过去时。
一、审题定调
该习作要求记录一次潜水活动的过程,是一篇记叙文。因此写作时首先说明一下事情发生的背景,然后按照事情发生的时间顺序描述活动的过程,最后对活动的结果进行阐述,并表达自己对活动的感受。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主。
二、谋篇布局
就本篇习作而言,我们可以把全文分为三部分。
第一部分:引出话题,点明此次活动是什么(就对方观点提出反对意见);
第二部分:对这次潜水活动的过程进行详细描述,可特别提到印象深刻的事情;
第三部分:说明此次潜水活动的意义和自己的感受。
三、组织语言
就本篇习作而言,每个部分可围绕以下内容组织语言。
1.第一部分:说明此次活动。
2.第二部分:叙述事情的经过。
3.第三部分:评价活动,分享感受。
星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次潜水(diving)活动。如果你是星光中学的一名学生,请你写一篇短文,记录一下此次活动。
内容包括:
1.时间与地点:7月10日,三亚湾(Sanya Bay);
2.活动的过程 (如准备中、进行中、结束);
3.你对于这次活动的评论(感受)。
注意:
1.词数80左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文:
In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise,our school organized a diving activity on July 10.Most of us took part in it.
Gathering at the Sanya Bay at 10:00 am,we made preparations for the diving.With the help of the trainers,we all experienced something unforgettable.What impressed me most was that whoever felt too afraid to go,others would come and offer help.About four hours later,we all accomplished the diving activity.Bathed in sunshine,we enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.
The activity benefited us a lot.Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school-work,it also promoted the friendship among us.What a wonderful time!
【随堂专练】
**介词填空
1.There is a librarian charge of the new library.?
2.The official ordered the guards to drive people .?
3.He could not account his absence from school.?
4.The care and love from an instructor will leave everlasting impression students.?
5.The film has been adapted a play of the same title.?
**单句填空
1.By doing extra homework,he soon got of his classmates.?
2.Spending a year working in the big city helped to (broad) his horizons.?
3.He has concern for nothing except what is in (relate) to himself.?
4.I found it (astonish) that a pigeon appeared out of the magician’s empty hand.?
5.The scientist is (distinguish) for its diligence and courage.?
6. (surround) yourself with people who’ll provide you with support can be very beneficial.?
7.With time going by,I gradually adapted myself the school life.?
8.My parents don’t permit me (go) out at night.?
**语法填空
In 1866,a terrible sea creature is seen by several 1. (ship).Biologist Professor Pierre Aronnax and his servant,Conseil,join a ship 2. (find) and kill the creature.After a long journey into the Pacific Ocean,3. creature is finally seen.While attacking from the ship,Aronnax and Conseil,along with the whale hunter Ned Land,4. (fall) into the sea,and discover that the“creature” is 5. (actual) a submarine.They are captured and taken inside the submarine,6. they meet the man in charge,Captain Nemo.Ahead of 7. (it) time,the submarine is also a secret from the rest of the world.In order to keep this secret,Captain Nemo tells his three newest passengers that they are not permitted 8. (leave) the submarine.While Ned Land can think only of 9. (escape),Aronnax and Conseil 10. (fascinate) by their adventures in the new underwater world.?
参考答案：
介词填空：
in;away;for;on/upon;from
单句填词：
答案:ahead
答案:broaden
答案:relation
答案:astonishing
答案:distinguished
答案:Surrounding
答案:to
答案:to go
语法填空：
ships;to find;the;fall;actually;where;it’s;to leave;escaping;are fascinated