中考高频话题写作指导（二）
--个人情况介绍
一、话题解读
该话题是中考命题的主要方向。命题的角度以介绍人物的个人信息、家庭信息、学校信息以及人物的兴趣爱好、工作与职业为主,此类话题一般以记叙文的形式来考查。
ニ、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累区
个人信息:
__________________________________________________________________________________________
爱好:
__________________________________________________________________________________________
相关形容词:
__________________________________________________________________________________________
2.短语积累
个人信息:
__________________________________________________________________________________________
爱好:
__________________________________________________________________________________________
其他
__________________________________________________________________________________________
句子积累
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
三、真题分析
(2018·荆州)请以“My
Hobby”为题写一篇短文,必须包含以下要点和词语提示信息。
1.
What
is
your
hobby?
2.
How
do
you
develop
your
hobby?q8
3.
Share
your
happiness
you
get
from
your
hobby.
提示词语:
practice,
different,
forget,
no
longer
要求:
1.可以适当发挥,文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数:80词左右。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数
My
Hobby
Everyone
has
his
or
her
own
hobby
and
so
do
I._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题思路】
1.本文题目是“My
Hobby”,要求考生介绍自己的业余爱好,属于记叙文。
2.考生在组织写作思路时,要按照爱好是什么如何形成—分享快乐的线索来写作。
3.介绍自己的个人情况应该使用第一人称。
4.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;不得出现真实信息;80词左右。
【写作指导】
My
Hobby
要点提示
素材串联
开头:介绍自己的业余爱好什么,引出话题
我的爱好是…(
My
hobby
is)
正文:具体介绍如何形成一个爱好
1.开始的时间(When
was
child)
2.开始的起因(
cartoon
music)
3.喜欢的原因(make
me
calm
down/comfortable/happy;
keep
me
in
a
good
mood;
be
good
for
my
health)
结尾:分享快乐
鼓励尝试
(you
can
have
a
try;
and
you
will
find
it
so
good)
【普通范文】
My
Hobby
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【句子升格】
Though
I'm'
not
good
at
it,
like
listening
to
it.(用lose
oneself
in...改写句子)
__________________________________________________________________________________________
Listening
to
music
keeps
me
in
a
good
mood
and
it's
good
for
my
health.(用what's
more改写句子)
__________________________________________________________________________________________
【佳作赏析】
My
Hobby
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四、实战演练
假如你是李华,就读于
Wenzhou
Tanghe
Middle
School你想去美国的
Washington
International
School(WIS)读高中。现在你需要给对方学校写一封简明扼要、有说服力的自荐信,争取让学校录取你。
参考要点:
·个人信息
·学习成绩
·爱好和能力
要求:
1.不能出现真实的个人身份信息;
2.词数:110词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【温馨提示】
1.本文为自荐信,应该使用第一人称
2.重点介绍自己的学习成绩、爱好和能力,作自我介绍时多用一般现在时和现在完成时。
3.明确表达自己想被录取的愿望,此时用一般现在时或一般将来时。
Dear
Sir/Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________中考高频话题写作指导（二）
--个人情况介绍
一、话题解读
该话题是中考命题的主要方向。命题的角度以介绍人物的个人信息、家庭信息、学校信息以及人物的兴趣爱好、工作与职业为主,此类话题一般以记叙文的形式来考查。
ニ、素材积累
【好词好句积累】
1.词汇积累区
个人信息:name,age,work,job,
family,live,
school,
study,friend,teacher,
father,sister
爱好:
hobby,like,
enjoy,
prefer,love,hate,
favorite,
reading,
dancing,
cartoon,
painting,
basketball,
collect
相关形容词:
friendly,
interesting,funny,
difficult,
boring,excellent,easy,
smart,
dangerous
2.短语积累
个人信息:be/come
from,
be
born,
live
in,
learn
about,a
computer
programmer
爱好:
be
interested
in,
enjoying
doing
sth.,
be
fond
of,do
sports,
listen
to,
on
time,
do
well
in/be
good
at,
collecting
stamps
其他
as
well
in
the
future
make
great
progress
in
class
either......
3.句子积累
I'm
from
Australia.
I
live
in
China
with
my
parents
because
they
work
here.
I
enjoy
doing
sports
because
I
know
it's
good
for
my
health.
Listening
to
music
is
my
favorite
hobby.
I'm
looking
forward
to
making
friends
with
you.
Although
I
am
not
the
best
now,
I
will
make
every
effort
to
become
top
student.
三、真题分析
(2018·荆州)请以“My
Hobby”为题写一篇短文,必须包含以下要点和词语提示信息。
1.
What
is
your
hobby?
2.
How
do
you
develop
your
hobby?q8
3.
Share
your
happiness
you
get
from
your
hobby.
提示词语:
practice,
different,
forget,
no
longer
要求:
1.可以适当发挥,文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数:80词左右。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数
My
Hobby
Everyone
has
his
or
her
own
hobby
and
so
do
I._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题思路】
1.本文题目是“My
Hobby”,要求考生介绍自己的业余爱好,属于记叙文。
2.考生在组织写作思路时,要按照爱好是什么如何形成—分享快乐的线索来写作。
3.介绍自己的个人情况应该使用第一人称。
4.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;不得出现真实信息;80词左右。
【写作指导】
My
Hobby
要点提示
素材串联
开头:介绍自己的业余爱好什么,引出话题
我的爱好是…(
My
hobby
is)
正文:具体介绍如何形成一个爱好
1.开始的时间(When
was
child)
2.开始的起因(
cartoon
music)
3.喜欢的原因(make
me
calm
down/comfortable/happy;
keep
me
in
a
good
mood;
be
good
for
my
health)
结尾:分享快乐
鼓励尝试
(you
can
have
a
try;
and
you
will
find
it
so
good)
【普通范文】
My
Hobby
Everyone
has
his
or
her
own
hobby
and
so
do
I.
My
hobby
is
listening
to
music.
When
I
was
a
child,
I
enjoyed
listening
to
music
especially
the
cartoon
music.
Though
I'm
not
good
at
it,
like
listening
to
it.
When
I
am
in
trouble,
music
can
make
me
calm
down.
When
I
am
very
tired,
it
can
make
me
comfortable.
When
I
am
angry
with
something,
it
can
also
make
me
happy
again.
Listening
to
music
keeps
me
in
good
mood
and
its'
good
for
my
health.
Do
you
like
listening
to
music?
If
not,
hope
you
can
have
try,
and
you
will
find
it
so
good.
【句子升格】
1.
Though
I'm'
not
good
at
it,
like
listening
to
it.(用lose
oneself
in...改写句子)
Though
I'm
not
good
at
it,
I
often
lose
myself
in
it.
2.
Listening
to
music
keeps
me
in
a
good
mood
and
it's
good
for
my
health.(用what's
more改写句子)
Listening
to
music
keeps
me
in
a
good
mood.
What's
more,
it's
good
for
my
health
【佳作赏析】
My
Hobby
Everyone
has
his
or
her
own
hobby
and
so
do
I.
My
hobby
is
listening
to
music.
When
I
was
a
child,
I
enjoyed
listening
to
music
especially
the
cartoon
music.
Though
I'm
not
good
at
it,
I
often
lose
myself
in
it.
When
I
am
in
trouble,
music
can
make
me
calm
down.
When
I
am
very
tired,
it
can
make
me
comfortable.
When
I
am
angry
with
something,
it
can
also
make
me
happy
again.
Listening
to
music
keeps
me
in
a
good
mood.
What's
more,
it's
good
for
my
health.
Do
you
like
listening
to
music?
If
not,
I
hope
you
can
have
a
try,
and
you
will
find
it
so
good.
四、实战演练
假如你是李华,就读于
Wenzhou
Tanghe
Middle
School你想去美国的
Washington
International
School(WIS)读高中。现在你需要给对方学校写一封简明扼要、有说服力的自荐信,争取让学校录取你。
参考要点:
·个人信息
·学习成绩
·爱好和能力
要求:
1.不能出现真实的个人身份信息;
2.词数:110词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【温馨提示】
1.本文为自荐信,应该使用第一人称
2.重点介绍自己的学习成绩、爱好和能力,作自我介绍时多用一般现在时和现在完成时。
3.明确表达自己想被录取的愿望,此时用一般现在时或一般将来时。
Dear
Sir/Madam,
I
am
Li
Hua
from
Wenzhou
Tanghe
Middle
School.
I
wish
to
get
an
opportunity
to
study
at
WIS.
many
other
boys,
I
enjoy
doing
sports.
I
like
Chinese,
English
and
music,
but
math
and
science
are
my
favorites.
have
won
several
prizes
in
different
kinds
of
competitions,
including
a
secon
prize
in
an
international
math
competition.
I
have
joined
in
three
one-month-tour-study
programs
in
the
US.
And
I
have
learnt
a
lot
about
American
culture
and
made
many
friends
here,
So
WIS
is
my
first
choice
to
study
abroad.
though
I
am
not
the
best
now,
I
will
make
every
effort
to
become
a
top
student
and
I
believe
you
will
be
proud
of
me.
I
am
looking
forward
to
your
kind
reply.
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Hua
