2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十九）
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十九）
原文呈现
“Every cloud has a silver lining.” It drives me crazy when Mom says nonsense (废话) like that.
I'd barely had time to arrange myself in the passenger seat, my foot already blown up like a balloon when she came out with it, exactly like I knew she would. First, she patted my leg. Then she just couldn't help herself, “Every cloud has a silver lining, you know, sweetheart.” “Mom, I appreciate the thought, but I'm not ready to look on the bright side of this.” We hadn't even left the school parking lot yet.
On the farthest side of the field, I could see my teammates doing sprint training, Coach Zito striding back toward them. He'd mercifully helped me to the car in silence. Unlike Mom, he knew when it was best to say nothing.
As Mom started the engine, I imagined my teammates cooling down without me while they listened to Coach Zito's pep talk. And next Thursday, they would go to practice without me, and the Thursday after that... When I had fallen and twisted my ankle, I'd cried from the pain, but I was crying out of self-pity in the car. Hours and hours of training, and then this. I told myself there was a glimmer (微光) of hope that everything would turn out okay, and that I'd make it to the track meet next month, but I knew it was just that: a glimmer. The tears fell hot and fast. Mom gave me a weak smile. “It'll be okay, Casey.” I suspected this was another version of the silver lining thing, but I felt so miserable that I let it pass.
We finally arrived at the hospital. Doctor Van gently moved my ankle around a bit before carefully lowering it. I nervously asked how long it would be before I could run. “Four weeks maybe, possibly five，” he replied. “And even then, you'll need to take it easy for a while. Is that possible？” he asked with a smile.
I couldn't answer.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One month later, I made my appearance on the field.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
思路分析
【文章大意】
我在田径场上训练时，扭伤了脚踝。妈妈开车来接我，准备带我去医院医治，同时妈妈又用“守得云开见月明”这类毫无意义的话来安慰我，让我往好处看。我内心很难过，看着远处在训练的队友，悲从心来。到了医院，医生又告诉我说可能需要4—5周才能恢复，同时他还建议我要休息一段时间。
【写作指导】
根据Paragraph 1的开头“I couldn't answer”可知，接下来的内容可能涉及作者的心理描写，同时母亲过来安慰他，继续用她的“鸡汤”激励作者。
根据Paragraph 2的开头“One month later, I made my appearance on the field”可推知，接下来的情节走向应该是作者的教练和队友对他的快速恢复很惊讶，同时又很欢迎他归队。作者也告诉他们自己快速恢复的秘诀是母亲的话，并且“Every cloud has a silver lining”这句话一直伴随作者以后的人生。
续写句式提炼
我无法回答。五周对我来说意味着去田径运动会的机会很小。
翻译：
低头看着我肿胀的脚，我流下了苦涩的眼泪，知道我最后一丝希望正在消失。
翻译：
像往常一样，妈妈拍拍我的肩膀，笑着说:“心肝宝贝，每朵云……”“不……”我不耐烦地打断了她。
翻译：
生活似乎平淡无奇，毫无意义，但在妈妈的大力帮助下，我恢复了信心，重新站了起来
翻译：
令人惊讶的是，我很快开始练习跑步。
翻译：
一个月后，我出现在球场上。
翻译：
我的队友们对我的快速康复感到非常惊讶，不相信他们的眼睛。
翻译：
“哦，小子！真是奇迹！”我的教练济托不相信地看着我。
翻译：
为了告诉他们一切都好，我在他们面前又踢又跳又跑。
翻译：
看到这里，他们都哈哈大笑起来。后来和他们一起去练习，参加了径赛。
翻译：
从此以后，每当我遇到困难，妈妈那句鼓励的话“每朵云都有一线希望”总会在我耳边响起。
翻译：
参考答案：
I couldn't answer. Five weeks meant little chance for me to the track meet.
Looking down at my swollen foot, I wept bitter tears, knowing my last glimmer of hope was fading.
As usual, Mom patted me on the shoulder and said with a smile, “Sweetheart, every cloud...” “No...” I interrupted her impatiently.
Life seemed dull and meaningless, but touched by Mom's great help, I regained my confidence and was back on my feet.
Amazingly, I began to practice running soon.
One month later, I made my appearance on the field.
All my teammates were absolutely astonished at my quick recovery, not believing their eyes
“Oh, boy! What a miracle！” My coach Zito looked at me in disbelief.
To tell them everything was okay, I kicked, jumped and ran in front of them.
Seeing this, they all burst out laughing. Later, I went to practice with them and participated in the track meet.
From then on, whenever I encountered difficulties, Mom's encouraging words “Every cloud has a silver lining” always rang in my ears.
篇章成文
I couldn't answer. Five weeks meant little chance for me to the track meet. Looking down at my swollen foot, I wept bitter tears, knowing my last glimmer of hope was fading. As usual, Mom patted me on the shoulder and said with a smile, “Sweetheart, every cloud...” “No...” I interrupted her impatiently. Life seemed dull and meaningless, but touched by Mom's great help, I regained my confidence and was back on my feet. Amazingly, I began to practice running soon.
One month later, I made my appearance on the field. All my teammates were absolutely astonished at my quick recovery, not believing their eyes. “Oh, boy! What a miracle！” My coach Zito looked at me in disbelief. To tell them everything was okay, I kicked, jumped and ran in front of them. Seeing this, they all burst out laughing. Later, I went to practice with them and participated in the track meet. From then on, whenever I encountered difficulties, Mom's encouraging words “Every cloud has a silver lining” always rang in my ears.
课后练习
Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’s arm.“Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.”Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river…
Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.
Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back.
They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope（斜坡）. He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way. They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
Paragraph1：
“Where have you been？”Steve cried.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
“Where have you been?”Steve cried. Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy’s jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled again, urgently. “OK, big guy,” Steve decided.
Paragraph 2:
Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool, running water. “Brady, you did it !”
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2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十九）
原文呈现
“Every cloud has a silver lining.” It drives me crazy when Mom says nonsense (废话) like that.
I'd barely had time to arrange myself in the passenger seat, my foot already blown up like a balloon when she came out with it, exactly like I knew she would. First, she patted my leg. Then she just couldn't help herself, “Every cloud has a silver lining, you know, sweetheart.” “Mom, I appreciate the thought, but I'm not ready to look on the bright side of this.” We hadn't even left the school parking lot yet.
On the farthest side of the field, I could see my teammates doing sprint training, Coach Zito striding back toward them. He'd mercifully helped me to the car in silence. Unlike Mom, he knew when it was best to say nothing.
As Mom started the engine, I imagined my teammates cooling down without me while they listened to Coach Zito's pep talk. And next Thursday, they would go to practice without me, and the Thursday after that... When I had fallen and twisted my ankle, I'd cried from the pain, but I was crying out of self-pity in the car. Hours and hours of training, and then this. I told myself there was a glimmer (微光) of hope that everything would turn out okay, and that I'd make it to the track meet next month, but I knew it was just that: a glimmer. The tears fell hot and fast. Mom gave me a weak smile. “It'll be okay, Casey.” I suspected this was another version of the silver lining thing, but I felt so miserable that I let it pass.
We finally arrived at the hospital. Doctor Van gently moved my ankle around a bit before carefully lowering it. I nervously asked how long it would be before I could run. “Four weeks maybe, possibly five，” he replied. “And even then, you'll need to take it easy for a while. Is that possible？” he asked with a smile.
I couldn't answer.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One month later, I made my appearance on the field.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
思路分析
【文章大意】
我在田径场上训练时，扭伤了脚踝。妈妈开车来接我，准备带我去医院医治，同时妈妈又用“守得云开见月明”这类毫无意义的话来安慰我，让我往好处看。我内心很难过，看着远处在训练的队友，悲从心来。到了医院，医生又告诉我说可能需要4—5周才能恢复，同时他还建议我要休息一段时间。
【写作指导】
根据Paragraph 1的开头“I couldn't answer”可知，接下来的内容可能涉及作者的心理描写，同时母亲过来安慰他，继续用她的“鸡汤”激励作者。
根据Paragraph 2的开头“One month later, I made my appearance on the field”可推知，接下来的情节走向应该是作者的教练和队友对他的快速恢复很惊讶，同时又很欢迎他归队。作者也告诉他们自己快速恢复的秘诀是母亲的话，并且“Every cloud has a silver lining”这句话一直伴随作者以后的人生。
续写句式提炼
我无法回答。五周对我来说意味着去田径运动会的机会很小。
翻译：
低头看着我肿胀的脚，我流下了苦涩的眼泪，知道我最后一丝希望正在消失。
翻译：
像往常一样，妈妈拍拍我的肩膀，笑着说:“心肝宝贝，每朵云……”“不……”我不耐烦地打断了她。
翻译：
生活似乎平淡无奇，毫无意义，但在妈妈的大力帮助下，我恢复了信心，重新站了起来
翻译：
令人惊讶的是，我很快开始练习跑步。
翻译：
一个月后，我出现在球场上。
翻译：
我的队友们对我的快速康复感到非常惊讶，不相信他们的眼睛。
翻译：
“哦，小子！真是奇迹！”我的教练济托不相信地看着我。
翻译：
为了告诉他们一切都好，我在他们面前又踢又跳又跑。
翻译：
看到这里，他们都哈哈大笑起来。后来和他们一起去练习，参加了径赛。
翻译：
从此以后，每当我遇到困难，妈妈那句鼓励的话“每朵云都有一线希望”总会在我耳边响起。
翻译：
参考答案：
I couldn't answer. Five weeks meant little chance for me to the track meet.
Looking down at my swollen foot, I wept bitter tears, knowing my last glimmer of hope was fading.
As usual, Mom patted me on the shoulder and said with a smile, “Sweetheart, every cloud...” “No...” I interrupted her impatiently.
Life seemed dull and meaningless, but touched by Mom's great help, I regained my confidence and was back on my feet.
Amazingly, I began to practice running soon.
One month later, I made my appearance on the field.
All my teammates were absolutely astonished at my quick recovery, not believing their eyes
“Oh, boy! What a miracle！” My coach Zito looked at me in disbelief.
To tell them everything was okay, I kicked, jumped and ran in front of them.
Seeing this, they all burst out laughing. Later, I went to practice with them and participated in the track meet.
From then on, whenever I encountered difficulties, Mom's encouraging words “Every cloud has a silver lining” always rang in my ears.
篇章成文
I couldn't answer. Five weeks meant little chance for me to the track meet. Looking down at my swollen foot, I wept bitter tears, knowing my last glimmer of hope was fading. As usual, Mom patted me on the shoulder and said with a smile, “Sweetheart, every cloud...” “No...” I interrupted her impatiently. Life seemed dull and meaningless, but touched by Mom's great help, I regained my confidence and was back on my feet. Amazingly, I began to practice running soon.
One month later, I made my appearance on the field. All my teammates were absolutely astonished at my quick recovery, not believing their eyes. “Oh, boy! What a miracle！” My coach Zito looked at me in disbelief. To tell them everything was okay, I kicked, jumped and ran in front of them. Seeing this, they all burst out laughing. Later, I went to practice with them and participated in the track meet. From then on, whenever I encountered difficulties, Mom's encouraging words “Every cloud has a silver lining” always rang in my ears.
课后练习
Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’s arm.“Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.”Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river…
Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.
Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back.
They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope（斜坡）. He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way. They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
Paragraph1：
“Where have you been？”Steve cried.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.
__________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
“Where have you been?”Steve cried. Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy’s jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled again, urgently. “OK, big guy,” Steve decided.
Paragraph 2:
Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool, running water. “Brady, you did it !”
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